Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Exiting right
Goldfinch60 said:
That other stage will tale you to places of glory.
April 24th, 2019 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That other stage will tale you to places of glory.
April 24th, 2019 00:13
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Suresh said:
What if I was to say, how I turned:
AN OVER INTO A LOVER
AN END INTO A FRIEND
AN IF INTO LIFE
Thnx for sharing
April 23rd, 2019 11:39
Suresh said:
What if I was to say, how I turned:
AN OVER INTO A LOVER
AN END INTO A FRIEND
AN IF INTO LIFE
Thnx for sharing
April 23rd, 2019 11:39
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Fay Slimm. said:
A clever way not only with words but with true advancement - another good read Dan.
April 23rd, 2019 03:48
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever way not only with words but with true advancement - another good read Dan.
April 23rd, 2019 03:48
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Neville said:
another one very much enjoyed.... I particularly like the first very brief stanza..... Neville
April 23rd, 2019 03:30
Neville said:
another one very much enjoyed.... I particularly like the first very brief stanza..... Neville
April 23rd, 2019 03:30
Exiting right
orchidee said:
Glad ya did not exit left, or ya would have been pursued by a bear, as Shakespeare says! That\'s about one of the thousands (well, total of about 3, lol) of lines I know from Shakey. He is not always wise. Some things he says are a bit dodgy, I think!
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
orchidee said:
Glad ya did not exit left, or ya would have been pursued by a bear, as Shakespeare says! That\'s about one of the thousands (well, total of about 3, lol) of lines I know from Shakey. He is not always wise. Some things he says are a bit dodgy, I think!
April 23rd, 2019 03:19
Thank you for triggering my train
Goldfinch60 said:
We have seen your life change on this site and you are now so positive, there may be the odd tweak which gives a memory but you are now in a position in your life that it is only a tweak, accept it as that and just move on into the light that you now know is there for you.
April 22nd, 2019 13:53
Goldfinch60 said:
We have seen your life change on this site and you are now so positive, there may be the odd tweak which gives a memory but you are now in a position in your life that it is only a tweak, accept it as that and just move on into the light that you now know is there for you.
April 22nd, 2019 13:53
Thank you for triggering my train
Neville said:
forgiving is one of the most precious gifts one can give..
this is a deeply personal and deeply moving post
April 22nd, 2019 08:19
Neville said:
forgiving is one of the most precious gifts one can give..
this is a deeply personal and deeply moving post
April 22nd, 2019 08:19
Thank you for triggering my train
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Pity people go backward and downward hearing me sing, but it can\'t be helped! lol.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
orchidee said:
Good write Dan.
Pity people go backward and downward hearing me sing, but it can\'t be helped! lol.
April 22nd, 2019 05:38
Thank you for triggering my train
Nafis Light said:
The picture basically says \"Like-minded attracts, so...think positive and will attract positivity\".
It didn\'t work for me because there were things trying to pull me down.
So what happened was that I know a huge part of me wants to be positive...
...but I went deeper as in \"Why do I want to be positive?\"
Myself, I\'d say as a Joker...I cannot be and spread Love & Laughter if I was negative. That\'s the main thing.
Find meaning for the self, why I wanna be positive.
It goes deep, but it answers a lot of things.
You opened up quite a lot here...deep. Great.
With Love and Laughter!
April 22nd, 2019 04:24
Nafis Light said:
The picture basically says \"Like-minded attracts, so...think positive and will attract positivity\".
It didn\'t work for me because there were things trying to pull me down.
So what happened was that I know a huge part of me wants to be positive...
...but I went deeper as in \"Why do I want to be positive?\"
Myself, I\'d say as a Joker...I cannot be and spread Love & Laughter if I was negative. That\'s the main thing.
Find meaning for the self, why I wanna be positive.
It goes deep, but it answers a lot of things.
You opened up quite a lot here...deep. Great.
With Love and Laughter!
April 22nd, 2019 04:24
Thank you for triggering my train
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive write. As my Dad always told me: keep your chin up, look the world in the eye and be proud of who are.
April 22nd, 2019 03:38
Michael Edwards said:
Great positive write. As my Dad always told me: keep your chin up, look the world in the eye and be proud of who are.
April 22nd, 2019 03:38
Thank you for triggering my train
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a positive read about the way onward and upward just waiting beyond pain of failed relationships - a fine write Dan and thanks for sharing.
April 22nd, 2019 03:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a positive read about the way onward and upward just waiting beyond pain of failed relationships - a fine write Dan and thanks for sharing.
April 22nd, 2019 03:33
Thank you for triggering my train
dusk arising said:
Forgiving is something which love teaches us i think. Time plays its patient hand as pain recedes and a new perspective enters the play.
Coming away from a failed relationship we can be susceptible to breeding negative thoughts of ourselves, society in general and where and how we fit into it. But slowly the positive influences around us do a repair job i guess.
So older and wiser we are also more aware of how lifes experiences can affect those we encounter... ...and now we are presented a chance to repay (to humanity) by passing on the positive input we experienced with understanding and encouragement.
April 22nd, 2019 03:10
dusk arising said:
Forgiving is something which love teaches us i think. Time plays its patient hand as pain recedes and a new perspective enters the play.
Coming away from a failed relationship we can be susceptible to breeding negative thoughts of ourselves, society in general and where and how we fit into it. But slowly the positive influences around us do a repair job i guess.
So older and wiser we are also more aware of how lifes experiences can affect those we encounter... ...and now we are presented a chance to repay (to humanity) by passing on the positive input we experienced with understanding and encouragement.
April 22nd, 2019 03:10
Laughter in our plight
Goldfinch60 said:
Laughter in our world can cure many things Dan. Keep laughing.
April 22nd, 2019 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Laughter in our world can cure many things Dan. Keep laughing.
April 22nd, 2019 00:06
My show begins
dusk arising said:
LOL Dan - yes i got the message here. I\'m so sorry i missed this one first time around but i cant look in every day (poor excuse i know).
From somewhere you have found a special something which has fed your determination to grow and cast away negatives. It shines from you now.
Is it the new, more mature (older, wiser) appreciation of the joy of parenthood, the love in your little ones eyes? I hope you grow and grow and wish you my friend, and yours, much happiness together.
May you live in harmony with all around you.
April 21st, 2019 11:20
dusk arising said:
LOL Dan - yes i got the message here. I\'m so sorry i missed this one first time around but i cant look in every day (poor excuse i know).
From somewhere you have found a special something which has fed your determination to grow and cast away negatives. It shines from you now.
Is it the new, more mature (older, wiser) appreciation of the joy of parenthood, the love in your little ones eyes? I hope you grow and grow and wish you my friend, and yours, much happiness together.
May you live in harmony with all around you.
April 21st, 2019 11:20
Laughter in our plight
dusk arising said:
Really good to read light pieces from you Dan. This one is a pleasure and so true.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
dusk arising said:
Really good to read light pieces from you Dan. This one is a pleasure and so true.
April 21st, 2019 03:55
Laughter in our plight
Neville said:
you just cant beat it can ya.. laughter that is... happy day friend...
April 21st, 2019 03:36
Neville said:
you just cant beat it can ya.. laughter that is... happy day friend...
April 21st, 2019 03:36
Laughter in our plight
Michael Edwards said:
The trick in life is finding the right tunnel - some have no exits. Thankfully yours does. Enjoyed the read.
April 21st, 2019 01:58
Michael Edwards said:
The trick in life is finding the right tunnel - some have no exits. Thankfully yours does. Enjoyed the read.
April 21st, 2019 01:58
Laughter in our plight
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is there finding laughter. Good first read of my day Dan.
April 21st, 2019 01:44
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine place to be is there finding laughter. Good first read of my day Dan.
April 21st, 2019 01:44
Laughter in our plight
Suresh said:
Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write
April 21st, 2019 01:35
Suresh said:
Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write
April 21st, 2019 01:35
Laughter in our plight
Suresh said:
Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write
April 21st, 2019 01:35
Suresh said:
Yes, you are coming out of the dark cocoon and into the light.
Keep going, nice write
April 21st, 2019 01:35
Known by some wondered by many
Goldfinch60 said:
Your travels in words bring you to some amazing places
, don\'t stop.
April 21st, 2019 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Your travels in words bring you to some amazing places
, don\'t stop.
April 21st, 2019 00:26
Known by some wondered by many
Suresh said:
I find you in a much calmer place, even with all the gushing and splashing.
April 20th, 2019 11:07
Suresh said:
I find you in a much calmer place, even with all the gushing and splashing.
April 20th, 2019 11:07
Known by some wondered by many
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m afraid I\'m not the greatest fan of the soul wrenching stuff but this is quite different - a celebration of words in an enjoyable read - keep writing Dan.
April 20th, 2019 02:12
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m afraid I\'m not the greatest fan of the soul wrenching stuff but this is quite different - a celebration of words in an enjoyable read - keep writing Dan.
April 20th, 2019 02:12
Hey! come here
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks with kids and nature can be so fulfilling, when is the next one?
April 20th, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Those walks with kids and nature can be so fulfilling, when is the next one?
April 20th, 2019 00:36
Hey! come here
Michael Edwards said:
Such an uplifting write - a bit of joy here on MPS.
April 20th, 2019 00:18
Michael Edwards said:
Such an uplifting write - a bit of joy here on MPS.
April 20th, 2019 00:18
Hey! come here
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah what a lovely walk I have been enjoying with you and your little one Dan - -- falling in love with the moments sounds good to me.....
April 19th, 2019 13:12
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah what a lovely walk I have been enjoying with you and your little one Dan - -- falling in love with the moments sounds good to me.....
April 19th, 2019 13:12
Hey! come here
Neville said:
a world through the eyes of a child, is indeed a world of wonder....
Neville
April 19th, 2019 13:01
Neville said:
a world through the eyes of a child, is indeed a world of wonder....
Neville
April 19th, 2019 13:01
Hey! come here
dusk arising said:
Lovely sunny reading. Fun to read to children and talk about afterwards - that fox\'s easy lunch.
April 19th, 2019 07:50
dusk arising said:
Lovely sunny reading. Fun to read to children and talk about afterwards - that fox\'s easy lunch.
April 19th, 2019 07:50
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