Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
Creation of Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Doggerel Dave said:
Well don\'t let me rain on your parade. However, for me our previous conversation still stands..
December 5th, 2024 19:33
Creation of Life
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
David Wakeling said:
They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know. Good fun poem
December 5th, 2024 15:24
Creation of Life
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Tobni. For all the choices knocking Mom opened the door for the one to be you.
December 5th, 2024 10:58
Creation of Life
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Neville said:
I think you have not only achieved your stated objective but you also took me on a very nostalgic journey back to Miss Weavers biology class back in the good old days .. Neville
December 5th, 2024 09:21
Creation of Life
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
sorenbarrett said:
An interesting journey. If it is a human one in all very few cases, it is only one sperm that wins the race. It is also an issue of luck as to which fallopian tube they take. Read about evolution as well and survival of the fittest which winds out overtime over luck
December 5th, 2024 08:28
Creation of Life
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth in poem! Wonderful write. It really captures the beauty and miracle of procreation! Against all odds...the joining together to make life. Beautiful job, Tobani! An easy fave for me! 🌹👏
December 5th, 2024 08:09
Children Of War
jim56 said:
this poem has sadness and truth
amazing to read has great flow
written from the heart brilliant
December 5th, 2024 06:35
jim56 said:
this poem has sadness and truth
amazing to read has great flow
written from the heart brilliant
December 5th, 2024 06:35
Creation of Life
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
arqios said:
Now that’s the story of my beginnings, a quite unplanned pregnancy on my mum’s part. My dad did the responsible thing and stayed, for a while and 4 children later moved on to more “love”-filled relationship. The waypoint out. It makes me realise how amazing that journey was, conception, having partaken but not having any memory of it.
December 5th, 2024 06:33
Christmas May Pass Them By
ginny jayne said:
Lovely enjoyable poem, clearly written from the heart. Thank you for sharing
December 5th, 2024 05:40
ginny jayne said:
Lovely enjoyable poem, clearly written from the heart. Thank you for sharing
December 5th, 2024 05:40
Children Of War
Thad Wilk said:
A touching and poignant 😢
poem and
true what you say!! ,💯
Wonderfully vivid
Imagery, and just
resonates with greatness! 👍
Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A touching and poignant 😢
poem and
true what you say!! ,💯
Wonderfully vivid
Imagery, and just
resonates with greatness! 👍
Thanks for sharing!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:18
Children Of War
David Wakeling said:
Its the saddest thing to see children involved in war. This is quite an important poem. Well done
December 4th, 2024 17:34
David Wakeling said:
Its the saddest thing to see children involved in war. This is quite an important poem. Well done
December 4th, 2024 17:34
Children Of War
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Tobani. Lady Karma sharpens her claws.
December 4th, 2024 16:27
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Tobani. Lady Karma sharpens her claws.
December 4th, 2024 16:27
Children Of War
Teddy.15 said:
A reality that\'s is worth the reflection, bringing a child in the world, it is the job of every parent to teach our children the positives of life not the negatives that spread the hate and greed that is currently hurting us all. I\'m not sure what the next chapter of the Trump administration will do for good, but we are all waiting to find out, I personally have little hope. ❤️
December 4th, 2024 14:48
Teddy.15 said:
A reality that\'s is worth the reflection, bringing a child in the world, it is the job of every parent to teach our children the positives of life not the negatives that spread the hate and greed that is currently hurting us all. I\'m not sure what the next chapter of the Trump administration will do for good, but we are all waiting to find out, I personally have little hope. ❤️
December 4th, 2024 14:48
Christmas May Pass Them By
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy I don\'t know how I missed this Tobani, but you and I are seeing this holiday very much through the same lens. A very compelling call to action that I hope many people read. I am glad to see it trending, which is what drew me to it! ❤️🙏
December 4th, 2024 12:25
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Boy I don\'t know how I missed this Tobani, but you and I are seeing this holiday very much through the same lens. A very compelling call to action that I hope many people read. I am glad to see it trending, which is what drew me to it! ❤️🙏
December 4th, 2024 12:25
Children Of War
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem that speaks horrific truth. This world is so messed up and you capture it brilliantly here! Well dine, friend. An instant fave! 🌹👏❤️
December 4th, 2024 08:39
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Excellent poem that speaks horrific truth. This world is so messed up and you capture it brilliantly here! Well dine, friend. An instant fave! 🌹👏❤️
December 4th, 2024 08:39
Children Of War
Cassie58 said:
Half the world in conflict and the suffering brings shame on our species, it is always the innocent children who are caught up in the warmongering. If they survive, however do they live with the horrors. A hard hitting write Tobani.
December 4th, 2024 07:59
Cassie58 said:
Half the world in conflict and the suffering brings shame on our species, it is always the innocent children who are caught up in the warmongering. If they survive, however do they live with the horrors. A hard hitting write Tobani.
December 4th, 2024 07:59
Children Of War
Doggerel Dave said:
No responsible parent should produce a child into a world where there is no hope of their offspring ever reaching their full potential.
December 4th, 2024 06:37
Doggerel Dave said:
No responsible parent should produce a child into a world where there is no hope of their offspring ever reaching their full potential.
December 4th, 2024 06:37
Children Of War
sorenbarrett said:
A most disturbing poem about the innocence of children and how they are affected by the world around them. It also seems a metaphor for people in general that are helpless under the actions of governments that control their lives. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most disturbing poem about the innocence of children and how they are affected by the world around them. It also seems a metaphor for people in general that are helpless under the actions of governments that control their lives. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:38
Children Of War
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood is often punctuated by their exposure to its pain and injustice. Children are a symbol of all people’s helplessness under governments, ulterior motives, and unjust actions. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:36
sorenbarrett said:
The innocence of childhood is often punctuated by their exposure to its pain and injustice. Children are a symbol of all people’s helplessness under governments, ulterior motives, and unjust actions. Very nicely written.
December 4th, 2024 05:36
Children Of War
Neville said:
I have said it before and am sure I shall say it again and again, it\'s a sad old sorry old world and I am sick of warmongers and hatred .. give me peace any day of the week
December 4th, 2024 05:32
Neville said:
I have said it before and am sure I shall say it again and again, it\'s a sad old sorry old world and I am sick of warmongers and hatred .. give me peace any day of the week
December 4th, 2024 05:32
Children Of War
arqios said:
That is a searing and deeply disturbing news let alone reality. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 05:03
arqios said:
That is a searing and deeply disturbing news let alone reality. Thanks for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 05:03
Christmas May Pass Them By
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful, compassionate and
thought provoking write, so
eloquently penned! 👍
People seem to have forgotten
the real meaning of Christmas🎄
my friend! 😢
Thanks for sharing great read!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 3rd, 2024 18:46
Thad Wilk said:
A beautiful, compassionate and
thought provoking write, so
eloquently penned! 👍
People seem to have forgotten
the real meaning of Christmas🎄
my friend! 😢
Thanks for sharing great read!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
December 3rd, 2024 18:46
Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans)
Kevin Hulme said:
Happy days.
Remember my first live Concert: T.Rex. Good read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Happy days.
Remember my first live Concert: T.Rex. Good read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:59
Christmas May Pass Them By
Doggerel Dave said:
A rough hard look at modern Christmas. Great write.
As for the rest... to whom and how shall I give?
December 3rd, 2024 08:22
Doggerel Dave said:
A rough hard look at modern Christmas. Great write.
As for the rest... to whom and how shall I give?
December 3rd, 2024 08:22
Christmas May Pass Them By
Cassie58 said:
The true meaning of Christmas has long gone. It has now become so commercialized it is a worry for many families, how they will get by. A time of over indulgence when there is so much suffering and poverty and loneliness in the world. A fabulous write. Your lines flow beautifully and you get the message across. Well done.
December 3rd, 2024 07:59
Cassie58 said:
The true meaning of Christmas has long gone. It has now become so commercialized it is a worry for many families, how they will get by. A time of over indulgence when there is so much suffering and poverty and loneliness in the world. A fabulous write. Your lines flow beautifully and you get the message across. Well done.
December 3rd, 2024 07:59
Christmas May Pass Them By
Neville said:
Christmas is a very busy time of year for me .. there is so much sadness & suffering .. I think you have done extremely well to incorporate so much here that is at the real heart of Christmas .. I shall be glad when its 2025 ..
December 3rd, 2024 06:03
Neville said:
Christmas is a very busy time of year for me .. there is so much sadness & suffering .. I think you have done extremely well to incorporate so much here that is at the real heart of Christmas .. I shall be glad when its 2025 ..
December 3rd, 2024 06:03
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