Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Inseparable Soulmates (Narayan Gadagkar) A great tribute to a couple that spent a life together. Lovely
  April 1st, 2025 04:54
• Such a perfect time (Gewar) Tender thoughts expressed about the emergence of feelings all cast in...
  April 1st, 2025 04:51
• Dong (Boot) The human race tends to tear up everything around it and in its greed will...
  April 1st, 2025 04:47
• Numb (Jonathan Merida) A metaphor as well when in shock we fail to notice those things that under...
  April 1st, 2025 04:45
• If you could read my mind (Peculiarly Lauren) A very encouraging poem finding the best out of weakness\' when one is...
  April 1st, 2025 04:43
• Burning (Madds) I hear the pain from the past in this poem. It screams out to the listener...
  April 1st, 2025 04:38
• Help or Not? (Orchidee) To be able to help someone requires know they need help and what type they...
  April 1st, 2025 04:31
• The Voices Have Gone (Poetic Licence) When we grow accustomed to something no matter what we miss it. A most...
  April 1st, 2025 04:27
• waxing witless (Arqios)
  April 1st, 2025 04:18
• waxing witless (Arqios) Myth tells us that the gods were not happy with their first try in...
  April 1st, 2025 04:18
• April\'s Senryu (Teddy.15) A very nice Haiku my friend good to have you back.
  April 1st, 2025 04:09
• A Musical Journey Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A music lover\'s sonnet filled with masters of the past. Very nicely done...
  April 1st, 2025 04:05
• SCULPTED (MDStone) A great metaphor. Poetry in stone would ensure that it would last for...
  March 31st, 2025 20:36
• Epidermiss (Mutley Ravishes) This required two reads and some thought before it sunk through. Profound...
  March 31st, 2025 18:52
• Do You Want To Be Loved? (Tkatie118) A plea for love. Wonderfully said.
  March 31st, 2025 17:49
• Days are dead (Shadowbones) Feeling misunderstood and not valued is the message that I get from this...
  March 31st, 2025 16:45
• I\'m Fragile (Hanible) A poem that speaks of being easily damaged and not repairable. a fragile...
  March 31st, 2025 16:42
• Humanity (Amethyste) Profoundly stated and poetically said.
  March 31st, 2025 16:03
• Unveiled (Nicole Pritchard) The best way to know that one is loved is to have nothing to offer. This...
  March 31st, 2025 15:53
• isn\'t is weird (Xqw) True and talks to character that our appearance to others is more...
  March 31st, 2025 15:51
• Looking On (Paul Gerard Reed) A beautiful poem of a helping power whether God, a companion, a father or...
  March 31st, 2025 15:50
• Lamentation for the human race (Kenny O\'Donnell) Dark predictions that seem to be taking shape. A sad side to the...
  March 31st, 2025 13:04
• 10 stories (NinjaGirl) Creative and dark at the beginning becoming darker as it goes on and black...
  March 31st, 2025 12:57
• Supporting others will bolster you (Hzugman) There is bravery in kindness and I love this short poem that speaks to the...
  March 31st, 2025 11:01
• Where he stood. (Tayama) The thoughts of a father pondering his own passing and the passing on of...
  March 31st, 2025 11:00
• Bad ass beauty brought bedlam, and begat bastard child... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) When hormones rush emotions gush they say and this poem is full of both....
  March 31st, 2025 10:57
• A Chaos explained (EvenwheniLie) A sad poem of abuse and wish for freedom from it. There is nice rhyme...
  March 31st, 2025 10:49
• New beginning (2) (Lakshya) Infatuated and impassioned a poem of love. Great images used. Very nice
  March 31st, 2025 10:47
• Together (Bird In Red) A love pome that speaks to wanting commitment. Sweet and longing.
  March 31st, 2025 10:45
• BBQ (Tony36) I have those memories as well and can still smell them and hear them as...
  March 31st, 2025 10:43
• Spite (Pineapple_pizza018) A poem of oppression and anger that ends with a twist. Nicely written
  March 31st, 2025 09:35
• Nightshade (Tristan Robert Lange) It has been a long time since I have tried to write a poem where all the...
  March 31st, 2025 09:31
• Dead Or Alive (Kurt Philip Behm) A Kurt this one I really like. In its brevity it says it all.
  March 31st, 2025 08:59
• The Pearl Fisher\'s Lament (Ksey_Gan) Isis comes to mind goddess of moon and fertility, healing goddess of the...
  March 31st, 2025 08:58
• Old couple (Lorenz) Moments in time flashes in the mind, memories and their associations,...
  March 31st, 2025 08:54
• The looking glass (Patriciapicciocchi) Reflections in the glass and in the mind. A very thoughtful write about...
  March 31st, 2025 08:50
• Tomorrow is today future (Kent) Indeed tis true everything starts with you. And time is all one yesterday,...
  March 31st, 2025 08:49
• I Never \"Promised\" Anything.... (Cheeky Missy) From classical to heavy metal and Disturbed. A wide variety here in a...
  March 31st, 2025 08:46
• The 24 Roadblocks to Enlightenment (AiR - Atman in Ravi) A poem of instruction and although Buddhistic in approach it is meditative...
  March 31st, 2025 08:41
• With birds (Maplespal) I think that most people have dreamed of being birds whether in dreams or...
  March 31st, 2025 07:54
• Spring’s Cherry Blossom (Ajon4wheels) Colorful and most picturesque you have painted an image of beauty. Nicely...
  March 31st, 2025 07:53
• Locutus (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Fantasy is always an escape and diversion from life\'s every day. Nicely...
  March 31st, 2025 07:51
• The 30th Anniversary Of Selena\'s Death (Randyjohnson71) A sad story of greed and treachery that has robbed many of a talent....
  March 31st, 2025 07:49
• Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) It is intriguing how you leave the reader with a question and then follow...
  March 31st, 2025 07:47
• Tribute to a Life of Service (Salvia.S) Very nice wording for one about to start on another journey. Most lovely...
  March 31st, 2025 07:44
• arms of an angel (Jim56) Sweet and tender this is a peaceful poem Jim
  March 31st, 2025 05:56
• Nostalgia (Framed Mirror) Evolution and development themes in this poem nicely said
  March 31st, 2025 05:54
• WIP (Work In Progress) (Tom Dylan) Indeed it is true and the work poem or novel is you, maybe not directly...
  March 31st, 2025 05:53
• Love, Light, Way (Gray0328) We falter in our ignorance and look for guidance. A poem of direction....
  March 31st, 2025 05:51
• Stay (RSM0812) Here is hope. A lovely poem nicely done
  March 31st, 2025 05:49
• Desculpa (Poetaldo) A recognition of things and nicely written.
  March 31st, 2025 05:01
• Ego (The Indignant Poetess) A poem with anger and indignation at another\'s arrogance. Powerful words.
  March 31st, 2025 04:58
• Esperando la mañana (Falcon_mn) Using the symbolism of nature a beautiful love poem whose words raise and...
  March 31st, 2025 04:56
• A GENTLE SOUL (Nephilim56) There is a feel of drifting in this poem where the gentle soul passively...
  March 31st, 2025 04:54
• September (Alis Dream world) How fast time passes. Well expressed in this poem September is fall in the...
  March 31st, 2025 04:52
• When words shape the World ([email protected]) Words the one thing that sets us apart from other species. In symbols of...
  March 31st, 2025 04:49
• Writhing Failure (KTay) Quite the process described here from the act to the consequences. Very...
  March 31st, 2025 04:47
• Violent Ways (Steve Goldenfort) A beautiful message that brings a smile. Nicely said in poetic form
  March 31st, 2025 04:44
• Sign (Jonathan Merida) Signs are what we look for from our gods, leaders, companions and...
  March 31st, 2025 04:43
• 1-800 (Yazz) Dark and very raw this poem speaks of overwhelming inner pain that is...
  March 31st, 2025 04:39
• Holding on to Dust (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark) Uncertainty and timidity conquered by the courage to try and confront...
  March 31st, 2025 04:36
• Give me more. (Bam) Sensuous, erotic, sexual an expression of desire all wrapped into one...
  March 31st, 2025 04:28
• Curiosity (Shahla Latifi) Contentment is not to be questioned in what ever form it takes. Change...
  March 31st, 2025 04:26
• Blame (Mik) A series of thoughts that replicate the flow of thoughts in the mind, some...
  March 31st, 2025 04:23
• is it all over for city cat? (Arqios) It is here that the poet comes out. Relationship of words and the subtle...
  March 31st, 2025 04:21
• Sold Your Soul To The Devil (Poetic Licence) Everything has its price. From the author note I know that this was...
  March 31st, 2025 04:13
• Uncomposed. (Goldfinch60) A clever poem Andy what other clever pieces have you been Hayden? Loved it
  March 31st, 2025 04:02
• Circles (Alex PB) Interesting recognition that there are limits to what we can do. A...
  March 30th, 2025 19:04
• sing (Lunarchloedip) This poem has a feel of sleepy hypnotic ease that feels peaceful and...
  March 30th, 2025 19:02
• Stormy Land (Hanible) A wonderful poem of love that is building on a firm foundation
  March 30th, 2025 18:59
• Of Your Beauty there is no doubt (Kevin Hulme) A beautiful sensuous and erotic write that is tender and worded with great...
  March 30th, 2025 18:57
• Rise (Pineapple_pizza018) A bright and hopeful write that is uplifting. Very nice
  March 30th, 2025 18:53
• An idea of me (Peculiarly Lauren) People love the illusion of what they want in another seldom what a person...
  March 30th, 2025 18:51
• Do you know what it feels like ? (Pamela) The last line can be taken two ways the negative is death when you decide...
  March 30th, 2025 18:46
• Break Up, Patch Up, WhatsApp, and Life’s New Push Up (Mottakeenur Rehman) And so it would make sense. Too bad that the fuel of emotion fire the...
  March 30th, 2025 14:31
• RLF Was Right (Kurt Philip Behm) Choices we all make like it or not. A thought to ponder and act upon
  March 30th, 2025 14:29
• Give this child what she needs (Poetaldo) A poem asking those things that all children of any age need. Very nice
  March 30th, 2025 14:27
• Pointing Fingers (Eugene S.) Getting away with it and pointing blame on others is a common game....
  March 30th, 2025 13:16
• Playing with my Mind (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie) Feeling used is never good and in this poem i get the message that you are...
  March 30th, 2025 13:14
• New beginning (Lakshya) A plea for love and being cared for in metaphor is at the root of this...
  March 30th, 2025 13:11
• Trapped in your affection (Nicole Pritchard) Love a strong desire to be valued as much as one values is not always met....
  March 30th, 2025 13:09
• The Death of Us (Weirdo) Being abandoned by the one you love is a cruel revelation of the worth of...
  March 30th, 2025 13:07
• Get started on stopping (Hzugman) In this poem is the recognition that continued thoughts can fatigue,...
  March 30th, 2025 13:04
• The Flicker Of Hope (Hargun Kaur) Hope is the last thing to die they say and so in this poem as well. A plea...
  March 30th, 2025 10:51
• Red, White, and Drifting (Thomas W Case) A striking image colorful and symbolic as well contrasts with the desire...
  March 30th, 2025 10:50
• The Alchemy of Shadows (TheInnerLens) A Sun Tzu tactic of using an enemies strengths against them. A poem that...
  March 30th, 2025 10:48
• Paralysis (Damaso) Metaphors that speak silence, now that\'s a deep thing to ponder. Somber...
  March 30th, 2025 10:45
• Tailand (RSM0812) Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at...
  March 30th, 2025 10:42
• Sailing on The Flying Dutchman (Rebellion_in_sanity) Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for...
  March 30th, 2025 10:39
• Unfulfilled love (Neilton) Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more...
  March 30th, 2025 10:35
• 3 for thee (Maplespal) Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
  March 30th, 2025 08:57
• God (Patriciapicciocchi) this could well be a scripture or a proverb. Well written
  March 30th, 2025 08:54
• When the Sky stood still ([email protected]) What a great write this is. It sends its message in story and metaphor as...
  March 30th, 2025 08:53
• Catch the Horizon... (Aradhya) This poem has a feel to it that casts a spell. Well imaged and nicely...
  March 30th, 2025 08:49
• 500,000 (Tony36) A poem felt. I have a military family as far back as I know and have heard...
  March 30th, 2025 08:48
• Poetry for Plants (Demar Desu) Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice...
  March 30th, 2025 08:45
• Another Eclipse  (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Belief and faith are projected in this poem. In its brevity it sends its...
  March 30th, 2025 08:44
• An Abrupt Visitor (Tristan Robert Lange) It comes for everyone big or small, young or old, rich or poor it is the...
  March 30th, 2025 08:42
• The rose garden (Lorenz) Another wonderful poem of poetic beauty with colorful images that paint...
  March 30th, 2025 08:04
• Passion For Poetry (Ajon4wheels) I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
  March 30th, 2025 05:45