Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• the fade haircut (Demar Desu) Again nicely done.
  April 4th, 2025 15:46
• in bloom (Alex TheHueman) Biblical and metaphorical this poem speaks of similarities and lack of...
  April 4th, 2025 15:45
• Spring\'s Wish (Teddy.15) There is a sense in this poem of being overwhelmed by colors and...
  April 4th, 2025 15:42
• The Hibiscus! (Rrodriguez) Living in Florida I have had several different Hibiscus types and colors...
  April 4th, 2025 15:39
• El cielo (Falcon_mn) We all want the sky is true and expect the sky even though we are offered...
  April 4th, 2025 14:57
• Love is a Special Thing (Ksey_Gan) Conflicts occur constantly as to whether we have what it takes to do what...
  April 4th, 2025 14:55
• We Need A Miracle (Charlie Nine) Questions that many have as to why a good god would allow things that...
  April 4th, 2025 14:33
• The Clock\'s quiet Song ([email protected]) Poetically told the story and truth of time. Nicely constructed and
  April 4th, 2025 12:57
• The House Left Unguarded (TheInnerLens) Great metaphors here. A nicely written piece
  April 4th, 2025 11:35
• Watchers (KTay) A great metaphor. Very nice
  April 4th, 2025 11:32
• Prevaricator (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) That\'s pretty direct and puts it on the line. Nicely said
  April 4th, 2025 11:29
• She Visits on the Cold Wind (Thomas W Case) Funny how flashes or triggers set off thoughts, memories, emotions that...
  April 4th, 2025 11:28
• Poetry Is (Tony36) Bravo Tony! This is one of my favorite of your poems. It speaks to me.
  April 4th, 2025 11:26
• Jesus, the Icon (Gray0328) The wording of this poem captured me and I give it a fave
  April 4th, 2025 11:25
• Because I am the Eldest (Isabella Morgan) I too am the eldest child and think I kind of understand. The advantage...
  April 4th, 2025 11:22
• Insignificant (Kat Da Poet) True empathy such a hard thing to have. We all say we understand when we...
  April 4th, 2025 11:15
• Under The Bus (Hanible) A great metaphor. We all feel we have been thrown under that proverbial...
  April 4th, 2025 11:11
• Untittled (RSM0812) Rhyme after rhyme in a poem of metaphor. Nicely written
  April 4th, 2025 11:07
• Viscosity (Tristan Robert Lange) Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic...
  April 4th, 2025 08:21
• Cognitive Dissonance (Bragee) A wonderful expression whether poetic, romantic, friendship, or universal....
  April 4th, 2025 08:17
• Ego (F.B.R) A read of social relationships gone sour over time. Now stale it is time...
  April 4th, 2025 08:08
• The Girl that would not stay (Malcolm) A most beautiful write that takes a rather ethereal view that the reader...
  April 4th, 2025 08:06
• The angers burn (Maplespal) Lies burn both the sender and receiver like a hot iron grabbed by two...
  April 4th, 2025 05:56
• More Than Words (Cassiopeiaxneptune) A beautiful acknowledgement and recognition that is expressed in gratitude...
  April 4th, 2025 05:53
• Sterling and Saoirse part 2 (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Again you show poetry in your writing throwing in rhyme to the story that...
  April 4th, 2025 05:50
• animal barbecue (Jim56) This reminds me of Winnie the Pooh and his friends. A lovely child\'s...
  April 4th, 2025 05:46
• The Day We First Met (Paul Gerard Reed) An ode to a love. Nicely written and well worded. Very nice
  April 4th, 2025 04:27
• ANGELIC (Nephilim56) Nicely written with good meter it flows like honey and with nice rhyme
  April 4th, 2025 04:25
• Prophecy (Midnight Lasagna) Very well worded this piece speaks poetically. A fave
  April 4th, 2025 04:24
• A Dark Starless Sky (Abraham Konchellah) Powerful, gritty and with great images that are used as metaphors. Nicely...
  April 4th, 2025 04:22
• Terminator Seeds (Mutley Ravishes) I love conversations of the absurd they are a wonderful diversion from the...
  April 4th, 2025 04:19
• Stumbling On (Dan Williams) A metaphoric wasteland is pictured here with little hope and full of...
  April 4th, 2025 04:17
• It\'s hurt (Junes) When we want something too much we guarantee its absence. A poem of...
  April 4th, 2025 04:12
• When Time Held Its Breath for Me (Charlie Nine) Many poetic lines in this poem. It shows great poetic images as well and...
  April 4th, 2025 04:07
• i was the one that invited pain in (Juwaireeyah) The push and pull of relationships that are either too close and threaten...
  April 4th, 2025 04:02
• Just a Waste of F------ Time (Poetic Licence) The irony of what people say and do never ceases to amaze me. Being a...
  April 4th, 2025 03:58
• ever onward (Arqios) The journey of life and existence. I particularly love the second stanza....
  April 4th, 2025 03:53
• Shining Love. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful picture painted Gold in words of gold. Very nice
  April 4th, 2025 03:47
• Delusions (Spilleronsheet) With a theme of being oneself this poem uses rhyme to take the reader on a...
  April 4th, 2025 03:40
• Nighttime Rager (Yael) Rage against the light. That is the light on my pipe. A fun read
  April 3rd, 2025 19:06
• Forever Entwined (Ezekiel Olayemi) A poem of unity and timeless togetherness. Nicely written
  April 3rd, 2025 18:35
• frustration (Thoughtless) Clever write. Love the implication.
  April 3rd, 2025 17:11
• Betrayal (guilty as charged)... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A poem of several disjointed thoughts as they would race through my mind...
  April 3rd, 2025 16:06
• Invisible hands (Spilleronsheet) Creative and most metaphoric. Anxiety and Adam Smith bring up the idea of...
  April 3rd, 2025 16:00
• The Lantern Keep (TheInnerLens) Brilliantly written with great metaphor and imagery. Lovely
  April 3rd, 2025 13:50
• Venom (Jonathan Merida) So much anger in this poem that overflows with emotion. Well worded it...
  April 3rd, 2025 13:49
• My Dream Walking (Sunshine777) We all search for what some call a soul mate others true love. A match...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:51
• The flight of love (Kaz) A great poem with a very creative form. Nicely done
  April 3rd, 2025 12:49
• Sterling and Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) I can tell that your heart and talent lies in story telling. When I first...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:12
• Justice In Judgement (Orchidee) Now there is a good hymn one of just retribution to get the juices...
  April 3rd, 2025 12:05
• The Twins Contrite (Gray0328) Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love...
  April 3rd, 2025 10:46
• Hard to Handle (KTay) How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those...
  April 3rd, 2025 10:09
• The Cost of Creation ([email protected]) If honesty existed one would pay the value one felt for each piece of art...
  April 3rd, 2025 10:06
• Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm) Careful reading of the words reveals deep philosophical meaning that...
  April 3rd, 2025 09:43
• All I See Is Darkness (Tristan Robert Lange) An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later....
  April 3rd, 2025 09:34
• Hope (Heledd) Love the line (Hope is such a futile and vague word that can be changed...
  April 3rd, 2025 08:47
• Violence vs Non-Violence (Demar Desu) What a great senryu this is most lovely
  April 3rd, 2025 08:21
• Raindrop (RSM0812) Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow)...
  April 3rd, 2025 08:19
• A mellow poem (Xqw) The opening line reminds me of a song by Donovan (Mellow Yellow) A calming...
  April 3rd, 2025 07:22
• Blinded (Maplespal) Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can...
  April 3rd, 2025 07:20
• Rockets of life (Tony36) A wonderful analogy well worked out my only hope is that the colorful...
  April 3rd, 2025 07:17
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
  April 3rd, 2025 06:46
• Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever, relatable, nicely rhymed, short and to the point. Well done
  April 3rd, 2025 06:46
• charity teddy bear (Jim56) Innocently cute a poem about children and for children or at least that...
  April 3rd, 2025 06:44
• Western Skies (Cassiopeiaxneptune) Very well written and thought provoking requiring careful reading that...
  April 3rd, 2025 06:43
• Paralysis (Midnight Lasagna) Haunting this poem set to the meter of a common child\'s prayer is highly...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:27
• VIELLE RUELLES (Nephilim56) Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem....
  April 3rd, 2025 03:24
• NO LONGER (Athora13) Although it is apparent that this is an individual call to arms it also...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:22
• The Lost Key (Arqios) Cryptic this poem tells its story in metaphor through a child\'s story...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:15
• Secrets of the Great Fig (Teddy.15) Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:11
• Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence) Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:07
• Storms In Life. (Goldfinch60) Everything turns out for the best if one only has the patience to wait. A...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:05
• Russian veteran of the war with Hitler after Aleksandr Megiroff (Ksey_Gan) A sense of mystery in this poem that may be more metaphoric than its...
  April 3rd, 2025 03:04
• I prayed (Joseph M Marion) A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
  April 3rd, 2025 03:01
• The Color of Pain (MDStone) Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is...
  April 3rd, 2025 02:59
• Against All Odds (Ezekiel Olayemi) Such a positive feel to this poem and good advice as well. Nicely done
  April 2nd, 2025 18:55
• Silence. (Jonathan Merida) Beautiful it leaves a mood of peace. The last line is superb and contrasts...
  April 2nd, 2025 18:53
• Okay, March, Our Affair is Officially OVER. (Cheeky Missy) Such beautiful images of nature you paint in these sonnets Chic. A fave
  April 2nd, 2025 18:51
• My Children (Sunshine777) A mother\'s love and a proclamation that she will always feel this. There...
  April 2nd, 2025 16:40
• We Can Breathe (Andrew Isaiah Castillo) A nice flow to this poem. Nicely written.
  April 2nd, 2025 16:37
• KFC Cannibals? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A hair raising read. Chicken fingers takes on a whole new meaning....
  April 2nd, 2025 14:26
• A letter to my future (Pamela) A plea that is heartfelt. Nicely written
  April 2nd, 2025 14:24
• Thirty four Winters -Chills and Thrills (Narayan Gadagkar) A most hopeful view in this poem. Very nicely written.
  April 2nd, 2025 12:36
• Painted Sky (Teddy.15) A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as...
  April 2nd, 2025 12:34
• The Late Val Kilmer (Randyjohnson71) A beautiful tribute to a great actor. A favorite film of mine (Ghost and...
  April 2nd, 2025 12:31
• Devils\' Breath (Kurt Philip Behm) Another good write the rhymes so well in its telling. Tightly woven
  April 2nd, 2025 12:29
• A Mad World (KTay) A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
  April 2nd, 2025 12:23
• Terrible 1920 in Russia after Diniriy Merejrovski (Ksey_Gan) A wonderful historical, social, emotional poem that is as dark as the...
  April 2nd, 2025 12:18
• The Months as People (Gray0328) The poem flows through the months smoothly and with great images that...
  April 2nd, 2025 10:58
• The Silent Weaver ([email protected]) Art resides within the heart and needs no pay. A lovely write
  April 2nd, 2025 10:54
• Undo the Darkness (Thomas W Case) A write that feels so real. Nicely said Thomas
  April 2nd, 2025 10:37
• Me and Mrs Beale (Tkatie118) Complexities in the relationships of people. A fun read with an ending...
  April 2nd, 2025 10:34
• What the Hell? (Tristan Robert Lange) I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in...
  April 2nd, 2025 10:31
• Divided (NinjaGirl) A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
  April 2nd, 2025 10:22
• What are we? (Nikola) A poem of questions that in one way or another will be answered. A plea...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:33
• Bitter Medicine (Garth Rakumakoe) Nicely said and may that bitter medicine work its magic healing and...
  April 2nd, 2025 08:31
• Betterfly (RSM0812) A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well....
  April 2nd, 2025 08:29
• His guitar (Tony36) The picture painted of a flash concert and a man that plays from his heart...
  April 2nd, 2025 07:56
• One Busy Day!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in...
  April 2nd, 2025 06:59
• Angel (The Indignant Poetess) (An angel can not be beautiful and good) a powerful line that sums it up....
  April 2nd, 2025 06:57