Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Wings like the abyss (Kenny O\'Donnell) Just as I imagine her seductive, sensuous and quietly peaceful. A very...
  November 10th, 2025 08:13
• Coffee Makes Me Poop (Matthew R. Callies) Now that is more information than I needed to know all seems in poetic...
  November 10th, 2025 08:11
• I tried to understand (Maplespal) A confusing place that I have been before. Lovely lines grace this poem...
  November 10th, 2025 08:05
• Clutter Land (Jerry Reynolds) I love your last lines “The shape of could have been— is stronger...
  November 10th, 2025 08:03
• we all need someone (Jim56) An upbeat poem to lift one through the day. I can always rely on you Jim...
  November 10th, 2025 08:01
• I, Your Pole Star (Lyra Silvertongue) A wonderful metaphor that carries the message that it is not the brightest...
  November 10th, 2025 07:44
• eleventh hour remembrance (Arqios) Beautiful a reverent tribute to past wars of senseless slaughter of blood...
  November 10th, 2025 06:18
• STREET CORNER POET (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This one has a vivid image and one all too real. I have wondered how a...
  November 10th, 2025 04:33
• A Sober Life Is A Peaceful Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Always found it interesting how drink makes some violent, others foolish...
  November 10th, 2025 04:29
• Love is strong (Ethan Mikel StAmour) A very nice senryu painted here
  November 10th, 2025 04:27
• No Name #2 (MatPie) This monologue in poetic form seems a soliloquy as it speaks of life and...
  November 10th, 2025 04:26
• The Dream (It Comes Too Often, and Yet Not Often Enough) (JD Boye) Enchanted by a love that can not be released from the mind. Well written...
  November 10th, 2025 04:22
• The wife plays nurse Nightingale while her husband... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Metaphor taken seriously and it is not an image I want to dwell on or...
  November 10th, 2025 04:19
• Our Little Vacation House in Batangas (Mielly) It sounds quaint , quiet, peaceful and a place to rest well. Well done
  November 10th, 2025 04:17
• Snap the Silence (GeekSusie) A well written piece of critique lambasting government officials that...
  November 10th, 2025 04:15
• Omniscient Omnipresence (Orchidee) Loved it Orchi another hymn of recognition nicely done
  November 10th, 2025 04:08
• Hair Numbering. (Goldfinch60) A fun read Gold and with me I don\'t have to ask since my hair line has...
  November 10th, 2025 04:06
• Lost in the bitterness (Baker) A strong poem of apology that includes natural imagery well done.
  November 9th, 2025 20:49
• scrap crap poetry (DeadRose) Still trying to piece it together. A fun read
  November 9th, 2025 20:45
• A Nature Poem… (Doggerel Dave) Well Dave I have to admit that I have seen it many times and it blankets...
  November 9th, 2025 20:44
• Untitled [9] (Niko Papadatos) Logic in poetic form. Nicely said
  November 9th, 2025 18:46
• November (PerditaRose) A most vivid and clearly put haiku. Nicely written
  November 9th, 2025 16:25
• your room (Luke Bensing) This poem leaves me with questions about which room we are talking about....
  November 9th, 2025 15:37
• Still Lighting My Way (Jane Walker) A lovely tribute to parents and very nicely written with a sense of...
  November 9th, 2025 15:34
• Fame (Amethyste) Age matters not, we all have to grow up at some point of die an infant...
  November 9th, 2025 13:49
• The ring (Mumiza) This one has me puzzled just when I think I\'ve got it, it slips away....
  November 9th, 2025 12:56
• a girl made of soil (Tweedyboox) Seen kids making mud dolls and this reminded me of them. Lovely write
  November 9th, 2025 12:54
• A stripper he liked.... (Kenny O\'Donnell) How some things change and others don\'t. A narrative that tells it as it...
  November 9th, 2025 11:48
• Old Woman\'s Hands (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) A lovely poem of age and memories. Touching and a fave
  November 9th, 2025 11:46
• Sunday sun rise (RSM0812) Most beautiful words that leave a sense of melancholy and even a...
  November 9th, 2025 11:44
• ℋℯ𝓇ℯ\'𝓈 𝒴ℴ𝓊𝓇 ℰ𝓋ℯ𝓇ℊ𝓇ℯℯ𝓃. (Keyara S Trotman) A beautiful sentiment expressed in a poem vivid in images and metaphor
  November 9th, 2025 11:42
• The Forgotten Parade (Matthew R. Callies) This poem brings to mind memories of people, places and times that proceed...
  November 9th, 2025 10:28
• a reflection (Applecherry) Insecurity oozes out of this poem. Fear, doubt, discomfort all reflect in...
  November 9th, 2025 10:24
• A moment: The end (Maplespal) Guilt by association a short write about not hanging with the wrong...
  November 9th, 2025 10:21
• Three-in-One Times the Effigy (Tristan Robert Lange) Every one wants to go to a stoning they used to sell food at the hangings....
  November 9th, 2025 10:19
• FEAR (Princess Osariemen Aihie) So many fears in this world many different than the past many the same....
  November 9th, 2025 08:08
• AM (Drniran) A most interesting write that works its way unconventionally out of a jam....
  November 9th, 2025 08:07
• Lest We Should Ever Forget (Neville) Neville this poem offers a reverent and solemn picture to an irreverent...
  November 9th, 2025 08:03
• Old Soldier (Paul Bell) Deeply haunting, dark but soft, sad but peaceful, reverent one might say....
  November 9th, 2025 07:53
• Justice In Practice (Gray0328) For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction so says Newton\'s...
  November 9th, 2025 06:49
• happy world (Jim56) A most cheerful and bright thought Jim. Nicely upbeat for a Sunday
  November 9th, 2025 06:44
• Johnny High Horse (FrasMac) A fine poem about those to focused on their own fears and insecurities to...
  November 9th, 2025 05:50
• farcical bloomery (Arqios) Nature full of paradox, beauty is more than a veneer. It shines from...
  November 9th, 2025 05:46
• God Won\'t Let You Go In Reverse (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I think it just as wrong to ask a person\'s religion as it is to ask how...
  November 9th, 2025 04:02
• THE LONELY ETERNITY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem has a dark setting leaving a spooky feel and haunted ora to it....
  November 9th, 2025 03:56
• Gods own bouquet (OA Poetry) Colors the key to understanding each other for a black and white world...
  November 9th, 2025 03:55
• The Encounter (Sree) A fun poem that may contain an element of truth. Any entity that has...
  November 9th, 2025 03:53
• Skeleton of Freedom (Dan Williams) A sad world indeed is portrayed in this cynical poem of world development....
  November 9th, 2025 03:50
• A morning note (NafisaSB) A great message in this poem the simple gesture of a smile can spread to...
  November 9th, 2025 03:45
• Let Peace And Love Reign. (Goldfinch60) I echo your sentiment Andy unfortunately there are those that proper by...
  November 9th, 2025 03:43
• I can Taste the Pain (Thomas W Case) Rough and raw it rages and leaves the self behind abandoned in the grit...
  November 9th, 2025 03:40
• MOMENTS OF MADNESS (David Welch) Some really good lines in this poem and a topic that can be taken as...
  November 9th, 2025 03:38
• A Lady (Anthony Hanible) This poem upon first read I thought of as a child speaking but then upon...
  November 8th, 2025 20:44
• Cupid (Emperor) This poem has wonderful wording that gives it a fave
  November 8th, 2025 20:42
• HYPNOTIC FRAME (Acheel) Beautiful wording and images that presents observations and philosophy in...
  November 8th, 2025 20:40
• The Weather Conditions for Today (Teddy.15) Teddy this is a splendid metaphor that works so well. Dementia may come...
  November 8th, 2025 20:35
• True to my soul (Amethyste) A powerful statement. I believe we all do. I feel that everyone does the...
  November 8th, 2025 17:30
• emotionally manipulated by the melody (Luke Bensing) Pieces connected the whole greater than the sum of the parts a gestalt...
  November 8th, 2025 16:54
• Thunder (Arial) A poem that seems to say that if it was not meant to be it is not meant to...
  November 8th, 2025 15:51
• Ballade of Yggdrasil (Matthew R. Callies) This poem sounded very Nordic. With one grand mother from Norway and...
  November 8th, 2025 15:03
• Tempered Life (RSM0812) I get it. Time tempers all things. Unfortunately we do not always value...
  November 8th, 2025 14:59
• Asleep (PerditaRose) A race in one\'s sleep. Nicely portrayed and with a timely reveal
  November 8th, 2025 14:07
• a time i was afraid - personal narrative writing essay (Vividvoid14) This was a great short story with a fixed purpose and message that came...
  November 8th, 2025 13:07
• Untitled {9} (Niko Papadatos) Pain changes our point of view and narrows our vision. A good write where...
  November 8th, 2025 13:00
• Fired Three Times (Gray0328) This poem is raw as if scrubbed raw. A cleansing of all. Nicely written...
  November 8th, 2025 12:58
• The Child That Death Forgot (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Sirens came through strong in that I had just read another poem today...
  November 8th, 2025 12:57
• Despair island (Lorenz) A siren\'s trade in this poem. Very satisfying since I always loved sirens...
  November 8th, 2025 12:52
• Compensation (Devender Kumar) Ah such a poignant poem. The right of the many outweigh the right of the...
  November 8th, 2025 10:44
• Fake smile (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Suicide may end the drunkenness but to awake with a hangover and to what?...
  November 8th, 2025 08:33
• They (Tristan Robert Lange) Machinery rusts and breaks down. A wrench in the works always works...
  November 8th, 2025 08:30
• Little Mo (Paul Bell) Maybe not the staff but surely the shaft that one will surely not see the...
  November 8th, 2025 08:26
• A little announcement (Cloie) Heard the message but hope this does not mean you are leaving
  November 8th, 2025 06:24
• dignity and pride (Jim56) A wonderful write and I would have to agree but in some the flame needs to...
  November 8th, 2025 06:22
• a sandwich part.2 (Applecherry) A metaphor for a relationship here where it takes two slices of bread and...
  November 8th, 2025 06:18
• after-image (Arqios) Between shadow and person, reflection and real, what was and is there is a...
  November 8th, 2025 06:15
• Hour 8 (FallingAwake2) A journal note serves as a poem, let your thoughts roam and soon you will...
  November 8th, 2025 06:08
• The Sand Spirits (Ethan Mikel StAmour) I have been to the desert and walked through it and this poem paints its...
  November 8th, 2025 04:55
• It\'s no poem...just telling that It\'s good to be back on the platform again! (Nayak) Glad your back
  November 8th, 2025 04:51
• BRICK WALL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) So true indeed. Poetic words of wisdom. incarcerated in an institution of...
  November 8th, 2025 04:01
• It\'s Getting Dark (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A uni-rhyme poem that in four lines sets an image in the mind and brings...
  November 8th, 2025 03:59
• A question of Karma (FrasMac) Now you know that I love word play and this one is a good one. It is more...
  November 8th, 2025 03:56
• Ghost of love (OA Poetry) This poem has such a familiar feel to it. It seems that I have read it...
  November 8th, 2025 03:54
• 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒯𝒽ℯ𝓃 (Keyara S Trotman) Others may act as though they own your life but only each person owns...
  November 8th, 2025 03:52
• Home (Meagan Adelle) A most interesting approach taking the negative to prove the positive. All...
  November 8th, 2025 03:48
• The Life Element (Ethan Mikel StAmour) A great haiku who\'s image stands out in my mind. Nicely done
  November 8th, 2025 03:45
• I try (StephenJames) The multiple usage of the word try emphasizes it and strengthens it in the...
  November 8th, 2025 03:44
• Grace Given (Orchidee) This poem such a familiar story that it made me think that it was Sunday...
  November 8th, 2025 03:42
• Birth And Death. (Goldfinch60) A lovely metaphor Andy all with the thought that we are reabsorbed into...
  November 8th, 2025 03:40
• Mother (Andrew Deaton) A beautiful tribute and acknowledgement of the special love between a...
  November 7th, 2025 20:24
• answer (Elizabeth Ross 4) There is tension expressed in this poem that is on the point of bursting....
  November 7th, 2025 19:46
• QUESTIONS (David Welch) Questions after questions follow each other in this poem it seems self...
  November 7th, 2025 19:33
• Glory to thermodynamics... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) The free flow of thought roll onward in this poem. Well done
  November 7th, 2025 19:30
• Sunny days (Amethyste) Great metaphor nicely placed in this poem.
  November 7th, 2025 16:05
• Such is Life (Jjudaharts) A good senryu nicely done.
  November 7th, 2025 16:04
• Karma\'s lessons (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of encouragement and gratitude. Nicely written
  November 7th, 2025 16:03
• Karma\'s lessons (Nicole Pritchard) A poem of encouragement and gratitude. Nicely written
  November 7th, 2025 16:03
• The Cuckoo (Tkatie118) This poem is ominous and dark but alluring as it sucks you in to a pretty...
  November 7th, 2025 16:01
• After Dinner Mints (Amandatoriii) This poem does a dance between shyness and attraction. A lovely write
  November 7th, 2025 15:14
• I am With You (William Hromada) A poem of no fear. Lovely persistence and dependability. Loved it
  November 7th, 2025 15:12
• love is meant to shine (Erica Masindi) A most interesting write well constructed and structured
  November 7th, 2025 13:14