Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan



Laughter in our plight
Michael Edwards said:

The trick in life is finding the right tunnel - some have no exits. Thankfully yours does. Enjoyed the read.

April 21st, 2019 01:58

Laughter in our plight
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine place to be is there finding laughter. Good first read of my day Dan.

April 21st, 2019 01:44

Laughter in our plight
Suresh said:

Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write

April 21st, 2019 01:35

Laughter in our plight
Suresh said:

Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write

April 21st, 2019 01:35

Laughter in our plight
orchidee said:

Good write Dan.

April 21st, 2019 01:29

Known by some wondered by many
Goldfinch60 said:

Your travels in words bring you to some amazing places
, don\'t stop.

April 21st, 2019 00:26

Known by some wondered by many
Suresh said:

I find you in a much calmer place, even with all the gushing and splashing.

April 20th, 2019 11:07

Known by some wondered by many
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m afraid I\'m not the greatest fan of the soul wrenching stuff but this is quite different - a celebration of words in an enjoyable read - keep writing Dan.

April 20th, 2019 02:12

Hey! come here
Goldfinch60 said:

Those walks with kids and nature can be so fulfilling, when is the next one?

April 20th, 2019 00:36

Hey! come here
Michael Edwards said:

Such an uplifting write - a bit of joy here on MPS.

April 20th, 2019 00:18

Hey! come here
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah what a lovely walk I have been enjoying with you and your little one Dan - -- falling in love with the moments sounds good to me.....

April 19th, 2019 13:12

Hey! come here
Neville said:

a world through the eyes of a child, is indeed a world of wonder....

Neville

April 19th, 2019 13:01

Hey! come here
orchidee said:

A fine write Dan.

April 19th, 2019 09:31

Hey! come here
dusk arising said:

Lovely sunny reading. Fun to read to children and talk about afterwards - that fox\'s easy lunch.



April 19th, 2019 07:50

My show begins
Lorna said:

All right Dan! Go guy! We\'ll watch you fly!

April 18th, 2019 05:16

My show begins
orchidee said:

Keep being poetic!

April 18th, 2019 02:02

My show begins
Goldfinch60 said:

Your time has come Dan (Dave) just keep moving on in your new found life.

April 18th, 2019 00:30

My show begins
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is truly thrilling

April 17th, 2019 16:34

My show begins
Michael Edwards said:

Name in lights for this PD

April 17th, 2019 15:35

I asked!
orchidee said:

Well, if you think the cards help...... I steer clear of anything spooky or \'dark\' fortune telling, etc, and more sinister things.

April 17th, 2019 04:21

I asked!
Goldfinch60 said:

Slow and steady is the way to go, if you rush you miss so many wonders in life.

April 17th, 2019 00:30

I asked!
Suresh said:

Seek knowledge from whomever and wherever you can
But acceptance be through thorough understanding

Lovely concept

April 16th, 2019 11:42

I asked!
Fay Slimm. said:

Yep - - keep slow and steady and give when you can - - a great race to win is this wonderful journey through life Dan. Blessings and peace to you my friend.

April 16th, 2019 11:19

I asked!
dusk arising said:

I am a sceptic.
Kudos will retain my faith.
Too many charlatans in the \'spirit\' world which of course ruins it for those individuals who are genuinely gifted

Why dont clairvoyants have illegitimate kids?
Cos they\'ve got crystal balls and can see whats coming.

April 16th, 2019 11:09

I asked!
Nafis Light said:

A card reading?
You did by yourself...for yourself?
Do you do for others?

I found the word \'laughed\'!

Blessings and Laughter to you!

April 16th, 2019 10:45

I asked!
Laura🌻 said:

Dan,

This is a great write complemented by your awesome author comment! You’re spot on with...OUR BELIEFS ARE OUR OWN...and that is the truth!

I especially favor...

‘Give with gratitude &Grace’
‘Slow & steady wins the race’

Have a wonderful evening!

~Laura~🌻

April 16th, 2019 10:32

Emotions
Neville said:

I like this.. One of your earliest it seems and I\'m sure since originally posted you have experienced a whole roller-coaster ride of emotional ups and downs.... Neville

April 16th, 2019 08:43

Two day break (ish)
Neville said:

The sense in ya heart dont have to tally with the sense in ya head.. nicely penned and I imagine somewhat refreshing, if not cathartic too............ Neville

April 15th, 2019 05:11

Just a little one
dusk arising said:

God \'n short
imagination caught.

April 15th, 2019 00:22

Just a little one
Goldfinch60 said:

Each day we need to play,
To play we need each day.

April 15th, 2019 00:05



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