Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella



OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
David Wakeling said:

This is amazing. Great fun story of believing in Santa. enjoyable

December 27th, 2024 18:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful poem my friend...truly! Smart dad! LOL! ๐Ÿ˜‚๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ‘

December 27th, 2024 17:21

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Thomas W Case said:

Very creative.

December 27th, 2024 14:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Neville said:



You just done good .. in fact, as a devoted Dad myself, you just done very good ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐ŸŽ…๐Ÿ‘

December 27th, 2024 11:02

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Tony36 said:

Awesome write

December 27th, 2024 10:27

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
arqios said:

Quick thinking dad! And the Santa radar worked as well! Very important to get the wish list right!!! I was fortunate enough to get my proper train set early. For it was a early too that the Santa lore ended for me, I was 10 when it was set in stone; 9 was a bit of a fogged up year.

December 27th, 2024 07:01

OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful story told in a poetic form that seems so appropriate for Christmas. Absolutely lovely

December 27th, 2024 04:03

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Thad Wilk said:

LoL!! ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
Three cheers for
Ole Tom turkey ๐Ÿฆƒ,
no meat on the plate!! ๐Ÿฝ๏ธ
Thanks for sharing,
Two thumbs up ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
this poem was great!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 26th, 2024 22:45

The Turkeys Done A Runner
David Wakeling said:

The Turkey is hiding in the straw. I saw him in a dream. Wonderful fun poem

December 26th, 2024 15:08

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Oh wow! Great read! Much fun, indeed! And as a vegetarian...good for the turkey ๐Ÿคฃ (as the veggies all roll their eyes in disgust! ๐Ÿ™„LOL!) Well done, my friend! Really enjoyed this!

December 26th, 2024 13:27

The Turkeys Done A Runner
Cassie58 said:

You know I canโ€™t help liking the fact that the poor turkey got away. The older I get the more difficult I find it to eat what was once roaming on farms or in fields. Having said that, I still managed some beef yesterday. Reminded me of Gordon Ramsey. Served up the turkey the kids had fed all year round for Christmas dinner. Oh my, eating your pets, definitely a no no. Hope you had a pleasant day yesterday Tobani. All the best.

December 26th, 2024 12:56

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
aDarkerMind said:

and for me also....
this Christmas was a very lonely time for me.
lets hope for better times.

December 26th, 2024 12:46

The Turkeys Done A Runner
sorenbarrett said:

A turkey pardoned by an escape how totally organic is that ? A most fun read and quite seasonal as well

December 26th, 2024 04:12

The Turkeys Done A Runner
arqios said:

Oh dear. And the turkey took off with the potato salad! Most enjoyed.

December 26th, 2024 02:40

Can You See
NafisaSB said:

exactly - unless the person can actually see the real you, passing judgement would be one sided, and maybe wrong too
good write up - keep it up

December 26th, 2024 02:06

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
Thad Wilk said:

A bittersweet poem
really touching!
Great reminder that
there are a lot of folks
that are alone Christmas
and not a happy time
at all,, for some.
A little company would
put a smile on their faces. โ˜บ๏ธ
Thanks for sharing,! ๐Ÿ™
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad


December 25th, 2024 22:13

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
RSM0812 said:

Your poem makes you realize a lot of people have to spend Christmas alone. Of course the end is the cure. A bit of company. Lol. It was written really really well. Thanks for the read.

December 25th, 2024 08:34

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thank you, dear friend, for this poem. To me the most important reminder of all. Nobody should be alone on any day, let alone a holiday.
Your message is apt and tugs at the heartstrings! Tobani, I am sorry this is yours and many others reality. If I could hop the great lake dividing us, I would swing by and spend some time saying hi and eating cookiesโ€ฆor anything for that matter! ๐Ÿคฃ All of that said, I am truly sending you warm wishes on this cold day, my dear friend. I feel blessed to have met you. โค๏ธ

December 25th, 2024 08:10

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
arqios said:

Christmas is peopled lesser and lesser up my way. It\'s probably partly due to the piling on of years and the diversification of opportunities and tele-relationships and such. I also think that Christmas has also diminished in its lustre for many people. As in the note on the Christmas poem I posted this year, I feel that we should allow everyone to celebrate it in their own way and not coerce others to do it one certain way. But that\'s just me. Thanks for sharing.

December 25th, 2024 06:14

The Most Lonely day Of the Year
sorenbarrett said:

A poem about not celebrating the material things but the meaning of Christmas. I love it and very nicely worded as well

December 25th, 2024 03:33

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
Thad Wilk said:

Wow!! ๐Ÿ˜ฎ What a rush!!
Thank you my friend!! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Really a touching piece
of art, much enjoyed
beginning to end,!! ๐Ÿ‘
Merry Christmas back at ya!! ๐Ÿฅณ
๐Ÿง‘โ€๐ŸŽ„โ›„๐ŸŽ„๐ŸŒŸbest regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 24th, 2024 17:59

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Awww! Followed this all the way to its conclusion and truthfully, it was worth the ride, my friend! Loved this series immensely! Well done and Merry Christmas to you too! ๐ŸŽ„

December 24th, 2024 10:33

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
sorenbarrett said:

A fun and wonderful write and a Merry Christmas to you and yours too. Who are those little people, children? short people? little in mind? Polititions little in morals?

December 24th, 2024 03:30

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
Michael Edwards said:

And all the best to you - have a great time and here\'s to next year\'s ditties, odes and oddities.

December 24th, 2024 03:01

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
Neville said:



in all probability I\'m gonna make like an old mirror and be shattered but I do like your message and hope you and your gang have a great time .. Neville

December 24th, 2024 02:48

Come On It`s Christmas ( Conclusion )
arqios said:

And for you as well! ๐ŸŽ„๐ŸŽ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

December 24th, 2024 02:29

Darling I Bought You A Hoover
MendedFences27 said:

Very entertaining poem, TN. Any truth to this and your happy life could be in danger. As the saying goes, \"It\'s a Dam Hoover.\" - Phil A.

December 23rd, 2024 23:23

Darling I Bought You A Hoover
Kevin Hulme said:

That would cause a โ€˜Vacuumโ€™ in a relationship. She should take you to the โ€˜Cleanersโ€™ . You are โ€˜Dysonโ€™ with Death . Iโ€™m sorry, itโ€™s been a long day . Enjoyable Poem. Nice One.

December 23rd, 2024 21:21

Darling I Bought You A Hoover
David Wakeling said:

A wonderful Christmas story. Enjoyable. Well done

December 23rd, 2024 21:15

Darling I Bought You A Hoover
Mutley Ravishes said:

Well, I guess, \" princesses\" don\'t appreciate hoovers!

December 23rd, 2024 20:46



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