Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Daft Obsession (Orchidee) It\'s all a trick for AI to recognize its own kind and has nothing to do...
  March 20th, 2025 13:57
• Guiltless Death (MKS) Intriguing comparisons and thought provoking ideas in this poem. Lovely
  March 20th, 2025 13:01
• give & take (Gray0328) A clever write with a message wonderfully delivered in question form...
  March 20th, 2025 12:59
• Pretty Colours (A piece of luggage) Loss in this poem leaves feeling hopeless and dark. Sad
  March 20th, 2025 12:57
• Irreverent (Coracaodacripta) Lack of trust does interfere with deep relationships in present day...
  March 20th, 2025 12:54
• Circling The Square (Kurt Philip Behm) As the song of Me and Bobbie McGee says I would trade all of my tomorrows...
  March 20th, 2025 12:52
• COMFORT ZONE (ChrisLyn🕊) Balance is always the key. A great poem about finding it. Nicely done
  March 20th, 2025 12:49
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀)
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• Dear Fathers, (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Wow! such great advice to fathers. Being a father I can see the need for...
  March 20th, 2025 12:07
• The Ghost in the Dog Tag (Rebellion_in_sanity) Casualties of war are not only bodies but minds and they are not buried...
  March 20th, 2025 12:03
• Fanny (Lorenz) Subliminal references to many classic\'s books and music. Nice work.
  March 20th, 2025 09:39
• Moments of Tranquility (Elias H.F.) A great twist on the idea that adversity breeds creativity here...
  March 20th, 2025 09:35
• Speechless (Pineapple_pizza018) Speaking up rather than staking speechless. A great message sent.
  March 20th, 2025 09:33
• Sculptor, I\'m not your sculpture (Juwaireeyah) A desire to be oneself and run one\'s own life. A realization that others...
  March 20th, 2025 09:28
• In the Box (Tristan Robert Lange) Such a thought that many have shared but now put to words and questioned...
  March 20th, 2025 08:17
• On The Cusp Of Pure Darkness (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A great poem of existential value maybe it is not the home but the company...
  March 20th, 2025 08:14
• my little friend (Jim56) A Jim I can only imagine what is this little friend. Knowing your love of...
  March 20th, 2025 06:42
• The Collective (Tony36) Ah the dilemma individualism and collectivism. A great poem pulling for...
  March 20th, 2025 06:38
• What path (Maplespal) A wonderful write of beauty overlooked by many, stories told, a world to...
  March 20th, 2025 05:54
• Sometimes I wish to be (Adiii) A poem a child would love with all the animal names and rhyme. A fun read.
  March 20th, 2025 04:32
• Speeches Freedoms (RSM0812) Words of wisdom offered but not heard. Indeed nature itself is the...
  March 20th, 2025 04:29
• déjà brew (Arqios) This is not referring to Kopi luwak coffee is it? lol This write requires...
  March 20th, 2025 04:26
• Bacterial Warfare (Mutley Ravishes) I heard that it is now a war crime and outlawed by the Geneva convention....
  March 20th, 2025 04:21
• I Wait (E Naughton) Word play in this poem where stillness reigns a thought provoking write.
  March 20th, 2025 04:18
• Spring (also known as vernal) equinox arrives March 20th, 2025 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Lunar it is. They say shoot for the moon and indeed this one does. A...
  March 20th, 2025 04:17
• Last Spin\'s Echo (TRIGGER WARNING: Self-inflicted death) (Matthew R. Callies) The short and choppy breaks enhanced the racing thoughts and progression...
  March 20th, 2025 04:12
• Be careful (Poetic Dan) Expectations are seldom met. Voiced in this poem now a new expectation...
  March 20th, 2025 04:09
• Fall Of Tyrants (Mohammad Younus) The poem of a liberator nicely worded
  March 20th, 2025 04:06
• UPON THE SHORE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A metaphor for life sailing the seas and fate is in our the captain\'s...
  March 20th, 2025 04:03
• The First Day Of Spring. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful sonnet to spring Andy. The wording and images created evoke...
  March 20th, 2025 03:47
• Black Rose (Alex PB) A poem of proposal and love. Nicely stated
  March 19th, 2025 20:03
• Capitalism in Crisis (Demar Desu) A good question that remains to be answered. Well said
  March 19th, 2025 20:01
• The Mirror in the Mist (TheInnerLens) A poem full of beautiful images and a play on words used at the end to...
  March 19th, 2025 20:00
• Pawing At Nightfall (A Boy With Roses) A feeling of loss and desperation. Well written
  March 19th, 2025 18:00
• Come Back Mojo (Thomas W Case) A great write that pulls at the brain caught in the metaphor unraveling...
  March 19th, 2025 17:58
• Ancient Thought (E.J. Waling) We are our past just as one ring in a tree forms around another. Much of...
  March 19th, 2025 16:09
• Reborn (Juwaireeyah) Rebirth is just that letting go of the past and starting new. A lovely
  March 19th, 2025 16:06
• A shield of silence (Anabasova) Water and fire quite the combination only lack earth and air to be...
  March 19th, 2025 16:04
• Wot You Doin\' On \'Ere? (Orchidee) I\'m 60% water Orchi. Hey you started posting latter in the day thought I...
  March 19th, 2025 16:02
• The mystery box (Nicole Pritchard) Very nice this poem holds secrets hidden and to be solved. Very nicely
  March 19th, 2025 15:59
• My eternal bundles of joy (Neilton) A poem dedicated to cats that before I got to the end seemed for children...
  March 19th, 2025 15:57
• The lament of The Russian Inmate after Arkadi Severni (Ksey_Gan) This poem carries the feel of Russian writing, I\'ve read Tolstoy,...
  March 19th, 2025 14:59
• ANGER !! (Jan bach) A poem of the power of anger that needs an outlet. Nicely stated
  March 19th, 2025 14:55
• Sitting in class (3nd3r_Dr4g0nt) Clever and a great write about not judging others. Well done
  March 19th, 2025 13:55
• Countdown To Armageddon (Kurt Philip Behm) This requires thought and is well spoken
  March 19th, 2025 12:08
• Can I call you? (Molly Delaney) A poem of mixed relationship that defines itself over time. Nicely done...
  March 19th, 2025 12:07
• the aching pedestal (Gray0328) The glorifying of war, destruction, hate, revenge, pain on TV a spot of...
  March 19th, 2025 11:06
• Fake (RSM0812) A bite cryptic this poem speaks to falseness and our inability to see it....
  March 19th, 2025 11:04
• Blandishments eroded invaluable necessary viz life savings of mine videre licet alms (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Many metaphors here as well as pop references such as music. Lovely
  March 19th, 2025 11:02
• The corridor (Lorenz) The treat of future and the hope to lye in green meadows. Here is the...
  March 19th, 2025 10:58
• The Hippogriff\'s Meadow (Matthew R. Callies) So nicely rhymed and metered it tells a mythical story in great imagery...
  March 19th, 2025 10:06
• Riosin and Riordan Update! (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Shamrocker you are an original. You are one of the few that brilliantly...
  March 19th, 2025 09:57
• Nature\'s Palette (Salvia.S) A most beautiful painting of nature you give in this poem. Funny that I...
  March 19th, 2025 09:54
• Her (Tony36) Haunting is a good word for this poem. A poem of violence, betrayal, death...
  March 19th, 2025 09:52
• Please stay (Bird In Red) A most comforting poem of another type of love and security. A beautiful...
  March 19th, 2025 09:50
• Catalyst (Tristan Robert Lange) I find it most intriguing your painting with letters meaning (the use of...
  March 19th, 2025 09:48
• Canadian I am (Maplespal) When I was small if one wanted to designate something as cheap or poorly...
  March 19th, 2025 06:03
• too much too little (TTEUK) A poem of extremes. How to moderate becomes the question, how to regulate...
  March 19th, 2025 05:59
• Escape (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Pulling from modern genre this poem speaks with power and anger of not...
  March 19th, 2025 05:57
• Whispers at Dawn (Whats write for me) Set in a new frame of Biblical verse the words Carpe Diem ring out. Nicely...
  March 19th, 2025 05:55
• Membership of One (Tom Dylan) Embers of memories still glow beneath the ashes. Warmth still alive from a...
  March 19th, 2025 05:53
• INNER EYE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
  March 19th, 2025 05:49
• INNER EYE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem leaves feelings of the core of fear where nightmares begin. An...
  March 19th, 2025 05:49
• Peace (2781) Some famous words of warning nicely woven into this poem that reads...
  March 19th, 2025 03:35
• Life – The Unscripted Stage (Job Welime) A chip off the old Shakespeare block where all the world is a stage....
  March 19th, 2025 03:34
• George Escram (MKS) A wonderful poem about fear and its paralyzing aspects but how in reality...
  March 19th, 2025 03:31
• unveiling (Arqios) Beautifully rhymed and metered it also sends a poet\'s message. So smooth...
  March 19th, 2025 03:29
• What Is Life Together? (Goldfinch60) A most beautiful recognition making for a lovely poem. All nicely stated...
  March 19th, 2025 03:24
• peering into my soul (Pilisydo) Most of us strive for recognition and to leave a mark. This poem echoes...
  March 19th, 2025 03:18
• Stress (Jennybee89) A motivational poem that gives good instructions and relates what works...
  March 19th, 2025 03:16
• Awaken, O Humanity (Mohammad younus koul) A call for peace this poem speaks of war\'s horrors and appeals for...
  March 18th, 2025 20:01
• If Only It Were Real (Kaelyn Jade) Not every movie, book or poem can end happy. This is a poem of a wish and...
  March 18th, 2025 19:59
• Silencio (Falcon_mn) It is the wording of this poem that gives it beauty. Wonderful choices of...
  March 18th, 2025 19:54
• Cement Blocks (Anthony Hanible) Somehow the box seems to be a coffin. It gives me feelings of Poe\'s Tell...
  March 18th, 2025 18:21
• Putin non gmo gluten free cheese on the ritz as a celiac to follow (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Given the date of manufacture, are you not sure that this should be past...
  March 18th, 2025 17:09
• Hide and seek (Pineapple_pizza018) Could be a child\'s rhyme but I think it is meant for older people. The...
  March 18th, 2025 16:00
• We\'ll Clean the Mess (Ladywithaquill) A very inviting poem of union and its joint benefits well written and with...
  March 18th, 2025 15:58
• Simple joys (Nicole Pritchard) What is simple is generally right and what is right is generally simple is...
  March 18th, 2025 15:56
• Too Soon... (Framed Mirror) Pruning is a useful action with plants and people. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 12:40
• The Saga of the Russian Civil War Part 1 after  Edward Bagritski (Ksey_Gan) Quite the story as a metaphor and with such a touch that it seemed Russian...
  March 18th, 2025 12:17
• A women or a flower (RSM0812) A poem full of similes and great comparisons of women and flowers. Nicely...
  March 18th, 2025 12:08
• Souls (Lorenz) Such juxtapositions of old and new and black snow is the example of purity...
  March 18th, 2025 10:50
• Spring Rain (Kurt Philip Behm) When the language becomes too colorful it draws a different type of crowd....
  March 18th, 2025 10:47
• Conscious sexual engagement advancement (Demar Desu) A good idea I think I\'ll steal. A fun read
  March 18th, 2025 10:45
• Prodomal (Agantuk) Quite an image you present in these few lines. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 09:47
• Surrounded by Stones (Tristan Robert Lange) You already advised that it can not be interpreted and yet my mind keeps...
  March 18th, 2025 09:10
• Stories to tell (Tony36) A head full of fantasy in this poem. Lovely Tony
  March 18th, 2025 07:40
• That’s What it Looks Like (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Loved the message and more still your creative rhyme in this poem it reads...
  March 18th, 2025 07:10
• Goodbye (Natalie Heisey) A poem of anger, hate and revenge showing its power in images. Nicely done
  March 18th, 2025 07:07
• garden sun (Jim56) Another of your bright poems of nature that lighten the day but in this...
  March 18th, 2025 05:39
• Manifested & I confide (Maplespal) These both have a feeling of distance and loss of missing someone dear....
  March 18th, 2025 05:35
• Nearly Home (Part.3) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A continuation of the story as not only noted in the title but the poem...
  March 18th, 2025 04:27
• BENIM ASHKIM (Simurgh) The meter and wording of this poem give it an eastern flavor and it seems...
  March 18th, 2025 04:25
• Winner Takes All (Mutley Ravishes) I always loved word play and here it is at its best. A marvelous weaving...
  March 18th, 2025 04:21
• She’s Tired (Chris M 352) Personification well used in this poem to mislead the reader until the...
  March 18th, 2025 04:19
• SURRENDED ARMY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A vision of defeat and possibly a metaphor as well most wars take...
  March 18th, 2025 04:18
• Stormy Sea (Orchidee) A wonderful hymn Orchi as a child in church remember singing \"Peace be...
  March 18th, 2025 04:11
• Another Weekend By The Sea Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Very nicely crafted Andy a most beautiful piece
  March 18th, 2025 04:04
• whale-watching season (Arqios) This one for me was ingenious. My mind reaching out for connections sees...
  March 18th, 2025 04:02
• the wardrobe (Pilisydo) We often keep souvenirs of items that serve as triggers to our memory....
  March 18th, 2025 03:55