Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Yes! You..
dusk arising said:
I dunno what normal is, I\'m not sure about acceptable either.
In so many ways i don\'t fit in. It\'s easier for me to not try to fit in. In this way, although i\'m insular. I can just be me. With all the crazy stuff that\'s happened in my life and stuff done to me it only comes to a head when i try to fit in.
But i\'m just me, finding my own way, my journey.
Hah! and you thought this was bout you..... one thing i like about myself is my sense of humour and self ridicule.. ooppss that\'s two.
April 11th, 2019 16:02
dusk arising said:
I dunno what normal is, I\'m not sure about acceptable either.
In so many ways i don\'t fit in. It\'s easier for me to not try to fit in. In this way, although i\'m insular. I can just be me. With all the crazy stuff that\'s happened in my life and stuff done to me it only comes to a head when i try to fit in.
But i\'m just me, finding my own way, my journey.
Hah! and you thought this was bout you..... one thing i like about myself is my sense of humour and self ridicule.. ooppss that\'s two.
April 11th, 2019 16:02
Yes! You..
Suresh said:
i wish I had the elixir that would eradicate addiction, I would share it with all of humanity.
Meanwhile, your realizing it is half the battle, so stay strong.
April 11th, 2019 12:12
Suresh said:
i wish I had the elixir that would eradicate addiction, I would share it with all of humanity.
Meanwhile, your realizing it is half the battle, so stay strong.
April 11th, 2019 12:12
Yes! You..
Fay Slimm. said:
I Love this short but inspired few lines Dan - -- must read it over again and am putting it into my faves with thanks.
April 11th, 2019 03:47
Fay Slimm. said:
I Love this short but inspired few lines Dan - -- must read it over again and am putting it into my faves with thanks.
April 11th, 2019 03:47
Yes! You..
orchidee said:
A fine inspiration Dan. Erm, where ya getting to? Will ya know when ya have got there? If ya are going to the Co-op, ya will need the No.11 bus! lol.
April 11th, 2019 03:34
orchidee said:
A fine inspiration Dan. Erm, where ya getting to? Will ya know when ya have got there? If ya are going to the Co-op, ya will need the No.11 bus! lol.
April 11th, 2019 03:34
Yes! You..
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’ll get there ! I have no doubts about that! You’re stronger than you think you are! I wish your friend the best on his/her journey!
~Laura~🌻
April 11th, 2019 03:30
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’ll get there ! I have no doubts about that! You’re stronger than you think you are! I wish your friend the best on his/her journey!
~Laura~🌻
April 11th, 2019 03:30
Hey....
Goldfinch60 said:
Andy went for coffee
With his loving wife
It’s great to be together
With the trouble and strife
April 10th, 2019 12:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Andy went for coffee
With his loving wife
It’s great to be together
With the trouble and strife
April 10th, 2019 12:48
Hey....
Suresh said:
You wrote this while you went to the loo
I am on the loo, reading what\'s written by you
NO IMAGES HERE
April 10th, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
You wrote this while you went to the loo
I am on the loo, reading what\'s written by you
NO IMAGES HERE
April 10th, 2019 11:38
Hey....
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
If it’s rhyme that you want,
Then I’ll forget my croissant!
You’re the commandant
Of the rhymes that you want!
After all...
you are the in residence savant!
~Laura~🌻
April 10th, 2019 09:18
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
If it’s rhyme that you want,
Then I’ll forget my croissant!
You’re the commandant
Of the rhymes that you want!
After all...
you are the in residence savant!
~Laura~🌻
April 10th, 2019 09:18
Hey....
dusk arising said:
First of all i went for as osteopath rub
on the way home i thought about the pub
but that can wait for i have things to do
gotta work to make up for the cash i blew
so i sat and looked at a poetry site
my friends write good stuff but theres also loads a shite
todays theres a short one from my pal Dan
amazing bloke jumps through the window in his van
and now he says our comments have got to rhyme
thats a dirty trick, rotten swine
April 10th, 2019 08:35
dusk arising said:
First of all i went for as osteopath rub
on the way home i thought about the pub
but that can wait for i have things to do
gotta work to make up for the cash i blew
so i sat and looked at a poetry site
my friends write good stuff but theres also loads a shite
todays theres a short one from my pal Dan
amazing bloke jumps through the window in his van
and now he says our comments have got to rhyme
thats a dirty trick, rotten swine
April 10th, 2019 08:35
Hey....
Fay Slimm. said:
I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I\'d overslept.
April 10th, 2019 03:52
Fay Slimm. said:
I woke with a start of regret - - - Sun was up and I\'d overslept.
April 10th, 2019 03:52
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
Goldfinch60 said:
Super carefree write Dan, we are all still children in our minds.
April 8th, 2019 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Super carefree write Dan, we are all still children in our minds.
April 8th, 2019 00:27
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
dusk arising said:
Oh chim chim chutney to you now.... Grrr you put that damn song in my brain....
Such a delightful ditty that reminds us we are all kids inside.... its only the outside that grew up and got haggard and took on those horrible responsibilities we\'d be far happier without... or would we? Nah, they just brought another load of joy with them.... i mean... kids... theyre worth losing our childhood for aint they? chimn chim cher oh sod off im still singin it....
bah ... humbug!
April 8th, 2019 00:15
dusk arising said:
Oh chim chim chutney to you now.... Grrr you put that damn song in my brain....
Such a delightful ditty that reminds us we are all kids inside.... its only the outside that grew up and got haggard and took on those horrible responsibilities we\'d be far happier without... or would we? Nah, they just brought another load of joy with them.... i mean... kids... theyre worth losing our childhood for aint they? chimn chim cher oh sod off im still singin it....
bah ... humbug!
April 8th, 2019 00:15
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
Fay Slimm. said:
Still singing the number inside my mind Dan - - a wonderful feeling is the magic of song.
April 7th, 2019 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
Still singing the number inside my mind Dan - - a wonderful feeling is the magic of song.
April 7th, 2019 16:42
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
Suresh said:
Yes, as Laura said, it\'s a magical write, I even read it twice.
No matter what you do in life, no matter how harrowing the plight, it all works out, if you do it with a bob in your step and a smile on your face.
Thnx for a charming imagery.
April 7th, 2019 11:31
Suresh said:
Yes, as Laura said, it\'s a magical write, I even read it twice.
No matter what you do in life, no matter how harrowing the plight, it all works out, if you do it with a bob in your step and a smile on your face.
Thnx for a charming imagery.
April 7th, 2019 11:31
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
What a magical write!
I totally enjoyed the read!
The visual and song complement your poem extremely well!
🎼...and a chim chimney chim chim cheroo to you too...🎼
~Laura~
April 7th, 2019 08:13
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
What a magical write!
I totally enjoyed the read!
The visual and song complement your poem extremely well!
🎼...and a chim chimney chim chim cheroo to you too...🎼
~Laura~
April 7th, 2019 08:13
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
Neville said:
How absolutely delightful... took me way back, so it did..... N
April 7th, 2019 04:48
Neville said:
How absolutely delightful... took me way back, so it did..... N
April 7th, 2019 04:48
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. But I don\'t know this Perter Pan guy! (heehee).
April 7th, 2019 04:40
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. But I don\'t know this Perter Pan guy! (heehee).
April 7th, 2019 04:40
You\'ll never forget me as I\'ll never forget you
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for this DAN : Wonderful visual & a wonderful VERSE ! Its 10pm here (NZ) so it will send me HAPPY to bed after me hot Milk & Manuka Honey. None of us really wants to grow up ! @ 30 Im engaged but not married so I have licence to still act like a child. I sing songs while I massage my Patients (Im a Physio !) and I always try to spread sweetnes & light to my patients who are recovering form Surgery. Love Mary Poppins and all the Songs from Mad Musicals like Cats : Sound of Music : Chicago : Oliver etc. Thanks for caring & sharing : Im still smiling !
Blessings & Much Joy & Happiness
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 7th, 2019 04:09
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for this DAN : Wonderful visual & a wonderful VERSE ! Its 10pm here (NZ) so it will send me HAPPY to bed after me hot Milk & Manuka Honey. None of us really wants to grow up ! @ 30 Im engaged but not married so I have licence to still act like a child. I sing songs while I massage my Patients (Im a Physio !) and I always try to spread sweetnes & light to my patients who are recovering form Surgery. Love Mary Poppins and all the Songs from Mad Musicals like Cats : Sound of Music : Chicago : Oliver etc. Thanks for caring & sharing : Im still smiling !
Blessings & Much Joy & Happiness
Yours ANGELA 🧡
April 7th, 2019 04:09
Random
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. A guy said \'Gimme no news; it\'s not gonna last\'.
But why? I only asked \'You want the good news or the bad news first?\' Doh! Heehee.
April 6th, 2019 12:09
orchidee said:
Good write Dan. A guy said \'Gimme no news; it\'s not gonna last\'.
But why? I only asked \'You want the good news or the bad news first?\' Doh! Heehee.
April 6th, 2019 12:09
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write highlighting a great occasion, nature’s sound are wonderful.
April 5th, 2019 14:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write highlighting a great occasion, nature’s sound are wonderful.
April 5th, 2019 14:47
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha brilliant buddy! I guess some bring nature and others people, I do love the saxs.
Thank you for a massive laugh out loud!
Well needed my friend.
Happy drilling ;)
April 5th, 2019 09:55
Poetic Dan said:
Ha ha brilliant buddy! I guess some bring nature and others people, I do love the saxs.
Thank you for a massive laugh out loud!
Well needed my friend.
Happy drilling ;)
April 5th, 2019 09:55
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
dusk arising said:
Great piece of writing today m8. All about being in harmony with ones surroundings. And the simple pleasure one gets from making a nice noise on a musical instrument.
If i got one of my saxophone out and started honking away all the wildlife for miles would run for the hills though. With one exception.
It used to amaze me that when i was hammer drilling in a wall, any nearby spiders would approach the drill... i think the vibrations must be similar to the buzz of a fly caught in a web.. or maybe spiders are just frustrated building workers reincarnated with more legs?
April 5th, 2019 09:05
dusk arising said:
Great piece of writing today m8. All about being in harmony with ones surroundings. And the simple pleasure one gets from making a nice noise on a musical instrument.
If i got one of my saxophone out and started honking away all the wildlife for miles would run for the hills though. With one exception.
It used to amaze me that when i was hammer drilling in a wall, any nearby spiders would approach the drill... i think the vibrations must be similar to the buzz of a fly caught in a web.. or maybe spiders are just frustrated building workers reincarnated with more legs?
April 5th, 2019 09:05
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Michael Edwards said:
This so original and sits so well with Fay\'s posting today - a really inspired write.
April 5th, 2019 06:14
Michael Edwards said:
This so original and sits so well with Fay\'s posting today - a really inspired write.
April 5th, 2019 06:14
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Fay Slimm. said:
What an artistic thing to achieve - playing along with a bird - great idea Dan. Love the positive vibes in your words.
April 5th, 2019 05:26
Fay Slimm. said:
What an artistic thing to achieve - playing along with a bird - great idea Dan. Love the positive vibes in your words.
April 5th, 2019 05:26
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Nafis Light said:
I kinda got an idea, like people gathering to this song...or a camp night together.
April 5th, 2019 03:51
Nafis Light said:
I kinda got an idea, like people gathering to this song...or a camp night together.
April 5th, 2019 03:51
I don\'t know where I\'m going, but I like it!
Neville said:
Exceptionally well strummed he hummed and ah\'ed... then wrote a poem bout a little bird.... wot a little cracker sir... not only a rather nice poem to kick the day off, but a very pleasant, simple tune that kind of goes round in my head in a really nice way..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:32
Neville said:
Exceptionally well strummed he hummed and ah\'ed... then wrote a poem bout a little bird.... wot a little cracker sir... not only a rather nice poem to kick the day off, but a very pleasant, simple tune that kind of goes round in my head in a really nice way..... Neville
April 5th, 2019 03:32
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