Comments on community poems by b-LAH-que

• Silver Rushes (Crapychicken) In this poem is an almost uncomfortable realness that is more relatable...
  September 4th, 2022 23:54
• Ice Cream (Spookystargirl) I understand a lot of beauty and pain in the simplicity of this, thank you...
  September 4th, 2022 23:23
• Cosmic Vision (Asrealastheycome) Good rhymes. More, please!
  July 3rd, 2021 15:15
• Life (AlitaOpal) Humility, forgiveness and grace truly are powerful tools for become our...
  February 4th, 2021 15:18
• Sharpen My Love (M.E.M.) I like the humor behind this, but there may be even more to be said about...
  February 4th, 2021 09:54
• Just (Searchin4Soul) I love the sense of individualism expressed in this piece.
  February 4th, 2021 01:10
• Poetry for the people (Sylviasearcher) Nice visuals, and your poetry is perhaps even lovelier expressed through...
  February 4th, 2021 01:08
• Perfect (Xlayla55x) Sometimes a bright shiny exterior is only a veil for darker truths...
  September 23rd, 2019 01:53
• Procrastinate me (Sylviasearcher) I havent logged in in a while, looks like I missed out... Oh well, nice...
  August 4th, 2019 23:46
• Rival (Jabberwocky) Nice rhythm and flow... I just wish it went on longer!
  July 20th, 2019 23:45
• Kinda day. (A passing lyric) It has a great flow that almost sounds like it could be a verse to a song,...
  June 12th, 2019 22:43
• ORIGINAL SOUL (Thomas J. Dooley) This speaks to me. I feel like I can feel and relate to what you were...
  June 12th, 2019 22:39
• Lovely Devil (Jayzee015) Great first post. I\'m eager too see what you\'ll give us next
  March 26th, 2019 02:38
• Reassurance Insurance (Hidden) The support of family is one of my favorite lessons adulthood has taught...
  March 23rd, 2019 11:16
• turned chill (changed) (Frank Prem) Simple, but this kind of hits home for me, as it\'s a message I remember...
  March 23rd, 2019 00:52
• Sour Symmetry (Quemis) Good write!
  March 23rd, 2019 00:45
• LAMP (Mil57Man) I like the internally occurring rhymes within the lines and interchanging...
  March 16th, 2019 00:17
• Swan (Joanna Garrido) How very poignant. The rhythm, language, and imagery put forth in this...
  January 29th, 2019 03:11
• I Pray (SLR) Great costruct and format. I definitely noticed the rhyme scheme and how...
  May 19th, 2018 23:40
• The Soundscape Of Your Mind, a short poem about headphones (Noah Malice) This enjoyable poem that finds significance in one of life\'s seemingly...
  February 25th, 2018 01:17
• The Truth and The Lie (Little_Write) Very relatable. Although, I\'d say that smiling and seeming happy when...
  February 25th, 2018 01:03
• Toughness (Sandbone18) An empowering poem, and a great first submission. Well done, keep on...
  February 18th, 2018 21:44
• You could say something a hundred times (Madisontoure) A very nicely written and well-expressed piece. It\'s categorized under...
  December 11th, 2017 01:59
• Almost Like A Song (Ron parrish aka wordman) What a lovely way to express the relatable longing for someone who\'s...
  December 10th, 2017 23:30
• Selfish activism (A-A-A) Reminds me of the idea of virtue signaling, or people loudly proclaiming...
  December 10th, 2017 21:25
• Found A Way (Seven) What a way with words! Well done, I greatly enjoyed reading this one.
  December 9th, 2017 18:01
• FRUSTRATED (Kennedy Rose) This paints a very intense image and conveys a very relatable feeling, at...
  December 9th, 2017 17:55
• The devil\'s smile (Georgiarous101) I get the impression that the \'devil\' expressed in this is anyone or...
  December 9th, 2017 17:32
• Dreamland Forever (Fayre) Relatable
  December 9th, 2017 17:19
• Hide Sunglass Dark (Gary Edward Geraci) I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme scheme on this one, nicely illustrated too,...
  December 9th, 2017 16:52
• Forgotten. (Wallace) Makes me think of someone foreseeing the drastic and inevitable changes...
  December 6th, 2017 01:45
• I hate myself (DD.) Some of the most reflective and captivating honesty I\'ve read!
  November 26th, 2017 02:26
• Timeless Affection. (Kevin browne) This is pretty damn good, Kevin. I keep re-reading it both for enjoyment...
  November 24th, 2017 04:22
• Standing in the Dark (LukeCoomer) Your non-traditional methods and desire to shake the foundation of the...
  November 23rd, 2017 16:31
• Time (Tennysonman) What an interesting concept, and expressed in my favorite form of poetry;...
  November 23rd, 2017 16:23
• Tap tap tap (Moom) Well expressed, and lovely construct. I like it a lot. Nice profile...
  November 23rd, 2017 16:21
• MY WICK (Gullyson) I love it! This conjures up some brilliant mental images with fantastic...
  November 23rd, 2017 16:18
• Meant To Be, Not, Or Not To Be. (Wallace) This kind of wraps up a complete image and relatable scenario in a nice...
  November 23rd, 2017 01:39
• Introspection (Altruistic_psychopath) I really dig this, especially that last line.
  November 23rd, 2017 01:33
• Walking Realization (Boone) I like this a lot, keep up the good work!
  November 21st, 2017 22:34
• The Mad clock & Lonely Tick (Carmine) What I get from this is that sadness from times of loneliness (the\"sad...
  November 20th, 2017 02:30
• witchy wire (Frank Prem) This poem doesn\'t have the type of schema I\'m usually attracted to, but...
  November 20th, 2017 02:17
• Stray Cat Crossing (Treebark) Incredible structure and rhyme scheme. Well written overall.
  November 19th, 2017 22:44
• 19 November 2017 (Reivax Camlost) The beautiful simplicity in this (as noted by the previous commenter) is...
  November 19th, 2017 22:28
• Bed (DD.) How relatable and excellently expressed with lovely rhythm. An instant...
  November 19th, 2017 01:28
• Born This Way. (Wallace) It\'s strange how a single line of an entire poem can speak such volumes...
  October 13th, 2017 21:44
• History (Bing) Is it ironic that someone who writes poetry can\'t find the words to...
  October 12th, 2017 20:50
• Broken (Egyptianqt79) DARK! And vivid. It\'s like like witnessing a horrible transformation...
  September 7th, 2017 23:44
• 18 (The 2 A.M Writer) I wish this site had some sort of \'like\' button or something. Sometimes...
  September 6th, 2017 23:00
• Tomorrow (C.L.) I read this poem like, four times in a row because I liked it so much. ...
  August 22nd, 2017 23:51
• Cardiac Arrest (P.X. Vexxus) You, sir, would write AMAZING metal lyrics.
  August 19th, 2017 01:28
• Mother of Pearl (IRonnie) I love the structure and scheme of the writing in this, especially when it...
  August 19th, 2017 00:12
• Gloomy refusal. (Agent of Chaos) The last two lines make a very important statement IMO, I like it.
  July 26th, 2017 23:28