Comments received on poems by dusk arising
silent night
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Dusk. Enjoyed seeing an orchestral percussion instrument make its way into your poem.
December 10th, 2018 00:18
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Great write Dusk. Enjoyed seeing an orchestral percussion instrument make its way into your poem.
December 10th, 2018 00:18
john
Goldfinch60 said:
A special song by John Lennon, thank you for reminding us.
That last verse is so special - if only?
December 9th, 2018 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
A special song by John Lennon, thank you for reminding us.
That last verse is so special - if only?
December 9th, 2018 02:09
john
Michael Edwards said:
The words are truly inspired - thanks for posting them.
December 8th, 2018 11:36
Michael Edwards said:
The words are truly inspired - thanks for posting them.
December 8th, 2018 11:36
a lie became noble
Mugsdaddy said:
wonderful piece I was truly moved and humbled. Mugs...
December 8th, 2018 05:27
Mugsdaddy said:
wonderful piece I was truly moved and humbled. Mugs...
December 8th, 2018 05:27
a lie became noble
Mugsdaddy said:
Having served i feel these words as they roll down my cheek your form nearly perfect, your words oh so sleek. they bring back a time when Death stood by my side, no need to run nowhere to hide. but life is quite funny as to serve I was proud, as millions cry FREEDOM without words yet so loud.
December 8th, 2018 05:25
Mugsdaddy said:
Having served i feel these words as they roll down my cheek your form nearly perfect, your words oh so sleek. they bring back a time when Death stood by my side, no need to run nowhere to hide. but life is quite funny as to serve I was proud, as millions cry FREEDOM without words yet so loud.
December 8th, 2018 05:25
sleeper
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi fun alien , take us with you to Mars on an extraterrestrial ride. I so enjoyed your imaginative evocative muse here that I can relate to sometimes since I feel alienated everywhere. Haven\'t met my type yet ah. Even my hubby is from Venus lol. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:32
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi fun alien , take us with you to Mars on an extraterrestrial ride. I so enjoyed your imaginative evocative muse here that I can relate to sometimes since I feel alienated everywhere. Haven\'t met my type yet ah. Even my hubby is from Venus lol. Kudos.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:32
sleeper
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi fun alien , take us with you to Mars on an extraterrestrial ride. I so enjoyed your imaginative evocative muse here that I can relate to sometimes since I feel alienated everywhere. Haven\'t met my type yet ah. Even my hubby is from Venus lol. Kudos for this fantastic poem.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Hi fun alien , take us with you to Mars on an extraterrestrial ride. I so enjoyed your imaginative evocative muse here that I can relate to sometimes since I feel alienated everywhere. Haven\'t met my type yet ah. Even my hubby is from Venus lol. Kudos for this fantastic poem.
Pleez do add your thoughts/comment/review under my newest poem too. Always nice to say hi to all here via comments.
December 6th, 2018 03:30
sleeper
Goldfinch60 said:
They will not come until homo sapiens has destroyed this planet, then they will come and show how good life should be. See you in a while Alienman.
November 25th, 2018 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
They will not come until homo sapiens has destroyed this planet, then they will come and show how good life should be. See you in a while Alienman.
November 25th, 2018 01:21
sleeper
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m intrigued - I see the word \'soon\' - so will all become clear - Mind you I sometimes wonder if I am of another race for all the reasons I\'ve mentioned before here on MPS.
November 24th, 2018 05:37
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m intrigued - I see the word \'soon\' - so will all become clear - Mind you I sometimes wonder if I am of another race for all the reasons I\'ve mentioned before here on MPS.
November 24th, 2018 05:37
sleeper
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s E.T. He went home, but is returning! heehee.
November 24th, 2018 03:22
orchidee said:
Oohh it\'s E.T. He went home, but is returning! heehee.
November 24th, 2018 03:22
worth repeating
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - all war is obscene - that\'s woth repeating - I said ....... Today is indeed a special day.
November 11th, 2018 02:40
Michael Edwards said:
Yes indeed - all war is obscene - that\'s woth repeating - I said ....... Today is indeed a special day.
November 11th, 2018 02:40
a lie became noble
Christina8 said:
This is a really well written and powerful tribute, dusk! Thanks for sharing!
November 9th, 2018 13:22
Christina8 said:
This is a really well written and powerful tribute, dusk! Thanks for sharing!
November 9th, 2018 13:22
a lie became noble
Debsspot said:
Powefull words. The more we think about the sacrifice and what war really means the better.
Respect to all who have have served and those that currently serve.
November 9th, 2018 05:46
Debsspot said:
Powefull words. The more we think about the sacrifice and what war really means the better.
Respect to all who have have served and those that currently serve.
November 9th, 2018 05:46
persistence
Poetic Dan said:
This brought a tear to my eye, thank you for this writing.
October 20th, 2018 10:35
Poetic Dan said:
This brought a tear to my eye, thank you for this writing.
October 20th, 2018 10:35
silent night
marijoy said:
Nostalgic, emotional from the beginning to the end. Enjoyed the reading.
October 17th, 2018 19:35
marijoy said:
Nostalgic, emotional from the beginning to the end. Enjoyed the reading.
October 17th, 2018 19:35
silent night
Christina8 said:
What a stunning poem! Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it!
October 11th, 2018 20:40
Christina8 said:
What a stunning poem! Very descriptive and heartfelt. Loved it!
October 11th, 2018 20:40
silent night
kevin browne said:
Perfection on a piece of paper. I\'m quite taken aback from the beauty in it from the first word till the last.
October 11th, 2018 12:28
kevin browne said:
Perfection on a piece of paper. I\'m quite taken aback from the beauty in it from the first word till the last.
October 11th, 2018 12:28
persistence
orchidee said:
It happens \'behind closed doors\'. Makes it worse if under the guise of \'religion\'.
September 27th, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
It happens \'behind closed doors\'. Makes it worse if under the guise of \'religion\'.
September 27th, 2018 01:52
harmony revealed
Fay Slimm. said:
Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace can heal us. Great read.
September 14th, 2018 02:31
Fay Slimm. said:
Spot on and with so few words - agree wholeheartedly that is where peace can heal us. Great read.
September 14th, 2018 02:31
harmony revealed
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic dusk. Unfortunately, I didn\'t get the hang of it. It didn\'t heal me. I went in some woods and walked into a tree. It would have helped if I had not closed my eyes in meditation at the time, while walking. doh!
September 14th, 2018 01:28
orchidee said:
A lovely write and pic dusk. Unfortunately, I didn\'t get the hang of it. It didn\'t heal me. I went in some woods and walked into a tree. It would have helped if I had not closed my eyes in meditation at the time, while walking. doh!
September 14th, 2018 01:28
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