Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Heart Felt (Brian Taylor)
Welcome to MPS a poem with such vivid imagery and with a continuing flow...
November 16th, 2025 20:11 - I COULD\'VE SWORN.. ONLY I (Michaelm)
The line the midnight hourglass was always empty is a good one provoking...
November 16th, 2025 20:08 - Feelings. (ViolenceEndeavour)
Welcome to MPS a most interesting poem of expectations and experiences and...
November 16th, 2025 20:06 - Don\'t ask me about apartment unit b44 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
A recognized ramble through various issues in a living place. An...
November 16th, 2025 20:04 - Shadows Toll (RSM0812)
A love poem punctuated with natural images and some of personal nature...
November 16th, 2025 20:02 - Coming Home (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
A heart felt story of faith and belief that extends into daily life....
November 16th, 2025 18:07 - Just a Cold() (RefugeInRain)
That is a good question: what\'s left. A write about life and death....
November 16th, 2025 15:46 - How We Weather (Gaias Soothing Haven)
How closely our own nature is to that of the atmosphere around us are we...
November 16th, 2025 14:57 - Idioms (PerditaRose)
A poem of love and needing another. It is moving and nicely written
November 16th, 2025 14:51 - Ghosts (Gewar)
We all carry our demons with us hidden or not. When we are injured it is...
November 16th, 2025 13:45 - ()
To be centered and that feeling of balance requires finding one\'s center...
November 16th, 2025 13:43 - When Nature Speaks (Jjudaharts)
A great haiku that paints a picture
November 16th, 2025 13:41 - i am okay (Lunarchloedip)
A sad poem that becomes brighter at the end with acceptance of being...
November 16th, 2025 13:22 - SENSITIVE SOULS / ALMAS SENSIBLES / Âmes Sensibles /繊細な魂（せんさいなたましい (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Quite noble of you Bustillos to present poems in more than one language...
November 16th, 2025 13:19 - THE SCARLET HUSSY (David Welch)
Another good narrative poem of the old west told in style of old novels...
November 16th, 2025 11:38 - Feed Me Your Eyes (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
This poem builds with its lines. It speaks to the reader and keeps...
November 16th, 2025 11:30 - What did Freud really say (Hzugman)
A most interesting and entertaining read. No Freud had little to say about...
November 16th, 2025 11:27 - Set this free (Maplespal)
A plea for unity in a war we all need to wage. Nicely said
November 16th, 2025 11:24 - How will I know (Poetaldo)
Good write but I think that only God will know.
November 16th, 2025 09:42 - 4 months (William Hromada)
So short and yet full of romance a great short.
November 16th, 2025 09:41 - A Lust Demon (Part.1 & Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
This is the balance of two sides of lust. Well written with clever rhyme
November 16th, 2025 09:40 - dog talk dictionary (Gray0328)
I love this poem crafted in human language understood by dogs. A canine...
November 16th, 2025 09:38 - Who killed human more on the land, (Devender Kumar)
Earth\'s destruction be it man or nature discussed in this poem. What is...
November 16th, 2025 09:35 - The Sand and the Sea (Paul Bell)
It is not just the words but the feel of this poem that gets the fave. A...
November 16th, 2025 09:31 - ℜ𝔢𝔠𝔦𝔱𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman)
Evergreens and flowers blooming a pretty sight. Well done
November 16th, 2025 09:28 - Friendship - New Height (BoxMyHeart)
It is called Platonic love I call it love the rest I call passion, sex,...
November 16th, 2025 08:05 - happiness (Jim56)
Great write for a Sunday Jim sing a happy song, read a happy poem, dance...
November 16th, 2025 07:22 - shape of a prayer (Tristan Robert Lange)
The form of the poem an inverted cross and so the content as well. I...
November 16th, 2025 07:20 - The Silver Welsh, Famous Lion (Ajon4wheels)
Byron Mann? Is this the one being referred to? A lovely tribute. Nicely...
November 16th, 2025 06:55 - in the kitchen drawer (Arqios)
Inviting and alive this poem in its literal sense brings anticipation to...
November 16th, 2025 06:51 - SOLITUDE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This poem leaves a lonely and rather desolate feeling of solitude. The...
November 16th, 2025 04:08 - Meritorious Mercies (Orchidee)
I love this one Orchi a great hymn for someone like me that needs all the...
November 16th, 2025 04:06 - dont walk away (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A sad senryu that says a lot in so few words. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:04 - 2k (Ja'Quan Shepard)
This poem speaks from the streets. It\'s spittin. Well done
November 16th, 2025 04:03 - Poem: Letter to Myself or Letter to God\'s Children (Lisa Brooks)
A most optimistic and hopeful poem that speaks of belief in oneself. A ...
November 16th, 2025 04:01 - No resentment. (Andrew Deaton)
Expectations are premeditated resentments.\" a great line that has more...
November 16th, 2025 03:58 - ODD AND ODDER (4) (Michael Edwards)
Indeed Michael a fine write indeed. Our vision improves the closer we are...
November 16th, 2025 03:56 - And All That Jazz. (Goldfinch60)
A stroll of music history in a poem. Lovely and I too share that love that...
November 16th, 2025 03:53 - What is life? (Thinkerbell)
I liked this montage of terms for life that rhyme nicely fitting together...
November 16th, 2025 03:48 - Should you\'re love wain , It\'s Violence less (Kevin Hulme)
The pain of love expressed in this poem. Well done
November 15th, 2025 20:12 - Unconditional (Sunshine777)
Cute a romantic poem of love. Well done
November 15th, 2025 20:11 - Do you wish to forget? (Applecherry)
A poem of break up but not forgetting the past. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 18:37 - 🧿💙🕯️🪶 inner and outer understanding ✨ (Ms.divine)
The anger comes through in this poem with a biting fury. Well written
November 15th, 2025 18:35 - Hair envy to the max (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
The everyday blended with the classical and mythological. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 18:33 - Jailbreak (E.J. Waling)
A most interesting poem in one line progression. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 16:55 - Unity At Last (Ewan Forrest)
A most interesting metaphor for Christianity and maybe all religions....
November 15th, 2025 16:54 - Fully dimensional (Amethyste)
What a wonderful thing to do create oneself in poetry. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 16:13 - My first night in Krakow (Kenny O\'Donnell)
A snapshot of life in a foreign town. Quite the adventure. Well done
November 15th, 2025 14:31 - Out of Time (Hadley)
Welcome to MPS A striking poem of dependency not love as it is depicted...
November 15th, 2025 14:28 - Costume (Jjudaharts)
Ah now there is a great line with so much meaning. Well said
November 15th, 2025 14:23 - When Touch Requires Meaning (Xalvazora)
A sensual and poem of relationship as a foreplay to anything else. Lovely
November 15th, 2025 13:13 - TAKE IT BACK (David Welch)
There are some things that can\'t be taken back. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 13:11 - Hush (Bragee)
Sensuous, seductive, sexual it runs its course. A lovely write
November 15th, 2025 13:09 - Alemanic melancholy (Lorenz)
Siegfried\'s Rhine journey is one answer but I prefer the Pilgrim\'s ...
November 15th, 2025 13:07 - This Goddess-Girl (Kevin Michael Bloor)
A love poem well written with a sense of endearment. Nicely done
November 15th, 2025 11:46 - Embracing (Zhangyuyouyu)
We can no more return to what we were than we can crawl back in the womb....
November 15th, 2025 10:56 - Shooting Stars (PerditaRose)
Such an interesting write it makes me think of the Aurora borealis. Nicely...
November 15th, 2025 10:54 - Empty Apartment (Kera)
The last line encapsulates it and that is a life half lived. It asks what...
November 15th, 2025 10:51 - THE PRICE OF “NOW” (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
November 15th, 2025 10:50 - THE PRICE OF “NOW” (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
This poem reveals a cycle or evolution that ends with the question as to...
November 15th, 2025 10:50 - They Call It Poerty (Meera Mere)
Entering the middle of the story this poem speaks of injury but the cause...
November 15th, 2025 10:46 - Winter thoughts (Maplespal)
We always seem to long for what we don\'t have and that applies to the...
November 15th, 2025 10:44 - Couch Surfing (Matthew R. Callies)
Everyone needs to be somewhere and all need a place that accepts them. A...
November 15th, 2025 10:42 - \'Tis her fate (Neilton)
There is a floating and drifting appeal to this poem as if floating...
November 15th, 2025 10:38 - poetry power (Jim56)
A lovely tribute to poetry Jim. Yes a bit of sharing here. Loved it
November 15th, 2025 08:17 - Her Hand On My Shoulder (DesertWords)
A lovely distinction of what is real, flesh on flesh. A lovely write so...
November 15th, 2025 08:16 - PARALYZED BULL / DESCORDADO /タコツボ（心の傷） (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Very nice a metaphor of a wounded bull and that fight against the sword....
November 15th, 2025 08:14 - All down to me (Jeremy Leach)
Ultimately we are all on out own. A write of being who one is and...
November 15th, 2025 08:08 - Sunny fall day (William Hromada)
Some feelings are enough in and of themselves and need no justification. I...
November 15th, 2025 08:05 - flicker (Tristan Robert Lange)
Each of us a light that flickers too fast. None of us will outlast the...
November 15th, 2025 08:04 - A Heart That Still Weeps (Kainat Noor)
A poem as a tribute and homage to a father lost too soon but well could be...
November 15th, 2025 06:42 - random inaccess (Arqios)
In some ways existential a realization of deterioration in body and mind....
November 15th, 2025 06:38 - THIRTY TOO SOON (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
I remember the time when thirty seemed to be the marker of old age. Now it...
November 15th, 2025 04:55 - Oh, My Mind... (The Velvet)
Words of the classics dealing with the eternal poetic subject. Musings in...
November 15th, 2025 04:52 - Sail (Alan R)
We all withdraw with boredom either social withdrawal, mental, emotional...
November 15th, 2025 03:57 - The Ripple (Gewar)
Small signs that evoke past memories and emotions. The greater the past...
November 15th, 2025 03:54 - Who (Aman 12)
A fave for the creativity in subject and manner of expressing it in...
November 15th, 2025 03:52 - The merry-go-round (NafisaSB)
There is the cycle of life presented in this poem and a beautiful cycle it...
November 15th, 2025 03:48 - Forge valley (Ja'Quan Shepard)
I have to admit that despite several readings I still lack understanding...
November 15th, 2025 03:45 - Something is watching above (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A most interesting haiku and one must ask is it God, aliens, the weather,...
November 15th, 2025 03:42 - Things I Don\'t Say (Malo J)
I think many of us write because we can\'t tal. Nicely written
November 15th, 2025 03:40 - THE WISDOM OF FLAWED MEN (David Welch)
A good moral to this poem where do as I say not as I do is a good...
November 15th, 2025 03:38 - Sing Your Worries Away. (Goldfinch60)
Music sets the mood. From battle cry to the blues it takes the soul there....
November 15th, 2025 03:28 - ℱ𝒾ℯ𝓇𝓎 𝒢ℴℴ𝒹𝓃ℯ𝓈𝓈 ℰ𝓃𝒿ℴ𝓎 ℐ𝓉 (Keyara S Trotman)
Different pieces combine in this poem where thoughts join they often meld....
November 15th, 2025 03:25 - Continuance of Submission (Rebellion_in_sanity)
It is the paradox of time eternal where masculinity bows to femininity...
November 15th, 2025 03:23 - Type O! (Andrew Deaton)
A most interesting association well penned.
November 14th, 2025 20:11 - Bruce lee (Ja'Quan Shepard)
A most surreal type of poem. Fun read
November 14th, 2025 19:58 - Violent (Amethyste)
Yes why the city, is it more people or more stress. Mind provoking
November 14th, 2025 16:32 - Do You Mind? (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
I loved this poem that like all poems are so personal and intimate it...
November 14th, 2025 16:09 - A Common Ground (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
You have woven a most interesting tale here with great build up well...
November 14th, 2025 15:48 - Contradicting Thoughts (NinjaGirl)
Hope springs eternal and is the last to die. Well spoken in this poem....
November 14th, 2025 14:13 - Safely Surrounded (Orchidee)
November 14th, 2025 14:11 - Safely Surrounded (Orchidee)
Good write Orchi another great hymn. I guess that is why I like darkness...
November 14th, 2025 14:11 - I know you\'re out there (Applecherry)
A poem with longing and sadness. It implies an event that impedes reunion....
November 14th, 2025 14:08 - Beatrice (Lorenz)
(wireless thightrope walker ,
trying to escape a webless spider ...) A...
November 14th, 2025 12:35 - Shadow Of Love (EchoCanvas)
Romantic verse indeed. A lovely set that seems somewhat classical in
November 14th, 2025 12:29 - Sadly Rhyms (Ksey_Gan)
Although told as if it were a fictional story it is completely true. Loved...
November 14th, 2025 12:28 - For all the times (Poetaldo)
A poetic conversation with God. Nicely done
November 14th, 2025 11:06 - Isolation (PerditaRose)
A most poignant poem about the decent of relationships in society and the...
November 14th, 2025 10:07 - The Living Tapestry of English (Matthew R. Callies)
A splendid write using the very concepts being talked about it emulates...
November 14th, 2025 10:05
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