Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Wise Man Say (22)
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun and too clever, offering poignant tidbits of good sense in morsels which seem not unlike the \"spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down!\" doctrine. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful humour to offset the weightier poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 27th, 2025 10:31
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re too fun and too clever, offering poignant tidbits of good sense in morsels which seem not unlike the \"spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down!\" doctrine. Excellently rendered with lovely imagery and a delightful humour to offset the weightier poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 27th, 2025 10:31
Wise Man Say (22)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know how much I love this series, Tobani. In this one, the line about not condemning your own voice really stood out. We all do that, though, don\'t we? At least I have been known too...outside of poetry, of course...and even there for a time. Wise advice. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:54
Tristan Robert Lange said:
You know how much I love this series, Tobani. In this one, the line about not condemning your own voice really stood out. We all do that, though, don\'t we? At least I have been known too...outside of poetry, of course...and even there for a time. Wise advice. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 27th, 2025 07:54
Wise Man Say (22)
Lorna said:
Why are these wise men always hiding on YouTube but you never see them in real life! Ah well............
July 27th, 2025 07:28
Lorna said:
Why are these wise men always hiding on YouTube but you never see them in real life! Ah well............
July 27th, 2025 07:28
Wise Man Say (22)
arqios said:
Wow! 22 instalments already! Now that\'s more than just a bit of fun... more like serious FUN!
July 27th, 2025 06:41
arqios said:
Wow! 22 instalments already! Now that\'s more than just a bit of fun... more like serious FUN!
July 27th, 2025 06:41
Wise Man Say (22)
sorenbarrett said:
Love your wise men say it starts my Sunday. Have a great day
July 27th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
Love your wise men say it starts my Sunday. Have a great day
July 27th, 2025 04:46
Sticking Together
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
That glue sticks all things Tobani. LOL
Andy
July 27th, 2025 01:50
Sticking Together
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
NafisaSB said:
nice sense of humor - keep them coming
have a fun filled weekend
July 26th, 2025 23:27
Gaza (Help).
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Its really heartbreaking and heart-rending that these zionists are doing genocide pf even babies and women all just and only for land nothing else. The injured kids is shocking for this day and age ah.
Bravo to souls like you that can at least acknowledge their appalling plight!!
July 26th, 2025 15:16
Sticking Together
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Bella Shepard said:
Thank you for the laugh of the day, I sure needed one! lol
July 26th, 2025 14:44
Sticking Together
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh my--!!! I declare! Your punchline-- you got me. I couldn\'t help laughing too much. Thus is too good! There\'s nothing like repairing broken items, only to find your clumsy attempts have glued far more than the item at hand, oh me! Superb. I love it!!! Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and an irresistibly delightful poignancy... unless of course, we take it seriously. Thank you for sharing.
July 26th, 2025 14:07
Sticking Together
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Oh my dear Tobani. A delightful chuckle over morning coffee.
July 26th, 2025 08:32
Sticking Together
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! Classic Mary and Harry, Tobani. You nailed the punchline on this one, as always...visual comedy with just the right dose of absurdity. Poor Harry never stood a chance...he never really does! 🤣 Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
July 26th, 2025 08:17
Loving Hate
rrodriguez said:
Yes, the most important thing is, love... Excellent!
July 26th, 2025 06:38
rrodriguez said:
Yes, the most important thing is, love... Excellent!
July 26th, 2025 06:38
Secrets (Senryu)
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobany,
The confessions priests must bear in silence, such secrets bust be a daily burden weighed down with their own secrets. You have defined the fear in a secret in a perfectly rounded verse. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 05:53
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tobany,
The confessions priests must bear in silence, such secrets bust be a daily burden weighed down with their own secrets. You have defined the fear in a secret in a perfectly rounded verse. Excellent, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
July 26th, 2025 05:53
Sticking Together
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
arqios said:
Been a while since I heard of Harry and Mary! Good to see them again. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 26th, 2025 05:38
Sticking Together
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
sorenbarrett said:
Another fun read, I thought that I knew where this one was going but wasn\'t sure if he was going to be glued in his shoes or the shoes glued to the floor or both. As it is now he can walk on his hands. Good one Tobani
July 26th, 2025 04:48
Secrets (Senryu)
Goldfinch60 said:
That fear may pass Tobani and life will be good.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
That fear may pass Tobani and life will be good.
Andy
July 26th, 2025 01:13
Secrets (Senryu)
Friendship said:
Oh my god, so true. The secrets we keep do become our fear. The sad part is that 98% of my secrets aren\'t mine; they belong to others, and I\'ve carried them all these years. And yet, they\'ve been played against me over and over as threats, reversed back to me as if it was my fault or I caused it!
July 25th, 2025 15:59
Friendship said:
Oh my god, so true. The secrets we keep do become our fear. The sad part is that 98% of my secrets aren\'t mine; they belong to others, and I\'ve carried them all these years. And yet, they\'ve been played against me over and over as threats, reversed back to me as if it was my fault or I caused it!
July 25th, 2025 15:59
Look In The Mirror.
GolnarMoieninamim.Standbypoet said:
I personally have an old image pinned in my mind and everyday I see in mirror that I look less like that image,
July 25th, 2025 14:03
GolnarMoieninamim.Standbypoet said:
I personally have an old image pinned in my mind and everyday I see in mirror that I look less like that image,
July 25th, 2025 14:03
Secrets (Senryu)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Stark and potent, Tobani. The shift from silence to fear lands is soft but powerful, and that second line builds the tension perfectly. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave.
July 25th, 2025 11:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Stark and potent, Tobani. The shift from silence to fear lands is soft but powerful, and that second line builds the tension perfectly. Truly, an excellent job, my dear friend. 🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ A fave.
July 25th, 2025 11:51
Secrets (Senryu)
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. What a piece for Friday, and of all Fridays, Xmas in July no less. Wow! Pack a punch so weighty, I\'m intrigued. Excellently rendered with sheer mystique, lovely imagery, and a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 25th, 2025 09:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. What a piece for Friday, and of all Fridays, Xmas in July no less. Wow! Pack a punch so weighty, I\'m intrigued. Excellently rendered with sheer mystique, lovely imagery, and a haunting, damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 25th, 2025 09:48
Secrets (Senryu)
Bella Shepard said:
And fear will keep you trapped in your secrets. Brilliant!!
July 25th, 2025 08:58
Bella Shepard said:
And fear will keep you trapped in your secrets. Brilliant!!
July 25th, 2025 08:58
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