Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- robin melody (Jim56)
A lovely poem with such good flow and rhyme. It was a short as a robin...
January 14th, 2025 09:12 - The power of words (Tony36)
Wise words Tony yes words shadow lingers longer than the sun and cuts...
January 14th, 2025 09:11 - Poetry Called (Tom Dylan)
So glad you did that, poetry is a most wonderful guest. Very nicely
January 14th, 2025 09:09 - Closed Open in Bloom (Tristan Robert Lange)
A most sensual and errotic poem about flowers. The metaphor is strong and...
January 14th, 2025 09:07 - Help! There’s a dragon in my stew! (Arqios)
As a child used to look at the soup and imagine things now I eat it to...
January 14th, 2025 04:14 - $1.86 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A dollar short and a day long seems to be the tone of this poem. A fun...
January 14th, 2025 04:10 - New Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Another wondrful sonnet to your credit Andy well done
January 14th, 2025 04:03 - red (NinjaGirl)
Seeing red an old cliche is something that can happen in times of extreem...
January 14th, 2025 03:57 - Worm (RSM0812)
You have a most interesting way of pairing opposite dualities in each...
January 13th, 2025 19:42 - Blue Star (Mutley Ravishes)
Now this was a short one that sent its message in just a few words. It can...
January 13th, 2025 19:39 - Truth and lies (RSM0812)
Unique wording in this poem kept me guessing. A fun read
January 13th, 2025 19:35 - You Didn\'t Want the Photograph, Did You? (Cheeky Missy)
Too cold and hungry a most sad condition and to have fun despite this is a...
January 13th, 2025 17:28 - The evening angel (Lorenz)
Lhy Egyptian god of music Apollo for the greeks comes through in this...
January 13th, 2025 17:24 - Get Out of Dodge (Gray0328)
Gray this is deeper than the story. There is a time to leave and give up...
January 13th, 2025 15:44 - Visions of the Soothsayer (Matthew R. Callies)
You have woven into this poem deep wisdom and advice that in the telling...
January 13th, 2025 12:40 - Influenced by Woodkid (Maplespal)
A most beautiful poem of where one can be taken with the magic of music....
January 13th, 2025 12:26 - `~> Christmas Day, Far Away -Acrostic form- (Thad Wilk)
For many Christmas is not a time of cheer but of sorrow war has always...
January 13th, 2025 10:19 - Life in America (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A most amusing piece this Senryu displays both sides
January 13th, 2025 10:17 - Lasting (Cassie58)
A sad poem that has that haunting feeling. Very nicely written in very few...
January 13th, 2025 10:15 - crested (Tristan Robert Lange)
When you got to go you got to go. A fun piece my friend
January 13th, 2025 10:13 - Fallen Angel (Tony36)
Makes one wonder what an angel could do that would result in that sever a...
January 13th, 2025 08:10 - all the same (Jim56)
A great message Jim said so nicely in this poem.
January 13th, 2025 06:53 - Angels Watching Over You (Poetic Licence)
A most beautiful wish for betterment and wellness of a ailing friend....
January 13th, 2025 06:49 - SUMMER HAZE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Haunting in feel aswell as longing. It reads with an unfinished ending and...
January 13th, 2025 04:51 - January Snow (Tom Dylan)
A picture of winter painted in words that I remember from my younger years...
January 13th, 2025 04:48 - Hopeful Help (Orchidee)
Orchi another wonderful poem that again focuses on gratitude and...
January 13th, 2025 04:46 - once there was a boy (Arqios)
Cryptic This is a beautiful write that details that right of passage to...
January 13th, 2025 04:42 - Our Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
with most books I can see how many more pages I have to read so I know...
January 13th, 2025 04:25 - The ocean at early morning (Tony36)
Sounds like a place I used to live many lives ago. Beautiful images.
January 12th, 2025 20:45 - \"Wait, Wait--Don\'t Tell Me!\" (Cheeky Missy)
Morning ritual verses night and so it goes day to day. Well done Chic
January 12th, 2025 20:43 - I need to get rich (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Content may be a better word. Short and to the point
January 12th, 2025 20:39 - mind trapped (NinjaGirl)
What you describe is common to people that have suffered significant...
January 12th, 2025 16:24 - Arrival Day (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
This is a nice bridge between the last chapter and what is still pending....
January 12th, 2025 15:18 - Delightful (Thomas W Case)
Sexual, sensual, errotic it is all of these Thomas
January 12th, 2025 12:27 - The Good Fight (Bella Shepard)
In our selfish and individualistic society even technology conspires...
January 12th, 2025 12:25 - A question on time (Maplespal)
A most difficult concept to grasp. It is philisophical and you have looked...
January 12th, 2025 12:20 - ~`* Solar Eclipse *`~ (Thad Wilk)
Deeply thoughtful and though provoking the idea of gray and the looking...
January 12th, 2025 12:17 - dove love (Jim56)
Love whether with humans or animals is always a beautiful thing to...
January 12th, 2025 12:13 - nuance (Tristan Robert Lange)
Truth generally does lie between. A most thought provoking writes. Very...
January 12th, 2025 12:11 - A True Broken Heart is not from Love (Teddy.15)
Indeed it is and it pumps that life giving fluid to the brain that...
January 12th, 2025 06:33 - Natures Wonderful Residents of Africa (Poetic Licence)
This poem although apparently quite upfront makes great use of language...
January 12th, 2025 06:26 - STREETLIGHT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
You have set the scene well and I feel that I have been there, in fact am...
January 12th, 2025 04:53 - the lighthouse keeper’s watch (Arqios)
The poem resonates with me because I from time to time live on that rocky...
January 12th, 2025 04:50 - Breaking a Myth About Bad Words (Neville)
I used to hate vegtables as a child now I love them. I guess things...
January 12th, 2025 04:45 - My Live With Music. (Goldfinch60)
Very nice Andy I too love music and agree about the formula of todays...
January 12th, 2025 04:42 - What I got to do (Poetaldo)
Nice to hear someone concerned for the poor and homeless. Nicely said.
January 11th, 2025 20:12 - Broadsword My Friend, My Gentlemen (ADarkerMind)
Has the sounds of a song. The words take one on a journey through places...
January 11th, 2025 19:12 - My Black Goddess: A Tale of Passion and Desire (DLewis88)
Some men measure their virility in inches you in feet. A fun read sensuous...
January 11th, 2025 18:44 - Mother waters (Lorenz)
A poem of longing and desire that is well painted in images of a sureal...
January 11th, 2025 18:39 - fire (NinjaGirl)
Cleaning out old memories and burning them is a great image to present...
January 11th, 2025 14:07 - The Gods in Disguise (Gray0328)
Each of us our own god so why not each a god to be honored whether the...
January 11th, 2025 14:03 - People over Profit (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Greed is the driving force of humanity as strong or stronger than sex it...
January 11th, 2025 13:31 - Between the Steps (Matthew R. Callies)
Taken literally I feel I have been there and as a metaphor I am there a...
January 11th, 2025 11:56 - lifes school (Jim56)
Being graded in life\'s school of hard knocks is leaving me a bit bloodied...
January 11th, 2025 11:53 - ~> Frankenstein! - Form Acrostic - (Thad Wilk)
A fun read and well put togeather just like the monster stiched with care
January 11th, 2025 11:51 - Baby giggles (Tony36)
Yes there is something so natural and free about a baby giggle they are...
January 11th, 2025 11:49 - Fireproof (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very nice Tristan it shouts with force and rings with power. The last line...
January 11th, 2025 11:47 - spaces we inhabit: with every breath (Arqios)
Indeed it is so you can still see the spirit of Pompeii in its frozen...
January 11th, 2025 07:48 - Last mans grave (Maplespal)
Thought provoking yes women are the prototype and theoretically men may...
January 11th, 2025 07:41 - Aah-ree-man\'s Cylons (Mutley Ravishes)
Inspiring! Is there a heaven and hell for AI? If not why not? Great write
January 11th, 2025 07:36 - JIM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Post traumatic stress disorder from trauma lived is a devastating and...
January 11th, 2025 05:09 - Barely Visible Indentations (Neville)
Being coy is a very attractive attribute as is being bashful and shy....
January 11th, 2025 05:03 - A new day (NafisaSB)
You have painted a most beautiful scene of dawn and all that accompanies...
January 11th, 2025 04:56 - Consistency, I have None. (Doggerel Dave)
Please don\'t move off too far, kinda like having ya around.
January 11th, 2025 04:53 - Sir Orchi NS (Orchidee)
And a good tribute at that. Now I have three more keys to hit each time...
January 11th, 2025 04:50 - Quem me dara o paraiso (Poetaldo)
At first I thought it was a temporal father but then it became clear. The...
January 11th, 2025 04:45 - Never Blame. (Goldfinch60)
A most positive outlook and the most helpful one at that. Difficult to...
January 11th, 2025 04:34 - Endangered Candles (Dan Williams)
Cold words for a cold society. We have a self destructive nature to...
January 11th, 2025 04:29 - fingerprints (NinjaGirl)
A great run of rhyme that leave a bit of doubt regarding whether abuse, or...
January 10th, 2025 21:15 - The Vultures Will Come (Thomas W Case)
So well written Thomas your poems have grown in a growth spurt. I found...
January 10th, 2025 18:41 - ~`* Shirley Temple, The Little Princess *`~ (Thad Wilk)
Remember her films well and later in life sucessful too a diplomat. Nicely...
January 10th, 2025 18:37 - Dear Samuel T. Coleridge.... yes, Memory Lane (Cheeky Missy)
The first two sonnets seemed focused on giving and the joy it brings then...
January 10th, 2025 18:34 - Consuming (Vicecream)
A most beautiful poem that adresses the issue of gratitude and the...
January 10th, 2025 18:27 - Grass (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true it is we are all temporal and our time is short. Well written with...
January 10th, 2025 11:14 - I love women (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A very nice wording in this piece that captures my feelings as well.
January 10th, 2025 09:06 - Picnica (Tony36)
A poem that brings back many memories and a bit of nostalgia from the...
January 10th, 2025 09:05 - Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58)
Cassie this poem held a most lovely rhyme scheme and rhythm that took the...
January 10th, 2025 09:03 - reflection by the sea (Arqios)
Although on the surface this appears and well could be a beautiful love...
January 10th, 2025 08:56 - Never Enough (DLewis88)
Fellings of inadequacy take us all from time to time and I hear them in...
January 10th, 2025 08:49 - Behind the kiss (Maplespal)
In this poem I took the voice to symbolize friendship and the kiss...
January 10th, 2025 06:22 - faithful friend (Jim56)
Have had a few dogs in my time and your words ring true for each and every...
January 10th, 2025 05:58 - A Poet\'s True Worth (2) (Teddy.15)
A wonderful senryu with meaning that transforms words to art. Lovely my...
January 10th, 2025 05:56 - Couple Goals (Tom Dylan)
A lovely piece with a great message about priorities and love.
January 10th, 2025 04:52 - Majestic Marvellings (Orchidee)
Nicely done Orchi another wonderful hymn.
January 10th, 2025 04:50 - Clean Bed from \'ANOTHER COLLECTION\' (Michael Edwards)
Ah yes those childhood dreams that led to bedtime surprises and not of...
January 10th, 2025 04:45 - LOVE DYING (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
The wording and lack of punctuation in this verse leave it open to various...
January 10th, 2025 04:42 - Strange (2781)
A fun run through episodes of one\'s day and the accompanying thought...
January 10th, 2025 04:41 - Driftwood (Mutley Ravishes)
A fun read that conveys well the modern mindset and how accustomed we have...
January 10th, 2025 04:36 - Train Wreck (Rocky Lagou)
A good metaphor and the formate of the poem aided in the presentation of...
January 10th, 2025 04:34 - My Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
It is all a matter of mental state, if one is happy where one is then the...
January 10th, 2025 04:29 - shame (NinjaGirl)
Poems can be liberating to the author and at their most powerful state...
January 10th, 2025 04:24 - Even An Angel Takes Her Cigarette Breaks (Gray0328)
Up in smoke. The breath of life also the dying breath a most sensuous poem...
January 9th, 2025 14:54 - Every Night A City Sleeps (ADarkerMind)
This poem to me goes deeper than the surface of history and present of...
January 9th, 2025 11:58 - Klaus Kinsky . (Lorenz)
Dark and gothic in nature this poem gives a shiver.
January 9th, 2025 11:53 - For the Princes of the Alleys (Thomas W Case)
A wonderful poem of empathy and kindness and yes this metaphor goes deeper...
January 9th, 2025 11:49 - ~> Ralphina The Ballerina (Thad Wilk)
Cute and I can hear a little girl telling this to her dog. A fun write.
January 9th, 2025 11:14 - Twenty-Five (Tristan Robert Lange)
Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word...
January 9th, 2025 10:05 - Forges of Life (Tony36)
I hear desire in this poem a striving for betterment and a refining of...
January 9th, 2025 09:23 - Cayenne (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A splendid Haiku deep in philosophy and so well said in so few words
January 9th, 2025 07:18 - start the year a new (Jim56)
A great wish for the new year well expressed
January 9th, 2025 07:17
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