Comments received on poems by Parisab
A Hazy Strange Winter
sorenbarrett said:
Poignantly melancholic and sad. As a retired psychologist I have heard this story before and lived it as well so it has familiar notes and its music is as dark as a winter day.
\"Now there is pitch dark in winter and we squeeze each others’ hands like the succulents scorching for their monthly thirst\"
A very powerful line. Brilliant
February 4th, 2024 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
Poignantly melancholic and sad. As a retired psychologist I have heard this story before and lived it as well so it has familiar notes and its music is as dark as a winter day.
\"Now there is pitch dark in winter and we squeeze each others’ hands like the succulents scorching for their monthly thirst\"
A very powerful line. Brilliant
February 4th, 2024 14:00
Love Potion No.19
Teddy.15 said:
I simply adore this type of commotion Parisab, wonderful and filled with emotion. ❤️
February 4th, 2024 13:15
Teddy.15 said:
I simply adore this type of commotion Parisab, wonderful and filled with emotion. ❤️
February 4th, 2024 13:15
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful work. A heavy write.
February 3rd, 2024 21:31
Thomas W Case said:
Truly beautiful work. A heavy write.
February 3rd, 2024 21:31
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love how it ends so openly, and continuously as though that end never ends... The duality in it is also quite attractive in its sensitivity, the dandelions and hearts are almost each in their own bubbles, until one is not, upon contact with the other... This piece speaks to the literary skies...
You weave a mighty pen... May blessings abound your works!
February 2nd, 2024 05:04
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I love how it ends so openly, and continuously as though that end never ends... The duality in it is also quite attractive in its sensitivity, the dandelions and hearts are almost each in their own bubbles, until one is not, upon contact with the other... This piece speaks to the literary skies...
You weave a mighty pen... May blessings abound your works!
February 2nd, 2024 05:04
A Hazy Strange Winter
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is the stuff timeless books are written of... It\'s such a \"touch, smell and feel\" kind of poem, loaded with fondness and nostalgia, you know. The person written of in the piece, the scenery, the closeness of memory... shall simply never die...
Be very proud of these words, gifted one. They are a portrait in time.
February 2nd, 2024 04:57
Garth Rakumakoe said:
This is the stuff timeless books are written of... It\'s such a \"touch, smell and feel\" kind of poem, loaded with fondness and nostalgia, you know. The person written of in the piece, the scenery, the closeness of memory... shall simply never die...
Be very proud of these words, gifted one. They are a portrait in time.
February 2nd, 2024 04:57
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Bigguy said:
I love this. I think you can hurt the reader even more viciously on a spiritual level with a sequel or revision.
Hope that isn\'t presumptuous, but I love this poem! Well done!
February 2nd, 2024 01:15
Bigguy said:
I love this. I think you can hurt the reader even more viciously on a spiritual level with a sequel or revision.
Hope that isn\'t presumptuous, but I love this poem! Well done!
February 2nd, 2024 01:15
The Fig Tree and the Bird
Reynaldo Casison said:
Your welcome Parisab
Have a sweet night
January 28th, 2024 22:22
Reynaldo Casison said:
Your welcome Parisab
Have a sweet night
January 28th, 2024 22:22
A Hazy Strange Winter
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, winters have become gloomy and dark and warm somewhat in Italy too, I remember them being freezing yet crisp blue sky with a welcoming sun, there\'s hardly any snow too. Sad reminder our planet isn\'t in good nick. 🤗
January 26th, 2024 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
How very beautiful, winters have become gloomy and dark and warm somewhat in Italy too, I remember them being freezing yet crisp blue sky with a welcoming sun, there\'s hardly any snow too. Sad reminder our planet isn\'t in good nick. 🤗
January 26th, 2024 01:48
A Hazy Strange Winter
Parisab said:
So awesome that you like it esteemed Poet…
January 21st, 2024 20:57
Parisab said:
So awesome that you like it esteemed Poet…
January 21st, 2024 20:57
Summer Feast
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of senses. I love it.
January 21st, 2024 16:07
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous imagery and use of senses. I love it.
January 21st, 2024 16:07
A Hazy Strange Winter
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work. I relate. You paint a vivid scene with your beautiful words.
January 21st, 2024 16:05
Thomas W Case said:
Wow. Beautiful work. I relate. You paint a vivid scene with your beautiful words.
January 21st, 2024 16:05
Heavy Hearts and Dandelions
vividvoid14 said:
One thing I have admired about your poems is when I read them I feels the words coming alive the emotion.. amazing write 10/10
January 6th, 2024 21:51
vividvoid14 said:
One thing I have admired about your poems is when I read them I feels the words coming alive the emotion.. amazing write 10/10
January 6th, 2024 21:51
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful poetry dear Parisab. It has so much meaning. Written from a poetic heart.
January 3rd, 2024 16:43
Teddy.15 said:
Such powerful poetry dear Parisab. It has so much meaning. Written from a poetic heart.
January 3rd, 2024 16:43
Holy Amnesia
Gregoria said:
We are craving for unconditional love and blessed are those who have found it in this life ...thank you 💖.
January 3rd, 2024 01:07
Gregoria said:
We are craving for unconditional love and blessed are those who have found it in this life ...thank you 💖.
January 3rd, 2024 01:07
Love Letter to God
Gregoria said:
Such a great poetic expression of what we should say to God, being unworthy of His immense grace.
January 3rd, 2024 01:06
Gregoria said:
Such a great poetic expression of what we should say to God, being unworthy of His immense grace.
January 3rd, 2024 01:06
A Hazy Strange Winter
vividvoid14 said:
This sounds like a poetic expression of a romantic relationship. The poem describes the feeling of love and longing for a partner, using vivid, sensuous imagery. It sounds like the speaker is reminiscing about a past relationship, perhaps with someone who used to make them feel butterflies in their stomach. The images of rain, colorful umbrellas, and smiling fish may symbolize the beauty and passion of the relationship, while the mention of a \"scorching\" winter may reflect the pain and sadness of the speaker after the relationship ended. I’m not. Sure if any of this is accurate but i really like the poem
January 2nd, 2024 11:31
vividvoid14 said:
This sounds like a poetic expression of a romantic relationship. The poem describes the feeling of love and longing for a partner, using vivid, sensuous imagery. It sounds like the speaker is reminiscing about a past relationship, perhaps with someone who used to make them feel butterflies in their stomach. The images of rain, colorful umbrellas, and smiling fish may symbolize the beauty and passion of the relationship, while the mention of a \"scorching\" winter may reflect the pain and sadness of the speaker after the relationship ended. I’m not. Sure if any of this is accurate but i really like the poem
January 2nd, 2024 11:31
A Hazy Strange Winter
Bobby O said:
This strongly indicates your awareness is so well tuned to the angles of life. I liked this piece a lot talented lady of the introspective poems.
January 2nd, 2024 04:01
Bobby O said:
This strongly indicates your awareness is so well tuned to the angles of life. I liked this piece a lot talented lady of the introspective poems.
January 2nd, 2024 04:01
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Cassie58 said:
A cloudy day poem. Not much light shining through and darkness on the horizon. A poem of our times sadly, but written so well.
January 2nd, 2024 03:15
Cassie58 said:
A cloudy day poem. Not much light shining through and darkness on the horizon. A poem of our times sadly, but written so well.
January 2nd, 2024 03:15
A Hazy Strange Winter
Neville said:
this is a very special post indeed .. like magic, having savoured every single word, when I close my eyes,
I can see clearly without any effort at all every single thing you appear to have effortlessly crafted ..
Bravo Parisab .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 02:26
Neville said:
this is a very special post indeed .. like magic, having savoured every single word, when I close my eyes,
I can see clearly without any effort at all every single thing you appear to have effortlessly crafted ..
Bravo Parisab .. Neville
January 2nd, 2024 02:26
A Hazy Strange Winter
aceofwoes said:
i love how descriptive this poem is! the motif of nature is really interesting. have a good day :)
January 1st, 2024 23:41
aceofwoes said:
i love how descriptive this poem is! the motif of nature is really interesting. have a good day :)
January 1st, 2024 23:41
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Parisab said:
This came as a simple and basic monologue, I am so grateful that it caught your attention, Neville…
December 28th, 2023 13:15
Parisab said:
This came as a simple and basic monologue, I am so grateful that it caught your attention, Neville…
December 28th, 2023 13:15
Star of Bethlehem Under Rubble
Neville said:
this is seriously good not only of the moment but for poetry itself .. bravo
December 28th, 2023 10:11
Neville said:
this is seriously good not only of the moment but for poetry itself .. bravo
December 28th, 2023 10:11
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