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of november fallen
jarcher54 said:
One continuous compelling sentence. As clever as it is touching.
October 17th, 2020 02:26
jarcher54 said:
One continuous compelling sentence. As clever as it is touching.
October 17th, 2020 02:26
in fields of green
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the unending gravestones must move every visitor to those foreign fields D.A. - - your words will pull at hearts of readers as they bring home the utter confusion of wars that use young lives as pawns. A most moving read my friend.
October 17th, 2020 02:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes the unending gravestones must move every visitor to those foreign fields D.A. - - your words will pull at hearts of readers as they bring home the utter confusion of wars that use young lives as pawns. A most moving read my friend.
October 17th, 2020 02:05
in fields of green
jarcher54 said:
A sadness always overcomes me when I reflect how those calling for peace are considered idle dreamers and impractical idealists and ineffectual pacifists. Keep hammering at those swords, soon to be plowshares, Dusky.
October 17th, 2020 01:56
jarcher54 said:
A sadness always overcomes me when I reflect how those calling for peace are considered idle dreamers and impractical idealists and ineffectual pacifists. Keep hammering at those swords, soon to be plowshares, Dusky.
October 17th, 2020 01:56
in fields of green
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a, just hope that one day man will see its stupidity and the green grass will cover our lands, hearts and minds forever.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 01:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Great words d a, just hope that one day man will see its stupidity and the green grass will cover our lands, hearts and minds forever.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 01:12
of november fallen
Goldfinch60 said:
In these cooler times it is always so wonderful to be indoors at home safe, warm and comfortable within oneself.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
In these cooler times it is always so wonderful to be indoors at home safe, warm and comfortable within oneself.
Andy
October 17th, 2020 00:23
of november fallen
Crowns4Christ said:
don\'t remind me,i turn 38 on november 24,more often than not we are covered in snow.i don\'t like being really cold.haha,you make it sound nice,thanks dusk,
October 16th, 2020 19:22
Crowns4Christ said:
don\'t remind me,i turn 38 on november 24,more often than not we are covered in snow.i don\'t like being really cold.haha,you make it sound nice,thanks dusk,
October 16th, 2020 19:22
of november fallen
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words bring their own shiver as November peeps through each line - - a time indeed when outdoor jobs seem impossible and log fires crackle to beckon us in.............. another little gem my friend which was a delight to read.
October 16th, 2020 15:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words bring their own shiver as November peeps through each line - - a time indeed when outdoor jobs seem impossible and log fires crackle to beckon us in.............. another little gem my friend which was a delight to read.
October 16th, 2020 15:45
of november fallen
Neville said:
November ... aargh, and arguably my least favourite of all the months ..
... here you do her proud though .. as like a siren .. she dares to pave the way and beckon deeper winter in ....
Neville
October 16th, 2020 06:41
Neville said:
November ... aargh, and arguably my least favourite of all the months ..
... here you do her proud though .. as like a siren .. she dares to pave the way and beckon deeper winter in ....
Neville
October 16th, 2020 06:41
of november fallen
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
the picture was so atmospheric as well, as a whole: a completely delectable meal for my reading pleasure,
writes like these are the simple gems I cherish
October 16th, 2020 03:37
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
the picture was so atmospheric as well, as a whole: a completely delectable meal for my reading pleasure,
writes like these are the simple gems I cherish
October 16th, 2020 03:37
of november fallen
Lorna said:
Right! Home we go again! Told ya! It\'s nice there isn\'t it....... this early November will be full of angst here as we see if we are going to remain a democracy or fall to the fascists.. keep fingers crossed that we squash the bug........
October 16th, 2020 02:20
Lorna said:
Right! Home we go again! Told ya! It\'s nice there isn\'t it....... this early November will be full of angst here as we see if we are going to remain a democracy or fall to the fascists.. keep fingers crossed that we squash the bug........
October 16th, 2020 02:20
of november fallen
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DUSK ~ Theres a nip in the air this morning in Essex and we*re in Lockdown agan ! Thanks for the Video a very intriguing Tune to wake up to !
Love the POEM and the language ! Nothing like a Mulled Wine after a hard days work and we do have and *Open Coal & Log Fire* in our first Home together. Despite the Lockdown - Brian & I will both be in our Jobs (Teaching & Physio) Full Time ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian.
October 16th, 2020 00:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning DUSK ~ Theres a nip in the air this morning in Essex and we*re in Lockdown agan ! Thanks for the Video a very intriguing Tune to wake up to !
Love the POEM and the language ! Nothing like a Mulled Wine after a hard days work and we do have and *Open Coal & Log Fire* in our first Home together. Despite the Lockdown - Brian & I will both be in our Jobs (Teaching & Physio) Full Time ! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian.
October 16th, 2020 00:29
the downstream tide
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the freestyle you chose for this haunt of a read D.A. - - your pen captures the desperation perfectly.
October 15th, 2020 07:18
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the freestyle you chose for this haunt of a read D.A. - - your pen captures the desperation perfectly.
October 15th, 2020 07:18
the downstream tide
Lorna said:
Get that murky dirty brown water out of my mouth! She didn\'t like being drowned..........
October 15th, 2020 05:25
Lorna said:
Get that murky dirty brown water out of my mouth! She didn\'t like being drowned..........
October 15th, 2020 05:25
the downstream tide
L. B. Mek said:
I admire the poetic ambition in your write, so free and defiant
October 15th, 2020 03:09
L. B. Mek said:
I admire the poetic ambition in your write, so free and defiant
October 15th, 2020 03:09
the downstream tide
Goldfinch60 said:
Death stalks us all the time but we have both avoided it in our time so we are still here living a second life which has no boundaries.
Andy
October 15th, 2020 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Death stalks us all the time but we have both avoided it in our time so we are still here living a second life which has no boundaries.
Andy
October 15th, 2020 00:17
upon midnight
Neville said:
I felt another visit here was well worth it DA ...
seriously beautiful words and laid upon the page perfectly ....
October 13th, 2020 07:05
Neville said:
I felt another visit here was well worth it DA ...
seriously beautiful words and laid upon the page perfectly ....
October 13th, 2020 07:05
a lie became noble
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you for remembering what we should not forget -- \"var is obscene.\"
October 10th, 2020 18:36
Trenz Pruca said:
Thank you for remembering what we should not forget -- \"var is obscene.\"
October 10th, 2020 18:36
a lie became noble
Neville said:
I am more than happy you have re-posted ..
this is my single most fave DA post ...
unhappily it seems, we never learn .....
October 10th, 2020 09:07
Neville said:
I am more than happy you have re-posted ..
this is my single most fave DA post ...
unhappily it seems, we never learn .....
October 10th, 2020 09:07
a lie became noble
Lorna said:
They have to grab the young before they harden into men that might have their own ideas about how wonderful war is NOT. Killing babies, babies killing. Gross...........
October 10th, 2020 04:56
Lorna said:
They have to grab the young before they harden into men that might have their own ideas about how wonderful war is NOT. Killing babies, babies killing. Gross...........
October 10th, 2020 04:56
a lie became noble
orchidee said:
Yes, even late teenage years and 20\'s are comparatively \'young\'.
Senseless waste, and \'religion\' is nto excused either.
October 10th, 2020 02:14
orchidee said:
Yes, even late teenage years and 20\'s are comparatively \'young\'.
Senseless waste, and \'religion\' is nto excused either.
October 10th, 2020 02:14
a lie became noble
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a.
https://youtu.be/_K1BdDVvV9Q
October 10th, 2020 02:06
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true d a.
https://youtu.be/_K1BdDVvV9Q
October 10th, 2020 02:06
a lie became noble
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words capture the whole scene back then Dusk -- the shame of those war days when youth met it\'s terrible end we must never forget.
October 10th, 2020 02:05
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words capture the whole scene back then Dusk -- the shame of those war days when youth met it\'s terrible end we must never forget.
October 10th, 2020 02:05
Boris
Neville said:
another visit .. just to say I agree with you entirely and to take another pop at this bumbling egocentric liar who I really dont like one little bit ....
October 9th, 2020 11:49
Neville said:
another visit .. just to say I agree with you entirely and to take another pop at this bumbling egocentric liar who I really dont like one little bit ....
October 9th, 2020 11:49
arms trade
Neville said:
These words are certainly worthy of a second visit .... now dont that read more poetic than ... I been here loads of time before just now ....
October 8th, 2020 17:10
Neville said:
These words are certainly worthy of a second visit .... now dont that read more poetic than ... I been here loads of time before just now ....
October 8th, 2020 17:10
Renzi
Neville said:
I dont know why I never came across this poem before now ... and a fine poem it is too and still very much applicable ....
Thanks for the acknowledgement DA ... I had to delve deep to find summat I had not commented on before ................. N :)
October 7th, 2020 06:50
Neville said:
I dont know why I never came across this poem before now ... and a fine poem it is too and still very much applicable ....
Thanks for the acknowledgement DA ... I had to delve deep to find summat I had not commented on before ................. N :)
October 7th, 2020 06:50
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