Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Pointing Fingers (Eugene S.)
Getting away with it and pointing blame on others is a common game....
March 30th, 2025 13:16 - Playing with my Mind (TheWanderer_and_his_Ms.Reverie)
Feeling used is never good and in this poem i get the message that you are...
March 30th, 2025 13:14 - New beginning (Starlight)
A plea for love and being cared for in metaphor is at the root of this...
March 30th, 2025 13:11 - Trapped in your affection (Nicole Pritchard)
Love a strong desire to be valued as much as one values is not always met....
March 30th, 2025 13:09 - The Death of Us (Weirdo)
Being abandoned by the one you love is a cruel revelation of the worth of...
March 30th, 2025 13:07 - Get started on stopping (Hzugman)
In this poem is the recognition that continued thoughts can fatigue,...
March 30th, 2025 13:04 - The Flicker Of Hope (Hargun Kaur)
Hope is the last thing to die they say and so in this poem as well. A plea...
March 30th, 2025 10:51 - Red, White, and Drifting (Thomas W Case)
A striking image colorful and symbolic as well contrasts with the desire...
March 30th, 2025 10:50 - The Alchemy of Shadows (TheInnerLens)
A Sun Tzu tactic of using an enemies strengths against them. A poem that...
March 30th, 2025 10:48 - Paralysis (Damaso)
Metaphors that speak silence, now that\'s a deep thing to ponder. Somber...
March 30th, 2025 10:45 - Tailand (RSM0812)
Strong in metaphor this poem speaks of a country deciding its destiny at...
March 30th, 2025 10:42 - Sailing on The Flying Dutchman (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Reminiscent of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean the metaphor for...
March 30th, 2025 10:39 - Unfulfilled love (Neilton)
Writing from another perspective is great practice in understanding more...
March 30th, 2025 10:35 - 3 for thee (Maplespal)
Although disjointed these three poems seem related. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 08:57 - God (Patriciapicciocchi)
this could well be a scripture or a proverb. Well written
March 30th, 2025 08:54 - When the Sky stood still ([email protected])
What a great write this is. It sends its message in story and metaphor as...
March 30th, 2025 08:53 - Catch the Horizon... (Aradhya)
This poem has a feel to it that casts a spell. Well imaged and nicely...
March 30th, 2025 08:49 - 500,000 (Tony36)
A poem felt. I have a military family as far back as I know and have heard...
March 30th, 2025 08:48 - Poetry for Plants (Demar Desu)
Depending on what we mean about consciousness I agree and such a nice...
March 30th, 2025 08:45 - Another Eclipse (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Belief and faith are projected in this poem. In its brevity it sends its...
March 30th, 2025 08:44 - An Abrupt Visitor (Tristan Robert Lange)
It comes for everyone big or small, young or old, rich or poor it is the...
March 30th, 2025 08:42 - The rose garden (Lorenz)
Another wonderful poem of poetic beauty with colorful images that paint...
March 30th, 2025 08:04 - Passion For Poetry (Ajon4wheels)
I like the image of a tree of poems. Very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:45 - happy mothers day (Jim56)
A mother\'s day wish a bit ahead of the season but very nicely said
March 30th, 2025 05:43 - Control (Alis Dream world)
Much metaphor and symbolism here that is spiritual in nature. Lovely
March 30th, 2025 05:41 - The Mirror and the Window (Gray0328)
A poem that has seduced me into a fave. It mysteriously has biblical...
March 30th, 2025 04:33 - GENOCIDE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Somber and dark this poem speaks of the shadow cast by memory of the past....
March 30th, 2025 04:27 - Dance in the dark (Amethyste)
An image cast in so few words. Very nice
March 30th, 2025 04:26 - The universe is a Jellyfish. (Yazz)
A most interesting simile that leaves a shiver. I have seen jelly fish but...
March 30th, 2025 04:25 - Haikus and tankas (Reynaldo Casison)
Each beautiful in its own way, my favorite is the last that I find...
March 30th, 2025 04:22 - Life “In remembrance of my Auntie Precious ” (Kayewaye)
A call out to one missed and gone. Lovely
March 30th, 2025 04:20 - Creation to the Cross (Olive Anderson)
Acknowledgement of greatness that surrounds us. A lovely write
March 30th, 2025 04:18 - That\'s a man (Cedrick)
Poetic words of part of what it takes to be a man. Very nicely written
March 30th, 2025 04:14 - Antwerpen, 1995 (Arqios)
A picture painted well that might be a metaphor for oneself as well. How...
March 30th, 2025 04:06 - A Night Forever Remembered. (Goldfinch60)
Choral music a true sign of cooperation and unity where the whole is...
March 30th, 2025 03:53 - Sleeping in the Mountain (Rrodriguez)
Picturesque and filled with great images. Loved the nature painting.
March 29th, 2025 19:58 - Anger (Pamela)
A fun twist on the feeling of anger. Most feel that emotions are not able...
March 29th, 2025 18:26 - Let Me (Alex PB)
Questions unanswered but being unanswered is the answer. A very good write
March 29th, 2025 18:24 - Dead Men Do Talk (Anthony Hanible)
A mystery to family. Some donate organs without family knowing. A thing...
March 29th, 2025 18:22 - I know a place of silence (Amy Michelle Mosier)
A most beautiful description using wonderful images to paint the scene. A...
March 29th, 2025 16:12 - Echoes of longing (Nicole Pritchard)
We cling to hope especially in times most desperate. A lovely depiction of...
March 29th, 2025 13:20 - Calmed down (Amethyste)
There is nothing like the calming influence of another be it a mother,...
March 29th, 2025 11:52 - No, I am not Faust after Semen Kirsanow (Ksey_Gan)
A most interesting presentation of selling one\'s soul for love. Or should...
March 29th, 2025 11:51 - The Experts (GeekSusie)
A wonderful message. If you don\'t have a better idea don\'t criticize,...
March 29th, 2025 11:44 - Trice is Such a Fun Word, Isn\'t It Though? (Cheeky Missy)
So many good words with a T tis, thee, thrice, twas. till on and on but...
March 29th, 2025 11:10 - Dream or Wake (RefugeInRain)
And so it is with most of us. A poem that is so identifiable. Well done
March 29th, 2025 11:06 - Wall (Damaso)
Numbers and letters have colors in the mind that blend into a picture of a...
March 29th, 2025 10:00 - Hidden darkness (Patriciapicciocchi)
A poem that begins and ends in darkness upon which is the focus. Very nice
March 29th, 2025 08:26 - Rest (RSM0812)
A plea for peace and raises questions of how peace is obtained. Cleanly...
March 29th, 2025 08:25 - Brother Bare (Dara Ó Rinn)
This poem requires more than one read. It is deeper than the surface and...
March 29th, 2025 08:23 - unsafe at any speed (Tristan Robert Lange)
This one started from zero and continued to pick up speed as it plummeted...
March 29th, 2025 08:21 - Portals To Forever (E.J. Waling)
Mind boggling that there is infinity at one end and at the other and in...
March 29th, 2025 07:27 - A thing I do (Maplespal)
Imagination knows no bounds and with it one can rationalize almost...
March 29th, 2025 07:24 - Vortex of love (Tony36)
A lovely poem of the permanence of love and its value. Nicely worded Tony
March 29th, 2025 07:06 - Con-Flix (Mutley Ravishes)
A thought that one must ponder and while pondering things grow worse. A...
March 29th, 2025 06:33 - believe in angels (Jim56)
A poem of hope and belief that is always bright and happy. Nice write Jim
March 29th, 2025 06:32 - Pizza Parties (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
We live in a disposable world where new is valued and old is discarded....
March 29th, 2025 06:30 - I had a wrong impression Of him (Poetaldo)
How do we tret others and what do they suffer. A metaphor
March 29th, 2025 05:25 - Fleeting Hope in the Eternal Wave (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Touching and a mixed feeling of sadness and hope the thrill of being...
March 29th, 2025 05:23 - HONEYSUCKLE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A sense of sadness pervades this poem of passing. There is a feeling in...
March 29th, 2025 04:48 - Deep Sea Music ([email protected])
Everything has its place in the cycle of life and we often forget or...
March 29th, 2025 04:47 - Vicissitude (Garth Rakumakoe)
At the most basic level we are all the same and all will die as the...
March 29th, 2025 04:42 - Move forward (NafisaSB)
Take the cards you are dealt and make the best of them I get from this...
March 29th, 2025 04:40 - A Million (Lewisgale mental hospital)
Misinformation whether out of self interest or ignorance is still...
March 29th, 2025 04:38 - Consumerism Mind Control (Demar Desu)
Must be another telemarketer, or my credit card company . Another fun
March 29th, 2025 04:36 - The poetess and her words (Pukur)
We all dream, hope, wish, desire, eternity and here it is put into words.
March 29th, 2025 04:34 - The grave of Leningrad Blokade Vivtims (Ksey_Gan)
Somber and dark it speaks from the grave of the forgotten and lost. Nicely...
March 29th, 2025 04:31 - Lost (Mik)
Greed drives the machine that devours in gluttony with no regard for self...
March 29th, 2025 04:29 - The Dance (Steve Goldenfort)
Clever wording in this poem give it a sense of life and project the...
March 29th, 2025 04:27 - Post Clarity (Coracaodacripta)
I a language of flowers a message is planted. Nicely written
March 29th, 2025 04:25 - Doing absolute zero endeavors (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
An anxious tale of fear for future. Too often such fear pervades our lives...
March 29th, 2025 04:22 - Anima (Lorenz)
March 29th, 2025 04:13 - Anima (Lorenz)
In metaphor a real woman I\'ve met yet in reality symbols that have left...
March 29th, 2025 04:13 - post-tempest chews (Arqios)
Acceptance is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. It is an angel heaven...
March 29th, 2025 04:05 - One life in my name (Domilla)
The sea is a great metaphor for many things and no less so here. Water one...
March 29th, 2025 03:55 - sharp metal (NinjaGirl)
Literal or metaphoric it resounds with pain. Pain and concern. Why do we...
March 29th, 2025 03:52 - Create Yourself. (Goldfinch60)
A great message Gold for all to hear. Nicely worded
March 29th, 2025 03:45 - Umm yea (Trix)
A call for reunion and return to past unity. Very nice
March 28th, 2025 18:50 - Hooky (Mutley Ravishes)
A poetic call that seems not responded.
March 28th, 2025 18:48 - Darsi (Amethyste)
Erotic and sexual this poem calls out for closeness
March 28th, 2025 18:46 - Pogo (Damaso)
An interesting metaphor the pogo stick and bouncing from one place by...
March 28th, 2025 17:03 - to love so deeply (Peculiarly Lauren)
One great love is hard to overcome. A wonderful write
March 28th, 2025 17:00 - I will always (Maplespal)
A beautiful patriotic write and well done
March 28th, 2025 15:26 - In Memory of Russian Pop Star Maya Kristallinski (Aleksey dragan)
A beautiful tribute to a star. Lovely write
March 28th, 2025 15:25 - Don\'t go (Bam)
A plea of love said in few words but still powerful
March 28th, 2025 14:22 - Lost In A Dream (Kurt Philip Behm)
Deeply philosophical, great questions that have no adequate answers. Once...
March 28th, 2025 12:56 - So Still The World (ADarkerMind)
Each read is like another glance at a Picasso the angles, the colors, the...
March 28th, 2025 12:13 - j (Danastanic)
Distance makes the heart grow fonder and that can be physical or emotional...
March 28th, 2025 11:56 - I\'m a star! 🌟 (Pineapple_pizza018)
Self confidence? A fun read we all wish to be a star at something.
March 28th, 2025 11:51 - untitled (for now) (Ace Bunting)
The age old question of what makes us different from all others and...
March 28th, 2025 11:49 - Went the Wrong Way (Lewisgale mental hospital)
Wrong decisions, wrong choices all lead to consequences. Nicely said
March 28th, 2025 11:46 - Life,who am i (Pamela)
An existential crisis to the max and the resolution postponed until...
March 28th, 2025 11:44 - Sleepy Sleep Sleeping (Anthony Hanible)
I\'ll take this as metaphoric and indeed with such emotional injury one...
March 28th, 2025 11:42 - In the Merry Month of--Oops! (Cheeky Missy)
An epic journey through the day from snow to blue skies. Once again a...
March 28th, 2025 11:40 - Post-Scientific Method (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem opens doors to the mind. So many that believe in ultimate truth,...
March 28th, 2025 09:15 - Contemplation (Lorenz)
There are a lot of deep thoughts bred from images in this poem. A...
March 28th, 2025 09:06 - Oh Robin (RSM0812)
Such a beautiful image but I feel that there is a metaphor here as well....
March 28th, 2025 09:02 - Amor I love you (Poetaldo)
A great sense of gratitude of what one has and is given. Very nicely done
March 28th, 2025 08:59 - King Of Pop (Ajon4wheels)
A well performed action admired and acknowledged. Full of great imagery...
March 28th, 2025 07:58 - Tinkering (Tom Dylan)
Young emulate models watched maybe not on the same things but on others. A...
March 28th, 2025 07:54
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