Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- amore tardius occidit (Thomas W Case)
Great metaphor Thomas with some vivid images that paint the picture
October 24th, 2024 15:08 - innocence (NinjaGirl)
Dark and sad but with hope. Very nicely said
October 24th, 2024 13:40 - avalanche (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most interesting read and yes the mind holds broken shards that it tries...
October 24th, 2024 13:38 - Silent Screams of the Butterfly (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most poignant poem written in great metaphor. As a psychologist I...
October 24th, 2024 13:01 - I\'m Deeply Introvert (Dev Parth)
A dark write about a dark feeling. I love the night and the shade so...
October 24th, 2024 12:19 - ~> When An Old Man Dies (Thad Wilk)
Indeed so with each a burning of the library of Alexandria. A point well...
October 24th, 2024 12:16 - Betrayal through Tarot (Kerry)
Painful and sad betrayal is a gut punch, a sucker punch that effects...
October 24th, 2024 11:38 - Walking (RSM0812)
Cryptic and intriguing it meanders along the way. Walking outside of...
October 24th, 2024 10:08 - in poetry’s parish (Arqios)
Ahh Criptic a wonderful comparison and beautiful write in verse no less....
October 24th, 2024 08:29 - Dark Angel (Tony36)
Although a dark poem that is sensual and even romatic it is great for the...
October 24th, 2024 07:40 - Till death do us part (Neilton)
Best wishes on your recovery from this terrible plight. The poem I did not...
October 24th, 2024 07:39 - Forms3 (John Prophet)
Applicable in the now and present as well as a view of what\'s to come in...
October 24th, 2024 07:32 - a guide dogs story (Jim56)
A great story of man\'s best friend. Loved the rhyme and some internal...
October 24th, 2024 07:30 - The New Hip-Hop Hooray (Gray0328)
A very encouraging write where the spirit never ages only the body. Nicely...
October 24th, 2024 05:57 - Apocalypse slow (Lorenz)
A modern book of Revelations? Sounds like Time Square at rush hour to me....
October 24th, 2024 05:55 - The Tide has gone out. (David Wakeling)
That was good stuff. Both the poem and what ever you smoked before you...
October 24th, 2024 05:53 - Bemused to Death (Neville)
Neville loved the sly useof wording here in the winter of a relationship...
October 24th, 2024 05:50 - I, I Guess I\'ll Hafta Look VERY Sheepish (Cheeky Missy)
Love cream and anything that it is in. Caught my attention right away and...
October 24th, 2024 05:43 - Sixty Poems (Tom Dylan)
Good questions posed in this write. Why are certain numbers more...
October 24th, 2024 05:37 - Ice-Slide (Teddy.15)
Made me giggle myself. I have never seen a penguin giggle but can imagin...
October 24th, 2024 05:29 - Trovatori Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Loved this one Gold sofull of imagery even the addition of the acrostic...
October 24th, 2024 05:26 - What is love (NafisaSB)
Many of loves qualities listed in this poem and they bring to mind many...
October 24th, 2024 05:21 - Pathetic (Mase ♪)
I liked the theme and the manner of presentation. A type of soliloquy it...
October 24th, 2024 05:17 - The leaves (NafisaSB)
So well written this poem introduces a metaphor or girls and leaves as...
October 24th, 2024 05:12 - Until (Sunshine777)
Powerful and haunting. Sad, well written with a poignant message
October 23rd, 2024 18:49 - Fallujah Iraq April 2007 (David Wakeling)
Vivid, haunting, sad this poem as a letter to mother is heart rending.
October 23rd, 2024 18:12 - 2 poems, 2 views (Maplespal)
Deep philosophically with a great message set poetically with some great...
October 23rd, 2024 18:06 - Housecleaning Mediation (Gray0328)
Not only a ritual but a metaphor well written in verse
October 23rd, 2024 12:53 - Spooky Tales (Tony36)
Horror seems to be a fetish of our society with slasher films, Halloween,...
October 23rd, 2024 12:51 - ~> Oh, I need you so much! (Thad Wilk)
Yea I guessed it might have been tomato but this death apple was thought...
October 23rd, 2024 12:48 - EMPTY RHYTHM (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Don\'t know whether to take this as a comment on the media or religion....
October 23rd, 2024 12:45 - By Night\'s Secluded Light (ADarkerMind)
A most interesting collection of disjointed thoughts that often occur in...
October 23rd, 2024 12:43 - Loss (Kerry)
Loss of anyone held dear is an obstacle that seems insurmountable whether...
October 23rd, 2024 07:07 - back in my memories (Jim56)
A most beautiful thought that lifts the day. So nicely stated in poetic...
October 23rd, 2024 07:01 - Love That Goes the Distance (Accidental Poet)
A tribute to one loved beautifully written in verse most poetic
October 23rd, 2024 06:59 - in vino veritas (Arqios)
So nicely put and with such a great metaphor. They excite the appetite and...
October 23rd, 2024 06:40 - Coward (Neilton)
Since Hamlet I have always loved soliloquies and this is no less. I love...
October 23rd, 2024 05:22 - Sunbeams and Trinkets (Tristan Robert Lange)
The group togeather makes for more of an atmosphere good choice
October 23rd, 2024 05:14 - Poet (Teddy.15)
You have outdone yourself on this one my friend. Written so neatly these...
October 23rd, 2024 05:08 - Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville)
You are more persistent than I, I surrendered years ago and find that...
October 23rd, 2024 05:01 - Small Ghosts (Dan Williams)
This reminded me of a philosophy class I had many many years ago. Very...
October 23rd, 2024 04:54 - Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60)
Have long thought of poetry as a solo performance while a song takes the...
October 23rd, 2024 04:45 - 3 poems on time (Maplespal)
Time from different perspectives each well written
October 22nd, 2024 20:27 - World Piece (DLewis88)
A great write just before the US election. A message that goes unheeded. ...
October 22nd, 2024 20:23 - Dad and the creaky window. (David Wakeling)
A most interesting tribute so to speak. It has that tongue in cheek kind...
October 22nd, 2024 20:21 - Broken Glass (River123)
Some very interesting lines and concepts expressed here. Lovely
October 22nd, 2024 20:18 - Blue Life (Thomas W Case)
Modern art where ever you can find it. This poem reminds me of Picasso
October 22nd, 2024 20:15 - Hermanus (Jane Walker)
Across the pond I\'ve watched the same in South Brazil. A beautiful sight...
October 22nd, 2024 13:27 - Evening – (The Cancer Ballads IV) (Daniel McDonagh)
Such beautiful images set off against a sad and horrific ending. The...
October 22nd, 2024 13:24 - ~> The Reaper\'s Looking Fly These Days! (Thad Wilk)
A great write for Halloween and this time of the year.
October 22nd, 2024 11:54 - TRUE FRIEND (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Love yourself then you can love someone else. Know yourself then you can...
October 22nd, 2024 09:18 - The Maze (Tony36)
Life is such with the exit what we are not often looking for. Nice write...
October 22nd, 2024 08:46 - What Makes a Hero (Gray0328)
Unsung heros that do for others that which no others see. A most beautiful...
October 22nd, 2024 08:45 - The All-Inclusive Breakfast (Tom Dylan)
This poem teems with the clatter of a busy morning breakfast hotel style....
October 22nd, 2024 07:33 - in echoes wade (Arqios)
Beautiful words ripple in the well of memories. The soft peal of the bell...
October 22nd, 2024 06:06 - lifes school (Jim56)
Cleverly worded in the beginning of this poem language remniscent of a...
October 22nd, 2024 06:02 - My little polish café (Lorenz)
Memories and associations paired in how a place, foods, smells evoke the...
October 22nd, 2024 05:57 - Some Things Change Too Much (Neville)
Ahh the meaning here taken in so many ways. The mind wanders and ponders,...
October 22nd, 2024 05:55 - Will I Ever Awaken? (Teddy.15)
So many focus on the terrors of war on the battle field yet so little...
October 22nd, 2024 05:46 - Avoi-Dance (Mutley Ravishes)
Clever and relatable it screams of life\'s rush. Lovely
October 22nd, 2024 05:21 - We Have Arrived. (Goldfinch60)
So good to hear someone talk of their contentment. All the best my friend.
October 22nd, 2024 05:19 - Illogical Soup (Dan Williams)
I know Dave that poems can be taken many different ways by readers and so...
October 22nd, 2024 05:16 - Essay on Excuses (Dan Williams)
(First little moths of senility flit more regularly now,) a great line...
October 22nd, 2024 05:05 - Today\'s world 🖕🏼 (Mase ♪)
Very original in its form and yet with rhyme it rings with defiance and...
October 22nd, 2024 04:57 - A sheltering shell (Maplespal)
A most enjoyable read this poem notes how we exploit the world around us...
October 21st, 2024 17:30 - So Red The Nose (ADarkerMind)
Well Melvin more conundrums to unravel. Nicely written and composed.
October 21st, 2024 13:24 - I never saw her again (Vishakha)
Carefully worded it remains open to interpretation but as I read it she...
October 21st, 2024 11:38 - S W A T (Gray0328)
A great Acostic nicely done
October 21st, 2024 10:23 - GUILTY AS SIN (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A new New Testament written on a dollar bill and prophesized by Jeff Bezos...
October 21st, 2024 10:21 - ~> Much Schooling To Become A Witch! (Thad Wilk)
Almost Shakepear Mcbeth a fun read and all in the season of darkness.
October 21st, 2024 10:16 - The Path (Tony36)
Is this a series? I\'ll be waiting to hear what lies ahead. Good seasonal...
October 21st, 2024 08:23 - Alone4 (John Prophet)
Point only one dimention, line two, figure three forever endless but what...
October 21st, 2024 08:20 - we dont die (Jim56)
An old gospel song (I\'ll fly away) Although not religious myself I always...
October 21st, 2024 06:31 - A Different Time, A Different Path (Teddy.15)
A taste of Frost on an autum morning. To learn form experience is the...
October 21st, 2024 06:26 - jester’s truth (Arqios)
As poetic as nature itself with hidden meaning as cryptic as the universe...
October 21st, 2024 06:21 - An ode to he who must not be named. (Kerry)
Though many would condem I do not. If one is aware of the consequences of...
October 21st, 2024 05:18 - Back To The Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Relaxing and care free with one that one loves nothing more beautiful
October 21st, 2024 05:15 - Beneath the Surgical Sky (Tristan Robert Lange)
As I read this I think of an onion the surface shell then another beneath...
October 21st, 2024 05:13 - The Truth (David Wakeling)
The first sentence is my favorite line. Powerful and unexpected but rings...
October 21st, 2024 05:08 - Deus ex machina (Lorenz)
Many great questions raised but my favorite line is the last (Or am I just...
October 21st, 2024 04:58 - The Hush Of Morning (Mark The Phenomenon)
A very patriotic poem that with the fervor and passion of powerful words...
October 21st, 2024 04:55 - In the Beginning of Our Forever (Neville)
I have been there. A great feeling, exhilarating. At such times I have...
October 21st, 2024 04:51 - Down, to the ground (LP2187)
Taking another down with you so you can feel better about yourself and...
October 21st, 2024 04:46 - The Reading (Tom Dylan)
A great write about fear of public speaking, stage fright, or what ever...
October 21st, 2024 04:41 - Bumblebee (John Prophet)
Great contrast and comparison. Very nicely done John
October 20th, 2024 17:40 - The Hand. (David Wakeling)
Tribute to a part of us we often take for granted unil we loose it. Some...
October 20th, 2024 17:16 - Isn\'t Deja Vu, Like, Badly Overused?! (Cheeky Missy)
Three sonnets opening and ending a Sunday way with the middle memories of...
October 20th, 2024 12:40 - Tell me a story (Tony36)
Tony we all love a good story books, movies, theater, and poems I love...
October 20th, 2024 10:04 - Your Mem\'ry Just Won\'t Fade Away - form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
So many of us have felt this way it is easy to empathize. I too have used...
October 20th, 2024 09:13 - The Company you Keep (Mlarouss)
Good advice that I always gave to my children although they did not always...
October 20th, 2024 06:35 - The Weight of Unforgiven Sins (Gray0328)
Guilt is a heavy burden and heavier still is self deception. We all carry...
October 20th, 2024 06:33 - Trapped in a lies noose (Maplespal)
Life is complicated and one has to ask if lies are better than truth some...
October 20th, 2024 06:31 - empty heart (Jim56)
Loneliness is an empty place and can only be filled by others, that is why...
October 20th, 2024 06:25 - Rough Justice (Neville)
Many walk back that dusty trail and reopen the door to a flood of more...
October 20th, 2024 06:22 - Ecce homo (Lorenz)
Powerfull words worded powerfully
October 20th, 2024 06:15 - \"Boo\" (Teddy.15)
It is that season and I tove the playfulness in this piece. If only all...
October 20th, 2024 06:12 - Lmrk2410aa (Arqios)
This takes my mind to many areas first numerology and the meaning of...
October 20th, 2024 06:02 - Dinner With Friends Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A gathering with friends is always great and food enhaces any social...
October 20th, 2024 05:45 - 3 parts of a man (NafisaSB)
A great insight into the nature of the human being who like some animals,...
October 20th, 2024 05:42 - Truth (Sunshine777)
A most interesting metaphor that can be take to great extreems. Although...
October 20th, 2024 05:36
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