Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• bad dreams (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) I like the use of negatives in this poem to trite cliche to something...
  January 20th, 2025 04:39
• My Very Own Nevada (Teddy.15) You are right Teddy I remember this poem well from the last posting and...
  January 20th, 2025 04:33
• Appetite For Identification (Mutley Ravishes) Clever wording, a wonderful metaphor leaves the feel of boiling emotions...
  January 20th, 2025 04:27
• Seventies Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love on into the sunset a happy ending to an old western movie. A...
  January 20th, 2025 04:24
• Foolish Love (Dan Williams) Regrets echo in this poem time can not be reset and life goes on. There...
  January 20th, 2025 04:20
• Shortcut (NinjaGirl) If you\'re not dead rage against the dying light. The strength of the mind...
  January 19th, 2025 17:11
• Orpheus Rebooted (Thomas W Case) A different Orpheus and in this metaphor one is drug to the underworld....
  January 19th, 2025 13:30
• Magical Melody, Melancholic Remedy (Salvia.S) Much joy is derived from our thoughts, wishes, fantasies and dreams. Very...
  January 19th, 2025 10:44
• Puerto Rico! (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) This one requires a great deal of thought.
  January 19th, 2025 10:33
• My Inner Inhibitions (ADarkerMind) Metaphor upon metaphor in this poem with great images and lines \"as cold...
  January 19th, 2025 10:31
• ~> Your Local News Reporter! (Thad Wilk) I\'m so glad that no pigeons were harmed. A most fun read and I hate bird...
  January 19th, 2025 10:18
• The Battle (Tony36) Life is a battle and one we are forced to fight every day. It is hard to...
  January 19th, 2025 10:10
• unexpected snowfall (Tristan Robert Lange) Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing...
  January 19th, 2025 08:00
• Melting Snow (Cassie58) Cassie you have outdone yourself with this write. It beams with poetic...
  January 19th, 2025 07:56
• With Groundhog Day Two Weeks Awa.... (Cheeky Missy) I thought at first it was the topic and imagry but then realized that...
  January 19th, 2025 07:52
• twinkling stars (Jim56) A poem that takes me back to when we could see the stars. With pollution...
  January 19th, 2025 07:49
• Sunday School Afternoons (Neville) This poem captured the nostalgia of the past put in the perspective of the...
  January 19th, 2025 05:16
• An impossible Quest (Teddy.15) Live like love has many definitions. We can exist without love but is that...
  January 19th, 2025 05:12
• Of Sprites and Other \"Nonsense\" (Cheeky Missy) Years ago had a glass coke bottle thrown at and bounce off my windshild...
  January 19th, 2025 05:07
• The Calm (RSM0812) The rhyme, near rhyme and irregular internal patterns of rhyme in this...
  January 19th, 2025 05:00
• new day (Arqios) The duality involved in this haiku is amazing itself. So few words in a...
  January 19th, 2025 04:48
• Walking By My River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Andy you have outdone yourself with this sonnet. It is one of my favorites...
  January 19th, 2025 04:26
• Buffering (Mutley Ravishes) Definately a tongue twister try saying quickly three times. A fun read
  January 18th, 2025 20:37
• Your pictured view (Maplespal) Reminders often bring sadness. Few greater reminders than a picture. A sad...
  January 18th, 2025 20:35
• f words (NinjaGirl) Flexability, focus, function, friendship, freedom Ninja a most fun read
  January 18th, 2025 15:26
• Wild Horses (Teddy.15) A beautiful thought written wonderfully with great verse.
  January 18th, 2025 14:10
• ~> It\'s Not Easy, -Sonnet- (Thad Wilk) A well worded and pleading poem of love. Very nicely done
  January 18th, 2025 11:21
• riverbeds (Tristan Robert Lange) A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed....
  January 18th, 2025 11:20
• Field of Flowers (Tony36) A great metaphor and poem Tony nicely done
  January 18th, 2025 11:15
• Commitment Call (Orchidee) Very nice Orchi a great hymn
  January 18th, 2025 11:14
• Flight Benefits (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Capitalism based on greed is a profit first operation and there is no...
  January 18th, 2025 07:58
• everyone has love (Jim56) Lovely and true even in detail. Love is different in each and everyone. We...
  January 18th, 2025 07:55
• bicnic py the sea (Arqios) Crypticly clever. A run fead. Thanks for sharing
  January 18th, 2025 07:53
• At The Risk of Reaching Out (Neville) A truism spoken poetically in so few words. Lovely Neville
  January 18th, 2025 05:31
• Mozart Yet Again. (Goldfinch60) Music is such a strong emotional force a universal language. Lovely Andy
  January 18th, 2025 04:41
• Dust (Doggerel Dave) Dust like a fine patina creates an ambience of age and destinction. lol A...
  January 18th, 2025 04:39
• Gland Goes On A Rant (Mutley Ravishes) Immediately I ask myself which gland, then I look at the shape of the poem...
  January 18th, 2025 04:34
• pain (NinjaGirl) Again a dark write and it ends leaving the reader concerned. Does pain...
  January 17th, 2025 19:21
• Thought 3 (Maplespal) Very nice. Man, woman, child even animals wild we are all living...
  January 17th, 2025 17:30
• When All Else Fails (Gray0328) It used to be that we could fix things that broke or install things but...
  January 17th, 2025 13:04
• Wisdom Within Water (Salvia.S) Change and adaptability should not be under rated. Very nicely written
  January 17th, 2025 12:57
• ~> Chameleons (Thad Wilk) Yellow is the principle color they take. Although some turn green with...
  January 17th, 2025 12:55
• Passion\'s Paradox (Tristan Robert Lange) This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to...
  January 17th, 2025 12:53
• Old rucksack (Lorenz) This poem speaks to me Lorenz this old sack a friend of life\'s journeys...
  January 17th, 2025 12:47
• Bobby O. (Bellaperf) Fills me with sadness and will miss him terribly but his words will linger...
  January 17th, 2025 12:42
• Morning Stillness (RSM0812) Senual and by metaphor sexual it speaks to the seduction of the night....
  January 17th, 2025 12:37
• Still ill (Tom Dylan) I feel the illness in this poem it strikes hard and there seems no escape....
  January 17th, 2025 12:34
• The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36) A great metaphor in this poem Tony it seems to me to lament the passing of...
  January 17th, 2025 12:28
• CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios) So many directions. My first take was anesthesia after an operation that...
  January 17th, 2025 12:26
• There\'s Nothing Like the Pick-Up Line: \"I\'m Running A Fever of 104°\"...Is There?! (Cheeky Missy) Work stories are about all I miss of the office or work site. They grow in...
  January 17th, 2025 10:58
• Time\'s Sweetest Tales (Salvia.S) This poem holds a sweetness to it and reads well. Nicely crafted
  January 17th, 2025 05:59
• pet friends (Jim56) Animals are more sincere than people. A wonderful write about the...
  January 17th, 2025 05:38
• damn you networks (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) What good is a Safari if you can not see the animals? Have had this happen...
  January 17th, 2025 05:36
• A Rose Without Thorns (senryu) (Teddy.15) This could be any one of many but I think I know who. Well written and...
  January 17th, 2025 05:28
• At the Very End of Darkness (Neville) This poem has echoes. It resounds with internal rhymes and near rhymes...
  January 17th, 2025 05:22
• Healthy Body. (Goldfinch60) Truer words never spoken Gold a person that eats well, exercises, sleeps,...
  January 17th, 2025 05:15
• Spazzm\'d (Mutley Ravishes) A few lines that pack a punch. Lovely
  January 16th, 2025 21:22
• I Just Want to Swim (Thomas W Case) A series of thoughts here all tied together. Nicely woven the setting of...
  January 16th, 2025 17:14
• Plentiful Providings (Orchidee) Generous indeed he has multiplied your seed giving you KP. A fine write...
  January 16th, 2025 14:05
• Highgate Cemetery (Cassie58) Bring together history, and different cultures and faiths all in a single...
  January 16th, 2025 14:02
• Rosy Lea (Teddy.15) Clever use of words in this Teddy. A most fun read
  January 16th, 2025 13:58
• Kisses To Die For! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A fun read and it makes the mind run wild with who might show up to this...
  January 16th, 2025 11:47
• The House at Demon\'s Alley (Tristan Robert Lange) This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they...
  January 16th, 2025 10:15
• You (Tony36) Very nice Tony many words of wisdom here
  January 16th, 2025 08:12
• new day (Jim56) A wonderful write Jim and yes each day is a new start and we choose what...
  January 16th, 2025 08:09
• Aliens are coming! (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Another fun read. Makes one think and wonder are we not all aliens?
  January 16th, 2025 07:28
• forgotten soul (NinjaGirl) Ignored possiblly but never forgotten. Good or bad our memories remain...
  January 16th, 2025 05:57
• Flushed (Neville) Deeply sensual in literal and metaphorical ways double entendre give even...
  January 16th, 2025 04:31
• time’s no friend (Arqios) You have accomplished the near impossible describing the intangible in...
  January 16th, 2025 04:27
• Start The Day. (Goldfinch60) Good advice bringing yesterday into today is not helpful. Yes true again...
  January 16th, 2025 04:22
• Hell (Dan Williams) Open heart surgery of the emotional type. Great imagry in this poem
  January 16th, 2025 04:18
• The sunflower (NafisaSB) A single voice can cause a major change. The power of one is often...
  January 16th, 2025 04:13
• Silence (E.J. Waling) A poem of limits the ends of the spectrum. Framed in zero and infinity...
  January 16th, 2025 04:10
• Hormoans (Mutley Ravishes) Didn\'t know that words played with themselves, being a homophone...
  January 16th, 2025 04:08
• Do You Believe in Magic? (Gray0328) There are a lot of good lines in thes poem. \" the stale smell of last...
  January 15th, 2025 13:54
• Beauty of Living (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) This was quite cryptic but after reading your note it became quite clear...
  January 15th, 2025 13:48
• Lovers Fate (RSM0812) A very warm and sensual poem that is heartwarming through its...
  January 15th, 2025 13:44
• Healing Help (Orchidee) Now this is a different style of hymn Orchi. Most interesting very nice
  January 15th, 2025 10:49
• ~. > I Am An Anteater! (Thad Wilk) Now I have to say I have seen a lot of critters but an anteater I have...
  January 15th, 2025 10:47
• Bitter Sweet (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) I liked this final chapter that was realistic and poetic. Your rhyme and...
  January 15th, 2025 10:45
• Lady warrior (Tony36) A poem of a female warrior. There are many and not on the battlefield of...
  January 15th, 2025 10:41
• To my kind: It\'s time (Maplespal) A haunting write and a different point of view presented in this poem....
  January 15th, 2025 10:34
• PAIN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Poor self esteem can lead to feelings of being looked down on and feeling...
  January 15th, 2025 10:30
• The Sound of Rain (Tristan Robert Lange) Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention...
  January 15th, 2025 10:25
• issues (Jim56) Ruminating on issues is a big problem for most people. I always say if...
  January 15th, 2025 10:21
• spaces we inhabit: pre-dystopian reverie (Arqios) What were once face to face social ties now facebook connections. People...
  January 15th, 2025 10:16
• Right On Time (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another chapter complete and I guess I\'ll have to come back for the end....
  January 15th, 2025 04:15
• Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60) There are too many of them out there looking for money to suck or...
  January 15th, 2025 04:06
• Purgatory (Dan Williams) Thought provoking. \"only paper mâché morals.\" a great line. A most...
  January 15th, 2025 04:02
• I\'m Sorry (DLewis88) Dark. The pressures felt from others are felt in this poem and the...
  January 14th, 2025 20:04
• The Birds of November (Thomas W Case) Time such a relative thing. A powerful write that leads to reflection
  January 14th, 2025 20:02
• Beef Hot Dawgs at Midnight....oh! (Cheeky Missy) Used to live next to a family that owned a hotdog factory. They would...
  January 14th, 2025 17:29
• The Clowns of the Evening News (Gray0328) Scam and spam, take the ignorants money while you can. Fake news social...
  January 14th, 2025 13:34
• the Unfathomable (NinjaGirl) Metaphors here as well as a direct hint at past pain still present. Sad...
  January 14th, 2025 13:30
• ~`` But, I Am A Tiger! - Tiger Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) Tigers are not my choice of a wrestling partner. A fun read my firend
  January 14th, 2025 11:24
• Broadsword My Friend, My Gentlemen (ADarkerMind) Cryptic as always but powerfull lines. nicely written
  January 14th, 2025 11:20
• The right (RSM0812) This poem reads well with great rhyme and flow as well as a thought...
  January 14th, 2025 09:15
• We are (Maplespal) A great thought and a philisophical poem as well. Nicely worded
  January 14th, 2025 09:14
• robin melody (Jim56) A lovely poem with such good flow and rhyme. It was a short as a robin...
  January 14th, 2025 09:12
• The power of words (Tony36) Wise words Tony yes words shadow lingers longer than the sun and cuts...
  January 14th, 2025 09:11