Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Bum lie
Neville said:
we are fed, or should that be force fed a lot of bum lies throughout our lives... I can imagine you writing away late into the night trying to capture every last drop of that inspiration..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
we are fed, or should that be force fed a lot of bum lies throughout our lives... I can imagine you writing away late into the night trying to capture every last drop of that inspiration..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:24
Bum lie
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 03:46
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 03:46
Find your rhythm
dusk arising said:
Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance to that rhythm Dan but i fell over LOL
May 7th, 2019 16:38
dusk arising said:
Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance to that rhythm Dan but i fell over LOL
May 7th, 2019 16:38
Find your rhythm
Suresh said:
You have a purpose now, so give it your devotion
Life has a reason, let her fill you with emotions
May 7th, 2019 10:04
Suresh said:
You have a purpose now, so give it your devotion
Life has a reason, let her fill you with emotions
May 7th, 2019 10:04
Find your rhythm
Fay Slimm. said:
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51
Find your rhythm
Neville said:
if you mean what I think you mean, this is more than just short and sweet, this is something big in just a few small words....... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:14
Neville said:
if you mean what I think you mean, this is more than just short and sweet, this is something big in just a few small words....... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:14
Our hearts know the way
Suresh said:
Understanding that all we can do is the best we know how,
Know this too, that the children are NOT our possession, but our RESPONSIBILITY.
Enjoy the moments and memories that are yet to be made.
Well said.
May 6th, 2019 11:14
Suresh said:
Understanding that all we can do is the best we know how,
Know this too, that the children are NOT our possession, but our RESPONSIBILITY.
Enjoy the moments and memories that are yet to be made.
Well said.
May 6th, 2019 11:14
If you were in my place
Goldfinch60 said:
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44
If you were in my place
Suresh said:
In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
Well sceneographed.
May 5th, 2019 10:29
Suresh said:
In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
Well sceneographed.
May 5th, 2019 10:29
If you were in my place
Michael Edwards said:
The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD
May 5th, 2019 07:28
Michael Edwards said:
The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD
May 5th, 2019 07:28
If you were in my place
Neville said:
reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 03:13
Neville said:
reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 03:13
Roll up, roll up!
Goldfinch60 said:
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far better securer place, long may it get even better.
May 5th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far better securer place, long may it get even better.
May 5th, 2019 00:38
Roll up, roll up!
orchidee said:
You wanting to give more? You mean money? No probs: \'All donations gratefully received; put ya cheque in the post to me!\' heehee.
Oh, you mean give more generally - in poetry output, etc?
May 4th, 2019 11:32
orchidee said:
You wanting to give more? You mean money? No probs: \'All donations gratefully received; put ya cheque in the post to me!\' heehee.
Oh, you mean give more generally - in poetry output, etc?
May 4th, 2019 11:32
Roll up, roll up!
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ll hear your own voice, doing them audio blogs. Will you go on and on? Will you waffle endlessly?! lol.
May 4th, 2019 11:31
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ll hear your own voice, doing them audio blogs. Will you go on and on? Will you waffle endlessly?! lol.
May 4th, 2019 11:31
Roll up, roll up!
Suresh said:
Let the two worlds meet
Let the responsible one speak
And then, to the past, say goodbye
As new life takes hold of thee
May 4th, 2019 11:14
Suresh said:
Let the two worlds meet
Let the responsible one speak
And then, to the past, say goodbye
As new life takes hold of thee
May 4th, 2019 11:14
Roll up, roll up!
Neville said:
this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
May 4th, 2019 04:25
Neville said:
this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
May 4th, 2019 04:25
Gender revealing
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her. Congratulations.
May 4th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her. Congratulations.
May 4th, 2019 00:16
Gender revealing
Fay Slimm. said:
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - thank you for sharing this waiting time with us dear Dan - - - a lovely read.
May 3rd, 2019 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - thank you for sharing this waiting time with us dear Dan - - - a lovely read.
May 3rd, 2019 15:33
Gender revealing
Michael Edwards said:
What a heart warming read - I know you deserve the joy - so enjoy it.
May 3rd, 2019 12:56
Michael Edwards said:
What a heart warming read - I know you deserve the joy - so enjoy it.
May 3rd, 2019 12:56
Gender revealing
Suresh said:
May your pitcher of joy be always full
Drink from it and dole it out freely
May 3rd, 2019 10:56
Suresh said:
May your pitcher of joy be always full
Drink from it and dole it out freely
May 3rd, 2019 10:56
Gender revealing
Neville said:
yes indeed.. here\'s looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the world Little Sparkle...... a lovely post and a smashing video ..... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:29
Neville said:
yes indeed.. here\'s looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the world Little Sparkle...... a lovely post and a smashing video ..... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:29
Gender revealing
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
CONGRATULATIONS! and love to ou all
There are no words Dan... but great fun trying.
Enjoy enjoy and enjoy!
... and film everything she\'ll change so fast it\'ll mke you dry all over again when you\'re older (More happy tears)
May 3rd, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
CONGRATULATIONS! and love to ou all
There are no words Dan... but great fun trying.
Enjoy enjoy and enjoy!
... and film everything she\'ll change so fast it\'ll mke you dry all over again when you\'re older (More happy tears)
May 3rd, 2019 04:41
The question
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
The question
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
The question
Goldfinch60 said:
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
May 2nd, 2019 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
May 2nd, 2019 02:59
The question
Michael Edwards said:
Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?
May 2nd, 2019 02:47
Michael Edwards said:
Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?
May 2nd, 2019 02:47
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