Comments on community poems by Laura🌻
- Stopped By Music. (Goldfinch60)
Great write Gold! The musical accompaniment enhances the writing! All we...
October 27th, 2017 04:15 - Unexplained. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay,
Your writes are amazing!
This one does make us wonder and...
October 27th, 2017 04:00 - SIX SWEET STAGES OF LOVE ~ SANTITA & BRIAN ~ SYMBIOSIS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
Beautiful collaboration with Santita!...
October 27th, 2017 03:44 - THE ANCIENT LAND (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Really like the colorized version of yesterday’s drawing! The...
October 27th, 2017 02:58 - At the Party (FredPeyer)
Great write Fred. Maybe he knew all along that the she was really a he and...
October 27th, 2017 02:42 - JUSTIFIABLE DENIAL (Louis Gibbs)
Louis,
A powerful write!
Unfortunately, that’s the world we live in...
October 27th, 2017 02:32 - Los Angeles (PoeticPsycho)
Great use of metaphors to express a so, so sad reality! Nicely done PP.
October 27th, 2017 02:25 - Rings (HChristian74)
HC,
Were you going for the brass ring with this poem? Very interesting...
October 27th, 2017 02:04 - The Morning (WL Schuett)
That is so, so beautiful!
You are so gifted with your
Poetic Pen....
October 26th, 2017 14:49 - Touch of Madness (LukeCoomer)
Your writings and artwork
show us how gifted you are!
I could never...
October 26th, 2017 10:11 - Spirit Showerings (Orchidee)
His love shall unite us...
beautiful message!
The hymn is not too...
October 26th, 2017 08:57 - Sumon the Refugee (PACollin)
The hope is HOPE itself!
He’s optimistic and hopeful.
He will carve...
October 26th, 2017 08:33 - A Happy Poem (Christina8)
I hope you’ll never go back to the dark ones...
but, as you said,...
October 26th, 2017 08:17 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
You’re welcome! It’s a happy memory for me and my hubby! The North...
October 26th, 2017 08:10 - FIVE MORE FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Love the title Michael!
Say all five, 5 or 7 times...
and you’ll have...
October 26th, 2017 07:58 - Water is Life. (Goldfinch60)
A great poem Gold
to remind us of a precious and a necessity of life!...
October 26th, 2017 07:11 - Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.)
Awesome write Fay!
This is a beyond the beyond read!
There’s a lot...
October 26th, 2017 06:57 - SPACESHIP MOON ~ A 4 5 3 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Buongiorno
Caro Amico Brian!
I do believe there are
other beings out...
October 26th, 2017 06:47 - My Secret Love (Accidental Poet)
AP,
Loving her the way you do,
she would thank the stars above, love...
October 26th, 2017 06:21 - All we can be (FredPeyer)
Fred,
The last stanza so true.
Unfortunately we get there too late...
October 26th, 2017 06:04 - Comes a Caller (HChristian74)
It hurts to be alone.
This is so sad. Our only hope is that he lived a...
October 26th, 2017 05:31 - Breaking Hero (Simple-Man87)
SM,
A poem well written!
As I read it, I could feel the struggle...
October 25th, 2017 15:58 - SAVOR THE MOMENT (Lasergraph)
So wise Laser!
Your poem is very meaningful
and well penned.
It’s...
October 25th, 2017 15:04 - You Rest in Peace Dear Friend’s Mom (Pintu Mahakul)
A beautiful tribute for your friend’s mom!
May she Rest In Peace!
October 25th, 2017 13:22 - Green Thumb (W c)
Beautiful write for a great read!
Hooray for the green thumb.
My dad...
October 25th, 2017 09:28 - Autumn Chill (Christina8)
So happy for you Christina! Go out and pamper yourself! Enjoy this sun...
October 25th, 2017 09:19 - Quenchers. (Fay Slimm.)
Unfortunately, we depend upon the fruit markets in the city to provide us...
October 25th, 2017 09:05 - Shield Safety (Orchidee)
Orchi,
A very spiritual and soothing read. The musical accompaniment made...
October 25th, 2017 08:31 - Autumn Leaves (Viv Wade)
Great write! The rhyme makes the reading glide! Enjoyed it!
As children,...
October 25th, 2017 05:00 - Somewhere in the Borderlands (HChristian74)
A History that no one should ever forget. Awesome write to remind us of...
October 25th, 2017 04:42 - Hope in the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Love the write...love the quote! There’s always hope for that ray of...
October 25th, 2017 04:26 - Quiet, so quiet (FredPeyer)
We certainly are nature’s pawn! My favorite line in this powerful write!...
October 25th, 2017 04:15 - THREE 5,7,5\'s FOR THE PRICE OF ONE (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
This makes me think of cozily sitting by the fireplace on a...
October 25th, 2017 03:54 - Drunk on Love (Accidental Poet)
Another beautiful write AP! The last stanza says it all! Enjoyed the...
October 25th, 2017 03:39 - WHEELS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Buongiorno Brian,
Enjoyed the rides from a Pram to a Cortina!
Very...
October 25th, 2017 03:30 - Broken and Beat (Jmcg)
No one should have to be alone. Love is for everyone. I hope you find...
October 24th, 2017 18:05 - The Groom (FredPeyer)
Fred,
Glad it’s imaginative! Powerful write!
October 24th, 2017 17:56 - Starchild (LukeCoomer)
Luke,
I enjoyed this read tremendously!
As a mom, I can relate to it....
October 24th, 2017 08:32 - Dancing In The Rain (Christina8)
Beautiful Christina!
Keep on dancing in the rain my lady
and the power...
October 24th, 2017 07:13 - Shore-Songs. (Fay Slimm.)
Great write, Fay!
It brings the coast to life.
I could almost see, feel...
October 24th, 2017 05:37 - HOT SPICEY PUMPKIN SOUP ! A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Buongiorno caro amico!
Sounds and looks delicious.
Will have to make it...
October 24th, 2017 05:13 - Why Don\'t Mornings Last All Day. (Goldfinch60)
Good morning to you too, ANDY!
Great write for a great read!
I’ve...
October 24th, 2017 04:54 - It’s Just a Fantasy (Accidental Poet)
AP,
Another beautiful poem!
Love the musical accompaniment!...
October 24th, 2017 04:28 - Oiled with Love. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay,
As everyone has said...a beautiful write!
I still remember that...
October 24th, 2017 03:27 - Constructive Chastenings (Orchidee)
Great message Orchi! Thank you for sharing!
October 24th, 2017 03:04 - Euphoria of the Heart (Accidental Poet)
AP,
True!! Love is many things to many people!
Yours is the most...
October 24th, 2017 02:44 - THE LITTLE THINGS (Louis Gibbs)
My structured routine has passed.
Now it’s all about how I fill
the...
October 24th, 2017 01:50 - rules (are only guidelines) (Frank Prem)
It sounds like he’s awakened from a coma he’s been in ...
...and now...
October 24th, 2017 01:40 - LIKE CORN IN WIND (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
I hope she’ll soon loosen and
remove that cap to pen her...
October 24th, 2017 01:27 - CAST IN FALLOW FIELDS (Michael Edwards)
Great painting to illustrate your poem!
I’ve had a few fallow periods...
October 24th, 2017 01:11 - Conscience (HChristian74)
Wow...that’s some list!
You are everything I see.
You haven’t...
October 24th, 2017 00:52 - I tried to write but could not (Joseph M Marion)
So sad! I hope you get what you want!
October 24th, 2017 00:39 - ESCAPE (Laura🌻)
Thank you Luke!
October 24th, 2017 00:25 - GRANDPA AND GRANDMA (Lasergraph)
Beautiful memories LG.
Grandparents are very special! Unfortunately, I...
October 23rd, 2017 18:12 - Wild Demons (LukeCoomer)
Luke,
Your illustrations are extraordinary!
Liked your writing a lot....
October 23rd, 2017 17:54 - ANGELA ~ PINK ROSE ~ An Acrostic 6 4 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Caro Amico Brian,
A beautiful painting!
An exquisite poetic tribute
to...
October 23rd, 2017 16:20 - Crestfallen Forlorn Maker Man (HChristian74)
This is an unbelievable dark and haunting piece of writing. The...
October 23rd, 2017 08:35 - Breakthrough (Ashleymello)
Yes you can! Yes you will!
October 22nd, 2017 15:19 - Remnants of Yesteryear\'s Bounty (HChristian74)
This was a fantastic read! Rich with history! This brilliant write would...
October 22nd, 2017 15:15 - Old Long Since (Jabberwocky)
Sad and relatable!
October 22nd, 2017 14:49 - My Super Sweet 16 (LukeCoomer)
Luke,
Blow off all the steam you want. I’m on your team!
A...
October 22nd, 2017 10:16 - For Those Who Wish To Read (Accidental Poet)
AP,
Thank you for the memories! The video of the Nelson boys is a treat!...
October 22nd, 2017 08:03 - Love\'s Wand. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay.
Beautiful message
for this Sunday morning!
A lot to think...
October 22nd, 2017 05:44 - GOD IS IN CONTROL ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Buongiorno e
Buona Domenica!
A beautiful sonnet
to wake up to
and...
October 22nd, 2017 05:18 - Xavier you are my reason (Spyrolove)
Sad write...but I’m glad you wrote it!
Don’t give up no matter what...
October 22nd, 2017 00:16 - Be Dedicated And Determined (Brooklyn6timesplus)
Great advice! Thank you!
October 22nd, 2017 00:06 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
Thank you Joseph !
October 21st, 2017 20:43 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
Thank you Luke. I appreciate your comment!
October 21st, 2017 17:39 - Memory of love (WL Schuett)
Tears on a pansy! This alone is poetry!
Beautiful painting to illustrate...
October 21st, 2017 13:56 - Romeo and Juliet the final curtain (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Ron,
Another masterpiece!
So sweet, loving and pleasing!
Perfect...
October 21st, 2017 13:45 - Coffee (W c)
Coffee all the way!
Enjoying my cup of coffee while reading this great...
October 21st, 2017 10:54 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
Thank you, Fay!
October 21st, 2017 09:51 - Breakdown (LukeCoomer)
Luke,
Sometimes I can’t stand being me either...especially when those...
October 21st, 2017 08:18 - This Is Not Good-bye (Accidental Poet)
AP,
So happy you brought my attention to your beautiful poem! What a...
October 21st, 2017 07:16 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
I will check it out!
Thank you for your read, your comments and the...
October 21st, 2017 07:06 - CHRISTMAS CARDS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brian,
BUON NATALE! Beautiful acrostic! The teacher in you is like...
October 21st, 2017 06:51 - Ethereal Music. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay,
You are truly a poetess in every sense of the word! Your choice of...
October 21st, 2017 06:31 - Infectious Smile (Accidental Poet)
AP,
Your poem is infectious! Kris Kristofferson’s video was a perfect...
October 21st, 2017 06:11 - Struggle (Simple-Man87)
SM,
This is heart wrenching! From a writer’s point of view, it’s...
October 20th, 2017 20:24 - All Alone (EmmaJ)
This is so, so sad!
There are so many people alone
with no one to...
October 20th, 2017 18:36 - The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60)
So beautiful and sad at the same time.
Every line has its own significant...
October 20th, 2017 02:05 - BIG BOYS LOVE CUDDLY TOYS ! SENRYU (5 7 5) (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I hate when I have to dust them off...
...but I love your TEDDY and PANDY...
October 20th, 2017 01:56 - Forgetting to Live (HChristian74)
This is so relatable! My uncle, a brilliant man...a civil engineer and...
October 20th, 2017 01:04 - THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards)
Michael,
Great poem! Short and packed with a meaningful message!
Open...
October 20th, 2017 00:47 - A GLANCE (Louis Gibbs)
That connection with one’s eyes is very powerful! Whether negative or...
October 20th, 2017 00:29 - Cracker Jacks (Harsbars12281953)
Very nostalgic! My children couldn’t wait to open that crackerjack box...
October 19th, 2017 18:06 - ALASKA (Lasergraph)
Was there a few years ago! Incredibly beautiful! The glaciers...the...
October 19th, 2017 17:47 - Destiny Road (Accidental Poet)
Great and uplifting poem!
Very encouraging!
Keep on smiling and on...
October 19th, 2017 15:52 - Pens Drawn Ready. (Goldfinch60)
This is a great one! It’s a fav
October 19th, 2017 15:32 - The Mountain (PACollin)
Been there...done that!
We’re still together...40 years later!
Wish...
October 19th, 2017 14:36 - Bliss (Christina8)
Christina,
The sweetest tribute to your marriage! Feeling the love oozing...
October 19th, 2017 08:32 - Road to Romany (Dorian Dark)
Like this one very much. Such an interesting and colorful group of people!
October 18th, 2017 22:41 - The Little Things (Kurt Philip Behm)
It’s always the little things that we sometimes don’t care or want to...
October 18th, 2017 22:23 - Vivid Penance (Simple-Man87)
It seems that today is one of those sad days for many of us for different...
October 18th, 2017 20:04 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
Thank you Santi 🙏🏻
October 18th, 2017 17:03 - Almost like a song (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Enjoyed listening to this great song. I enjoy country music! One of my...
October 18th, 2017 16:47 - Healing Hues (Orchidee)
Just read your hymn-poem. A perfect ending to a solemn day! Thank you...
October 18th, 2017 11:28 - Come At Me Bro! (LukeCoomer)
This is a great read with an awesome illustration to accompany your poem!...
October 18th, 2017 07:22 - Overwhelming (Christina8)
Yes, you will Christina! Hang in there! There were many days I’d cry...
October 18th, 2017 07:15 - REMEMBERING (Laura🌻)
Thank you Christina! Your comment is very much appreciated! He was a great...
October 18th, 2017 07:06
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