Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Untitled {12} (Niko Papadatos)
Any time that I hear the words trust me I tighten up. A poem not to be...
November 12th, 2025 08:40 - star black out (Arqios)
Whether this poem is intended as a tribute to a great star or not it...
November 12th, 2025 06:17 - give hope (Jim56)
A poem of challenge and a prayer of giving that extends from our hand to...
November 12th, 2025 05:51 - Bright Star (Susannah)
Distant but constant a light that guides shines bright. Distant yet...
November 12th, 2025 05:49 - I will wait forever (Birddie Jane)
A write that holds sadness but strength, hope turned to resignation,...
November 12th, 2025 05:45 - Why i love him? (Starlight)
Possession is nine points of the law they say. Here love is counted as...
November 12th, 2025 04:44 - The Smell of AbsenceΒ (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Now this can be taken two ways and I love that. Either it is one\'s lost...
November 12th, 2025 04:42 - ππ¬π’π° ππ¬π’π±π―πΆ βππ³π’ ππ’ππ±π₯? ππ’ππ±π₯ (Keyara S Trotman)
Someone that brings good fortune or luck like a rabbits foot or a four...
November 12th, 2025 04:39 - THE SPINE OF REJECTION (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The rhyme scheme woven with short lines and flowing thought make for a...
November 12th, 2025 04:37 - Hidden in the water (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
This reminds me of the Man of War, a floating demon floating on the waves...
November 12th, 2025 04:34 - What Hurts The Most (Ajon4wheels)
Death highlights virtues and places in shadows faults. A lovely write of a...
November 12th, 2025 04:32 - Change of Heart (Sassy Lou)
Beauty and its alure can cause a change of heart in anyone no matter how...
November 12th, 2025 04:29 - Release (Applecherry)
Time wears away things we thought were permanent. A write about such...
November 12th, 2025 04:26 - PROBLEM SOLVED (Michael Edwards)
A fun fanciful story about a serious social problem. Immigration with all...
November 12th, 2025 04:24 - Message Received (Tom Dylan)
Each of us in our own way are weird some more than others and I guess in...
November 12th, 2025 04:19 - Diamonds Delights (Orchidee)
Another fine hymn Orchi. This is the first time I heard of diamonds in a...
November 12th, 2025 04:16 - And It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
It didn\'t even rain that hard for Noah. A wonderful thought Andy and...
November 12th, 2025 04:12 - Unending (Boot)
Oppression when does the hand become too heavy so as to lift ones arms in...
November 12th, 2025 04:08 - Soft Rain (Kaz)
A beautiful picture cast in these three lines. Nicely done
November 12th, 2025 04:04 - Moon (M.E.M.)
A lovely write of the moon. It is brought into focus and expanded in...
November 11th, 2025 19:30 - Strong flame (Maplespal)
A challenge and a dare in a poem that is opposed to its opposite in love....
November 11th, 2025 19:28 - THE GOOD HORSE FRED (David Welch)
Another wonderful narrative poem that tells its story well. A fave
November 11th, 2025 19:18 - A Question for You (Jjudaharts)
Such an important question posed in this brief write. Mining the soul,...
November 11th, 2025 16:50 - Someone like my Father (Poetaldo)
Another good write poetaldo. Well done
November 11th, 2025 15:32 - Alarm clock (Tallisman)
This is a great use of a symbol that works all the way through the poem...
November 11th, 2025 15:30 - A TRIBUTE TO MY DAD (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
A poetic tribute to a lost father. Sad but well done
November 11th, 2025 15:28 - Trust (Malo J)
Cycles repeat themselves and people find it hard to change. A real life...
November 11th, 2025 15:27 - It\'s My Move (Anthony Hanible)
Choices and decisions. A poem of the evolution of such choices. Nicely...
November 11th, 2025 15:25 - PRETTIEST POETRY. (Starfire)
A wonderful poem with great running rhyme holding it together. A fun read...
November 11th, 2025 15:24 - FOOTPRINTS OF TOMORROW (Poems by Kutlo)
Deep thoughts of past genealogy and choices that were made long ago. Very...
November 11th, 2025 15:20 - Pushover (Paul Gerard Reed)
A poem of defiance and in powerful form indeed. A fun read well worded.
November 11th, 2025 15:19 - The Feast That Waited in Shadows (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
I am not one for holidays either but the joy and warmth of the holidays...
November 11th, 2025 15:17 - One Very Big, Bad Wolf (Luke Bensing)
Anxiety is a wolf and sometimes in sheep\'s clothing. He huffs and he...
November 11th, 2025 15:13 - A Poetic Legacy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Lovely Kurt I feel the same way. So nicely expressed in couplets indeed.
November 11th, 2025 15:10 - if forever comes, is it waiting? (Applecherry)
This poem is so nicely upbeat but uses contradictions such as \"my body is...
November 11th, 2025 15:09 - Reap (RSM0812)
Time indeed does beckon from above they are the only ones that know where...
November 11th, 2025 15:05 - Pilgrims of Mercy (Gray0328)
Deep in metaphor this poem speaks of pain and damage being overridden with...
November 11th, 2025 15:04 - I make you happy (William Hromada)
Mutual love is a win win situation. A lovely write
November 11th, 2025 15:01 - The Invader of my Cave (NinjaGirl)
Ah deep and metaphorical a double difficulty. It speaks of gradual but...
November 11th, 2025 15:00 - @.Organ (Lorenz)
Ah the organ, penis or pianist I take it a god at any rate and leader of...
November 11th, 2025 14:55 - Whispers (Teddy.15)
The first thing that comes to my mind are the voices of guilt that we all...
November 11th, 2025 14:49 - No Sure Thing (Thomas W Case)
In this life nothing is sure not even this statement. A good read Thomas...
November 11th, 2025 10:46 - Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight (Neville)
Neville this poem reads to all us old pots as the shards that we will...
November 11th, 2025 10:22 - We All Lose (GeekSusie)
Well written it is easy for those that don\'t suffer to hold the line. All...
November 11th, 2025 10:05 - Remember (Emptypot)
A famous quote with addition giving it more power still. Nicely done. I...
November 11th, 2025 10:01 - Quiet Colours (Karoline)
Romantic and filled with great imagery as well as rhyme and flow it was a...
November 11th, 2025 09:15 - Untitled {11} (Niko Papadatos)
A deep philosophical question in this write. As for me I believe nothing...
November 11th, 2025 09:13 - The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or (Tristan Robert Lange)
A philosophical gordian knot. The picture you posted looked like two eggs....
November 11th, 2025 09:10 - Truth? (Jerry Reynolds)
A truth itself that speaks softly but clearly
November 11th, 2025 08:21 - a walk in the park (Jim56)
A fun and fanciful write Jim loved it
November 11th, 2025 08:19 - Anger (MatPie)
A wonderful poem of recognition. It is ironical that we use the word human...
November 11th, 2025 07:37 - My Apology (PerditaRose)
Miscommunication, misunderstanding, the key to many arguments, fights and...
November 11th, 2025 07:32 - Chilled Champagne (Aman 12)
Veiled in metaphor this poem holds deep criticism of man\'s iron irony. I...
November 11th, 2025 07:28 - The Bloom of Absurdism (The Velvet)
In a day that nothing can be believed or taken seriously this poem strikes...
November 11th, 2025 05:52 - Chad on his soapbox (Arqios)
There are those that only have critical words to say, nothing good they...
November 11th, 2025 05:48 - Behind The Wire (Paul Bell)
This poem is a bucket of emotion full of leaks draining its contents in...
November 11th, 2025 04:34 - FORBIDDEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A significant amount of metaphor in this poem. Nicely done
November 11th, 2025 04:30 - You Disappear (Ajon4wheels)
A poem of lost love separated by a mortal veil there is sadness in this...
November 11th, 2025 04:29 - Again (Sree)
This seems the type of relationship that has grown more common in recent...
November 11th, 2025 04:24 - Ghosts of Yakuza (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
This senryu is graphic in implied imagery and powerful in its meaning....
November 11th, 2025 04:23 - The Quiet Intervals (OA Poetry)
A new perspective presented in poetic form. Nicely written
November 11th, 2025 04:21 - THE SOLDIER\'S REQUEST (David Welch)
A wonderful poem that has a bit of biting irony written into it and can be...
November 11th, 2025 04:20 - Muscle (Ja'Quan Shepard)
This has a hip hop beat to it and reads like a battle rap. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:10 - High Tide (Kayla Jackson)
When someone incompatible becomes incorporated into you there is this...
November 11th, 2025 04:09 - I am- Conscience (The breaktime monologue)
Quite the list here in this poetic monologue nicely enumerated. Well done
November 11th, 2025 04:07 - π₯β΄ππππΆππΎπβ (Keyara S Trotman)
The free flow of thought in this write takes me from journaling to baby...
November 11th, 2025 04:02 - Remembrance At Eleven (Orchidee)
I like this one Orchi it varies from the traditional hymn and seems...
November 11th, 2025 04:00 - What Happened To Truth! (Goldfinch60)
If one wanted to spread confusion and destruction of society what better...
November 11th, 2025 03:55 - The Glass Deer (PerditaRose)
An image dear of a deer kept near and now out of fear put behind glass...
November 10th, 2025 21:15 - Infinity in its infancy (EvenwheniLie)
A great write of a view from our limited perspective where there are only...
November 10th, 2025 21:13 - King of Glass Land (Joan Reese)
Quite the story told in this piece. A lovely write of myth or folk tale as...
November 10th, 2025 21:11 - Time to pass away (Joseph M Marion)
It reels like time is shortening and time has recently changed, it grows...
November 10th, 2025 18:31 - Boredom (Amethyste)
Gasoline and a light what a way to go. A good read
November 10th, 2025 18:29 - I am With You (William Hromada)
A poetic declaration of staying in there come hell or high water. Nicely...
November 10th, 2025 18:28 - Child\'s Play (Xalvazora)
A fun fantasy in this poem nicely written from a child\'s eyes
November 10th, 2025 16:12 - HEART OF FIRE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
This poem is a bit dark and speaks of the demonic. It talks of fire and is...
November 10th, 2025 15:03 - RP Amazing Poetry Book (Rafika Pahud)
Loves in this poem and I have to say some parts made me hungry. Well done
November 10th, 2025 15:00 - When I need a quick pick me up... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A poem of tolerance not just of alcohol but drugs in general. A good write...
November 10th, 2025 14:58 - Seasoned summer (RSM0812)
A beautiful work with wonderful rhyme and meaning. Very nicely done
November 10th, 2025 14:55 - Speaking to God (Kenneth βKenGinβ Reeves)
A most religious write of seeking one\'s God and dedicating one\'s self to...
November 10th, 2025 14:39 - Nature Has Way (Jjudaharts)
Mind provoking this poem is a delight to meditate on
November 10th, 2025 14:37 - Just no Justice (NinjaGirl)
The yin and yang of reality. A lovely writing of dilema and the human...
November 10th, 2025 14:36 - Schadenfreude (Gray0328)
Wow! So nicely said the desire to see others fall that we might feel...
November 10th, 2025 11:58 - The black sun of melancholy (Lorenz)
It is amazing how this poem begins with a sense of metaphorical reality...
November 10th, 2025 11:56 - you always say the right thing (Applecherry)
Ah the conflict between emotions and mind between the female and male. A...
November 10th, 2025 11:50 - In Shadow: By J. Alfred ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Been there as one so I know how it feels and even in poetry the fruit dies...
November 10th, 2025 11:44 - Chasing the Shadow That Never Turns (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
Quite the epic journey of life and death in this poem nicely rhymed and in...
November 10th, 2025 10:58 - Definance in the Bottle (Gray0328)
Quite the epic journey in this poem of life and death. Nicely done in...
November 10th, 2025 10:57 - A Few Days (Keyara S Trotman)
A most interesting flavor.
November 10th, 2025 10:53 - That Moment (Lea Gagliardo)
Very religious in nature this poem is a prayer. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 10:15 - Reaching into the dusk (Luke Bensing)
It seems that this poem ends mid thought where it ought. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 10:14 - Embracing the End (Nayak)
Reflective indeed this poem is a bit dark but meaningful. Nicely done
November 10th, 2025 10:13 - The Blessing Burns (Tristan Robert Lange)
Clever wording and the partial use of a well known phrase makes this a...
November 10th, 2025 10:11 - End of Day One (GenXer Shamrocker βοΈ)
Another chapter completed in the caregiving saga. Nicely done it feels...
November 10th, 2025 10:09 - Untitled {10} (Niko Papadatos)
Clever and it leaves a question unanswered so poetic. Well done
November 10th, 2025 08:36 - SOUL DEPARTED (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A lovely homage to a lost loved one. It is softly dark and sad but holds...
November 10th, 2025 08:35 - They hurt me, so I wrote! (Sree)
How nicely said that silence is golden and that words unsaid sometimes are...
November 10th, 2025 08:21 - star-kissed scars (Lunarchloedip)
A beautiful poem with a powerful message to look out for oneself and not...
November 10th, 2025 08:18 - Between (Devender Kumar)
This is a poem that is deeper than the surface of it seems. It needs to be...
November 10th, 2025 08:16 - shrinking (Mumiza)
Running in second place is not an easy position but it can be a good...
November 10th, 2025 08:15
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