Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
My Poems.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
My Poems.
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
We Evacuate To Where.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Your Heart Is Strong.
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
We Evacuate To Where.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
The Urge To Kill.
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
We Evacuate To Where.
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah. Aptly illustrated herein, we see the point of mass media and social control, of the television. Never mind the facts, let\'s wallow in the latest. Besides, the fastest route to extermination of a culture and people is their progeny. The only question remaining is whether it\'s better to abort mid term or at any point, let the children live but teach them lies and deceive them thoroughly, abuse them completely, or kill them outright. Hmm. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [P.S. I already \"tweeted\" my opinion months ago, I think.]
June 9th, 2025 08:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah. Aptly illustrated herein, we see the point of mass media and social control, of the television. Never mind the facts, let\'s wallow in the latest. Besides, the fastest route to extermination of a culture and people is their progeny. The only question remaining is whether it\'s better to abort mid term or at any point, let the children live but teach them lies and deceive them thoroughly, abuse them completely, or kill them outright. Hmm. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. [P.S. I already \"tweeted\" my opinion months ago, I think.]
June 9th, 2025 08:42
We Evacuate To Where.
sorenbarrett said:
As long as man holds his beliefs as more important than his brother\'s life there will be such tragedies. A sad and tragic view of mankind and how he treats his fellow man. Well written Tobani
June 9th, 2025 04:43
sorenbarrett said:
As long as man holds his beliefs as more important than his brother\'s life there will be such tragedies. A sad and tragic view of mankind and how he treats his fellow man. Well written Tobani
June 9th, 2025 04:43
We Evacuate To Where.
David Wakeling said:
Exactly the Middle east is a disaster and there is no where to evacuate to.A very important poem.Well done
June 9th, 2025 04:32
David Wakeling said:
Exactly the Middle east is a disaster and there is no where to evacuate to.A very important poem.Well done
June 9th, 2025 04:32
Your Heart Is Strong.
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha. And \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9) And the mind, isn\'t it inexplicably married to the heart? Dunno. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, fascinating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2025 10:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha. And \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked, who can know it?\" (Jeremiah 17:9) And the mind, isn\'t it inexplicably married to the heart? Dunno. I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, fascinating poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2025 10:27
Jolly Fun!!!
NafisaSB said:
Trying to visualize the scene- but what I see is Mary reaching for that roll - lol
Enjoyed the write
June 6th, 2025 12:10
NafisaSB said:
Trying to visualize the scene- but what I see is Mary reaching for that roll - lol
Enjoyed the write
June 6th, 2025 12:10
Your Heart Is Strong.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! That which we refer to as \"the heart\" is really in our head! 🤣 Wonderful job on this. Profound, my friend! Hope your weekend rocks! 🌹👏
June 6th, 2025 06:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Truth! That which we refer to as \"the heart\" is really in our head! 🤣 Wonderful job on this. Profound, my friend! Hope your weekend rocks! 🌹👏
June 6th, 2025 06:40
Your Heart Is Strong.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the brain...Good in brevity!
June 6th, 2025 04:51
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Mind power is the supreme power ...Mind is the software of the brain...Good in brevity!
June 6th, 2025 04:51
Your Heart Is Strong.
David Wakeling said:
This is so true. If we look to our emotions we often get a better answer.The mind is often very selfish.A thoughtful piece. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:08
David Wakeling said:
This is so true. If we look to our emotions we often get a better answer.The mind is often very selfish.A thoughtful piece. Well done
June 6th, 2025 04:08
Your Heart Is Strong.
sorenbarrett said:
I think you\'re right I\'ve been called feeble minded all my life lol A most motivational write Tobani a call to action and a placing of blame on something we have control over. Very nice in its brevity
June 6th, 2025 03:47
sorenbarrett said:
I think you\'re right I\'ve been called feeble minded all my life lol A most motivational write Tobani a call to action and a placing of blame on something we have control over. Very nice in its brevity
June 6th, 2025 03:47
False Impressions.
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Black Like Me proves that, the alleged attempt to see another angle what most of us forget is rather crucial. We can only offer empathy until we too have experienced whatever, seems to me. Gorgeous in tantalizingly eloquent brevity. Rendered beautifully with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Black Like Me proves that, the alleged attempt to see another angle what most of us forget is rather crucial. We can only offer empathy until we too have experienced whatever, seems to me. Gorgeous in tantalizingly eloquent brevity. Rendered beautifully with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:49
Head Battles The Heart.
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Ah, you\'re too good! If only! \"...the heart is deceitful above all things and desperately wicked: who can know it?\"(Jeremiah 17:9). Oh, I can\'t find words to express how much I love, love, love this gorgeous number of yours!!! Exquisite and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, delightful, albeit bittersweet poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing, I love it!!!
June 4th, 2025 14:45
False Impressions.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words peel back layers, revealing truth beneath the surface. A powerful reminder that authenticity lives within, beyond any facade.
June 4th, 2025 11:46
False Impressions.
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
Yes this is so true.It is what is inside that matters. An enjoyable read compadre
June 4th, 2025 04:24
False Impressions.
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
sorenbarrett said:
It has always been interesting to me why white people wish to be darker but discriminate darker skin and why darker people want to be lighter. A mind provoking read.
June 4th, 2025 04:18
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