Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
The words you all help me find!
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is there before you Dan, you have moved a long way into the light of it as you reach it the joy of life will be wondrous.
Hope you discomfort soon goes away.
March 28th, 2019 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
The world is there before you Dan, you have moved a long way into the light of it as you reach it the joy of life will be wondrous.
Hope you discomfort soon goes away.
March 28th, 2019 01:48
The words you all help me find!
Michael Edwards said:
Hey Dan take it easy - you\'re writing some great stuff and we\'re all with you.
March 27th, 2019 10:10
Michael Edwards said:
Hey Dan take it easy - you\'re writing some great stuff and we\'re all with you.
March 27th, 2019 10:10
The words you all help me find!
dusk arising said:
Fine words of a wise and enlightened soul. Self aware and harmonising.
Sorry to read of your pains Dan. Rest up and recouperate, though i expect your dog friends are missing you badly.
March 27th, 2019 04:56
dusk arising said:
Fine words of a wise and enlightened soul. Self aware and harmonising.
Sorry to read of your pains Dan. Rest up and recouperate, though i expect your dog friends are missing you badly.
March 27th, 2019 04:56
The words you all help me find!
Poetic Dan said:
This song came on and I got goosebumps on my goosebumps. My voice is tiny and so is yours,let\'s put them all together and make a mighty roar!
March 27th, 2019 04:47
Poetic Dan said:
This song came on and I got goosebumps on my goosebumps. My voice is tiny and so is yours,let\'s put them all together and make a mighty roar!
March 27th, 2019 04:47
Harmonising
dusk arising said:
You fell in among poets and you gave us the real you. In return you saw us occasionally showing you bits of us. You took those pieces, bit by bit, and made a wisdom of them. The wisdom you created has led you along a path of self healing.
And look at you enjoying things now. Where once these things brought you sadness and to self doubt, now you rejoice in the love of them and the love which surrounds you.
Great to read.
March 26th, 2019 13:40
dusk arising said:
You fell in among poets and you gave us the real you. In return you saw us occasionally showing you bits of us. You took those pieces, bit by bit, and made a wisdom of them. The wisdom you created has led you along a path of self healing.
And look at you enjoying things now. Where once these things brought you sadness and to self doubt, now you rejoice in the love of them and the love which surrounds you.
Great to read.
March 26th, 2019 13:40
Harmonising
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed. Dan, and good to read you again. I\'ve read most of your wonderfully skilled written and I adore you for giving me that. Sometimes in life most things get in the way, and sometimes it\'s good to move out of your own way first to allow access for the things we can\'t see coming or happening towards ourselves. You pitched this meaning perfectly. Love it. and you, too.
March 26th, 2019 09:15
kevin browne said:
Nicely expressed. Dan, and good to read you again. I\'ve read most of your wonderfully skilled written and I adore you for giving me that. Sometimes in life most things get in the way, and sometimes it\'s good to move out of your own way first to allow access for the things we can\'t see coming or happening towards ourselves. You pitched this meaning perfectly. Love it. and you, too.
March 26th, 2019 09:15
Where\'s the off switch
Goldfinch60 said:
You have been coming forward in your life in a good way, this is just a blip which you will move aside and then press on towards the beauty of life.
March 26th, 2019 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
You have been coming forward in your life in a good way, this is just a blip which you will move aside and then press on towards the beauty of life.
March 26th, 2019 01:49
Where\'s the off switch
Nicholas Browning said:
Sounds like a bit of a rough patch.
Best regards, Dan!
March 25th, 2019 18:56
Nicholas Browning said:
Sounds like a bit of a rough patch.
Best regards, Dan!
March 25th, 2019 18:56
Where\'s the off switch
sylviasearcher said:
I know that feeling and am still working on it.
Forgiveness begins with ourselves đ
March 25th, 2019 14:12
sylviasearcher said:
I know that feeling and am still working on it.
Forgiveness begins with ourselves đ
March 25th, 2019 14:12
Where\'s the off switch
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Please âget out ofâ your own âwayâ!
It will be worthwhile! Believe me!
Iâve been there and done that! After many years, Iâve seen the value of getting âout of my wayâ! The benefits are immeasurable!
As difficult as it can be sometimes, be
strong as I know you can be!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2019 11:24
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Please âget out ofâ your own âwayâ!
It will be worthwhile! Believe me!
Iâve been there and done that! After many years, Iâve seen the value of getting âout of my wayâ! The benefits are immeasurable!
As difficult as it can be sometimes, be
strong as I know you can be!
~Laura~
March 25th, 2019 11:24
Hellos and goodbyes
dusk arising said:
Good stuff.... so many of us overlook these wonderful simple pleasures and its good to see YOU enjoying them.
Your chosen title picture contains a wisdom so many should learn from. All to often we read on MPS of the sadness after the goodbye as if the love and joy before it had never existed at all.... folk are strange.
March 23rd, 2019 16:41
dusk arising said:
Good stuff.... so many of us overlook these wonderful simple pleasures and its good to see YOU enjoying them.
Your chosen title picture contains a wisdom so many should learn from. All to often we read on MPS of the sadness after the goodbye as if the love and joy before it had never existed at all.... folk are strange.
March 23rd, 2019 16:41
Hellos and goodbyes
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely positive write - pleased all appears well in your world
March 23rd, 2019 12:16
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely positive write - pleased all appears well in your world
March 23rd, 2019 12:16
Hellos and goodbyes
orchidee said:
Ya got me all confused! Is it hello or goodbye, or both? Are ya coming or going?! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:06
orchidee said:
Ya got me all confused! Is it hello or goodbye, or both? Are ya coming or going?! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:06
Hellos and goodbyes
Nicholas Browning said:
Good on you, Dan.
You\'re a good guy.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Nicholas Browning said:
Good on you, Dan.
You\'re a good guy.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Hellos and goodbyes
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Youâre my third read so far!
All positivies!!
Thatâs exactly what I needed at this moment after being awakened by the loudest painful cry by my dear aunt! Sheâs now fast asleep...until the next cry!
A super write! Yes, letâs be grateful and thankful for the bit that we have! It can always be worse!
Sending your âsproutsâ a big squeeze!đ€
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 03:29
Laurađ» said:
Dan,
Youâre my third read so far!
All positivies!!
Thatâs exactly what I needed at this moment after being awakened by the loudest painful cry by my dear aunt! Sheâs now fast asleep...until the next cry!
A super write! Yes, letâs be grateful and thankful for the bit that we have! It can always be worse!
Sending your âsproutsâ a big squeeze!đ€
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 03:29
Toilet humour
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so true, so many thoughts come to me while sitting on the toilet, I have a notepad in there nowadays.
March 22nd, 2019 16:03
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so true, so many thoughts come to me while sitting on the toilet, I have a notepad in there nowadays.
March 22nd, 2019 16:03
Toilet humour
dusk arising said:
I\'m pleased to tell you
That this poetic lump
Is at his most creative
Whilst having a dump!
Though i may be well dressed
And looking quite dapper
I\'ll be deep in my thoughts
Whilst sat on the crapper.
My finest words
Have been carefully honed
When my fat hairy arse
Is suitably enthroned.
Look what your poetry brings out in me. .... crap of course.
March 22nd, 2019 08:26
dusk arising said:
I\'m pleased to tell you
That this poetic lump
Is at his most creative
Whilst having a dump!
Though i may be well dressed
And looking quite dapper
I\'ll be deep in my thoughts
Whilst sat on the crapper.
My finest words
Have been carefully honed
When my fat hairy arse
Is suitably enthroned.
Look what your poetry brings out in me. .... crap of course.
March 22nd, 2019 08:26
Toilet humour
Nicholas Browning said:
You said it. So many times I\'ve cracked out my phone to write something whilst also trying to hold the cabinet for support!
March 22nd, 2019 06:29
Nicholas Browning said:
You said it. So many times I\'ve cracked out my phone to write something whilst also trying to hold the cabinet for support!
March 22nd, 2019 06:29
Toilet humour
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. There\'s an advert, making out as though \'celebs\' are super-human, and to go to the loo is an inconvenience (pun there - doh!) for them. Half of them are made of wood anyway. lol.
March 22nd, 2019 05:56
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. There\'s an advert, making out as though \'celebs\' are super-human, and to go to the loo is an inconvenience (pun there - doh!) for them. Half of them are made of wood anyway. lol.
March 22nd, 2019 05:56
Toilet humour
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the chuckle at you being found by your son and writing with trousers down Dan - - ha ha
March 22nd, 2019 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the chuckle at you being found by your son and writing with trousers down Dan - - ha ha
March 22nd, 2019 05:13
Toilet humour
Neville said:
Very funny indeed what happened to the starter and main courses.... N
March 22nd, 2019 05:01
Neville said:
Very funny indeed what happened to the starter and main courses.... N
March 22nd, 2019 05:01
It went something like this
Mil57Man said:
Wonderfully done Poetic Dan the truth will always stand. A lie slides out your mouth and skips through your hands.
March 21st, 2019 18:02
Mil57Man said:
Wonderfully done Poetic Dan the truth will always stand. A lie slides out your mouth and skips through your hands.
March 21st, 2019 18:02
It went something like this
Neville said:
even when one is tongue tied.. when one wants to spit it out... often words on a page more than compensate... in fact, that is bollocks... they invariably do...... Neville :)
March 21st, 2019 18:01
Neville said:
even when one is tongue tied.. when one wants to spit it out... often words on a page more than compensate... in fact, that is bollocks... they invariably do...... Neville :)
March 21st, 2019 18:01
It went something like this
sylviasearcher said:
So easy to do or is it?
You are right Dan, we do need to pause to be truthful because we spend so much of our days programmed and we donât even realise the lie.
Unless we pause.
Apparently the biggest form or lying is omission. It is also the easiest I guess. Saying Nothing. Speaks.
I envy anyone with the courage to live a true honest life.
March 21st, 2019 06:46
sylviasearcher said:
So easy to do or is it?
You are right Dan, we do need to pause to be truthful because we spend so much of our days programmed and we donât even realise the lie.
Unless we pause.
Apparently the biggest form or lying is omission. It is also the easiest I guess. Saying Nothing. Speaks.
I envy anyone with the courage to live a true honest life.
March 21st, 2019 06:46
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