Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Sterling and Saoirse (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
I can tell that your heart and talent lies in story telling. When I first...
April 3rd, 2025 12:12 - Justice In Judgement (Orchidee)
Now there is a good hymn one of just retribution to get the juices...
April 3rd, 2025 12:05 - The Twins Contrite (Gray0328)
Different feelings, different reactions to the same situation but love...
April 3rd, 2025 10:46 - Hard to Handle (KTay)
How fine can mean different things. Well put in this poem where those...
April 3rd, 2025 10:09 - The Cost of Creation ([email protected])
If honesty existed one would pay the value one felt for each piece of art...
April 3rd, 2025 10:06 - Now Is Forever (Kurt Philip Behm)
Careful reading of the words reveals deep philosophical meaning that...
April 3rd, 2025 09:43 - All I See Is Darkness (Tristan Robert Lange)
An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later....
April 3rd, 2025 09:34 - Hope (Heledd)
Love the line (Hope is such a futile and vague word that can be changed...
April 3rd, 2025 08:47 - Violence vs Non-Violence (Demar Desu)
What a great senryu this is most lovely
April 3rd, 2025 08:21 - Raindrop (RSM0812)
Some great images here, I saw the line (umbrella, rainbow, waters flow)...
April 3rd, 2025 08:19 - A mellow poem (Xqw)
The opening line reminds me of a song by Donovan (Mellow Yellow) A calming...
April 3rd, 2025 07:22 - Blinded (Maplespal)
Nicely penned this poem speaks of darkness and the spark of truth can...
April 3rd, 2025 07:20 - Rockets of life (Tony36)
A wonderful analogy well worked out my only hope is that the colorful...
April 3rd, 2025 07:17 - Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
April 3rd, 2025 06:46 - Cool, Crazy And Calm (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Clever, relatable, nicely rhymed, short and to the point. Well done
April 3rd, 2025 06:46 - charity teddy bear (Jim56)
Innocently cute a poem about children and for children or at least that...
April 3rd, 2025 06:44 - Western Skies (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Very well written and thought provoking requiring careful reading that...
April 3rd, 2025 06:43 - Paralysis (Midnight Lasagna)
Haunting this poem set to the meter of a common child\'s prayer is highly...
April 3rd, 2025 03:27 - VIELLE RUELLES (Nephilim56)
Lingering memories lit the aftertaste of coffee are part of this poem....
April 3rd, 2025 03:24 - NO LONGER (Athora13)
Although it is apparent that this is an individual call to arms it also...
April 3rd, 2025 03:22 - The Lost Key (Arqios)
Cryptic this poem tells its story in metaphor through a child\'s story...
April 3rd, 2025 03:15 - Secrets of the Great Fig (Teddy.15)
Love your images in this poem. The metaphor is also splendid and I can...
April 3rd, 2025 03:11 - Jimmy The Bully Man (Poetic Licence)
Standing up to a bully is more important than winning but winning helps. A...
April 3rd, 2025 03:07 - Storms In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Everything turns out for the best if one only has the patience to wait. A...
April 3rd, 2025 03:05 - Russian veteran of the war with Hitler after Aleksandr Megiroff (Ksey_Gan)
A sense of mystery in this poem that may be more metaphoric than its...
April 3rd, 2025 03:04 - I prayed (Joseph M Marion)
A poem of prayer, one of good wishes and faith. Nicely written
April 3rd, 2025 03:01 - The Color of Pain (MDStone)
Nicely written in rhyme this poem explores the issue of pain and how it is...
April 3rd, 2025 02:59 - Against All Odds (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Such a positive feel to this poem and good advice as well. Nicely done
April 2nd, 2025 18:55 - Silence. (Jonathan Merida)
Beautiful it leaves a mood of peace. The last line is superb and contrasts...
April 2nd, 2025 18:53 - Okay, March, Our Affair is Officially OVER. (Cheeky Missy)
Such beautiful images of nature you paint in these sonnets Chic. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 18:51 - My Children (Sunshine777)
A mother\'s love and a proclamation that she will always feel this. There...
April 2nd, 2025 16:40 - We Can Breathe (Andrew Isaiah Castillo)
A nice flow to this poem. Nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 16:37 - KFC Cannibals? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A hair raising read. Chicken fingers takes on a whole new meaning....
April 2nd, 2025 14:26 - A letter to my future (Pamela)
A plea that is heartfelt. Nicely written
April 2nd, 2025 14:24 - Thirty four Winters -Chills and Thrills (Narayan Gadagkar)
A most hopeful view in this poem. Very nicely written.
April 2nd, 2025 12:36 - Painted Sky (Teddy.15)
A most personal and wonderful reveal. Yellow is not my favorite color as...
April 2nd, 2025 12:34 - The Late Val Kilmer (Randyjohnson71)
A beautiful tribute to a great actor. A favorite film of mine (Ghost and...
April 2nd, 2025 12:31 - Devils\' Breath (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another good write the rhymes so well in its telling. Tightly woven
April 2nd, 2025 12:29 - A Mad World (KTay)
A strong write with definitely powerful emotions. Nicely stated.
April 2nd, 2025 12:23 - Terrible 1920 in Russia after Diniriy Merejrovski (Ksey_Gan)
A wonderful historical, social, emotional poem that is as dark as the...
April 2nd, 2025 12:18 - The Months as People (Gray0328)
The poem flows through the months smoothly and with great images that...
April 2nd, 2025 10:58 - The Silent Weaver ([email protected])
Art resides within the heart and needs no pay. A lovely write
April 2nd, 2025 10:54 - Undo the Darkness (Thomas W Case)
A write that feels so real. Nicely said Thomas
April 2nd, 2025 10:37 - Me and Mrs Beale (Tkatie118)
Complexities in the relationships of people. A fun read with an ending...
April 2nd, 2025 10:34 - What the Hell? (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in...
April 2nd, 2025 10:31 - Divided (NinjaGirl)
A poem of a flawed process in a flawed system. Very well written.
April 2nd, 2025 10:22 - What are we? (Nikola)
A poem of questions that in one way or another will be answered. A plea...
April 2nd, 2025 08:33 - Bitter Medicine (Garth Rakumakoe)
Nicely said and may that bitter medicine work its magic healing and...
April 2nd, 2025 08:31 - Betterfly (RSM0812)
A lovely poem sparkling with vivid images and a metaphor of love as well....
April 2nd, 2025 08:29 - His guitar (Tony36)
The picture painted of a flash concert and a man that plays from his heart...
April 2nd, 2025 07:56 - One Busy Day!! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Sometimes we all would like to rewrite yesterdays story but I believe in...
April 2nd, 2025 06:59 - Angel (The Indignant Poetess)
(An angel can not be beautiful and good) a powerful line that sums it up....
April 2nd, 2025 06:57 - How strange (Peculiarly Lauren)
The message in this poem strikes deep in anyone who has loved and wondered...
April 2nd, 2025 06:54 - Painted (Maplespal)
We see what we want to see let it be of love, charity, kindness to oneself...
April 2nd, 2025 06:48 - TODAY IS A DAY LIKE NONE OTHER (@merci)
Although alone you never are for you have yourself as partner always...
April 2nd, 2025 06:47 - A Healing Vision of the Way Life Should Be (Meredith Horstkamp)
Moving, this poem speaks to me in beautiful natural images of the harmony...
April 2nd, 2025 06:44 - Stop Staring Crazy Mind To Get In To (Hanible)
Anxiety and racing thought came first to mind. Loosely connected and...
April 2nd, 2025 06:40 - love is like a song (Jim56)
A lovely description of the sunny side of love. Very nice Jim
April 2nd, 2025 06:37 - Theory Of Evolution (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Well written in terms that confront without confronting. A lovely piece
April 2nd, 2025 06:36 - Double-Edged Feeling (Rosiii ;))
Like a shot of tequila that warms and burns. Love is a two edged sword...
April 2nd, 2025 06:35 - Ni siquiera sabes (Falcon_mn)
Beautiful love poem cast in dreams. Loved it
April 2nd, 2025 03:35 - I MISS YOU RIN! (Demar Desu)
A Haiku with a plug for the site as well. That was well done
April 2nd, 2025 03:33 - DREAMER (Nephilim56)
(The fiery tail of a fading dream) a great opening and line. A wonderful...
April 2nd, 2025 03:32 - A LAYMAN\'S FRUSTRATION OVER THE COUNTRIES SYSTEM AND MECHANISM. (Blissed-secret)
Satirical, irony deserving of sarcasm, a mockery and absurdity acted out...
April 2nd, 2025 03:28 - Free Diver (Mutley Ravishes)
This metaphor or should i say allegory is as deep as the depths of the sea...
April 2nd, 2025 03:21 - Toasting Our Love (MDStone)
A lovely poem of companionship and its comfort. Although could be literal...
April 2nd, 2025 03:12 - Web Of Thought (John Prophet)
Not only see the meaning in this but feel the same way. It all makes sense...
April 2nd, 2025 03:09 - Only Love can hurt like this (Kevin Hulme)
Beautifully worded the theme is gradually revealed and is quite clear,...
April 2nd, 2025 03:06 - Capricorn (Lorenz)
This poem in its darkness speaks to me of justice and in that a sense of...
April 2nd, 2025 03:00 - Smile (Poetic Licence)
Here is the balance and ours the choice which side to sit on. Lovely...
April 2nd, 2025 02:57 - Island Of Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful thought and a wishful dream. Lovely Andy
April 2nd, 2025 02:55 - a future\'s horizon (Arqios)
Wow! This is a form I was not familiar with and that works so well for...
April 2nd, 2025 02:53 - The Shiny Scythe\'s Glare (NinjaGirl)
There is some deep philosophical thought in these three stanzas. Might i...
April 2nd, 2025 02:48 - The one who completes me (Nicole Pritchard)
A belief and pledge of love. A proclamation of devotion and love
April 1st, 2025 18:53 - A LITTLE OLDER (ChrisLyn🕊)
A poem with a message of being true to oneself. A most important write
April 1st, 2025 15:55 - Chameleon (Daisydoo)
Such raw feelings of an existential nature that many don\'t feel until...
April 1st, 2025 15:51 - Stripping the Veneer (Gray0328)
So much emotion in this piece. Very nicely worded Gray.
April 1st, 2025 13:37 - Dissolving Our Bond (Mr. Not)
Arrogance ignores all messages but those it wants to hear. Nicely stated
April 1st, 2025 13:35 - hurt (Patriciapicciocchi)
A poem so applicable to so many expecting change in the face of facts that...
April 1st, 2025 13:34 - Premonition (Li Yanmey)
A poem of confession of past and present difficulties that hamper daily...
April 1st, 2025 13:33 - This Is (Sunshine777)
A poem of missing someone from the past. Well worded and expressed. Very...
April 1st, 2025 13:24 - ...On April Fool\'s THIS Year!!! (Cheeky Missy)
Another tasty write delicious Chic
April 1st, 2025 13:22 - What A Fool Believes (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another wonderful write Kurt
April 1st, 2025 13:18 - The Road Though Quiet Pines (Dev Parth)
Robert Frost comes to mind and this journey we take we have choices in our...
April 1st, 2025 13:17 - Smile (Lorenz)
So true there is a regression to the mean. Smiles go back to nonsmiles. A...
April 1st, 2025 13:13 - Wanted: Love (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A lovely poem of found love after a fall. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 13:10 - False Salvation (Mya)
(In the form of a salvation, a savior- in the form of sprinkles of salt...
April 1st, 2025 13:06 - Opioid (Tristan Robert Lange)
This speaks so much truth. The format I took at first as a tornado then a...
April 1st, 2025 12:53 - Congo\'s Christian Killers (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A raw work on hard brutal behaviors that we enact on each other. An...
April 1st, 2025 09:42 - Illusory Reality (KTay)
Tough truth. The irony of life and our world. Nicely penned
April 1st, 2025 09:39 - Decay (RSM0812)
Very poetic words that weave a picture in the mind. Nicely done
April 1st, 2025 09:37 - Music (Tony36)
It does the same for me Tony and I feel you.
April 1st, 2025 07:39 - Melancholy by Dmitry Merezhkovsky (Ksey_Gan)
Beautiful words set the feeling in this poem. Wonderful!
April 1st, 2025 07:37 - $38.58 in my bank account (Demar Desu)
I didn\'t have to ask it eloped in the night before I checked in the...
April 1st, 2025 06:57 - State Of Mind (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Real or metaphoric is the question. A wonderful write that poses the...
April 1st, 2025 06:24 - Arching death (Maplespal)
In the war of life death falls indiscriminately on all. We kill without...
April 1st, 2025 05:42 - If You Died (The Indignant Poetess)
We often don\'t appreciate what we have until we loose it. Ironic how life...
April 1st, 2025 05:38 - dawn chorus (Jim56)
I love to hear the birds sing as well and also love to hear the poets sing...
April 1st, 2025 05:06 - Suicide Meetings (Hanible)
A strong message that I learned long ago. There are two types those that...
April 1st, 2025 05:04 - The Sealed Chamber\'s Tale ([email protected])
I smell a bigger metaphor here. It is not just the apple we are studying....
April 1st, 2025 05:02
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