Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- windswept smiles (Arqios)
Full of forgotten images of youth and past days. I was most intrigued with...
April 9th, 2025 04:53 - Inversion (Mutley Ravishes)
Deep thoughts of an addicting nature where not only substances but...
April 9th, 2025 04:48 - A Hole - Pain Through The Brain (Mad Prophetess)
I love the line (I woke up in the mirror) this poem is full of surreal...
April 9th, 2025 04:43 - I want to break free (Poetaldo)
Abuse is not warranted for what ever reason. A strong poem of acceptance...
April 9th, 2025 04:41 - Nothing more, nothing less (Pukur)
A most powerful poem of loss that is not a loss and a separation that took...
April 9th, 2025 04:39 - i want to come... (Dimpy)
A most lovely poem of giving. I particularly liked the last stanza that...
April 9th, 2025 04:33 - Croquet Fever. (Goldfinch60)
A poem that calms like an old friend or a sunny Sunday afternoon. It feels...
April 9th, 2025 04:30 - the keening woman (Mourgana of the Fey)
Like sparks off a fire brief flashes glow and then extinguish into...
April 9th, 2025 04:22 - Normalcy (MDStone)
What a great question What is normalcy. Beautiful images in this poem that...
April 8th, 2025 20:55 - The Forge (John Prophet)
Indeed alchemy is a great analogy of science and technology. Well worded...
April 8th, 2025 20:50 - SECLUSION (David Wakeling)
One large metaphor broken into several component pieces this poem is quite...
April 8th, 2025 19:35 - And No One Noticed The Drowning (Rawaneigh.99)
This poem has a sad tone of apology for who one is and a search for...
April 8th, 2025 19:27 - Beneath the surface (Nicole Pritchard)
A powerful statement of support and solidarity. Very nicely worded it...
April 8th, 2025 17:32 - To The One I Cannot Lose (Rosiii ;))
Fear of being left alone is powerfully expressed in this poem. Very poetic...
April 8th, 2025 16:38 - No way out (Jodie)
Tired of life\'s routine this poem speaks of wishing for a slower life....
April 8th, 2025 16:37 - Mr. Earls (MKS)
Clever word usage in this poem that twists the meaning and gives a fresh...
April 8th, 2025 16:35 - PoV (KTay)
Feelings of deep loss accompany this poem. There is the pleading and the...
April 8th, 2025 16:31 - Read Carefully (Hanible)
Much violence fills these lines and where there is violence there is...
April 8th, 2025 16:29 - Let\'s Just Say It IS, Shall We? (Cheeky Missy)
The first two your foods stirred up an appetite tremendous, the last two...
April 8th, 2025 16:27 - Don\'t Do It (Alex PB)
Revelations of what a person is and still expectations. A poem that is...
April 8th, 2025 13:40 - Incident in a restaurant by Vlad Visotski (Ksey_Gan)
A poem that follows the form of a bar conversation with one that has one...
April 8th, 2025 13:38 - Look at it these ways (Hzugman)
Such good advice in poetic form lovely
April 8th, 2025 13:33 - A good life (Maplespal)
Every one has their definition of what the good life is. A good write
April 8th, 2025 12:59 - Toxic (Tkatie118)
Sex will entice any promise and exact any price. Promises of regret. A sad...
April 8th, 2025 12:57 - Rejoice.... (Orchidee)
Another poetic musical gem Orchi. A lovely write
April 8th, 2025 12:53 - Higher Powers (Kurt Philip Behm)
Clever and well worded gems of wisdom in this poem
April 8th, 2025 12:51 - the way You love me (Gray0328)
A wonderful line that love is to be given as water is freely without the...
April 8th, 2025 12:50 - Devil Is Already Dead (Sunshine777)
A poem that requires thought and pondering. Most interesting.
April 8th, 2025 10:57 - Clock (Catlover01)
Time distorts as we watch it and is either faster or slower depending upon...
April 8th, 2025 10:55 - Amicus ad aras (Poet\'s Dream)
A message nicely said.
April 8th, 2025 09:35 - Blind (Tristan Robert Lange)
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever...
April 8th, 2025 09:33 - Hope (Pineapple_pizza018)
I hear the emotion in this poem. It speaks with power.
April 8th, 2025 08:48 - Miles to go (_jyotsna27)
A write most all of us can identify with. Very nicely done
April 8th, 2025 08:16 - The Writer\'s Labyrinth ([email protected])
A poem that speaks for the writer and we have all felt what it expresses....
April 8th, 2025 07:37 - I\'m Sorry (Tony36)
A sad recognition or responsibility for past actions leaving a sense of...
April 8th, 2025 07:10 - For Andy McKay (Rest in Peace) (AuburnScribbler)
A beautiful tribute to an honored friend and person who brightened the way...
April 8th, 2025 07:08 - Rose (RSM0812)
A timeless metaphor here blooms fresh. So nicely crafted it like the rose...
April 8th, 2025 07:05 - A wild rose (Kaz)
This is lovely. Delicate and sweet like the scent of the flower.
April 8th, 2025 07:01 - Azalea (Gaurav Gurung)
Amazing lines woven into this beautiful poem. It has an Eastern feel as if...
April 8th, 2025 07:01 - Why Is Nine Upside Down? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Clever, this poem delves deep into the issue of codified education and the...
April 8th, 2025 06:26 - Liminal (Libellule)
Beautifully worded this poem has some marvelous lines and the metaphor is...
April 8th, 2025 06:23 - nautical compass (Mourgana of the Fey)
A snapshot of the beach. I have been there many times in reality and mind....
April 8th, 2025 06:21 - Fernando: temporary experience and emotions of a former colleague 2019-2021 (Swarovski20)
A work with a sudden beginning and sudden end that leaves me wondering...
April 8th, 2025 06:18 - Single Malt Scotch (Garth Rakumakoe)
A poem that feels so classic but is brought to the modern day. A...
April 8th, 2025 06:10 - WHILE I CRY (DEBIH MARTIN)
Passion or infatuation is often mistaken for love and as it melts it...
April 8th, 2025 05:12 - lovebird love (Jim56)
Such a wonderful picture you paint in this poem of love.
April 8th, 2025 05:09 - on a night... (Dimpy)
A poem that leaves feelings of hanging hopes and desires unfulfilled and a...
April 8th, 2025 05:07 - I do (Amethyste)
Erotic, sensuous, sexual all three in one short piece, not necessarily the...
April 8th, 2025 04:34 - MY BURNING TOWER (Nephilim56)
A metaphor here of a burning tower. A guide, a passion what ever the...
April 8th, 2025 04:32 - Without My True Love (Ajon4wheels)
Missing someone is a difficult thing. This poem does well in expressing...
April 8th, 2025 04:30 - A story of the servants who don\'t serve. (Blissed-secret)
A lesson given in parable form poetic and wise. Nicely done.
April 8th, 2025 04:28 - Fireflies waltz (Reynaldo Casison)
Romantic and beautiful in its wording this poem showers wonderful images...
April 8th, 2025 04:26 - A Thousand Years (Lewisgale mental hospital)
A poem that could be a song with chorus and all. Nicely worded
April 8th, 2025 04:23 - Burp (Boot)
The transient nature of relationships comes through in this poem. Very...
April 8th, 2025 04:21 - Tailspin (Vaughn Walker)
The complexities of relationships in this poem and how we can not go back...
April 8th, 2025 04:18 - Passwords (Chris Duffy)
That is what humor is about, something that everyone can identify with....
April 8th, 2025 04:15 - Racing Thoughts (MDStone)
Racing thoughts well depicted in this poem well penned. Anxiety in action....
April 8th, 2025 04:11 - as she was walking out the door (Jon Nakapalau)
Well formed this poem was clever in shape to come to the final point in a...
April 8th, 2025 04:08 - On the Road To Insanity. (Poetic Licence)
Is it not more insane to tell a person that they are insane because they...
April 8th, 2025 04:06 - Vilvoorde: wash (Arqios)
With each reading the poem becomes less cryptic. Sheets in the wind...
April 8th, 2025 03:58 - Lessons Learned In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Words of truth and at times a truth we do not want to see or accept....
April 8th, 2025 03:46 - AHHHH!! I WON THE LOTTERY!! (Demar Desu)
The war cry of the common man. A fun read.
April 8th, 2025 03:41 - A Shadowy kiss (Pukur)
Quite the story in rhyme with a moral. Nicely done.
April 7th, 2025 20:12 - Kundagarten (Mutley Ravishes)
A poem that seems a magical chant, it seems that I have missed the key....
April 7th, 2025 19:31 - When I Figure That Out.... (Cheeky Missy)
Ah sonnets of weather, squirls and groundhogs a seasonal composition....
April 7th, 2025 19:02 - Kindness my Ass (Thomas W Case)
Very nice Thomas great write
April 7th, 2025 18:42 - Oh you smart-assed worms (Hzugman)
Clever I liked the humor. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:23 - shadows (Thoughtless)
A beautiful stanza of love. Here the imagination runs. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 16:22 - A mother like mine (Pineapple_pizza018)
A mother\'s love goes beyond poetry. A most lovely recognition of a...
April 7th, 2025 16:20 - How strange! (Hzugman)
How strangeness births itself and grows more comfortable as it sits in its...
April 7th, 2025 15:02 - Cold Love (Siti Nur Shahirah Binti Azmer)
How often we allow pride to keep us from expressing what we feel. A lovely...
April 7th, 2025 14:31 - You Are (Lewisgale mental hospital)
How interesting that we allow the majority tell the minority that they are...
April 7th, 2025 14:30 - Him, That\'s in the Fog (AuburnScribbler)
Confusion, blurred thoughts that break and come and go. A frightening and...
April 7th, 2025 14:26 - Til Death Do Us Part (>Kai<)
A great concept well expressed in poetic form. Most flowers do decay...
April 7th, 2025 13:52 - Navigate Contradictions (Alex PB)
A great metaphor in the crystal ball. Yes it can be valued but is fragile...
April 7th, 2025 13:49 - Tinge (Libellule)
A great write about the process of writing. A colorful and bright write....
April 7th, 2025 13:47 - Gremlins (2781)
There is no privacy, no anonymity, you can not be off the grid now days. ...
April 7th, 2025 13:45 - The Weight of Redemption (Eira Solen)
A poetic question that each person has to answer for themselves. Nicely...
April 7th, 2025 13:41 - Lifeless (DLewis88)
A poem of strange thoughts and mental reflections. Most interesting.
April 7th, 2025 13:38 - muse (Lunarchloedip)
To serve as inspiration is as great as to be the creator. A wonderful
April 7th, 2025 13:37 - Strategic Narrative (KTay)
An epic tale of the angel of death and its coming for all. Well stated
April 7th, 2025 13:33 - Spoken Tide (Kurt Philip Behm)
If not mistaken a beautiful metaphor here. It is not only the canals that...
April 7th, 2025 11:02 - San Juan (Gatiuski)
A beautiful picture painted of outside walls that hold a history that goes...
April 7th, 2025 11:00 - \"Ifs\" (Tayama)
A poem of misconnection that could have been if one had wished to sell...
April 7th, 2025 10:58 - Maybe I\'ll Fall Again (Santajah Douglass)
A beautiful poem of hope cast in wonderful images. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 10:28 - Personal Hell (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Wow! This is a most interesting poem that speaks to a taboo subject. After...
April 7th, 2025 10:26 - Silver Gray (Garth Rakumakoe)
A poem I feel in my own silver gray or if your British silver grey. Nicely...
April 7th, 2025 10:16 - GUESS WHY I LOVE YOU (DEBIH MARTIN)
A beautiful poem that speaks to beauty in many forms. Most lovely
April 7th, 2025 10:14 - Jay North (Randyjohnson71)
A very nice dedication to a man I knew as a kid watching his show...
April 7th, 2025 10:12 - Heaven or Hell (RSM0812)
A poetic prophesy, they say that the word is God and was with him since...
April 7th, 2025 10:11 - An Everlasting Remembrance (Cassiopeiaxneptune)
Loved your last two lines they are truly poetic. Very nice
April 7th, 2025 10:03 - Loop of Lost Tomorrows (Tristan Robert Lange)
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a...
April 7th, 2025 10:02 - Roller Skating Dreams (Demar Desu)
A great short that paints a picture of action toward one\'s goal. Lovely
April 7th, 2025 07:05 - React (Tony36)
A great question to begin a poem. Love is just that not to be rejected but...
April 7th, 2025 07:04 - The downplayed hazard of swallowing vitamins a -z (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Wow look what the vitamins have done. Irregular growth poetic spin, a...
April 7th, 2025 07:02 - Ottawa in love (Lorenz)
A most beautiful mix of metaphor, fantasy, realities images of a place...
April 7th, 2025 06:54 - Distantly heard (Maplespal)
A fun story of which myths are woven and fanciful though it be more truth...
April 7th, 2025 06:49 - Same old story (Mik)
We infect all those around us with our disease, ask the native Americans,...
April 7th, 2025 06:46 - Broken Hearted Girl (Ajon4wheels)
Loss of a relationship whether through death, separation by distance or...
April 7th, 2025 05:47 - How? (Hey!)
A good write about feeling good about who one is and the freedom this...
April 7th, 2025 05:44
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