Comments on community poems by Jabberwocky
- Nature\'s love (Sorenbarrett)
A thought provoking read. Still thinking about it.
I read it about pure...
September 30th, 2026 08:45
- Another Suitcase Another Bawl (Kevin Hulme)
I\'ve not always been a saint myself, but I have more kids than Ive left...
September 23rd, 2026 07:53
- That\'s how it is (Sorenbarrett)
Lol. Not all the fun I liked when I was young was necessarily legal.
But...
September 18th, 2026 13:02
- The Jolly Little Cafe Where A Chestnut Tree Once Grew (Monologue) (Alan .S. Jeeves)
Sad tale, had me captivated.
I worked in a place like that (an old...
September 13th, 2026 14:23
- Framed (Sorenbarrett)
There are worse places to be. My mum\'s mind is very clean. She\'s a very...
September 11th, 2026 10:40
- First Fall (Kaz)
I liked autumn before.
I like it more now.
September 9th, 2026 16:48
- You will be offended (Sorenbarrett)
I don\'t offend easily, but good try.
Guess I\'m a poet, and maybe a...
September 9th, 2026 14:31
- Cathy (Kevin Hulme)
I got the love of a worthless tormenting woman that lingers on after...
September 8th, 2026 11:59
- A pill when you\'re ill (Sorenbarrett)
My first wife was a pharmacist. She was nice, but I get your point.
Pill...
September 8th, 2026 10:34
- The Road Goes On. (Goldfinch60)
I hope your charity is contagious. I run short sometimes.
Thanks for...
September 8th, 2026 10:30
- Street Credo (Katdream)
Like growing up in Glasgow in the 70s...except the gunfire.
Tenement life...
September 8th, 2026 10:29
- Dinner show (Sorenbarrett)
Everything is better with a pinch of Zero Mostel....
except maybe sex.
September 6th, 2026 14:58
- The Softest Sound (JENNY M GUERRIER)
Being attuned that way is tiring. You end up unable to walk through crowds...
September 3rd, 2026 17:14
- Never for the Worthy (Tristan Robert Lange)
Grace is never for the worthy
I like that.
That\'s where Ive been going...
September 3rd, 2026 14:13
- Sunny Day (Rhan Sterling Henry)
Can\'t you write a rubbish one now and again! Just to make me feel better!
September 2nd, 2026 13:23
- A Garden of Delight (Rhan Sterling Henry)
Good. What else can I say
September 2nd, 2026 13:20
- Risk Adverse (Rhan Sterling Henry)
Good work. I\'ll have to up my game!
September 2nd, 2026 13:17
- Grieving a friendship that once was! (Friendship)
That was awesome. It really spoke to me.
My best friend abandoned me just...
September 2nd, 2026 13:06
- firefly (Tristan Robert Lange)
What? Are you trying to make me cry? I have a soft spot for children...and...
September 1st, 2026 16:09
- Fixed By Music. (Goldfinch60)
You don\'t listen to Leonard Cohen then...
😉
August 31st, 2026 16:37
- The Long Shadow (Fränz Müller)
Mmm
But some things die while the shadow lies over them.
Interesting...
August 31st, 2026 16:35
- A Gentle Reminder. (Goldfinch60)
Sometimes it\'s the big things we don\'t appreciate.
I learnt this the...
August 31st, 2026 15:51
- It\'s okay... (Antra Sharma)
I\'ve struggled forgiving those who refuse to forgive, and struggled more...
August 31st, 2026 15:38
- I want to be my old self (Antra Sharma)
I fear you are too deep to ever be fulfilled by what passes for love in a...
August 31st, 2026 15:32
- Always One Day At A Time. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s a really nice sentiment.
You can take the man out of the riot,...
August 31st, 2026 03:56
- Hooligan (Fränz Müller)
Pirates of the world unite, you have nothing to lose but your timidity......
August 31st, 2026 03:30
- Full Moon Wonder. (Goldfinch60)
That sounds like many of my mornings, thanks for writing it. Each day is...
August 30th, 2026 04:38
- serene myrcene (Tristan Robert Lange)
I think everything should be criminal. More fun that way. Yeah that\'s me...
August 29th, 2026 04:59
- Values that cost nothing (Sorenbarrett)
\",paint a smile on a child\'s face\"
I like that.
I\'m going to try and...
August 29th, 2026 04:38
- You will be offended (Sorenbarrett)
I wasn\'t offended, I must be some kind of poet.
You came close with a...
August 24th, 2026 08:08
- tragedy and love (Demar Desu)
The clear and simple matter
But not alas to all
Some more prone to...
August 21st, 2026 09:34
- I’m sorry (Nerd)
Stop starving, learn to cook, put on a little weight, then marry an...
August 21st, 2026 06:24
- $265.08 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
That\'s 265 more than me!
But the kids are fed and the dishes done, and...
August 20th, 2026 12:30
- I wonder. (Girlie)
Some people can\'t forgive kindness, it shows them what they lack.
Take...
August 17th, 2026 12:40
- Me (Jabberwocky)
Sure will. Sure is. Thanks
July 27th, 2021 06:14
- Pebbles (Jabberwocky)
Ha ha. My kids are great treasurers of stones and sticks... our home is...
December 9th, 2019 05:13
- My favourite anecdote from Urdu (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
Everybody has to have somebody to look down on.
There’s no act so pure...
July 18th, 2019 14:32
- Seine Haul Fishing For Life (Lorna)
And if we can not let them go
We tie them to a string
And wear them...
May 11th, 2018 07:39
- Lost Without Me (Herjourney)
I was thinking something like this recently. Well expressed. Thanks for...
February 16th, 2018 04:55
- WHAT IS YOUR FAVOURITE DRINK ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The coffee my grandfather made
Sunday mornings
Hot with a skin.
I still...
November 16th, 2017 14:44
- Lava (Jabberwocky)
Thanks Goldfinch :)
August 7th, 2017 14:11
- I am a Frog (Jabberwocky)
Thanks Goldfinch.
:)
July 28th, 2017 17:42
- Not the Broken One (MissileOfUncertainty)
It\'s what we choose that defines us, and how we refuse to own what is...
July 14th, 2017 06:32
- No Return (Jabberwocky)
Nothing like a good rant :)
Thanks
July 7th, 2017 04:37
- Alone Again (Jeff)
I died too, but I got better
June 20th, 2017 07:29
- The Bubble. (Goldfinch60)
Very moving, and simply and effectively written.
If I am ever called to...
May 23rd, 2017 18:33
- A little longer (Garry)
When it\'s gone it\'s gone.
But on the bright side if your heart were...
May 17th, 2017 03:56
- Making a Deal (Chellewest)
That was pretty good. It made me think of someone I know.
With more...
May 11th, 2017 04:43
- ... as a Friend (Jabberwocky)
Well, thanks. I guess I can\'t make up my mind these days :)
April 17th, 2017 03:36
- Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?) (Garry)
Nice :)
April 15th, 2017 06:14
- i\'m sorry (Lilia lara)
Yeah. That\'s what it feels like pretty much. It\'s hard and useless but...
April 10th, 2017 11:58
- The Last Goodbye (Garry)
We remember uncompleted things more than we remember completed things.
I...
April 7th, 2017 16:22
- Microwave Pasta at Mums (Jabberwocky)
Interesting frog.... or rather toad. They don\'t usually have teeth or...
April 5th, 2017 17:15
- do i have to explain? (Lovelydarkanddeep)
It\'s human nature to remember incomplete things more prominently than...
April 4th, 2017 08:06
- Sun in April (Haiku) (Jabberwocky)
I was one sound too many! Made a change losing \"comes\" from third line.
April 3rd, 2017 07:06
- Sun in April (Haiku) (Jabberwocky)
People here commonly say January as if it has three sounds; Jan You...
April 3rd, 2017 05:11
- Alice by the Window (Jabberwocky)
Anniversary of his death rather, I think.
April 2nd, 2017 13:17
- Babel (Jabberwocky)
Our sins too often swallow our graces. We have to build the tower higher.
April 2nd, 2017 09:11
- Tick Tock (Jabberwocky)
I updated this to make my meaning clearer. \"We\" in the first and second...
April 2nd, 2017 06:37
- Babel (Jabberwocky)
I also liked the image of building a tower in a pit. It seems somehow a...
April 2nd, 2017 06:09
- Babel (Jabberwocky)
Well, it means I thought my good points and the good I did and far far...
April 2nd, 2017 05:49
- You are (Katherined)
I liked this.
My post today started with coffee too, I like...
April 1st, 2017 07:42
- Did I Get Me Here (Walkingmess)
Sometimes we are acted upon and sometimes we act.
It\'s better to...
April 1st, 2017 05:48
- Straw Man (Jabberwocky)
Thanks. I\'m glad you got it. I aimed for density and no redundant...
March 31st, 2017 05:09
- Tick Tock (Jabberwocky)
Thank you Tony, you are always very kind :)
March 30th, 2017 08:51
- Dead Birds (Jabberwocky)
Guess I am dark and disturbed!
Give it a month or so yet and I\'ll post...
March 29th, 2017 14:36
- Dead Birds (Jabberwocky)
Thanks. Slightly ironic to write a poem about the powerlessness of words,...
March 29th, 2017 09:55
- To a Slut on Mothers Day (Jabberwocky)
Yeah well, she did that, she is that, she\'ll be sorry, it\'ll be too...
March 27th, 2017 03:28
- Alice by the Window (Jabberwocky)
Thank you. It\'s Lewis Carrolls birthday today, so this seemed appropriate...
March 26th, 2017 13:15