Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• O\' My Spirit (Parsa) Beauty in this Shakspearian style poem that bleeds nostalgia of another...
  June 10th, 2025 04:59
• Do Not Conform (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A nicely written poem of admonition toward those that won\'t listen....
  June 10th, 2025 04:56
• STATUES (Nephilim56) It is the power of this poem and the poignant relevance that gets the...
  June 10th, 2025 04:51
• last look (Anemoia) A sad departure in this poem. Raw emotion where the one that initiates the...
  June 10th, 2025 04:47
• SPIT in my face (Evergreen) If you got the therapist to say fuck you you did something right and I\'m...
  June 10th, 2025 04:40
• Awaiting (Spilleronsheet) Bad outcomes and uncertainty prompt questions after the fact. I hear those...
  June 10th, 2025 04:37
• But They Don\'t See It (ForeverJesus7) A strong poem that may apply to many current issues. Nicely written in...
  June 10th, 2025 04:35
• Filling the Space (Steve Goldenfort) Such nice meter to this poem of good advice with rhyme as well makes this...
  June 10th, 2025 04:32
• Ode to Goose and Seuss (Matthew R. Callies) A most charming, nostalgic, fun, day brightening and lovely poem with such...
  June 10th, 2025 04:29
• Indigo and Stone (Haleyalexis) To appreciate a poem to its full extent one must have been there in some...
  June 10th, 2025 04:26
• My Poems. (Poetic Licence) I hear you Tobani and can identify with you. This poem is a confession for...
  June 10th, 2025 04:20
• I\'m Not Waving (Tom Dylan) I have been saved by that same lifeguard. Dark cold waters with strong...
  June 10th, 2025 04:14
• Not Cloudy Tonight Please (Orchidee) Orchi you keep me thinking about strawberries and they are out of season...
  June 10th, 2025 04:11
• My Life Is So Good. (Goldfinch60) It is a wonderful day when gratitude is the first thought. It is a...
  June 10th, 2025 04:07
• Damnation: A Requiem for the Sacred (Mottakeenur Rehman) Enigmatic, prophetic it reads like a holy book. It\'s metaphors broad...
  June 10th, 2025 04:03
• The Atmosphere We Breathe (Rrodriguez) A lovely poem Rrodriguez you were able to turn cosmic terms into something...
  June 9th, 2025 19:49
• Pilgrimage (Fränz Müller) A beautiful poem of a sensuous nature. A lovely poetic write. A fave
  June 9th, 2025 19:45
• Jim and Mary Jane (Spencer Wilhelm) Dreams and reality two partners in life, truth and lies married to each...
  June 9th, 2025 19:43
• Is something calling again (Amy Michelle Mosier) Always something that we chase elusive is the game. Nice
  June 9th, 2025 17:07
• Hearts that Break (RSM0812)
  June 9th, 2025 17:05
• Hearts that Break (RSM0812) A trail of metaphors lead one to the end of this poem. Love carries on....
  June 9th, 2025 17:05
• Corsican (Damaso) A most interesting read with multiple metaphors. I liked the line...
  June 9th, 2025 16:57
• Trash glass (Shadowbones) Real life incident turned metaphor. Very nice
  June 9th, 2025 15:45
• Sister Sister (Sebastian.) A poem of the difficulty of dealing with a sibling that has problems. Love...
  June 9th, 2025 14:14
• The Shadow (Anthony Hanible) A sense that no one feels or knows what you do. Like a child under the...
  June 9th, 2025 14:11
• The Weight of Regret (Shahla Latifi) A wonderful write of inner battle. Motherhood and children a tool to...
  June 9th, 2025 14:09
• Smoking (Simple Tendencies) What a great symbol of the excitement of a passionate relationship. Very...
  June 9th, 2025 14:04
• Tomorrow\'s Petroglyph (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt how many times are there that there are those things in the back of...
  June 9th, 2025 13:50
• \"Still Standing There\" (Z7 Softens) A poem of not being together anymore. A sense of loss and pain and a sense...
  June 9th, 2025 13:47
• When You Left (Gray0328) A poem of loss and missing someone. nicely written
  June 9th, 2025 13:34
• Cake and strawberries (Orchidee) I\'ll take cream with my strawberries and cake you can hold my cabbage...
  June 9th, 2025 11:27
• I\'m through (Hzugman) I\'m with you. Society too soft needs a chill of cold water telling it as...
  June 9th, 2025 11:25
• The onset of love at 50 (Surfeyor) Infatuation, obsession, passion powerful. Well done.
  June 9th, 2025 11:23
• No, Guess I Musta Followed Peter Pan (Cheeky Missy) The use of so many aromas and tastes is a pleasant and refreshing change...
  June 9th, 2025 11:19
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 50-Synthesis-DyingGrass--5May2025 (Soman Ragavan) Another analysis of a poem set with moral and emotional meaning. It has a...
  June 9th, 2025 10:21
• Sacrament (Not)
  June 9th, 2025 10:16
• Sacrament (Not) A most foreboding and ominous write that shows darkness to the very end
  June 9th, 2025 10:16
• Things She Doesn\'t Say Out Loud (COGNOVA) A most lovely view from a child\'s eyes of the personification of nature...
  June 9th, 2025 08:37
• You can\'t change me (Tony36) Tony is this one that you reworked? It sounds very similar to another of...
  June 9th, 2025 08:34
• manners (Jim56) Good one Jim. Manners are a code that each culture has and differ from one...
  June 9th, 2025 08:32
• Grey Girl (A piece of luggage) Seductive and yet unknown this poem speaks of desire and lack of...
  June 9th, 2025 06:16
• THE RED LIPSTICK WITNESS MARCH 2025 (Swarovski20) Food and passion so easily intertwined. A poem of hunger. Most lovely
  June 9th, 2025 06:13
• Addiction. (Rosie) A sad poem of pain, not only physical but emotional that needs healing...
  June 9th, 2025 06:09
• This is what (Maplespal) A clever write that utilizes the sense as a numbering system to elucidate...
  June 9th, 2025 05:21
• Your Kindness (Parsa) Great metaphor in this love poem that intricately weaves its story. Nicely...
  June 9th, 2025 05:19
• I WAITED FOR YOU (Nephilim56) The vivid imagery in this poem sets the tone and scene but later in...
  June 9th, 2025 05:17
• Untitled (Matthew R. Callies) This seems the destiny of a poet where words wander and meaning gently...
  June 9th, 2025 05:15
• A Quiet Ache (Salian) The feeling comes through in this poem of unfulfilled love and envy for...
  June 9th, 2025 05:13
• The beast of revelation (2781) A poem based on a Biblical verse that questions the identity of the Beast....
  June 9th, 2025 05:10
• Love Myself (John Lee) A poem that reminded me in the beginning of that song All my exes live in...
  June 9th, 2025 05:07
• Optimistic Tragedy by Nikolai Tikhonov (Ksey_Gan) This poem that speaks as if a historic event spells its metaphors out...
  June 9th, 2025 05:04
• Forcing Myself To Function (Anthony Hanible) There is a charm to this short piece and its pieces. Like the puzzle it\'s...
  June 9th, 2025 05:01
• Farewell (Spencer Wilhelm) It reads remarkably well and has good rhyme. I have never done one of...
  June 9th, 2025 04:59
• The Week the Gnats Watched Me Heal (The Soft Witness) A series of great shorts here. Each one with its own merit and charm....
  June 9th, 2025 04:56
• My Mustache (ForeverJesus7) A fun read that I can identify with, having had a mustache for the past 40...
  June 9th, 2025 04:52
• The In Between (Steve Goldenfort) A most interesting understanding on which I believe I have written too a...
  June 9th, 2025 04:49
• Strawberry moon song (Reynaldo Casison) A poem of romance, allurement, soft seduction, sweet love, sensuous...
  June 9th, 2025 04:47
• We Evacuate To Where. (Poetic Licence) As long as man holds his beliefs as more important than his brother\'s...
  June 9th, 2025 04:43
• The Scarred Lovers of Light (Mottakeenur Rehman) A cosmic Romeo and Juliet set in such great poetic style and verse. There...
  June 9th, 2025 04:39
• sometimes things will try you (Demar Desu) A couple of haikus that speak with a bit of disbelief in governing bodies....
  June 9th, 2025 04:26
• Into Our New Life. (Goldfinch60) Another great poem directing us to look for the good and live each life...
  June 9th, 2025 04:18
• Poem, Women of the Book! (AwHec8) An acknowledgement of women prophetesses of the Bible and a call for...
  June 9th, 2025 04:13
• “Live your Life Accordingly” (AwHec8) A poem of faith and belief in a higher power. Most lovely
  June 9th, 2025 04:07
• safe like heaven (Wildecho14) In this poem religious belief becomes love. A lovely poem
  June 8th, 2025 20:12
• The Cry at the Crossroads (TheInnerLens) A religious plea to find light from darkness. Nicely written
  June 8th, 2025 20:08
• My eye\'s were opened (Nicole Pritchard) A pledge of fidelity and a statement of love. Very nice
  June 8th, 2025 20:04
• Maxim (James Michael) None of us are supposed to be judges but we are. Lovely write
  June 8th, 2025 20:02
• Prentis Hancock (Randyjohnson71) A wonderful tribute for an actor missed now passed. Well done
  June 8th, 2025 20:00
• Muse (Amethyste) A most intriguing poem of one to the muse. Nicely written
  June 8th, 2025 17:19
• Wishing in silence (Byyvette) This poem tells the inner depths of humans never being content. Lovely
  June 8th, 2025 17:18
• The eyes of a lover (Tallisman) Very nicely written and rhymed with good meter it flows like honey and the...
  June 8th, 2025 17:17
• A poem (Mik this is mik) A chained rhyme throughout this write. It flows onward and makes its...
  June 8th, 2025 17:12
• My Dear Dove 🕊️ (Cirawrites01) A wonderful poem of support and fellowship, of trust and pledge of being...
  June 8th, 2025 17:11
• Those Hips made for Swaying (Reynaldo Casison) Now this is a song with its chorus and repeating lines. Very nicely...
  June 8th, 2025 17:09
• Kiss Me and Never Let Me Go (A Boy With Roses) Wonderful lines in this surreal poem of a time that never was but is. A...
  June 8th, 2025 14:00
• A shaman’s dinner table (EvenwheniLie) This sounds like the drug induced journey of an altered state of...
  June 8th, 2025 13:55
• Cup o\' tea and....... (Orchidee) Thanks for the invite Orchi but can\'t afford the next booking, it may...
  June 8th, 2025 12:47
• Two Honeybee poems! (Classicmister)
  June 8th, 2025 12:29
• Two Honeybee poems! (Classicmister) The first is a far better poem in both overall wording and poetic...
  June 8th, 2025 12:29
• Drear Love (Gray0328) I love this poem that seems a love letter to one gone. The last line...
  June 8th, 2025 12:21
• In The Tears Of A Stranger (Kurt Philip Behm) Wow Kurt this is unlike you. There are a series of metaphors each with a...
  June 8th, 2025 12:17
• Glorious tales (Starlight) A most beautiful picture painted in this poem of a idyllic place and time....
  June 8th, 2025 10:17
• Mary’s Reef (Fränz Müller) A simply lovely metaphor with such great images portrayed in every line....
  June 8th, 2025 10:15
• Life, the Movie (Thomas W Case) I hear you Thomas I would not relive this film if given the chance. One...
  June 8th, 2025 10:13
• I am who I am (Tony36) Another proclamation of being who you are and satisfied with it. Nicely...
  June 8th, 2025 10:11
• Tennessee, Cakes, and Whatever....I Guess (Cheeky Missy) My Chic you have been busy lately with a prodigal number of creations....
  June 8th, 2025 10:10
• Too much! (Hzugman) Now that is what I call short and a full example of what it is about it...
  June 8th, 2025 10:06
• Yours truly like most every hominid linkedin... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) There seems to be a bell curve of horniness across age spans peaking in...
  June 8th, 2025 10:05
• The Heart Has a Cost (RSM0812) A most interesting concept that not only with love there is pain but also...
  June 8th, 2025 09:57
• Now I live (Maplespal) I could feel the pain of individuality in this poem and the lack of...
  June 8th, 2025 07:16
• forever friend (Jim56) Another lovely poem of dogs and their close alliance with man. Nicely done...
  June 8th, 2025 06:42
• A Lovecraftian horror trip (Muse of Calliope) A changing and rather complex set of images in dreamlike fashion evoking a...
  June 8th, 2025 06:40
• Sleep (Sebastian.) A most interesting structure to this poem that seems to ripple with each...
  June 8th, 2025 06:34
• The Unreturned (Mottakeenur Rehman) Very poetic this poem has a solemn nature to it and the images created are...
  June 8th, 2025 06:31
• Pilgrim’s Progress (Arobot) The title of a rather famous old book this poem followed a different path...
  June 8th, 2025 06:28
• Possessed (Parsa) Supernatural and surreal in tone this poem conveys a sense of sadness and...
  June 8th, 2025 06:26
• My Mother (Akshadha_Joshi1310) So complicated, a poem from a child moving to adulthood with existential...
  June 8th, 2025 06:24
• Two Trillion (John Prophet) Unfathomable numbers that boggle the imagination keep expanding...
  June 8th, 2025 06:18
• TO WANDER (Nephilim56) The meter was hypnotic and for this a fave. I very much liked the line...
  June 8th, 2025 06:15
• In The Zone (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever weaving of rhyme into this poem that makes total sense regarding...
  June 8th, 2025 06:12