Comments received on poems by poetboy5454



Together, Change Is Possible
E-Poems said:

You\'re brilliant at writing. I cannot wait to read more.

July 14th, 2018 15:25

Together, Change Is Possible
Poetic Dan said:

Thank you my friend these words felt like my life boat today.


July 5th, 2018 08:13

Together, Change Is Possible
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, that single voice can change the world if others listen.

June 14th, 2018 01:55

Together, Change Is Possible
minak said:

So so beautiful love your style ✨

June 13th, 2018 15:48

A Fire Must Be Born
GON said:

Rock and roll dude. Be that fire.

June 11th, 2018 18:47

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
Jhe said:

made me think of an interview
that could go really well
and lead to a job
you\'ve always wanted
to do
or go badly
so sadly
the days before are exciting
but nauseating too

June 7th, 2018 05:14

Justice
Jhe said:

great poem :-)
\"And justice, like lightning, appears only in flashes\" is brilliant
thanks for sharing / caring

June 7th, 2018 04:58

Unable to Be Contained
Duenna Leya said:

This is a very good. I love the image of the tree. I feel as though you are where I once was... I\'m a \"veteran\" of a similar battle.

June 6th, 2018 18:06

Unable to Be Contained
Poetic Dan said:

Definitely two branches of the same tree my friend.

June 3rd, 2018 12:20

What is Duty
Jane Frye said:

Wow! Awesome poem. I have enjoyed reading all of your pieces. You have a way with words.

June 1st, 2018 01:19

Unable to Be Contained
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, climb that tree your life is ahead of you.

June 1st, 2018 00:55

Justice
Poetic Dan said:

My friend you have done it again and again
Words from my heart that never get played
Inspirationaly as always please keep it up
The change is here, it\'s in our words ;)

May 22nd, 2018 16:44

Justice
Goldfinch60 said:

That last line says it all in our present world. Good write.

May 21st, 2018 00:42

What is Duty
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write PB but duty to others is always there and is shown in respect to all.

April 29th, 2018 00:37

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
DeviLove said:

I can relate! Hopes and dreams when coming true are exciting yet scary at the same time.

April 8th, 2018 20:26

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
Goldfinch60 said:

May those brightest hopes outshine your darkest fears.

April 1st, 2018 00:30

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
ElenaGrace said:

This is really pretty, I think we all have that anticipatory feeling for the future

March 31st, 2018 16:23

My Greatest Hope; My Darkest Fear
sylviasearcher said:

It reminds me a little of the sentiment I was trying to capture in my poem?

What do you think?

March 31st, 2018 09:49

Limits Are Deceptions
Lorna said:

It\'s the trying that counts!!! Good one.

March 24th, 2018 14:27

Overcome
winternightsky123 said:

I love this💗sorry I’ve not been active lately x

March 22nd, 2018 12:44

Overcome
Lorna said:

Good one...... it\'s hard work sometimes to fight being afraid .. no one can do it for us!

March 21st, 2018 04:13

Overcome
Goldfinch60 said:

Life\'s play can be both a comedy or a tragedy but if we find the right part freedom is there for everyone.

March 21st, 2018 01:38

Relight the Stars
Goldfinch60 said:

May those stars be relit very soon.

March 19th, 2018 02:29

Improvement
poelove said:

they may soar ahead but still haven\'t fled love this line as it sums up this poem of persistence..
I would however suggest you put a space and separate the last line thereby keeping all verses at four lines in keeping with the poems rhythm.. really enjoyed this piece

March 3rd, 2018 07:22

Improvement
Lorna said:

Let\'s be forever hopeful!

March 3rd, 2018 05:09

Improvement
Goldfinch60 said:

Small steps will get you to your goals, just keep taking them.

March 3rd, 2018 01:35

Chaos Realized
poelove said:

I really enjoy your originality good story lines
again though my my opinion as an example:
butterfly flying with multi colored wings
could be better read
butterfly flying, multicolored wings

only a constructive criticism that\'s what this site is supposed to promote ...also I would not mind hearing your (youthful) opinion on my poems..peace

March 1st, 2018 08:05

Born of A Tear
poelove said:

wonderful poem I love how you focused and expounded on a single tear to create a wave well done!

March 1st, 2018 07:56

Belief
poelove said:

its good to see young writers striving to hone their craft. I love the thought behind this poem they show your potentials but now (since this is a writing sight) I would like to give some constructive criticisms...
Poetry is the best words in their best place. so I would say try to condense your words looking for the best word every time for example the first verse could read

A single word
struggling to contain
vast shifting arrays of emotion\'s breath...bursting the words\' seams

Struggles to hold
waves of frustration, moments of loss---and so on. By removing a lot of the articles words like (the)
just a little advice from an old man.

February 28th, 2018 08:03

Transforming Coal
Lorna said:

A wonderful picture of determination.........

February 24th, 2018 05:10

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