Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Deliciously Absent / Deliciosamente ausente (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Loved it A search for what is not there and desired. Nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 17:19
• What now (Maplespal) Tears often a manipulation can be annoying. It makes it difficult to tell...
  November 6th, 2025 17:15
• No one noticed. (Starfire) A most interesting format of broken lines like broken earth, broken...
  November 6th, 2025 17:11
• His sand\'s of time (Aa Harvey) When we see someone being self destructive when or do we intervene and at...
  November 6th, 2025 17:06
• Busyness (Jjudaharts) I would have to agree that there is too much commotion, confusion, noise....
  November 6th, 2025 17:02
• Night (PerditaRose) This poem is hard to put the finger on but it is special. Is it the dark...
  November 6th, 2025 15:37
• 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 𝒮𝓉ℴ𝓇𝓎 𝒮𝒽ℴ𝓇𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman) Shakes are wonderful and so it the poem that melts into a love poem
  November 6th, 2025 15:32
• Fall Breeze (Jerry Reynolds) I have seen them before and they are mesmerizing. A wonderful poem of...
  November 6th, 2025 15:28
• Untitled {8} (Niko Papadatos) Existential is the word for this poem an eternal quest that covers much...
  November 6th, 2025 14:02
• 1 View (NinjaGirl) One has to believe in oneself and support oneself in this life. A lovely...
  November 6th, 2025 14:00
• I Am Here Now (Amandatoriii) A poem that feels intimate and yet distant. It holds trepidation yet is...
  November 6th, 2025 13:59
• Matrix (Lorenz) Here the cow jumped over the moon but never said where she landed. The dog...
  November 6th, 2025 13:57
• Guilt Is a Scorpion (Ria_1005) Clever the use of symbols in this poem nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 11:42
• The Alchemy of the Lens (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) This poem takes the aspects of alchemy and of the spiritual and melds them...
  November 6th, 2025 11:40
• collection of words (Luke Bensing) This is philosophical and thought provoking. Nice
  November 6th, 2025 10:17
• writing freely (Applecherry) It is funny how there are expectations in relationships and how one wants...
  November 6th, 2025 10:15
• Walking Into Yesterday (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Mind provoking everyone thinks of speeding ourselves up beyond the speed...
  November 6th, 2025 10:09
• Mission Impossible (Tristan Robert Lange) Are we not indeed parasites on this earth that we suck dry of its...
  November 6th, 2025 10:06
• Smiling into the Wind (Lea Gagliardo) A picture painted in words of a poetess at work and a mind on other
  November 6th, 2025 08:57
• Mouse Squeaks (E.J. Waling) Here I see a string of free flowing thought like a current through a wire...
  November 6th, 2025 08:55
• ADVANCEMENT (Drniran) A fun read that has an uplifting ending. Nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 08:26
• God\'s Magnum opus! (Andrew Deaton) A wonderful painting in words of nature in the sky. Well done
  November 6th, 2025 08:24
• Self-Loathing (Rosey) A poem of self deprecation where what is seen as bad is amplified and...
  November 6th, 2025 08:23
• Getting to know each other (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A short story that wends its way toward a message. Nicely done
  November 6th, 2025 08:20
• Rose wall (RSM0812) A lovely poem of beauty in the metaphor of the flower and the season. So...
  November 6th, 2025 07:07
• remember them (Jim56) A wonderful poem of remembrance and gratitude Jim. Also remember that from...
  November 6th, 2025 07:05
• Your Worries are Mine (William Hromada) Beautifully framed with each darkness matched with light and fears and...
  November 6th, 2025 07:02
• Elevations and Invocations (ElizabethMoroz) Grief, disaster, pain and the weight of the day all heard in this poem of...
  November 6th, 2025 06:51
• pears in a moonlit orchard (Arqios) There is something silently serene and darkly magnificent about this poem....
  November 6th, 2025 06:00
• Crucified Acres (Gray0328) Some great lines here Gray \"billboards rise taller than the hills ...
  November 6th, 2025 05:47
• Protocol (Paul Bell) There is something too real about this to be poetry but at the same time...
  November 6th, 2025 04:41
• They Hate Us (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I always wanted one to put in my aquarium but the closest I got was an...
  November 6th, 2025 04:38
• Goodbye Dolly (Kevin Hulme) Now this was a fun one to start the morning off. Loved it
  November 6th, 2025 04:35
• Miss A is being poetically cheesy (The breaktime monologue) So nicely worded it becomes a definition of the word love. Indeed I would...
  November 6th, 2025 04:33
• Quiet Battles (Kayla Jackson) This one echoes like steel on stone in a dark ally. It calls out of the...
  November 6th, 2025 04:30
• The Water Element (Ethan Mikel StAmour) I love this haiku it paints a most beautiful and descriptive picture of...
  November 6th, 2025 04:28
• Underneath water (Amethyste) This may be taken in different ways leaving it enigmatic and most poetic....
  November 6th, 2025 04:26
• Why Can\'t They Hear Me (Joseph M Marion) A most religious poem calling out for people to listen to God and hear his...
  November 6th, 2025 04:24
• TOWERS FALL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A great write about greed, capitalism, division of the classes using the...
  November 6th, 2025 04:21
• THE NOT SO SAD STORY OF THE RABBITS (Michael Edwards) Michael another good one but you will soon have Christian and Jew after...
  November 6th, 2025 04:18
• Honest Intentions. (Goldfinch60) Unfortunately those with good intentions are usually hunted down by those...
  November 6th, 2025 04:11
• Bright Blessings (Orchidee) You are back in the swing of it Orchi I liked this one it speaks of the...
  November 6th, 2025 04:02
• COLD MORNING HUNT (David Welch) This poem reminds me of my childhood when my father went deer hunting. The...
  November 5th, 2025 18:13
• Sterile Habit (Yael Olalde-Garcia) This seems a free floating chain of thought. Well done
  November 5th, 2025 18:10
• The Best Quality One Can Possess (Keyara S Trotman) Interesting and thought provoking. Would a person really know their best...
  November 5th, 2025 18:09
• ZZ (Gewar) I like the statement that love doesn\'t disappear when it changes shape. A...
  November 5th, 2025 18:07
• the weight of the Holy Bible (Vividvoid14) A poem that sees love based on bible verses and God given. A strong point...
  November 5th, 2025 18:04
• My Earnest Thoughts (Jjudaharts) Words are cheap and it is what we do that make the difference is the...
  November 5th, 2025 18:02
• Rest (Coracaodacripta) This poem speaks in timeless words of a place of reprieve and rest. A...
  November 5th, 2025 15:35
• The iron run (Maplespal) I have to say that this one puzzled me I had visions of a man with a nine...
  November 5th, 2025 14:49
• The Little Love Button (Thomas W Case) This one has a different feel to it Thomas somewhere between Old teens and...
  November 5th, 2025 14:24
• The teeth (Princess Osariemen Aihie) A smile is contagious indeed. A good read.
  November 5th, 2025 13:17
• Capistrano (Kurt Philip Behm) Metamorphosis? Thought provoking
  November 5th, 2025 12:25
• In the end (Saxon Crow) There seems to be quite of bit of reflection here.
  November 5th, 2025 12:19
• Heavy Pebbles (Gray0328) A fist full of great sayings all original most lovely
  November 5th, 2025 11:46
• Blessings in Disguise (Lea Gagliardo) Life is so much sweeter when we focus on small pleasures. Nicely written
  November 5th, 2025 11:02
• For My Past Life... (Akhmadjonov Ibrokhimjon (Abraham)) A beautiful existential answer to life and the value of its living. My...
  November 5th, 2025 08:53
• Untitled {7} (Niko Papadatos) So many conflicting statements in this poem it all comes down to the end...
  November 5th, 2025 08:31
• the smell of something (Luke Bensing) I loved the last line that holds so much meaning. Yes indeed nostalgia mar...
  November 5th, 2025 08:29
• The Corner That Waits (Amandatoriii) With the meter and rhythm of a limerick it tells a far different story not...
  November 5th, 2025 08:28
• 721 (Applecherry) To fantasize is such a common occurrence becoming Walter Mitty. A lovely...
  November 5th, 2025 08:25
• german shepard (Jim56) A good one Jim my sister has had several German Shepherds all have...
  November 5th, 2025 08:23
• blissful sorrow (Lukeman) I loved the ending where you used the commonly associated color with each...
  November 5th, 2025 08:22
• House that Breathes (Rosey) That is the epitome of being ignored when the mirror won\'t even...
  November 5th, 2025 08:20
• Got a boo-boo. (Aa Harvey) A most interesting meter in this poem that speaks of illness and its...
  November 5th, 2025 08:18
• In Love (RSM0812) Now this one is smooth and sweet, slick and a bit tender. Nicely done a...
  November 5th, 2025 08:15
• THE SAD TALE OF THE KANGAROO (Michael Edwards) Now here is a poem of several purposes. What of the wombat, platypus, and...
  November 5th, 2025 08:13
• in the end (Arqios) Cryptic although arcane this piece has deep meaning for me. How often we...
  November 5th, 2025 08:10
• Retro (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A very good name for this poem. Good images as well. Nicely done it took...
  November 5th, 2025 04:02
• Bootprints in Bellies (Aman 12) This poem is brutally raw and explicit in its metaphors. It is hard to...
  November 5th, 2025 04:00
• IMAGES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of surreal romanticism that flows with good meter and rhyme. It...
  November 5th, 2025 03:54
• JOURNEY (Drniran) A poem that wishes to redo some things from the past. A poem of regret?
  November 5th, 2025 03:51
• Welcome Back Home (Ajon4wheels) A poem of loss written in free style it calls out to the one lost and...
  November 5th, 2025 03:49
• Christ Crowned (Orchidee) Keep those hymns coming Orchi mankind sure needs them and all the...
  November 5th, 2025 03:46
• That Fateful Day. (Goldfinch60) Some things are just meant to be Andy. A most tender and caring write.
  November 5th, 2025 03:42
• What if... (NinjaGirl) This poem is raw and it calls out for help. The answer would seem to be...
  November 5th, 2025 03:39
• Boss dont know (Shadowbones) This poem is easy in form taking a smooth and simple meter. It seems...
  November 5th, 2025 03:36
• A SIMPLE HELLO (David Hopkins) Now that\'s a sad story of explanation that goes with this piece. It makes...
  November 5th, 2025 03:32
• THE END OF THE FEUD (David Welch) Another great narrative poem with a great story and good rhyme as well....
  November 4th, 2025 21:11
• The Late Diane Ladd (Randyjohnson71) Another tribute to a lost actress. A lovely write
  November 4th, 2025 21:04
• Thought\'s Grasp (NinjaGirl) A frightening poem that is very personal and that is the frightening part....
  November 4th, 2025 21:03
• Self harm. (Andrew Deaton) Strong needs leave one to be vulnerable to abuse. A lovely write
  November 4th, 2025 20:04
• Gone Mad (Niki) There are numerous references to Alice in Wonderland in this poem. Nicely...
  November 4th, 2025 20:01
• Wet pillow (Maplespal) A metaphor and also in reverse. I love to sleep to the sound of the rain...
  November 4th, 2025 19:16
• To fly (Poetaldo) Beautiful dreams Poetaldo. Nicely done
  November 4th, 2025 17:38
• Pomegranate flowers (Amethyste) A stunning and most colorful image. Nicely done
  November 4th, 2025 17:36
• The Cannibal (Yael Olalde-Garcia) This poem seems all metaphor. We are all cannibals in some way eating...
  November 4th, 2025 17:35
• Words That Wound, Words That Heal (M.E.M.) I understand your point of how some poems bring us down and others lift us...
  November 4th, 2025 17:10
• The shoulders of giants (Georgia Watson) A beautiful metaphor that I take as childhood and the creativity that goes...
  November 4th, 2025 15:16
• Try me tomorrow (Arcane-) Timing is most important and from time to time we all need a break. Such...
  November 4th, 2025 15:14
• Suicide (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Sad and tragic a tale of a dream gone and a friend as well. When dreams...
  November 4th, 2025 15:12
• Hi I\'m a rug (Anthony Hanible) A great metaphor. I have been stepped on and had people wipe their feet on...
  November 4th, 2025 14:23
• a string of birds (Luke Bensing) A set of beautiful images cast in this poem. I feel that I have been there...
  November 4th, 2025 14:21
• It\'s No Use (Paul Gerard Reed) Manipulations in a relationship take such a familiar form in this poem. A...
  November 4th, 2025 14:20
• Keys To The Kingdom (Kurt Philip Behm) Whether a dog or an ass is up for debate in my case I think it may be both...
  November 4th, 2025 14:17
• Colossal Companion (Matthew R. Callies) The tales of Paul Bunyan a favorite of my childhood. Stories told by my...
  November 4th, 2025 14:16
• Queendom (Tkatie118) A write that is well imaged and written. Nicely done
  November 4th, 2025 14:13
• In Pursuit (Ray Moonee) A poem of how it feels at different times and how it all depends on timing...
  November 4th, 2025 14:03
• Who loves (Tallisman) A lovely and romantic story told in this poem. Masterfully told it gets a...
  November 4th, 2025 13:58
• Letting Others Voluntarily Evolve L-O-V-E (Gray0328) Very nice Gray I too take water to be the ultimate in as the Tao says...
  November 4th, 2025 13:53