Comments received on poems by Neville
Quick Fingers
Poetic Licence said:
We have all been attracted by a rainbow, only to find it is raining on the other side, a make you think write
December 18th, 2024 03:17
Poetic Licence said:
We have all been attracted by a rainbow, only to find it is raining on the other side, a make you think write
December 18th, 2024 03:17
Quick Fingers
arqios said:
And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the imagination!
December 18th, 2024 03:10
arqios said:
And there are them with shorter fingers that do wonders it breaks the imagination!
December 18th, 2024 03:10
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always need releasing onto the page Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words will always need releasing onto the page Neville.
Andy
December 18th, 2024 02:45
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Dan Williams said:
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01
Dan Williams said:
My sympathy to the \'butterflies\', kudos to you for a fine write.
December 18th, 2024 01:01
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The pain is palpable and relatable.
December 17th, 2024 22:57
Thomas W Case said:
Superb work. The pain is palpable and relatable.
December 17th, 2024 22:57
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Blown like some rare and fragile
butterfly into a blinding
colourless grave held by a snowstorm ..\" wow! Almost visceral! Loved it
December 17th, 2024 09:56
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Blown like some rare and fragile
butterfly into a blinding
colourless grave held by a snowstorm ..\" wow! Almost visceral! Loved it
December 17th, 2024 09:56
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
arqios said:
The blizzard said it all… or did the deed! (Shivers) ❄️ 🦋 💀
December 17th, 2024 08:21
arqios said:
The blizzard said it all… or did the deed! (Shivers) ❄️ 🦋 💀
December 17th, 2024 08:21
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of someone venting their anger and pain, enjoyed reading this ( not because of the suffering ), but the clever wat it is written,
December 17th, 2024 06:31
Poetic Licence said:
A very poetic way of someone venting their anger and pain, enjoyed reading this ( not because of the suffering ), but the clever wat it is written,
December 17th, 2024 06:31
Like Butterflies in Snowstorms
sorenbarrett said:
The complexity and different layers of your poems astounds me, They mirror the complexity of human relations and because of this require several readings just as do human relations themselves. As each layer is peeled away another is seen beneath. This poem is no less and you attract the reader\'s attention with the title that reveals what lies beneath the skin. Another wonderful poem
December 17th, 2024 04:23
sorenbarrett said:
The complexity and different layers of your poems astounds me, They mirror the complexity of human relations and because of this require several readings just as do human relations themselves. As each layer is peeled away another is seen beneath. This poem is no less and you attract the reader\'s attention with the title that reveals what lies beneath the skin. Another wonderful poem
December 17th, 2024 04:23
Ways of Falling Out of Love
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never fallen out of love Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2024 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
I have never fallen out of love Neville.
Andy
December 17th, 2024 02:47
Letting Go of Your Ghost
rawaneigh.99 said:
the hardest thing is letting go someone when the memories still hunt you . enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:55
rawaneigh.99 said:
the hardest thing is letting go someone when the memories still hunt you . enjoyed the read
December 16th, 2024 18:55
Ways of Falling Out of Love
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This rings true on so many different levels, dear Neville, that I must say...hats off to you! Seriously. 🌹👏 I agree with Soren...the kindling is now a roaring bonfire! 🔥
December 16th, 2024 09:27
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! This rings true on so many different levels, dear Neville, that I must say...hats off to you! Seriously. 🌹👏 I agree with Soren...the kindling is now a roaring bonfire! 🔥
December 16th, 2024 09:27
Ways of Falling Out of Love
arqios said:
Cold Turkey or no turkey at all... so true. Having experienced both ways and some others in between.
December 16th, 2024 06:04
arqios said:
Cold Turkey or no turkey at all... so true. Having experienced both ways and some others in between.
December 16th, 2024 06:04
Ways of Falling Out of Love
Poetic Licence said:
I now know next time there is a different way to do it, Really enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 06:03
Poetic Licence said:
I now know next time there is a different way to do it, Really enjoyable read
December 16th, 2024 06:03
Ways of Falling Out of Love
sorenbarrett said:
This poem, as many of yours do, provoked a grate deal of thought and deliberation. Somehow you have a way of sparking what dry kindling lays stored in the brain and fanning it into flames. Nicely done
December 16th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
This poem, as many of yours do, provoked a grate deal of thought and deliberation. Somehow you have a way of sparking what dry kindling lays stored in the brain and fanning it into flames. Nicely done
December 16th, 2024 05:11
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Goldfinch60 said:
Some things just so not change over the years but they may be hidden by othes Neveill.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Some things just so not change over the years but they may be hidden by othes Neveill.
Andy
December 16th, 2024 02:45
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Dan Williams said:
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
So, just what is the stain concealing or revealing? Hmmm.
December 16th, 2024 00:55
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
arqios said:
But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the cracks with pride, perhaps?
December 15th, 2024 18:24
arqios said:
But the rug won’t stay up on a stained ceiling! So why not wear the cracks with pride, perhaps?
December 15th, 2024 18:24
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is a funny thing, isn\'t it? A few apertures for undesirable admittance can never quite trounce the more ghastly facts which cannot ever be denied, despite our best attempts. Murder may be rolled in a carpet and hauled away sans notice, as the urban legends say, yet Abel\'s blood is never as gone as the killer needs. Charmingly intriguing and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 14:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Reality is a funny thing, isn\'t it? A few apertures for undesirable admittance can never quite trounce the more ghastly facts which cannot ever be denied, despite our best attempts. Murder may be rolled in a carpet and hauled away sans notice, as the urban legends say, yet Abel\'s blood is never as gone as the killer needs. Charmingly intriguing and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 15th, 2024 14:54
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Doggerel Dave said:
Know this bloke (got his magnet card thingy on me fridge) will fix anything - no questions asked.......
December 15th, 2024 08:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Know this bloke (got his magnet card thingy on me fridge) will fix anything - no questions asked.......
December 15th, 2024 08:50
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a big, fat FAVED! And that\'s alliterative too. As it should be for a poem of such brilliance...and the title, paired with the poem...wow! 🤯 And, yes, the cracks in the apex never seem to leave, do they? If anything they grow wider! And the idea that what is a stain to us is coveted by our neighbors. Again 🤯 Just...wow! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This gets a big, fat FAVED! And that\'s alliterative too. As it should be for a poem of such brilliance...and the title, paired with the poem...wow! 🤯 And, yes, the cracks in the apex never seem to leave, do they? If anything they grow wider! And the idea that what is a stain to us is coveted by our neighbors. Again 🤯 Just...wow! Well done, friend! 🌹👏
December 15th, 2024 07:45
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
Poetic Licence said:
It was a puzzle at first, now i have seen the light, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 15th, 2024 05:03
Poetic Licence said:
It was a puzzle at first, now i have seen the light, enjoyable read, Thank you
December 15th, 2024 05:03
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
sorenbarrett said:
I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far too good to go unfaved. The crack in my ceiling is showing light. The greater poet above is showing through. Far too many levels of metaphor are apparent in this poem. I bow to the greater light.
December 15th, 2024 04:49
sorenbarrett said:
I tried Neville, but my conscience wouldn’t allow it. This poem is far too good to go unfaved. The crack in my ceiling is showing light. The greater poet above is showing through. Far too many levels of metaphor are apparent in this poem. I bow to the greater light.
December 15th, 2024 04:49
Before Spill Kits and DNA Became a Thing
sorenbarrett said:
Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of work here Neville and I\'m not talking of 25 years ago.
December 15th, 2024 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
Upstairs neighbor? Of course and so the crack and stain. A lovely piece of work here Neville and I\'m not talking of 25 years ago.
December 15th, 2024 04:18
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