Comments received on poems by dusk arising
what makes a poet?
Fay Slimm. said:
How perfectly true these winsome and wise words - poets indeed have great need inside to to recount their view of life......... an delightfully good read D.A.
February 20th, 2019 08:07
Fay Slimm. said:
How perfectly true these winsome and wise words - poets indeed have great need inside to to recount their view of life......... an delightfully good read D.A.
February 20th, 2019 08:07
scars
Amherrera1190 said:
I enjoyed your poem it resonates with me.🖤🖤🖤 nice write
February 19th, 2019 14:44
Amherrera1190 said:
I enjoyed your poem it resonates with me.🖤🖤🖤 nice write
February 19th, 2019 14:44
Raft of reeds
Neville said:
I am with you on this one.. a good reed...... N
February 17th, 2019 13:34
Neville said:
I am with you on this one.. a good reed...... N
February 17th, 2019 13:34
lustfully, greedily
Neville said:
Delicious DA.. I would almost certainly take 6 bottles and bin 69....you cleva geeza you.... Neville
February 16th, 2019 09:57
Neville said:
Delicious DA.. I would almost certainly take 6 bottles and bin 69....you cleva geeza you.... Neville
February 16th, 2019 09:57
every now and again
Goldfinch60 said:
Those recollections from the past often waken your dreams.
February 16th, 2019 01:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Those recollections from the past often waken your dreams.
February 16th, 2019 01:25
every now and again
Neville said:
wonderful & simply so... that\'s the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....
February 15th, 2019 05:02
Neville said:
wonderful & simply so... that\'s the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....
February 15th, 2019 05:02
every now and again
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon\'s poem of yesterday - - a poignant few lines.
February 15th, 2019 04:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon\'s poem of yesterday - - a poignant few lines.
February 15th, 2019 04:10
right back at me
Neville said:
I dare anyone to say they did not smile while reading these words... Neville
February 14th, 2019 09:12
Neville said:
I dare anyone to say they did not smile while reading these words... Neville
February 14th, 2019 09:12
pictures
Neville said:
Blimey..
you got quite a few strings to that bow of yours aint\'cha ... quite write too... amazing voice... I always wanted to learn the sax.. hats off to you ... .. Neville
February 13th, 2019 14:45
Neville said:
Blimey..
you got quite a few strings to that bow of yours aint\'cha ... quite write too... amazing voice... I always wanted to learn the sax.. hats off to you ... .. Neville
February 13th, 2019 14:45
graft
Neville said:
Tis a hard life..
tho only short.. I bet this took a lotta thought.. certainly enjoyed... Neville
February 13th, 2019 06:34
Neville said:
Tis a hard life..
tho only short.. I bet this took a lotta thought.. certainly enjoyed... Neville
February 13th, 2019 06:34
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Classic fourth line puncher
Excellent D
I wij \\i hsd our comedic talent
February 12th, 2019 07:40
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Classic fourth line puncher
Excellent D
I wij \\i hsd our comedic talent
February 12th, 2019 07:40
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Neville said:
I\'m with Michael on this, or should I say these.....
February 12th, 2019 04:51
Neville said:
I\'m with Michael on this, or should I say these.....
February 12th, 2019 04:51
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
orchidee said:
It\'s too much for me, of course - swoon! lol.
February 12th, 2019 03:42
orchidee said:
It\'s too much for me, of course - swoon! lol.
February 12th, 2019 03:42
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Michael Edwards said:
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15
A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\'
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more please.
February 11th, 2019 12:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more please.
February 11th, 2019 12:55
A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\'
Neville said:
Dream on squire ... and keep em coming.. ta to Michael too, for providing initial inspiration..... N
February 11th, 2019 09:40
Neville said:
Dream on squire ... and keep em coming.. ta to Michael too, for providing initial inspiration..... N
February 11th, 2019 09:40
scars
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant d a. So true but it takes a very very dear friend to see those scars.
February 11th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant d a. So true but it takes a very very dear friend to see those scars.
February 11th, 2019 01:42
scars
Michael Edwards said:
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden - having said that I am able to compartmentalise the past and close doors behind me - not everyone is able to do that.
February 10th, 2019 06:21
Michael Edwards said:
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden - having said that I am able to compartmentalise the past and close doors behind me - not everyone is able to do that.
February 10th, 2019 06:21
scars
Neville said:
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted one of my own scribbles with the title \'Scars\'.... aint that spooky... Anyway, the inspiration for this is evident .. and enjoyed truly ... Neville
February 10th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted one of my own scribbles with the title \'Scars\'.... aint that spooky... Anyway, the inspiration for this is evident .. and enjoyed truly ... Neville
February 10th, 2019 06:00
scars
dusk arising said:
You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
February 10th, 2019 05:47
dusk arising said:
You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
February 10th, 2019 05:47
scars
Poetic Dan said:
The role I put on myself is sometimes to high but I\'ve never hidden a scar neither should anyone.
Thank you for this wonderful piece, together we walk with our alone feet.
Much peace and respect
February 10th, 2019 05:36
Poetic Dan said:
The role I put on myself is sometimes to high but I\'ve never hidden a scar neither should anyone.
Thank you for this wonderful piece, together we walk with our alone feet.
Much peace and respect
February 10th, 2019 05:36
tower
Neville said:
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each building on its poetic predecessor and maintaining momentum, story-line and appeal right through to the eventual mystical almost mythical conclusion .... Neville
February 9th, 2019 10:08
Neville said:
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each building on its poetic predecessor and maintaining momentum, story-line and appeal right through to the eventual mystical almost mythical conclusion .... Neville
February 9th, 2019 10:08
quench
Neville said:
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel compelled to report back to you my findings, feelings and opinion on this poetic little gem... Firstly, I congratulate you sir.. I am really impressed with how this sounds in my head when I read it through, which I have done now several times... the flow is great and, the language spot on and the words look pretty on the page where they fit comfortably and belong... Am glad you drew my attention to this work of yours.... Neville
February 9th, 2019 09:55
Neville said:
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel compelled to report back to you my findings, feelings and opinion on this poetic little gem... Firstly, I congratulate you sir.. I am really impressed with how this sounds in my head when I read it through, which I have done now several times... the flow is great and, the language spot on and the words look pretty on the page where they fit comfortably and belong... Am glad you drew my attention to this work of yours.... Neville
February 9th, 2019 09:55
Renzi
luckykarma said:
always such a hollow feeling to lose someone we haven\'t even met. hope all is well.
February 8th, 2019 15:16
luckykarma said:
always such a hollow feeling to lose someone we haven\'t even met. hope all is well.
February 8th, 2019 15:16
riddance
Neville said:
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for what in my own view is a slight flaw and that would be the concluding line... having stated that, I cant for the life of me think of a better one... and believe me, that\'s gonna bug me..All Good Things... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:34
Neville said:
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for what in my own view is a slight flaw and that would be the concluding line... having stated that, I cant for the life of me think of a better one... and believe me, that\'s gonna bug me..All Good Things... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:34
right back at me
Neville said:
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50
Neville said:
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50
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