Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Sandy Conversation (Blossompayal)
Nicely written a romantic write well done.
August 6th, 2024 11:36 - Do not (Sami mulaj)
Nicely written a beautiful and peaceful thought.
August 6th, 2024 11:33 - Blackcurrant Squash (AuburnScribbler)
A delicious write. Nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 11:32 - Is There Anything More Beautiful Than the Bow of a Ship touching a New World (Gray0328)
Beautiful imagery in this poem. Vivid and identifiable.
August 6th, 2024 11:27 - All people are Gifted (Saleh Ben Saleh)
There is always someone better. Humility is the best rout. It is the most...
August 6th, 2024 11:24 - Blue Song in Evening (MendedFences27)
Quite the story. nicely done.
August 6th, 2024 11:17 - Results (Sydney Zane)
Appreciated the rhyme in this poem. Good going.
August 6th, 2024 11:13 - Come Back (Shallom_M)
Loss never believed, sometimes even after it occurs is not believed. We...
August 6th, 2024 11:11 - ~> Martians Landed Twice In Australia! (Thad Wilk)
A fun read that left me smiling. Loved it
August 6th, 2024 09:05 - Prisoner Of My Own Thoughts (Mark The Phenomenon)
Guilt and regret two difficult obstacles to overcome. Well expressed here.
August 6th, 2024 09:03 - Little Red Riding Hood (Tony36)
A nursery rhyme revisited is it to be continued with the wolf?
August 6th, 2024 08:10 - angel flight (Jim56)
Christmas in August I\'m not ready. A fun and uplifting read.
August 6th, 2024 05:44 - 9th poem for - “T.N.D” - Silenced (Maplespal)
Sad the tone to this poem, one of loss and the missing of what once was.
August 6th, 2024 05:35 - Gypsy (Garth Rakumakoe)
Creative thought in this write. A fun read but with a deeper meaning that...
August 6th, 2024 05:33 - Forever living (2781)
Liked the playfulness of the rhyme in this piece. It carried me on to the...
August 6th, 2024 05:31 - morning moment (Markashley1961)
Beautiful and peaceful imaged fill this poem causing a feeling of...
August 6th, 2024 05:26 - A Very Sweet Dream of Home (Teddy.15)
Simply changing how we think about things can make all the difference in...
August 6th, 2024 05:25 - THE LIFE OF LIKE (Poetrybyaqsa)
A great message to redirect out thoughts away from what we don\'t have to...
August 6th, 2024 05:22 - FATE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A most satisfying view of oneself in the spectrum of time. Nicely said.
August 6th, 2024 05:19 - Love Song (Tristan Robert Lange)
A couple of beautiful themes in this poem: love, unity, peace, joy,...
August 6th, 2024 05:18 - Letting Go of The Light (Neville)
A wonderful tribute to Dylan Thomas here Neville,. Unlike he though this...
August 6th, 2024 05:15 - On My Way To Star (Dev Parth)
A very nice write that takes one out of this world and in to the space of...
August 6th, 2024 05:13 - I. (Goldfinch60)
All will have an anthology of your works my friend. And may this not be...
August 6th, 2024 05:10 - “Good Morning Heartache. Sit Down” (HolesInMyJeans)
A noble sacrifice. Well worded in the build up and finished well in one...
August 6th, 2024 05:07 - In the Dust (Cocamedo)
A great message. There is no past and no future only the present and I...
August 6th, 2024 05:03 - Mom\'s hands (NafisaSB)
A lovely tribute to mother. Nicely done
August 6th, 2024 05:00 - Beauty Of Truth (Satishverma)
\"Let me unlock the
known. Knowing too much
was curse of...
August 6th, 2024 04:58 - Can You Wash Me? (Dan Williams)
This poem reeks with pain. This I believe is one of my favorite of yours....
August 6th, 2024 04:44 - Inheritance (MA-Q)
Dark, this poem reincarnates the dead and keeps the living at bay. Nicely...
August 5th, 2024 21:26 - i (Jon Nakapalau)
Interesting how a single detail can be the focus of an entire thought or...
August 5th, 2024 21:23 - God, How I Miss You (Thomas W Case)
Melancholy nostalgia in this beautiful poem of loss. Loved it
August 5th, 2024 21:21 - Blood Bitch (A Boy With Roses)
Multi colored this poem is multifaceted. I weave in and out of...
August 5th, 2024 16:24 - Hot Water (Anabella151)
All things have their positives and negatives. It is a matter of which...
August 5th, 2024 16:20 - Secrets of the sea. (CMarsh4)
Fish tales (tails) Brings memories fishing out at sea and hooking a...
August 5th, 2024 16:18 - A Saucer Full Of Cabriolet (ADarkerMind)
Enigmatic this one requires several readings and a key to unlock its...
August 5th, 2024 16:16 - Blue Song at Noon (MendedFences27)
I personally like the blues, well not all blues, but some. A most...
August 5th, 2024 16:13 - the poem (Regenoku)
The desire to be more than we are stated in such a cute and sweet manner.
August 5th, 2024 13:26 - Goodbye (RL Randall)
Haunting and chilling it threatens a sudden end and asks questions about...
August 5th, 2024 12:51 - Empathetic Inspiration (켄지 영원히 사랑한다💗)
Change different cultures and times. Change the one thing that is...
August 5th, 2024 12:49 - A Rose in The Midnight (Petrichor of Love)
This poem is reminiscent of Bram Stoker and vampiric love. It bleeds with...
August 5th, 2024 12:47 - The beast within (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Duality of man or at least undesirable aspects of each man. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 12:44 - ~`` Knees - Parody of Trees (Thad Wilk)
A great rhythm and rhyme reminiscent of \"I think I shall never see a poem...
August 5th, 2024 12:42 - Broken Dreams (Sami mulaj)
A most interesting comparison wet in a poem. Mind provoking. Nicely done.
August 5th, 2024 12:40 - The Scorpion And The Frog (Young Fella)
A wonderful portrayal of a classic fable and parallel story of a man and...
August 5th, 2024 12:38 - Ambrosia for Us (Thoughtless)
Beautiful and (possibly?) metaphoric.
August 5th, 2024 09:04 - The Return of Lochinvar (A Knight-Mare) (Paul W Conway)
A fun and metaphoric ballad and tale combining the best of both worlds....
August 5th, 2024 09:03 - Heart speaks (Natalie Heisey)
Nicely written with a most positive attitude.
August 5th, 2024 08:59 - Physical & Mental Scars (Mark The Phenomenon)
Painful memories can be seen as positive in that worse could have...
August 5th, 2024 08:57 - How Much (Tony36)
I am a cynic but this is darker than I. I prefer to think that I will...
August 5th, 2024 07:52 - Poetry of the Undesired (Gaurav Gurung)
Plight of the poor, underprivileged, those with deficits represented here...
August 5th, 2024 07:49 - If tomorrow starts without me (Shallom_M)
Do we make a difference? A great question that this poem poses. Nicely...
August 5th, 2024 07:46 - world wish (Jim56)
A beautiful dream but unless you are a bee not likely in the near future....
August 5th, 2024 07:44 - The Champion of Coney Island (Gray0328)
A vivid scene with imagery galore but I sense something deeper rumbling in...
August 5th, 2024 07:42 - 8th poem for - “T.N.D” - Roots (Maplespal)
Nice memories contained in this short piece. Well expressed.
August 5th, 2024 07:32 - Where I End and You Begin (Beano)
Thought provoking and nicely done.
\"Morning, and its forceful...
August 5th, 2024 07:27 - All Along the Watchtower (Neville)
Memories of the past, so I won\'t mention him but what of Jimi Hendrix it...
August 5th, 2024 07:25 - Comforting Consolings (Orchidee)
Another wonderful hymn that I could have sung yesterday. Well done Orchi
August 5th, 2024 07:21 - THE CELEBRANTS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
A nice tribute. Well done
August 5th, 2024 07:19 - Polarisation (2781)
Politics always an amusing fight between left and right. Nicely done
August 5th, 2024 07:18 - Angry At The Symbolism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read for film viewers and symbolism well we will see. Nicely done...
August 5th, 2024 07:17 - Phew (Boot)
A bit of humor is great to start the day Thanks for the smile.
August 5th, 2024 07:15 - nights like these (Queer-with-a-pen)
Sad indeed. painful and tragic it has a haunting quality to it. Well...
August 5th, 2024 07:13 - CARVING (Bobby O)
A deep and powerful write that courageously spews forth its message in...
August 5th, 2024 07:08 - One Petal (Cocamedo)
Full of memories that bring nostalgia to anyone that has had a lengthy...
August 5th, 2024 07:03 - Nocturn (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I feel the night in this poem that has so many great images and lines....
August 5th, 2024 06:58 - Crying For Freedom (Dev Parth)
A well worked poem with great power
so well rhymed and metered it flows...
August 5th, 2024 06:56 - NO SENSE GUESSING (Bobby O)
Variability is part of life. Loved the first line \" Sometimes becomes...
August 5th, 2024 05:45 - Natures Wonder In Life. (Goldfinch60)
And may it be so Andy. A calm and peaceful read to start the day. Lovely
August 5th, 2024 05:38 - By Destiny Caught (Dan Williams)
This poem reads so well in its rhythm and rhyme but more so each stanza...
August 5th, 2024 05:32 - Moonwhite Heart (Satishverma)
Unexpected questions shake reality and leave the reader pondering deeper...
August 4th, 2024 20:35 - Urayoan, Towering Mountain (Rrodriguez)
Scenic, vivid imagery that takes one on a trip. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:33 - But I wasn’t Enough (Gloria Denise)
Painful to read. A darker write. Sad.
August 4th, 2024 20:23 - not so empty thoughts (Emptythoughts)
Honesty is the best policy it makes life a lot easier. Nicely written.
August 4th, 2024 20:18 - Will of learning faith (DREEK0)
A nice read about faith in oneself. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 20:17 - Observer (NinjaGirl)
The dichotomy of who we are and how we see ourselves made clear in the...
August 4th, 2024 18:36 - Celebrate (Cocamedo)
Wise words and a fun read. Thanks for sharing.
August 4th, 2024 17:35 - Fake (Alan R)
This required more than one reading. Life is full of triggers and timers...
August 4th, 2024 17:33 - Supernova (Mya)
A fun read that is warm in many ways. Nice
August 4th, 2024 17:29 - Portrait of Truth (Teddy.15)
Teddy you have a knack to make someone feel good with your comments and...
August 4th, 2024 16:05 - The bridge of love (Sami mulaj)
August 4th, 2024 15:56 - The bridge of love (Sami mulaj)
Clever write and probably wise as well. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 15:56 - ~> My drunk Parrot Pete - true tale (Thad Wilk)
My friend had a Doberman that would only drink beer. It was the most...
August 4th, 2024 15:55 - Corona (MendedFences27)
Cheers to that. Nice write
August 4th, 2024 15:52 - Montana (Thomas W Case)
Thomas I lived in Montana for a while and though the rivers in the west...
August 4th, 2024 15:51 - The unforgiving Christian (Charlotte3)
True for all beliefs there are those that follow and those that just want...
August 4th, 2024 14:03 - Destiny\'s Mime (Kurt Philip Behm)
A beautiful write about most people. Those that love to watch sports on TV...
August 4th, 2024 13:59 - My Wedding Night (Thoughtless)
Is it the body or the person we love? Old histories should be left in the...
August 4th, 2024 13:55 - Jokes On Me (13LaurenD)
Mixed emotions, things are never simple especially in love. Good write.
August 4th, 2024 13:53 - Seeing The Daisies (Annemarie)
A most positive attitude maintained in the face of adversity. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 09:53 - Standard Class (A Town Shanty) (AuburnScribbler)
A song indeed of war, loss and its meaninglessness. Haunting thoughts
August 4th, 2024 09:52 - But I’m Smiling (Tkatie118)
Sad and dark but with a hopeful ending left with a smile. A great message.
August 4th, 2024 09:49 - i wish i could write her a poem (Carpe4diem)
It sounds like you did write her a poem and a nice one too. Very nice.
August 4th, 2024 09:46 - Perception3 (John Prophet)
A chain of thoughts linked in free association to a single thought. Nice
August 4th, 2024 09:45 - BROWN EYES (Adiba Khan)
A wonderful view into the eyes of the common but spectacular. Color is...
August 4th, 2024 09:43 - Tarnished Knight (Tony36)
Such a claim of love so nicely state. The rhyme was great in this short...
August 4th, 2024 09:40 - Beggars (2781)
A beautiful message in this poem. So many judge the poor and unfortunate...
August 4th, 2024 06:27 - 7th poem for - “T.N.D” - Perfect Picture (Maplespal)
Surprise ending to this piece gives it a powerful impact. Nicely done
August 4th, 2024 06:24 - How Un-Easy It Stands, This Sublime. (ADarkerMind)
A gratifying but enigmatic word combination requiring a key to unlock the...
August 4th, 2024 06:23 - happy poem (Jim56)
Cute and reminded me of when my dog used to dig them up and bring them to...
August 4th, 2024 06:21 - Breaking Bad Habits (Gray0328)
Modern man\'s prayer. To achieve it one must return to the past. Destroy...
August 4th, 2024 06:19
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