Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Passing Notes
dusk arising said:
LOL remember that if boris goes it will be another blue tory to replace him.
Unfortunately labour dont seem to be electable lately. THe last lot of labour to be elected are now scorned by labour themselves for being too like the tories and lefty corbyn gave them the biggest defeat ever.
Somehow i think boris will survive though all this will be re-lived at the next general election i\'m sure.
Very topical poetry.
February 2nd, 2022 11:48
dusk arising said:
LOL remember that if boris goes it will be another blue tory to replace him.
Unfortunately labour dont seem to be electable lately. THe last lot of labour to be elected are now scorned by labour themselves for being too like the tories and lefty corbyn gave them the biggest defeat ever.
Somehow i think boris will survive though all this will be re-lived at the next general election i\'m sure.
Very topical poetry.
February 2nd, 2022 11:48
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
spilleronsheet said:
A powerful message imbibed
Your words surely will strike
To break the so called traditional norm
The mob mentality running around
Well crafted dear poet
February 1st, 2022 12:51
spilleronsheet said:
A powerful message imbibed
Your words surely will strike
To break the so called traditional norm
The mob mentality running around
Well crafted dear poet
February 1st, 2022 12:51
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words Ben.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words Ben.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:15
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
Eugene S. said:
Amen! Had never known of \"The Goose and the Common\" until your poem. Intriguing & thought provoking, no doubt. 👍
January 31st, 2022 12:28
Eugene S. said:
Amen! Had never known of \"The Goose and the Common\" until your poem. Intriguing & thought provoking, no doubt. 👍
January 31st, 2022 12:28
JBG (for Grand-dad)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, he will always be with you.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, he will always be with you.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:56
JBG (for Grand-dad)
Rozina said:
Wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Enjoyed reading about him and the fun and affection all of you had with him.
January 30th, 2022 22:00
Rozina said:
Wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Enjoyed reading about him and the fun and affection all of you had with him.
January 30th, 2022 22:00
Black and White Cat
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful description dear poet
I felt I could remember all the cats in my garden who visit me
Generations of kittens thrives in my small garden
Ginger to white
White to black
And even white and black like your Hattie
Though one of them ate my birdie
But that’s another story
Well crafted dear poet
January 30th, 2022 13:12
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful description dear poet
I felt I could remember all the cats in my garden who visit me
Generations of kittens thrives in my small garden
Ginger to white
White to black
And even white and black like your Hattie
Though one of them ate my birdie
But that’s another story
Well crafted dear poet
January 30th, 2022 13:12
JBG (for Grand-dad)
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely poetry…a warm and sincere tribute to your granddad…actually made me remover my grand mom since i never saw my grand dad…very lovely dear poet…am sure your grand dad would be so proud of you
January 30th, 2022 11:41
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely poetry…a warm and sincere tribute to your granddad…actually made me remover my grand mom since i never saw my grand dad…very lovely dear poet…am sure your grand dad would be so proud of you
January 30th, 2022 11:41
Black and White Cat
orchidee said:
Good write AS. How can anyone not like cats (and dogs)?!
January 30th, 2022 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write AS. How can anyone not like cats (and dogs)?!
January 30th, 2022 03:30
Black and White Cat
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a bird lover, especially raptors and for each bird a raptor takes for food 400 are taken by \'domestic\' cats to play with.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a bird lover, especially raptors and for each bird a raptor takes for food 400 are taken by \'domestic\' cats to play with.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:31
Black and White Cat
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your cat poem. My neighbour has a cat which seems to look at me with disdain! I shall put up a poem about this fellow. Your poem inspired me.
January 29th, 2022 22:33
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your cat poem. My neighbour has a cat which seems to look at me with disdain! I shall put up a poem about this fellow. Your poem inspired me.
January 29th, 2022 22:33
Black and White Cat
Buzz Bray said:
Sweet story and feelings. Nicely put. Good work.
January 29th, 2022 17:00
Buzz Bray said:
Sweet story and feelings. Nicely put. Good work.
January 29th, 2022 17:00
Black and White Cat
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
For Rabbie (to the rhythm of \"Auld Lang Syne\")
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
Lazy
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like your writing ! 🙂🙂 such a good choice of words , and flow ..
Very engaging fun read
January 23rd, 2022 14:15
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like your writing ! 🙂🙂 such a good choice of words , and flow ..
Very engaging fun read
January 23rd, 2022 14:15
Monotony
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Everyone has the right to happiness but it seems that some people get a lot more than others ! I sometimes think it’s a little unbalanced .
Nobody should have to struggle and feel unhappy in life
January 23rd, 2022 13:35
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Everyone has the right to happiness but it seems that some people get a lot more than others ! I sometimes think it’s a little unbalanced .
Nobody should have to struggle and feel unhappy in life
January 23rd, 2022 13:35
A Mutual Apology, from Cronos and Zeus
sophin said:
great write, auburn. interesting how you tied in the tales of mythology into the modern world.
\"with benign pride, we think ourselves gods,
but we cry, when we make our blood drop,
\"
- great lines
January 21st, 2022 01:06
sophin said:
great write, auburn. interesting how you tied in the tales of mythology into the modern world.
\"with benign pride, we think ourselves gods,
but we cry, when we make our blood drop,
\"
- great lines
January 21st, 2022 01:06
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
GypsyLady said:
Oh I so feel your pain! I love this clever and witty write which expresses your frustration so very well!
January 18th, 2022 10:10
GypsyLady said:
Oh I so feel your pain! I love this clever and witty write which expresses your frustration so very well!
January 18th, 2022 10:10
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
spilleronsheet said:
Such a different topic and the words to express the frustration
But no denial I couldn’t stop laughing
Very clever and witty poetry
January 18th, 2022 09:23
spilleronsheet said:
Such a different topic and the words to express the frustration
But no denial I couldn’t stop laughing
Very clever and witty poetry
January 18th, 2022 09:23
Bad YouTube Ad, Bad!
L. B. Mek said:
\'who live for sin!\'
they\'re just capitalising
on that capitalist
all consuming greed of modernity..
and be careful, dear Poet
lest they start making us
sign-up
and pay;
adds, are just fine with me...
(lol, luv the details in your rant
and despite my response above
I - so, relate
to your frustrations, my friend)
January 18th, 2022 08:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'who live for sin!\'
they\'re just capitalising
on that capitalist
all consuming greed of modernity..
and be careful, dear Poet
lest they start making us
sign-up
and pay;
adds, are just fine with me...
(lol, luv the details in your rant
and despite my response above
I - so, relate
to your frustrations, my friend)
January 18th, 2022 08:42
Plain Andrew
Rozina said:
I just saw this on the news yesterday. In the end no escape. I enjoyed the poem.
January 14th, 2022 21:42
Rozina said:
I just saw this on the news yesterday. In the end no escape. I enjoyed the poem.
January 14th, 2022 21:42
Plain Andrew
sophin said:
good write, auburn. you hold so much hope and kindness for the scorned. have a nice day.
January 14th, 2022 13:04
sophin said:
good write, auburn. you hold so much hope and kindness for the scorned. have a nice day.
January 14th, 2022 13:04
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
Rozina said:
This is an interesting poem. In some cultures 4 is an unlucky number because the ethnic pronunciation sounds like the word \'death\'. The building may lack a 4th floor for example. Great idea.
January 13th, 2022 04:36
Rozina said:
This is an interesting poem. In some cultures 4 is an unlucky number because the ethnic pronunciation sounds like the word \'death\'. The building may lack a 4th floor for example. Great idea.
January 13th, 2022 04:36
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, home is what you make it and it sounds as if you have a very good home.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, home is what you make it and it sounds as if you have a very good home.
Andy
January 13th, 2022 02:38
Thirteen A (An Acrostic)
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful acrostic and a wonderful connection with the house to make it home
Very beautiful dear poet
January 12th, 2022 22:50
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful acrostic and a wonderful connection with the house to make it home
Very beautiful dear poet
January 12th, 2022 22:50
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