Comments received on poems by AuburnScribbler
The Joke
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, many treat life as a joke but you and I know that life can be wonderful if we go our own way and ignore the so called leaders.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Ben, many treat life as a joke but you and I know that life can be wonderful if we go our own way and ignore the so called leaders.
Andy
February 27th, 2022 01:41
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
Rozina said:
A horrible morning. Waiting for the latest news now. So much greed and power control.
February 24th, 2022 22:37
Rozina said:
A horrible morning. Waiting for the latest news now. So much greed and power control.
February 24th, 2022 22:37
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, it is such a shame that people like Putin ever existed.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, it is such a shame that people like Putin ever existed.
Andy
February 24th, 2022 01:43
A Message to: Moscow, Russia, 103132
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
That peace is so expensive
And war so cheap
Wish greed could take a vacation
February 23rd, 2022 16:14
spilleronsheet said:
It’s sad
That peace is so expensive
And war so cheap
Wish greed could take a vacation
February 23rd, 2022 16:14
Those Cheques in The Post
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, my friend was working in the Post Office when this happened, he too was accused of stealing money but was obviously innocent and fortunately did not go to prison.
Such a major foul up by the Post Office computer idiots.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Ben, my friend was working in the Post Office when this happened, he too was accused of stealing money but was obviously innocent and fortunately did not go to prison.
Such a major foul up by the Post Office computer idiots.
Andy
February 20th, 2022 02:16
Those Cheques in The Post
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this scandal. Thank you for the information. I shall look up this issue. Horrendous!
February 19th, 2022 18:19
Rozina said:
I have not heard of this scandal. Thank you for the information. I shall look up this issue. Horrendous!
February 19th, 2022 18:19
Dying with My Phone (A Song, to the rhythm of “Living on My Own” by Freddie Mercury
spilleronsheet said:
A unique write dear Auburn
I ended up singing along
Really enjoyed your take on the new savvy tech that’s annoying our lives day by day
February 15th, 2022 15:24
spilleronsheet said:
A unique write dear Auburn
I ended up singing along
Really enjoyed your take on the new savvy tech that’s annoying our lives day by day
February 15th, 2022 15:24
Dying with My Phone (A Song, to the rhythm of “Living on My Own” by Freddie Mercury
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay this was a message to the people. I love songwriting and this piece was beautiful. We need to appreciate life OUTSIDE of technology a little more. 👏💕
February 15th, 2022 11:36
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay this was a message to the people. I love songwriting and this piece was beautiful. We need to appreciate life OUTSIDE of technology a little more. 👏💕
February 15th, 2022 11:36
A God at the Wash Bowl
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Highly expressive metaphor. Bringing to life the invisible poetry right before us. This is a centrepiece of note. Definitely a fave!
February 12th, 2022 05:14
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Highly expressive metaphor. Bringing to life the invisible poetry right before us. This is a centrepiece of note. Definitely a fave!
February 12th, 2022 05:14
A God at the Wash Bowl
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like how you have expressed your thoughts in this ! 🙂 and why can’t it be .. why can’t peoples problems be washed away more of the time
Great poem
February 11th, 2022 01:59
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Really like how you have expressed your thoughts in this ! 🙂 and why can’t it be .. why can’t peoples problems be washed away more of the time
Great poem
February 11th, 2022 01:59
A God at the Wash Bowl
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever thoughts Ben and that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever thoughts Ben and that last line is so meaningful.
Andy
February 11th, 2022 01:40
A God at the Wash Bowl
Rozina said:
This is so enjoyable to read. No fun at all if a dish washer machine was used! I like washing up too and daydream as I do it. Thank you for this.
February 10th, 2022 22:50
Rozina said:
This is so enjoyable to read. No fun at all if a dish washer machine was used! I like washing up too and daydream as I do it. Thank you for this.
February 10th, 2022 22:50
A God at the Wash Bowl
dusk arising said:
If only indeed. Your poetry today is so revealing of your caring character and carefully constructed too. Can I bring round some dishes and sip a cuppa whilst you and Fairy put the world to rights. I bet Maggie Thatcher wasn\'t a \'washer-upper\'.
February 10th, 2022 13:10
dusk arising said:
If only indeed. Your poetry today is so revealing of your caring character and carefully constructed too. Can I bring round some dishes and sip a cuppa whilst you and Fairy put the world to rights. I bet Maggie Thatcher wasn\'t a \'washer-upper\'.
February 10th, 2022 13:10
A God at the Wash Bowl
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was clever. This happens to me all the time, I could be doing any normal domestic chore and then I\'m like, \"yo, this can become something really symbolic\" I\'m so glad you brought your idea into fruition. Good job! 👍🍽
February 10th, 2022 11:48
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow. This was clever. This happens to me all the time, I could be doing any normal domestic chore and then I\'m like, \"yo, this can become something really symbolic\" I\'m so glad you brought your idea into fruition. Good job! 👍🍽
February 10th, 2022 11:48
Hangover (An Acrostic)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Ben, and that picture is really scary, especially when I used to see it in the mirror some mornings many, many years ago.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good acrostic Ben, and that picture is really scary, especially when I used to see it in the mirror some mornings many, many years ago.
Andy
February 8th, 2022 02:36
Hangover (An Acrostic)
spilleronsheet said:
Like you said
It’s not a drink that can cause hangover
Maybe a project
Maybe a relationship
Or maybe simply an addiction
Can cause a hangover
A well crafted acrostic dear poet
February 7th, 2022 16:27
spilleronsheet said:
Like you said
It’s not a drink that can cause hangover
Maybe a project
Maybe a relationship
Or maybe simply an addiction
Can cause a hangover
A well crafted acrostic dear poet
February 7th, 2022 16:27
Hangover (An Acrostic)
dusk arising said:
Gosh what a horrendous face. I found this quite funny because it reminded me of my \'oldest swinger in town\' days in my late 30\'s early 40\'s when occasionally we would party on drink and weed followed by what we called being \'wrecked\' the morning after.
My worst hangovers had me feeling that my brain was loose inside my skull and each time I moved so my brain would bash against the inside of my head... ouch! at the memory.
February 7th, 2022 12:22
dusk arising said:
Gosh what a horrendous face. I found this quite funny because it reminded me of my \'oldest swinger in town\' days in my late 30\'s early 40\'s when occasionally we would party on drink and weed followed by what we called being \'wrecked\' the morning after.
My worst hangovers had me feeling that my brain was loose inside my skull and each time I moved so my brain would bash against the inside of my head... ouch! at the memory.
February 7th, 2022 12:22
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so very true, the bands that play in pubs do not get enough credit for what they do and how good they can be.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:46
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words Ben and so very true, the bands that play in pubs do not get enough credit for what they do and how good they can be.
Andy
February 7th, 2022 01:46
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem, the lyrics are great. So nice to be able to play and sing in a band or to entertain family and friends. I am still practising basic guitar chords.
February 6th, 2022 22:34
Rozina said:
I enjoyed your poem, the lyrics are great. So nice to be able to play and sing in a band or to entertain family and friends. I am still practising basic guitar chords.
February 6th, 2022 22:34
Jukebox Heroes (A Song for the Musician)
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem : lyrics . I bet it’s good to be in a band ?
February 6th, 2022 12:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Great poem : lyrics . I bet it’s good to be in a band ?
February 6th, 2022 12:03
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but when true love happens it is no con.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
True words Ben but when true love happens it is no con.
Andy
February 4th, 2022 01:58
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
dusk arising said:
This is not a new syndrome. It is the stuff of novels and films galore. But quite horrible and it\'s presence taints the genuine people (my own experience).
There will always be the susceptible and yes the plain stupid who get duped.
February 3rd, 2022 15:32
dusk arising said:
This is not a new syndrome. It is the stuff of novels and films galore. But quite horrible and it\'s presence taints the genuine people (my own experience).
There will always be the susceptible and yes the plain stupid who get duped.
February 3rd, 2022 15:32
Stop Falling in Love So Easily!
spilleronsheet said:
It’s genuine
Love shall not be tainted and painted with greed
It may happen over a chance meet
But true is your advice
It shouldn’t happen that easily
Alas
Love is blind
But this tinder and all is really shoddy
February 3rd, 2022 14:12
spilleronsheet said:
It’s genuine
Love shall not be tainted and painted with greed
It may happen over a chance meet
But true is your advice
It shouldn’t happen that easily
Alas
Love is blind
But this tinder and all is really shoddy
February 3rd, 2022 14:12
Passing Notes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ben, unfortunately I tend to agrre with dusk that Boris will survive and if he doesn\'t what horror will replace him.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Ben, unfortunately I tend to agrre with dusk that Boris will survive and if he doesn\'t what horror will replace him.
Andy
February 3rd, 2022 02:30
Passing Notes
Rozina said:
I actually see the \'children\' in our parliament too and other parliaments in the same state of affairs. A few countries (run by women!) are doing better (oops, sorry!)
February 3rd, 2022 00:48
Rozina said:
I actually see the \'children\' in our parliament too and other parliaments in the same state of affairs. A few countries (run by women!) are doing better (oops, sorry!)
February 3rd, 2022 00:48
Passing Notes
spilleronsheet said:
The facade of so called democracy
We thought we were ruling
The reality we still are being ruled
With those money stashed in pockets and guns loaded
Can pass on bullets
Can dally playing while so many are dying
It’s really sad
That monkeys are ruling the nations
The sad truth
Democracy seems unfound
Kidnap or lost in some account
A notice reads
“Lost and found democracy please”
February 2nd, 2022 13:48
spilleronsheet said:
The facade of so called democracy
We thought we were ruling
The reality we still are being ruled
With those money stashed in pockets and guns loaded
Can pass on bullets
Can dally playing while so many are dying
It’s really sad
That monkeys are ruling the nations
The sad truth
Democracy seems unfound
Kidnap or lost in some account
A notice reads
“Lost and found democracy please”
February 2nd, 2022 13:48
« Return to the profile of AuburnScribbler
