Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- What They Omit (Melancholic~Onion)
A very self reflective poem existential in nature and philisophical but so...
December 21st, 2024 09:09 - puppies are for life (Jim56)
Funny how that goes, people give dogs away a dog never gives a person...
December 21st, 2024 09:04 - The book (2781)
To[ some wicked and to others devine. The workings of the heart known only...
December 21st, 2024 09:00 - Planetarium in love (Lorenz)
A poem so sexual in its begining that I thought it was going to be +18 but...
December 21st, 2024 08:58 - Conversations From Down Under (Mutley Ravishes)
A thought that had never occured to me said in such a familiar way that it...
December 21st, 2024 08:54 - 21-12-24 (Arqios)
Caught the feeling in this poem so well expressed with memories of...
December 21st, 2024 08:46 - Signs of The Times x5 (Neville)
The less control we have over our world the more we seek to control...
December 21st, 2024 04:13 - God`s Gift To Us (Poetic Licence)
A powerful write and stated with convition. Nicely written
December 21st, 2024 04:08 - AND THE PAST TENSE IS: AWAKE (Michael Edwards)
A most clever write using the ideosynchrocies in the language. Short and...
December 21st, 2024 04:06 - Longest Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful sonnet again but being on the under side it is the opposite
December 21st, 2024 04:02 - Dark Passage (E.J. Waling)
The perils and adventures of riding out life. One is already in it so you...
December 20th, 2024 20:11 - Tomorrow Ask Me Why I Remain Confused (Cheeky Missy)
A most interesting combination of things dates and issues. A most seasonal...
December 20th, 2024 20:09 - Poverty & Peace (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
A true statement put in plain words, Well written,
December 20th, 2024 19:58 - Telescopes, Microscopes (Vicecream)
A most different point of view, Nicely written,
December 20th, 2024 19:56 - United Moral Rights (Badjanah)
I can hear the anguish in this poem it screams out for those that will...
December 20th, 2024 12:52 - Mind displays (Maplespal)
Language is the paint our tongue the brush and we print it on paper for...
December 20th, 2024 11:35 - They Are Not DRONES In The Sky! (Thad Wilk)
Some have migrated to Florida and the county uses them to monitor new...
December 20th, 2024 11:32 - Second Chances (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Another episode and on we go toward what we hope will be romance or maybe...
December 20th, 2024 11:30 - Dang Tree! (Orchidee)
Orchi have used artifical trees for years they drop needles too. After a...
December 20th, 2024 11:26 - Strong Enough (Tony36)
The best steel is forged in the hottest fire. A powerful write about...
December 20th, 2024 08:17 - love unspoken (Arqios)
Most tender and at the time most splendid in images this poem speaks to...
December 20th, 2024 08:14 - Requiem for Real (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A poem that makes one ponder. What is real and what is not. All in the eye...
December 20th, 2024 06:15 - cant buy love (Jim56)
So true Jim it is given not bought. A wonderful poem of love
December 20th, 2024 06:12 - When nature calls.. (NafisaSB)
Living in nature and with it all around me I relate. Hearing the birds in...
December 20th, 2024 04:23 - HATE IS A SOCIAL ISSUE (Gray0328)
A strong message that comes through clearly in this poem pleading for...
December 20th, 2024 04:20 - Coffee#1 Christmas Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
A most beautiful Christmas Wish written in such nice form. Lovely Andy
December 20th, 2024 04:15 - All Ears (Mutley Ravishes)
Cleverly said it makes its point in a most poetic way. Very nice
December 19th, 2024 20:45 - Christmas Ambivalence (Kerry)
A most familiar flow to this poem for this time of the year. A fun read....
December 19th, 2024 18:24 - What Is LOVE? Part.1 (Melancholic~Onion)
A valid point in that love is too amorphous a word to define, It means so...
December 19th, 2024 18:21 - I am up (Maplespal)
A fun play on words with a great meaning and most uplifting.
December 19th, 2024 14:39 - Forgiveness?? (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
As life goes on so does everyone\'s story. A good read. I\'ll be back.
December 19th, 2024 14:38 - conservation of momentum (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
You have a good point and I agree categories are made by man and to be...
December 19th, 2024 14:25 - Gift Wrap a Better Kind (St. Nick, I Cry To You) (AuburnScribbler)
A Christmas greeting or wake up call to realize what Christmas is all...
December 19th, 2024 14:23 - Constant (Cassie58)
Cassie this poem of nature and its constancy in a changing world is most...
December 19th, 2024 14:19 - 4:00am, mtn Dew, and bad decisions (NinjaGirl)
This is deeper than the first glance does tell. Every one wants something...
December 19th, 2024 14:16 - Gone a Fishin\'! -Redneck- (Thad Wilk)
A most fun read reminds me of my childhood
December 19th, 2024 12:03 - Ha! (2781)
With any luck this is not a personal poem. Wishing you the best
December 19th, 2024 10:13 - Finding the Right Words (Rebellion_in_sanity)
The last line says it all. People don\'t listen, they don\'t hear, they...
December 19th, 2024 10:10 - Droplets (Lorenz)
Wow! some great lines here (White hairs have no compassion for dead leaves...
December 19th, 2024 10:06 - Ringing in my ears (Tony36)
Don\'t we all. A great metaphor the ringing of society and its needs,...
December 19th, 2024 09:59 - Flickering Shadows (Tristan Robert Lange)
A poem of falling darkness and grim reality that shadows future hopes. I...
December 19th, 2024 08:24 - divine invitation (Gray0328)
If there were only a sense of togetherness. A wonderful poem of harmony...
December 19th, 2024 07:09 - CHRISTMAS EVE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A great spirit of Christmas poem that puts the Christ back in Christmas....
December 19th, 2024 07:08 - Heaven Waits (RSM0812)
So poetically worded it cries out. So many good lines of metaphor in...
December 19th, 2024 07:04 - poetic persona (Arqios)
We play many roles in this life and each with a different face. Very...
December 19th, 2024 04:34 - The Day Music Died. (Goldfinch60)
I was only 8 then so don\'t remember it too well but later became...
December 19th, 2024 04:26 - Mathematics of Imagination (Dan Williams)
Dan this marvelous piece is full of great lines...(the best way to get our...
December 19th, 2024 04:21 - mindless (NinjaGirl)
Overwhelmed it is easy to throw in the towel and give up. Persistence is...
December 18th, 2024 20:55 - Thought 2 (Maplespal)
What a truism for us and our society. Well said in such few words
December 18th, 2024 17:12 - Love (Doggerel Dave)
Here here my friend I could not agree more. A word used loosely and too...
December 18th, 2024 17:11 - Old Habits (Kerry)
Intentions are growing grass that is cut regularly and continually spreads...
December 18th, 2024 16:07 - Eternity (Ellen Marsell)
A most beautiful arrangement of words to describe something much deeper...
December 18th, 2024 16:04 - Can You See (Poetic Licence)
So well said, if we could only understad others motivation there would be...
December 18th, 2024 14:20 - Legacy (Cassie58)
How often I have wondered what the ground I step upon has seen in its...
December 18th, 2024 13:56 - ~* For Me There\'s Only You *~ (Thad Wilk)
A most romantic sonnet and in very good form as well. Nicely done Thad
December 18th, 2024 13:52 - Clouds, Like Pink Petals (Thomas W Case)
Thomas this one is so sexual that I felt that I was watching blue movies...
December 18th, 2024 13:50 - The break up (RSM0812)
There is a great sense of both sadness and anger in this poem. Although...
December 18th, 2024 13:46 - between sleep and wakefulness (Gray0328)
A most beautiful poetic statement of being and that inbetween state of...
December 18th, 2024 13:40 - LANGUAGE OF LOVE (Qurrathul Ain)
Another gem. We as poets strive to find the right words for emotions but...
December 18th, 2024 09:44 - A LOVE LIKE KHADIJA AND MUHAMMAD\'s (Qurrathul Ain)
This poem like fireworks explodes with magnificense and splendor. It has...
December 18th, 2024 09:40 - Sublime landscapes (Lorenz)
Deeper than the ocean mentioned, more vast than the skies, this poem has...
December 18th, 2024 09:34 - Rain (Tony36)
A new take on rain rain go away and a much more positive one at that. Most...
December 18th, 2024 09:30 - The Tome Beneath the Tinsel (Tristan Robert Lange)
Outside of the form which is wonderful its message is great as well. One...
December 18th, 2024 09:29 - Settling In (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
I have to beg your utmost pardon Shamrocker. I have read your work before...
December 18th, 2024 09:20 - forever free (Jim56)
Beautiful thoughts Jim all set in a beautiful poem of verse
December 18th, 2024 09:13 - I Must (Teddy.15)
Empathetic, kind, heartfelt, lovely, and in the spirit of true Christmas.
December 18th, 2024 09:03 - I Forgot The Way You Were (Melancholic~Onion)
Books are old friends. A lovely write and tribute to them. I love the way...
December 18th, 2024 08:57 - searching for a season (Arqios)
A wonderful work and tribute to those that grace our lives. Most lovely
December 18th, 2024 08:53 - Pure Hearts. (Goldfinch60)
A write from the heart simply put. Hard to find now days where people feel...
December 18th, 2024 04:33 - Quick Fingers (Neville)
Unlike most, your poems provoke a great deal of thought. I would call them...
December 18th, 2024 04:20 - Chaos Starting (Dan Williams)
I loved the last line particularly (then god’s repairman makes the call;...
December 18th, 2024 03:57 - A Man Raised by a Woman (Ladywithaquill)
Very nicely written the traditional role of a man in a relationship.
December 17th, 2024 19:49 - Atlantic Cracks (Mutley Ravishes)
A most interesting write about modern religious views nicely written in...
December 17th, 2024 19:45 - When You Lie Down Like That (Gray0328)
Beautiful lines expertly written resulting in a stunning image
December 17th, 2024 14:22 - The Snake that Eats its Own Tail (Vicecream)
Ouroboros the circle of life in a snake devouring its tail, birth, life...
December 17th, 2024 13:06 - Red string of fate (Starlight)
A poem of recycled love that never ends
December 17th, 2024 12:46 - Old land (Ellen Marsell)
Beautiful and so classical in nature it pulls hard at my memories and...
December 17th, 2024 10:17 - Warmth (Tony36)
Such a beautiful thought and wish. Lovely
December 17th, 2024 10:15 - Memory of absence (Lorenz)
\"your fingers touching me
through the cold mirror ...\"
a most...
December 17th, 2024 10:14 - $0.01 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
What a thought does God give out credit cards? I know, that was not the...
December 17th, 2024 10:10 - Shadows2 (E.J. Waling)
Very nice John the words like single dorplets fall accumulating into a...
December 17th, 2024 07:52 - autumn chofu (Arqios)
Beautiful a dance of words painting a lullaby of decent from heights to...
December 17th, 2024 07:48 - The Promise (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
Enticing work with internal rhyme as well. We\'ll have to see what happens...
December 17th, 2024 06:59 - memories (Jim56)
Good advice and upbeat with rhyme Loved it Jim
December 17th, 2024 05:23 - Like Butterflies in Snowstorms (Neville)
The complexity and different layers of your poems astounds me, They mirror...
December 17th, 2024 04:23 - Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence)
The message is received and heard I have felt it but even this time can...
December 17th, 2024 04:15 - First Kiss (RSM0812)
This had in many ways a very classic feel to it. Lovely enamored sensual...
December 17th, 2024 04:11 - Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Buddy Holly one of my old favorites another that died too soon. A very...
December 17th, 2024 03:56 - LIFE IN REARVIEW MIRROR (Rebellion_in_sanity)
A great analogy yes the future is imagination and the past is seen in a...
December 17th, 2024 03:51 - Skepti-schism (Mutley Ravishes)
Clever and well written. When you pour a beer from a height it froths and...
December 16th, 2024 19:22 - I\'m Going to Miss Jail (Thomas W Case)
Comparison with what we are used to gives us our measure of good and bad....
December 16th, 2024 18:31 - Composing For Beethoven (Gray0328)
Gone but not forgotten a master of emotion that left behind music that...
December 16th, 2024 15:25 - slipping slowly (NinjaGirl)
Dark and sad it speaks of uncertainty and a need to be oneself. To find...
December 16th, 2024 15:21 - Little Things (Cassie58)
Wonderful Cassie I too have such items around the house. Loved the poem
December 16th, 2024 15:02 - [ Our Sea Of Love ] (Thad Wilk)
A poem of rejoicing and jubilation at finding love. Beautiful and
December 16th, 2024 11:14 - The twilight of time (Lorenz)
So true when the flow, clocks, traffic all stop you have indeed reached...
December 16th, 2024 11:11 - Fortress of Mountains (Tristan Robert Lange)
A sad message of how we as people take nature out of its place and put in...
December 16th, 2024 09:39 - Gave you my heart (Tony36)
A sad poem of betrayal that pulls at the heart Tony
December 16th, 2024 09:37 - in the mood for love (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏)
Those if only\'s wishes linger in many of our minds. So short it says so...
December 16th, 2024 09:35 - love and care (Jim56)
A most beautiful thought that I hope kindles a fire in the hearthes of...
December 16th, 2024 09:33
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