Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Changes (Maplespal) Wow! Love is moving on, forgiveness is moving on. A most beautiful write...
  January 9th, 2025 06:18
• One Windy Morn (Teddy.15) A wonderful write my friend a poetic acknowledgement of the protection...
  January 9th, 2025 06:14
• Praise Proclamation (Orchidee) More protestant than chatholic this hymn is a reminder to give credit for...
  January 9th, 2025 06:12
• MY DAD (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Love can grow over the years as our understanding grows as well. A truely...
  January 9th, 2025 06:08
• Love and Hate (Poetic Licence) It is said that the one that can not hate you can not love you. So true...
  January 9th, 2025 06:07
• An Evening Out. (Goldfinch60) Grandchildren are the joy of life and I often say that if I could have had...
  January 9th, 2025 06:01
• a grasp away (Arqios) Well written this cryptic poem in its depth speaks to me of the power of...
  January 9th, 2025 05:58
• \"....Off With A Shot! And Running---\" (Cheeky Missy) How quickly time does fly if one is having fun and how slow it does drag...
  January 9th, 2025 05:44
• forget me not (NinjaGirl) This poem dives deeper into the psychi of memory, The desire to be...
  January 9th, 2025 05:18
• something only Winter can bring (Vicecream) The use of opposites that are viewed in a most positive way to create a...
  January 8th, 2025 14:11
• The Heart of a Small Town (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87) Very nostalgic this poem brings back memories of a simpler life, slower...
  January 8th, 2025 14:10
• Spring Day (Marigold02) Although about a terrible illness there is great beauty in this poem. The...
  January 8th, 2025 14:06
• The Moon (M. Ali) A great write about our closest neighbor and satelite. Nicely worded and...
  January 8th, 2025 14:03
• The Leviathan of Leisure (Gray0328) The hights of luxury dipped in debauchery. Technology for the wealthy...
  January 8th, 2025 14:01
• Odelia’s Decision (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another happy ending. Well done.
  January 8th, 2025 13:58
• Come Back, It! (Mutley Ravishes) It remains one of the most used words in the language. Thing comes in...
  January 8th, 2025 09:55
• Answers Undiscovered (Dan Williams) The question of all is whether one can find or be better and the...
  January 8th, 2025 09:51
• LIMERICK 136 (Michael Edwards) A great limerick of a scam and it is obvious that one only need add water....
  January 8th, 2025 09:48
• Bones (RSM0812) Powerful meaning in this poem disguised under a thin layer of metaphor it...
  January 8th, 2025 09:45
• You Changed Like the Weather (Brian Otucho) A great line the last line and title of the poem it changes the meaning of...
  January 8th, 2025 09:42
• WINTER SKY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I loved the stanza \"As infants dream Such wondrous dreams Old men in...
  January 8th, 2025 09:40
• The fold lifts - he\'s there in the mist (Amy Michelle Mosier) It is the last line of this poem that changes its meaning and leaves the...
  January 8th, 2025 09:36
• Boundless Love (Matthew R. Callies) Passion and its memories that remain prevade this poem of desire, passion,...
  January 8th, 2025 09:34
• ~> Natures Own Poetry! (Thad Wilk) A beautiful image, a beautiful thought and a beautiful poem
  January 8th, 2025 09:28
• between (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful...
  January 8th, 2025 09:26
• The Tower (Tony36) A fun story but not for children. As a metaphor I take meaning in this to...
  January 8th, 2025 07:33
• take away today (Jim56) This one Jim was not only good advice and upbeat but very clever in its...
  January 8th, 2025 07:30
• tears you could have cried (Arqios) Like most of your writing this poem requires thought and rereading to...
  January 8th, 2025 07:24
• Cesium\'s glow (Maplespal) I loved the development of this poem and the last lines that emphasize the...
  January 8th, 2025 07:19
• Which Did You Choose (Poetic Licence) With two eyes is see both evil and good, with two ears I hear both evil...
  January 8th, 2025 04:33
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) Another great hymn to start my day, Thank you for sharing Orchi
  January 8th, 2025 04:30
• Out (2781) Sometimes we trie too hard to control what is happening around us and...
  January 8th, 2025 04:25
• I don’t go out at night (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Another wonderful senryu that deserves much contemplation. Nicely worded
  January 8th, 2025 04:22
• Our Lakeside River. (Goldfinch60) Optimism in full gear and even with water all about swans are seen. Also...
  January 8th, 2025 04:17
• Mostly Bitter (Dan Williams) A difficult subject handled well. Nicely stated in most poetic form
  January 7th, 2025 20:54
• Measures (Teddy.15) Carefully worded this poem speaks the truth in deep wisdom. Our love takes...
  January 7th, 2025 17:07
• The Poet\'s Bride (Framed Mirror) A clever play on words that becomes a verse that can be taken many ways....
  January 7th, 2025 13:54
• paranoid (NinjaGirl) Which is better to think that no one is after you when they are or think...
  January 7th, 2025 13:37
• Claustrophobic Indifference (Rebellion_in_sanity) The only person that knows and cares is yourself. So true it is. A...
  January 7th, 2025 13:34
• roasted rice cake (Rin) All gods are jealous. A good write with a hidden meaning. Well constructed...
  January 7th, 2025 13:07
• Final Retreat (Tristan Robert Lange) The contrast of light and dark where a black hole beyond the event horizon...
  January 7th, 2025 10:17
• ~> Mother Nature - form Rondeau- (Thad Wilk) Beautiful and bursting with life it shines a sun beam of light over...
  January 7th, 2025 10:12
• Dawn (Lorenz) The fiercness of nature and the uncertainty of infant man trying to hold...
  January 7th, 2025 10:10
• The Chest (Tony36) I thought ore or maybe something more. A most fun and intriguing write my...
  January 7th, 2025 08:43
• The Over-thinking, late-night drinking, aspiring writer, insomniacs Club (Tom Dylan) Love that song it resonates with so many. Sleepless nights are few for me...
  January 7th, 2025 08:42
• sun visit (Jim56) Jim your poems always bring a ray of sunshine and brighten the day I thank...
  January 7th, 2025 07:13
• One of those days (Maplespal) Wondering if the broken broom is a metaphor or literal or both. Waiting is...
  January 7th, 2025 07:11
• FOODBANKS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) No it doesn\'t is the answer. But the people should care and do something...
  January 7th, 2025 06:06
• tarkovsky-esque (Arqios) Words to give thought.I particularly loved \"people together, alone\" so...
  January 7th, 2025 06:03
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) The human condition is a social one and one of our fears is being alone....
  January 7th, 2025 04:17
• Praise Profession (Orchidee) Another powerful hymn about a powerful subject nicely written Orchi
  January 7th, 2025 04:14
• Tilt (Mutley Ravishes) Similarities in all things and we may say as well something is in there. A...
  January 7th, 2025 04:11
• Watson And Homes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) I needed that Andy a smile to start the day. Anytime is a good time for a...
  January 7th, 2025 04:04
• shattered (NinjaGirl) A most interesting thought deeply philosophical highly existential and...
  January 7th, 2025 03:58
• onlyfans girls (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) This one was both humerous and true and that is hard to do. A great one...
  January 6th, 2025 20:25
• treasure hunt (Rin) Often the treasure others are looking for is not the treasure that is...
  January 6th, 2025 20:23
• Odelia’s Deeper Purpose (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Life is full of questions and as soon as one is answered another takes its...
  January 6th, 2025 20:21
• Not Such a Silent Night (Thomas W Case) Gritty and raw this one paints the picture in grafiti
  January 6th, 2025 20:18
• The wandering wind and fate (Domilla) Hope follows hardships and one is never lost. Most lovely with a...
  January 6th, 2025 13:23
• ~> My Pussycat Eulie! - Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk) It is difficult to do a poem in this rhyme scheme especially if it is more...
  January 6th, 2025 13:19
• rejected (Tristan Robert Lange) Lovely Tristan let me humbly introject this I value friendships I always...
  January 6th, 2025 13:16
• Musings on a morning walk in the snow (Bella Shepard) We live in the here and now and all else fades as footsteps in a snow...
  January 6th, 2025 13:14
• An Ode to the Day (Rebellion_in_sanity) There is always tomorrow and its promise. A most romantic poem with ending...
  January 6th, 2025 08:35
• The Herculanum night (Lorenz) And from dreams arise great passions that are often lost in the quenching...
  January 6th, 2025 08:33
• Beach Stroll (Tony36) A romantic poem with a romantic setting. New love like assending waves...
  January 6th, 2025 08:30
• A Seamstress\'s Courage (Arqios) In this a hint of Dickens and a tale of two cities. Heroism is always...
  January 6th, 2025 08:03
• Nocturnal Awareness (Gray0328) Both a literal picture of beauty painted in wonderful images as well as a...
  January 6th, 2025 05:35
• Wasps (2781) A fun read and do I detect a metaphor in the gist of this poem? I have had...
  January 6th, 2025 04:14
• The Time Has Come. (Goldfinch60) As the old saying goes Andy \"Home is where the heart is\" and so I hear...
  January 6th, 2025 04:07
• Galaxease (Mutley Ravishes) Wonder what the sky would look like from the heart. A fun read that gives...
  January 6th, 2025 04:05
• Blizzard (Thoughtless) You cast an image that revives old memories of days in the north and cold...
  January 6th, 2025 04:03
• Video Games! (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Aye aye AI, What a fun write this one was. Too real for comfort
  January 5th, 2025 20:28
• Wild Curls (NinjaGirl) This poem makes my skin crawl with revultion, not from the poem but the...
  January 5th, 2025 18:04
• Natures Taunt (RSM0812) Nature vs nature and natuer vs man great metaphors
  January 5th, 2025 15:44
• Star Shining (Orchidee) Good write Orchi and timely too
  January 5th, 2025 13:43
• \" Buy American Made! \" (Thad Wilk) A fun read with a message and a sense of patriotism. A great bit of fun
  January 5th, 2025 11:42
• Palermo (Lorenz) Dark and somewhat gothic in nature this poem paints a picture of...
  January 5th, 2025 10:36
• Sometimes Too Wide The Sky (ADarkerMind) Cast in metaphor and symbolism is the feeling of gentleness. Very nice
  January 5th, 2025 09:46
• The Power of Forgiveness (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A story based on hope and faith with the belief that faith will make you...
  January 5th, 2025 09:43
• UNKNOWN VICTIM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of courage and pride well worded in a most classical sense that...
  January 5th, 2025 09:41
• Chocolate cake (Tony36) This poem has a definite child like quality to it with a sense of pleasure...
  January 5th, 2025 09:40
• Hidden Words, Revealed Truths (Tristan Robert Lange) Cleanly done words of wisdom indeed. This reflects a great deal of work....
  January 5th, 2025 09:34
• I\'ll be going home (Maplespal) A poem of moving on and the transience of existence in one state or...
  January 5th, 2025 07:27
• country song (Jim56) Nothing like music to alter the mood. Country music is known for its...
  January 5th, 2025 05:50
• A Storms Gonna Come My Way (Teddy.15) And so a poem is born out of a storm. It is these storms that I love to...
  January 5th, 2025 05:48
• The Flight Home (Gray0328) Traveling with children always an adventure. A most identifiable read that...
  January 5th, 2025 05:44
• here and there (Arqios) This poem and principally its title left a feeling of care free. I live in...
  January 5th, 2025 05:03
• Are The Words Still Healing (Poetic Licence) A most intersting format that makes good sense for the theme of the poem....
  January 5th, 2025 04:58
• Random My Foot (Mutley Ravishes) A good question I thought that they were one and the same. Well worded...
  January 5th, 2025 04:54
• unreadable english poems (Rin) Some poems are undecipherable others are not identifiable, there are those...
  January 5th, 2025 04:42
• Another New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Great message Andy every day is a new one and a fresh start.
  January 5th, 2025 04:30
• Wet Orchids (Thomas W Case) Very poetic Thomas
  January 4th, 2025 19:31
• Daley double (2781) Some wise words here. Very nicely done
  January 4th, 2025 15:47
• daughter love (Jim56) There is nothing like being a parent and it carries special feelings....
  January 4th, 2025 15:44
• The land of marble statues (Lorenz) A sense of nostalgia goes with this poem and a longing for a return of the...
  January 4th, 2025 15:40
• Swans A Plenty (Cassie58) A most beautiful picture you paint here Cassie. Nature at its best and a...
  January 4th, 2025 15:36
• Watching the rain (Maplespal) I normally like the rain, unless I have to go out in it. It does produce...
  January 4th, 2025 15:34
• The Abbanded School (Tony36) Decay takes its way in all things. Entropy rules. We may say it is sad but...
  January 4th, 2025 15:31
• -$7.27 in my bank account (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) Been there done that and said in a great Haiku
  January 4th, 2025 15:28
• Guess THIS Beats All.... (Cheeky Missy) It is great to hear sonnets about common daily experiences. I have done my...
  January 4th, 2025 15:27