Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Those words
Crystal Hope said:

so incredibly moving

September 8th, 2018 19:56

Human Dictionary
Santita said:

Powerful write, PB. Great to read your words again

September 7th, 2018 13:33

Human Dictionary
Goldfinch60 said:

That definition is a great way of purging ones mind.

September 7th, 2018 07:59

War of Words
Poetic Dan said:

Loved the video but your words out shined
As we play our own game not twisted in lies
I feel my power through this verbal war
The pen is stronger than the sword
My stand is taken with a verse

Not in my name or my land
Do I want an army to stand
Responsibility is my own
No royal blood or privilege soul
Is worth more than our glow
When we\'re all on the same boat
If anything we keep them afloat

Always love the passion in your words
Keep reloading and spraying this art
It\'s the only way we\'ll win the spirit battle.




August 27th, 2018 04:02

War of Words
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true in this modern world, the 99% are just not heard and even worse not cared about.

August 27th, 2018 00:57

Writing Block
Goldfinch60 said:

That barrier has now been broken and Calliope is showing you the way once more.

August 6th, 2018 00:18

Writing Block
Poetic Dan said:

A well expressed block, like an athletic person you\'ve pushed through to see even that can\'t stop you! Nothing ever will my friend even if we put down the pen.

Keep keeping it real my friend

August 5th, 2018 15:40

Burning Dreams
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant done, your words always feels so settling no matter the vibration they are in.
There was a wonderful balance to this

July 26th, 2018 12:52

Burning Dreams
Heartwriter said:

A very lovely write tented with a darker side. Enjoyed!

July 25th, 2018 13:21

Reaching For the Sun
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant I felt so much energy in this, my mind felt full but my breath at the end let go of it.
Thank you as always
Look forward to hearing you again

July 24th, 2018 02:08

Reaching For the Sun
little dove said:

this is lovely such fantastic imagery and you have written this poem in such a lovely way

July 23rd, 2018 01:17

What We\'re Made Of
Poetic Dan said:

Magnificent as always
I feel those chains loosening
You\'re so god dam amazing!

July 21st, 2018 03:56

What We\'re Made Of
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, as we go through our lives we learn from experience and remember that experience cannot be taught.

July 21st, 2018 00:27

What We\'re Made Of
Ternic73 said:

wow for 15 years old this is wonderful

July 20th, 2018 18:14

Together, Change Is Possible
E-Poems said:

You\'re brilliant at writing. I cannot wait to read more.

July 14th, 2018 15:25

Together, Change Is Possible
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you my friend these words felt like my life boat today.


July 5th, 2018 08:13

Together, Change Is Possible
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that single voice can change the world if others listen.

June 14th, 2018 01:55

Together, Change Is Possible
minak said:

So so beautiful love your style ✨

June 13th, 2018 15:48

A Fire Must Be Born
GON said:

Rock and roll dude. Be that fire.

June 11th, 2018 18:47

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
Jhe said:

made me think of an interview
that could go really well
and lead to a job
you\'ve always wanted
to do
or go badly
so sadly
the days before are exciting
but nauseating too

June 7th, 2018 05:14

Justice
Jhe said:

great poem :-)
\"And justice, like lightning, appears only in flashes\" is brilliant
thanks for sharing / caring

June 7th, 2018 04:58

Unable to Be Contained
MaddieJ said:

This is a very good. I love the image of the tree. I feel as though you are where I once was... I\'m a \"veteran\" of a similar battle.

June 6th, 2018 18:06

Unable to Be Contained
Poetic Dan said:

Definitely two branches of the same tree my friend.

June 3rd, 2018 12:20

What is Duty
Jane Frye said:

Wow! Awesome poem. I have enjoyed reading all of your pieces. You have a way with words.

June 1st, 2018 01:19

Unable to Be Contained
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, climb that tree your life is ahead of you.

June 1st, 2018 00:55

Justice
Poetic Dan said:

My friend you have done it again and again
Words from my heart that never get played
Inspirationaly as always please keep it up
The change is here, it\'s in our words ;)

May 22nd, 2018 16:44

Justice
Goldfinch60 said:

That last line says it all in our present world. Good write.

May 21st, 2018 00:42

What is Duty
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write PB but duty to others is always there and is shown in respect to all.

April 29th, 2018 00:37

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
DeviLove said:

I can relate! Hopes and dreams when coming true are exciting yet scary at the same time.

April 8th, 2018 20:26

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

May those brightest hopes outshine your darkest fears.

April 1st, 2018 00:30

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