Comments on community poems by evenwheniLie

• Damnation Island (Lunatic\'s Ball) (Thomas W Case) Damnation island a fate with everyone’s name on it, because the...
  May 16th, 2024 18:43
• Mydentity (Mutley Ravishes) Cryptic, yet still understood, excellent word play.
  May 16th, 2024 18:38
• This Friday (Garth Rakumakoe) Life often has simultaneously shown both sides of its face in a single...
  May 10th, 2024 13:16
• I dread the United States presidential 2024 outcome... (Rew4er2nail) Here comes the pain.
  March 25th, 2024 12:19
• America withdraw (EvenwheniLie) America should withdraw, close its borders to certain countries (Israel...
  March 23rd, 2024 11:06
• Save the children (EvenwheniLie) Hopefully you enjoyed it?
  February 28th, 2024 00:59
• The Unwanted Mask (Meera Mere) A meaningful poem with a good flow…. Beautiful
  February 25th, 2024 11:38
• The wish fairy 🧚‍♀️ (Amalee Grace) Beautiful pictures enter my mind’s eye as I read this poem.
  February 19th, 2024 16:03
• What a difference a role makes (EvenwheniLie) Thanks
  February 17th, 2024 01:39
• Showtime (Teddy.15) Beautiful
  February 11th, 2024 19:00
• I Love the Country Life (Thomas W Case) Nice flow and descriptive.
  January 28th, 2024 00:57
• Just listen (Hzugman) So true..
  January 20th, 2024 12:11
• Amber\'s last words (David Wakeling) .... life\'s realities can cause one to question the name, the symbols,...
  January 10th, 2024 17:00
• The monk I was still lives (EvenwheniLie) Thanks
  January 7th, 2024 16:44
• INDEMNIFY (Fikrioshin) Putting forth the best version of ones self, may not insure your future,...
  January 4th, 2024 16:21
• HAUNTED (Oasis) It\'s like a hoarding of souls passed, they are the armor most put on over...
  December 24th, 2023 11:55
• Pious Deception (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Excellent!
  December 22nd, 2023 16:19
• THE NIGHTS ARE OVER (Fikrioshin) Excellent poem, it’s like reading what you’re seeing when you’re...
  December 17th, 2023 14:23
• For a Friend in an Asylum in California (Thomas W Case) Nice impressions
  December 3rd, 2023 19:36
• The Agony of Homosexuality (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) You mentioned ontology, people will kill to protect it, they see this as a...
  November 26th, 2023 17:07
• Death is Stalking Me (Thomas W Case) I always love well written works on real life situations, this poem has...
  November 23rd, 2023 08:24
• Are all the shamans dead (EvenwheniLie) Whole religions and cultures have been born from illusions
  November 19th, 2023 02:57
• And I Will Rise (Thomas W Case) Beautiful triumphant poem!
  November 4th, 2023 12:48
• Tents, pills and needles; oh my (EvenwheniLie) Just laughing at the poem
  November 1st, 2023 07:37
• Kool Keith Crazily Killing Crappy Rappers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) One of my favorite rappers!!
  October 30th, 2023 09:48
•  Fuck you, UNO Chief (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) Powerful
  October 26th, 2023 06:39
• My Life On Earth (Bella Shepard) A Beautiful poem
  October 9th, 2023 09:17
• Origins of a terrorist (EvenwheniLie) I think many terrorists are disturbed, but hide behind religious views for...
  September 23rd, 2023 21:54
• Fleece (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Nice flow to a poem and swords woman we need now.
  September 16th, 2023 11:29
• Dark Itinerant (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Pitfalls of humanity in a poem, my kind of party.. excellent
  September 4th, 2023 11:19
• Devils Playground (Tree sap) Thank you.
  August 23rd, 2023 23:30
• Devils Playground (Tree sap) Your flow is very good, and the reality of what you’re saying coincides...
  August 22nd, 2023 19:41
• Astral projection (EvenwheniLie) Glad you enjoyed it
  August 21st, 2023 04:02
• My God, your god, their god; check the spelling (EvenwheniLie) People have to agree on one god or no god at all…
  August 18th, 2023 11:48
• lord (Vividvoid14) Beautiful
  August 11th, 2023 13:54
• no dad (Vividvoid14) Poems should have meaning, or at least a meaningful intent, you hit this...
  August 11th, 2023 13:52
• Admirable Admiral (EvenwheniLie) Thanks
  July 24th, 2023 11:12
• Midlife Rap (Parisab) That was very good, I like the flow, I can see you reading that at a rap...
  July 7th, 2023 13:17
• THE NASCAR LOOP (Bobby O) Each line made me want to keep reading, meaningful poetry with a good flow...
  July 1st, 2023 03:06
• The features of Cain (EvenwheniLie) It’s very hard not to point out the hypocrisy of mankind, it lies at the...
  June 30th, 2023 09:36
• A generation Z fairytale (EvenwheniLie) Thanks again; I thought I’d make this one fun.
  May 4th, 2023 22:37
• Pick your poison (EvenwheniLie) Do we have to mindfully choose to do right in every instance, the faithful...
  April 28th, 2023 05:31
• God Is Not A Woman (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) God is he, she, and it..
  April 27th, 2023 02:13
• Coonology (EvenwheniLie) My inspiration is built brick by brick of appreciations.
  April 21st, 2023 20:36
• Thinking (2781) Yes; we need to get back to thinking! As a species
  March 29th, 2023 17:36
• Mark of the beast (EvenwheniLie) Glad u enjoyed it, but it’s true; we are the barbarians
  March 24th, 2023 13:32
• In God’s court (EvenwheniLie) I see them to be, we are the author of our successes as well as our...
  March 14th, 2023 03:48
• What Is Time? (Goldfinch60) Nice; but I think time is a series of events taking place, it’s also our...
  March 13th, 2023 02:33
• Take a ride on the transporter (EvenwheniLie) Right……
  March 11th, 2023 18:51
• Be the Change (Heartbones20) Nice.
  March 11th, 2023 12:36
• ❤️ 🧡 💛 💚 💙 💜 🖤 Untouchable Boy ★ 10 ❤️ 🧡 💛 💚 💙 💜 🖤 (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) Malfunction is natural
  March 9th, 2023 07:13
• Cosmic slop 2 (EvenwheniLie) Thanks Eugene S., I did have that in mind as well.
  March 5th, 2023 13:19
• Michael Jackson (EvenwheniLie) You can’t defend sound and how it makes someone else feels; but MJ is...
  February 25th, 2023 00:47
• The poet (2781) Beautifully written, and poets do have to dig deep, only to make it...
  February 23rd, 2023 02:03
• They want to look up your butt hole… (EvenwheniLie) Oh, I misunderstood.
  February 22nd, 2023 00:08
• Sprinkle some crack on ‘em (EvenwheniLie) You look like a bubba, so I guess you and your family is meth heads and u...
  October 11th, 2022 13:14
• Sprinkle some crack on ‘em (EvenwheniLie) Oh so u a stalker now? Lol
  October 11th, 2022 13:12
• Well hello (EvenwheniLie) Porn? LOL SHE HAS ON CLOTHES
  October 7th, 2022 18:01
• Critical race theory (EvenwheniLie) That’s a good analysis Doggerel Dave, exactly
  October 6th, 2022 02:13
• Nigeria Independence Poem by Alo Solomon Alo (Grand Magazine) It is as beautiful as it is meaningful, independence is a necessity, but...
  October 5th, 2022 19:13
• We about to lose our job (EvenwheniLie) Thanks for reading my truth L. B. Mek; we seem to be destined for...
  August 16th, 2022 06:04
• Old Fart (EvenwheniLie) Thanks again, I try to make them make sense plus make it a nice to read.
  August 13th, 2022 16:24
• Punished By God (Randyjohnson71) This is what poems are for, existence put into poetic form. Nice poem, the...
  August 6th, 2022 15:35
• Once Alive My Heart is Now Numb (Seabeequeen29) Culture can be a overwhelming thing, even uproot what’s natural, the way...
  August 2nd, 2022 14:56
• At my wits end (Domilla) Peace will come, just keep writing, it was beautiful and insightful.
  July 29th, 2022 12:19
• Emancipation of man (NafisaSB) Good read, very good.
  July 28th, 2022 01:06
• Is It For Real (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) Very poetic and filled with life experiences, very good.
  July 28th, 2022 01:04
• SLENDERMAN the TALLMAN the BOOGEYMAN (Raven333) Horror still moves people and wish them away into a frenzy usually a...
  July 27th, 2022 12:39
• Quantum mechanics of an old man (EvenwheniLie) Thanks L.B. MeK,
  July 26th, 2022 04:30
• LESSONS IN LIFE (Raven333) Life’s lessons is in every little thing, they are inescapable, learn...
  July 25th, 2022 12:51
• Hateful jezebel (EvenwheniLie) Thanks Raven333
  July 25th, 2022 11:16
• WATCH YOUR MOUTH PLEASE (Raven333) Words do have power, but tone is everything..
  July 21st, 2022 06:41
• Give up the tapes (EvenwheniLie) It’s good to hit that funny bone sometimes! LOL
  July 21st, 2022 02:07
• Halo joe (EvenwheniLie) As always I’m glad you enjoyed the poem, and yes I had to put a light on...
  July 19th, 2022 12:10
• A Well Dressed Monkey Never Be A Gentleman. (Shantha Teldeniya) Lol India is filled with monkeys. Interesting.
  July 19th, 2022 05:08
• A Mental Mess (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nice poem, and self examining to, you should do more of that and not look...
  July 19th, 2022 02:17
• Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave) It’s hitting us all, hope it ain’t too late.
  July 18th, 2022 10:59
• Run African run (EvenwheniLie) Always trying to make people think, thanks.
  July 18th, 2022 10:52
• They dumbing us down (EvenwheniLie) Thanks Raven333.
  July 16th, 2022 18:08
• BEAUTIFUL CRAZY (Raven333) As always you have the signs of a true poet, the rhyme is always there,...
  July 15th, 2022 12:51
• Philadelphia, or Philly (EvenwheniLie) Glade you enjoyed the poem, thanks.
  July 15th, 2022 06:38
• Philadelphia, or Philly (EvenwheniLie) I will always remember growing up in philly as a child, racing popsicle...
  July 15th, 2022 02:21
• THE RHYMER (Raven333) Yes you are a rhymer and you have meaning too, don’t let anybody...
  July 14th, 2022 21:01
• They dumbing us down (EvenwheniLie) Thanks, for chiming in..
  July 13th, 2022 23:10
• I FUCKING hate you. (Rosey) Damn.
  July 11th, 2022 23:04
• LGBTQ friend or foe (EvenwheniLie) Thanks wordsillneversay, I think it’s a nice conversation piece the...
  July 9th, 2022 12:29
• War (Blueledge) Actually often times it’s the women who pick these men to run their...
  July 8th, 2022 04:34
• New Age Politics (Firefoxsc) Excellent poetry with a obvious meaning behind it is always a good read;...
  July 6th, 2022 19:41
• The Morning Sunrise (Sam_dc) The beauty of the sunrise is a good gesture to feel good and choose joy,...
  July 3rd, 2022 15:24
• MAKE A DEAL (Raven333) Beautiful poem about wanting the touch of another, but there was also a...
  July 3rd, 2022 15:17
• Bad Dreams and Nightmares (Aijaialberts) I’m know how you feel! I know you probably tried to repeatedly repair...
  July 3rd, 2022 12:26
• January 6th 2021 (Sirlocowicked AKA Bubba) Amen!
  July 3rd, 2022 12:19
• The Misunderstanding (Paul Bell) Lol!!
  July 1st, 2022 05:05
• I Am Becoming My Dad. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful observation of self becoming. A sense of destiny I also feel...
  June 30th, 2022 01:38
• Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow) Lol
  June 29th, 2022 02:03
• Turn the TV Off (Saxon Crow) All we have to do is get rid of the tv and social media, iPhones and...
  June 29th, 2022 00:54
• Seeing Clearly (Raven333) Poems that depict actual life and actual human tendencies are welcomed the...
  June 25th, 2022 15:51
• Outdoor Jazz in Philly (EvenwheniLie) It sure was al17, it was beautiful and unexpected, I was going to the...
  June 25th, 2022 10:21
• Addiction (EvenwheniLie) Thanks teddy.15; I do love him but when they’re their own worst enemy...
  June 24th, 2022 07:16
• Freedom (EvenwheniLie) s.zaynab.kamoonpuri Lb Mek didn’t say that evenwheniLie did. That would...
  June 23rd, 2022 12:55