Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
Hangover (An Acrostic)
spilleronsheet said:
Like you said
It’s not a drink that can cause hangover
Maybe a project
Maybe a relationship
Or maybe simply an addiction
Can cause a hangover
A well crafted acrostic dear poet
February 7th, 2022 16:27
spilleronsheet said:
Like you said
It’s not a drink that can cause hangover
Maybe a project
Maybe a relationship
Or maybe simply an addiction
Can cause a hangover
A well crafted acrostic dear poet
February 7th, 2022 16:27
Hangover (An Acrostic)
dusk arising said:
Gosh what a horrendous face. I found this quite funny because it reminded me of my \'oldest swinger in town\' days in my late 30\'s early 40\'s when occasionally we would party on drink and weed followed by what we called being \'wrecked\' the morning after.
My worst hangovers had me feeling that my brain was loose inside my skull and each time I moved so my brain would bash against the inside of my head... ouch! at the memory.
February 7th, 2022 12:22
dusk arising said:
Gosh what a horrendous face. I found this quite funny because it reminded me of my \'oldest swinger in town\' days in my late 30\'s early 40\'s when occasionally we would party on drink and weed followed by what we called being \'wrecked\' the morning after.
My worst hangovers had me feeling that my brain was loose inside my skull and each time I moved so my brain would bash against the inside of my head... ouch! at the memory.
February 7th, 2022 12:22
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so very true, the bands that play in pubs do not get enough credit for what they do and how good they can be.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so very true, the bands that play in pubs do not get enough credit for what they do and how good they can be.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:46
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem, the lyrics are great. So nice to be able to play and sing in a band or to entertain family and friends. I am still practising basic guitar chords.
February 6th, 2022 22:34
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem, the lyrics are great. So nice to be able to play and sing in a band or to entertain family and friends. I am still practising basic guitar chords.
February 6th, 2022 22:34
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Caring dove said:
Great poem : lyrics . I bet it’s good to be in a band ?
February 6th, 2022 12:03
Caring dove said:
Great poem : lyrics . I bet it’s good to be in a band ?
February 6th, 2022 12:03
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but when true love happens it is no con.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but when true love happens it is no con.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:58
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
dusk arising said:
This is not a new syndrome. It is the stuff of novels and films galore. But quite horrible and it\'s presence taints the genuine people (my own experience).
There will always be the susceptible and yes the plain stupid who get duped.
February 3rd, 2022 15:32
dusk arising said:
This is not a new syndrome. It is the stuff of novels and films galore. But quite horrible and it\'s presence taints the genuine people (my own experience).
There will always be the susceptible and yes the plain stupid who get duped.
February 3rd, 2022 15:32
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
spilleronsheet said:
It’s genuine
Love shall not be tainted and painted with greed
It may happen over a chance meet
But true is your advice
It shouldn’t happen that easily
Alas
Love is blind
But this tinder and all is really shoddy
February 3rd, 2022 14:12
spilleronsheet said:
It’s genuine
Love shall not be tainted and painted with greed
It may happen over a chance meet
But true is your advice
It shouldn’t happen that easily
Alas
Love is blind
But this tinder and all is really shoddy
February 3rd, 2022 14:12
Passing Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ben, unfortunately I tend to agrre with dusk that Boris will survive and if he doesn\'t what horror will replace him.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ben, unfortunately I tend to agrre with dusk that Boris will survive and if he doesn\'t what horror will replace him.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:30
Passing Notes
Rozina said:
I actually see the \'children\' in our parliament too and other parliaments in the same state of affairs. A few countries (run by women!) are doing better (oops, sorry!)
February 3rd, 2022 00:48
Rozina said:
I actually see the \'children\' in our parliament too and other parliaments in the same state of affairs. A few countries (run by women!) are doing better (oops, sorry!)
February 3rd, 2022 00:48
Passing Notes
spilleronsheet said:
The facade of so called democracy
We thought we were ruling
The reality we still are being ruled
With those money stashed in pockets and guns loaded
Can pass on bullets
Can dally playing while so many are dying
It’s really sad
That monkeys are ruling the nations
The sad truth
Democracy seems unfound
Kidnap or lost in some account
A notice reads
“Lost and found democracy please”
February 2nd, 2022 13:48
spilleronsheet said:
The facade of so called democracy
We thought we were ruling
The reality we still are being ruled
With those money stashed in pockets and guns loaded
Can pass on bullets
Can dally playing while so many are dying
It’s really sad
That monkeys are ruling the nations
The sad truth
Democracy seems unfound
Kidnap or lost in some account
A notice reads
“Lost and found democracy please”
February 2nd, 2022 13:48
Passing Notes
dusk arising said:
LOL remember that if boris goes it will be another blue tory to replace him.
Unfortunately labour dont seem to be electable lately. THe last lot of labour to be elected are now scorned by labour themselves for being too like the tories and lefty corbyn gave them the biggest defeat ever.
Somehow i think boris will survive though all this will be re-lived at the next general election i\'m sure.
Very topical poetry.
February 2nd, 2022 11:48
dusk arising said:
LOL remember that if boris goes it will be another blue tory to replace him.
Unfortunately labour dont seem to be electable lately. THe last lot of labour to be elected are now scorned by labour themselves for being too like the tories and lefty corbyn gave them the biggest defeat ever.
Somehow i think boris will survive though all this will be re-lived at the next general election i\'m sure.
Very topical poetry.
February 2nd, 2022 11:48
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
spilleronsheet said:
A powerful message imbibed
Your words surely will strike
To break the so called traditional norm
The mob mentality running around
Well crafted dear poet
February 1st, 2022 12:51
spilleronsheet said:
A powerful message imbibed
Your words surely will strike
To break the so called traditional norm
The mob mentality running around
Well crafted dear poet
February 1st, 2022 12:51
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words Ben.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Fine and true words Ben.
Andy
February 1st, 2022 02:15
They Hit the Man, and Parade the Woman (my variation of “The Goose and the Common”)
Eugene S. said:
Amen! Had never known of \"The Goose and the Common\" until your poem. Intriguing & thought provoking, no doubt. 👍
January 31st, 2022 12:28
Eugene S. said:
Amen! Had never known of \"The Goose and the Common\" until your poem. Intriguing & thought provoking, no doubt. 👍
January 31st, 2022 12:28
JBG (for Grand-dad)
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, he will always be with you.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben, he will always be with you.
Andy
January 31st, 2022 01:56
JBG (for Grand-dad)
Rozina said:
Wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Enjoyed reading about him and the fun and affection all of you had with him.
January 30th, 2022 22:00
Rozina said:
Wonderful tribute to your grandfather. Enjoyed reading about him and the fun and affection all of you had with him.
January 30th, 2022 22:00
Black and White Cat
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful description dear poet
I felt I could remember all the cats in my garden who visit me
Generations of kittens thrives in my small garden
Ginger to white
White to black
And even white and black like your Hattie
Though one of them ate my birdie
But that’s another story
Well crafted dear poet
January 30th, 2022 13:12
spilleronsheet said:
A very beautiful description dear poet
I felt I could remember all the cats in my garden who visit me
Generations of kittens thrives in my small garden
Ginger to white
White to black
And even white and black like your Hattie
Though one of them ate my birdie
But that’s another story
Well crafted dear poet
January 30th, 2022 13:12
JBG (for Grand-dad)
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely poetry…a warm and sincere tribute to your granddad…actually made me remover my grand mom since i never saw my grand dad…very lovely dear poet…am sure your grand dad would be so proud of you
January 30th, 2022 11:41
spilleronsheet said:
What a lovely poetry…a warm and sincere tribute to your granddad…actually made me remover my grand mom since i never saw my grand dad…very lovely dear poet…am sure your grand dad would be so proud of you
January 30th, 2022 11:41
Black and White Cat
orchidee said:
Good write AS. How can anyone not like cats (and dogs)?!
January 30th, 2022 03:30
orchidee said:
Good write AS. How can anyone not like cats (and dogs)?!
January 30th, 2022 03:30
Black and White Cat
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a bird lover, especially raptors and for each bird a raptor takes for food 400 are taken by \'domestic\' cats to play with.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
I am a bird lover, especially raptors and for each bird a raptor takes for food 400 are taken by \'domestic\' cats to play with.
Andy
January 30th, 2022 01:31
Black and White Cat
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your cat poem. My neighbour has a cat which seems to look at me with disdain! I shall put up a poem about this fellow. Your poem inspired me.
January 29th, 2022 22:33
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your cat poem. My neighbour has a cat which seems to look at me with disdain! I shall put up a poem about this fellow. Your poem inspired me.
January 29th, 2022 22:33
Black and White Cat
Buzz Bray said:
Sweet story and feelings. Nicely put. Good work.
January 29th, 2022 17:00
Buzz Bray said:
Sweet story and feelings. Nicely put. Good work.
January 29th, 2022 17:00
Black and White Cat
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing , liked the read ! And I love cats just dislike them going for birds , but it’s just the way they are
January 29th, 2022 16:04
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Rozina said:
I really enjoyed your walking poem. It would be so nice to go for tea and scones after that walk. Have a good rest for your feet now.
January 27th, 2022 20:57
Up Beacon Hill, Via the Sconce
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
Fay Slimm. said:
Loud applause for the docu-poem and the long walk - - those feet deserve a rest methinks when at last Beacon Hill has been done and as your final line states the road signs are guiding you home - so clearly explained I was there.
January 27th, 2022 16:29
For Rabbie (to the rhythm of \"Auld Lang Syne\")
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Ben on one of the great poets.
Slàinte Mhath
Andy
January 26th, 2022 01:40
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