Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



I know you don\'t want to but we all will
spilleronsheet said:

So emotional
The words are simply jewels coming straight from heart
And so adorable kid

January 22nd, 2022 11:48

Just another dreamer
pearlsofdew22 said:

Lovely thoughts. I greatly enjoyed your video too. Dogs are adorable creatures. Keep holding the flame for the world, we all need to do that.

January 22nd, 2022 11:27

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Neville said:


bloomin heck .. she\'s bloomin sir Dan .. love the sentiment you just pinned beneath her image & brief clip ... my word how time flies ................ :) x

January 21st, 2022 07:49

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
L. B. Mek said:

loved the imagery of the \'lines in the palm\'
and the \'trace back on golden sands\'
what a succinct distillation of the passing of Time...
(beautifully woven
your words only outshined, by her Sparkling smile)
thanks for sharing, my friend
we almost there
ten more days and this long January will be over
and Spring will be teasing it us, with its reinvigorating
arrival...

January 21st, 2022 07:20

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Goldfinch60 said:

May those golden sands fill your life forever Dan.
Such a wonderful video showing such a very happy young lady exploring her world knowing that dad is always there for her.

Andy

January 21st, 2022 04:00

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
dusk arising said:

I love seeing vids of your beautiful daughter growing up.

That wonderful trust from a tiny one when they reach out to hold your hand - priceless even though it may be an everyday experience and taken for granted.

January 21st, 2022 03:38

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Lovely words , Dan 🙂 sorry to hear of your struggles this week

January 21st, 2022 03:34

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a positive write Dan, may that light always be with you.

Andy

January 19th, 2022 02:04

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
spilleronsheet said:

Wonderful dear poet
You are and you shall continue to shine

January 18th, 2022 22:31

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Rozina said:

Lovely lines here. Keep on shining.

January 18th, 2022 21:03

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Completely love your last line ! 🙂🙂

Great writing ….

Such a nice expression

January 18th, 2022 16:14

Uncharted waters
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

January 18th, 2022 07:01

Uncharted waters
Goldfinch60 said:

Those uncharted waters will lead us to the wonders in our lives Dan.

Andy

January 17th, 2022 01:33

Uncharted waters
Rozina said:

Life is full of unknowns. We\'ll get through this. Thank you for sharing.

January 16th, 2022 22:17

Uncharted waters
spilleronsheet said:

A true reflection
Realising the depth inside
No rules or advice
But a custom made experience
So true dear poetic Dan

January 16th, 2022 11:49

Split into two
spilleronsheet said:

The liens brought me different feel
It was a bouquet of flowers
Where each strand told me different story
Where each heed a different advice
Where the lines told me different experiences
And where I could agree by all kind
Great one dear poetic Dan


January 15th, 2022 11:41

Split into two
Goldfinch60 said:

May that smile always be looking down on you Dan.

Andy

January 15th, 2022 01:18

Split into two
L. B. Mek said:

\'Tip toe
through the forbidden forest, shedding
any unwanted horrors

Washing back up
from the depths of our soul, to find
no other place called home\'
(who needs
caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry like yours
can fuel me, endlessly...)
thank you, dear Poet
for reminding us all
\'to leap:
for those \'frisbee\'s\' of opportunity
whilst battling, through our sandpits
of life...\'

January 14th, 2022 07:10

Split into two
dusk arising said:

You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different higher you speaking out. Probably a voice in you that has been quietly crying to be heard beneath the burdens you hide it behind.... let it flow, it\'s the real core of your spirit.... run with it, doesn\'t it feel good?

THis one goes into my favourites.

January 14th, 2022 05:28

Split into two
Rozina said:

Enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

January 14th, 2022 03:54

Split into two
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

I love this ! One of my favourites from you

🙂🙂

Great lines

Hope you have a good day

January 14th, 2022 03:47

Beaching walk
Goldfinch60 said:

Brilliant write, that family love is so wonderful in you all Dan.

Andy

January 14th, 2022 01:47

Beaching walk
Michael Edwards said:

May the trickle continue into loves lagoons.

January 14th, 2022 00:34

Beaching walk
spilleronsheet said:

A beautiful scene and wonderful complementing lines
The last lines were so appeasing to eyes

January 13th, 2022 23:16

Beaching walk
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Beautiful last line , ‘ waterfalls cascade into love ‘

Nice writing 🙂

January 13th, 2022 14:43

Love & hurt
Goldfinch60 said:

Most of my memories are so good from my long life Dan, I am sure that yours will be as well.

Andy

January 11th, 2022 01:39

Love & hurt
spilleronsheet said:

A few lines conveyed a tale
Such beauty dictating as you nail
The verse went deeper imbibed
Coated with many verses of life
Truly captivated by the words as you weave by
May you make more memories
You already am sure made many
Or else how would such jewels be created in such beautiful lines

January 10th, 2022 11:58

Love & hurt
dusk arising said:

I think that right now Dan you are making some of the best memories which you will re-live time and again.... and better times are ahead. Do you feel a better man now tthat you know you are one?

January 10th, 2022 11:32

Love & hurt
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

Memories are so important . So lucky if we have a lot of good ones ..

A nice writing , Dan )

January 10th, 2022 03:51

We all need to breathe
Rozina said:

I love your poem and video. Thank you.

January 10th, 2022 02:28



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