Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Fondly Remembered.
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? I forgot! (heehee). Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 4th, 2025 08:44
orchidee said:
Erm, who are ya? I forgot! (heehee). Note to self: Do shut up Orchi. lol.
July 4th, 2025 08:44
Fondly Remembered.
arqios said:
Reading this feels like an embrace; a gentle meditation on time, memory, and legacy. It honours the past for shaping who we are, and looks to the future as both a guide and a continuation of that story. With quiet strength, it reminds us that every action we take becomes part of history, and carries the hope that our lives will be remembered with warmth. It’s a soft-spoken reflection on the desire to leave behind something meaningful. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:29
arqios said:
Reading this feels like an embrace; a gentle meditation on time, memory, and legacy. It honours the past for shaping who we are, and looks to the future as both a guide and a continuation of that story. With quiet strength, it reminds us that every action we take becomes part of history, and carries the hope that our lives will be remembered with warmth. It’s a soft-spoken reflection on the desire to leave behind something meaningful. 🕊️🙏🏻
July 4th, 2025 06:29
Fondly Remembered.
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully balanced this poem has that ring to it that is remembered because it is complete and rolls like a ball down hill until it reaches the bottom. The end ties into the beginning and like the Ouroboros feeds on itself. A fave
July 4th, 2025 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully balanced this poem has that ring to it that is remembered because it is complete and rolls like a ball down hill until it reaches the bottom. The end ties into the beginning and like the Ouroboros feeds on itself. A fave
July 4th, 2025 04:13
Hello or Goodbye.
Goldfinch60 said:
I will just keep saying hello Tobani. Hello!
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
I will just keep saying hello Tobani. Hello!
Andy
July 4th, 2025 01:15
Hello or Goodbye.
Kevin Hulme said:
The Whole of life is within this Poem: Good One.
There are no words for Dioga Jota and his Brother. Though our thoughts are with his Wife and family.
July 3rd, 2025 20:28
Kevin Hulme said:
The Whole of life is within this Poem: Good One.
There are no words for Dioga Jota and his Brother. Though our thoughts are with his Wife and family.
July 3rd, 2025 20:28
Born In A Dream.
Doggerel Dave said:
I truly hope they can provide the opportunity for the child to complete their life during which they are allowed to reach their full potential
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
Doggerel Dave said:
I truly hope they can provide the opportunity for the child to complete their life during which they are allowed to reach their full potential
July 3rd, 2025 17:12
Hello or Goodbye.
Damaso said:
Internal and external struggles in unison ring out the echo of this text like a ritual in my mind. Thank you, Lord, for sharing it. Best regards.
July 3rd, 2025 16:41
Damaso said:
Internal and external struggles in unison ring out the echo of this text like a ritual in my mind. Thank you, Lord, for sharing it. Best regards.
July 3rd, 2025 16:41
Hello or Goodbye.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this my friend! Always love juxtaposition and you do it masterfully here! A must fave...and clearly not just for me! 😊❤️🥰🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 14:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this my friend! Always love juxtaposition and you do it masterfully here! A must fave...and clearly not just for me! 😊❤️🥰🌹👏
July 3rd, 2025 14:19
Hello or Goodbye.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance between heartache and hope, beautifully raw and hauntingly true. A soul’s whisper caught between hello and goodbye.
July 3rd, 2025 13:38
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your words dance between heartache and hope, beautifully raw and hauntingly true. A soul’s whisper caught between hello and goodbye.
July 3rd, 2025 13:38
Mary\'s Fun Life.
NafisaSB said:
wonder what inspired this fun tale about this tangled trio. amusing!
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
NafisaSB said:
wonder what inspired this fun tale about this tangled trio. amusing!
July 3rd, 2025 06:35
Hello or Goodbye.
Soman Ragavan said:
The French writer Alfred de Musset said : “\"Il faut qu\'une porte soit ouverte ou fermée\" That is, a door must be closed or opened.
“Smile to deceive” :
“A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities.” ----Herman Melville (1819-1891)
By smiling we put the other guy off his guard.
“Truth in a lie” : hiding the lie in the truth. Again, taking the other by surprise, or guile.
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July 3rd, 2025 05:49
Soman Ragavan said:
The French writer Alfred de Musset said : “\"Il faut qu\'une porte soit ouverte ou fermée\" That is, a door must be closed or opened.
“Smile to deceive” :
“A smile is the chosen vehicle of all ambiguities.” ----Herman Melville (1819-1891)
By smiling we put the other guy off his guard.
“Truth in a lie” : hiding the lie in the truth. Again, taking the other by surprise, or guile.
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July 3rd, 2025 05:49
Hello or Goodbye.
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever Tobani weaving old cliches into a new poetic fabric and in rhyme no less quite a task. Well admired and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
Most clever Tobani weaving old cliches into a new poetic fabric and in rhyme no less quite a task. Well admired and a fave
July 3rd, 2025 05:17
Hello or Goodbye.
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.It offers opposites and a choice we all have to make. That\'s free will for you.Enjoyable read
July 3rd, 2025 04:24
David Wakeling said:
This is quite clever.It offers opposites and a choice we all have to make. That\'s free will for you.Enjoyable read
July 3rd, 2025 04:24
Born In A Dream.
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, they are new angels in our lives.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true Tobani, they are new angels in our lives.
Andy
July 3rd, 2025 01:48
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this? Great Senryu, my friend! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 14:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
How did I miss this? Great Senryu, my friend! 🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 14:12
Born In A Dream.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Nataiella. Beautiful both in form and in message. Wonderfully done!🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:29
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, Nataiella. Beautiful both in form and in message. Wonderfully done!🌹👏
July 2nd, 2025 11:29
Born In A Dream.
arqios said:
This poem evokes both the warmth of immediate connection and the enduring responsibility to guide, care, and inspire, highlighting the transformative nature of love as it blooms and strengthens with time.
July 2nd, 2025 09:33
arqios said:
This poem evokes both the warmth of immediate connection and the enduring responsibility to guide, care, and inspire, highlighting the transformative nature of love as it blooms and strengthens with time.
July 2nd, 2025 09:33
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A tender ode to growth, where love’s soil fosters miracles. Your poem is sunlight on the seeds of hope, Tobani.
July 2nd, 2025 04:40
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
A tender ode to growth, where love’s soil fosters miracles. Your poem is sunlight on the seeds of hope, Tobani.
July 2nd, 2025 04:40
Born In A Dream.
David Wakeling said:
For me this iabout a new born baby. Impossible not to cherish them.A beautiful poem
July 2nd, 2025 04:35
David Wakeling said:
For me this iabout a new born baby. Impossible not to cherish them.A beautiful poem
July 2nd, 2025 04:35
Born In A Dream.
sorenbarrett said:
Couldn\'t agree more with each of my four I rejoiced and still rejoice. A lovely poem that should strike the heart of any parent. Most lovely
July 2nd, 2025 04:12
sorenbarrett said:
Couldn\'t agree more with each of my four I rejoiced and still rejoice. A lovely poem that should strike the heart of any parent. Most lovely
July 2nd, 2025 04:12
Born In A Dream.
Teddy.15 said:
I truly can feel this unconditional love. I hope you make them aware too. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 03:12
Teddy.15 said:
I truly can feel this unconditional love. I hope you make them aware too. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 03:12
Born In A Dream.
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. very important to feel ‘ loved
July 2nd, 2025 02:50
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing .. very important to feel ‘ loved
July 2nd, 2025 02:50
Children Had Fun.
Teddy.15 said:
LoL a fun day trip, reminds me of those I had with my own family. 🌹 Wonderful imagery also scary at times, seagull swoop mainly...🤣
July 2nd, 2025 01:48
Teddy.15 said:
LoL a fun day trip, reminds me of those I had with my own family. 🌹 Wonderful imagery also scary at times, seagull swoop mainly...🤣
July 2nd, 2025 01:48
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh what a gorgeous metaphor! How excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 15:36
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh what a gorgeous metaphor! How excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a warming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 1st, 2025 15:36
Seed You Sow (Senryu).
MendedFences27 said:
To nurture is to love. What a great sentiment. We can succeed at parenting or even gardening if we follow your advice. A few words, much wisdom. Loved it.
July 1st, 2025 14:06
MendedFences27 said:
To nurture is to love. What a great sentiment. We can succeed at parenting or even gardening if we follow your advice. A few words, much wisdom. Loved it.
July 1st, 2025 14:06
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