Comments received on poems by dusk arising
he caught her
Neville said:
This is clearly the poem you referred to recently.. in your review comments on my poem Blink.. Then you said it is not one of your best.. I beg to differ, I think it is sound and otherwise most original... Neville
February 4th, 2019 14:14
Neville said:
This is clearly the poem you referred to recently.. in your review comments on my poem Blink.. Then you said it is not one of your best.. I beg to differ, I think it is sound and otherwise most original... Neville
February 4th, 2019 14:14
that i may face you
kevin browne said:
Chaos is life, life is chaos, whichever path is taken then be prepared for it to come and cause the inner self-afflictions which never would occur until they really happen. However, there are moments of chaos tiring to let leave a rest for you heart. A lovely thought provoking chaotic poem.
February 4th, 2019 01:31
kevin browne said:
Chaos is life, life is chaos, whichever path is taken then be prepared for it to come and cause the inner self-afflictions which never would occur until they really happen. However, there are moments of chaos tiring to let leave a rest for you heart. A lovely thought provoking chaotic poem.
February 4th, 2019 01:31
promise
Neville said:
An emotionally charged poem indeed, made even more so by virtue of the fact it is clearly about a child\'s significant, tragic and otherwise unexpected loss, furthermore, the impact is accentuated by the narrative appearing to be expressed by the bereaved child\'s daddy...... Neville
February 2nd, 2019 07:13
Neville said:
An emotionally charged poem indeed, made even more so by virtue of the fact it is clearly about a child\'s significant, tragic and otherwise unexpected loss, furthermore, the impact is accentuated by the narrative appearing to be expressed by the bereaved child\'s daddy...... Neville
February 2nd, 2019 07:13
arms trade
dusk arising said:
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my reader out of their western comfort zone and to think.
I believe that short pieces are more powerful than a multi verse piece \"less is more\".
February 1st, 2019 12:39
dusk arising said:
That is exactly where i was coming from in writing this. Trying to take my reader out of their western comfort zone and to think.
I believe that short pieces are more powerful than a multi verse piece \"less is more\".
February 1st, 2019 12:39
arms trade
Suresh said:
We, in the West, get enraged, and rightly so, when incidents like Sandy Hook happen, and its impact on especially the young.
But, there are similar incidents, a million times more deadly, taking place, day after day, when bombs rain in from the sky, or massacres by radicals. Their trauma is unthinkable, unbearable and eternally scarring. We, humans, are our worst enemies, and in spite of being the intelligent species, we remain ignorant.
February 1st, 2019 11:21
Suresh said:
We, in the West, get enraged, and rightly so, when incidents like Sandy Hook happen, and its impact on especially the young.
But, there are similar incidents, a million times more deadly, taking place, day after day, when bombs rain in from the sky, or massacres by radicals. Their trauma is unthinkable, unbearable and eternally scarring. We, humans, are our worst enemies, and in spite of being the intelligent species, we remain ignorant.
February 1st, 2019 11:21
peace
Neville said:
something I dream about, something I strive for in my own way... nicely put...
January 31st, 2019 16:25
Neville said:
something I dream about, something I strive for in my own way... nicely put...
January 31st, 2019 16:25
a lie became noble
down the rabbithole said:
This is fantastic... I really felt the words and hope this is a published poem as it really should be!
January 31st, 2019 10:33
down the rabbithole said:
This is fantastic... I really felt the words and hope this is a published poem as it really should be!
January 31st, 2019 10:33
Aretha
Neville said:
a delightful dedication and am sure many share your point of view.... N
January 30th, 2019 10:01
Neville said:
a delightful dedication and am sure many share your point of view.... N
January 30th, 2019 10:01
Renzi
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what a heartwarming compassionate poem encourage a fellow poetess. I do so hope she comes back coz I heard writing is therapy sometimes. Kudos for the rhyming as well.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
January 28th, 2019 13:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow what a heartwarming compassionate poem encourage a fellow poetess. I do so hope she comes back coz I heard writing is therapy sometimes. Kudos for the rhyming as well.
Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
January 28th, 2019 13:18
Fishing Rod
Neville said:
Nice bit o prose & a darn good play on words too.......
January 27th, 2019 14:43
Neville said:
Nice bit o prose & a darn good play on words too.......
January 27th, 2019 14:43
without a sound
Neville said:
am still smiling with a warm glow.. and I lost count of the times I have re-run these words in my head... N
January 25th, 2019 05:51
Neville said:
am still smiling with a warm glow.. and I lost count of the times I have re-run these words in my head... N
January 25th, 2019 05:51
into the haze
Neville said:
these words tick all the right boxes and then some...
January 24th, 2019 17:35
Neville said:
these words tick all the right boxes and then some...
January 24th, 2019 17:35
Renzi
Goldfinch60 said:
I had also been wondering about her recently, I do hope she is OK.
Very fine write about a lovely lady and poet.
January 24th, 2019 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
I had also been wondering about her recently, I do hope she is OK.
Very fine write about a lovely lady and poet.
January 24th, 2019 01:23
Renzi
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
I sincerely hope she’s okay!
Your write made me think of Antonio (AV) and his unfortunate demise!
What made you think of her?
~Laura~
January 23rd, 2019 11:43
Laura🌻 said:
dusk arising,
I sincerely hope she’s okay!
Your write made me think of Antonio (AV) and his unfortunate demise!
What made you think of her?
~Laura~
January 23rd, 2019 11:43
renzi
dusk arising said:
And thank you very much for reminding me of Renzi. i am going to re-publish this same poem again today in a plea to those on here who know how to contact her. Hoping we may see some of her work again and hear of her well being.
January 23rd, 2019 07:43
dusk arising said:
And thank you very much for reminding me of Renzi. i am going to re-publish this same poem again today in a plea to those on here who know how to contact her. Hoping we may see some of her work again and hear of her well being.
January 23rd, 2019 07:43
renzi
Neville said:
I never knew her, or had the pleasure of her words but I have known a few Renzi\'s and I don\'t mean that to appear flippant... There are some folk who for one reason or another, tend to have a marked, even profound effect on those who encounter them during the course of their lives... some of these same folk have personal issues that may serve as a creative driver.. whatever the case, Renzi is a much admired individual whose talent obviously brought a little sunshine into the lives of so many... I can only conclude by wishing her well and emphasising that whilst eating disorders are never, if ever resolved overnight, I have personally worked with so many over the years who have responded positively to appropriate interventions and support.... Oh\' and thanks Dusk Arising for introducing me to a fine fellow poet..... Neville
January 23rd, 2019 04:06
Neville said:
I never knew her, or had the pleasure of her words but I have known a few Renzi\'s and I don\'t mean that to appear flippant... There are some folk who for one reason or another, tend to have a marked, even profound effect on those who encounter them during the course of their lives... some of these same folk have personal issues that may serve as a creative driver.. whatever the case, Renzi is a much admired individual whose talent obviously brought a little sunshine into the lives of so many... I can only conclude by wishing her well and emphasising that whilst eating disorders are never, if ever resolved overnight, I have personally worked with so many over the years who have responded positively to appropriate interventions and support.... Oh\' and thanks Dusk Arising for introducing me to a fine fellow poet..... Neville
January 23rd, 2019 04:06
keeping it to myself
kevin browne said:
i see the love fading away from you in your work. Normally when this happens the intentions of what you\'ve lost will come back sometime. Deepening is the thought of how to change the aspect of something feeling sad, lost, and lonely can actually turn out to be something unsuspectingly, and surprisingly good because love mostly returns upon a summers day when you least expect it. One day the clouds will clear through the sunlight of your perception to reveal a landscape of thought so intrinsically beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Take your losses in your hand and throw them far away. That way you can catch your new falling star to brighten up your belief in love.
January 22nd, 2019 19:19
kevin browne said:
i see the love fading away from you in your work. Normally when this happens the intentions of what you\'ve lost will come back sometime. Deepening is the thought of how to change the aspect of something feeling sad, lost, and lonely can actually turn out to be something unsuspectingly, and surprisingly good because love mostly returns upon a summers day when you least expect it. One day the clouds will clear through the sunlight of your perception to reveal a landscape of thought so intrinsically beautiful that you will almost declare yourself a God. Take your losses in your hand and throw them far away. That way you can catch your new falling star to brighten up your belief in love.
January 22nd, 2019 19:19
woman
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this, your first poem published here on My Poetic Side... maybe my visit will encourage even more to follow.. good poetry should be read, and read again... Neville
January 17th, 2019 09:27
Neville said:
I thoroughly enjoyed this, your first poem published here on My Poetic Side... maybe my visit will encourage even more to follow.. good poetry should be read, and read again... Neville
January 17th, 2019 09:27
harmony revealed
Neville said:
there is certainly something very therapeutic about the countryside.. a nice little thought expressed in a poem...
January 16th, 2019 15:47
Neville said:
there is certainly something very therapeutic about the countryside.. a nice little thought expressed in a poem...
January 16th, 2019 15:47
silent night
Neville said:
interesting, tell me ..when did you last see a butterfly smile
January 15th, 2019 03:38
Neville said:
interesting, tell me ..when did you last see a butterfly smile
January 15th, 2019 03:38
persistence
Neville said:
the truth hurts, and when it\'s told well, it hurts even more... told as is.. and told well sir.. Neville
January 13th, 2019 14:12
Neville said:
the truth hurts, and when it\'s told well, it hurts even more... told as is.. and told well sir.. Neville
January 13th, 2019 14:12
a lie became noble
Neville said:
this is an excellent tribute to all those who made the supreme sacrifice and of course all those who were prepared to do so, but were able to return.... N
January 11th, 2019 11:41
Neville said:
this is an excellent tribute to all those who made the supreme sacrifice and of course all those who were prepared to do so, but were able to return.... N
January 11th, 2019 11:41
silent night
Neville said:
I can not tell a lie... this was thoroughly enjoyed... a delicious little read on my return to these shores and true...
January 9th, 2019 06:45
Neville said:
I can not tell a lie... this was thoroughly enjoyed... a delicious little read on my return to these shores and true...
January 9th, 2019 06:45
that i may face you
orchidee said:
Yes, when we\'re indoors, the world is all \'out there\'. Sometimes things are not as bad as we may think they will be.
January 3rd, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
Yes, when we\'re indoors, the world is all \'out there\'. Sometimes things are not as bad as we may think they will be.
January 3rd, 2019 02:53
that i may face you
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, the inner calm is so important in dealing with the world outside.
January 3rd, 2019 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
So true d a, the inner calm is so important in dealing with the world outside.
January 3rd, 2019 01:18
that i may face you
Neville said:
tis a jungle out there.. let that free spirit fly and let it roost when and wherever its wings shall take it...
January 2nd, 2019 18:03
Neville said:
tis a jungle out there.. let that free spirit fly and let it roost when and wherever its wings shall take it...
January 2nd, 2019 18:03
LOOKING FORWARD
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary changes faced as youth grows into adulthood -
January 1st, 2019 09:35
Fay Slimm. said:
A clever play on words in this seriously good write describing the scary changes faced as youth grows into adulthood -
January 1st, 2019 09:35
LOOKING FORWARD
Neville said:
I like these words, you have made me exercise my mental muscle this mane... :)
January 1st, 2019 06:37
Neville said:
I like these words, you have made me exercise my mental muscle this mane... :)
January 1st, 2019 06:37
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