Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Hellos and goodbyes
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely positive write - pleased all appears well in your world
March 23rd, 2019 12:16
Michael Edwards said:
Lovely positive write - pleased all appears well in your world
March 23rd, 2019 12:16
Hellos and goodbyes
orchidee said:
Ya got me all confused! Is it hello or goodbye, or both? Are ya coming or going?! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:06
orchidee said:
Ya got me all confused! Is it hello or goodbye, or both? Are ya coming or going?! heehee.
March 23rd, 2019 04:06
Hellos and goodbyes
Nicholas Browning said:
Good on you, Dan.
You\'re a good guy.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Nicholas Browning said:
Good on you, Dan.
You\'re a good guy.
March 23rd, 2019 04:05
Hellos and goodbyes
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re my third read so far!
All positivies!!
That’s exactly what I needed at this moment after being awakened by the loudest painful cry by my dear aunt! She’s now fast asleep...until the next cry!
A super write! Yes, let’s be grateful and thankful for the bit that we have! It can always be worse!
Sending your “sprouts” a big squeeze!🤗
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 03:29
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
You’re my third read so far!
All positivies!!
That’s exactly what I needed at this moment after being awakened by the loudest painful cry by my dear aunt! She’s now fast asleep...until the next cry!
A super write! Yes, let’s be grateful and thankful for the bit that we have! It can always be worse!
Sending your “sprouts” a big squeeze!🤗
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2019 03:29
Toilet humour
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so true, so many thoughts come to me while sitting on the toilet, I have a notepad in there nowadays.
March 22nd, 2019 16:03
Goldfinch60 said:
That is so true, so many thoughts come to me while sitting on the toilet, I have a notepad in there nowadays.
March 22nd, 2019 16:03
Toilet humour
dusk arising said:
I\'m pleased to tell you
That this poetic lump
Is at his most creative
Whilst having a dump!
Though i may be well dressed
And looking quite dapper
I\'ll be deep in my thoughts
Whilst sat on the crapper.
My finest words
Have been carefully honed
When my fat hairy arse
Is suitably enthroned.
Look what your poetry brings out in me. .... crap of course.
March 22nd, 2019 08:26
dusk arising said:
I\'m pleased to tell you
That this poetic lump
Is at his most creative
Whilst having a dump!
Though i may be well dressed
And looking quite dapper
I\'ll be deep in my thoughts
Whilst sat on the crapper.
My finest words
Have been carefully honed
When my fat hairy arse
Is suitably enthroned.
Look what your poetry brings out in me. .... crap of course.
March 22nd, 2019 08:26
Toilet humour
Nicholas Browning said:
You said it. So many times I\'ve cracked out my phone to write something whilst also trying to hold the cabinet for support!
March 22nd, 2019 06:29
Nicholas Browning said:
You said it. So many times I\'ve cracked out my phone to write something whilst also trying to hold the cabinet for support!
March 22nd, 2019 06:29
Toilet humour
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. There\'s an advert, making out as though \'celebs\' are super-human, and to go to the loo is an inconvenience (pun there - doh!) for them. Half of them are made of wood anyway. lol.
March 22nd, 2019 05:56
orchidee said:
Swoon! lol. There\'s an advert, making out as though \'celebs\' are super-human, and to go to the loo is an inconvenience (pun there - doh!) for them. Half of them are made of wood anyway. lol.
March 22nd, 2019 05:56
Toilet humour
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the chuckle at you being found by your son and writing with trousers down Dan - - ha ha
March 22nd, 2019 05:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanks for the chuckle at you being found by your son and writing with trousers down Dan - - ha ha
March 22nd, 2019 05:13
Toilet humour
Neville said:
Very funny indeed what happened to the starter and main courses.... N
March 22nd, 2019 05:01
Neville said:
Very funny indeed what happened to the starter and main courses.... N
March 22nd, 2019 05:01
It went something like this
Mil57Man said:
Wonderfully done Poetic Dan the truth will always stand. A lie slides out your mouth and skips through your hands.
March 21st, 2019 18:02
Mil57Man said:
Wonderfully done Poetic Dan the truth will always stand. A lie slides out your mouth and skips through your hands.
March 21st, 2019 18:02
It went something like this
Neville said:
even when one is tongue tied.. when one wants to spit it out... often words on a page more than compensate... in fact, that is bollocks... they invariably do...... Neville :)
March 21st, 2019 18:01
Neville said:
even when one is tongue tied.. when one wants to spit it out... often words on a page more than compensate... in fact, that is bollocks... they invariably do...... Neville :)
March 21st, 2019 18:01
It went something like this
sylviasearcher said:
So easy to do or is it?
You are right Dan, we do need to pause to be truthful because we spend so much of our days programmed and we don’t even realise the lie.
Unless we pause.
Apparently the biggest form or lying is omission. It is also the easiest I guess. Saying Nothing. Speaks.
I envy anyone with the courage to live a true honest life.
March 21st, 2019 06:46
sylviasearcher said:
So easy to do or is it?
You are right Dan, we do need to pause to be truthful because we spend so much of our days programmed and we don’t even realise the lie.
Unless we pause.
Apparently the biggest form or lying is omission. It is also the easiest I guess. Saying Nothing. Speaks.
I envy anyone with the courage to live a true honest life.
March 21st, 2019 06:46
It went something like this
Nicholas Browning said:
Much respect, Dan.
Wonderful message.
March 21st, 2019 03:25
Nicholas Browning said:
Much respect, Dan.
Wonderful message.
March 21st, 2019 03:25
It went something like this
orchidee said:
A good write Dan. Also, we got to remember to continue the lie if we start it, and pressurise ourselves doing that, to maintain the false statements.
March 21st, 2019 03:19
orchidee said:
A good write Dan. Also, we got to remember to continue the lie if we start it, and pressurise ourselves doing that, to maintain the false statements.
March 21st, 2019 03:19
It went something like this
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful true write, if you always tell the truth you need not have any problems remembering which lies went where.
March 21st, 2019 03:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful true write, if you always tell the truth you need not have any problems remembering which lies went where.
March 21st, 2019 03:16
Body m.o.t
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Now I understand why you’re hurting! Wishing you a speedy recovery with as little pain as possible! I know it’s easier said than done! You’re strong! Your strength and positive thoughts will overshadow the pain! Hang in there and stay strong! We’re with you all the way! 🤗
March 20th, 2019 22:35
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Now I understand why you’re hurting! Wishing you a speedy recovery with as little pain as possible! I know it’s easier said than done! You’re strong! Your strength and positive thoughts will overshadow the pain! Hang in there and stay strong! We’re with you all the way! 🤗
March 20th, 2019 22:35
Lucky dip
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Once again CONGRATULATIONS!
One of your best poems ever! Your September star will be welcomed by the greatest dad, mom, brothers and sister! A bright future for one and all! Thank you for sharing this wonderful news. Blessings to you and your family!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 21:52
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Once again CONGRATULATIONS!
One of your best poems ever! Your September star will be welcomed by the greatest dad, mom, brothers and sister! A bright future for one and all! Thank you for sharing this wonderful news. Blessings to you and your family!
~Laura~
March 20th, 2019 21:52
Good artists copy; great artist steal
Christina8 said:
I do enjoy that song! Wonderful write too!
March 20th, 2019 20:09
Christina8 said:
I do enjoy that song! Wonderful write too!
March 20th, 2019 20:09
Good artists copy; great artist steal
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A super write.
Keep writing FineB
March 20th, 2019 09:08
FineB said:
Hello Poetic Dan,
A super write.
Keep writing FineB
March 20th, 2019 09:08
Good artists copy; great artist steal
Nicholas Browning said:
Clever. I see what you did there. It\'s not theft you know if you don\'t actually steal anything!
Best regards, Dan.
March 20th, 2019 03:41
Nicholas Browning said:
Clever. I see what you did there. It\'s not theft you know if you don\'t actually steal anything!
Best regards, Dan.
March 20th, 2019 03:41
Good artists copy; great artist steal
orchidee said:
You floating? Good write Dan.!
March 20th, 2019 03:09
orchidee said:
You floating? Good write Dan.!
March 20th, 2019 03:09
Good artists copy; great artist steal
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write may you go on to eternity.
March 20th, 2019 02:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write may you go on to eternity.
March 20th, 2019 02:29
Body m.o.t
Michael Edwards said:
Hoping you have a full recovery - my thoughts are with you. And a great read...
March 19th, 2019 17:38
Michael Edwards said:
Hoping you have a full recovery - my thoughts are with you. And a great read...
March 19th, 2019 17:38
Body m.o.t
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life be forever on the mend Dan, all is going well.
March 19th, 2019 16:16
Goldfinch60 said:
May your life be forever on the mend Dan, all is going well.
March 19th, 2019 16:16
Body m.o.t
Nicholas Browning said:
Que sera sera.
You\'re a brave man, Dan.
Best regards in your endeavors, and I wish you the best.
March 19th, 2019 14:31
Nicholas Browning said:
Que sera sera.
You\'re a brave man, Dan.
Best regards in your endeavors, and I wish you the best.
March 19th, 2019 14:31
Body m.o.t
orchidee said:
Yes, best wishes Dan! Meanwhile a severe pothole has been mended in a road. I dreaded it when the bus would turn into that road, giving a massive bump as we passed the hole.
March 19th, 2019 06:57
orchidee said:
Yes, best wishes Dan! Meanwhile a severe pothole has been mended in a road. I dreaded it when the bus would turn into that road, giving a massive bump as we passed the hole.
March 19th, 2019 06:57
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