Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• I Need..... (Meera Mere) Such sleep comes and goes too quickly. I have felt this way on many...
  November 14th, 2025 10:03
• Deadbeat Daughter (Precious Chukwudi) Recognition of a past fault is not a sin but a blessing and the ability to...
  November 14th, 2025 10:01
• A Tale of Two Altars (Tristan Robert Lange) The division between good and evil, selflessness and selfishness. A...
  November 14th, 2025 09:59
• November Witchery (Jerry Reynolds) How time flies in the autumn wind Jerry a beautiful short that tells it as...
  November 14th, 2025 09:54
• If I could help (William Hromada) Beautiful reassurance resides in this poem it is calming and warm nicely...
  November 14th, 2025 09:53
• every one loves dogs (Jim56) Love dogs Jim and this poem echoes that sentiment. Nicely said
  November 14th, 2025 06:01
• Valley of Light (Rasheed Noorani) A beautiful poem that in that repeated line hope is restored from a dark...
  November 14th, 2025 06:00
• Unattainable Kindness (Szl) Giving what one does not have is theft. Theft from oneself in this case. A...
  November 14th, 2025 05:58
• signals (Arqios) There is such a sad tone to this poem an offer made a call not connected....
  November 14th, 2025 05:56
• GATE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A most vivid picture of this dilapidated gate worn with time. A great...
  November 14th, 2025 05:25
• The Village of Trill (Paul Bell) So it was the judge that broke Jack\'s crown. No mention of Jill coming...
  November 14th, 2025 05:01
• walking (Mumiza) This poem has deep meaning and is well planned and constructed. The build...
  November 14th, 2025 04:29
• Clarity (Karoline) A clever poem in short cadence and good rhyme that uses the reintroduction...
  November 14th, 2025 04:23
• 𝔄 𝔪𝔬𝔪𝔢𝔫𝔱 𝔬𝔣 𝔖𝔬𝔩𝔦𝔱𝔲𝔡𝔢 (Keyara S Trotman) What struck me in reading this poem was that one could substitute hair...
  November 14th, 2025 04:20
• SUNDAY (Drniran) Poem in a monorhyme is not always easy to do, especially when it grows in...
  November 14th, 2025 04:17
• My Baby (Emily Bergeron) What a beautiful depiction of a child who in their innocence and...
  November 14th, 2025 04:14
• Nothing young can stay (Kayla Jackson) This poem required multiple readings due to the last line that provoked...
  November 14th, 2025 04:12
• dreadfully nostalgic (not a poem, just writing.) (Oh kay) I love the consistency in this poem where emotion changes with age and...
  November 14th, 2025 04:11
• Unapologetically me; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) Being yourself has its benefits an its consequences but in the balance it...
  November 14th, 2025 04:06
• Reborn (Kaz) A haiku of a beautiful cosmic feature that bears resemblance in an earthly...
  November 14th, 2025 04:02
• God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60) A great story Gold my father used to always say that God has a great sense...
  November 14th, 2025 04:01
• Nest of Stillborn Rats (Aman 12) A poem full of allegories that cast shadows of violence in a darkening...
  November 14th, 2025 03:58
• MORE (David Welch) Only as old as you feel. Nothing is too old or young and this poem shows...
  November 13th, 2025 21:22
• Who Decides (Deepak Vohra) It is as much the message as the words that gets the fave for this poem. A...
  November 13th, 2025 21:19
• Moon in a box (RSM0812) The magnificence of the universe in this poem. Nicely done
  November 13th, 2025 20:30
• Such a Lovely Ghost (Kera) Loving memories make loss more difficult. A lovely write
  November 13th, 2025 19:50
• you are not kind (Applecherry) There needs to be a balance in life in giving and taking in a relationship...
  November 13th, 2025 19:48
• Invisible until needed (Jodie) All give and no take is not an even relationship and more a parental one....
  November 13th, 2025 19:44
• Endeavor! (Andrew Deaton) A play with words in poetic format. Well written
  November 13th, 2025 19:42
• If I could help (William Hromada) It seems that I remember this in a different form. To take on oneself the...
  November 13th, 2025 19:40
• Slow burn (Shadowbones) This poem sounds as if hope is going out. It sounds of darkness or at...
  November 13th, 2025 17:05
• Type (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem sounds threatening and overpowering. Nicely done
  November 13th, 2025 17:04
• ATTENTION (Princess Osariemen Aihie) Many tions not to be confused with shuns in this poem that is looking for...
  November 13th, 2025 17:03
• A thought on love (NinjaGirl) A most interesting poem that speaks of time wasted in love and...
  November 13th, 2025 15:16
• My Sun (Lyricalremedy) A beautiful poem revealing a mother\'s love and even gratitude that is...
  November 13th, 2025 14:05
• Still (Hacklec) Very romantic it is well said and something any lover would want to hear....
  November 13th, 2025 14:04
• Wonders of The Night (Jjudaharts) I feel this short poem in all its force. It is lovely
  November 13th, 2025 14:02
• ...Unasked Lessons, Undeserved Pain... (Spring Sugar Bunny) A most interesting poem. Forgiving to me is never about condoning what was...
  November 13th, 2025 14:02
• I need a new definition (Luke Bensing) \" Don\'t let the sun go down on your anger. I always thought that was...
  November 13th, 2025 13:59
• In Memory of Farshad Aghvami به یاد فرشاد اقوامی (Soheil khodaparasti) Yes indeed a snowflake on a hot day. A great saying
  November 13th, 2025 13:55
• Dry guillotine (Lorenz) Rebellion rules everywhere but where it should. Anger is a precursor to...
  November 13th, 2025 13:54
• enlightenment☪️ (Ms.divine) I love the way you broke the forth wall speaking directly to the reader....
  November 13th, 2025 13:50
• Football Fan Philosophy (Tom Dylan) A good write Tom for optimism is what carries us much of the time counter...
  November 13th, 2025 13:47
• Driving (Mumiza) The road hardly the place to let pride or temper get the best of one. A...
  November 13th, 2025 13:44
• My Cretan legend (Neilton) A tribute and homage to a man that made a difference in your life. Well...
  November 13th, 2025 13:43
• Break Glass (JBentley) A poem that calls for the past and sees the future as a deterioration and...
  November 13th, 2025 10:12
• A Stranger in the Mirror (Gray0328) So well written Gray this poem inspires reflections and yes as the last...
  November 13th, 2025 10:10
• Today would have been my late mother\'s ninetieth birthday (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Quite an homage and tribute to one passed. Most lovely
  November 13th, 2025 10:07
• Beneath Thine Essence (The Velvet) Classic in its wording this poem is romantic and definitely a love poem...
  November 13th, 2025 10:06
• The Soaring Bird of Time (Thomas W Case) I wonder where those years have gone as well Thomas. A lovely write
  November 13th, 2025 10:04
• Hope (Szl) Well put in metaphor the issue of hope and how it is so difficult to get...
  November 13th, 2025 09:31
• i. just. can\'t. (Tristan Robert Lange) A thought provoking piece Tristan. And indeed the end may in fact be...
  November 13th, 2025 09:07
• \'Pumping Irony\' (Kurt Philip Behm) I like this one Kurt it is at the heart of poor communication skills with...
  November 13th, 2025 09:05
• August afternoon in Germany (Lea Gagliardo) Indeed any era of peace is a good one. And we ask ourselves why all times...
  November 13th, 2025 08:28
• guilt (Lunarchloedip) Guilt a cancer that needs to be cut out and in the cutting comes the...
  November 13th, 2025 08:26
• The Monkey (Sassy Lou) And a monkey it is. We all have one, some small and we think cute, others...
  November 13th, 2025 08:24
• The Stopped Clock (Matthew R. Callies) Matthew this brings back the old rhyme and song the grandfather clock. A...
  November 13th, 2025 08:21
• 𝒮𝓁ℴ𝓌 𝒜𝓃𝒹 𝒴ℯ𝓉 ℐ 𝒯𝓇𝓎 (Keyara S Trotman) I was taught not to say try but rather do or do not. It was considered a...
  November 13th, 2025 08:18
• love is a nature (Jim56) A wonderful love poem Jim nicely done
  November 13th, 2025 06:55
• Companionship (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Another chapter done and the next with curiosity will have to wait. Nicely...
  November 13th, 2025 06:29
• unhinged (Arqios) Branded by age Not sure if this was the intent but I see each of us as...
  November 13th, 2025 06:26
• THE OLD REGIME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Here my question was how much is metaphor and how much a literal picture....
  November 13th, 2025 04:45
• On life and homelessness (Ameliorated Aesthetic) A poem that presents well the building of comfort on the agony of others....
  November 13th, 2025 03:52
• You are the blue sky (Poetaldo) It is nice to be noticed and this poem seems to be about that. A lovely...
  November 13th, 2025 03:47
• Thoughts (Dustandlace) Poetic advise where life\'s stress is taken too seriously and we are...
  November 13th, 2025 03:46
• The Great Big Blue (Sash) In this poem is the feeling of needing to be remembered and missed. The...
  November 13th, 2025 03:43
• Osiel (Anonymous_1226) The fit between two people in this poem compared to a physical fit in...
  November 13th, 2025 03:40
• Walking in the Way (Orchidee) This poem reminds me of many we used to sing as a child in church and I...
  November 13th, 2025 03:37
• Sonnet To My Lady. (Goldfinch60) Endearing words of love wrapped in verse. Lovely Andy
  November 13th, 2025 03:33
• What death would say to me (NinjaGirl) A dark read where thoughts of ending things come before enjoying them. I...
  November 13th, 2025 03:31
• Inevitable (E.J. Waling) Those are not odds I would bet on at a race track. It seems that in...
  November 12th, 2025 20:57
• The Blind date (Kevin Hulme) Now that was not only funny but a nightmare. A great poem with rhyme and...
  November 12th, 2025 20:55
• That Smile (Anthony Hanible) Funny how a smile can make all the difference, it sets the mood for the...
  November 12th, 2025 20:16
• Cute (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) How different things are when one feels alone. A lovely write
  November 12th, 2025 20:14
• my imaginary slavoj žižek quotes #1 (Jon Nakapalau) More truth than fiction in a literal sense and metaphorically a wonderful...
  November 12th, 2025 19:59
• Touch (Emery Walker) The pleasure of touch comes and goes with respect. A sad and also...
  November 12th, 2025 19:57
• THE DAMNED GIRL (David Welch) Another harrowing tale from the past. How fun a read and since truth is...
  November 12th, 2025 19:54
• It all (Niki) Fears and insecurities that lead to chemical dampening. A most real read
  November 12th, 2025 19:48
• Waters Edge_ (RefugeInRain) This poem sounds like what life does to one. A metaphorical description of...
  November 12th, 2025 19:46
• The Golden Fox (Karoline) This seems soothing as if a child\'s bedtime story. Nicely written.
  November 12th, 2025 18:09
• The Warden (Rawaneigh.99) We are all wardens to our own bodies holding the keys to setting our...
  November 12th, 2025 17:19
• Imagine (Sunflowersinrain) A poem that is pulling at the heart of any parent and puts it in a...
  November 12th, 2025 16:30
• Fractured yet whole (Nicole Pritchard) It is so hard to be dependent especially after we have grown up. When we...
  November 12th, 2025 16:02
• Creation (PerditaRose) A poem full of metaphor that sends a deeper message about communication...
  November 12th, 2025 14:48
• Goodbye Charlie (Hacklec) Such great metaphor makes this poem have so much emotion. It is...
  November 12th, 2025 14:46
• Chimpanzee (Vasile Serban) Great mythological biblical references in this poem that continue through...
  November 12th, 2025 14:43
• Pierced (Jjudaharts) Nobody wants their darkness pierced. Well written and enigmatic
  November 12th, 2025 13:08
• The Race (RSM0812) A most interesting read that seems a bit cryptic with its metaphors....
  November 12th, 2025 13:08
• No Vis-a-vis by Yulia Bezhetseva (Ksey_Gan) A lovely story etched in this poem. Nicely done
  November 12th, 2025 13:05
• Carefree joie de vivre spirit contingent upon... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Another great run on the humor line. Well done
  November 12th, 2025 12:36
• SARCASTIC (Drniran) Nicely written and rhymed this poem follows from first to last. Well done
  November 12th, 2025 12:12
• Your Tour De Force (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) You have painted the process of bailing out of a relationship here Kurt....
  November 12th, 2025 12:08
• Bipolar metaverse (Lorenz) To be a true artist one must be mad for no normal person can see the...
  November 12th, 2025 12:07
• The Rose (Paul Bell) Such good advice given in this poem a great image and metaphor. Well done...
  November 12th, 2025 11:20
• And Then…? (Szl) The presence of strife and stress. After the rain comes the rainbow a...
  November 12th, 2025 11:18
• ready (Bangercasino) It\'s all a gamble and a wonderful draw of the cards it was. Nicely done
  November 12th, 2025 11:16
• you know what to paint it (Tristan Robert Lange) Loved this one Tristan that highlights the lack of change despite effort....
  November 12th, 2025 11:14
• Come Rest Your Weary Bones (Luke Bensing) A reflective poem where the weariness comes from bones that contain the...
  November 12th, 2025 09:26
• Bonfires at the Edge of Fear (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard) We are all marked by our past. This poem is haunting, a bit dark, powerful...
  November 12th, 2025 09:24
• Twice (Aman 12) Didn\'t realize that it was declared twice this makes a good deal of sense...
  November 12th, 2025 08:43