Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- SONNET OF DEPICTION ([email protected])
Such classic lines so well matched with myth and the ephemeral nature of...
December 18th, 2025 13:33 - Homesick (Eckardcb)
There are things that bring back memories and give nostalgia for the past...
December 18th, 2025 13:08 - Untitled {26} (Niko Papadatos)
An encouraging poem telling one to expect problems but to bounce back and...
December 18th, 2025 13:05 - Celebration of Life (Soheil khodaparasti)
Age affects all and time passes without notice. Well written
December 18th, 2025 12:02 - As i lay. (Andrew Deaton)
I\'ve heard of being dragged out of this life kicking and screaming but...
December 18th, 2025 11:58 - The Night the Dark Was Given a Map (Matthew R. Callies)
What a lovely Christmas poem so well written with clever wording and...
December 18th, 2025 10:56 - Untitled (RSM0812)
This poem points out the continuation of everything in everything else...
December 18th, 2025 10:49 - BLUE TIME / TIEMPO AZUL (Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS)
Interesting the choice of blue that carries in English the sense of...
December 18th, 2025 10:02 - Soundbites - 12/18/2025 (Kurt Philip Behm)
These are gems Kurt and a fave from me on each
December 18th, 2025 09:49 - The Weight of Being the Son (Dhiman Shah)
A brilliant poem that not only is good in rhyme and meter but tells its...
December 18th, 2025 09:47 - I climbed (Maplespal)
Definitely metaphoric this poem presents the change with age and the...
December 18th, 2025 09:43 - Glimps (Jerry Reynolds)
A wonderful image, if tipped the right way a muslim crescent strange this...
December 18th, 2025 09:41 - Teddy (Paul Bell)
Some things and some people don\'t seem to do as you please, or if they do...
December 18th, 2025 09:39 - That One Last Cry (Anthony Hanible)
A poem of finalization. Emotional and directly stated. Well done
December 18th, 2025 08:13 - The Glow Of Angelโs Magic (Ajon4wheels)
December 18th, 2025 08:09 - The Glow Of Angelโs Magic (Ajon4wheels)
A poem of hope and faith that in this season angels will receive our...
December 18th, 2025 08:09 - The Same Year, Again (Rawaneigh.99)
There is not just sadness in this poem but deep despair at lack of comfort...
December 18th, 2025 08:08 - ๐๐พ๐น ๐ดโด๐ (Keyara S Trotman)
True love as opposed to the love of only self and hypocrisy of the term...
December 18th, 2025 08:04 - Christmas Present (PerditaRose)
A touching poem of the season that turns the heart back to what Christmas...
December 18th, 2025 08:02 - forever friend (Jim56)
Another poetic tribute to man\'s best friend. Well done Jim
December 18th, 2025 08:01 - Dawn (Katie B.)
Blessed hours before the dawn, hours of peace and calm. A lovely poem
December 18th, 2025 08:00 - Orgasm (Friendship)
A universal explosion of energy unveiled and with it life and growth. Well...
December 18th, 2025 07:46 - Never Rushes On (Gewar)
Uncertainty in this poem builds through the poem. It is the angst of not...
December 18th, 2025 06:05 - before the day stirs (Arqios)
Beautiful! A peaceful feeling my friend
December 18th, 2025 05:28 - WD-40 (Gray0328)
Well Gray I have to say I have used it before many times. I wish that they...
December 18th, 2025 04:45 - Bom dia (Poetaldo)
There is a joyousness in this poem and energy to start the day. Well done
December 18th, 2025 04:13 - GOTHIC STAINED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Ignoring the light is sometimes chosen as a way of continuing. A deep poem...
December 18th, 2025 04:12 - IF THE WORLD TURN US DOWN (Fikrioshin)
The analogy or metaphor if you wish works well in that the loneliness can...
December 18th, 2025 04:08 - Shepherd and Sheep - OT/NT Series 16 (Orchidee)
Cleverly written this recounting of the prophesy of Christs betrayal and...
December 18th, 2025 04:05 - A Perfect Christmas Wish (Teddy.15)
A beautiful symbolic wish it is and may it return to you as well Teddy....
December 18th, 2025 04:03 - But Is It Poetry? (Goldfinch60)
Art is such an individual thing, it is a form of beauty and is in the eye...
December 18th, 2025 04:01 - Up in Flames (NinjaGirl)
I hear the theme of damaged goods in this poem. Even if sold at a...
December 18th, 2025 03:58 - the ghostโs story (Vipassana)
Daydreamed inventions reflected in a coffee cup. Well written
December 18th, 2025 03:56 - 7777 (Andrew Deaton)
This poem works of the numerological sense of special magic properties of...
December 18th, 2025 03:54 - When the night whispers your name (Poet\'s Dream)
What seems to be an obsession in the beginning of the poem may be and...
December 18th, 2025 03:51 - my imaginary kafka quotes #28 (Jon Nakapalau)
That is the foundation of capitalism and a free market society. Well...
December 18th, 2025 03:48 - Cause (NinjaGirl)
There is a thin line between self punishment and perseverance in learning...
December 18th, 2025 03:47 - a nobody (DeadRose)
Looking in a mirror inspires either vanity or disgust I hear that in this...
December 17th, 2025 20:54 - Mama mia (Poetaldo)
The repeated phrase Mama mia is both comforting and frightening and is a...
December 17th, 2025 19:01 - After the Rain (Hacklec)
Torrential rain leaves a mess and I am not sure whether the las image is a...
December 17th, 2025 18:58 - Yearn (Amethyste)
Sexual, sensual, erotic and well done
December 17th, 2025 17:44 - We Wish You a Merry Christmas (International Version) (Cody Ellis)
Christmas an international affair now days. A lovely write
December 17th, 2025 16:28 - coming in from the cold (Jjudaharts)
We all began small as a twinkle in our parents eye. A fun read
December 17th, 2025 16:25 - Preparation H - For hair washing saga (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Naked in the shower, naked the Greek gods and goddesses this sounds very...
December 17th, 2025 16:24 - My one moment (Sail)
The feeling of being small is sad. One should feel equal a lovely poem
December 17th, 2025 16:17 - I\'ve grown (Maplespal)
We all have to grow as we live and it seems that we never stop growing....
December 17th, 2025 14:55 - Calmness of Nature (Igor Marynowski)
Very nicely stated in most poetic form. Lovely
December 17th, 2025 14:24 - Wisdom Over Beauty (Kainat Noor)
A beautiful poem that has a wonderful message as well. Nicely said
December 17th, 2025 13:51 - The Year Santa Wore Mr. Bruno\'s Boots (Gray0328)
When a child and taken to sit on Santa\'s lap at the store I would ask why...
December 17th, 2025 12:15 - ๐ข๐พโ๐ถ๐๐๐พ๐ธ โโด๐๐ถ๐๐ธโฏ (Keyara S Trotman)
There it goes as it is and it is what it is. Well said Keyara
December 17th, 2025 12:12 - Just one look (Lorenz)
This poem fits the man and the little prince would be proud. The mask of...
December 17th, 2025 12:10 - Death of a Star ๐ (Atlas)
Beautiful in its imagery this poem shines with a glow and reaches out to...
December 17th, 2025 11:25 - When Winter Let Us Fly (Matthew R. Callies)
Tracks erased but memories remain in this poetic metaphor of life itself....
December 17th, 2025 10:56 - Why Canโt You See (Notapoet)
There is a feel of poor self regard in this poem and a feeling one seeing...
December 17th, 2025 10:04 - ASSisted Living (Kurt Philip Behm)
A sad write that bites to the bone. Very nicely done Kurt
December 17th, 2025 10:02 - Anxiety (Cam)
Here in this poem lies a secret about to be unveiled and whether it is...
December 17th, 2025 10:01 - The Kittitas Symphony: A Master Epic of the Gale (Rev. Lord C.M. Bechard)
This poem brought some nostalgia having lived in Ellensburg in 1978 and...
December 17th, 2025 09:59 - All is Love (RSM0812)
A very nicely worded work filled with rhyme and good flow. Nicely done
December 17th, 2025 09:53 - MARCHING DOWN THE TOWN SQUARE (Fikrioshin)
poem of doing not trying of being oneself and not afraid to do so. Well...
December 17th, 2025 09:11 - Neon Lights (Kering.karim)
Infatuated, entranced and captured this poem speaks of that sense and the...
December 17th, 2025 08:50 - Please Don\'t (Anthony Hanible)
A sad poem that speaks from the darkness and in darkness one can not see...
December 17th, 2025 08:48 - Happy Birthday To My Big Sister (Ajon4wheels)
A very nice birthday greeting and wish in poetic form
December 17th, 2025 08:47 - friendship (Applecherry)
December 17th, 2025 08:46 - friendship (Applecherry)
The pluses and minuses of friends and of being outgoing or introverted. A...
December 17th, 2025 08:46 - i like it in the spring (Jim56)
A lovely poem of spring well before its time. Nicely done Jim is it...
December 17th, 2025 08:41 - Way of life (Moco)
There is a feeling in this poem of being carried on the currents of life...
December 17th, 2025 08:40 - tragedy (PerditaRose)
Here one runs the risk of reading too much into the poem. The heights one...
December 17th, 2025 07:07 - Autumns chill (William Hromada)
A few lines of the season that touch the heart and warm the soul with the...
December 17th, 2025 06:43 - call it truth (Arqios)
The mark of the owner. What sets it aside from the sterile, the plastic...
December 17th, 2025 05:48 - MOMENT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Anthropomorphizing time in this poem gives it a both seductive and...
December 17th, 2025 04:02 - Heart set โฅ๏ธ (Jah)
A poem of infatuation and attraction to a chance finding. Well written
December 17th, 2025 03:59 - Temple Sounds (Mutley Ravishes)
In many ways this seems true. Its vibrations can be seen in its owner\'s...
December 17th, 2025 03:57 - December Moon (Debadrita Sarkar)
Most interesting word placement of a most unexpected type is mind...
December 17th, 2025 03:56 - My Aba (Yahweh,God) (Chanel T.)
A proclamation of a religious belief a faith and gratitude and a call for...
December 17th, 2025 03:53 - Archangels kingdom (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A most interesting set of images in this write. Mind provoking
December 17th, 2025 03:51 - THE MAN AT THE TRAIN STATION (Fikrioshin)
It is the starkness combined with the short staccato meter that gives this...
December 17th, 2025 03:50 - An Evergreen (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
This is a most beautiful Haiku and a fave
December 17th, 2025 03:47 - The Hearth of Darkened Thirst (Prasun Goswami)
This is a very passionate poem and the metaphors are seductive and in my...
December 17th, 2025 03:46 - Untitled {25} (Niko Papadatos)
A poem that one must imagine as well as hear. It calls out for that leap....
December 17th, 2025 03:39 - The Rubbish Heap. (Goldfinch60)
Thinly vailed this poem reveals in its satire a would be monarch that...
December 17th, 2025 03:37 - Depression is a Family Illness (Katie B.)
Sad, dark, with a sense of hopelessness is the disease and so the poem as...
December 17th, 2025 03:32 - A Life of Resilience\" (Friendship)
The human will knows no limits and desire may often overcome deficits....
December 17th, 2025 03:29 - SOCIALISM KILLS (David Welch)
A very strong political point made in this poem. Quite powerful
December 16th, 2025 19:33 - Pale Moon (Megan Blaney)
We often take no response as not being heard when in fact it is a...
December 16th, 2025 19:23 - Trying for Trust (NinjaGirl)
A great metaphor in this poem and it has a double meaning as well. Loved...
December 16th, 2025 19:21 - Witches (Amethyste)
We all have rituals and love is just one. As for witches they are often...
December 16th, 2025 19:20 - Solstices on the Meadow of Time (Jerry Reynolds)
Clever Jerry I love the merging of the seasons and what a way to present...
December 16th, 2025 19:19 - Witness of the Wind (Soheil khodaparasti)
This poem has seductive wisdom that requires thought and time. Lovely
December 16th, 2025 15:44 - As I Sat (David Eugene Stewart)
A love poem with rhyme nicely done
December 16th, 2025 15:26 - The Wall Calleth (AmIAPoet-QuestionMark)
Suicide a selfish act seldom considers the other that it will affect. A...
December 16th, 2025 14:15 - A Picture (Vanessa morrison)
A sad and dark write that bleeds its message
December 16th, 2025 14:11 - silent meditation (Jjudaharts)
Well stated. Liked it
December 16th, 2025 14:10 - Another Form of Abuse (Gray0328)
Pity is a terrible monster hidden in disguise. A good write
December 16th, 2025 12:55 - Killing Time (Notapoet)
Clever and well written a fave
December 16th, 2025 12:44 - Christmas love (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
Christmas the season for family and togetherness. Well done
December 16th, 2025 12:43 - The Purpose Of Christmas -By Isaiah Ogedegbe (Isaiah Ogedegbe)
A write of faith and belief at a special time of year and a call for...
December 16th, 2025 11:20 - Theyโre Here (E.J. Waling)
This seems to me a poetic criticism of technology gone array. Well done in...
December 16th, 2025 11:19 - SONNET ON ALLURING LOVE ([email protected])
This to me seems a love poem and a proposal of love. Nicely done
December 16th, 2025 11:17 - Decemberโs Lament (Cam)
A wonderful Christmas message that needs to be heard. True in what it says...
December 16th, 2025 11:15 - Distant Door (StarLoom)
Keep believing. A poem that lays it out there raw and open. A lovely write
December 16th, 2025 11:13
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