Comments on community poems by germanamericanchurch
- Loser (Germanamericanchurch)
The strength that fades into loss
May 8th, 2023 23:06
- The Underwearless Day (Germanamericanchurch)
Don’t have underwear on still:) primitive style
January 21st, 2023 17:51
- Bad Weed (Germanamericanchurch)
Glad you liked it :) thank David Nichols for his research- university...
September 21st, 2022 18:04
- The deep (Benjie the salad)
Nice voice :) fluid and unique
October 1st, 2021 16:21
- The Mushroom Man (Germanamericanchurch)
Exactly what the meaning in the writing, are we made of the mushroom ? or...
September 23rd, 2021 02:26
- This Giant House (Germanamericanchurch)
Bears traps take extra finesse
September 21st, 2021 01:52
- Whatever (Blue Poet)
Very nice the, dream to now we drink is a fitting to a lost future,
Now...
June 30th, 2021 16:30
- The Crescent Alter (Germanamericanchurch)
The point to this poem is that shamanic ritual can be suburban as well as...
June 30th, 2021 11:31
- Liar (Germanamericanchurch)
Yeah just moved on to a new street always wonder who your neighborhoods...
May 10th, 2021 02:34
- The Organic Fertilizer (Germanamericanchurch)
Bless the medicine
May 8th, 2021 15:22
- Build (Madman)
Foundation is everything for sure
March 30th, 2021 11:44
- In the know (Olivia.)
New is good if it’s not a new terror - new house feel pretty great...
March 30th, 2021 11:42
- Renegade (Scary-mary)
Explore - inner nasa
March 30th, 2021 11:03
- miniature house (Germanamericanchurch)
It’s not about having too many babies, but being still a baby having...
March 30th, 2021 10:58
- Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave)
Like it - Told like a riddle
March 30th, 2021 10:55
- Fat Gus (Brimelow)
Like it
March 29th, 2021 23:58
- The Cigarette (Germanamericanchurch)
Lost a friend over his denial of cigarettes but the irony is that shamanic...
March 9th, 2021 17:25
- Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54)
Wow - true tribute:)
October 22nd, 2020 17:59
- Sleepless night (Myself and me)
Touching - we are social beings
October 22nd, 2020 17:56
- Chasms.. (Fay Slimm.)
We are but a bat colony that has gen golden custard hair at the helm -...
May 8th, 2020 18:24
- Being human (Thewayiwrite)
New concept very original - emotions are hard - but not real as rain can...
May 8th, 2020 18:19
- A Different Kind of Love (Evergreen)
Really like the style of your romantic poetry it isn’t generic in...
February 13th, 2020 11:18
- The Corona (Germanamericanchurch)
Thanks been working a federal building at night and the thought of...
February 13th, 2020 11:13
- Tortured Mind (Poetic Dan)
Nice flow :)
December 20th, 2019 14:40
- Kowee Creek (Germanamericanchurch)
Yeah nature is part of us - and our story
December 14th, 2019 15:52
- Smokey vagina (Germanamericanchurch)
Holy moly that’s a Smokey story
December 5th, 2019 17:49
- Smokey vagina (Germanamericanchurch)
Got the idea from a lady that was smoking after having 1/4 lung removed
December 5th, 2019 17:49
- Student loan (Germanamericanchurch)
Sweet thanks guys the vacuum dance brings on inspiration
December 5th, 2019 02:55
- Governor clear cut (Germanamericanchurch)
governor Dunleavy he is a sociopath:(
July 2nd, 2019 21:51
- My Beard! (Merckm)
Animals have beards too- love the goat beards of the world
December 24th, 2018 16:44
- Foolishness (Germanamericanchurch)
A whole generation of shaman sold to profit at their brains expense- cha...
October 12th, 2018 23:15
- chainsaw Man (Germanamericanchurch)
Yes ATempo really happened this Saturday - very freaky but truly- but...
August 20th, 2018 09:29
- We Are All Ideas (A. F. Naturaliy)
Perspective is everything period, like this one
August 5th, 2018 13:47
- Love is love. (E-Poems)
Great flow and rythming was a+
Not predictable but still spoken well:)
August 5th, 2018 13:40
- Once Upon a Time (Germanamericanchurch)
Actually had a few scary liquor experience- now a Peyotist for life
June 19th, 2018 13:13
- Alone (Nobody)
Nice, strangely simple but effective, seems to convey well
June 7th, 2018 13:40
- Wiseman or Criminal? (Germanamericanchurch)
See soul medicine(cactus)gets one in touch with the land and
Remember...
April 12th, 2018 20:15
- Little She (Germanamericanchurch)
That\'s why racism is almost funny because we are all only a relationship...
February 22nd, 2018 10:35
- All the Other Feelings With Love. (Saima)
Just add children into the mix
Then cheating is a childs tragedy,
Home...
December 14th, 2017 03:03
- The Blueprint (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
The voice and meter are very nice, made me readout loud a few times :)
November 28th, 2017 15:55
- I miss you before alcohol arrived (Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87)
Touching feel much the same, that when I found the peyote way church :)...
November 28th, 2017 15:53
- Between here and there (Egyptianqt79)
Yeah I find a fondness to your writing which is rare for me, your voice is...
October 17th, 2017 11:45
- Painting colors with words (Egyptianqt79)
Very smooth and descriptive, made me read out loud, which usually means...
October 17th, 2017 11:41
- Broken (Egyptianqt79)
Broken in the mind is almost more real then a body that u can see to...
October 17th, 2017 11:38
- Josh (Egyptianqt79)
Death gives what life took away, maybe answers to the mystery of life and...
October 17th, 2017 09:47
- Mad Universe (Egyptianqt79)
Like the voice, flow and concept, blessings :)
October 17th, 2017 09:43
- Conscience (Simple-Man87)
Great poetic idea, don\'t say that often :)
October 7th, 2017 13:35
- Mother (Simple-Man87)
Depressing makes me realize we all have breaks in the family that are...
October 7th, 2017 13:33
- Journey, pt.1 (Simple-Man87)
Liked your voice love poems are a challenge, nice and direct writing :)
October 7th, 2017 13:30
- Dear daddy (Jessica.shelby)
Sad my daughter is so beautiful its touching to hear the pain, San Pedro...
October 6th, 2017 23:30
- Daddy Problems (Kate)
Children get the shortend of the stick in war of the roses
October 6th, 2017 23:27
- Oblivion (Brie)
Copy your soul impossible :)
October 6th, 2017 23:22
- Our Youth (Skyebellasario)
That sweet glow of vital youth and psychedelics, can\'t forget that:)...
October 6th, 2017 22:55
- The Boss Bitch Game (Jccaramelbarbie)
Worshiping a charlie or a flower,
It can makes us look foolish with...
October 6th, 2017 22:33
- In The Garden (DeviLove)
Yes, natures beauty is always profound even in low moments,
How did the...
October 4th, 2017 21:13
- Laugh Therapy (Germanamericanchurch)
That was surely the point:)
October 4th, 2017 20:30
- UGLY MIND, UGLY HEART (Chinaaliciarivera)
Seems beauty is within, the most beautiful people have the intent to match...
October 3rd, 2017 23:49
- The Shaman in Us (Germanamericanchurch)
Thanks Alicia :) it\'s a way of life and blessing way
October 3rd, 2017 23:47
- I am not a potato (Germanamericanchurch)
Yes, Micheal people shouldn\'t be potatoes:)
October 3rd, 2017 20:30
- Babbling Brook (Dessiel)
Forsaken taken sounds nice to say:)
October 3rd, 2017 12:36
- Water (Germanamericanchurch)
Outback u are a character :) thanks for your thought and insight
September 26th, 2017 23:39
- Kid Kingdom (Germanamericanchurch)
Also the child is a man boy who is reproducing not an actual child,...
September 15th, 2017 20:35
- Your Control (Germanamericanchurch)
Thanks Thoff1
The inspiration is important
September 11th, 2017 09:34
- The Shaman in Us (Germanamericanchurch)
Very true thanks Gary,
Jesus was always seen as a
Shaman by our faith,...
September 11th, 2017 09:32
- The Kiss (Germanamericanchurch)
Love is everything we see and are ment to see, what a mysterious...
September 7th, 2017 16:04
- illegal poem (Germanamericanchurch)
The legalization of plant shamanism and free poetic expression was the...
September 7th, 2017 16:02
- I Am A King (El Vonye)
Like this :) well versed
August 18th, 2017 18:16
- Alone (Germanamericanchurch)
The physical nature of being alone hadn\'t really been part of this poem,...
August 18th, 2017 17:38
- Alone (Germanamericanchurch)
Physical and metaphysical so true
August 18th, 2017 17:14
- I Prefer Small Circles• (Saima)
Why is humanity such a cruel vision when life is a love song ?
As if our...
June 7th, 2017 22:30
- You & Me & Everything (Ummbre)
Touching to the soul
May 24th, 2017 23:46
- This or that? (Anoldwoman)
Not my favorite too confusing no meaning I can see
February 1st, 2017 00:19
- Raveyote (Germanamericanchurch)
Yes this does mean something about rave culture and native church...
February 1st, 2017 00:10
- ode to Alcohol (Germanamericanchurch)
Very insightful, thank u, myself being a non drinking sacrament church...
June 5th, 2016 21:04
- Taking Off (Satishverma)
Nice your words reverb
January 19th, 2016 19:44
- Would you? (Alucardserasfangirl)
Good questions:) some would, but most drive that way, away to oil heat...
January 19th, 2016 19:42
- Impresa (Satishverma)
Great really like your poetry
January 13th, 2016 22:32
- Metaphysical View (Satishverma)
Black currants are amazing so it is the the descriptive power of these...
January 13th, 2016 22:24
- God Gave Me You (Moontigerntn)
Soulmates:)
January 13th, 2016 22:21
- WHO IS THIS (Iceman43)
Very powerful kindered feeling about passing over
January 13th, 2016 22:20