Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• dogs love (Jim56) I can\'t but agree having had several dogs in my life they are my animal...
  April 7th, 2025 05:41
• GHOSTLIKE (Nephilim56) Have felt that before as I feel it now. A most haunting poem. Lovely
  April 7th, 2025 03:48
• Mystery..... (Orchidee) Those people with a lick a common sense will commit themselves to the...
  April 7th, 2025 03:47
• In Quiet Sorrow (Kaz) A nugget of gold this gem and in the tradition of alchemy it\'s gold may...
  April 7th, 2025 03:44
• Successfully Failed Again. (Poetic Licence) Very nicely said in most poetic form that we are what we tell ourselves...
  April 7th, 2025 03:40
• How Often ? (Charlie Nine) A motivational poem that encourages each one to believe in themselves and...
  April 7th, 2025 03:37
• eye on the road (Arqios) Here here a topic I have thought about for some time. Do we not do the...
  April 7th, 2025 03:26
• Two Roses after D’Aktill (Ksey_Gan) A tone of sadness pervades this poem and continues through it until the...
  April 7th, 2025 03:17
• Trumpet Player (Gatiuski) The words of the poem echo like the sound of the horns in a hypnotic...
  April 7th, 2025 03:12
• A World Without Love. Sonnet (Goldfinch60) A lovely love sonnet Andy. I remember well the song as well.
  April 7th, 2025 03:07
• Of Pranks, Spoofs, and yes, April Fool\'s (Cheeky Missy) A banquet of various foods from French toast to mushrooms and onions an...
  April 6th, 2025 19:45
• Waiting (Amethyste) Waiting is the worst. A poem that captures this well.
  April 6th, 2025 17:40
• I wanted to have coffee with the heroes…?! (Sami Mulaj) A poem that I take of metaphor. We are all heroes in one way or another....
  April 6th, 2025 16:47
• Like it hot Tango (Ksey_Gan) Seductive, sensuous, filled with wishes and hopes. Lovely
  April 6th, 2025 15:41
• I\'m sorry mother (Pineapple_pizza018) Nice to love a mother and even nicer that she is still here better yet a...
  April 6th, 2025 14:29
• Acceptance (Hanible) An analogy of class and school put into real life. Nicely written it...
  April 6th, 2025 13:33
• Te Amo Cafe Blues (A Boy With Roses) I\'ve made it a rule no alcohol before 10:00 AM. A poem of passion and...
  April 6th, 2025 13:31
• What Distance This (ADarkerMind) I really liked the complexion of this poem. The internal rhyme from time...
  April 6th, 2025 13:28
• Tomorrow\'s Child (Kurt Philip Behm) Can we be bigger than that around us can we accept change and embrace it?...
  April 6th, 2025 12:11
• Song of a little road (Hirok Das) We often don\'t enjoy the trip until it is over. The destination gives...
  April 6th, 2025 12:09
• My love, Am I the wrong one? (Definitelymayank) Holding on to anger cankers the soul. Letting go frees and heals it....
  April 6th, 2025 12:08
• to the thoughts that die (Demar Desu) So hard when there is nothing to write on and a thought comes through. Has...
  April 6th, 2025 12:06
• You Choose You (13LaurenD) Saying no is a hard thing to do especially after a lifetime of saying yes....
  April 6th, 2025 12:05
• The ice cream (Isa kemmy) A great metaphor ice cream sweet that melts. Kindness that melts a heart...
  April 6th, 2025 11:59
• Loss and Gain (RSM0812) A poem of redemption. Not bright but dark it cries out. Nicely written
  April 6th, 2025 11:56
• Horsemen 4 (Mik) Metaphor in religion and in poetry sometimes one and the same. A good...
  April 6th, 2025 11:54
• Something to Drink (Coracaodacripta) Not at all disturbing but rather finely poetic. This speaks in metaphor...
  April 6th, 2025 10:20
• Bird with a broken wing (Cruel Summer) At times most of us have broken wings, some heal some not and we either...
  April 6th, 2025 09:32
• Gran my guiding star (Heledd) A fine tribute to a most important person that knew the value of giving...
  April 6th, 2025 08:17
• Take It Easy (Peppino) Take time to smell the roses. One can not be a poet if one does not open...
  April 6th, 2025 08:15
• Blush of the moon (Kaz) A most beautiful picture painted in words where paper becomes the sky and...
  April 6th, 2025 08:09
• Defy (Tristan Robert Lange) A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted...
  April 6th, 2025 08:07
• Just a drink (Maplespal) Real and metaphoric my favorite type of poetry. The feeling is not just...
  April 6th, 2025 07:59
• Booted Grace (Gray0328) This is an example of how context gives different meaning to a poem. I...
  April 6th, 2025 07:21
• Habitación número cuatro (Falcon_mn) Beautiful in its horror, death in a haunting dream with images to fill the...
  April 6th, 2025 06:38
• Fuck (Pamela) Disappointment? A powerful poem strongly worded to make its point. Use the...
  April 6th, 2025 06:30
• hedgehog pilot (Jim56) Another story in poetic form Jim. Well worded and set as a wonderful...
  April 6th, 2025 06:27
• This Very Moment (Cassiopeiaxneptune) There is deep philosophy in this poem. Living in the moment Carpe Diem is...
  April 6th, 2025 06:24
• Epilogue (Ria_1005) Love exists beyond separation by death, distance, or even anger and...
  April 6th, 2025 06:20
• BUTTERFLY (Nephilim56) If we could only keep that innocence and nonprejudicial view into...
  April 6th, 2025 06:18
• Blood in my Champagne (Malcolm) Quite the story of anger and all emotions in a rap. Nicely done
  April 6th, 2025 06:16
• Paint (Charlie Nine) Man as god in this write. We are all gods and as creators we slash in...
  April 6th, 2025 06:11
• Impermanence (Rebellion_in_sanity) Brilliant!!! The last line of the poem (Life is glorious for being...
  April 6th, 2025 06:04
• Is this it? (Spencer Wilhelm) Layers of metaphor like falling dust bury this poem in meaning hidden....
  April 6th, 2025 05:55
• Oh No Not More !!! Wise Man Say (9) (Poetic Licence) No don\'t assume you know the old saying. I have grown to enjoy your...
  April 6th, 2025 05:47
• The voice of blood (Lorenz) I hear religion and its symbols used as excuses and archetypes of violence...
  April 6th, 2025 05:43
• puppeteering farewell (Arqios) A balloon ready to burst it joins so many disjointed pieces, a...
  April 6th, 2025 05:37
• Brass Monkey. (Goldfinch60) Now this is a gem Gold a story that sounds so familiar that I feel I have...
  April 6th, 2025 05:24
• ROAD (NafisaSB) Here you use anthropomorphism to its best in the road telling its story....
  April 6th, 2025 05:15
• Water (NafisaSB) I love nature and its conservation. Where I live I drink from a natural...
  April 6th, 2025 05:11
• White hair (NafisaSB) A great message contained in this poem. For me it was not the color but...
  April 6th, 2025 05:05
• Ocean Colour Sheen (Kevin Hulme) A story told in beautiful metaphor and rhyme. Very nicely done
  April 5th, 2025 19:35
• The Poet\'s Fate after  Sergei Yesenin (Ksey_Gan) A masterful write as to what it is to be a poet. Indeed so it feels. Great...
  April 5th, 2025 18:51
• She Said, She Can (Alex PB) A poem of being struck and smitten. Whether this is enough to land the...
  April 5th, 2025 17:47
• The Bloom of You (Rrodriguez) Enraptured, smitten, thunderstruck all fit this poem. A beautiful poem...
  April 5th, 2025 17:44
• Chasing the Horizon of Happiness (Heledd) Nothing like swimming in the sea. A most interesting write with symbolic...
  April 5th, 2025 17:41
• Chess Pieces (John Prophet) A great analogy we are all pawns and even the bishops, queen and king are...
  April 5th, 2025 17:38
• Stay Home (Tony Grannell) Anti war I\'m all for. This poem speaks to the silliness of war and how...
  April 5th, 2025 15:46
• Blind 2 (Dyslexic.gun) A poem of unrequited love that still bleeds onto the page. A poem of loss...
  April 5th, 2025 15:42
• Narcissist (Niki Oz) You have described one quite well and there are many types and blends....
  April 5th, 2025 15:39
• Jazz joint (Lorenz) So many references in this poem to songs, musicians and movie characters a...
  April 5th, 2025 13:46
• Chambers (Midnight Lasagna) Very nicely done. Pride is a great subject to address and my favorite line...
  April 5th, 2025 13:40
• Stolen Love (Courtnie McKern) A complicated theme handled so well with clever wording and poetic style a...
  April 5th, 2025 12:14
• If You can Feel (Adventuressmalik) Nicely worded and with a great message to look for a place of love. If we...
  April 5th, 2025 12:12
• You (Ocean Blue) Very romantic and beautiful. Well written
  April 5th, 2025 11:51
• Awaiting The Will (RSM0812) The tree of knowledge has a price. They say ignorance is bliss and so it...
  April 5th, 2025 11:38
• Saturday Musing ... (Kurt Philip Behm) So true you can not make pottery without clay. Have driven Route 66 in the...
  April 5th, 2025 11:34
• Heaven (Jonathan Merida) The answer only to earth. A most interesting poem and thought expressed in...
  April 5th, 2025 10:59
• The Two Madmen (Damaso) A great metaphor that works in all areas of this world. Nicely penned
  April 5th, 2025 10:58
• The Whispers of the Earth ([email protected]) Nature is poetry in vivo and all of it is a poem. A lovely message that...
  April 5th, 2025 10:56
• A walk with the sunset (Pukur) Beautiful scenery and images penned in this poem. The mix of nature and...
  April 5th, 2025 09:40
• Woe Unto The Silent World (Mohammad younus koul) I like how this poem looks at all as to blame in this world of woe. We all...
  April 5th, 2025 08:31
• Forgotten and lost (Maplespal) Some memories need a trigger to detonate others duds lay buried beneath...
  April 5th, 2025 07:13
• What Love Is (The Indignant Poetess) A deeply philosophical poem that in its brevity speaks volumes. Very...
  April 5th, 2025 07:10
• Serpentine Seduction (Tristan Robert Lange) A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is...
  April 5th, 2025 07:09
• The Ice Queen (Li Yanmey) With no key no entrance. With no entrance no knowledge. With denial of...
  April 5th, 2025 05:56
• Your Beauty (Reynaldo Casison) Beautiful images penned
  April 5th, 2025 05:52
• O Cut Me O Bruise Me (Hanible) Incredibly powerful in its darkness it paints the picture of abuse in...
  April 5th, 2025 05:52
• billie badger (Jim56) A poem stretching nature into fantasy and making a poem child friendly....
  April 5th, 2025 05:48
• Passion Play (Cassiopeiaxneptune) A beautiful poetic invitation in this poem. Nicely penned it calls out.
  April 5th, 2025 05:46
• THE RIVER (Nephilim56) So many metaphors flow through this poem that it is easy to miss one....
  April 5th, 2025 05:44
• The Road (Abdullah123) A social commentary in this entrancing poem. Very nicely penned it has...
  April 5th, 2025 05:43
• $200 (Spencer Wilhelm) This poem is far deeper than what it appears upon initial reading. I have...
  April 5th, 2025 05:40
• What I pray for (Joseph M Marion) A highly religious piece it speaks to the heart of the believer. Nicely...
  April 5th, 2025 05:39
• Fall Fades To Winter (Ally) A great metaphor for the seasons of life and phases we go through. Nicely...
  April 5th, 2025 05:36
• When Faith fades (Ezekiel Olayemi) A story as old as time lust takes down even the strongest kings. Well...
  April 5th, 2025 05:33
• True Beauty Lies Within (Saleh Ben Saleh) Clever wording and good rhyme make this poem a joy to read. It contains a...
  April 5th, 2025 05:30
• The Mystical (MDStone) Well defined before mentioned this poem paints a picture. Nicely done
  April 5th, 2025 05:28
• Fate decreed sexting/texting while married abominable (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) The question is where does one draw the line? if one takes it to the limit...
  April 5th, 2025 05:26
• loved (Lunarchloedip) Well described the feelings that go with initial passion and engagement of...
  April 5th, 2025 05:14
• First Time at the Track (Gray0328) A snapshot picture in poetic words leaves not only visual but olfactory...
  April 5th, 2025 05:12
• Through Eyes of Light (Teddy.15) I here the challenge here, meet your greatest difficulties face to face...
  April 5th, 2025 05:09
• heartbeat (Arqios) I could hear the beat in this poem and it carried me onward to the end. A...
  April 5th, 2025 05:05
• One Day At A Time. (Goldfinch60) What we have control over use to create beauty, peace and love for...
  April 5th, 2025 05:00
• Sin? (Shadowbones) In its abstraction its images provoke exploration by a mind bound by...
  April 5th, 2025 04:52
• The Beauty of Nothing (Dyslexic.gun) A great poem of measures of love. When you have nothing you have nothing...
  April 4th, 2025 17:39
• The uneven strokes (Arial) Opposites and unexpected in each line. Nicely written
  April 4th, 2025 17:36
• Waking Up From Winter (Courtnie McKern) A poem of spring and its blooming. Nicely painted and well written.
  April 4th, 2025 17:33
• Just Another Ant (Andrew Isaiah Castillo) Whether military or society it is the same we are all ants. We follow...
  April 4th, 2025 17:32
• The river flows (Falcon_mn) A wonderful poem in nature images. More than this it is a great metaphor...
  April 4th, 2025 17:26