Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- The Whisper Tree (Dan Williams)
Anthropomorphism at its finest in an engaging story with great flow....
July 29th, 2024 05:19 - ~> Stan And The Wishing Well - A Fable (Thad Wilk)
A most fun read and well paced for the final hook.
July 29th, 2024 05:06 - do it for me (Maplespal)
The repetitive wording and rhyme in this poem gives it power to take the...
July 28th, 2024 06:13 - SUICIDE (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
Finding peace for oneself at the expense of others feelings that are left...
July 28th, 2024 06:11 - dogs can be a friend (Jim56)
Have had dogs before and it seems that their love and loyalty exceeds that...
July 28th, 2024 06:07 - Unique is mom (Goli.Standbypoet)
A wonderful tribute to a most important person. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 06:05 - I Would Do it But can You Say You Will Do The Same (Santajah Douglass)
A poem reflecting the turmoil in the mind over possible rejection and loss...
July 28th, 2024 06:04 - * Why not stars?* (Antra.sharma_)
I see the moon as the main course and the stars as the seasoning. Both...
July 28th, 2024 06:01 - Scriptures (2781)
A fun read of prophesies of things to come. Nice
July 28th, 2024 06:00 - Friends With Benefits (Neville)
A proposal? At this age benefits are merger and coitus interruptus is...
July 28th, 2024 05:57 - Whispers Of The Night (Dev Parth)
Avery peaceful and calming poem that is a pleasure to read.
July 28th, 2024 05:52 - a large intelligence and a deep heart (DeadRose)
An eternal struggle between these. From time to time one gets the upper...
July 28th, 2024 05:48 - Sea Will Drag Me (Satishverma)
As always enigmatic and mind twisting words that one may place their own...
July 28th, 2024 05:45 - Evidense (Mutley Ravishes)
Wonderful we have only 5 some say 6 senses and this is limiting. Reach out...
July 28th, 2024 05:44 - Courage Within Me (Mark The Phenomenon)
A good message that all should personalize and take to heart
July 28th, 2024 05:42 - ()
I enjoyed the ride leaving me back where I started. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 05:39 - The Sky Calls (Thomas W Case)
A beautiful line: \"the sky calls time doesn\'t\"
July 28th, 2024 05:19 - ~.> Little Miss Muffet ( Parody ) (Thad Wilk)
A most fun read. He should have had a check of the DNA.
July 28th, 2024 05:13 - What Else is A Metaphor (Neville)
Love is cryptic even as an anagram and meta is for anything beyond. Never...
July 28th, 2024 05:08 - One Side of Still (Dan Williams)
Simply beautiful. A simple adjustment and anthropomorphic picturing...
July 28th, 2024 05:01 - An Hour Glass Acoustic Sound- (ADarkerMind)
So many songs drift in free association, bits and pieces of memories....
July 28th, 2024 04:57 - Forgiveness Freedom (Orchidee)
So glad we are not under that old testament burnt offerings thing, not...
July 28th, 2024 04:52 - Sleep Always Calls (Thomas W Case)
Lovely, some of the best ideas come from my muse Morpheus. Nicely done
July 28th, 2024 04:48 - Christmas In July. (Goldfinch60)
Since commerce makes about fifty percent of their take at Christmas time...
July 28th, 2024 04:43 - Incoming Tones (DREEK0)
Sensuous, even sexual this poem goes deeper, deeper. Most interesting.
July 27th, 2024 20:47 - Determination of the snail (MA-Q)
Wonderful imagery in this piece with some metaphor as well. Nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 20:45 - Love Language (The Great Kateri)
A wonderful message to be good to oneself. So nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 20:43 - El Yunque Rainforest (Rrodriguez)
Beautiful in its picturesque wording I felt a part of it. It seems that I...
July 27th, 2024 20:41 - the space in between you and i (Gloria Denise)
This was very well composed with good rhyme. Nicely done.
July 27th, 2024 20:38 - Flawed Creator (John Prophet)
Don\'t want AI for God. Don\'t even want it at all, servant, slave, or...
July 27th, 2024 20:36 - WHSIPERS OF YESTERDAY (Mompu)
Heart warming and a story well told. Very nice.
July 27th, 2024 20:34 - Asparagus, Chicken & Corn (HoboBilbo)
Another recipe poem. You are making me hungry.
July 27th, 2024 20:32 - Fugitives (Thoughtless)
Something about this caught my mind like a loose fish hook and I was...
July 27th, 2024 20:30 - Dusk hoover ring dawn ting task of badinage... (Rew4er2nail)
A vent in decent but well bent. Read it over enjoyed it.
July 27th, 2024 20:28 - The world ih her eyes (Keren)
Nicely done with a question never answered. Very nice.
July 27th, 2024 20:21 - Seven Years Here At MPS (Accidental Poet)
Congratulations are in order. I relate to much of this and admire how...
July 27th, 2024 20:19 - The Arabian Stallion (Saleh Ben Saleh)
All things to all men. Well worded this piece runs smoothly beginning to...
July 27th, 2024 20:16 - Leaving Tomorrow (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deeply philosophical this piece in a short few words provokes the mind....
July 27th, 2024 20:14 - Uteruses Stretch (Gray0328)
Well described in verse the physical process of conception and birth. Well...
July 27th, 2024 20:12 - Passage (Eugene S.)
This bears resemblance to something epic. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 20:10 - A Smile (MendedFences27)
A smile is always welcome and can change one\'s attitude from gray to...
July 27th, 2024 20:09 - Stranger become lover (Blossompayal)
Cute and romantic. It seems a proclamation of love. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 20:07 - NIGHT SKY (Qurrat Al Ain)
Well painted in words this piece poses a question that provokes a bit of...
July 27th, 2024 20:05 - ~> This is No Lie! (Mono-rhyme) (Thad Wilk)
Unsightly I say. I wouldn\'t let a small thing like that upset the night....
July 27th, 2024 20:02 - Feminine Rage (Aneenaelzabinod)
Too bad that there is a need for feminine rage. Well written it expresses...
July 27th, 2024 19:58 - A girl I used to know (Charlotte3)
A declaration of strength nicely written giving credit to God.
July 27th, 2024 19:56 - The line (Alan R)
Most interesting. how to define the line. Nicely written.
July 27th, 2024 19:54 - sensitive (Sixthwrites)
Very nicely organized this write ends where it starts and covers the...
July 27th, 2024 19:51 - Fire pit (Tony36)
Been there done that. Sounds familiar.
July 27th, 2024 19:46 - another day (Jim56)
And so is the cycle of life. They seem to melt one into the next. Yet each...
July 27th, 2024 06:40 - Destiny of Lovers (EmaHarlan)
Great imagery throughout this piece. Nicely written it paints a picture in...
July 27th, 2024 06:38 - 3 x part of a story - \"That Night\'s Dream\" (Maplespal)
Hard hitting and powerful. These evoke emotion of the human story and are...
July 27th, 2024 06:36 - An Extraordinary Writer (Prasun Goswami)
Many words of tribute like a prayer to honor another valued for courage...
July 27th, 2024 06:31 - Everyone Dies Twice (JaxolotlPoems)
A message nicely stated in poetic form. Well done
July 27th, 2024 06:27 - Where Peace Lies (Mya)
Wonderful imagery in a peaceful poem where I feel release so nicely...
July 27th, 2024 06:24 - Truth And Trouble (Cancelled) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A great message sent in verse and nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 06:23 - Ceremony (2781)
\"If USA could find four hundred and fifty, they could call elite..
How...
July 27th, 2024 06:21 - Outsiders (Neville)
Neville this metaphoric poem resonates out of my past into my present....
July 27th, 2024 06:17 - Paper Bag (Olive Anderson)
Personification at its best in the first person with great imagery. Nicely...
July 27th, 2024 06:14 - Cosmic Luv (A.H. Browning)
A most fun read but upon reflection it becomes an allegory and applicable...
July 27th, 2024 06:11 - SIT AT HOME (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke)
War is a terrible thing that touches all. It cares not for innocence but...
July 27th, 2024 06:07 - Misconception (Sassy Lou)
Some very nice lines here. A plea for understanding evoking feelings of...
July 27th, 2024 06:05 - Hello, My Brother Gemini (ADarkerMind)
Great images paint this piece and hanging metaphors surround the reader....
July 27th, 2024 06:02 - Utopia (David A Liebermann)
It is true that only us can determine our happiness nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 06:00 - Underestimating Eugene (Dan Williams)
Quite the story turned into an allegory. Great write Dan.
July 27th, 2024 05:57 - And You\'re a Madman (Bibekanand \'Agyat\')
Several thought provoking ideas here cloaked in metaphor and ready to be...
July 27th, 2024 05:52 - Taste Bud Duel (Doggerel Dave)
A fun read Dave yes some spirits I stay away from. (Just personal taste)...
July 27th, 2024 05:50 - Tranquil Evening (Dev Parth)
A beautiful image in a wonderful Haiku
July 27th, 2024 05:47 - Paradox of All (FallingAwake2)
A painted picture in words of a philosophical view. Nicely said.
July 27th, 2024 05:45 - *The tree* (Antra.sharma_)
A great metaphor here. Not strange that there was a tree of life and a...
July 27th, 2024 05:43 - Roll the Tape (Tristan Robert Lange)
There\'s a roll to this piece. It has rhythm and rhyme nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:41 - The Day Of The Lord (Mark The Phenomenon)
Some great lines in this piece with metaphor and rhyme. Nicely done
July 27th, 2024 05:39 - INCIDENCE (Bobby O)
Bobby this weaving of concepts with consequences makes a tapestry of word...
July 27th, 2024 05:37 - Earth\'s Most Wanted (Mutley Ravishes)
I liked the way that the idea of false beliefs was personified and spoke...
July 27th, 2024 05:33 - Under a sky of celadon (Amy Michelle Mosier)
An image filled vision here full of vivid visual pictures. Lovely
July 27th, 2024 05:31 - Another Beautiful Day. (Goldfinch60)
A pastoral painting projecting peace which is what this world needs. A...
July 27th, 2024 05:10 - I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case)
Beautiful images and metaphors in this poem that is loaded with great...
July 27th, 2024 05:06 - There Was Ample Pain (Satishverma)
It gives one pause and causes one to ponder. Mind boggling.
July 26th, 2024 20:54 - A Divine Reflection (Rrodriguez)
Nice rhyme and flow to this poem. Well done.
July 26th, 2024 20:52 - Maybe It\'s Not For Me (13LaurenD)
A great deal of existential questioning in this poem. It is not how much...
July 26th, 2024 20:49 - the (Jon Nakapalau)
A great message in this one word per line poem. Loved it.
July 26th, 2024 20:46 - Never laugh in your face (Anabasova)
Clear and to the point a statement of taking your back. Well done
July 26th, 2024 20:45 - SOMEONE\'S WORDS (Mompu)
This contains the essence of what I call poetry. If it evokes feeling it...
July 26th, 2024 20:43 - my heart cries but i shall not let anyone see it (DeadRose)
Putting on a strong face is not always easy. Sometimes dropping the pride...
July 26th, 2024 20:40 - |Thousand Island Dressing| (HoboBilbo)
Original, never seen poetic recipes before.
July 26th, 2024 20:39 - To the Bride and Groom (Teddy.15)
A Haiku well done.
July 26th, 2024 20:37 - neither cleanliness nor godliness do I abide (Rew4er2nail)
Many such comic remembered now lost in the dust of the past. Thanks for...
July 26th, 2024 20:36 - Meister (Introverted Sage)
Entertaining read
July 26th, 2024 20:33 - At the Bottom (Thoughtless)
seductively sensuous.
July 26th, 2024 20:31 - God my saviour (Sifiso ngoma)
Very nice
July 26th, 2024 20:30 - Where are you my love (Gloria Denise)
This poem leaves me with feelings of abandonment which is always...
July 26th, 2024 12:58 - Meadows (MendedFences27)
This poem brought on feelings of the past and the cycle of life as it goes...
July 26th, 2024 12:55 - Beauty in the Sky (Annemarie)
Nicely said. Love clouds and the images they make as well as their...
July 26th, 2024 12:51 - The squirrel (Michael William Reid)
Well described I have been amongst many of these wily creatures....
July 26th, 2024 12:49 - Salubrious Retreat (Gray0328)
Loved the imagery and especially the line \"where shadows sleep\" very...
July 26th, 2024 12:46 - The Road Not Taken! (Antra.sharma_)
Hope there is not too much Frost on that road. It makes for slippery...
July 26th, 2024 12:43 - My Friend Dale (Thomas W Case)
I think I know him he sounds just like a guy I know. I don\'t like him...
July 26th, 2024 12:40 - Full Circle (Kurt Philip Behm)
Vague enough to keep the mind working, vivid enough to understand, in...
July 26th, 2024 12:36 - ~> Fuckitol\'s The Real Deal (Thad Wilk)
Have tried that pill sometimes it works and sometimes not its all a matter...
July 26th, 2024 12:33 - The righteous side (Saleh Ben Saleh)
Been there done that. This touches deeper than a ice pic to the heart and...
July 26th, 2024 12:31
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