Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Glory of the Women in Blue (Adiii) A great poem of tribute to a deserving team. Very nicely written in...
  November 4th, 2025 13:50
• Sweet urban depression (Lorenz) Lorenz this sounds like the beginning of a noir novel maybe Sin City. The...
  November 4th, 2025 11:58
• Why do I Miss Him? (Lea Gagliardo) Love needs no reason the heart knows no age and though both reason and age...
  November 4th, 2025 09:25
• Untitled {6} (Niko Papadatos) Be grateful for what one has I get from this. Whether religious and giving...
  November 4th, 2025 09:22
• The Satan is in the System (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan am I deceived of does the form represent an S? Maybe I look too...
  November 4th, 2025 09:19
• Meant to Be (William Hromada) Nicely worded with clever metaphors it wends its way toward its message of...
  November 4th, 2025 09:13
• Horrizons in Heaven (RSM0812) Mea culpa seems the theme of this poem. The frailty of man and need for...
  November 4th, 2025 08:05
• Angel’s Love (Ajon4wheels)
  November 4th, 2025 08:01
• Angel’s Love (Ajon4wheels) This poem sounds enamored and enchanted by another. A passionate plea for...
  November 4th, 2025 08:01
• Judgement (Abdullah123) So biblical in nature this poem walks out of the book of Revelations. It...
  November 4th, 2025 07:46
• I Keep Listening (Applecherry) Love and loss lead to pain. All major topics of poetry. A read that feels...
  November 4th, 2025 06:06
• squirrel beauty (Jim56) Another nature poem with its focus on beauty in natural things. The squirl...
  November 4th, 2025 06:03
• Shattered (Lyra Silvertongue) Trust is always a matter of degree. Some people I trust with some things...
  November 4th, 2025 06:01
• Comfort and Joy (Paul Bell) Well Paul you succeeded you made me laugh and not just a little so that...
  November 4th, 2025 05:56
• the promise of morning (Arqios) This poem requires several readings as all deeper poems do. Cryptic the...
  November 4th, 2025 05:50
• What He Promised Me.. (That’sSoRaven) Betrayal by the one you trust the most is the deepest cut. It bleeds. A...
  November 4th, 2025 04:23
• Lover Boy (Ja'Quan Shepard) This a type of soliloquy asks the questions but receives no answers....
  November 4th, 2025 04:20
• CHILDREN OF MORTALITY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Such a heavy poem set in dramatic style it speaks as if out of Hades and...
  November 4th, 2025 04:17
• *Gratitude HUGS AND KISSES DAY* (Keyara S Trotman) This poem shows its color in a bouquet of wildflower lines. Nicely done...
  November 4th, 2025 04:14
• After You (JH The Muse) This has wonderful lines especially: heaven was never meant to exist in...
  November 4th, 2025 04:11
• queen of sorrows (Ja'Quan Shepard) Beautifully melancholic it drips with sadness and sorrow. Well done
  November 4th, 2025 04:09
• Chaotic Classics (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) This poem holds sever allusions to other works and I may have missed some....
  November 4th, 2025 04:07
• Inclusive Invitation (Orchidee) Orchi you have done another good one and just as all artists sign their...
  November 4th, 2025 04:03
• Such A Lucky Boy. (Goldfinch60) Good fortune is sometimes luck and sometimes made by the person that holds...
  November 4th, 2025 03:59
• She Stared Back (NinjaGirl) A very nice use of human curiosity to hold reader attention. By never...
  November 4th, 2025 03:57
• Unfinished Us (Iris Nazarene) There is a longing and wistfulness to this work and a sense of gentle...
  November 3rd, 2025 20:46
• Chatter in the scowl. (Andrew Deaton) All things happen for the best, adversity gives strength, pain yields...
  November 3rd, 2025 20:45
• THE S.E.A.L.S. OF RAGNAROK (David Welch) Quite the evolving tale of war and warriors from beyond a fireside yarn...
  November 3rd, 2025 19:29
• No Child Is Safe In El fasher (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Children pay the price for the errors of their parents. A sad but true...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:12
• I tried (Amethyste) An echo in a poem and an emphasis as well. Most interesting.
  November 3rd, 2025 18:09
• Charmed (Not) A focus on the immediate pleasure in this poem the ephemeral held out for...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:09
• Untitled {5} (Niko Papadatos) This poem raises questions left unanswered and raises anxieties unquieted....
  November 3rd, 2025 18:06
• Missing those days (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Everybody talks of the good old days when things were simpler and when...
  November 3rd, 2025 18:04
• Memories. (Starfire) People and memories fade as expressed in this write. Nicely done
  November 3rd, 2025 18:00
• If the bugs (Georgia Watson) A most unique expression of love. As for bugs they will get all that are...
  November 3rd, 2025 17:51
• Long interminable hours... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A poem worth a chuckle nicely done.
  November 3rd, 2025 17:49
• safe (Lunarchloedip) A personal poem of joy and enthusiasm over a love that is felt and shared....
  November 3rd, 2025 14:25
• Andrew (Poetaldo) Another poem that preaches tolerance, gratitude and faith. Nicely written
  November 3rd, 2025 12:09
• 13 questions (Pineapple_pizza018) The theme of dependence is displayed in this poem and it speaks with a...
  November 3rd, 2025 12:07
• The Minstrel\'s Song (Matthew R. Callies) Classical in nature it speaks of a classic character and in good rhyme and...
  November 3rd, 2025 12:04
• You are NOT broken (Arcane-) A most interesting and good statement or quote. Well said
  November 3rd, 2025 12:03
• Anthropomorphism (Samuel Maximilian) It is a philosophical question that if we knew the hour and place of our...
  November 3rd, 2025 12:02
• Monday, Monday (Kurt Philip Behm) It is good advice to whisper when you wish to be heard. The whisper...
  November 3rd, 2025 11:59
• a sandwich analogy (Applecherry) I got this poem and loved the last line that has so much meaning. (I had...
  November 3rd, 2025 11:58
• The Broodmother (Gray0328) It is the wording that gives a dark feel to this poem and that gets the...
  November 3rd, 2025 11:55
• 1 into 25 (Arial) Here the incongruities merge into cold tea under covers. Very nicely...
  November 3rd, 2025 11:49
• The Codex of the Resonant Man (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) Here metaphysics joins minerals and the cosmos. A most poetic write of...
  November 3rd, 2025 11:46
• Taliah (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) And now the second chapter is in place and we are ready for plot...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:50
• Lucky Guy (William Hromada) A poem of declaration and recognition. It speaks of being lucky and how...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:46
• THE LITTLE HOUSE (Lily May Emerald) A poem with a moral and the continued repetition of the phrase (The little...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:43
• The DAY (Drniran) A most curious wording of this poem as the days progress it returns to...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:38
• FEVERED (DeadRose) The infection of wonder I wish never to cure or I might die of boredom and...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:35
• Dying Star (RSM0812) Here there seems to be a theme of soaring but yet of dying and falling...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:32
• Did you know some tree frogs are hermaphroditic? (Simple Tendencies) I love the last two lines: Because it was something I earned But did...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:29
• Smile (Violet_Writes) Warm this poem shines like the sun\'s rays. It beams as the smile this...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:26
• Ike Untitled poems (Luke Bensing) A series of poems unrelated yet they seem to be in wording that is so...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:24
• faith\'s psalm (Tristan Robert Lange) As a child I asked why a prayer said went unanswered and always was told...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:20
• Dearest November (Aman 12) Most poetic lines paint this poem with colors and feelings The whole first...
  November 3rd, 2025 09:17
• My Biggest Fight? My Mind. (Anahiii) Power in belief a strong poem nicely said.
  November 3rd, 2025 09:15
• the house that hums underwater (Corian Baek) This sounds in some way peaceful and in harmony with nature. Hymns of...
  November 3rd, 2025 06:31
• white horse dream (Jim56) A ride on Pegasus what a wonderful dream it must have been. Nicely done
  November 3rd, 2025 06:29
• BRUISED AND BROKEN (@merci) I can hear the anger in this piece with words like scratch, bruised,...
  November 3rd, 2025 06:28
• Sing (Victor Bolshov) In this write is the encouragement of poetry itself for it is those...
  November 3rd, 2025 05:36
• Great Falls, Weak Climbs (Vividvoid14) I hear a good deal of emotion in this write. Tears, snot, the sadness of a...
  November 3rd, 2025 05:33
• Knight My Cat (Mielly) A nice use of descriptive images to paint the picture. Having had cats it...
  November 3rd, 2025 05:29
• the masked \'reader\' (Arqios) Ah Cryptic this poem strikes with its message not wording. The rhyme is...
  November 3rd, 2025 05:24
• The Death Of Inspiration (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A good write about a hot topic. I wonder is it ever good to become...
  November 3rd, 2025 04:01
• MORNING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Presented as a ritual each line reinforces this feeling of a cyclical...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:59
• Ratings or Art (Jjudaharts) A question posed and to each their own answer but as for me it is art....
  November 3rd, 2025 03:55
• The fire element (Ethan Mikel StAmour) It is the strength of anticipation that gives this poem its power. Short...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:54
• AND (Drniran) Feelings of not being heard seem to flow from this poem of frustration....
  November 3rd, 2025 03:53
• a poem of breakup (Applecherry) A difference of feeling and a desire to unite on one side not quite the...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:50
• Another (Emery Walker) This poem holds a longing wistfulness to it and speaks it. There is a...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:47
• Access to an Advocate (Orchidee) Orchi the world feels normal again when you write your hymns. It\'s like...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:44
• Croquet Tanka. (Goldfinch60) I hope that the rain is literal not metaphorical Andy and may it stop in...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:39
• She Rides Wild, like the Wasp (Thomas W Case) Graphic and gritty this poem runs through the back allies of memory to...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:37
• Dread and Damnation (NinjaGirl) A poem of symbolism where sins red as blood stain and tears of contrition...
  November 3rd, 2025 03:34
• Colorado (De Suin) So interesting how people think and act in places different that what they...
  November 2nd, 2025 19:06
• Thoughts (Amethyste) An interesting choice. I would say all three. Good read
  November 2nd, 2025 19:03
• Where I\'m From (Luke Bensing) Sounds like the Midwest to me but then what would I know I\'ve only lived...
  November 2nd, 2025 19:02
• Rough and silver linings (Kenny O\'Donnell) A bad day. But things seem to be looking up at least there is little left...
  November 2nd, 2025 18:57
• “Every Inch of You” (Amandatoriii) There is nothing like passion in a poem or relationship and when the two...
  November 2nd, 2025 18:53
• Skippack Pharmacy comprised of admirable staff (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) If only it were so simple in a capitalistic society where the bottom...
  November 2nd, 2025 18:51
• The Ocean in the Sky (Jan bach) A poem that flows with water and air. Nicely worded if feels like...
  November 2nd, 2025 18:49
• Elsie Arrives! (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) And we have another saga ahead. Well done Shamrocker
  November 2nd, 2025 15:48
• Grief is My Mother (Malo J) Sad and distressing this poem holds darkness in its small hands.
  November 2nd, 2025 15:25
• Prunella Perished (Randyjohnson71) Another nice tribute to a star. It seems that those I am familiar with are...
  November 2nd, 2025 15:23
• Touch the shadows. (Starfire) Questioning of oneself in this poem where regret remains locked. Regret a...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:16
• The One you confess your love to- (Meera Mere) Indeed one never knows whom to trust or what one can believe. A powerful...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:13
• Alpha Tempest (Sassy Lou) Alpha is the beginning and Omega the end and aptly said in a poem that...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:12
• Show in the Sky (Written on Samhain/Halloween/Bonfire Night Time 2025) (AuburnScribbler) Being sensitive to others and their needs comes through in this read and...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:10
• The Long Road (A.H. Browning) This poem to me is a search for someone or something lost. It bears a...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:05
• Shadows Of The Battlefield (Joseph M Marion) A poem long overdue for those that suffered the wounds of war physical or...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:03
• \" Trust Why ?\" (Lyra Silvertongue) Betrayal and fallen trust an issue in this poem where the only one that...
  November 2nd, 2025 13:01
• ANGRY GODS (David Welch) The repeating chorus gives this the feel of a song and so it should be.
  November 2nd, 2025 12:59
• Freedom Awaits (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Another marvelous write Kurt full of wisdom and understanding
  November 2nd, 2025 12:56
• Ways to say I love you, without words (FrasMac) A whole lot of good advice to both parties. Some I have taken and some I...
  November 2nd, 2025 12:55
• Shipwreck (Lorenz) The key word for me was unsane where most would use insane I agree with...
  November 2nd, 2025 12:52
• Put It Back (Bella Shepard) Acceptance is the greatest of gifts both for oneself and for others. I...
  November 2nd, 2025 12:48
• CUCARACHAS / COCKROACHES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) A most interesting view of the roach and self. There is a feeling of...
  November 2nd, 2025 10:12