Comments received on poems by Poetic Dan
Lucky dip
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful time, may you all be blessed.
March 17th, 2019 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write about a wonderful time, may you all be blessed.
March 17th, 2019 01:36
Lucky dip
dusk arising said:
Oh you lucky people! Great time of life for you both..... ahead are sleepless nights and puke stained clothes.... and the most marvellous days of your life.
March 16th, 2019 07:40
dusk arising said:
Oh you lucky people! Great time of life for you both..... ahead are sleepless nights and puke stained clothes.... and the most marvellous days of your life.
March 16th, 2019 07:40
Lucky dip
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. Not fantasy like Emmerdale, where half of them are past it, but say they\'re expecting! Miraculous! Doh!
March 16th, 2019 06:27
orchidee said:
A lovely write Dan. Not fantasy like Emmerdale, where half of them are past it, but say they\'re expecting! Miraculous! Doh!
March 16th, 2019 06:27
Lucky dip
Fay Slimm. said:
Best of warm wishes Dan - - I love that last stanza - -so good to know things are turning out well and the future is bright.
March 16th, 2019 04:07
Fay Slimm. said:
Best of warm wishes Dan - - I love that last stanza - -so good to know things are turning out well and the future is bright.
March 16th, 2019 04:07
Lucky dip
sylviasearcher said:
Congratulations! You show such strength and resilience and hope in all your poems!
March 16th, 2019 03:47
sylviasearcher said:
Congratulations! You show such strength and resilience and hope in all your poems!
March 16th, 2019 03:47
Lucky dip
Nicholas Browning said:
Well hey, what a nice story to hear. Glad you guys pulled through, Dan.
Congrats, and best of luck being a father!
March 16th, 2019 03:14
Nicholas Browning said:
Well hey, what a nice story to hear. Glad you guys pulled through, Dan.
Congrats, and best of luck being a father!
March 16th, 2019 03:14
No umbrella
orchidee said:
Ah yes, umbrella not much use in gales. We need hoods, but even they can blow down. I\'m gonna be \'hoodie\'! lol.
March 16th, 2019 03:08
orchidee said:
Ah yes, umbrella not much use in gales. We need hoods, but even they can blow down. I\'m gonna be \'hoodie\'! lol.
March 16th, 2019 03:08
No umbrella
Goldfinch60 said:
The good hews is there for you Dan, let the light go.
March 15th, 2019 15:56
Goldfinch60 said:
The good hews is there for you Dan, let the light go.
March 15th, 2019 15:56
No umbrella
Nicholas Browning said:
A strange piece of multiple questions: \"To fight or run\", \"To try and fail?\", \"To become clean if I make the choice?\". I like this a lot, Dan.
March 15th, 2019 15:45
Nicholas Browning said:
A strange piece of multiple questions: \"To fight or run\", \"To try and fail?\", \"To become clean if I make the choice?\". I like this a lot, Dan.
March 15th, 2019 15:45
No umbrella
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - fester not - the worlds your oyster (actually there\'s not much room in an oyster).
March 15th, 2019 15:32
Michael Edwards said:
Oooh - fester not - the worlds your oyster (actually there\'s not much room in an oyster).
March 15th, 2019 15:32
No umbrella
sylviasearcher said:
Do you have some good news?
Choosing to fester... I know that feeling.
It’s choosing when to rest and when to fight?
Biding your time.
Until you fly!
March 15th, 2019 10:58
sylviasearcher said:
Do you have some good news?
Choosing to fester... I know that feeling.
It’s choosing when to rest and when to fight?
Biding your time.
Until you fly!
March 15th, 2019 10:58
Father & lover I should need be no other
Goldfinch60 said:
That future is progressing in a wonderful way in you life Dan, look forward to your wonderful life.
March 14th, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That future is progressing in a wonderful way in you life Dan, look forward to your wonderful life.
March 14th, 2019 01:15
Father & lover I should need be no other
dusk arising said:
I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say anything. You is you and there\'s no one else like you. Same for everyone else. And you\'ve as much right to be whatever you are as anyone else has.
Advice? my advice would be... smile lots.... dont bash your head jumping through van windows... and be positive..... nuff said?
Mines a pint.
March 13th, 2019 12:59
dusk arising said:
I think you know where i\'m coming from on this sort of stuff before i say anything. You is you and there\'s no one else like you. Same for everyone else. And you\'ve as much right to be whatever you are as anyone else has.
Advice? my advice would be... smile lots.... dont bash your head jumping through van windows... and be positive..... nuff said?
Mines a pint.
March 13th, 2019 12:59
Father & lover I should need be no other
orchidee said:
And now a spurious saying not to be taken on board: \'When one door opens, another one slams in ya face!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2019 10:46
orchidee said:
And now a spurious saying not to be taken on board: \'When one door opens, another one slams in ya face!\' heehee.
March 13th, 2019 10:46
Father & lover I should need be no other
Nicholas Browning said:
I do enjoy the message. Keep the future in mind but not at the cost of the happiness you currently have. My dad always used to say, \"The more you laugh the longer you live.\" Maybe he\'s right though.
Another thing to add, a saying I came up with when I was younger. \"Never give up silver for a chance to find gold.\" That pertains to the aspect of enjoying your happiness that you mentioned. I really like this one, Dan. Keep your chin up, and best regards in your endeavor to maintain that balance.
March 13th, 2019 05:22
Nicholas Browning said:
I do enjoy the message. Keep the future in mind but not at the cost of the happiness you currently have. My dad always used to say, \"The more you laugh the longer you live.\" Maybe he\'s right though.
Another thing to add, a saying I came up with when I was younger. \"Never give up silver for a chance to find gold.\" That pertains to the aspect of enjoying your happiness that you mentioned. I really like this one, Dan. Keep your chin up, and best regards in your endeavor to maintain that balance.
March 13th, 2019 05:22
Everywhere I look around
dusk arising said:
Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life and verve in ya to really enjoy it.
I really sense in you that the cloak under which your thoughts have struggled over the years is something you have come to terms with and can now wear as a medal of honour only you know is there. Now you know your worth and how your troubles have given you strength.
Go forth, now in your prime of manhood, and bloody well enjoy life M8.... you deserve to... so get on with it !!!
March 13th, 2019 04:37
dusk arising said:
Nuts to everything, spring is in the air .... and you have loadsa life and verve in ya to really enjoy it.
I really sense in you that the cloak under which your thoughts have struggled over the years is something you have come to terms with and can now wear as a medal of honour only you know is there. Now you know your worth and how your troubles have given you strength.
Go forth, now in your prime of manhood, and bloody well enjoy life M8.... you deserve to... so get on with it !!!
March 13th, 2019 04:37
Everywhere I look around
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, that wind is a little breezy is it not?
March 13th, 2019 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write, that wind is a little breezy is it not?
March 13th, 2019 01:43
Everywhere I look around
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you describe the wind\'s naughtiest tricks in this bit of Springtime - fun - thanks Dan.
March 12th, 2019 06:48
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - - you describe the wind\'s naughtiest tricks in this bit of Springtime - fun - thanks Dan.
March 12th, 2019 06:48
You never forget
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how far you have now come in your life, the misery is behind you and you are going towards the light of your life. Well done.
March 12th, 2019 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show how far you have now come in your life, the misery is behind you and you are going towards the light of your life. Well done.
March 12th, 2019 01:27
You never forget
dusk arising said:
I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder within us and ever ready to slap us down. An innocent comment in a conversation can rip into us, wanting to run, hide, but cant, not socially acceptable, brave face, false face... then later, alone with fear, humiliation, and shame, self hate, disgust.
See it in another, understand, encourage.
A negative becomes a positive. Suffering put to good use.
March 11th, 2019 14:25
dusk arising said:
I guess our pain teaches us a lot. Knowing a pain that is a cold shudder within us and ever ready to slap us down. An innocent comment in a conversation can rip into us, wanting to run, hide, but cant, not socially acceptable, brave face, false face... then later, alone with fear, humiliation, and shame, self hate, disgust.
See it in another, understand, encourage.
A negative becomes a positive. Suffering put to good use.
March 11th, 2019 14:25
You never forget
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it through means our mind can accept and move on as yours is doing dear Dan - - - may all your tomorrows be tear-free and happy now this is outed .
March 11th, 2019 13:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Writing it through means our mind can accept and move on as yours is doing dear Dan - - - may all your tomorrows be tear-free and happy now this is outed .
March 11th, 2019 13:39
You never forget
orchidee said:
Ohh all ya needs to do to cheer up is jump in that car again a few times, as in the clip the other day. I\'m gonna try that ya know. I will probably make a blunder of it. heehee.
March 11th, 2019 04:05
orchidee said:
Ohh all ya needs to do to cheer up is jump in that car again a few times, as in the clip the other day. I\'m gonna try that ya know. I will probably make a blunder of it. heehee.
March 11th, 2019 04:05
Leaving our marks
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that we write on the page come from our souls and can be so meaningful.
March 11th, 2019 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
The words that we write on the page come from our souls and can be so meaningful.
March 11th, 2019 01:22
Leaving our marks
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving behind words will assure our memory stays in readers\' minds and hearts - a good reminder Dan.
March 10th, 2019 06:09
Fay Slimm. said:
Leaving behind words will assure our memory stays in readers\' minds and hearts - a good reminder Dan.
March 10th, 2019 06:09
Leaving our marks
JaydeVictoria said:
Exactly mirrors my thoughts about poetry and the site, wonderful read Poetic Dan :)
March 10th, 2019 06:08
JaydeVictoria said:
Exactly mirrors my thoughts about poetry and the site, wonderful read Poetic Dan :)
March 10th, 2019 06:08
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