Comments received on poems by Neville
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
Certainly you play with my mind. On the whole if I were to mend a whole hole. I wouldn\'t be too concerned with the dying but rather the dyeing of the patch. As for it being a mourning song written in the evening I would rather mourn in the morn. Ah Neville you know I have a weakness for such silly homophones and homographs simply loved this bit of humor.
January 29th, 2025 04:45
Part of A Whole That Needs Mending
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Poetic Licence said:
You sense a touch of anger that they have gone and left you, but get the overwhelming of the sense off loss of a loved one. Very touching and emotional write, Thank you Neville
January 29th, 2025 04:37
Taste
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
That aftertaste is so wonderful in many things in our lives Neville.
Andy
January 29th, 2025 02:43
Taste
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Christina8 said:
Wonderfully enjoyed and savoured..Very detailed and much admired by this poet.
January 28th, 2025 14:25
Taste
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful write, Neville. This poem is like a fine wine! Truly savored and enjoyed! 🌹👏
January 28th, 2025 08:16
Taste
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
arqios said:
Kinda like the term: spice of life! Nothing duller than a lack of variety, there is virtue in mixing it up a bit, be it scent or movement or style 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
January 28th, 2025 05:24
Taste
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Poetic Licence said:
I sense this is more personal, but if you can get some sweetness from a bitter experience, that is a bonus, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 04:28
Taste
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
sorenbarrett said:
I can taste it now. Where can I buy this? Oh well this may be private vintage not for sale. None the less it sounds very good. Bom apetite
January 28th, 2025 04:17
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
SJSangeetha said:
Deeply felt..Thank you for this poem..
January 27th, 2025 21:52
Love Seeds
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Dan Williams said:
I certainly wish you well, you\'d be a better man than me. Good work here.
January 27th, 2025 00:52
Love Seeds
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
orchidee said:
A fine write N. Meanwhile with KP all I get is weeds. lol.
January 26th, 2025 07:00
Love Seeds
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Michael Edwards said:
A poetic gem - great write with a great message.
January 26th, 2025 06:59
Love Seeds
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
arqios said:
We all need a bit of tlc, and having some of that going around changes the works entire 👍🏻🕊🙏🏻
January 26th, 2025 06:45
Love Seeds
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:45
sorenbarrett said:
I don\'t have much of a green thumb. But seriously you have touched on an area much needed in relationships today and one much neglected that of trust. The metaphor is great in that trust like a plant grows slowly day to day dependent on its nurturance. It is much easier to though out a sick plant and get a new one but I find that the next will suffer the fate of the first. Trust is a two way street and both people are responsible for its growth. Great poem Neville
January 26th, 2025 05:45
When Dressed to Kill
Goldfinch60 said:
You just cannot trust the looks o some people Neville.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
You just cannot trust the looks o some people Neville.
Andy
January 25th, 2025 02:55
When Dressed to Kill
Cheeky Missy said:
Why you hereby culled Intorable Cruelty immediately to mind I\'ll never know since the heroine is in a red number in that flick whence I mulled Pussy Galore\'s wishes and denouement by 007 as his manhood proved greater, and then I had to give up.
Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, mysterious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Why you hereby culled Intorable Cruelty immediately to mind I\'ll never know since the heroine is in a red number in that flick whence I mulled Pussy Galore\'s wishes and denouement by 007 as his manhood proved greater, and then I had to give up.
Excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a tantalizing, mysterious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 24th, 2025 16:42
When Dressed to Kill
Bella Shepard said:
A sad commentary on what sounds like a true narcissist. They can be superficially charming, but deadly, and you capture this in brilliant imagery. So well done!
January 24th, 2025 10:43
Bella Shepard said:
A sad commentary on what sounds like a true narcissist. They can be superficially charming, but deadly, and you capture this in brilliant imagery. So well done!
January 24th, 2025 10:43
When Dressed to Kill
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh....dangerous! The kind of person you desire, but then, if you get what you longed for, you wish you never had! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Ooh....dangerous! The kind of person you desire, but then, if you get what you longed for, you wish you never had! Well done, my friend! 🌹👏
January 24th, 2025 09:12
When Dressed to Kill
Poetic Licence said:
The female comes in many guises and i feel many men have encountered one of this nature, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:24
Poetic Licence said:
The female comes in many guises and i feel many men have encountered one of this nature, enjoyed the read
January 24th, 2025 07:24
When Dressed to Kill
arqios said:
Oh but there are creatures such as these, they do exist, and your poem attests to the fact!
January 24th, 2025 06:19
arqios said:
Oh but there are creatures such as these, they do exist, and your poem attests to the fact!
January 24th, 2025 06:19
When Dressed to Kill
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a picture painted here of a fem fatale. This has a noir feel to it as well and is alluring but in a smoky cautious way. The picture is well painted indeed and sticks in the mind. I think I have seen her before.
January 24th, 2025 05:24
sorenbarrett said:
Quite a picture painted here of a fem fatale. This has a noir feel to it as well and is alluring but in a smoky cautious way. The picture is well painted indeed and sticks in the mind. I think I have seen her before.
January 24th, 2025 05:24
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mountains will become smaller as you leave parts of them in the path of your life that you are walking Neville so that life will be easier in time.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Those mountains will become smaller as you leave parts of them in the path of your life that you are walking Neville so that life will be easier in time.
Andy
January 24th, 2025 02:11
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A fine write with some great imagery.
January 23rd, 2025 10:44
Tom Dylan said:
Nicely done, Neville. A fine write with some great imagery.
January 23rd, 2025 10:44
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Heaving mountains sounds like terribly heavy work, my friend! Still days, for me, seem incredibly painful too! LOL! So heaving mountains on still days, no bueno! That is unless you are atlas, and then a mountain is nothing compared to what you lift! 🤣 All daft banter aside, I truly love this poem my friend. Very thought-provoking, indeed. Thoroughly enjoyed, Neville! ❤️🙏
January 23rd, 2025 08:37
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Heaving mountains sounds like terribly heavy work, my friend! Still days, for me, seem incredibly painful too! LOL! So heaving mountains on still days, no bueno! That is unless you are atlas, and then a mountain is nothing compared to what you lift! 🤣 All daft banter aside, I truly love this poem my friend. Very thought-provoking, indeed. Thoroughly enjoyed, Neville! ❤️🙏
January 23rd, 2025 08:37
Heaving Mountains on Still Days
Poetic Licence said:
I have always tried to believe some mountains can be moved, i hope that will be case. Enjoyed the read poetically
January 23rd, 2025 05:42
Poetic Licence said:
I have always tried to believe some mountains can be moved, i hope that will be case. Enjoyed the read poetically
January 23rd, 2025 05:42
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