Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Just .....A..... Dream. (Celina Powell)
Sexual. sensual, seductive and erotic but only a dream
June 1st, 2026 13:04 - The Present Is What Counts (Mylastwrites)
A lovely write and so well said. Commendable but I believe it should be...
June 1st, 2026 12:17 - Naivety (Soheil khodaparasti)
So true duality exists in all things for if it did not they would not...
June 1st, 2026 12:15 - Whatever. (Neyney@386)
When what we want we know we can not have. The Rolling Stones said well in...
June 1st, 2026 12:14 - When Hope Stops Breathing (Briana)
Now that is desperation. Well written
June 1st, 2026 12:10 - Frozen Dreams (Kurt Philip Behm)
This time Kurt I have to go with the first one because the wording made me...
June 1st, 2026 12:09 - grief (Nitya)
A poem that makes the distinction between pain and grief over loss. Nicely...
June 1st, 2026 12:00 - Beyond All Time, All Space and Pure Conception... (Cellinic)
This has the feel of Boudica and the revolt, of Druids cutting the...
June 1st, 2026 11:23 - Push (M.E.M.)
A good read and what made it best was the last line and its meaning.
June 1st, 2026 11:13 - Gentleman Death (Gray0328)
Gray I have always seen death as a kind friend that in its mercy takes...
June 1st, 2026 11:12 - PLEASES (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Carpe diem the essence of this poem. Live life to the fullest in the...
June 1st, 2026 11:09 - Axiomagic (Mutley Ravishes)
The quote of an idealist I must admit and a fave.
June 1st, 2026 11:06 - night beauty (Jim56)
A most lovely write Jim. I love the night as well and find it to be a...
June 1st, 2026 11:05 - melded roads (Arqios)
Once again Cryptic I venture a guess at how it struck me. To me what is...
June 1st, 2026 11:03 - Renewable Hope (Tristan Robert Lange)
I have always loved the ABAB rhyme scheme it takes an ordinary poem and...
June 1st, 2026 10:50 - The math of it (Maplespal)
More complex than it appears a negative divided by a positive is a bit...
June 1st, 2026 04:33 - (Extra)Ordinary Birds (Rosalinahawkins)
Although this poem may be about an individual it is applicable to people...
June 1st, 2026 04:30 - AS I WANDER (Cully45)
A poem of gratitude at the realization that the world is beautiful and...
June 1st, 2026 04:27 - A DREAM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The short lines and rhyme create a rolling rocking feeling to this poem...
June 1st, 2026 04:25 - The Nuns in My Neighbourhood (Mirela)
Images presented that leaves a feeling the core of poetry. Nicely done
June 1st, 2026 04:24 - Turn Off The Screen, Turn On Your Mind (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Technology has taken us down a dangerous road and this poem speaks that....
June 1st, 2026 04:23 - Trinity Trouble? (Orchidee)
A good write Orchi forgiveness is always easier to get than permission so...
June 1st, 2026 04:21 - Im okay; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ)
Vacillating moods, emotions and behaviors like a rollercoaster in this...
June 1st, 2026 04:19 - providence (John Edward Smith Jr.)
Wordplay in this poem. A fun read well done
June 1st, 2026 04:15 - That Memory Of Whitby. (Goldfinch60)
A poem of a fond memory made all the better with a good surprise of its...
June 1st, 2026 04:07 - June Folding into Brightness (Matthew R. Callies)
This poem that focuses on pride and Pride can apply to any although...
June 1st, 2026 04:00 - Anthony Or Hanible Middle Name Outcast (Anthony Hanible)
This poem begins with a division within and expounds upon that divide....
June 1st, 2026 03:57 - I write to heavens for thy nation (Funmiwrites)
A personification of the land sounding almost Native American in its view...
June 1st, 2026 03:56 - Margairetta (David Wakeling)
A poetic plea for forgiveness that extols feelings of guilt and remorse....
June 1st, 2026 03:53 - Three Ways Of Looking At A Chair (Vipassana)
Different perspectives of a chair as viewed from three different points of...
June 1st, 2026 03:51 - Up Up Up We go (Rabdikavi)
The ups and downs of life reflected in this poem that encouraged a carpe...
June 1st, 2026 03:48 - Silent Tears..... (Celina Powell)
The pain of loss echoes in this poem well written
May 31st, 2026 22:05 - Psalm of Delivery (Thomas W Case)
From a tough situation to betterment in this poem of redemption. Well said...
May 31st, 2026 22:04 - Am I a bad friend? (Friendship)
Sad and very emotional. A loss that is hard to reconcile. Well written
May 31st, 2026 22:02 - If (Or there Abouts) (Kevin Hulme)
With all due respect to Sir Rudyard Kipling this one made me smile and yes...
May 31st, 2026 18:45 - Where Does One Go? (Mylastwrites)
A question that asks where one goes in this life. Troubles and...
May 31st, 2026 17:28 - What lies ahead? (_Doc_)
Good rhyme and flow in this poem take one on a journey of life and where...
May 31st, 2026 17:27 - Citizens Bank checking account... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Banks and cereal quite a run. A fun read
May 31st, 2026 17:25 - and what is gold to utopians? (King)
A fanciful metaphor for cultural differences. Nicely done
May 31st, 2026 16:28 - The sadness without a name (Lore)
Sad and poignant for far too many. Well written
May 31st, 2026 16:27 - Visions I see (Joseph M Marion)
Biblical in proportion, prophetic in style it speaks to the present state...
May 31st, 2026 14:40 - FLOWERS vs PRICES (Durdica Porobija)
A stunning poem of a most powerful nature. Women on display and for sale...
May 31st, 2026 14:06 - Inspire (Cerise456)
A wonderful write that plays on a word. Well done
May 31st, 2026 14:00 - ADDED TIME (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
A lovely thought and attitude of celebrating life until the end
May 31st, 2026 13:59 - sin of wrath (Ethan Mikel St.Amour)
A powerful senryu and well written
May 31st, 2026 13:57 - Autumn (Mon)
Lovely! a great write
May 31st, 2026 13:56 - bring back punk (MR.apocalypse)
It is the rhythmic beat of this poem that caught my attention. It pulls...
May 31st, 2026 12:20 - Sunday: 5-31-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Well Kurt I did read and yes did like and some more than others. I would...
May 31st, 2026 12:18 - A Walk in the Countryside (Classicmister)
I would have to agree. This is a lovely write that puts me where I am most...
May 31st, 2026 12:15 - Three Bells (Neil Higgins)
A reflective poem that is easily identifiable. Well written
May 31st, 2026 12:13 - Tangible Silence (– NoeticNonsense)
A lovely passage or two here that speak a mountain. It is what we don\'t...
May 31st, 2026 12:11 - Where the Trail Ends (Matthew R. Callies)
A beautiful picture painted in this verse. It is full of images close to...
May 31st, 2026 12:10 - Not the Park (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem Tristan combines Acrostic, Tribute, Historical, Religious all...
May 31st, 2026 12:07 - Blue Moon (Kaz)
What a great senryu nicely said
May 31st, 2026 12:03 - A woman’s heart (Mirela)
A great comparison and allegory short and nicely written Mirela
May 31st, 2026 12:02 - The Poet and the Magician (Sneha Sebastian)
A sad poem of love of an illusion. They say in magic the final act is the...
May 31st, 2026 12:01 - Not just a sport (Antra.coree)
A wonderful write and kept so by not identifying which sport. Very nicely...
May 31st, 2026 11:56 - Brad & Sally (Paul Bell)
I\'ve been cited for running several red lights before and yellow is the...
May 31st, 2026 11:53 - ONE MORE LEAF (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
What a marvelous metaphor Carlos yes each day a leaf and we are the poem...
May 31st, 2026 06:56 - To meet someone. (Ginny jayne)
Cute and warm it speaks of a need for affiliation. Well done
May 31st, 2026 05:56 - Ready for departure (Maplespal)
A most creative way to say what many feel and reiterated several times in...
May 31st, 2026 05:55 - sanctuary (Arqios)
Cryptic I do not know if it was intended but this held a deep and hidden...
May 31st, 2026 05:52 - nature way (Jim56)
Bright and cheerful it melds us with nature and the health of body and...
May 31st, 2026 05:38 - A Barn Owl (Cully45)
An endearing poem of connection between nature and man set in the first...
May 31st, 2026 04:33 - The Duel (Andrew Jackson) (Gray0328)
A drama well painted in beautiful language most poetic it reenacts a...
May 31st, 2026 04:29 - DID WE NOT ? (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
This seems a poem of separation by the ending. A sense of sadness is...
May 31st, 2026 04:26 - Secret Societies Should Be Banned (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A powerful statement and write that paints all secret societies as evil....
May 31st, 2026 04:24 - Balcony coffee (William Hromada)
A beautiful image created by a short set of wonderful rhymes in this piece
May 31st, 2026 04:22 - Fourteen Years Ago Today. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful attitude keeps it a wonderful life. Finding joy in what one...
May 31st, 2026 04:21 - The Crescent (Rhmn_7)
A fantasy story with mythical themes unravels in this poem of rhyme and...
May 31st, 2026 04:18 - I Said What I Said (Amber D. Petty Patrick)
These rhymes come with a beat that seems rap like in some ways and hold...
May 31st, 2026 04:15 - Kindle a Candle (Soheil khodaparasti)
So short yet says so much well done
May 31st, 2026 04:11 - Rope (John Edward Smith Jr.)
A metaphor that unravels in poetic form door to wondering. Well done in...
May 31st, 2026 04:10 - Mum\'s Day Off (David Wakeling)
A great story David of there is always something. This one tells of how...
May 31st, 2026 04:08 - Breach (Anthony Hanible)
Anthony this is a beautiful poem of renewal of how one sees the world when...
May 31st, 2026 04:04 - मैं लिपटता हूं तेरे ग़म से तो जी लेता हूं (Anmol Sinha)
Metaphoric and with good imagery this poem lays out a devoted...
May 31st, 2026 04:02 - Strangers (NafisaSB)
This poem becomes most real as I have received feedback from so many over...
May 31st, 2026 04:00 - I need my med back (Never be)
A great first person unwinding of a reliance on medication to see the...
May 31st, 2026 03:52 - Stand with yourself (Samuel Potsane)
Some god advice in poem form. Well done
May 30th, 2026 21:00 - Farting Free (E Naughton)
Cute and a tender poem of fun with a child. Well written. ( I hope it is...
May 30th, 2026 19:30 - Work In Progress (E.J. Waling)
The constant change in the world portrayed in this poem. Well written
May 30th, 2026 19:28 - Light-Hearted (Mutley Ravishes)
A wonderful poem and so true light and water the two principle things...
May 30th, 2026 17:54 - The Method Fades (Sassy Lou)
Pills for ills not for thrills an lovely write
May 30th, 2026 17:31 - Ache (John Edward Smith Jr.)
This one does make a sad ending. Well done
May 30th, 2026 17:29 - ONLY SOMEONE ELSE (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Lovely a most introspective and understanding poem of social nature. Well...
May 30th, 2026 17:26 - In The Night (Mylastwrites)
Well done this poem is electric and a love poem as well. Nicely written
May 30th, 2026 17:23 - Masterpiece (Jeannie)
A lovely piece of advice set in a poem. Very nicely done
May 30th, 2026 14:15 - Times (Cerise456)
Nicely written this poem speaks of healing pain and injury. Well done
May 30th, 2026 14:14 - Stupid Commercials (Shadowbones)
A poem of lack of trust well written
May 30th, 2026 14:12 - Family room (Ogunisjustice)
A relationship evaluation in a poem. Well done
May 30th, 2026 12:39 - Saturday Soundbites: 5-30-2026 (Kurt Philip Behm)
Another wonderful set of poems Kurt I would have to say that my favorite...
May 30th, 2026 12:37 - Oppositional conversationalist 🗣️ (GoddessEYES)
A good point made in this write
May 30th, 2026 12:30 - Where\'s the exit (Rubberduck)
A picture of a toxic relationship that is maintained out of desire....
May 30th, 2026 11:36 - The fading scents (Arial)
Metaphoric and just beyond my grasp my mind wanders. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:30 - Just relax (Hzugman)
This is indeed a skill ignored by most parents and not taught to children....
May 30th, 2026 11:28 - Stepping into June gloom 🌥️ (Ms.divine)
Nature personified in this write of changes. Well done
May 30th, 2026 11:27 - The Fading of the Vow (Notapoet)
I really love this poem of faded love and the nostalgia for past days it...
May 30th, 2026 11:26 - Switch over (2781)
This poem starts of in a most playful manner it seems to be joking with...
May 30th, 2026 11:23 - How life resolves itself (King)
An interesting poem of Knights and royals and a story with some rhyme...
May 30th, 2026 11:20 - The Robin sat on branches of a apple tree (Caring dove)
This seems a reflection over a scene viewed of nature. It casts a...
May 30th, 2026 11:18
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