Comments received on poems by Neville
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Cassie58 said:
More bargain poems Neville. I do love a bargain. Two for the price of one. They appear to be related in some way. You know those Convent educated girls, from memory always spent more time in the confession box. The second sort, was more concerned about her halo. She needed to keep it well polished and it sounds that she succeeded. Have a peaceful and contented Tuesday my friend.
August 20th, 2024 05:46
Cassie58 said:
More bargain poems Neville. I do love a bargain. Two for the price of one. They appear to be related in some way. You know those Convent educated girls, from memory always spent more time in the confession box. The second sort, was more concerned about her halo. She needed to keep it well polished and it sounds that she succeeded. Have a peaceful and contented Tuesday my friend.
August 20th, 2024 05:46
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
Doggerel Dave said:
Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s going.....maybe she could give number two a nudge, or gazump her completely.
Think I\'d be any good as a problem auntie in the back of those women\'s mag...... well maybe not...
August 20th, 2024 02:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Looks like once she rids herself of all that gear, she knows where she\'s going.....maybe she could give number two a nudge, or gazump her completely.
Think I\'d be any good as a problem auntie in the back of those women\'s mag...... well maybe not...
August 20th, 2024 02:43
New Freedoms to Roam .. & Dissent
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t suppose I will unravel anything cryptic, whether it\'s one, two, or 100 poems! lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:43
orchidee said:
Good write N. I don\'t suppose I will unravel anything cryptic, whether it\'s one, two, or 100 poems! lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:43
If Looks Could Kill
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, some people just cannot accept others.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Neville, some people just cannot accept others.
Andy
August 20th, 2024 01:25
If Looks Could Kill
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never see KP\'s true looks - always covered in a mask of botox she is. lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
orchidee said:
Good write N.
I never see KP\'s true looks - always covered in a mask of botox she is. lol.
August 20th, 2024 01:22
If Looks Could Kill
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a hell of a story lurking in there somewhere. 🤔
August 19th, 2024 20:35
Accidental Poet said:
Sounds like a hell of a story lurking in there somewhere. 🤔
August 19th, 2024 20:35
If Looks Could Kill
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot recall...
Clear picture in a few words though.
August 19th, 2024 16:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like an old master I saw in a gallery somewhere, but cannot recall...
Clear picture in a few words though.
August 19th, 2024 16:48
If Looks Could Kill
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Neville you have left me with no clue as to who was found and who was scorned. So many fit this profile. Such a contrast portrayed in this, Even a metaphor for poets recognized and those not and even put down. Loved the flow and the contrast as well as word choice.
August 19th, 2024 16:47
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Neville you have left me with no clue as to who was found and who was scorned. So many fit this profile. Such a contrast portrayed in this, Even a metaphor for poets recognized and those not and even put down. Loved the flow and the contrast as well as word choice.
August 19th, 2024 16:47
Making Green & Reflex
Bella Shepard said:
Two stunning pieces, you\'ve outdone yourself in brevity, wit and color blending. Made me smile bigly. Thank you!
August 19th, 2024 12:54
Bella Shepard said:
Two stunning pieces, you\'ve outdone yourself in brevity, wit and color blending. Made me smile bigly. Thank you!
August 19th, 2024 12:54
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies of yours seem to be all over the world Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Those ladies of yours seem to be all over the world Neville.
Andy
August 19th, 2024 01:04
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Dan Williams said:
Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31
Dan Williams said:
Yes, very cool indeed. Is she gone? Is the dog? Well done.
August 19th, 2024 00:31
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Cassie58 said:
I have never been to St Malo. Seems you have some very clear memories of a long time ago when you were young and innocent. On the other hand I have been to Somerset many times and have memories of very happy family holidays there. I love your first poem Neville. It speaks to me of you wishing you were in your home territory with those you love best.
August 18th, 2024 16:08
Cassie58 said:
I have never been to St Malo. Seems you have some very clear memories of a long time ago when you were young and innocent. On the other hand I have been to Somerset many times and have memories of very happy family holidays there. I love your first poem Neville. It speaks to me of you wishing you were in your home territory with those you love best.
August 18th, 2024 16:08
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Michael Edwards said:
And my little dog - Stanley. As for the second it was caravan park on the Isle of Wight - ah memories.
August 18th, 2024 14:22
Michael Edwards said:
And my little dog - Stanley. As for the second it was caravan park on the Isle of Wight - ah memories.
August 18th, 2024 14:22
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
jarcher54 said:
One of these is brilliant and moving, the other a flop! (-:
August 18th, 2024 11:40
jarcher54 said:
One of these is brilliant and moving, the other a flop! (-:
August 18th, 2024 11:40
Making Green & Reflex
Accidental Poet said:
In reading your Author\'s Comment, I said to self, \"Now that\'s a mouthful\".
😁👍
August 18th, 2024 10:52
Accidental Poet said:
In reading your Author\'s Comment, I said to self, \"Now that\'s a mouthful\".
😁👍
August 18th, 2024 10:52
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
MendedFences27 said:
I traveled in Somerset, once. Went into a pub there, and the barman said I should try the local cider. I should not have listened to that man.
Never been to Saint Malo, but trust you remember it well. Perhaps more than just fingers. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 09:57
MendedFences27 said:
I traveled in Somerset, once. Went into a pub there, and the barman said I should try the local cider. I should not have listened to that man.
Never been to Saint Malo, but trust you remember it well. Perhaps more than just fingers. - Phil A.
August 18th, 2024 09:57
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
Doggerel Dave said:
Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow....
Saint Malo - Got the title late in life, but behind his cassock he knew a thing or two........
August 18th, 2024 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Zummerzet where the Zider apples grow....
Saint Malo - Got the title late in life, but behind his cassock he knew a thing or two........
August 18th, 2024 07:06
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
sorenbarrett said:
A border terrorist, is that like a border collie? You always get me thinking farther than my lazy brain wants to go, particularly on a Sunday. I think that border terrorist is guarding the border between Summerset and France. Oh oh my insanity is showing through. Great write Neville
August 18th, 2024 06:33
sorenbarrett said:
A border terrorist, is that like a border collie? You always get me thinking farther than my lazy brain wants to go, particularly on a Sunday. I think that border terrorist is guarding the border between Summerset and France. Oh oh my insanity is showing through. Great write Neville
August 18th, 2024 06:33
Making Green & Reflex
rhmn_7 said:
Smelling of sunshine, now that\'s a beautiful expression!
August 18th, 2024 06:11
rhmn_7 said:
Smelling of sunshine, now that\'s a beautiful expression!
August 18th, 2024 06:11
You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo
orchidee said:
Good writes N.
I of course will fail to see the links between two poems if they are the least bit cryptic. If there are any links, that is. lol.
August 18th, 2024 01:26
orchidee said:
Good writes N.
I of course will fail to see the links between two poems if they are the least bit cryptic. If there are any links, that is. lol.
August 18th, 2024 01:26
Making Green & Reflex
MendedFences27 said:
Loved both of these. \'Making Green\" I would say, would be my favorite. The simplicity of it adds to its message.
\"Reflex\" is a bit humorous, not intended to be a morality poem, yet very enjoyable. Maybe you were allergic to her perfume. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:50
MendedFences27 said:
Loved both of these. \'Making Green\" I would say, would be my favorite. The simplicity of it adds to its message.
\"Reflex\" is a bit humorous, not intended to be a morality poem, yet very enjoyable. Maybe you were allergic to her perfume. - Phil A.
August 17th, 2024 10:50
Making Green & Reflex
sorenbarrett said:
Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the metaphor gos deep as does blue into yellow to make new green sprouts. You taught me something in your note I was unaware of the name of the reflex.
August 17th, 2024 07:19
sorenbarrett said:
Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the metaphor gos deep as does blue into yellow to make new green sprouts. You taught me something in your note I was unaware of the name of the reflex.
August 17th, 2024 07:19
Making Green & Reflex
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly cleaned of seeds.....
Having sorted that one for you, those two pictures are easy on the mind\'s eye.
ACHOO (your comment) a collectable.
Thanks Neville.
August 17th, 2024 02:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Nah that\'s not right - them greens in chapter one weren\'t properly cleaned of seeds.....
Having sorted that one for you, those two pictures are easy on the mind\'s eye.
ACHOO (your comment) a collectable.
Thanks Neville.
August 17th, 2024 02:40
Making Green & Reflex
orchidee said:
Good writes N.
I thought someone was sneezing when they said \'Haiku\' - \'Ha-choo!\'
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
August 17th, 2024 01:45
orchidee said:
Good writes N.
I thought someone was sneezing when they said \'Haiku\' - \'Ha-choo!\'
Do shut up Orchi, says Fido. lol.
August 17th, 2024 01:45
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville, the Haiku is very good and meaningful.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Two good ones Neville, the Haiku is very good and meaningful.
Andy
August 17th, 2024 01:13
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
Parisab said:
I really like this pairing with the haiku-like a glass of well aged Shiraz and Asiago-
Cheers!
August 16th, 2024 13:47
Parisab said:
I really like this pairing with the haiku-like a glass of well aged Shiraz and Asiago-
Cheers!
August 16th, 2024 13:47
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
orchidee said:
A fine two writes N.
Not - \'No one here in this church but us church mice coming out of the floorboards\'.
Somewhere I heard it as a saying: \'No one here but us mice\'.
August 16th, 2024 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine two writes N.
Not - \'No one here in this church but us church mice coming out of the floorboards\'.
Somewhere I heard it as a saying: \'No one here but us mice\'.
August 16th, 2024 09:02
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
sorenbarrett said:
Soft words for a soft topic and beautiful as down feathers they fall upon the ear. The combination of the Haiku following the poem was brilliant like icing on a cake.
August 16th, 2024 05:10
sorenbarrett said:
Soft words for a soft topic and beautiful as down feathers they fall upon the ear. The combination of the Haiku following the poem was brilliant like icing on a cake.
August 16th, 2024 05:10
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
Accidental Poet said:
as ghosts we may hold so dear
names of years past forgotten not
in hopes we have been heard
we are but a smile
for morning doves to see
and so the day begins
😁👍
August 16th, 2024 02:59
Accidental Poet said:
as ghosts we may hold so dear
names of years past forgotten not
in hopes we have been heard
we are but a smile
for morning doves to see
and so the day begins
😁👍
August 16th, 2024 02:59
No One But Us Ghosts & a Haiku - Woken by Doves
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. I am liking your two for the price of one. Your first, is quite lovely. All of a sudden, I think being a ghost sounds rather special. There is alot of love there. And your second, being woken by doves, that is special too. What a wonderful morning wake up call. Have a great day. I have eye surgery to look forward to:)
August 16th, 2024 02:24
Cassie58 said:
Good morning Neville. I am liking your two for the price of one. Your first, is quite lovely. All of a sudden, I think being a ghost sounds rather special. There is alot of love there. And your second, being woken by doves, that is special too. What a wonderful morning wake up call. Have a great day. I have eye surgery to look forward to:)
August 16th, 2024 02:24
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