Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
SEIZE AND SEE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DAY BY DAY
And with each passing momment
MORE & MORE
We understand Ourselves
Others & Our Opportunities !
Let us therefore
Leap into the Moment
Change Human Fragilty
Seize the Present as Eternity ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ there is much room for thought
in this Perfect Poem ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2018 17:17
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
DAY BY DAY
And with each passing momment
MORE & MORE
We understand Ourselves
Others & Our Opportunities !
Let us therefore
Leap into the Moment
Change Human Fragilty
Seize the Present as Eternity ~ AMEN
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ there is much room for thought
in this Perfect Poem ~ Yours as always ~ BRIAN
July 5th, 2018 17:17
SEIZE AND SEE.
dusk arising said:
Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with \'now\' before we realise it.
July 5th, 2018 16:22
dusk arising said:
Wow! There\'s lots said in this piece. Now is gone and replaced with \'now\' before we realise it.
July 5th, 2018 16:22
SEIZE AND SEE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Meanwhile, I was trying to \'seize the day\' by understanding what \'Carpe Diem\' meant\'. By the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize. doh!
I get into some daft situations. lol.
July 5th, 2018 11:27
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Meanwhile, I was trying to \'seize the day\' by understanding what \'Carpe Diem\' meant\'. By the time I found out, there was no more day left to seize. doh!
I get into some daft situations. lol.
July 5th, 2018 11:27
SEIZE AND SEE.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH! Let us Faye what a wonderful thought well offered... Bravo 3 litle nuggets there
Thank you
Andrew
July 5th, 2018 09:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
OH! Let us Faye what a wonderful thought well offered... Bravo 3 litle nuggets there
Thank you
Andrew
July 5th, 2018 09:38
ILL-SENT.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super wok may, this always shows how strong the elements are and how weak man is trying to fight them.
July 4th, 2018 10:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super wok may, this always shows how strong the elements are and how weak man is trying to fight them.
July 4th, 2018 10:48
ILL-SENT.
Heartwriter said:
It is sad when beauty turns to disaster. Just a reminder that nature is two-fold. On one hand it holds desire to the eye. In the other it can be hard and cold. Great write dear Fay!
July 4th, 2018 06:53
Heartwriter said:
It is sad when beauty turns to disaster. Just a reminder that nature is two-fold. On one hand it holds desire to the eye. In the other it can be hard and cold. Great write dear Fay!
July 4th, 2018 06:53
SINGLE HANDED
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I’m on my way to join you to enjoy the ride while I can still walk and talk!
I’ve enjoyed reading this lighthearted poem very much!
I’m jumping on that
“cloud sailing to dreams”!
You’re so spot on with...
“It’s never too late to define success.”
Let’s take that ride to buy ourselves
“the starter-kit set.”
~Laura~
July 3rd, 2018 11:03
Laura🌻 said:
My dear Fay,
I’m on my way to join you to enjoy the ride while I can still walk and talk!
I’ve enjoyed reading this lighthearted poem very much!
I’m jumping on that
“cloud sailing to dreams”!
You’re so spot on with...
“It’s never too late to define success.”
Let’s take that ride to buy ourselves
“the starter-kit set.”
~Laura~
July 3rd, 2018 11:03
SINGLE HANDED
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike.
Being of that certain age there are many things on my \'would love to try or do\' list. But i\'m not sure my knees and back want me to get stuck in.
July 3rd, 2018 09:53
dusk arising said:
Oh Fay you do look so cute astride that motorbike.
Being of that certain age there are many things on my \'would love to try or do\' list. But i\'m not sure my knees and back want me to get stuck in.
July 3rd, 2018 09:53
SINGLE HANDED
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, I still learn new things every day and I reach the three score years and ten in a few months.
July 3rd, 2018 07:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good and very true write, I still learn new things every day and I reach the three score years and ten in a few months.
July 3rd, 2018 07:52
SINGLE HANDED
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There\'s nothing like the WI - some are stern, strict, old school - fearful! lol.
July 3rd, 2018 06:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. There\'s nothing like the WI - some are stern, strict, old school - fearful! lol.
July 3rd, 2018 06:15
SINGLE HANDED
Heartwriter said:
It\'s never too late to enjoy life at you capability. Getting older should be fun. We need to look at the elderly as still needed members of society and not a burden. Loved this!
July 3rd, 2018 05:50
Heartwriter said:
It\'s never too late to enjoy life at you capability. Getting older should be fun. We need to look at the elderly as still needed members of society and not a burden. Loved this!
July 3rd, 2018 05:50
SINGLE HANDED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Great advice for all GERIATRICS ~ My Granny has mastered the Computer and is now a Silver Surfer we have put an 18+ block on it ! For computer literate 70+ \"Future learn\" offers a plethora of Superb Short on-line courses to keep their Brains active. Saga offers door to door Age-friendly Cruises (with handsome male escorts ~ my Granny tells me ~ to dance with) and Holidays as do Warners (no KIDS !) So far the NHS provides Pacemakers ~ Physiotherapy ~ Free Joints (not cocaine) There are also plenty of Clubs ~ Probus ~ WI and Church based which cater for the retired. I only hope all these facilties will still be available in 2053 when I will need them and a THREE WHEEL ~ Harley Davidson to ride Route 66 ! As in your PICTURE. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ~ Please check my World Cup Poems while ENGLAND are still in the MIX ~ I\'m still flying the flag ~ Thanks B !
July 3rd, 2018 03:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY ~ Great advice for all GERIATRICS ~ My Granny has mastered the Computer and is now a Silver Surfer we have put an 18+ block on it ! For computer literate 70+ \"Future learn\" offers a plethora of Superb Short on-line courses to keep their Brains active. Saga offers door to door Age-friendly Cruises (with handsome male escorts ~ my Granny tells me ~ to dance with) and Holidays as do Warners (no KIDS !) So far the NHS provides Pacemakers ~ Physiotherapy ~ Free Joints (not cocaine) There are also plenty of Clubs ~ Probus ~ WI and Church based which cater for the retired. I only hope all these facilties will still be available in 2053 when I will need them and a THREE WHEEL ~ Harley Davidson to ride Route 66 ! As in your PICTURE. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN ~ Please check my World Cup Poems while ENGLAND are still in the MIX ~ I\'m still flying the flag ~ Thanks B !
July 3rd, 2018 03:59
Heaven Held.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Dunno if we\'ll hear much thunder. Our clay is melting, i.e. ourselves!
July 2nd, 2018 09:02
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Dunno if we\'ll hear much thunder. Our clay is melting, i.e. ourselves!
July 2nd, 2018 09:02
Heaven Held.
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful Fay! The last verses we\'re my fav. In our miraculous vessel.
July 2nd, 2018 04:56
Heartwriter said:
Beautiful Fay! The last verses we\'re my fav. In our miraculous vessel.
July 2nd, 2018 04:56
REVERIE.
Goldfinch60 said:
That so special time of the day, Described by you,
In your so special way
June 29th, 2018 00:05
Goldfinch60 said:
That so special time of the day, Described by you,
In your so special way
June 29th, 2018 00:05
REVERIE.
Frogspoetry said:
YOUR WORK IS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVE READING YOUR WORK FAY.
June 28th, 2018 22:24
Frogspoetry said:
YOUR WORK IS ALWAYS VERY WELL WRITTEN.I LOVE READING YOUR WORK FAY.
June 28th, 2018 22:24
REVERIE.
dusk arising said:
Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
June 28th, 2018 14:05
dusk arising said:
Exquisite! Just so flipping good! nuff said? Definate favourite.
June 28th, 2018 14:05
REVERIE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope we don\'t dawdle all day, half asleep! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 12:03
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope we don\'t dawdle all day, half asleep! heehee.
June 28th, 2018 12:03
REVERIE.
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
June 28th, 2018 09:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Thank you EPoems for saving this verse in your favourites - so pleased you enjoyed the read.
June 28th, 2018 09:55
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