Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Pain (Cerise456) Things that are hard to talk about when they are being confronted nicely...
  April 28th, 2026 14:45
• Hairy goat (2781) A poem of change nicely written
  April 28th, 2026 14:44
• A lesson taught unknown, Susan my saving Grace (Joseph M Marion) A nicely written poem with good rhyme and flow well done
  April 28th, 2026 14:43
• Sound Bites 4-28-2026 Plus E.J. Hudak Poems 7-9 (Kurt Philip Behm) Kurt, another set of beautiful pieces each crafted with its own splendor....
  April 28th, 2026 14:40
• The Kingdom Within (Gray0328) It is in being like a child that we become perfect. Perfect and trust...
  April 28th, 2026 14:38
• In Exchange (Marek) Belief is the key to virtually all things. Very nicely written my friend.
  April 28th, 2026 14:36
• Glass Slipper (Kaz) Here are the most interesting connection, surreal indeed. Well done.
  April 28th, 2026 14:35
• SOUL / ALMA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Carlos this poem speaks to me of the un importance of the size of the...
  April 28th, 2026 14:34
• Back Home (Thomas W Case) A beautiful piece, Thomas this one reminds me of long trips on buses and...
  April 28th, 2026 14:32
• I am conquering my fears this time, I\'m holding my head up high. (Friendship) Lovely Friendship this poem show strength in its words, its rhyme and...
  April 28th, 2026 14:29
• Shaded Glory (William Hromada) Beautiful words in this poem that reflect early morning and its shades and...
  April 28th, 2026 14:27
• One Days (Mutley Ravishes) Lying after lying, the rhyme keeps coming
  April 28th, 2026 14:26
• In the End (Katie B.) This poem seems to be about the interplay between unity and solidarity as...
  April 28th, 2026 13:45
• slope (Arqios) This goes far deeper than geology my friend this to me speaks of people...
  April 28th, 2026 05:17
• Tolerance (Birdbird) A run of rhyme and near rhyme in this piece
  April 28th, 2026 04:58
• Let me go (Maplespal) Decisions, decisions in this poem of not staying as it is. Well done
  April 28th, 2026 04:57
• morning song (Jim56) A beautiful picture painted in this poem of nature Jim
  April 28th, 2026 04:56
• मेरी क़लम चला दो (Waiting for Silence) This poem presents the psychological element of growing accustomed to...
  April 28th, 2026 04:55
• Who? (Boot) Very clever and creative a fave
  April 28th, 2026 04:51
• This Arrangement (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Poetic questions well asked. Motive is behind all behavior. Nicely written
  April 28th, 2026 04:50
• SPIDER / ARAÑA (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) Nicely imaged this poem takes the spider and its web making it a word...
  April 28th, 2026 04:49
• I thought you were smart (Swedishme123) Sisters are often alter egos and that internal conversation gos on and on....
  April 28th, 2026 04:45
• The Park Bench (Cully45) A lovely and heart warming story told in rhyme and good flow. Well done
  April 28th, 2026 04:42
• Haiku (an ode to spring) (Teddy.15) Nicely said my friend. I like the word play with spring as the season and...
  April 28th, 2026 04:40
• Times Remembered. (Goldfinch60) Memory triggers come and go and can be so pleasant. Nicely written Andy
  April 28th, 2026 04:38
• A LONELY RIVER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) The personification of water is most poetic in this write. Lovely Norman
  April 28th, 2026 04:35
• Toby and the Monarch Butterfly (David Wakeling) Here in this poem is the contrast between the stark reality of brutality...
  April 28th, 2026 04:34
• Holding My Breath Like A Loaded Gun (Anthony Hanible) This poem speaks in existential terms of personal power and insight. Well...
  April 28th, 2026 04:29
• The King with Stolen Papers (Matthew R. Callies) This narrative poem is very well written with great rhyme and meter. Loved...
  April 28th, 2026 04:27
• My love, a star (Chris Medina) We have been cultured into the belief that a supernova is out there for...
  April 28th, 2026 04:24
• with pulp please (Demar Desu) Did that tie you up for long?
  April 28th, 2026 04:22
• Hangry (Fränz Müller) Bad luck or good, food takes many forms. Good read
  April 28th, 2026 04:21
• Man vs. Machine (Hzugman) We all loose in that race of man against machine where feeling art becomes...
  April 27th, 2026 20:11
• Can’t (Entangled heart) A lovely write, clever and nicely done
  April 27th, 2026 19:19
• Green Shoots Begin To Peek (Mark The Phenomenon) Bright and airy it calls out for summer. Nicely written
  April 27th, 2026 19:17
• One Last Text (Mir279) This poem voices a romantic obsession and fixation that speaks in its...
  April 27th, 2026 19:16
• Dirty (Marie.MH) Sad and tragic it reeks of perversion and manipulation of a more innocent...
  April 27th, 2026 19:14
• A mistake (BlessedbyGod) A sad situation when a person can not take no for an answer. Persistence...
  April 27th, 2026 19:11
• Listing to Port in a Storm (Simple Tendencies) I recognized it immediately although it has been some years since I have...
  April 27th, 2026 19:08
• The Gentle Reminder (Grace McDonald) Dogs animals of affiliation, pack animals they need another. Are we much...
  April 27th, 2026 19:04
• Whisky (Amethyste) A cute write of desire and wishes that yet are to be fulfilled. Well done
  April 27th, 2026 19:03
• Monday, Monday ... (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again you have done a great job Kurt my favorite this time is death
  April 27th, 2026 11:34
• Jesus, You Are Enough (JPW) This well could be a hymn one the even Orchi would love. Nicely done it...
  April 27th, 2026 11:32
• Spring Day (Nature) Simply lovely and a fave
  April 27th, 2026 11:30
• A little pale note of blues (Lorenz) Sagan would love this my friend
  April 27th, 2026 11:29
• Quicksand in Iran - in Trump\'s own words (Raidoc) A wonderful write that makes more sense than the surface shows. Freedom...
  April 27th, 2026 11:27
• Catching Up (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Nice job
  April 27th, 2026 08:59
• Iron in the Velvet. (Friendship) A poem acknowledging our own power over our feelings and being becoming...
  April 27th, 2026 07:35
• Untitled (RSM0812) Surreal and dreamlike it blends with nature and its images. Well written
  April 27th, 2026 06:35
• If only (Maplespal) Synchronous dreaming and thoughts liked by sleep. A most interesting...
  April 27th, 2026 06:31
• Glugonomics (Tristan Robert Lange) The Orchi story of a marriage imbibed when with too little water...
  April 27th, 2026 06:29
• goldfish home (Jim56) I believe I remember another goldfish poem of yours from long ago Jim this...
  April 27th, 2026 05:19
• Flow of time (Japetus) Clever rhyme sublime as I read it line by line. In meter it keeps time a...
  April 27th, 2026 05:18
• The Evidence of Living (Gray0328) A puzzle, a detective story, a poetic write where metaphor meets reality....
  April 27th, 2026 05:16
• This Old Pocket Watch (Cully45) Nicely written this narrative poem with rhyme tells its tale well...
  April 27th, 2026 05:14
• Life On The Brain Not Death (Anthony Hanible) This poem in its mystery of meaning provokes the reader to thought. Nicely...
  April 27th, 2026 05:11
• a carrying forward (Arqios) Vivid pictures in story form flash by flash carry this write onward down a...
  April 27th, 2026 05:08
• Bob It (Paul Bell) They don\'t call it premature for nothing. A fun read Paul. Well done
  April 27th, 2026 05:03
• A BROKEN SOUL (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) The rhyme itself is wonderful but its connection with meter and metaphor...
  April 27th, 2026 05:01
• Tock-Tick (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A modern Nostradamus in a write of symbols well done
  April 27th, 2026 04:59
• May (Vipassana) Cute a vivid picture that I am sure I have seen many times and always the...
  April 27th, 2026 04:57
• Love Of Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Simply lovely Andy this poem rolls off the tongue and reveals a peace that...
  April 27th, 2026 04:56
• The Rot (Katie B.) Katie I particularly love your last three lines that say it all. Well done
  April 27th, 2026 04:54
• Ghosts of Normandy (Matthew R. Callies) A lovely tribute to an extinct line of noble animals
  April 27th, 2026 04:51
• August goes to the garden (David Wakeling) I applauded the creative retro Shakspearian play style that this write...
  April 27th, 2026 04:49
• Just try your best! (Rabdikavi) Encouragement in a poem. Well done
  April 27th, 2026 04:45
• 3:17am (RCx_Vortex) Welcome to MPS a surreal poem that builds line by line nicely done
  April 27th, 2026 04:44
• Words (Fränz Müller) Words carry power. Nicely written
  April 26th, 2026 22:46
• Why Was Suzie Scared? (Poetic_Princess) A good read that is sad
  April 26th, 2026 21:40
• Another Fine Mess (Kevin Hulme) Why is it that we dump our shit in someone else\'s yard and call it clean
  April 26th, 2026 19:45
• The Light You Left Behind ✨️ (CokennaMaria (CMH)) A poem of companionship and gratefulness for the time. Nicely done
  April 26th, 2026 19:44
• trying to Feel Alive (Birdbird) Lots of rhyme in this piece both end and internal. Well done
  April 26th, 2026 19:42
• Dry season (Japetus) Would like to know what flower that is
  April 26th, 2026 19:39
• Sleep (Amethyste) I guess that is a proposition that will have to wait
  April 26th, 2026 19:38
• I LOVE BUTTERFLIES 🦋🦋 (Hadeed musa) A lovely love poem where all centers around the object of love. Nicely
  April 26th, 2026 14:43
• Right Here Is Enough (Entangled heart) A love poem that ends in incompletion. Nicely written
  April 26th, 2026 13:52
• Ostia beach (Lorenz) Under robes the priests are naked as we all are at birth and death
  April 26th, 2026 12:07
• Wretched emasculated celibate anchorite (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Another good write
  April 26th, 2026 10:59
• The Elixir (Thomas W Case) Mighty recognition in this write of fantasy and reality and in those with...
  April 26th, 2026 10:59
• Buried Under Bureaucratic Rubble (Gray0328) Wow!! This one tears the agenda off the docket and bleeds rage on the...
  April 26th, 2026 10:54
• Sunday Sound Bites (Kurt Philip Behm) Another set of beautiful bites for a Sunday well written my friend
  April 26th, 2026 09:20
• The Old Gang Together Again (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Sharon I continue to love your internal rhyme in these writes it has a...
  April 26th, 2026 09:18
• Calming Rest (RSM0812) Indeed by the sword and gun of man it ends well written
  April 26th, 2026 06:57
• along the shore (Jim56) A beautiful picture penned here Jim
  April 26th, 2026 06:55
• The hole (Maplespal) This analogy that grows into a metaphor has meaning in its emptiness...
  April 26th, 2026 06:54
• A DROP OF LIFE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS) I love this metaphor that works so well for all forms of life to meld...
  April 26th, 2026 06:52
• The Dancer (Cully45) Whether daughter of a proud parent, a raising star or established one here...
  April 26th, 2026 06:50
• Pole Pole Slowly Slowly (Adventuressmalik) A fun and light hearted poem in good rhyme about climbing with a joyful...
  April 26th, 2026 06:47
• Better Burned (Tristan Robert Lange) A wonderful acrostic my friend that may hold deeper meaning for those...
  April 26th, 2026 06:44
• creekside picnic (Arqios)
  April 26th, 2026 06:42
• creekside picnic (Arqios) It seems a still life in motion but not action. It awaits on hold for what...
  April 26th, 2026 06:42
• and here we are strange together (Demar Desu) We all are animals and so are our profiles Demar good one my friend
  April 26th, 2026 06:39
• SECLUSION (David Wakeling) Although possibly far off the intended mark the first thing that comes to...
  April 26th, 2026 06:38
• Wisdom (Katie B.) A poem of the relationship between wisdom and age. It lays out each step...
  April 26th, 2026 06:31
• Expedition 33 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A gamer\'s poem with some rhyme that ties it together this pome has good...
  April 26th, 2026 06:28
• The Top Of The Mountain The Bottom Of The Valley (Anthony Hanible) Deeply metaphoric it is also surreal in its portrayal of nature and self....
  April 26th, 2026 06:26
• Tiny Blue Moments (Neville) This journey starts before its beginning and yet has no ending it is an...
  April 26th, 2026 06:22
• Come Sunset (Kaz) This is a most picturesque haiku
  April 26th, 2026 06:17
• Still There (Poeticdiplo) Poetic justice of a black widow at work. We all have our reasons and there...
  April 26th, 2026 01:52
• Sound Of Laughter/ (Goldfinch60) A lovely poem Andy and you are right there is nothing more joyous than the...
  April 26th, 2026 01:49