Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
ATTITUDE.
Lorna said:
I love the baskets swinging between success and failure........
March 20th, 2018 06:54
Lorna said:
I love the baskets swinging between success and failure........
March 20th, 2018 06:54
ATTITUDE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Newtons Law of Motion can be rephrased as in your Poem ~ To every BAD action ~ There can be an equal and opposite GOOD reaction or Love changes Everything ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours ~ with love ~ BRIAN
March 20th, 2018 06:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for sharing FAY ~ Newtons Law of Motion can be rephrased as in your Poem ~ To every BAD action ~ There can be an equal and opposite GOOD reaction or Love changes Everything ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours ~ with love ~ BRIAN
March 20th, 2018 06:47
WAITING.....
Poetic25 said:
fay
A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.
M:)
March 19th, 2018 12:52
Poetic25 said:
fay
A great piece of writing, truly in your style. Really like the story here.
M:)
March 19th, 2018 12:52
WAITING.....
Accidental Poet said:
My favorite part? From beginning to end. The page will always wait for the poet. Great write Fay.
March 19th, 2018 07:46
Accidental Poet said:
My favorite part? From beginning to end. The page will always wait for the poet. Great write Fay.
March 19th, 2018 07:46
WAITING.....
Christina8 said:
An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!
March 19th, 2018 06:15
Christina8 said:
An absolutely fantastic poem Fay! I would have to agree with Laura on my favorite part. Just beautiful!
March 19th, 2018 06:15
WAITING.....
Laura🌻 said:
A fantastic write, Fay!
I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
“Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
AMAZING!!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:06
Laura🌻 said:
A fantastic write, Fay!
I love the entire poem and pic. However, if I had to choose my favorite lines, they would be...
“Lipless the language that fills a blank canvas
as she bequeaths me semantics before they escape.”
AMAZING!!
~Laura~
March 19th, 2018 06:06
WAITING.....
Lorna said:
Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........
March 19th, 2018 06:03
Lorna said:
Beautiful description of the page waiting for your words Fay and you waiting for your muse! Perfect picture to go with it..........
March 19th, 2018 06:03
TROUBLE.
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem my dear Fay! A perfect pic to illustrate your write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:32
Laura🌻 said:
A brilliantly penned poem my dear Fay! A perfect pic to illustrate your write! Enjoyed it!
~Laura~
March 18th, 2018 16:32
TROUBLE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY a masterly symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ! It is a gift especially to see the Poem in the Picture ~ Your verbalisation is perfect ! I have hundreds of PICTURES and I know each on can spawn a Poem ~ I must eat more salmon to stir my muse ! I have an idea for MONDAY and will value you comment ~ OK BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FAY a masterly symbiosis of POEM \'n PIC ! It is a gift especially to see the Poem in the Picture ~ Your verbalisation is perfect ! I have hundreds of PICTURES and I know each on can spawn a Poem ~ I must eat more salmon to stir my muse ! I have an idea for MONDAY and will value you comment ~ OK BRIAN
March 18th, 2018 10:27
TROUBLE.
Michael Edwards said:
A collection of painted picture - think I\'ll stay inland.
March 18th, 2018 09:30
Michael Edwards said:
A collection of painted picture - think I\'ll stay inland.
March 18th, 2018 09:30
TROUBLE.
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope it\'s only mini-trouble - a temporary delay to Spring arriving? Well, tree in front garden has started blossoming again, and the hedgerows!
March 18th, 2018 05:42
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. Hope it\'s only mini-trouble - a temporary delay to Spring arriving? Well, tree in front garden has started blossoming again, and the hedgerows!
March 18th, 2018 05:42
TROUBLE.
Lorna said:
So full of images! I love lemon meringue pie! You have piebalds and duns in here so I\'m off with the horses! A storm may be coming but we\'ll get on our horses, head for home and eat the pie in safety!
March 18th, 2018 04:51
Lorna said:
So full of images! I love lemon meringue pie! You have piebalds and duns in here so I\'m off with the horses! A storm may be coming but we\'ll get on our horses, head for home and eat the pie in safety!
March 18th, 2018 04:51
Self-Imposed.
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those wraiths can certainly be scary.
March 16th, 2018 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write Fay, those wraiths can certainly be scary.
March 16th, 2018 01:37
Self-Imposed.
willyweed said:
first i love that picture Fay and your interesting albeit dreary tale is superb. bravo
March 15th, 2018 09:03
willyweed said:
first i love that picture Fay and your interesting albeit dreary tale is superb. bravo
March 15th, 2018 09:03
Self-Imposed.
Laura🌻 said:
A bit frightening,
my dear Fay!
A powerful write!
So powerful that it
felt like a revisit from
one of my past panic attacks!
~Laura~
March 15th, 2018 07:09
Laura🌻 said:
A bit frightening,
my dear Fay!
A powerful write!
So powerful that it
felt like a revisit from
one of my past panic attacks!
~Laura~
March 15th, 2018 07:09
Self-Imposed.
Michael Edwards said:
really got drawn into this - super work as always Fay.
March 15th, 2018 06:53
Michael Edwards said:
really got drawn into this - super work as always Fay.
March 15th, 2018 06:53
Self-Imposed.
Lorna said:
Oh this conjured up the 1930\'s Dracula with Bela Lugosi - where the women vampires glided around in the castle to NO music....... the scariest movie ever made......\"Children of the night.... what beautiful music they make\"...........
March 15th, 2018 06:20
Lorna said:
Oh this conjured up the 1930\'s Dracula with Bela Lugosi - where the women vampires glided around in the castle to NO music....... the scariest movie ever made......\"Children of the night.... what beautiful music they make\"...........
March 15th, 2018 06:20
BIRTHRIGHT.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY For sharing ten great \"Secrets of Happiness\"
1 Free your SPIRIT
2 Spread your WINGS
3 Nurture POSITIVITY
4 Climb HIGHER
5 Be fervent in ZEAL
6 Feed moods of POSITIVITY
7 A light HEART is a satisfied HEART
8 Each Day is an opportunity for GOOD
9 LOVE & LAUGHTER ~ Ken Dodd\'s Remedy !
10 Replace HURT with JOY ~ AMEN !
You are too generous FAY ~ each homily ~ a perfect Poem
Yours as always ~ BRIAN!
March 14th, 2018 17:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FAY For sharing ten great \"Secrets of Happiness\"
1 Free your SPIRIT
2 Spread your WINGS
3 Nurture POSITIVITY
4 Climb HIGHER
5 Be fervent in ZEAL
6 Feed moods of POSITIVITY
7 A light HEART is a satisfied HEART
8 Each Day is an opportunity for GOOD
9 LOVE & LAUGHTER ~ Ken Dodd\'s Remedy !
10 Replace HURT with JOY ~ AMEN !
You are too generous FAY ~ each homily ~ a perfect Poem
Yours as always ~ BRIAN!
March 14th, 2018 17:58
No Time.
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. As it all sank in I began well up, thank your sharing a beautifully hard write. You are wonderful soul of light
March 14th, 2018 17:36
Poetic Dan said:
Wow.. As it all sank in I began well up, thank your sharing a beautifully hard write. You are wonderful soul of light
March 14th, 2018 17:36
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