Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Stop questioning!
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions will soon be “Why were things that bad? When now all is fine.”
April 2nd, 2019 15:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Those questions will soon be “Why were things that bad? When now all is fine.”
April 2nd, 2019 15:31
Stop questioning!
dusk arising said:
Be gentle with yourself friend. Life dealt you a hard hand early on and you didn\'t know how to play that hand well. I think you show us all that in giving of yourself you receive tenfold back and you have grown so much, you know this, it stands out in your writing.
But be gentle with yourself, old habits, old ways do not just disappear, they come back at moments when we are susceptible. Wisdom pushes them away and apologises.
You seem to have a good loving company around you... they wouldn\'t be there if you were not worthy.
I remember putting petrol into my diesel van one night, damn thing wouldnt go as fast as before... it didnt like starting the next day either. Another old habit from my petrol van days. Doh!
April 2nd, 2019 13:14
dusk arising said:
Be gentle with yourself friend. Life dealt you a hard hand early on and you didn\'t know how to play that hand well. I think you show us all that in giving of yourself you receive tenfold back and you have grown so much, you know this, it stands out in your writing.
But be gentle with yourself, old habits, old ways do not just disappear, they come back at moments when we are susceptible. Wisdom pushes them away and apologises.
You seem to have a good loving company around you... they wouldn\'t be there if you were not worthy.
I remember putting petrol into my diesel van one night, damn thing wouldnt go as fast as before... it didnt like starting the next day either. Another old habit from my petrol van days. Doh!
April 2nd, 2019 13:14
Stop questioning!
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes too much questioning can lead to discouragement Dan - hope soon you will be assured as to your value my friend.
April 2nd, 2019 09:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes too much questioning can lead to discouragement Dan - hope soon you will be assured as to your value my friend.
April 2nd, 2019 09:01
Stop questioning!
orchidee said:
I got a question....? Oops I gotta stop questioning too! heeee.
April 2nd, 2019 07:28
orchidee said:
I got a question....? Oops I gotta stop questioning too! heeee.
April 2nd, 2019 07:28
Warning! Magic is not always pretty
Goldfinch60 said:
Magic is there in our lives and can cure many ills.
April 2nd, 2019 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Magic is there in our lives and can cure many ills.
April 2nd, 2019 00:22
Warning! Magic is not always pretty
FineB said:
A good poem Dan.
We all need magic on our lives to make life exciting.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:10
FineB said:
A good poem Dan.
We all need magic on our lives to make life exciting.
Keep writing FineB.
April 1st, 2019 15:10
Warning! Magic is not always pretty
dusk arising said:
If you were a crab, you could re-grow a leg you know... dont try it... crabs walk funny!
Yes OK i know you got legless on friday but it\'s not the same thing.
April 1st, 2019 06:07
dusk arising said:
If you were a crab, you could re-grow a leg you know... dont try it... crabs walk funny!
Yes OK i know you got legless on friday but it\'s not the same thing.
April 1st, 2019 06:07
Warning! Magic is not always pretty
orchidee said:
Not yer usual magic? Swoon! lol.
April 1st, 2019 03:11
orchidee said:
Not yer usual magic? Swoon! lol.
April 1st, 2019 03:11
Sometimes I forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Your life has moved on into a wonderful place Dan, well done.
April 1st, 2019 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Your life has moved on into a wonderful place Dan, well done.
April 1st, 2019 00:56
Sometimes I forget
dusk arising said:
There\'s love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
Difficult times of disturbed nights, bleary eyed mornings, screaming/wailing baby and extra chores can cloud the love between two people.
But those quiet together times are still there to share the glow of a successful loving pairing.
You lucky people.
March 31st, 2019 05:17
dusk arising said:
There\'s love in them there words mister. And lots of it.
Difficult times of disturbed nights, bleary eyed mornings, screaming/wailing baby and extra chores can cloud the love between two people.
But those quiet together times are still there to share the glow of a successful loving pairing.
You lucky people.
March 31st, 2019 05:17
Sometimes I forget
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life dear Dan - - have s great Sunday with hugs - - xx from Fay
March 31st, 2019 04:32
Fay Slimm. said:
A lovely and loving Mothers Day tribute to the special lady in your life dear Dan - - have s great Sunday with hugs - - xx from Fay
March 31st, 2019 04:32
Sometimes I forget
Poetic Dan said:
This song was just chosen after reading goldfinch post today!
Did make me giggle....
March 31st, 2019 04:29
Poetic Dan said:
This song was just chosen after reading goldfinch post today!
Did make me giggle....
March 31st, 2019 04:29
Sometimes I forget
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Awesome poem...
Awesome author comments!
Of course I totally agree with your message! So happy you’ve found your niche and are appreciating it! Life is amazing...isn’t it?! Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 04:26
Laura🌻 said:
Dan,
Awesome poem...
Awesome author comments!
Of course I totally agree with your message! So happy you’ve found your niche and are appreciating it! Life is amazing...isn’t it?! Have a great Sunday!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 04:26
Sometimes I forget
orchidee said:
A lovely Mothers Day write Dan. Now can ya help with my singing? People hear it, then put me back on the shelf. Doh! lol.
March 31st, 2019 04:24
orchidee said:
A lovely Mothers Day write Dan. Now can ya help with my singing? People hear it, then put me back on the shelf. Doh! lol.
March 31st, 2019 04:24
How much does yours?
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of words will keep flowing from you heart and mind Dan and show us the poet within you.
March 31st, 2019 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
That river of words will keep flowing from you heart and mind Dan and show us the poet within you.
March 31st, 2019 00:36
How much does yours?
dusk arising said:
\"Ah - there he goes\" they will say about you in forty years \"The old fellah who\'s always muttering under his breath\".
And so he is, but have you seen the fine works he writes.
Then his dog bit me.
That\'s one clever mutt, i\'ll never forget this moment.
March 31st, 2019 00:02
dusk arising said:
\"Ah - there he goes\" they will say about you in forty years \"The old fellah who\'s always muttering under his breath\".
And so he is, but have you seen the fine works he writes.
Then his dog bit me.
That\'s one clever mutt, i\'ll never forget this moment.
March 31st, 2019 00:02
How much does yours?
Suresh said:
Words are also fluid, and they flow here ohh so very smoothly
March 30th, 2019 12:19
Suresh said:
Words are also fluid, and they flow here ohh so very smoothly
March 30th, 2019 12:19
How much does yours?
Neville said:
through the eyes of a poet... you are indeed a poet.... N
March 30th, 2019 09:01
Neville said:
through the eyes of a poet... you are indeed a poet.... N
March 30th, 2019 09:01
How much does yours?
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I was still thirsty after someone gave me half a glass of water. Erm, I drank the empty half! lol.
March 30th, 2019 08:44
orchidee said:
A fine write Dan. I was still thirsty after someone gave me half a glass of water. Erm, I drank the empty half! lol.
March 30th, 2019 08:44
Just keep skipping, another ranting!
Goldfinch60 said:
Such truth Dan. I still believe that the hippies and John Lennon had it right, \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\".
March 30th, 2019 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Such truth Dan. I still believe that the hippies and John Lennon had it right, \"MAKE LOVE, NOT WAR\".
March 30th, 2019 01:34
Just keep skipping, another ranting!
dusk arising said:
Yeah oh yeah!
Most of the crap which hits us has had a spin put on it by someone or other. The way we hear the news is either one sided or the way a certain broadcasting company likes to think we should be informed. Thank goodness we are able to gain a little more insight from another point of view on our TV\'s nowadays.
All the crap which has served to condition us and bring us to this moment in time, most of which is based on fables and lies. The christian church still preaches out its fables which christian scholars know to be historically untrue... stuff we were forced to accept as little children..... some of us still not brave enough to reject it.
You though have fought battles with the crap thrown at you and now are strong enough to realise your point of view is as valid as any of the rest of us mislead and confused individuals who are trying to make a good life out of whatever remains of our true purpose on this planet.
(rant over)
March 29th, 2019 07:03
dusk arising said:
Yeah oh yeah!
Most of the crap which hits us has had a spin put on it by someone or other. The way we hear the news is either one sided or the way a certain broadcasting company likes to think we should be informed. Thank goodness we are able to gain a little more insight from another point of view on our TV\'s nowadays.
All the crap which has served to condition us and bring us to this moment in time, most of which is based on fables and lies. The christian church still preaches out its fables which christian scholars know to be historically untrue... stuff we were forced to accept as little children..... some of us still not brave enough to reject it.
You though have fought battles with the crap thrown at you and now are strong enough to realise your point of view is as valid as any of the rest of us mislead and confused individuals who are trying to make a good life out of whatever remains of our true purpose on this planet.
(rant over)
March 29th, 2019 07:03
Short & neat
Fay Slimm. said:
Both quote and words leave the right vibes on choice - a lucid write - thanks Dan.
March 28th, 2019 17:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Both quote and words leave the right vibes on choice - a lucid write - thanks Dan.
March 28th, 2019 17:13
Short & neat
orchidee said:
Oohh, you don\'t have to permanently rely on us others. You can be unique, special in yourself, etc - indeed as you do and are.
March 28th, 2019 03:49
orchidee said:
Oohh, you don\'t have to permanently rely on us others. You can be unique, special in yourself, etc - indeed as you do and are.
March 28th, 2019 03:49
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