Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Gender revealing
Michael Edwards said:
What a heart warming read - I know you deserve the joy - so enjoy it.
May 3rd, 2019 12:56
Michael Edwards said:
What a heart warming read - I know you deserve the joy - so enjoy it.
May 3rd, 2019 12:56
Gender revealing
Suresh said:
May your pitcher of joy be always full
Drink from it and dole it out freely
May 3rd, 2019 10:56
Suresh said:
May your pitcher of joy be always full
Drink from it and dole it out freely
May 3rd, 2019 10:56
Gender revealing
Neville said:
yes indeed.. here\'s looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the world Little Sparkle...... a lovely post and a smashing video ..... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:29
Neville said:
yes indeed.. here\'s looking forward to eventually welcoming you to the world Little Sparkle...... a lovely post and a smashing video ..... Neville
May 3rd, 2019 08:29
Gender revealing
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
CONGRATULATIONS! and love to ou all
There are no words Dan... but great fun trying.
Enjoy enjoy and enjoy!
... and film everything she\'ll change so fast it\'ll mke you dry all over again when you\'re older (More happy tears)
May 3rd, 2019 04:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
CONGRATULATIONS! and love to ou all
There are no words Dan... but great fun trying.
Enjoy enjoy and enjoy!
... and film everything she\'ll change so fast it\'ll mke you dry all over again when you\'re older (More happy tears)
May 3rd, 2019 04:41
The question
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
The question
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
Suresh said:
This bundle of joy that soon cometh
The reason of your being becometh
May 2nd, 2019 11:38
The question
Goldfinch60 said:
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
May 2nd, 2019 02:59
Goldfinch60 said:
May that birthday be filled with joy, humour and love.
May 2nd, 2019 02:59
The question
Michael Edwards said:
Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?
May 2nd, 2019 02:47
Michael Edwards said:
Another great cheek in tongue write - errr - have I got that right?
May 2nd, 2019 02:47
The question
orchidee said:
Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can\'t say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.
May 2nd, 2019 02:12
orchidee said:
Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can\'t say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.
May 2nd, 2019 02:12
Let it roll of the tongue
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun is so important in our lives, like the fun in your words. May your days be filled with humour.
May 2nd, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun is so important in our lives, like the fun in your words. May your days be filled with humour.
May 2nd, 2019 00:19
Following examples
Nafis Light said:
This is the first poem which made me feel like \'printing it out\'.
It\'s like it appeals to everyone here and there\'s a sense of gratitude.
Blessings, Love and Laughter...to you.
May 1st, 2019 07:12
Nafis Light said:
This is the first poem which made me feel like \'printing it out\'.
It\'s like it appeals to everyone here and there\'s a sense of gratitude.
Blessings, Love and Laughter...to you.
May 1st, 2019 07:12
Let it roll of the tongue
dusk arising said:
Fun stuff.
Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and the willows where simply it billows but who knows what he knows we just look to our toes.
Rolls right off the tongue you are right. Let it in, let it out.
Fun stuff.
May 1st, 2019 06:39
dusk arising said:
Fun stuff.
Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and the willows where simply it billows but who knows what he knows we just look to our toes.
Rolls right off the tongue you are right. Let it in, let it out.
Fun stuff.
May 1st, 2019 06:39
Let it roll of the tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18
Let it roll of the tongue
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed and my response now deployed...... Neville
May 1st, 2019 05:08
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed and my response now deployed...... Neville
May 1st, 2019 05:08
Following examples
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved your life onwards Dan into a great place, let others share your experiences.
April 30th, 2019 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved your life onwards Dan into a great place, let others share your experiences.
April 30th, 2019 15:15
Following examples
dusk arising said:
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly you and i am perfectly me. Perfect imperfection.
There is a way of printing off all of your own poems on here but i cant find it on here at the moment. Its called \'publish an anthology of user name\'s poetry\'.
April 30th, 2019 13:56
dusk arising said:
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly you and i am perfectly me. Perfect imperfection.
There is a way of printing off all of your own poems on here but i cant find it on here at the moment. Its called \'publish an anthology of user name\'s poetry\'.
April 30th, 2019 13:56
Following examples
Michael Edwards said:
Go for it Dan - you\'ve written some great work.
April 30th, 2019 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
Go for it Dan - you\'ve written some great work.
April 30th, 2019 13:45
Following examples
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Iâm so glad youâre seriously considering that book for your poems... onward and forward! Youâve posted 359 poems on MPS! Plenty for a book. Donât let anyone or anything hold you back!!
...and donât worry about the spelling of words...thereâs always spellcheck available!đ
âFollowing Examplesâ is a great introduction!
Wishing you all the best!
~Laura~đ»
April 30th, 2019 05:18
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Iâm so glad youâre seriously considering that book for your poems... onward and forward! Youâve posted 359 poems on MPS! Plenty for a book. Donât let anyone or anything hold you back!!
...and donât worry about the spelling of words...thereâs always spellcheck available!đ
âFollowing Examplesâ is a great introduction!
Wishing you all the best!
~Laura~đ»
April 30th, 2019 05:18
For the record
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come so far Dan to let your finances bring you down, as you said it is only paper. Your new found strength will pull you through.
April 30th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come so far Dan to let your finances bring you down, as you said it is only paper. Your new found strength will pull you through.
April 30th, 2019 00:18
For the record
dusk arising said:
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look around you, plenty are not. Look around you, there is a wealth of love in your life and its genuine.
I\'m envious. You\'re a genuine bloke who wears his heart on his sleeve and is much loved and respected for it. Somehow i cant see you as a mean money making unfeeling geezah.
April 29th, 2019 14:12
dusk arising said:
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look around you, plenty are not. Look around you, there is a wealth of love in your life and its genuine.
I\'m envious. You\'re a genuine bloke who wears his heart on his sleeve and is much loved and respected for it. Somehow i cant see you as a mean money making unfeeling geezah.
April 29th, 2019 14:12
For the record
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
In totality...
you are who you are!
Suffice it to say...
âTo thy own self be trueâ...
And that is the best that you can do!
Finances can be a problem!
Donât let them drown you! You are stronger than that! Strive to stay the good-hearted and caring man that you are!đ
~Laura~đ»
April 29th, 2019 11:08
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
In totality...
you are who you are!
Suffice it to say...
âTo thy own self be trueâ...
And that is the best that you can do!
Finances can be a problem!
Donât let them drown you! You are stronger than that! Strive to stay the good-hearted and caring man that you are!đ
~Laura~đ»
April 29th, 2019 11:08
Welcome to my jungle
Goldfinch60 said:
That rave sounds great fun Dan, you obviously had an uplifting time and that\'s the way it should be.
April 29th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That rave sounds great fun Dan, you obviously had an uplifting time and that\'s the way it should be.
April 29th, 2019 00:19
Welcome to my jungle
dusk arising said:
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your tribe.... like celebrating a time to be human beings of joy. Joy is the feeling... release of all external negativity ... as one in a tribe.
What a feeling...much thanks to you for reminding me of this pleasure.
April 28th, 2019 11:08
dusk arising said:
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your tribe.... like celebrating a time to be human beings of joy. Joy is the feeling... release of all external negativity ... as one in a tribe.
What a feeling...much thanks to you for reminding me of this pleasure.
April 28th, 2019 11:08
Welcome to my jungle
Suresh said:
If the band will only play forever.....
Thnx for a lovely Sunday
April 28th, 2019 10:21
Suresh said:
If the band will only play forever.....
Thnx for a lovely Sunday
April 28th, 2019 10:21
Welcome to my jungle
Neville said:
Never been to a Sunday rave my friend but it looks and sounds fun.... well writ too............... :)
April 28th, 2019 08:41
Neville said:
Never been to a Sunday rave my friend but it looks and sounds fun.... well writ too............... :)
April 28th, 2019 08:41
Daughter of creation
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you and show you the way.
April 28th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you and show you the way.
April 28th, 2019 00:36
Daughter of creation
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
April 27th, 2019 11:36
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
April 27th, 2019 11:36
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