Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
The Water.
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Shantha Teldeniya said:
Without water, there is no life
Water makes our world so bright
Your poem is very nice.
March 17th, 2025 11:09
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Caring dove said:
Maybe one day there will be more peace .. hope so anyway
March 17th, 2025 10:27
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm... what we fail to recognize in the face of such an insidious reality is how lacking we are of the most essential on that score: peace with God through our Lord Jesus Christ. Had men THAT, yes, all, there would be peace methinks. With the internal struggle alive, or seemingly quelled by the devouring of mankind our neighbors, and the world entirely itself, how can there possibly be peace? They say, \"Misery loves company;\" and I see it night and day, trying to foist itself upon me that I\'d join it. I\'d rather not. But enough. Gorgeously eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 09:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm... what we fail to recognize in the face of such an insidious reality is how lacking we are of the most essential on that score: peace with God through our Lord Jesus Christ. Had men THAT, yes, all, there would be peace methinks. With the internal struggle alive, or seemingly quelled by the devouring of mankind our neighbors, and the world entirely itself, how can there possibly be peace? They say, \"Misery loves company;\" and I see it night and day, trying to foist itself upon me that I\'d join it. I\'d rather not. But enough. Gorgeously eloquent and excellently rendered with superb imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 09:17
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Tommy B Goode said:
I fear that mankind as a species is unable to live in peace.
But I still hope that someday I will be proven wrong.
March 17th, 2025 07:50
Tommy B Goode said:
I fear that mankind as a species is unable to live in peace.
But I still hope that someday I will be proven wrong.
March 17th, 2025 07:50
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps there will never be real peace until the sword of Manjushri is turned inwards. By everyone.
March 17th, 2025 06:42
Mutley Ravishes said:
Perhaps there will never be real peace until the sword of Manjushri is turned inwards. By everyone.
March 17th, 2025 06:42
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that violence is part of the human DNA and greed as well. It is what fuels the economy as well as war. Peace was a nice thought too bad it didn\'t work out. A poem that leaves a dark feeling and one too realistic I\'m afraid. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 06:38
sorenbarrett said:
It appears that violence is part of the human DNA and greed as well. It is what fuels the economy as well as war. Peace was a nice thought too bad it didn\'t work out. A poem that leaves a dark feeling and one too realistic I\'m afraid. Nicely said
March 17th, 2025 06:38
Is Peace Just a Fantasy.
arqios said:
More like a driving aspiration and desire methinks 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 05:00
arqios said:
More like a driving aspiration and desire methinks 🙏🏻🕊️
March 17th, 2025 05:00
To Be Alone
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Almost visceral! Marvelous write. I won\'t say \"loved it\" ... doesn\'t convey the my feelings. Somehow I connected with it, I felt I understood the yearning and the changes
March 15th, 2025 07:34
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Almost visceral! Marvelous write. I won\'t say \"loved it\" ... doesn\'t convey the my feelings. Somehow I connected with it, I felt I understood the yearning and the changes
March 15th, 2025 07:34
Blood Brothers
Goldfinch60 said:
Re-uniting will always happen in our lives Tobani.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Re-uniting will always happen in our lives Tobani.
Andy
March 15th, 2025 02:09
I Thought I saw You Standing There.
Cheeky Missy said:
La, congratulations on your 100th piece of poetry published on this site! How exquisite and so deliciously rendered with gorgeous poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
March 14th, 2025 12:48
Cheeky Missy said:
La, congratulations on your 100th piece of poetry published on this site! How exquisite and so deliciously rendered with gorgeous poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
March 14th, 2025 12:48
The Water.
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The images gradually conjuring a sense of drowning in the seas, I become aware of the unstated detail carefully presented to effect. Winsome and charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a hauntingly painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Methinks I know the answer.
March 14th, 2025 12:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. The images gradually conjuring a sense of drowning in the seas, I become aware of the unstated detail carefully presented to effect. Winsome and charmingly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a hauntingly painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing. Methinks I know the answer.
March 14th, 2025 12:45
Blood Brothers
Cheeky Missy said:
That wry twist in concluding with echoes of O. Henry, leaves more of a smirk than a happy smile as chagrin replies. Superb. Disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
Cheeky Missy said:
That wry twist in concluding with echoes of O. Henry, leaves more of a smirk than a happy smile as chagrin replies. Superb. Disarmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a tantalizingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:41
Blood Brothers
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whether taken literally as being about gangs and gang violence, or metaphorically to mean something else, this is a poem with a powerful punch, Tobani. Well done!
March 14th, 2025 09:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Whether taken literally as being about gangs and gang violence, or metaphorically to mean something else, this is a poem with a powerful punch, Tobani. Well done!
March 14th, 2025 09:56
Blood Brothers
David Wakeling said:
That\'s the fate of gangs to be buried with their enemy.An interesting poem.Enjoyable
March 14th, 2025 05:05
David Wakeling said:
That\'s the fate of gangs to be buried with their enemy.An interesting poem.Enjoyable
March 14th, 2025 05:05
Blood Brothers
sorenbarrett said:
Too often things separate us as family and then we have to ask what is family and its value. A most interesting write that asks the reader to dive deep into values of affiliation.
March 14th, 2025 03:59
sorenbarrett said:
Too often things separate us as family and then we have to ask what is family and its value. A most interesting write that asks the reader to dive deep into values of affiliation.
March 14th, 2025 03:59
Blood Brothers
arqios said:
A case study on what is family, truly riveting 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:01
arqios said:
A case study on what is family, truly riveting 🙏🏻🕊️
March 14th, 2025 03:01
The Water.
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across an article that was saying that death (of the body) begins in the legs. Your poem brought back some sweet childhood memories. Thank you!
Now, what did Bruce Lee say ? \"Be like water.\" And of course, I don\'t think he meant stagnant water. Flowing water!
March 13th, 2025 18:27
Mutley Ravishes said:
I came across an article that was saying that death (of the body) begins in the legs. Your poem brought back some sweet childhood memories. Thank you!
Now, what did Bruce Lee say ? \"Be like water.\" And of course, I don\'t think he meant stagnant water. Flowing water!
March 13th, 2025 18:27
The Water.
Jerry Reynolds said:
An inspiring write, PL
Water means everything to everything.
Failed as a beverage, however.
March 13th, 2025 14:31
Jerry Reynolds said:
An inspiring write, PL
Water means everything to everything.
Failed as a beverage, however.
March 13th, 2025 14:31
The Water.
Neville said:
bravo .. I\'ll drink to that PL .. a refreshing treatise on something so often taken for granted but all life depends on .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:36
Neville said:
bravo .. I\'ll drink to that PL .. a refreshing treatise on something so often taken for granted but all life depends on .. Neville
March 13th, 2025 08:36
The Water.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wishful thinking is fun to do my friend, and this got me thinking wishfully. Thank you for that. The idea of the waves rolling over your feet and the healing feeling the ocean generally has when in it...barring when its rough...really pulled off well here my friend. And it brought me to the beach in my mind...which is never a bad thing. This need not necessarily be about the ocean, but that is the image I had when I read it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wishful thinking is fun to do my friend, and this got me thinking wishfully. Thank you for that. The idea of the waves rolling over your feet and the healing feeling the ocean generally has when in it...barring when its rough...really pulled off well here my friend. And it brought me to the beach in my mind...which is never a bad thing. This need not necessarily be about the ocean, but that is the image I had when I read it. Well done! 🌹👏
March 13th, 2025 07:19
The Water.
Caring dove said:
Cleansing if negative energy and things that weigh us down .
Nice writing ..
March 13th, 2025 07:06
Caring dove said:
Cleansing if negative energy and things that weigh us down .
Nice writing ..
March 13th, 2025 07:06
The Water.
arqios said:
Wonderfully refreshing when these days only wishing thinking is available 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:33
arqios said:
Wonderfully refreshing when these days only wishing thinking is available 🙏🏻🕊
March 13th, 2025 05:33
The Water.
sorenbarrett said:
Water, one of the four basic elements of old. It cleanses, is powerful and flexible. Used as a symbol of cleansing of sins in baptism in Christianity. The Tao speaks of its qualities. Listen to Melville who devotes chapters on its metaphor. A wonderful and powerful poem T.
March 13th, 2025 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
Water, one of the four basic elements of old. It cleanses, is powerful and flexible. Used as a symbol of cleansing of sins in baptism in Christianity. The Tao speaks of its qualities. Listen to Melville who devotes chapters on its metaphor. A wonderful and powerful poem T.
March 13th, 2025 03:46
I Thought I saw You Standing There.
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely piece. Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
March 13th, 2025 03:25
Tom Dylan said:
A lovely piece. Really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.
March 13th, 2025 03:25
I Thought I saw You Standing There.
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful poem Tobani, so true for many of us when we pack our bags and leave.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a wonderful poem Tobani, so true for many of us when we pack our bags and leave.
Andy
March 13th, 2025 01:41
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