Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



It can be fun!
Caring dove said:

And great writing ! πŸ™‚ I hardly ever rhyme in my poems .. maybe I should try one day

Hope your feeling ok tiday

February 14th, 2022 13:00

Straight from the soul, it\'s all I know
🐀s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

You\'ve conveyed the stress and angst feel well and swell in a great poem many can relate so you\'re not alone. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Happy valentines day, poets.

February 14th, 2022 05:14

Straight from the soul, it\'s all I know
Goldfinch60 said:

You are aware of that metamorphosis into good times Dan as you have found them before so you know they are there, just think of those good times and they will bring you back from the depths into joy.

Andy

February 9th, 2022 01:45

Straight from the soul, it\'s all I know
Crowns4Christ said:

Very powerful Dan

February 8th, 2022 14:55

Straight from the soul, it\'s all I know
Lorna said:

Dear Dan - good one. I feel for you having had only minor ibs symptoms in my life which seem to have cleared up - it\'s really dreadful when full blown. Here\'s hoping - also try Heathers\' site: https://www.heatherstummycare.com - she has SO much info on there.

February 8th, 2022 14:36

If only for a second
Goldfinch60 said:

\"Becoming a part of natures patter\" such wonderful words Dan.

Andy

January 24th, 2022 01:53

If only for a second
Eugene S. said:

I need those moments more and more. Nicely said.

January 23rd, 2022 14:57

If only for a second
Michael Edwards said:

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January 23rd, 2022 12:55

If only for a second
dusk arising said:

Your line \"With fate in my hand drifting with no plan\" describes my life these days since I retired and am having to shield still. Roll on the warmer months I\'ll be out and about again.

January 23rd, 2022 09:31

Just another dreamer
Goldfinch60 said:

That peace and harmony is getting stronger within you each moment Dan and soon that dream will be reality.

Andy

January 23rd, 2022 02:37

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
spilleronsheet said:

So emotional
The words are simply jewels coming straight from heart
And so adorable kid

January 22nd, 2022 11:48

Just another dreamer
pearlsofdew22 said:

Lovely thoughts. I greatly enjoyed your video too. Dogs are adorable creatures. Keep holding the flame for the world, we all need to do that.

January 22nd, 2022 11:27

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Neville said:


bloomin heck .. she\'s bloomin sir Dan .. love the sentiment you just pinned beneath her image & brief clip ... my word how time flies ................ :) x

January 21st, 2022 07:49

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
L. B. Mek said:

loved the imagery of the \'lines in the palm\'
and the \'trace back on golden sands\'
what a succinct distillation of the passing of Time...
(beautifully woven
your words only outshined, by her Sparkling smile)
thanks for sharing, my friend
we almost there
ten more days and this long January will be over
and Spring will be teasing it us, with its reinvigorating
arrival...

January 21st, 2022 07:20

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Goldfinch60 said:

May those golden sands fill your life forever Dan.
Such a wonderful video showing such a very happy young lady exploring her world knowing that dad is always there for her.

Andy

January 21st, 2022 04:00

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
dusk arising said:

I love seeing vids of your beautiful daughter growing up.

That wonderful trust from a tiny one when they reach out to hold your hand - priceless even though it may be an everyday experience and taken for granted.

January 21st, 2022 03:38

I know you don\'t want to but we all will
Caring dove said:

Lovely words , Dan πŸ™‚ sorry to hear of your struggles this week

January 21st, 2022 03:34

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a positive write Dan, may that light always be with you.

Andy

January 19th, 2022 02:04

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
spilleronsheet said:

Wonderful dear poet
You are and you shall continue to shine

January 18th, 2022 22:31

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Rozina said:

Lovely lines here. Keep on shining.

January 18th, 2022 21:03

Screen, paper or the back of my mind
Caring dove said:

Completely love your last line ! πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

Great writing ….

Such a nice expression

January 18th, 2022 16:14

Uncharted waters
L. B. Mek said:

Amen!

January 18th, 2022 07:01

Uncharted waters
Goldfinch60 said:

Those uncharted waters will lead us to the wonders in our lives Dan.

Andy

January 17th, 2022 01:33

Uncharted waters
Rozina said:

Life is full of unknowns. We\'ll get through this. Thank you for sharing.

January 16th, 2022 22:17

Uncharted waters
spilleronsheet said:

A true reflection
Realising the depth inside
No rules or advice
But a custom made experience
So true dear poetic Dan

January 16th, 2022 11:49

Split into two
spilleronsheet said:

The liens brought me different feel
It was a bouquet of flowers
Where each strand told me different story
Where each heed a different advice
Where the lines told me different experiences
And where I could agree by all kind
Great one dear poetic Dan


January 15th, 2022 11:41

Split into two
Goldfinch60 said:

May that smile always be looking down on you Dan.

Andy

January 15th, 2022 01:18

Split into two
L. B. Mek said:

\'Tip toe
through the forbidden forest, shedding
any unwanted horrors

Washing back up
from the depths of our soul, to find
no other place called home\'
(who needs
caffeine or a sugar rush
when poetry like yours
can fuel me, endlessly...)
thank you, dear Poet
for reminding us all
\'to leap:
for those \'frisbee\'s\' of opportunity
whilst battling, through our sandpits
of life...\'

January 14th, 2022 07:10

Split into two
dusk arising said:

You capture something magic within us all here Dan. This is a different higher you speaking out. Probably a voice in you that has been quietly crying to be heard beneath the burdens you hide it behind.... let it flow, it\'s the real core of your spirit.... run with it, doesn\'t it feel good?

THis one goes into my favourites.

January 14th, 2022 05:28

Split into two
Rozina said:

Enjoyed your poem. Thank you.

January 14th, 2022 03:54



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