Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
It\'s not a crime to rhyme
moordykspot2 said:
A delicate write full of thought provoking ending with words of courage Thank you
May 9th, 2019 12:22
moordykspot2 said:
A delicate write full of thought provoking ending with words of courage Thank you
May 9th, 2019 12:22
It\'s not a crime to rhyme
Suresh said:
What\'s written down is silent
Till someone gives it voice
Let\'s start shouting
May 9th, 2019 10:45
Suresh said:
What\'s written down is silent
Till someone gives it voice
Let\'s start shouting
May 9th, 2019 10:45
It\'s not a crime to rhyme
orchidee said:
Yes, writing thing down can help. Pity I was singing at the time. That\'s enough to cause anyone to wobble - out of utter agony! lol.
May 9th, 2019 03:53
orchidee said:
Yes, writing thing down can help. Pity I was singing at the time. That\'s enough to cause anyone to wobble - out of utter agony! lol.
May 9th, 2019 03:53
It\'s not a crime to rhyme
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how words written down can take the hurt and sorrow from your body and mind. It is so therapeutic to write. Keep it up Dan.
May 9th, 2019 03:20
Goldfinch60 said:
It is amazing how words written down can take the hurt and sorrow from your body and mind. It is so therapeutic to write. Keep it up Dan.
May 9th, 2019 03:20
Bum lie
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many paths in our lives, those in power try to send you down the paths that they want you to go, to go their way, well their way is often wrong. We must travel our own paths to reach the fulfilment in our lives that we all deserve.
May 9th, 2019 00:28
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many paths in our lives, those in power try to send you down the paths that they want you to go, to go their way, well their way is often wrong. We must travel our own paths to reach the fulfilment in our lives that we all deserve.
May 9th, 2019 00:28
Bum lie
Suresh said:
Amazing piece, encompassing emotions of where you are and what could be.
May 8th, 2019 10:30
Suresh said:
Amazing piece, encompassing emotions of where you are and what could be.
May 8th, 2019 10:30
Bum lie
Fay Slimm. said:
This has to be one of your best Dan - - loved the title and what it portrayed - - your late-night writing expresses poetically every last drop of your chosen subject. Great read.
May 8th, 2019 06:02
Fay Slimm. said:
This has to be one of your best Dan - - loved the title and what it portrayed - - your late-night writing expresses poetically every last drop of your chosen subject. Great read.
May 8th, 2019 06:02
Bum lie
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 05:12
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 05:12
Bum lie
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Erm, I\'m not writing this late in the night, as I shall have gone to bed! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. Erm, I\'m not writing this late in the night, as I shall have gone to bed! lol.
May 8th, 2019 04:38
Bum lie
Neville said:
we are fed, or should that be force fed a lot of bum lies throughout our lives... I can imagine you writing away late into the night trying to capture every last drop of that inspiration..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:24
Neville said:
we are fed, or should that be force fed a lot of bum lies throughout our lives... I can imagine you writing away late into the night trying to capture every last drop of that inspiration..... Neville
May 8th, 2019 04:24
Bum lie
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 03:46
dusk arising said:
Oh that life were simple, but that would merely present us a different set of frustrations.
We are each born into the system, a product of wherever our parents fitted into it.
Fortunately we have the intelligence to perceive another way, though its questionably better? for crooks and deceivers would still be amongst us.
You sure know how to get the juices flowing when you write provocatively.
May 8th, 2019 03:46
Find your rhythm
dusk arising said:
Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance to that rhythm Dan but i fell over LOL
May 7th, 2019 16:38
dusk arising said:
Re-align disharmony with the rhythm of a fulfilling life. I used to dance to that rhythm Dan but i fell over LOL
May 7th, 2019 16:38
Find your rhythm
Suresh said:
You have a purpose now, so give it your devotion
Life has a reason, let her fill you with emotions
May 7th, 2019 10:04
Suresh said:
You have a purpose now, so give it your devotion
Life has a reason, let her fill you with emotions
May 7th, 2019 10:04
Find your rhythm
Fay Slimm. said:
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51
Fay Slimm. said:
Really good advice and worth a few reads Dan - - saved to my faves.
May 7th, 2019 05:51
Find your rhythm
Neville said:
if you mean what I think you mean, this is more than just short and sweet, this is something big in just a few small words....... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:14
Neville said:
if you mean what I think you mean, this is more than just short and sweet, this is something big in just a few small words....... Neville
May 7th, 2019 04:14
Our hearts know the way
Suresh said:
Understanding that all we can do is the best we know how,
Know this too, that the children are NOT our possession, but our RESPONSIBILITY.
Enjoy the moments and memories that are yet to be made.
Well said.
May 6th, 2019 11:14
Suresh said:
Understanding that all we can do is the best we know how,
Know this too, that the children are NOT our possession, but our RESPONSIBILITY.
Enjoy the moments and memories that are yet to be made.
Well said.
May 6th, 2019 11:14
If you were in my place
Goldfinch60 said:
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
As Michael said, the lady always comes first. Good write Dan.
May 6th, 2019 00:44
If you were in my place
Suresh said:
In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
Well sceneographed.
May 5th, 2019 10:29
Suresh said:
In her happiness lies yours, so it confers that the lady comes first.
Well sceneographed.
May 5th, 2019 10:29
If you were in my place
Michael Edwards said:
The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD
May 5th, 2019 07:28
Michael Edwards said:
The Lady ALWAYS comes first - well mine does - love her dearly. Fine write PD
May 5th, 2019 07:28
If you were in my place
Neville said:
reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 03:13
Neville said:
reads like a statement made while standing before a mirror, contemplating a pronouncement yet to be made, or like a prayer and a pledge..... Neville
May 5th, 2019 03:13
Roll up, roll up!
Goldfinch60 said:
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far better securer place, long may it get even better.
May 5th, 2019 00:38
Goldfinch60 said:
You have found harmony in your life Dan, you have moved on into a far better securer place, long may it get even better.
May 5th, 2019 00:38
Roll up, roll up!
orchidee said:
You wanting to give more? You mean money? No probs: \'All donations gratefully received; put ya cheque in the post to me!\' heehee.
Oh, you mean give more generally - in poetry output, etc?
May 4th, 2019 11:32
orchidee said:
You wanting to give more? You mean money? No probs: \'All donations gratefully received; put ya cheque in the post to me!\' heehee.
Oh, you mean give more generally - in poetry output, etc?
May 4th, 2019 11:32
Roll up, roll up!
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ll hear your own voice, doing them audio blogs. Will you go on and on? Will you waffle endlessly?! lol.
May 4th, 2019 11:31
orchidee said:
Yep, you\'ll hear your own voice, doing them audio blogs. Will you go on and on? Will you waffle endlessly?! lol.
May 4th, 2019 11:31
Roll up, roll up!
Suresh said:
Let the two worlds meet
Let the responsible one speak
And then, to the past, say goodbye
As new life takes hold of thee
May 4th, 2019 11:14
Suresh said:
Let the two worlds meet
Let the responsible one speak
And then, to the past, say goodbye
As new life takes hold of thee
May 4th, 2019 11:14
Roll up, roll up!
Neville said:
this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
May 4th, 2019 04:25
Neville said:
this has an experimental flavour and tone to it.... enjoyed.. Neville
May 4th, 2019 04:25
Gender revealing
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her. Congratulations.
May 4th, 2019 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May that sparkle see the world of love and joy that you can give her. Congratulations.
May 4th, 2019 00:16
Gender revealing
Fay Slimm. said:
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - thank you for sharing this waiting time with us dear Dan - - - a lovely read.
May 3rd, 2019 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
A great expectation of joy when that little sparkle makes her entrance - thank you for sharing this waiting time with us dear Dan - - - a lovely read.
May 3rd, 2019 15:33
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