Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Priviledge Slave (Precious Chukwudi) A most interesting poem that seems a voice from the past and haunts the...
  June 24th, 2025 04:43
• Different Scares People (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun poem of molded cliches nicely said
  June 24th, 2025 04:39
• Saved (Boot) Clever and unifying this poem goes full circle. Very nicely done
  June 24th, 2025 04:37
• Conscious (Fi00na) An interesting self conversation that remains uncertain in its youth. Well...
  June 24th, 2025 04:36
• Cycle (Niki) Divergent desires unheard on either side lead to a sense of conflict of...
  June 24th, 2025 04:34
• Go (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark) A most inventive shape poem that is very nicely done. Love it
  June 24th, 2025 04:31
• Chuckles Week (Part 2). (Poetic Licence) Ah Tobani close to limerick style in these two made me smile. A fun read
  June 24th, 2025 04:28
• in Wordsworth was my father\'s voice (Arqios) It is the quaint familiarity that some how is not easily identifiable that...
  June 24th, 2025 04:26
• Fine Croquet Day. (Goldfinch60) Got it Gold win or loose one has wone when having fun with one\'s mates....
  June 24th, 2025 04:21
• Reflections (Kaz) Not sure if haiku or senryu but beautiful in either case. Very nicely done
  June 24th, 2025 04:13
• A slave’s last master is his history (EvenwheniLie) Rhyme that provokes thought. Reflections in poetry. Nicely done
  June 24th, 2025 04:11
• Ego-Friendly (AuburnScribbler) Eco friendly is a most interesting concept in that if nature has created...
  June 23rd, 2025 16:40
• Dissociation (Caring dove) Dissociation is a strange defense separating from one\'s own body in order...
  June 23rd, 2025 16:35
• You (Nicolerobinson)
  June 23rd, 2025 16:30
• You (Nicolerobinson) Enamored with a lock and key to the heart. Most interesting.
  June 23rd, 2025 16:30
• Memories of a Russian Man Hangover (Ksey_Gan) Dream like and surreal this poem is romantic in a way. Well done
  June 23rd, 2025 16:28
• Sanctioned Space (or: How to Disappear While Still Being Marked Present) (Jeron Arendse) A poem that feels surreal and of a difference place. Well done
  June 23rd, 2025 15:53
• I Desire for Nothing but your Love (Callista Howard) Lover or God this poem speaks to feelings of security and safety in the...
  June 23rd, 2025 14:41
• I cracked on the central air-conditioning on Juneteenth 2025... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) How hard it will be for us to accommodate the green needs of the planet...
  June 23rd, 2025 14:40
• En la pequeña ciudad (Punkslc) Lost in the city in the walls gone the person that once was there. This is...
  June 23rd, 2025 14:37
• The Presence of (Her) Absence (Petrichor of Love) Loss and the pain that accompanies it voiced in this poem the inability to...
  June 23rd, 2025 14:34
• Young yet beyond (Mya) Every generation says that kids are not what they used to be but the truth...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:32
• I am god (2781) A beautiful poem of acceptance of a god and a faith in God seeing his work...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:29
• love mother ! (Jenifer.N.anisha) A strong poem of mother child love that is the most important of all. So...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:27
• To Be (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Beautiful Kurt such a powerful message said in such balanced and lovely...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:26
• the root of peace (Gray0328) A strong poem about humility and indeed it speaks the truth. Humility is...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:24
• Why Didn’t You Just Kill Me (Vanna) A painful poem of how we incorporate the feelings of more powerful people...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:22
• Eternal Love (Lore) This poem is wonderful and speaks to the love one has be it for mother,...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:20
• Let Me (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Here is drama and words of placation as well as a final farewell not just...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:14
• The clowns (Lorenz) A good write Lorenz clowns never scared me but they did make me laugh and...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:12
• Thank you (Tony36) For the message itself a fave. A poem of gratitude to those that gave the...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:06
• For you (Poetaldo) A good poem about stress and the need for its alleviation and the reliance...
  June 23rd, 2025 13:02
• The Corpse\'s Creed (Tristan Robert Lange) A ghoulish write full of foul and rancid images that slither off the page....
  June 23rd, 2025 13:01
• Gilded lilies (Georgia Watson) A poem with feeling and a sense of underlying anger and pain. Nicely done
  June 23rd, 2025 05:57
• dont take life for granted (Jim56) Very nice Jim I could not agree more.
  June 23rd, 2025 05:55
• Slow Day (Jerry Reynolds) Been there Jerry and I am not sure if I like that situation or not. The...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:32
• A LEGEND GOES HOME (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A lovely tribute to a poet and man. Nicely done
  June 23rd, 2025 05:31
• The Human Fabric (Mottakeenur Rehman) Ignorance to our own dark side and frailties a fallen or maybe never risen...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:29
• Splash (Maplespal) Tsunami, devastation, metaphor? very nicely penned
  June 23rd, 2025 05:17
• Move On (The Indignant Poetess) So much in such a short poem. Sadness is magnified when only one bears the...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:15
• Feeding The Squirrels (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Squirls can be greedy like humans taking more food than what they need...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:13
• LIFE OF A ZERO (Nocturnal Soul) A great message sent in metaphoric style. Nicely written
  June 23rd, 2025 05:09
• The 9 o\'clock News (Mutley Ravishes) Using an absurd threat and numbers to emphasize a more serious issue...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:07
• Giles Corey (Bigguy) Emotion in its stickiness covers this poem. It cries with oppression,...
  June 23rd, 2025 05:03
• DREAM OF SARA (Nephilim56) An emotional poem of memories evoked by things around with the feeling of...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:57
• My dear (Elizabeth Ross 4) A love poem of a love lost and in metaphor possibly with death\'s...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:53
• The weight I bear (Nicole Pritchard) A recognition of shortcomings and insensitivity that has led to a rift to...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:50
• Truth and Lies (RSM0812) A poem and a journey through mortality set in a biblical metaphor nicely...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:47
• Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence) I appreciated these and they did make me smile and chuckle. Thanks for...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:32
• cluEleSs (Arqios) At first I took this for a critique on technology that has separated us...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:29
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 60-IlApporteDesHommesBattus-1June2025-editedSR (Soman Ragavan) Followed this well until the language change then lost track. Another...
  June 23rd, 2025 04:19
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) Well written Andy this one was a lot of fun loved it
  June 23rd, 2025 04:14
• Dreams beyond the cage (Elizabeth Ross 4) A very nicely crafted poem in rhyme, flow and meaning. It speaks of...
  June 23rd, 2025 03:57
• Vows I Made To You (Santajah Douglass) To thine own self be true is Shakespeare\'s words and they hold true. If...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:23
• Primeval (Fränz Müller) This poem seems to set the scene for a ritual that is to follow. Great...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:19
• Her Eyes (Chandu Kanuri) The eyes the window to the soul are focused on in this poem that reads...
  June 22nd, 2025 21:17
• Dollar (James Michael) This seems like talk that would go on between brothers. A lovely write of...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:47
• He was the coffee (Bryson) A good metaphor. I love my women like my coffee dark and bitter. A good...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:45
• Poetry (Doggerel Dave) Damn no lecture then. That\'s ok Dave I don\'t like lectures either and...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:42
• Artsy gypsies (Reynaldo Casison) Romantic and sensuous bursting with joyous and natures images another...
  June 22nd, 2025 19:38
• Oulu (Amethyste) And so it is that Finnish is one of the hardest languages to learn. You...
  June 22nd, 2025 16:55
• Solstice signatures (Mourgana of the Fey) And so with us all as we fade away into the twilight. Very nice
  June 22nd, 2025 16:53
• Down Stream, Up Stream (Pete the poet) A beautiful picture you paint in words makes me nostalgic for those places...
  June 22nd, 2025 16:52
• Gonifs and gossips revisited (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) People the worst type of pests. Good write
  June 22nd, 2025 16:50
• You Just Know (Thomas W Case) Signs of the time. A tough and raw write Thomas.
  June 22nd, 2025 14:02
• Wasting time in heaven (Shadowbones) Ah the golden question and so few know the answer. Well written
  June 22nd, 2025 13:59
• One Year (13LaurenD) Deceit, treachery, cheating, betrayal call it what you may its all the...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:58
• I Was Not Born a Ghost (The Eternal Cry of the Unbroken) (Mottakeenur Rehman) All seem the same be they politicians, physicians, technicians doesn\'t...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:53
• Can\'t get out! (Orchidee) Never been locked in before only out. A tough call Orchi but gave me a...
  June 22nd, 2025 13:47
• midsummer\'s night (Gray0328) Sultry, sensuous, enchanting, a wonderful world that I have been to....
  June 22nd, 2025 11:29
• Silver Hues (Kurt Philip Behm) Deeper than the surface of the mirror and in greater multitude than its...
  June 22nd, 2025 11:27
• Hawkmoth (🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི) Day and night such contrast literally and metaphorically. Lovely
  June 22nd, 2025 10:12
• Bedroom (Shahla Latifi) A secluded refuge where one can be and do what one pleases and what...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:11
• A Crossroads for Iran (Raidoc) Ideological, political, historical, cultural developmental differences...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:09
• Erratically-tossed sequins (Amy Michelle Mosier) Abstract and metaphorical this poem can have as many interpretations as...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:06
• The Girl in the mirror (Vanna) We are our own worst critics and looking in the mirror whether real or...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:04
• Chopped Trunks (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Disregard for life and how it may all come back on us one day. A painful...
  June 22nd, 2025 10:01
• Tree (Caring dove) A sense of personification in this poem gives it life. A lovely write
  June 22nd, 2025 09:59
• The Flash (Jerry Reynolds) Routines followed by man and beast, which man is. Very nice
  June 22nd, 2025 09:57
• Poetry is (Tony36) AI terrifying in its nonhuman form as we are seduced by a siren.
  June 22nd, 2025 09:56
• survive in front of the mirror (Lore) Reflections can be a bitch. A sad poem of realization
  June 22nd, 2025 09:53
• Thirteen treasons - I drink (Maplespal) a most interesting introduction to this piece that implies metaphor in...
  June 22nd, 2025 09:49
• God Cares (Tristan Robert Lange) To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
  June 22nd, 2025 09:45
• Void (Rosey) Desperation in the suit of depression a poem crying out to a deaf world....
  June 22nd, 2025 06:50
• sometimes life is hard (Jim56) A great message sent in this poem. Seeing the world from the other side...
  June 22nd, 2025 06:48
• “This Poem Was Never Meant to Flow” (Cirawrites01) Metaphor and reality mixed in a poem of a view of the present. Sad and...
  June 22nd, 2025 06:45
• Aligning human life (Byyvette) So much better than one wave length is the whole spectrum and then one...
  June 22nd, 2025 05:29
• Paint the sky the colour dark (Lostinfantasy) Well written this piece of observed wisdom and written poetry. Loved the...
  June 22nd, 2025 05:27
• WHAT IF (Nephilim56) Although humorous as in most humor there is a bit of truth. I certainly...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:11
• SCARS OF TRADITION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I hear a spiritual call in this poem that is to bridge the differences in...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:07
• Celebrate to build or build to celebrate (EvenwheniLie) Some great use of metaphor here (Punishments don\'t remove their crimes) A...
  June 22nd, 2025 04:04
• joy of true love (Mandeep Saini) A lovely philosophy encapsulated in a short poem. Nicely written
  June 22nd, 2025 04:00
• Die (Adiii) A poem of regret and pain. The depression and despair shown in varying...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:57
• AnalysisByQwen2.5-Max AI-Volume 59--CoupJarnac--26May2025 (Soman Ragavan) For some reason Soman this one feels very familiar to me.
  June 22nd, 2025 03:52
• The darkness (RSM0812) Some good lines in this poem I particularly liked (And drink your death...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:50
• 4 blue walls (Leah Bess) A poem of strong feeling. The question unanswered and open to...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:46
• Lonely Spring (Accross_world_with_u) A very sad but well written poem that has feeling in its rhyme and near...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:40
• This poem can change your Life (Sahildhobalepoetry) Gratitude is greater than greed. A lovely poem of being thankful and...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:37
• light between shadows (Arqios) I can see it plain as day. A wonderous glimpse of golden rays setting...
  June 22nd, 2025 03:34
• Wise Man Say (17) (Poetic Licence) Another Sunday off to a good start with some amusement and some wisdom....
  June 22nd, 2025 03:29