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My Poems.
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful piece. The only thing that matters is that we keep writing.
June 12th, 2025 06:08
Tom Dylan said:
A powerful piece. The only thing that matters is that we keep writing.
June 12th, 2025 06:08
Greggs Desciple.
David Wakeling said:
Obsessity is a real problem these days.It is so easy to get addicted to take away food becasue it doesn\'t need cooking. A fictional character but I think many of us can relate to the problem.An important poem.Well done
June 12th, 2025 04:16
David Wakeling said:
Obsessity is a real problem these days.It is so easy to get addicted to take away food becasue it doesn\'t need cooking. A fictional character but I think many of us can relate to the problem.An important poem.Well done
June 12th, 2025 04:16
Greggs Desciple.
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of rhyme with a moral and if it were not so directly identifiable with a named real company it would seem a metaphor as well. A most fun read Tobani with a bit of humor attached to this all to true issue. Well done my friend
June 12th, 2025 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read of rhyme with a moral and if it were not so directly identifiable with a named real company it would seem a metaphor as well. A most fun read Tobani with a bit of humor attached to this all to true issue. Well done my friend
June 12th, 2025 04:02
Spinning Hoops
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand Clearance....
June 11th, 2025 17:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand Clearance....
June 11th, 2025 17:34
Spinning Hoops
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one LP. Seems very relevant to today\'s situation. Seems the spinning hoops are self-created. Enjoyed this poem. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2025 12:51
MendedFences27 said:
Nice one LP. Seems very relevant to today\'s situation. Seems the spinning hoops are self-created. Enjoyed this poem. - Phil A.
June 11th, 2025 12:51
My Poems.
arial said:
Freedom to express through words ..I call it a curse though...its a story that come with a rhyme like a goodbye song sung at THE..time.. .many people get caged in not expressing themselves just because it doesn\'t sound or rhyme right but those who express without thinking about those hindrances..are true ones...enjoyed a lot..
June 11th, 2025 11:09
arial said:
Freedom to express through words ..I call it a curse though...its a story that come with a rhyme like a goodbye song sung at THE..time.. .many people get caged in not expressing themselves just because it doesn\'t sound or rhyme right but those who express without thinking about those hindrances..are true ones...enjoyed a lot..
June 11th, 2025 11:09
My Poems.
JBentley said:
Definitely an honest poem about your truth. And as you said in a comment to one of my poems, we understand why we write and also don’t mince our words or the thoughts that brought them.
June 11th, 2025 08:33
JBentley said:
Definitely an honest poem about your truth. And as you said in a comment to one of my poems, we understand why we write and also don’t mince our words or the thoughts that brought them.
June 11th, 2025 08:33
Spinning Hoops
Damaso said:
I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. \"God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I\'ll kill them all,\" my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It\'s always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.
June 11th, 2025 07:32
Damaso said:
I see a very accurate prophecy that worries me greatly. \"God, give me patience, because if you give me strength, I\'ll kill them all,\" my grandmother used to say. Thank you for sharing your writing, sir. It\'s always a pleasure to read it. Greetings.
June 11th, 2025 07:32
Spinning Hoops
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide
June 11th, 2025 04:46
sorenbarrett said:
This is a most intriguing write and the use of abattoir is quite creative. This is a write that takes the mind by the reigns and goes for a long ride. Very nide
June 11th, 2025 04:46
Spinning Hoops
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
June 11th, 2025 04:33
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for your feedback, much appreciated
June 11th, 2025 04:33
Spinning Hoops
David Wakeling said:
haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done
June 11th, 2025 04:11
David Wakeling said:
haiku is a difficult skill but i think you have done really well.I enjoyed reading.Well done
June 11th, 2025 04:11
My Poems.
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write the words that come into our minds Tobani and we just cannot change that, your poems are good and show us your life.
Andy
June 11th, 2025 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
We all write the words that come into our minds Tobani and we just cannot change that, your poems are good and show us your life.
Andy
June 11th, 2025 01:17
My Poems.
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for many good poets that conjure there best work out of the dregs or their pain. It is human emotion that makes for the best poems frills only add the icing on the cake. Nicely said my friend
June 10th, 2025 04:20
My Poems.
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
David Wakeling said:
don\'t be so tough on yourself. You are a much admired poet here.This is a tough self reflection but very cleverly done.Excellent
June 10th, 2025 04:10
We Evacuate To Where.
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Tobani, the killing must cease!
Andy
June 10th, 2025 01:45
Your Heart Is Strong.
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
NafisaSB said:
Thought provoking message. Always a tussle between the mind and the heart - agree it is the mind which is fickle and keeps changing - the heart definitely knows what is to be done, but is overruled by the \'ifs\' and \'whats\'
June 9th, 2025 23:20
We Evacuate To Where.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children card too often played in these tirades against this disgusting war.
Full marks to you, Tobani for the rest.
June 9th, 2025 16:59
The Urge To Kill.
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
Damaso said:
Incredible, sir, how anger can be felt gushing from the lines of this gripping and totally controversial text. Who can say they\'re right? Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.
June 9th, 2025 16:44
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