Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The question
orchidee said:
Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can\'t say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.
May 2nd, 2019 02:12
orchidee said:
Oh lol, I know a Susan. She flies into a rage (sort of) if anyone calls her Sue! lol. I can\'t say I like being called Sue much myself - seeing my name is Steven. heehee.
May 2nd, 2019 02:12
Let it roll of the tongue
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun is so important in our lives, like the fun in your words. May your days be filled with humour.
May 2nd, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Fun is so important in our lives, like the fun in your words. May your days be filled with humour.
May 2nd, 2019 00:19
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Nafis Light said:
This is the first poem which made me feel like \'printing it out\'.
It\'s like it appeals to everyone here and there\'s a sense of gratitude.
Blessings, Love and Laughter...to you.
May 1st, 2019 07:12
Nafis Light said:
This is the first poem which made me feel like \'printing it out\'.
It\'s like it appeals to everyone here and there\'s a sense of gratitude.
Blessings, Love and Laughter...to you.
May 1st, 2019 07:12
Let it roll of the tongue
dusk arising said:
Fun stuff.
Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and the willows where simply it billows but who knows what he knows we just look to our toes.
Rolls right off the tongue you are right. Let it in, let it out.
Fun stuff.
May 1st, 2019 06:39
dusk arising said:
Fun stuff.
Like balls of fluff, fluffing up the pillows for the wind and the willows where simply it billows but who knows what he knows we just look to our toes.
Rolls right off the tongue you are right. Let it in, let it out.
Fun stuff.
May 1st, 2019 06:39
Let it roll of the tongue
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Good advice Dan - truth must out and then fun can be enjoyed.
May 1st, 2019 05:18
Let it roll of the tongue
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed and my response now deployed...... Neville
May 1st, 2019 05:08
Neville said:
muchly enjoyed and my response now deployed...... Neville
May 1st, 2019 05:08
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Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved your life onwards Dan into a great place, let others share your experiences.
April 30th, 2019 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
You have moved your life onwards Dan into a great place, let others share your experiences.
April 30th, 2019 15:15
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dusk arising said:
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly you and i am perfectly me. Perfect imperfection.
There is a way of printing off all of your own poems on here but i cant find it on here at the moment. Its called \'publish an anthology of user name\'s poetry\'.
April 30th, 2019 13:56
dusk arising said:
None of us are perfect except you and me Dan. Because you are perfectly you and i am perfectly me. Perfect imperfection.
There is a way of printing off all of your own poems on here but i cant find it on here at the moment. Its called \'publish an anthology of user name\'s poetry\'.
April 30th, 2019 13:56
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Michael Edwards said:
Go for it Dan - you\'ve written some great work.
April 30th, 2019 13:45
Michael Edwards said:
Go for it Dan - you\'ve written some great work.
April 30th, 2019 13:45
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Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Iâm so glad youâre seriously considering that book for your poems... onward and forward! Youâve posted 359 poems on MPS! Plenty for a book. Donât let anyone or anything hold you back!!
...and donât worry about the spelling of words...thereâs always spellcheck available!đ
âFollowing Examplesâ is a great introduction!
Wishing you all the best!
~Laura~đ»
April 30th, 2019 05:18
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Iâm so glad youâre seriously considering that book for your poems... onward and forward! Youâve posted 359 poems on MPS! Plenty for a book. Donât let anyone or anything hold you back!!
...and donât worry about the spelling of words...thereâs always spellcheck available!đ
âFollowing Examplesâ is a great introduction!
Wishing you all the best!
~Laura~đ»
April 30th, 2019 05:18
For the record
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come so far Dan to let your finances bring you down, as you said it is only paper. Your new found strength will pull you through.
April 30th, 2019 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
You have come so far Dan to let your finances bring you down, as you said it is only paper. Your new found strength will pull you through.
April 30th, 2019 00:18
For the record
dusk arising said:
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look around you, plenty are not. Look around you, there is a wealth of love in your life and its genuine.
I\'m envious. You\'re a genuine bloke who wears his heart on his sleeve and is much loved and respected for it. Somehow i cant see you as a mean money making unfeeling geezah.
April 29th, 2019 14:12
dusk arising said:
Very well written. Keeping your head above water is success you know. Look around you, plenty are not. Look around you, there is a wealth of love in your life and its genuine.
I\'m envious. You\'re a genuine bloke who wears his heart on his sleeve and is much loved and respected for it. Somehow i cant see you as a mean money making unfeeling geezah.
April 29th, 2019 14:12
For the record
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
In totality...
you are who you are!
Suffice it to say...
âTo thy own self be trueâ...
And that is the best that you can do!
Finances can be a problem!
Donât let them drown you! You are stronger than that! Strive to stay the good-hearted and caring man that you are!đ
~Laura~đ»
April 29th, 2019 11:08
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
In totality...
you are who you are!
Suffice it to say...
âTo thy own self be trueâ...
And that is the best that you can do!
Finances can be a problem!
Donât let them drown you! You are stronger than that! Strive to stay the good-hearted and caring man that you are!đ
~Laura~đ»
April 29th, 2019 11:08
Welcome to my jungle
Goldfinch60 said:
That rave sounds great fun Dan, you obviously had an uplifting time and that\'s the way it should be.
April 29th, 2019 00:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That rave sounds great fun Dan, you obviously had an uplifting time and that\'s the way it should be.
April 29th, 2019 00:19
Welcome to my jungle
dusk arising said:
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your tribe.... like celebrating a time to be human beings of joy. Joy is the feeling... release of all external negativity ... as one in a tribe.
What a feeling...much thanks to you for reminding me of this pleasure.
April 28th, 2019 11:08
dusk arising said:
Indescribable when the depth takes you and around you becomes your tribe.... like celebrating a time to be human beings of joy. Joy is the feeling... release of all external negativity ... as one in a tribe.
What a feeling...much thanks to you for reminding me of this pleasure.
April 28th, 2019 11:08
Welcome to my jungle
Suresh said:
If the band will only play forever.....
Thnx for a lovely Sunday
April 28th, 2019 10:21
Suresh said:
If the band will only play forever.....
Thnx for a lovely Sunday
April 28th, 2019 10:21
Welcome to my jungle
Neville said:
Never been to a Sunday rave my friend but it looks and sounds fun.... well writ too............... :)
April 28th, 2019 08:41
Neville said:
Never been to a Sunday rave my friend but it looks and sounds fun.... well writ too............... :)
April 28th, 2019 08:41
Daughter of creation
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you and show you the way.
April 28th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be with you and show you the way.
April 28th, 2019 00:36
Daughter of creation
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
April 27th, 2019 11:36
Neville said:
its what makes the world go round..... nicely penned, my friend...
April 27th, 2019 11:36
Daughter of creation
Suresh said:
Beautiful memories permeate beautiful thoughts, the best kind of healing Oitment
April 27th, 2019 10:53
Suresh said:
Beautiful memories permeate beautiful thoughts, the best kind of healing Oitment
April 27th, 2019 10:53
Daughter of creation
orchidee said:
You both singing from the same sheet there? Makes a terrible muddle if you\'re not! lol.
April 27th, 2019 10:08
orchidee said:
You both singing from the same sheet there? Makes a terrible muddle if you\'re not! lol.
April 27th, 2019 10:08
Daughter of creation
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed reminders of putting love first.
April 27th, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Wonderful reflections on the best way to wake - thanks Dan for needed reminders of putting love first.
April 27th, 2019 03:48
Daughter of creation
dusk arising said:
And surely the love in our hearts defines the world around us too.
Great happy vibe in your words today. Like - happiness makes our inner sun shine. It radiates out to everyone. An occasional eclipse is permitted tho LOL.
April 27th, 2019 03:20
dusk arising said:
And surely the love in our hearts defines the world around us too.
Great happy vibe in your words today. Like - happiness makes our inner sun shine. It radiates out to everyone. An occasional eclipse is permitted tho LOL.
April 27th, 2019 03:20
Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time
Neville said:
I think you did good.. very good N
April 26th, 2019 08:46
Neville said:
I think you did good.. very good N
April 26th, 2019 08:46
Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time
Goldfinch60 said:
WE need to be sure within our own body, mind and soul. We all make errors or forget things but those that are important to us will always be there.
April 26th, 2019 00:03
Goldfinch60 said:
WE need to be sure within our own body, mind and soul. We all make errors or forget things but those that are important to us will always be there.
April 26th, 2019 00:03
Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time
Suresh said:
Let it be, let it be
Let it flow freely
Don\'t tax yourself
Don\'t fret about it
When we stress to much
It drains us of our energy
So far it\'s not hurting another
Let it be, be free, to be yourself
April 25th, 2019 11:54
Suresh said:
Let it be, let it be
Let it flow freely
Don\'t tax yourself
Don\'t fret about it
When we stress to much
It drains us of our energy
So far it\'s not hurting another
Let it be, be free, to be yourself
April 25th, 2019 11:54
Wisdom comes with age, clarity comes in time
dusk arising said:
Yes absolutely right mate ! It\'s ok to make mistakes, to have the wrong thoughts, do the wrong thing so long as youre not a bad \'un in your heart. You just tune yourself up (love your analogy) and get back into harmony with all the other vibrations around you again.
Simples!
twaaaannnnggggg!
April 25th, 2019 10:02
dusk arising said:
Yes absolutely right mate ! It\'s ok to make mistakes, to have the wrong thoughts, do the wrong thing so long as youre not a bad \'un in your heart. You just tune yourself up (love your analogy) and get back into harmony with all the other vibrations around you again.
Simples!
twaaaannnnggggg!
April 25th, 2019 10:02
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