Comments received on poems by dusk arising
every now and again
Neville said:
wonderful & simply so... that\'s the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....
February 15th, 2019 05:02
Neville said:
wonderful & simply so... that\'s the best kind of wonderful, I reckon....
February 15th, 2019 05:02
every now and again
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon\'s poem of yesterday - - a poignant few lines.
February 15th, 2019 04:10
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words D.A. enrich the theme begun by Jon\'s poem of yesterday - - a poignant few lines.
February 15th, 2019 04:10
right back at me
Neville said:
I dare anyone to say they did not smile while reading these words... Neville
February 14th, 2019 09:12
Neville said:
I dare anyone to say they did not smile while reading these words... Neville
February 14th, 2019 09:12
pictures
Neville said:
Blimey..
you got quite a few strings to that bow of yours aint\'cha ... quite write too... amazing voice... I always wanted to learn the sax.. hats off to you ... .. Neville
February 13th, 2019 14:45
Neville said:
Blimey..
you got quite a few strings to that bow of yours aint\'cha ... quite write too... amazing voice... I always wanted to learn the sax.. hats off to you ... .. Neville
February 13th, 2019 14:45
graft
Neville said:
Tis a hard life..
tho only short.. I bet this took a lotta thought.. certainly enjoyed... Neville
February 13th, 2019 06:34
Neville said:
Tis a hard life..
tho only short.. I bet this took a lotta thought.. certainly enjoyed... Neville
February 13th, 2019 06:34
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Classic fourth line puncher
Excellent D
I wij \\i hsd our comedic talent
February 12th, 2019 07:40
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Classic fourth line puncher
Excellent D
I wij \\i hsd our comedic talent
February 12th, 2019 07:40
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Neville said:
I\'m with Michael on this, or should I say these.....
February 12th, 2019 04:51
Neville said:
I\'m with Michael on this, or should I say these.....
February 12th, 2019 04:51
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
orchidee said:
It\'s too much for me, of course - swoon! lol.
February 12th, 2019 03:42
orchidee said:
It\'s too much for me, of course - swoon! lol.
February 12th, 2019 03:42
More \\\\\\\'Mary had\\\\\\\'
Michael Edwards said:
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15
Michael Edwards said:
Just brill - keep them coming - set me up for the day.
February 12th, 2019 03:15
A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\'
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more please.
February 11th, 2019 12:55
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff and good for you - round of applause and a hearty hey ho more please.
February 11th, 2019 12:55
A few \\\\\\\'Mary hads\\\\\\\'
Neville said:
Dream on squire ... and keep em coming.. ta to Michael too, for providing initial inspiration..... N
February 11th, 2019 09:40
Neville said:
Dream on squire ... and keep em coming.. ta to Michael too, for providing initial inspiration..... N
February 11th, 2019 09:40
scars
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant d a. So true but it takes a very very dear friend to see those scars.
February 11th, 2019 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant d a. So true but it takes a very very dear friend to see those scars.
February 11th, 2019 01:42
scars
Michael Edwards said:
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden - having said that I am able to compartmentalise the past and close doors behind me - not everyone is able to do that.
February 10th, 2019 06:21
Michael Edwards said:
lovely rounded construct and we carry our \'scars\' which we keep hidden - having said that I am able to compartmentalise the past and close doors behind me - not everyone is able to do that.
February 10th, 2019 06:21
scars
Neville said:
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted one of my own scribbles with the title \'Scars\'.... aint that spooky... Anyway, the inspiration for this is evident .. and enjoyed truly ... Neville
February 10th, 2019 06:00
Neville said:
I dunno what\'s going on my friend.. would you believe it, I almost posted one of my own scribbles with the title \'Scars\'.... aint that spooky... Anyway, the inspiration for this is evident .. and enjoyed truly ... Neville
February 10th, 2019 06:00
scars
dusk arising said:
You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
February 10th, 2019 05:47
dusk arising said:
You are a true and genuine individual. Thank you for reading and comment.
February 10th, 2019 05:47
scars
Poetic Dan said:
The role I put on myself is sometimes to high but I\'ve never hidden a scar neither should anyone.
Thank you for this wonderful piece, together we walk with our alone feet.
Much peace and respect
February 10th, 2019 05:36
Poetic Dan said:
The role I put on myself is sometimes to high but I\'ve never hidden a scar neither should anyone.
Thank you for this wonderful piece, together we walk with our alone feet.
Much peace and respect
February 10th, 2019 05:36
tower
Neville said:
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each building on its poetic predecessor and maintaining momentum, story-line and appeal right through to the eventual mystical almost mythical conclusion .... Neville
February 9th, 2019 10:08
Neville said:
A very impressive poem here I must say.. Five grand stanza\'s each building on its poetic predecessor and maintaining momentum, story-line and appeal right through to the eventual mystical almost mythical conclusion .... Neville
February 9th, 2019 10:08
quench
Neville said:
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel compelled to report back to you my findings, feelings and opinion on this poetic little gem... Firstly, I congratulate you sir.. I am really impressed with how this sounds in my head when I read it through, which I have done now several times... the flow is great and, the language spot on and the words look pretty on the page where they fit comfortably and belong... Am glad you drew my attention to this work of yours.... Neville
February 9th, 2019 09:55
Neville said:
Now then DA having finally accepted the dare ya set me yesterday, I feel compelled to report back to you my findings, feelings and opinion on this poetic little gem... Firstly, I congratulate you sir.. I am really impressed with how this sounds in my head when I read it through, which I have done now several times... the flow is great and, the language spot on and the words look pretty on the page where they fit comfortably and belong... Am glad you drew my attention to this work of yours.... Neville
February 9th, 2019 09:55
Renzi
luckykarma said:
always such a hollow feeling to lose someone we haven\'t even met. hope all is well.
February 8th, 2019 15:16
luckykarma said:
always such a hollow feeling to lose someone we haven\'t even met. hope all is well.
February 8th, 2019 15:16
riddance
Neville said:
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for what in my own view is a slight flaw and that would be the concluding line... having stated that, I cant for the life of me think of a better one... and believe me, that\'s gonna bug me..All Good Things... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:34
Neville said:
Okay DA.. here goes.. I Like everything about this little gem, except for what in my own view is a slight flaw and that would be the concluding line... having stated that, I cant for the life of me think of a better one... and believe me, that\'s gonna bug me..All Good Things... Neville
February 8th, 2019 12:34
right back at me
Neville said:
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50
Neville said:
and just for the record, I could not read this without smiling.... Neville
February 6th, 2019 12:50
he caught her
Neville said:
This is clearly the poem you referred to recently.. in your review comments on my poem Blink.. Then you said it is not one of your best.. I beg to differ, I think it is sound and otherwise most original... Neville
February 4th, 2019 14:14
Neville said:
This is clearly the poem you referred to recently.. in your review comments on my poem Blink.. Then you said it is not one of your best.. I beg to differ, I think it is sound and otherwise most original... Neville
February 4th, 2019 14:14
that i may face you
kevin browne said:
Chaos is life, life is chaos, whichever path is taken then be prepared for it to come and cause the inner self-afflictions which never would occur until they really happen. However, there are moments of chaos tiring to let leave a rest for you heart. A lovely thought provoking chaotic poem.
February 4th, 2019 01:31
kevin browne said:
Chaos is life, life is chaos, whichever path is taken then be prepared for it to come and cause the inner self-afflictions which never would occur until they really happen. However, there are moments of chaos tiring to let leave a rest for you heart. A lovely thought provoking chaotic poem.
February 4th, 2019 01:31
promise
Neville said:
An emotionally charged poem indeed, made even more so by virtue of the fact it is clearly about a child\'s significant, tragic and otherwise unexpected loss, furthermore, the impact is accentuated by the narrative appearing to be expressed by the bereaved child\'s daddy...... Neville
February 2nd, 2019 07:13
Neville said:
An emotionally charged poem indeed, made even more so by virtue of the fact it is clearly about a child\'s significant, tragic and otherwise unexpected loss, furthermore, the impact is accentuated by the narrative appearing to be expressed by the bereaved child\'s daddy...... Neville
February 2nd, 2019 07:13
arms trade
dusk arising said:
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my reader out of their western comfort zone and to think.
I believe that short pieces are more powerful than a multi verse piece \"less is more\".
February 1st, 2019 12:39
dusk arising said:
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my reader out of their western comfort zone and to think.
I believe that short pieces are more powerful than a multi verse piece \"less is more\".
February 1st, 2019 12:39
arms trade
Suresh said:
We, in the West, get enraged, and rightly so, when incidents like Sandy Hook happen, and its impact on especially the young.
But, there are similar incidents, a million times more deadly, taking place, day after day, when bombs rain in from the sky, or massacres by radicals. Their trauma is unthinkable, unbearable and eternally scarring. We, humans, are our worst enemies, and in spite of being the intelligent species, we remain ignorant.
February 1st, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
We, in the West, get enraged, and rightly so, when incidents like Sandy Hook happen, and its impact on especially the young.
But, there are similar incidents, a million times more deadly, taking place, day after day, when bombs rain in from the sky, or massacres by radicals. Their trauma is unthinkable, unbearable and eternally scarring. We, humans, are our worst enemies, and in spite of being the intelligent species, we remain ignorant.
February 1st, 2019 11:21
peace
Neville said:
something I dream about, something I strive for in my own way... nicely put...
January 31st, 2019 16:25
Neville said:
something I dream about, something I strive for in my own way... nicely put...
January 31st, 2019 16:25
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