Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Thoughts In Life. (Goldfinch60)
A positive view that lifts the spirit and gives hope in a world so full of...
October 17th, 2022 11:13 - queen (Dusk arising)
Am touching piece, about a loved lady. We all must some day follow.
October 17th, 2022 11:09 - Strindberg Principle (Arqios)
A wonderful write Strindberg would be proud. naturalism or mysticism,...
October 10th, 2022 10:34 - The Fortress of a Lonely Mind (J.H.Byron-Nuel)
I like plays, although I am somewhat ignorant in this area. This was short...
October 8th, 2022 07:45 - Gracie’s Ghost (J.H.Byron-Nuel)
Ghosts hold two juxtaposed images for me: the spirit that can not rest and...
October 7th, 2022 22:03 - sunrising sunset (Arqios)
This poem hit me in different ways. The sunrise portrayed so well the dawn...
October 6th, 2022 20:58 - Hot or Wot? (Doggerel Dave)
Dave I love the humor at the expense of the suffering. I find it helpful...
October 6th, 2022 09:40 - Brahn Boots. (Doggerel Dave)
I love satire in any works, but poetry seems to lend itself to this....
October 6th, 2022 07:12 - In Life (Bella Shepard)
An existential question that we all need to ask ourselves. Well said Bella
October 5th, 2022 13:00 - looking for a real bargain (Arqios)
I love these bits and pieces. Too little too late.
October 5th, 2022 07:23 - take two (Arqios)
\"Personification of hope\" well stated. Hope the last to die. I loved...
October 4th, 2022 06:49 - I Seek it Here, I Seek it There, I Seek it Everywhere.. (Doggerel Dave)
I think most of us can identify with that. My house I trapped over 80 rats...
October 4th, 2022 06:38 - Oh Please! (Doggerel Dave)
Politics has been a problem for some time. Plato wrote a book or two on...
October 4th, 2022 06:32 - Each Night (Bella Shepard)
A beautiful verse, so full of peace and calm. It brought back so many...
October 3rd, 2022 13:59 - Let Me Be (Bella Shepard)
Wise words and good advice for everyone. I felt almost as if I were in...
September 29th, 2022 14:19 - to be seen (Arqios)
The mind can make time stand still for good or bad. Beautifully written...
September 27th, 2022 13:23 - Teach Me (Bella Shepard)
A great message that is far deeper than the few words initially reflect.
September 26th, 2022 16:40 - This Cat is Coo Coo (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :))
A fun poem to read. It is always nice to lighten up a bit.
September 26th, 2022 10:02 - hands off that snooze button! (Arqios)
This conjured up feelings long buried. I particularly liked \"release the...
September 23rd, 2022 07:08 - A Right Royal...... (Doggerel Dave)
God save the queen. Oh too late. I too did like her and her image....
September 17th, 2022 09:29 - re(ad)writing poetry (Arqios)
This struck me in a long-buried place. Long before I started writing...
September 17th, 2022 06:49 - You Make Me Feel So Bad (Bella Shepard)
I have always felt that it is only those that we really love that have the...
September 15th, 2022 13:13 - impervious impermeability (Arqios)
Perceptive from eyes that do not see. I liked this poem very much, it...
September 15th, 2022 09:02 - The Cold Light of Day (Jenny.g)
I took this to apply to more than relationships or people and seems more...
September 13th, 2022 12:58 - 100 Years Strong (Bella Shepard)
Inspiring! A wonderful write and tribute. My grandfather was a...
September 9th, 2022 18:54 - Gone! (Dusk arising)
She was extraordinary. I seldom give much notice to world leaders but even...
September 9th, 2022 07:45 - this old upturned boat (Dusk arising)
The image is so perfect, that of old boards. The metaphor of a boat turned...
September 8th, 2022 09:37 - starlight (Dusk arising)
This touches my soul and reaches beyond now to timelessness
September 6th, 2022 13:59 - Let it be (Shaa)
A beautiful expression of young love and passion.
September 5th, 2022 18:44 - The Steel Fortress (Bella Shepard)
Bella this is a wise and wonderful statement.
September 5th, 2022 13:20 - My Mother- My Heart (LittleTalks)
This is a heart rending and heart warming poem all in one. So much to...
August 27th, 2022 16:54 - The Final Over. (Goldfinch60)
I know very little of cricket but this poem brought back memories of Casey...
August 27th, 2022 07:48 - September (Dusk arising)
No matter which season you love this poem conveys the passion and lust for...
August 27th, 2022 07:41 - Creating Memories. (Goldfinch60)
We rarely think of the memories that we are creating. But as we look back...
August 24th, 2022 07:27 - Happy Together (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella music has always been a passion for me. I too grew up in that...
August 22nd, 2022 16:01 - read to your satisfaction (Arqios)
A wonderful metaphor Thoth inventor of the written word, who later in,...
August 22nd, 2022 07:29 - the budding senescent (Arqios)
They say you are only as young as you think you are. Although the body...
August 21st, 2022 21:50 - Being Human (Bella Shepard)
Whenever we think we know something about it we find we were wrong. Being...
August 16th, 2022 13:24 - Sticky Hands and Grape Juice Smiles (Bella Shepard)
Bella this brought so many memories of my own children and the past. The...
August 12th, 2022 13:02 - surface tension (Dusk arising)
Like an ember that glows, hope can be ignited to blaze anew with the...
August 12th, 2022 11:18 - Every Life is a Story (Bella Shepard)
Bella I love how you connected the individual story of people to the...
August 6th, 2022 17:50 - Turtle Life (Jazzwa30)
Good advice. It is easy to see and we would be better off if we followed...
August 5th, 2022 08:10 - Moonlight face-timing (Jue Ju) (L. B. Mek)
L.B. I have to say I am not familiar with this form but thank you for...
August 5th, 2022 06:52 - one facet of motivation (Dusk arising)
dusk I too share four feeling of reaching out to myself and others through...
August 5th, 2022 06:45 - RIP Uhura. (Goldfinch60)
I too remember watching star trek and each star that passes reminds me of...
August 1st, 2022 06:43 - Sometimes (Bella Shepard)
My father always said he would rather be lucky than good any day. It does...
July 31st, 2022 11:25 - freight train (Dusk arising)
dusk this struck deep into some old memories of childhood when I and my...
July 29th, 2022 07:16 - if i were a flower (Dusk arising)
Well written and thought out. It gives pause as to what our purpose is....
July 28th, 2022 09:55 - Why, write? (L. B. Mek)
L.B. perfectly said. Poetry is not for its exactitude or perfection but...
July 28th, 2022 09:48 - the love years (Dusk arising)
This was very well written and more yet reached to the heart. It was nice...
July 26th, 2022 07:14 - Peaceless (Sorenbarrett)
Dear L.B. It is always so nice to read your review. They are full of...
July 26th, 2022 07:10 - Peaceless (Sorenbarrett)
Thank You Dusk for your review and comment it is most appreciated.
July 26th, 2022 07:06 - Certainty (Bella Shepard)
Bella the paradox in this statement still echoes in my mind. And that...
July 17th, 2022 15:54 - At Specsavers. (Goldfinch60)
Made me laugh. So by that it is judged.
July 16th, 2022 08:27 - Clarity (Bella Shepard)
Bella so well said. The economy of words to express the infinity. Well...
July 14th, 2022 13:44 - Ode to My Brain (Bella Shepard)
Bella I certainly can identify with this poem. It evokes feelings too and...
July 13th, 2022 15:19 - Rejection (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you Bella foryour review and kind commnts
July 13th, 2022 15:14 - The Song (Paul Bell)
The swan song? I\'m sure it would be electrifying or at least shocking....
July 6th, 2022 09:14 - If I loved you i\'d tell you (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Paul for your review and witty comment. It is appreciated
July 6th, 2022 09:11 - The Misunderstanding (Paul Bell)
This sounded so familiar I thought it was family. I always heard that one...
July 4th, 2022 18:25 - change that rope (Arqios)
Age takes its toll on all but there are some things that remain the same...
July 3rd, 2022 09:26 - Well I Never… (Doggerel Dave)
Don\'t have any right to make any comment on Brexit, but I do know that...
July 2nd, 2022 21:54 - Baby Blues (Paul Bell)
Paul such an engaging tale built with great suspense and a general sense...
July 2nd, 2022 07:16 - Thread of Red Strings (Agmakata)
A wonderful write. I love the imagery and the theme itself. Well done
July 1st, 2022 08:29 - Single Sigma Empath Aquiescence (Eugene S.)
Cheers, cider or beer either works. Enjoyed the tale
June 30th, 2022 19:43 - Another Life Lesson (though I’m not quite sure…….) (Doggerel Dave)
Lucky you\'re not dead. Dave I enjoyed this poem I\'ve worked psych...
June 30th, 2022 19:00 - Contentment (Morwenna)
Well written and very identifiable. The metering was so good it felt...
June 30th, 2022 18:18 - harmonisation (Arqios)
So well said in such few words. Lovely
June 29th, 2022 08:40 - Non Existent Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful view which I would take a step farter be grateful for the...
June 16th, 2022 10:10 - Non Existent Troubles. (Goldfinch60)
June 16th, 2022 10:08 - The Memory Forest (Bella Shepard)
Bella this one hit close to the heart. I found the words and the theme as...
June 15th, 2022 12:15 - Elyssa, fugitive princess (Arqios)
A very nice review of a classic theme. Well written and enjoyable
June 15th, 2022 08:40 - Broken (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much L.B. for taking your time to review this, Your comments...
June 13th, 2022 21:40 - Why? (Bella Shepard)
Why? Yes a complicated question, though only three letters long. Access to...
June 3rd, 2022 21:16 - a lifetime ago haunts still. (Dusk arising)
No one no matter how famous or wealthy can escape the scars of emotional...
June 3rd, 2022 21:05 - Snakeskin (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful montage of ideas, words and images. Your last line is what...
June 3rd, 2022 21:00 - Flights Of Fancy (Rozina)
Well rhymed and entertaining that is what it is about. Well done
May 1st, 2022 16:34 - The other side of clearing something up (Dusk arising)
Sad I thought this was a poetry site not facebook
May 1st, 2022 16:32 - Colonoscopy prep (Crowns4Christ)
Doesn\'t sound very pleasent
May 1st, 2022 16:29 - as they all went forward – I looked back (Rocky Lagou)
A wonderful poem with great metaphors and images \"like the bedsheet that...
April 28th, 2022 09:14 - Almost a sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you so much Rocky for your encouragement and lovely words. I titled...
April 28th, 2022 09:03 - My Mum (Rozina)
What a wonderful tribute to a strong woman. I can not even imagine losing...
April 27th, 2022 19:52 - Just A Little Poetic Thought (Rocky Lagou)
A little fantasy never hurts. It reminds me of an old song by Tex Ritter...
April 27th, 2022 13:01 - The Exchange (Luna Nera)
A puzzle that to me can be answered in love or peace. An intriguing...
April 27th, 2022 06:20 - Down Under (Rozina)
A wonderful poem of reunion with family. Something that most of us can...
April 27th, 2022 06:12 - Handheld God (Rocky Lagou)
What a great metaphor. So well written. I loved handheld God.
April 26th, 2022 12:09 - what need in me for kisses (Dusk arising)
A great metaphor well worded metered with a sad feeling.
April 26th, 2022 11:03 - Gossiping (Rozina)
Communication is so complicated that even between two people...
April 25th, 2022 20:17 - Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
Bella I loved this write and its humorous but sad focus on old age and...
April 25th, 2022 20:10 - what makes a poet (Dusk arising)
Great measures for what is a poet. Much of what we write does come from...
April 25th, 2022 14:32 - Coffee (Rozina)
I could smell it brewing. Well written and organized as well as rhyme....
April 24th, 2022 20:29 - this special springtime (Dusk arising)
This reminded me of my childhood weekly visiting my grandparents farm and...
April 24th, 2022 10:06 - every now and again (Dusk arising)
A beautiful way of expressing this feeling of missing someone.
April 23rd, 2022 08:29 - CO2-ified Lungs (Haiku/Senryū #5) (Rocky Lagou)
It\'s a shame that some people don\'t seem to care much about the...
April 22nd, 2022 22:28 - Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde (Rozina)
Unfortunately such abrupt changes do occur far too frequently. The poem...
April 22nd, 2022 21:13 - looking forward (Dusk arising)
A statement of where we are in humanity. Sad but true. Well expressed.
April 22nd, 2022 06:26 - BLOOD (Rozina)
We are all different and at the same time all the same. A good write.
April 21st, 2022 19:46 - Swing of LIFE !! (Vamsi Sudha)
A beautiful metaphor. Children like swings and keeping a childlike...
April 21st, 2022 13:46 - A Free Flow Attempt (Rozina)
The story telling is good. The images are fitting and it like the stream...
April 20th, 2022 20:08 - offers of nonsense (Dusk arising)
I always loved nursery rhymes and your rendition put a smile on my face....
April 20th, 2022 05:57
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