Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Oh Snap (Tristan Robert Lange)
Anxiety one of the biggest killers, raise blood pressure, alters sugar...
April 11th, 2025 08:58 - Lost words (Lorenz)
So much symbolism lies in this poem full of metaphor. It is a light in its...
April 11th, 2025 06:14 - Hymn for the hooved (Mourgana of the Fey)
A beautiful work this poem uses vivid and identifiable imagery to paint a...
April 11th, 2025 06:05 - Shaking feeling (Maplespal)
A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on...
April 11th, 2025 05:57 - The biggest fight yet. (Hey!)
What a nice message of what friendship is. I enjoyed the rhyme punctuated...
April 11th, 2025 05:54 - sunshine happiness (Jim56)
Such a lovely poem Jim full of sunshine and brightness to lift a rainy day...
April 11th, 2025 05:50 - wouldnt it be nice - just a short haiku (Xqw)
Actions speak louder than words and as poets we use words which would be...
April 11th, 2025 05:48 - Ripples in Rhyme (Libellule)
A wonderful poem set in great rhyme and meter with such a smooth flow. It...
April 11th, 2025 05:43 - Violin Strings (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Used to play the violin as a child and it is a devil of an instrument with...
April 11th, 2025 04:27 - Liquid Cope (KTay)
A ritual cycle of the addict whether to alcohol, food, or whatever. So...
April 11th, 2025 04:25 - To The Executioner, To Time (Abdullah123)
This poem is so classical in form and style I love it and it speaks to me...
April 11th, 2025 04:22 - be brave... (NafisaSB)
I remember dancing in the rain when I was younger now I just walk quickly...
April 11th, 2025 04:20 - THE OLD NORTH CEMETERY (Nephilim56)
Haunting and well depicted in images the meter with short lines was rapid...
April 11th, 2025 04:17 - AWE. (David Wakeling)
A haunting poem David I loved several lines in this poem but my favorite...
April 11th, 2025 04:15 - Children Have Rights. (Poetic Licence)
A most noble write Tobani one that I can sense you feel strongly about....
April 11th, 2025 04:11 - Anton Ego (Arqios)
A wonderful metaphor that made me hungry. Poems like food vary in their...
April 11th, 2025 04:06 - Solar Suppression (Mutley Ravishes)
Now this was a fun read that takes one along on a journey with your...
April 11th, 2025 04:01 - I\'m sorry (Vividvoid14)
Sad this poem speaks from the perspective of one with love unrequited....
April 11th, 2025 03:59 - Silent Screams (Haleyalexis)
Well written and compelling this poem speaks to me of hidden things that...
April 11th, 2025 03:56 - 4/10/25 (Wren)
The onset of a panic attack? It sounds so much like it. A vivid and...
April 11th, 2025 03:52 - an actor by any other name (Queer-with-a-pen)
Such a refreshingly original poem in the change of scene stanza to stanza,...
April 11th, 2025 03:50 - Unicorn Choir. (Goldfinch60)
Magic mushrooms a little psilocybin to spice up the night. Love mushrooms...
April 11th, 2025 03:44 - Such A Wicked Game (Sunshine777)
Deeply philosophical this poem explores the meaning of life. Well written
April 10th, 2025 19:03 - Was There Time (Lewisgale mental hospital)
A poem to ponder over. Thought provoking. Very nice
April 10th, 2025 19:02 - I have lived a hundred different lives - (Amy Michelle Mosier)
Very nice a life well lived that despite problems and errors even regrets...
April 10th, 2025 17:50 - Jasmine (Amethyste)
A good poem marked by anthropomorphism that makes the bloom tender and...
April 10th, 2025 17:44 - Tonight (Alex PB)
Sensuous and an invitation for a sexual encounter. Well written
April 10th, 2025 17:42 - My Man (Tony Grannell)
Now that is what I call love and that is what I call a beautiful poem so...
April 10th, 2025 16:22 - Prism of light (Kaz)
A very nice message. The analogy of breaking light into a spectrum of...
April 10th, 2025 16:14 - You grew old, while I was busy growing up. (Pie)
A great poem of finding oneself and one\'s goals but loosing the one that...
April 10th, 2025 16:12 - Electric touch (Nicole Pritchard)
You describe very well the sensations of infatuation,, passion, and...
April 10th, 2025 16:10 - What are you thinking? (Maplespal)
A poem of drifting thoughts falling through a sifter. Well stated and...
April 10th, 2025 13:53 - Hold on to Humanity (JBentley)
A noble poem with a noble message that we are far from reaching. As long...
April 10th, 2025 13:19 - Desire By the Orange Tree (A Boy With Roses)
Does anyone really know anyone? The poem poses the question (If you knew...
April 10th, 2025 12:15 - Sympathies (Coracaodacripta)
A poem of protest this is powerful in its message. Nicely worded it speaks...
April 10th, 2025 12:13 - My Love! I Shall Never Return! (Petrichor of Love)
A sad poem of love death and loss. It flows in good meter and rhyme...
April 10th, 2025 12:11 - To the Russian soldier in 2025 by Vladimir Tsiniker (Ksey_Gan)
Wars are fought on money and that money goes to certain people. Wars are...
April 10th, 2025 12:05 - Muscle Car (Tristan Robert Lange)
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with...
April 10th, 2025 10:57 - Glasses and Lashes (A piece of luggage)
A most interesting poem that speaks of a relationship. Very nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:12 - Summertime (Lorenz)
A poem of seasons. Within this poem a metaphor as well. Nicely penned
April 10th, 2025 10:08 - Rising Sun (Shahla Latifi)
A poem of sadness that takes one back and recalls a relative. Nicely
April 10th, 2025 10:06 - You problem (Pineapple_pizza018)
There are many like this. Well written
April 10th, 2025 10:02 - So Deceiving the Crown (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt)
A word of warning that power is not to be trusted but has ulterior motives...
April 10th, 2025 09:59 - RIP (KTay)
Another dark write sad and written in short phrases like gasping breath or...
April 10th, 2025 09:41 - They\'re Waiting For Me To (Hanible)
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have...
April 10th, 2025 09:22 - He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
April 10th, 2025 09:03 - He pulls the trigger (Tony36)
Dark very dark and with a message that alienated we do not survive. Most...
April 10th, 2025 09:03 - Darkened Ink (Libellule)
Dark but light this poem speaks of Carpe diem. Well written and with good...
April 10th, 2025 08:31 - Driving Dangerously (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message in this poem. Drink don\'t drive, drive don\'t drink. Too...
April 10th, 2025 08:27 - Succumb (Midnight Lasagna)
Highly metaphoric this poem uses alliteration to strengthen its meter and...
April 10th, 2025 07:25 - My Love Taps with the Moon (RSM0812)
Nicely written this piece carries a longing and desire for the moon and...
April 10th, 2025 07:21 - Your gaze (Reynaldo Casison)
Wonderful words in this poem beyond the trite expressions of love it opens...
April 10th, 2025 05:31 - chamelion (Jim56)
A lovely write Jim. My son once had a Jaguar chameleon that changed color...
April 10th, 2025 05:29 - My imagination (Nicolerobinson)
The use of an AAAA rhyme scheme in this poem makes it seem obsessive...
April 10th, 2025 04:33 - Once upon a dark moon (Mourgana of the Fey)
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along....
April 10th, 2025 04:31 - RAIN (Nephilim56)
The staggered, irregular, near rhyme with the meter in this poem simulated...
April 10th, 2025 04:27 - all alone... (Dimpy)
A rather somber and wistful poem of love. It seems to linger in the...
April 10th, 2025 04:24 - Muscle Memories (Mutley Ravishes)
Loved this imagery that although incongruent with reason fits reality. We...
April 10th, 2025 04:22 - Turning the pages (Pukur)
I too used to collect my books in a special place now I keep them in my...
April 10th, 2025 04:18 - the weight of \"g\" (Gray0328)
Some great lines in this poem \'Gray. Love the thought as well...
April 10th, 2025 04:16 - Faith (David Wakeling)
This poem reminded me of an episode of The Twilight Zone. There is a...
April 10th, 2025 04:11 - Kindness and Compassion Are Free. (Poetic Licence)
I would joke about this but the poem demands respect it is such a...
April 10th, 2025 04:03 - d a n c e (Arqios)
Good job of keeping rhyme to the meaning in such short lines. Very nice...
April 10th, 2025 04:01 - Universal Life. (Goldfinch60)
I so agree that there is life out there and life that we may have no...
April 10th, 2025 03:58 - Lonely (Thoughtless)
Seductively short a fun read. Lovely
April 10th, 2025 03:55 - In shimmering light (Kaz)
Short but powerfully stated this poem is an image but also I feel a...
April 10th, 2025 03:51 - A Study in Muddled Colours (Cheeky Missy)
Another set of fun reads. Flowers, food, fox three f\'s a great read Chic
April 10th, 2025 03:50 - Shellf Life (MDStone)
Clever title and the poem itself is very nicely written with rhyme and...
April 10th, 2025 03:43 - socks (Lunarchloedip)
Cute and at the same time deeply empathetic. A great message and metaphor....
April 9th, 2025 19:53 - Let Me Pt. 2 (Alex PB)
Very sweet and tender. A love poem. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 19:52 - Icarus Wanted it All (Thomas W Case)
A wonderful myth that preaches a moral set forth in this poem. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 17:36 - How to become a Star (Abraham Konchellah)
A most wonderful message in poetic form. Very nice
April 9th, 2025 15:10 - little me (Xqw)
Poetically written this tells its story. Very nice a fave
April 9th, 2025 15:08 - watchtower (NinjaGirl)
A psychological understanding cast in metaphor so well constructed. Line...
April 9th, 2025 15:05 - Femme Fatale (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
History of perfume? Fun read.
April 9th, 2025 13:19 - Prayer (Ksey_Gan)
Clever wording with rhyme.
April 9th, 2025 13:15 - The dreaded list (Hzugman)
Clever rhyme here. This fits the truth as we learn more we find out how...
April 9th, 2025 13:13 - keep some things to yourself (Gray0328)
Proper trust to proper individuals not all trust is equal. Very nice Gray
April 9th, 2025 11:43 - Wednesday Musing ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
Two good ones another set of great verses
April 9th, 2025 11:42 - Eggs over rice (Demar Desu)
Another good haiku well done my friend.
April 9th, 2025 11:40 - The world\'s greatest actress (Pineapple_pizza018)
A wonderful tribute well done
April 9th, 2025 11:39 - Nice (Badjanah)
Sad tone to this poem. Poetically said.
April 9th, 2025 11:34 - Hate Me (KTay)
A most interesting concept that we used to do to goats or other animals...
April 9th, 2025 11:33 - Fragile (The Indignant Poetess)
Deeply psychological this poem delves into the heart of emotions and...
April 9th, 2025 09:37 - Dread Day (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A dark poem that shows good rhyme and flow. We at times feel it near and...
April 9th, 2025 09:35 - Never Ending Rhyme (Sunshine777)
True love never fades although it may transform. A first person poem that...
April 9th, 2025 08:47 - The Gun Against My Head (Hanible)
Apparent suicide a crime that used to carry the death penalty. A dark...
April 9th, 2025 08:44 - Uroboros (Lorenz)
A most wonderful reflection on the unending circle. Love and life from...
April 9th, 2025 08:41 - The broken heart cafe (Tony36)
Oh not for eternity I hope. A sad poem of loss and pain that paints a dark...
April 9th, 2025 08:38 - Ritualize (Libellule)
For its wonderful rhyme a fave. The journey is felt in this poem and it...
April 9th, 2025 08:36 - Alone I think (Maplespal)
Nicely rhymed and composed this poem speaks with quiet loneliness and...
April 9th, 2025 08:33 - Golden Rose (RSM0812)
A poem with such a common subject yet so unique. It grows as the poem...
April 9th, 2025 08:31 - The Pecking (Tristan Robert Lange)
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos...
April 9th, 2025 08:27 - Disconnect (Caring dove)
Alienation is more powerful because we are a social species. Our...
April 9th, 2025 05:55 - ups and downs (Jim56)
Carpe diem my friend. A lovely write Jim
April 9th, 2025 05:08 - The Distance (Mottakeenur Rehman)
The very philosophy of this is poetic or maybe the poetic nature of these...
April 9th, 2025 05:07 - Jazz ballerina (Reynaldo Casison)
A very few lines that contain a myriad of images and meanings. In its...
April 9th, 2025 05:05 - Reckoning (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A sense of power is given off by this poem and with it a sense of...
April 9th, 2025 05:00 - ATTIC (Nephilim56)
The mood is cast in a most haunting way where images are used to trigger...
April 9th, 2025 04:59 - Into The Spotlight. (Poetic Licence)
A great play on words and metaphor as well. You may have to be careful of...
April 9th, 2025 04:55
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