Comments received on poems by TobaniNataiella
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
arqios said:
Sometimes we come into the arena pumped up and hyped up, super motivated only to realise that de-escalation has its merits and timing. Thanks for calling our thoughts to a wider perspective.
December 30th, 2024 21:25
arqios said:
Sometimes we come into the arena pumped up and hyped up, super motivated only to realise that de-escalation has its merits and timing. Thanks for calling our thoughts to a wider perspective.
December 30th, 2024 21:25
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem and
message too!!
Really makes you
wonder why?
Awesome read indeed, thank you!!
Best regards peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 20:35
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful poem and
message too!!
Really makes you
wonder why?
Awesome read indeed, thank you!!
Best regards peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 20:35
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
Bella Shepard said:
I was born four years after the end of World War II, I was a child during the Korean War, but I lived through the Vietnam War and saw first hand the horror and destruction every night on the news. Your poem rightly begs the question why do we continue to follow where we are led. The last stanza is such a hopeful thought for the future, perhaps generations from now that is how we will solve our differences. Thank you for this very profound piece.
December 30th, 2024 09:25
Bella Shepard said:
I was born four years after the end of World War II, I was a child during the Korean War, but I lived through the Vietnam War and saw first hand the horror and destruction every night on the news. Your poem rightly begs the question why do we continue to follow where we are led. The last stanza is such a hopeful thought for the future, perhaps generations from now that is how we will solve our differences. Thank you for this very profound piece.
December 30th, 2024 09:25
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. War sucks and people keep ignorantly provoking and perpetuating them! For what? I am not sure even heaven knows. Well written, my friend! 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 09:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yes. War sucks and people keep ignorantly provoking and perpetuating them! For what? I am not sure even heaven knows. Well written, my friend! 🌹👏
December 30th, 2024 09:03
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
LP2187 said:
Great poem, I think about this a lot and how war might bring change for the better, or just pain and loss.
December 30th, 2024 05:47
LP2187 said:
Great poem, I think about this a lot and how war might bring change for the better, or just pain and loss.
December 30th, 2024 05:47
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
sorenbarrett said:
War as old as man relies on social compliance and the following of the alpha male that has deemed it in his best advantage to wage it. Beat the drum sound the war cry dehumanize the enemy it all goes for both sides. A great poem to get people to reflect upon what they are asked to do.
December 30th, 2024 05:01
sorenbarrett said:
War as old as man relies on social compliance and the following of the alpha male that has deemed it in his best advantage to wage it. Beat the drum sound the war cry dehumanize the enemy it all goes for both sides. A great poem to get people to reflect upon what they are asked to do.
December 30th, 2024 05:01
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
Bobby O said:
Such a pure sentiment and yet it provoked though and pushed forth the how come we are where we are?
Nice
December 30th, 2024 04:35
Bobby O said:
Such a pure sentiment and yet it provoked though and pushed forth the how come we are where we are?
Nice
December 30th, 2024 04:35
I Have a GUN ( But we can talk)
David Wakeling said:
Great poem about the stupidity of War. People killing each other is the most insane thing in life.Well written.
December 30th, 2024 04:06
David Wakeling said:
Great poem about the stupidity of War. People killing each other is the most insane thing in life.Well written.
December 30th, 2024 04:06
Trio of Chuckles
Thad Wilk said:
Haaahaahaaa!! 🤣🤣🤣
Hilarious Limericks indeed!
I laughed so hard it made my eyes bleed!
The first one I loved best, 🐶
Really enjoyed the rest! 😸 🐁
Thanks for sharing a real treat to read..
Best regards ✌️ 😀 Thad
December 29th, 2024 21:28
Thad Wilk said:
Haaahaahaaa!! 🤣🤣🤣
Hilarious Limericks indeed!
I laughed so hard it made my eyes bleed!
The first one I loved best, 🐶
Really enjoyed the rest! 😸 🐁
Thanks for sharing a real treat to read..
Best regards ✌️ 😀 Thad
December 29th, 2024 21:28
Trio of Chuckles
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh happy hilarity! 🤣 Loved this my friend! Got more than a trio of chuckles out of these! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:31
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh happy hilarity! 🤣 Loved this my friend! Got more than a trio of chuckles out of these! 🌹👏
December 29th, 2024 16:31
Take What`s Left
Cassie58 said:
An old write. I hope you are now in a much better place Tobani. When you reach rock bottom, the only way is up.
December 29th, 2024 12:59
Cassie58 said:
An old write. I hope you are now in a much better place Tobani. When you reach rock bottom, the only way is up.
December 29th, 2024 12:59
Trio of Chuckles
Cassie58 said:
Fond of limericks Tobani. In an absurd way, all three of these have a little discomfort in them. Enjoyed. Hope your Sunday has been pleasant.
December 29th, 2024 12:55
Cassie58 said:
Fond of limericks Tobani. In an absurd way, all three of these have a little discomfort in them. Enjoyed. Hope your Sunday has been pleasant.
December 29th, 2024 12:55
Trio of Chuckles
AuburnScribbler said:
A nice mirthful trio here TobaniNataiella.
Though when I read them back and paid more attention to the title of each limerick, I cannot help but think that each of them is a satirical comment on the operation of humanity, makes them even more immersive.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 29th, 2024 11:18
AuburnScribbler said:
A nice mirthful trio here TobaniNataiella.
Though when I read them back and paid more attention to the title of each limerick, I cannot help but think that each of them is a satirical comment on the operation of humanity, makes them even more immersive.
Bravo, and I hope that all is well.
December 29th, 2024 11:18
Trio of Chuckles
aDarkerMind said:
a trio of little gems.
very much enjoyed Tobani.
December 29th, 2024 08:25
aDarkerMind said:
a trio of little gems.
very much enjoyed Tobani.
December 29th, 2024 08:25
Trio of Chuckles
sorenbarrett said:
Limericks always bring a smile my favorite the first that reminded me of an old dog of mine that was always jumping the fence
December 29th, 2024 05:26
sorenbarrett said:
Limericks always bring a smile my favorite the first that reminded me of an old dog of mine that was always jumping the fence
December 29th, 2024 05:26
Trio of Chuckles
arqios said:
2 cats and a dog, none with a good year to tell! Enjoyed the hilarity of their separate situations. 👍🏻
December 29th, 2024 05:15
arqios said:
2 cats and a dog, none with a good year to tell! Enjoyed the hilarity of their separate situations. 👍🏻
December 29th, 2024 05:15
Trio of Chuckles
Neville said:
Each one an absurd little gem ............ 😎👍
December 29th, 2024 04:59
Neville said:
Each one an absurd little gem ............ 😎👍
December 29th, 2024 04:59
Take What`s Left
arqios said:
Such a life and such is life. We do what we can until we can’t. Much enjoyed experience in poetry not so much in actually.
December 28th, 2024 18:57
arqios said:
Such a life and such is life. We do what we can until we can’t. Much enjoyed experience in poetry not so much in actually.
December 28th, 2024 18:57
Take What`s Left
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
December 28th, 2024 15:31
David Wakeling said:
Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
December 28th, 2024 15:31
Take What`s Left
Thad Wilk said:
Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😢
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:35
Thad Wilk said:
Wow 😳 so poignant
Indeed.
Really pulls on
the heartstrings!!😢
Wonderful brevity my friend,
my pleasure to read!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:35
Take What`s Left
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
I know this feeling. I am sure the circumstances are different, but I know this feeling. Well expressed my friend! 🌹👏
December 28th, 2024 09:12
Take What`s Left
sorenbarrett said:
When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it
December 28th, 2024 04:50
sorenbarrett said:
When one is deprived of all one has then it is an opportunity for a new beginning. What is painful at the time becomes a burning of the field for a new crop. Very emotive this poem and the feeling flows out of it
December 28th, 2024 04:50
Take What`s Left
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Take What`s Left
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
Neville said:
Sometimes it is best to get out and move on .. I presume things have improved since 1979 .. Neville
December 28th, 2024 03:44
OH (MY DAD is SANTA)
Thad Wilk said:
Ho,Ho,Ho! 🧑🎄
a jolly good poem and
Christmas story my friend!! 👍
Really heart touching,
beginning to end!!🌟🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:07
Thad Wilk said:
Ho,Ho,Ho! 🧑🎄
a jolly good poem and
Christmas story my friend!! 👍
Really heart touching,
beginning to end!!🌟🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 27th, 2024 20:07
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