Comments received on poems by Poetic Licence
Children Had Fun.
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside!
I do like to be beside the sea!
Oh I do like to stroll along the Prom, Prom, Prom!
Where the brass bands play, \"Tiddely-om-pom-pom!\"
Your entertaining tale tells more truths than this old English seaside favourite fable Tobani.
Enjoyed every line.
June 27th, 2025 06:04
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside!
I do like to be beside the sea!
Oh I do like to stroll along the Prom, Prom, Prom!
Where the brass bands play, \"Tiddely-om-pom-pom!\"
Your entertaining tale tells more truths than this old English seaside favourite fable Tobani.
Enjoyed every line.
June 27th, 2025 06:04
Children Had Fun.
David Wakeling said:
Poor old Percy thought he was taking the family on an adventure and everything went wrong.A great and entertaining story. I really enjoyed it.
June 27th, 2025 04:18
David Wakeling said:
Poor old Percy thought he was taking the family on an adventure and everything went wrong.A great and entertaining story. I really enjoyed it.
June 27th, 2025 04:18
Children Had Fun.
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how one person\'s misery can be another\'s joy. Point of view establishes attitude that determines mood. A fun read and I was expecting further disasters such as coming back to a stripped car or one that wasn\'t there or worse being held up with no money to pay on the way back but then my views are always dark. Well done
June 27th, 2025 03:54
sorenbarrett said:
Funny how one person\'s misery can be another\'s joy. Point of view establishes attitude that determines mood. A fun read and I was expecting further disasters such as coming back to a stripped car or one that wasn\'t there or worse being held up with no money to pay on the way back but then my views are always dark. Well done
June 27th, 2025 03:54
Best Friend Harry
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write PL. And could one mention his dead caterpillar under his nose - his moustache?! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:47
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write PL. And could one mention his dead caterpillar under his nose - his moustache?! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:47
Best Friend Harry
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, Harry\'s turn for Thursday! Loved it, my friend. Thanks for the laugh! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:21
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Yay, Harry\'s turn for Thursday! Loved it, my friend. Thanks for the laugh! 🌹👏
June 26th, 2025 10:21
Best Friend Harry
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! I begin this hilarious week might last forever. You\'re too fun with these. Beautifully rendered with a disarming sense of casual speech which manages delightfully to rhyme, tinged by a delicate poignancy which lingers. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 10:18
Cheeky Missy said:
My la! I begin this hilarious week might last forever. You\'re too fun with these. Beautifully rendered with a disarming sense of casual speech which manages delightfully to rhyme, tinged by a delicate poignancy which lingers. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 10:18
Best Friend Harry
Damaso said:
I really identify with Harry. I enjoyed it a lot, sir. Thanks for sharing! Cheers
June 26th, 2025 08:56
Damaso said:
I really identify with Harry. I enjoyed it a lot, sir. Thanks for sharing! Cheers
June 26th, 2025 08:56
Best Friend Harry
arqios said:
A most amicable write about such an amiable friend🕊️🙏🏻 Much enjoyed.
June 26th, 2025 07:05
arqios said:
A most amicable write about such an amiable friend🕊️🙏🏻 Much enjoyed.
June 26th, 2025 07:05
Best Friend Harry
sorenbarrett said:
Another set of charming limerick like poems that make for good fun and smiles in that they contain much of human nature that we notice but try to deny. Well written my friend
June 26th, 2025 04:59
sorenbarrett said:
Another set of charming limerick like poems that make for good fun and smiles in that they contain much of human nature that we notice but try to deny. Well written my friend
June 26th, 2025 04:59
Best Friend Harry
David Wakeling said:
That Harry is a laugh a minute.Lots of fun here.Enjoyable to read
June 26th, 2025 04:19
David Wakeling said:
That Harry is a laugh a minute.Lots of fun here.Enjoyable to read
June 26th, 2025 04:19
Mary\'s Fun Life.
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your playful rhymes and quirky humor shine through in Chuckles Week! Mary and Harry’s misadventures are both absurd and entertaining—a fun read! Keep the laughs coming, Tobani!
June 25th, 2025 14:07
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
Your playful rhymes and quirky humor shine through in Chuckles Week! Mary and Harry’s misadventures are both absurd and entertaining—a fun read! Keep the laughs coming, Tobani!
June 25th, 2025 14:07
Mary\'s Fun Life.
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hump day and you are are still on a roll my friend! Loved these! 🤣🌹👏 Have a great day!
June 25th, 2025 09:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hump day and you are are still on a roll my friend! Loved these! 🤣🌹👏 Have a great day!
June 25th, 2025 09:19
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, my friend. It almost had an \"Austin Powers\" quality to its humor. (think of when they\'re trying to name the rocket lying int he sky...if you\'ve seen the film). The lines \"He tripped and fell on his bong. / Landed where the sun never shone.\" My expectation there was a rhyme and we can all guess the word that rhymes with bong 🤣, but you subverted expectations all the while delivering exactly what we were expecting for. BRILLIANCE. For that alone it gets a fave, and the poem deserves it regardless. Well done, my friend! ❤️🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 08:57
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Love this, my friend. It almost had an \"Austin Powers\" quality to its humor. (think of when they\'re trying to name the rocket lying int he sky...if you\'ve seen the film). The lines \"He tripped and fell on his bong. / Landed where the sun never shone.\" My expectation there was a rhyme and we can all guess the word that rhymes with bong 🤣, but you subverted expectations all the while delivering exactly what we were expecting for. BRILLIANCE. For that alone it gets a fave, and the poem deserves it regardless. Well done, my friend! ❤️🌹👏
June 25th, 2025 08:57
Mary\'s Fun Life.
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems they got it together without the aid of a marriage counselor after all....!
June 25th, 2025 08:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Seems they got it together without the aid of a marriage counselor after all....!
June 25th, 2025 08:14
Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1).
Kevin Hulme said:
Pearls of Wisdom. Good one.
June 25th, 2025 07:36
Kevin Hulme said:
Pearls of Wisdom. Good one.
June 25th, 2025 07:36
Mary\'s Fun Life.
David Wakeling said:
Ah this is a tangled tale.Great story telling mi amigo.I really enjoyed this one. Excellent
June 25th, 2025 04:17
David Wakeling said:
Ah this is a tangled tale.Great story telling mi amigo.I really enjoyed this one. Excellent
June 25th, 2025 04:17
Mary\'s Fun Life.
sorenbarrett said:
This poem turned into quite the saga and with the first one I began to think that Hairy Mary was going to turn into a Larry. A most fun read.
June 25th, 2025 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
This poem turned into quite the saga and with the first one I began to think that Hairy Mary was going to turn into a Larry. A most fun read.
June 25th, 2025 03:45
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you cheeky missy for the Fav
June 24th, 2025 22:26
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you cheeky missy for the Fav
June 24th, 2025 22:26
Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1).
Doggerel Dave said:
Chuckle? All I see are profound truths. (And I\'ve neva been married..... however.....) It\'s about time reality struck the pages of MPS......
June 24th, 2025 19:40
Doggerel Dave said:
Chuckle? All I see are profound truths. (And I\'ve neva been married..... however.....) It\'s about time reality struck the pages of MPS......
June 24th, 2025 19:40
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
Jerry Reynolds said:
OK Tobani. That was good. Had a good laugh.
June 24th, 2025 05:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
OK Tobani. That was good. Had a good laugh.
June 24th, 2025 05:50
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
David Wakeling said:
This is funny.Made me laugh. Well done
June 24th, 2025 04:34
David Wakeling said:
This is funny.Made me laugh. Well done
June 24th, 2025 04:34
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Tobani close to limerick style in these two made me smile. A fun read
June 24th, 2025 04:28
sorenbarrett said:
Ah Tobani close to limerick style in these two made me smile. A fun read
June 24th, 2025 04:28
Chuckles Week (Part 2).
arqios said:
Oh dear, still humour nonetheless. Hope John didn’t require medical attention 🙏🏻🕊️
June 24th, 2025 02:42
arqios said:
Oh dear, still humour nonetheless. Hope John didn’t require medical attention 🙏🏻🕊️
June 24th, 2025 02:42
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