Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The Weight We Carry (Gray0328) \"Deep inside him, he hears the hum of a boy’s dream\" a great line. All...
  December 24th, 2023 14:04
• Party Line (Gray0328) This one brought back many childhood memories when we had an old black...
  December 24th, 2023 13:47
• If Tomorrow Doesn\'t Come (Gray0328) I loved your opening and great images \"Where the raccoon is but a hot tar...
  December 24th, 2023 13:42
• candle love (Reynaldo Casison) This one is so short and its imagery is so clear that like that light it...
  December 24th, 2023 06:22
• Pure Disbelief (Gray0328) The image is indelible in the mind and as all good poems are marked by...
  December 24th, 2023 06:20
• Is It The Tree Or Me? (Mtrotter1) I liked the retrograde form of this poem getting younger not older. I too...
  December 24th, 2023 06:18
• Blessings To All. (Goldfinch60) Thanks for such a bright Christmas message Gold. It rings with brightness...
  December 24th, 2023 06:16
• evergreen (Asrealastheycome) I liked the opening \"I walk a fine line between dreams and reality\" so...
  December 24th, 2023 06:14
• What He Really Wants for Christmas (Neville) That\'s what I had on my Christmas list, how did you know? Great write...
  December 24th, 2023 06:11
• The poet (Illia) A great homage to a writer. Nicely done
  December 24th, 2023 06:06
• Destined meeting (Calliope) This poem struck some chords deep inside. It reads smoothly and I loved...
  December 24th, 2023 06:05
• Windy Dreams (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Great images and metaphors. I particularly liked \"windy dreams\"
  December 24th, 2023 06:01
• The Velveteen Hills (Jaxxie) A great portrayal of the seasons, whether in weather or in life seasons...
  December 24th, 2023 06:00
• Prophecy Proclaimed (Orchidee) Great timing with this poem or hymn. On the advent of Christ\'s birth the...
  December 24th, 2023 05:57
• Family Fulfillings (Orchidee) A timely and great story Orchi. I kind of feel that Joseph didn\'t get the...
  December 23rd, 2023 13:02
• Happy Birthday Chet (Goldfinch60) Every time I hear that someone has a birthday I am reminded of how much...
  December 23rd, 2023 06:35
• Love\'s Infliction, My Inflection (Pop64) This required two readings and was worth much more. A heartfelt plea of...
  December 22nd, 2023 12:04
• Understanding Silence. (Goldfinch60) I always enjoyed the sound of silence. I think that I do understand...
  December 21st, 2023 04:34
• Scripture Sureties (Orchidee) Well done Orchi
  December 20th, 2023 09:04
• Questions of another type (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave I appreciate the review
  December 19th, 2023 21:54
• A Hell for Words and Lines that Wander (Thomas W Case) What a great metaphor. I hope that you didn\'t step on this one. Bugs have...
  December 19th, 2023 07:25
• A Babe\'s Birth (Orchidee) Timely and well said Orchi
  December 19th, 2023 07:21
• Life\'s Exam. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold a great analogy and metaphor
  December 19th, 2023 07:18
• I Need To Visit France (Thomas W Case) Some dreams can be unfulfilled and frustrating.
  December 14th, 2023 12:29
• The Cats Played. (Goldfinch60) I love your poems on music, they remind me of how much I love music.
  December 14th, 2023 12:24
• Grindavíkurbær (Eugene S.) I could feel the angst in this piece. Anxiety is high now days. Good
  December 14th, 2023 12:21
• Caught Out Cryptically (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. Just kidding. Oh no I didn\'t mean it wasn\'t a good...
  December 14th, 2023 12:14
• Mary Celeste. (Goldfinch60) I remember this story. Puzzling and ghost like. Enjoyed the story.
  December 6th, 2023 07:02
• SERBIA: CHANEL 22 ON BOARD (Natalie Gladmir) A pleasant trip whether in reality or in the poem itself. A most...
  December 6th, 2023 06:57
• Wisdom of old (1) (Doggerel Dave) I didn’t think anyone retired anymore. I did but keep working so what...
  December 3rd, 2023 07:50
• Advent Anticipation (Orchidee) A timely write for this time of the year well done Orchi
  December 3rd, 2023 07:43
• Like a Butterfly Melting (Thomas W Case) The obsession of love is well expressed here. Nice images.
  November 26th, 2023 15:43
• the devils love (Joshi) A well written and composed, powerful poem with references to many archaic...
  November 25th, 2023 09:29
• N-tropy (Arqios) English a funny non phonetic language. N-joyed it
  November 25th, 2023 08:54
• pitcher plant (Arqios) Wise and it seems almost Taoist and a little Zen
  November 25th, 2023 08:53
• Exodus Explainings (Orchidee) Always liked the story of Moses. Good write Orchi
  November 25th, 2023 08:17
• Computing Starts. (Goldfinch60) I too remember before computers and when I was in college I was doing...
  November 25th, 2023 08:15
• Love Of A Woman. (Goldfinch60) So true and such a wise write in so few words Gold
  November 21st, 2023 12:38
• I am Wondering (Cedrick) So well done.
  November 21st, 2023 12:36
• Fever (Doggerel Dave) So glad that there will be an encore. A scary story indeed but adressed...
  November 21st, 2023 12:32
• Creaks (2781) So well worded and written.It gives pause and brings on many thoughts. Age...
  November 21st, 2023 12:27
• New And Old (Orchidee) A great message that interestingly enough I had incorporated a piece of in...
  November 14th, 2023 12:13
• Fallen (Teddy.15) A poem so full of sorrow and missing someone. It touches the heart
  November 14th, 2023 12:10
• One Day More. (Goldfinch60) Each day is special and so is this poem
  November 14th, 2023 12:08
• Guilt of Longing (Firefall) A strong poem with a sense of loss.
  October 26th, 2023 11:12
• Painter of the Sky (Rhmn_7) A beautiful picture painted in words. Very nice
  October 26th, 2023 11:09
• Simple Seeking (Orchidee) Good write Orchi
  October 26th, 2023 11:05
• Sheep In Uniform (Teddy.15) At first I thought that you were referring to so many different episodes...
  October 17th, 2023 08:51
• No one (Sorenbarrett) Thanks for the read Teddy your comments always humble me.
  October 17th, 2023 08:43
• Wishful Thinking (Pop64) A great message that is long overdue in happening. In wars and battles it...
  October 17th, 2023 07:25
• Blue (Novaa) Blue a two edged sword. The color or the sky and sea my favorite of all...
  October 17th, 2023 07:20
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) You might want to check out my poem \"Mockingbird\"
  October 17th, 2023 05:21
• Dawn Flies Away Like A Mockingbird (Thomas W Case) I like mockingbirds and have watched them from mating, egg laying, raising...
  October 17th, 2023 05:19
• Significant, We (L. B. Mek) \"Crimson skies when I cry\" A wonderful line. \"As our...
  October 16th, 2023 05:19
• Digging Up Roads. (Goldfinch60) This seems to be a common experience. In Florida they always wait until...
  October 16th, 2023 04:30
• Digits (2781) If he does I hope that he knows what he\'s doing. It seems that all past...
  October 15th, 2023 09:53
• Into The Wrinkles of The Great Moon. (Teddy.15) Great poetic lines \"the shadows of the moons wrinkles \"i.I can\'t help...
  October 15th, 2023 06:58
• ANOTHER FACE 🎭 (ChrisLyn🕊) Fake friends have always been a problem but it seems that they are more...
  October 14th, 2023 04:43
• That Day In 1066. (Goldfinch60) Well I have to say I\'m glad I wasn\'t there, I hate showers of arrows. I...
  October 14th, 2023 04:36
• Make Haste To Hastings! (Orchidee) Happy birthday Hastings. I\'m glad I\'m not that old. Don\'t like fighting...
  October 14th, 2023 04:26
• Bombarded (L. B. Mek) I have often questioned is it just more visible with media in every place...
  October 13th, 2023 07:48
• Memories Of Brubeck. (Goldfinch60) This was a flash from my past, growing up with this sound. A lovely...
  October 13th, 2023 05:18
• Proverb Pieces 2 (Orchidee) True your name is what you are and training your children to follow with...
  October 12th, 2023 05:44
•   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) An upbeat thought and sense of freedom to wonder where ever we like even...
  October 12th, 2023 05:03
• The Walk Up The Hill. (Goldfinch60) I feel these words, having just returned from walking through the forest....
  October 11th, 2023 09:02
• Nothing Clever To Say (Bella Shepard) I don\'t like to see you go but have a wonderful time and return...
  October 10th, 2023 16:16
• Prayer Petitions (Orchidee) Yea didn\'t we fight them once? A nice write Orchi. You always seem to...
  October 10th, 2023 12:52
• It’s not ok, it will NEVER be alright! (L. B. Mek) Behind you all the way L.B. What takes real courage is to be nonviolent in...
  October 10th, 2023 04:53
• Dare I Dream? (Pop64) Dreams are the better part of life allowing us to live things that...
  October 5th, 2023 16:49
• Caged Bird (Teddy.15) Freedom comes in many forms and we often construct our own cages. No...
  October 5th, 2023 04:39
• Sowing And Reaping (Orchidee) We usually reap what we sow, not always is the same medium or way but in...
  October 5th, 2023 04:34
• Simple Understanding. (Goldfinch60) Such a mystical but at the same time real message. I agree music is a...
  October 5th, 2023 04:30
• Will you make me to wake up? (Iqra Khan) Stubbornness can be seen as perseverance, all negatives have a positive....
  October 4th, 2023 07:43
• The Truth (Christina8) A dark poem with a light at the end of the tunnel. Abuse is sad it...
  October 4th, 2023 05:51
• Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60) The music of a relationship may be the best symphony or opera ever. It...
  October 4th, 2023 05:43
• Left to Die (Pop64) It is somehow classical reminding me somewhat of Poe. Its hauntingly dark...
  October 3rd, 2023 14:10
• Propitiation Peace (Orchidee) Another good hymn that needs a songbook or should I say hymnal?
  October 3rd, 2023 05:08
• An Ode To The Coffee Bean (Teddy.15) It is true whether black, expresso, or cappuccino the key word is good....
  October 3rd, 2023 04:30
• Critique? (Pop64) So many times I have experienced this. At first I offered constructive...
  October 2nd, 2023 08:43
• fifty & Waning, witnessing rap’s Decimation (L. B. Mek) I have been biased in the past with a generally all inclusive love for...
  October 2nd, 2023 05:32
• Chaos Disorganised. (Goldfinch60) Must be something that the church feels would be bad for their image....
  October 2nd, 2023 04:15
• Sincere Seeking (Orchidee) Very reassuring Orchi. A good write.
  October 1st, 2023 08:32
• An Ode To The Pizza Margherita (Teddy.15) You\'ve made me hungry at an unusual hour. I have to say this is one of my...
  October 1st, 2023 06:14
• Twilight Three Ways. (Goldfinch60) Magical, nicely done Andy I too am there
  October 1st, 2023 04:29
• Wise Ways (Orchidee) Man\'s ways always end in death. Good write Orchi.
  September 29th, 2023 08:33
• In My English Garden (Pop64) This has special meaning for me in that both the rose and dahlia were...
  September 29th, 2023 05:49
• An Ode to Spaghetti (Teddy.15) I love spaghetti sometimes just with butter and garlic sometimes with just...
  September 29th, 2023 05:07
• Hanging on Love (Pop64) \"they cup the moon within its hands, the wild night it tames.\" Great...
  September 28th, 2023 11:57
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) So true Bobby self respect and self love come before love or respect for...
  September 28th, 2023 05:16
• Try this for size: (Doggerel Dave) Did she do something to Fido? My dog took a piece out of me when I was...
  September 27th, 2023 20:20
• Grave, Indeed (Pop64) A definite plea of desperation and urgency. Air is number one on the...
  September 27th, 2023 12:51
• Do Shut Up Sometimes... (Orchidee) I love rambling thoughts they inspire creativity but get little done. Slow...
  September 27th, 2023 05:34
• The Death of Great Music (Teddy.15) I often wonder if they were all to live longer along with Janis Joplin,...
  September 27th, 2023 05:19
• In the Wake of a Wish (Neville) A wonderful metaphor at many levels. Every once in a while such a metaphor...
  September 26th, 2023 05:03
• The First Rose. (Goldfinch60) So true Gold, a wonderful reframing of a feeling of loss to a feeling of...
  September 26th, 2023 04:11
• Washed Away (Teddy.15) I\'ve heard of lightning striking, whirlwind relationships and love going...
  September 25th, 2023 13:50
• of Wisdom #2 (L. B. Mek) There is always one, I know because I have been there. I was the one who...
  September 25th, 2023 05:46
• Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful point. Competition does not mean animosity but instead...
  September 24th, 2023 05:23
• Life Changed Forever (Doggerel Dave) Not sure what to say. It could change my life forever then I would have...
  September 24th, 2023 05:19
• Covenant Comfort (Orchidee) Forgiveness yes. God knows I need it. Good write Orchi
  September 23rd, 2023 07:00