Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Blinded Sheep.
Damaso said:
I was able to identify with the sheep in some ways. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 10:36
Damaso said:
I was able to identify with the sheep in some ways. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing. Best regards.
August 5th, 2025 10:36
Blinded Sheep.
Friendship said:
Two for one, nicely done. Your poem \"Blinded Sheep\" explores themes of suffering, betrayal, and the consequences of blind faith or trust. The \"blinded sheep\" symbolize individuals who follow without questioning, leading to exploitation and emotional pain. The lines about a \"tortured heart\" emphasize the deep emotional scars caused by unreciprocated love or betrayal.
August 5th, 2025 07:18
Friendship said:
Two for one, nicely done. Your poem \"Blinded Sheep\" explores themes of suffering, betrayal, and the consequences of blind faith or trust. The \"blinded sheep\" symbolize individuals who follow without questioning, leading to exploitation and emotional pain. The lines about a \"tortured heart\" emphasize the deep emotional scars caused by unreciprocated love or betrayal.
August 5th, 2025 07:18
Blinded Sheep.
Tony Grannell said:
Hello,Tobani,
The last lines of each of the two poems bond perfectly bringing the two well wrought pieces together enhancing theme of despair and cruelty. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:13
Tony Grannell said:
Hello,Tobani,
The last lines of each of the two poems bond perfectly bringing the two well wrought pieces together enhancing theme of despair and cruelty. Very well done indeed.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 5th, 2025 07:13
Blinded Sheep.
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I am NOT awake, have a purring kitten thinking I shouldn\'t be on my phone playing around and on me, and am rather baffled. If the sheep were knowingly led, then--? They claimed land... but people have done that for millennia... yet they had neither compassion nor kindness...yes, conquerors are typically ruthless... \"sharpened tongues slowly driven in\"--? You got me there, what\'s that mean? For your second, consider this: \"He satisfieth the longing soul, and filleth the hungry soul with goodness. \"(Ps 107:9) From our fellows, men or women, and from romantic engagements, or friendships, we may and do seek love, yet I have found no satisfaction except in the LORD.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 06:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. I am NOT awake, have a purring kitten thinking I shouldn\'t be on my phone playing around and on me, and am rather baffled. If the sheep were knowingly led, then--? They claimed land... but people have done that for millennia... yet they had neither compassion nor kindness...yes, conquerors are typically ruthless... \"sharpened tongues slowly driven in\"--? You got me there, what\'s that mean? For your second, consider this: \"He satisfieth the longing soul, and filleth the hungry soul with goodness. \"(Ps 107:9) From our fellows, men or women, and from romantic engagements, or friendships, we may and do seek love, yet I have found no satisfaction except in the LORD.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 5th, 2025 06:43
Blinded Sheep.
sorenbarrett said:
Although at first appearing nonrelated they soon seemed to take on common properties and merged into one landscape. Nicely done Tobani
August 5th, 2025 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Although at first appearing nonrelated they soon seemed to take on common properties and merged into one landscape. Nicely done Tobani
August 5th, 2025 04:31
Blinded Sheep.
Neville said:
Twin Peaks .. could they possibly get any better than this .. Neville
August 5th, 2025 03:28
Neville said:
Twin Peaks .. could they possibly get any better than this .. Neville
August 5th, 2025 03:28
Forgotten Ukraine.
Sealgair said:
Black is not always evil, just as white is not always good.
August 4th, 2025 15:56
Sealgair said:
Black is not always evil, just as white is not always good.
August 4th, 2025 15:56
Forgotten Ukraine.
peto said:
A few epic\'s on here today
Another to add to the list
Superb that you got this message across with rhyme
impressive to say the least
August 4th, 2025 13:52
peto said:
A few epic\'s on here today
Another to add to the list
Superb that you got this message across with rhyme
impressive to say the least
August 4th, 2025 13:52
Forgotten Ukraine.
Neville said:
This whole page is filled with absolute truth and I too am not ashamed to say I stand both proudly and firmly in the Ukrainian corner ..
August 4th, 2025 13:14
Neville said:
This whole page is filled with absolute truth and I too am not ashamed to say I stand both proudly and firmly in the Ukrainian corner ..
August 4th, 2025 13:14
Forgotten Ukraine.
Cheeky Missy said:
*cough, cough* It\'s not really Russia nor the Ruskies anymore than it\'s the Ukranians. It\'s the commies, they\'ve always been ruthless, the Chinese know that too painfully well, as every other nationality and culture swallowed by the same. It\'s a life and death struggle. And Lenin was confident in boldly promising the future of the then free world, Senator McCarthy demonized for begging the Americans to wake up before they lost everything. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 09:51
Cheeky Missy said:
*cough, cough* It\'s not really Russia nor the Ruskies anymore than it\'s the Ukranians. It\'s the commies, they\'ve always been ruthless, the Chinese know that too painfully well, as every other nationality and culture swallowed by the same. It\'s a life and death struggle. And Lenin was confident in boldly promising the future of the then free world, Senator McCarthy demonized for begging the Americans to wake up before they lost everything. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 4th, 2025 09:51
Forgotten Ukraine.
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with your impassioned plea, Tobani—a sad spot in the heart for me. The annual cost to the nations of the world to feed, clothe, house, educate, and provide paths to joy for every child in the world is less than the nations of the world spend quarterly on armaments.
August 4th, 2025 07:41
Jerry Reynolds said:
I agree with your impassioned plea, Tobani—a sad spot in the heart for me. The annual cost to the nations of the world to feed, clothe, house, educate, and provide paths to joy for every child in the world is less than the nations of the world spend quarterly on armaments.
August 4th, 2025 07:41
Forgotten Ukraine.
Friendship said:
The poet aims to raise awareness about the issues facing Ukraine and to mobilize support against aggression, criticizing global complacency and calling for action to ensure justice and peace.
August 4th, 2025 07:23
Friendship said:
The poet aims to raise awareness about the issues facing Ukraine and to mobilize support against aggression, criticizing global complacency and calling for action to ensure justice and peace.
August 4th, 2025 07:23
Wise Man Say (23)
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tobani,
Once again you grace us with your wit and wisdom. Six delightful pronouncements, that only you can do. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:55
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tobani,
Once again you grace us with your wit and wisdom. Six delightful pronouncements, that only you can do. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 4th, 2025 05:55
Forgotten Ukraine.
sorenbarrett said:
A most impassioned poem, a cry for liberty and independence not as a revolution but as a bulwark and tidal wall against spreading aggression and invasion. Powerfully written it makes its point clear. Nicely worded Tobani
August 4th, 2025 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
A most impassioned poem, a cry for liberty and independence not as a revolution but as a bulwark and tidal wall against spreading aggression and invasion. Powerfully written it makes its point clear. Nicely worded Tobani
August 4th, 2025 04:04
Wise Man Say (23)
Teddy.15 said:
Hilarious and true, the iron one is so visible lol 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:03
Teddy.15 said:
Hilarious and true, the iron one is so visible lol 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:03
Forgotten Ukraine.
Teddy.15 said:
Vladimir Zelenskyy is a true modern day Hero, he will be remembered in history books, and deserves the Nobel piece prize 🏆 one single man taking on Putin and Trump, I was so ashamed of humanity when trump tried to make him look silly in front of the world. Our world is surely broken for so many reasons mainly political bullies. We should all look for a peaceful future not war. 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:01
Teddy.15 said:
Vladimir Zelenskyy is a true modern day Hero, he will be remembered in history books, and deserves the Nobel piece prize 🏆 one single man taking on Putin and Trump, I was so ashamed of humanity when trump tried to make him look silly in front of the world. Our world is surely broken for so many reasons mainly political bullies. We should all look for a peaceful future not war. 🌹
August 4th, 2025 03:01
Wise Man Say (23)
Cheeky Missy said:
Kick me, but, the none too subtle sagacity in these is too good. I frankly love these. Excellently rendered with charming imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
August 3rd, 2025 20:30
Cheeky Missy said:
Kick me, but, the none too subtle sagacity in these is too good. I frankly love these. Excellently rendered with charming imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you so very much!
August 3rd, 2025 20:30
Wise Man Say (23)
Bella Shepard said:
Your sage wisdom is not lost on those who see it. I heed it all, and will act accordingly, especially when I\'m ironing. Thank you for the chuckle!
August 3rd, 2025 12:33
Bella Shepard said:
Your sage wisdom is not lost on those who see it. I heed it all, and will act accordingly, especially when I\'m ironing. Thank you for the chuckle!
August 3rd, 2025 12:33
Wise Man Say (23)
hzugman said:
Or alternatively, it\'s ALL middle with no beginning or no end. Nice read.
August 3rd, 2025 11:50
hzugman said:
Or alternatively, it\'s ALL middle with no beginning or no end. Nice read.
August 3rd, 2025 11:50
Wise Man Say (23)
peto said:
If a job is worth doing it\'s worth doing right
Nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 10:20
peto said:
If a job is worth doing it\'s worth doing right
Nicely done
August 3rd, 2025 10:20
Wise Man Say (23)
Friendship said:
I must say, I enjoy your Humor. What a way to start a great day.
August 3rd, 2025 07:47
Friendship said:
I must say, I enjoy your Humor. What a way to start a great day.
August 3rd, 2025 07:47
Wise Man Say (23)
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of truth sprinkled amongst the fun, Tobni.
August 3rd, 2025 06:40
Jerry Reynolds said:
A lot of truth sprinkled amongst the fun, Tobni.
August 3rd, 2025 06:40
Wise Man Say (23)
arqios said:
Nice, and on a day that i feel the need for wisdom! 🙏🏻🕊️
August 3rd, 2025 05:51
arqios said:
Nice, and on a day that i feel the need for wisdom! 🙏🏻🕊️
August 3rd, 2025 05:51
Wise Man Say (23)
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes there is no middle ground. Another fun read to get Sunday off and rolling. Nicely done Tobani
August 3rd, 2025 04:05
sorenbarrett said:
Sometimes there is no middle ground. Another fun read to get Sunday off and rolling. Nicely done Tobani
August 3rd, 2025 04:05
Harry Forgot
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Tobani, I hope I remember to turn on the cooker today when I cook the Sunday roast. LOL.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Great fun write Tobani, I hope I remember to turn on the cooker today when I cook the Sunday roast. LOL.
Andy
August 3rd, 2025 01:50
Best Friend Harry
Malcolm Gladwin said:
I really enjoyed this light hearted and we\'ll spirited write , thank you for sharing
August 3rd, 2025 01:09
Malcolm Gladwin said:
I really enjoyed this light hearted and we\'ll spirited write , thank you for sharing
August 3rd, 2025 01:09
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