Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Her Path, Our Path (KnightOfCups)
Noble and caring where helping is sharing. A good read that offers a...
August 8th, 2025 04:45 - Growing Up Broke More Than Toys (Wildecho14)
A broken toy a disappointment a lost opportunity but another gained....
August 8th, 2025 04:39 - Wandering Forest (Shahla Latifi)
Feigned love is sometimes used as an excuse for the enactment of passion....
August 8th, 2025 04:35 - caterpillar munch (Jim56)
I value all life and especially the beautiful butterflies that come from...
August 8th, 2025 04:32 - Murder (Peto)
A controlled but angry, threatening poem of vengeance and reprisal. It...
August 8th, 2025 04:29 - \"where we come from\" (Arqios)
Several readings and several takes. Layered metaphor where an innocent...
August 8th, 2025 04:25 - Remarking on A Flight of Fancy (Neville)
Those flight of fancy wings can get too close to the sun and wax does not...
August 8th, 2025 04:06 - The Heart\'s Promise. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful pledge for one loved. Nicely written in most poetic form
August 8th, 2025 04:01 - A kiss in the rain (_Doc_)
A recounting of a first encounter and romantic adventure. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 18:33 - You\'re Hurting Me (Anthony Hanible)
A poem of pain and a challenge to one that says they love when they...
August 7th, 2025 18:32 - you give it a title (Luke Bensing)
Waves of emotion in this poem that speaks of ebbs and flows. Nicely done
August 7th, 2025 18:31 - People plea (Princess Osariemen Aihie)
A dystopic world painted in this poem. Tragic and sad. Nicely written
August 7th, 2025 18:28 - The Flickering Light (Series on Liberals #2) (Gray0328)
Beautiful Gray full of wonderful lines and with deep meaning
August 7th, 2025 13:57 - 7.19 (Frรคnz Mรผller)
Short and nicely written a melancholic write
August 7th, 2025 13:55 - SONNET ON CUPID ([email protected])
A great write with mythic introductions. Very nice
August 7th, 2025 13:54 - Just me again (Shadowbones)
Clean up after a party is hell. A most interesting poem
August 7th, 2025 13:04 - Submission (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
This one starts in one direction and takes a bend but that is okay by me I...
August 7th, 2025 13:02 - Writing this in an office building at 7:32 AM on a Thursday (Simple Tendencies)
Metaphor fills this poem nicely written
August 7th, 2025 13:01 - Crush (Damaso)
This poem like a jigsaw puzzle requires assembly and patience starting...
August 7th, 2025 12:59 - Let Us (Ksey_Gan)
Clever wording makes for the charm of this poem. Most lovely
August 7th, 2025 12:57 - The Secret Weapon (Aishu)
A fanciful metaphor that works well with some great lines. Stitching a...
August 7th, 2025 12:56 - What Kind Of Heart Celebrates Destruction (Mohammad younus koul)
A fave for the message sent here
August 7th, 2025 12:52 - Letter to the lost poet (Lorenz)
Like drifting though a snowstorm and trying to grab individual flakes to...
August 7th, 2025 12:50 - Starstruck, Still (Alex PB)
Quite the write. Beyond infatuation, beyond passion, more than love it is...
August 7th, 2025 12:46 - Well, Whadya Know, Eh? (Cheeky Missy)
I have learned my lesson and eaten lunch just before reading your sonnets....
August 7th, 2025 12:42 - Steel and Heart (Matthew R. Callies)
A beautiful poem filled with great images nicely done
August 7th, 2025 09:27 - Cape Cod Mornings (Kurt Philip Behm)
A lovely poem of differences and yet sameness. Deep as the sea a fave
August 7th, 2025 09:26 - Rain (Keeter C)
Loved this poem for the meaning may be far deeper than the surface would...
August 7th, 2025 09:24 - Ode to the Nature Lover (JAINESH.D)
Well said in this poem of nature and its appreciation that we all should...
August 7th, 2025 07:29 - Bounce Fast (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Ah that early morning run to get the blood flowing and the day going. A...
August 7th, 2025 07:25 - My Poem (Tony36)
Nicely said Tony. We are all our own poem in flesh and spirit. Well done
August 7th, 2025 07:05 - Our Final Will And Testimony (Abdullah123)
This poem speaks from the dust. It echoes the past one filled with blood...
August 7th, 2025 07:04 - autumn beauty (Jim56)
Another poem that focuses on nature\'s beauty and what we should all be...
August 7th, 2025 06:59 - NU (2781)
This sounds pretty much like the modern world or maybe the world as it has...
August 7th, 2025 06:57 - The Storm of the Rose (Santajah Douglass)
A wonderful poem of being who one is despite its weaknesses and defenses,...
August 7th, 2025 06:04 - Hold Her (Tkatie118)
Here so many mixed messages lead to lack of trust and fear. A lovely write
August 7th, 2025 05:21 - His Perfect Timing. (GenXer Sharon ๐๐)
Here faith in a higher power is aided by patience and trust in timing. A...
August 7th, 2025 05:18 - Artists ๐จ (Starlight)
Art and money mixed in this poem of high aspirations and colored display....
August 7th, 2025 05:15 - Love Poem (RSM0812)
Romantic in its pledges this poem speaks to commitment in love and its...
August 7th, 2025 05:14 - The survivor (Maplespal)
A poem that can be taken more than one way. in its clearest form it seems...
August 7th, 2025 05:12 - 55 INCH SCREEN (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
A nice flow to this poem that includes a nice pick for the song as sleep...
August 7th, 2025 05:09 - a type of mental inclination (Wordsinclined)
Clever I see this as a plea before the judge for mental competency and the...
August 7th, 2025 05:07 - The Playlist Knows (Samuel)
Memories of past union and bonds continue onward. A lovely write
August 7th, 2025 05:05 - Elbow Grease (Berniece)
It used to be that people did their own repairs but the car in the digital...
August 7th, 2025 05:03 - Roses are red (Krissy.V)
A fun take on an old trite poem that now is pushed in a whole different...
August 7th, 2025 05:00 - Until We Awaken (Malcolm Gladwin)
Here i hear the rush of the modern world and the message is to unleash the...
August 7th, 2025 04:59 - Who? (GBear90)
There is the feel of a rushed modern world in this poem, where one thing...
August 7th, 2025 04:56 - They Do Not not Renounce Loving ย ย by Veronika Tushnova (Ksey_Gan)
I must ask what is thyou or thyour? A poem that feels in some ways to...
August 7th, 2025 04:54 - Safe Haven (Nicole Pritchard)
A poem of one finding their nest and preferring the safety of it over...
August 7th, 2025 04:48 - oh the places you\'ll go (Luke Bensing)
A most interesting analogy that I hadn\'t thought of before. Having moved...
August 7th, 2025 04:46 - Searching (Peto)
A lovely flow and rhyme scheme to this poem that takes one on a journey...
August 7th, 2025 04:42 - spoons (Corian Baek)
A fave for a poem that made me think. Upon first reading this poem seems...
August 7th, 2025 04:38 - Storm Over Gaza (Tony Grannell)
A powerful message Tony set in marvelous rhyme and meter. A heartbeat yet...
August 7th, 2025 04:29 - \"before the next breath\" (Arqios)
It is always difficult to choose in such situations because I am...
August 7th, 2025 04:21 - Elder Respect. (Goldfinch60)
A fun read Cold and I too am finding it harder and harder to find any,...
August 7th, 2025 04:07 - Vienna (๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ)
Clever and well worded it made me smile. A fun read.
August 6th, 2025 17:40 - Life (Keeter C)
Nature at its best and we all unaware of the beauty in us and around us....
August 6th, 2025 15:05 - Follow The Clock (Anthony Hanible)
The hands on a clock clap 24 times in a day and so I feel reassured....
August 6th, 2025 15:03 - Beautiful boys (Amethyste)
Pasion takes many forms. A beautiful poem of love.
August 6th, 2025 15:01 - Umeed aur Dua (Lheom)
Truth and hope in one stanza. Lovely
August 6th, 2025 15:00 - Breath of Heaven (Rrodriguez)
So beautiful, wo identifiable, I look out my mountain cabin window to see...
August 6th, 2025 14:59 - Love like Vandalism (Berniece)
A poem of hurt and anger that darkens with each passage. Well written
August 6th, 2025 14:56 - Listen to the voice of the poet (Albix)
A call to the powerful that are deaf to the words of prophets and poets,...
August 6th, 2025 14:54 - Cheap Rooms and Love (Thomas W Case)
Grit and shadows of the past in this poem Thomas. Well written in raw and...
August 6th, 2025 14:52 - I wish I was into you (Sneha Sebastian)
I understand the need for action, the need for thrill, why a person would...
August 6th, 2025 10:44 - Of Mice and Fish and Boring Menus (Cheeky Missy)
Another fun read Chic nicely done
August 6th, 2025 10:32 - The Necessary Lesson (Series on Liberals #1) (Gray0328)
Fairy tales are for children, dreams are for sleepers, wishes are for...
August 6th, 2025 10:20 - The Star-Strangled Banner (Abdullah123)
A fun parody that strikes a blow at the arrogance of a nation that says it...
August 6th, 2025 10:10 - Yet you are here (Gewar)
A nice read of a relationship that worked out. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 10:06 - Dry Heavin\' (Matthew R. Callies)
Made me laugh and that was good enough for a fave add to that good rhyme...
August 6th, 2025 10:05 - Fakeness (Sassy Lou)
A poem that many can identify with. Not so sure it is only today, I...
August 6th, 2025 08:53 - Front To Back (Kurt Philip Behm)
Language a sharp tool one can inadvertently do damage to self and others....
August 6th, 2025 07:38 - I have to be in El Paso Yesterday (Victor Bolshov)
I can hear the song in this poem, it begs to be let out. Nicely done
August 6th, 2025 07:36 - Go on a adventure (Tony36)
Encouraging and inspiring this poem urges the reader to take a chance and...
August 6th, 2025 06:49 - Life is a Gift (RSM0812)
Carpe diem they say. Enjoy the day. In metaphor the same cycles of life...
August 6th, 2025 06:48 - Tariffs and Tantrums (Narayan Gadagkar)
A powerful write of the insanity reflected by one who can against those...
August 6th, 2025 06:44 - Without You (Lorna)
I can feel this in the literal and the metaphorical it speaks of how thin...
August 6th, 2025 06:42 - a folklore story (Jim56)
This a well known tale that has been transformed into different cultures...
August 6th, 2025 05:24 - You\'re like them (Maplespal)
A powerful poem of relationships. There is not going back to the...
August 6th, 2025 05:21 - America (Pete the poet)
A fave for the anthem at the end. I have driven those roads and felt those...
August 6th, 2025 05:19 - Filling Gaps (Neville)
A beautiful play on words and concepts. The hole left is in some ways like...
August 6th, 2025 05:14 - I Didnโt Say a Word (Samuel)
A most interesting view on love and relationships and what they mean and...
August 6th, 2025 05:09 - Modern Day Macbeth (Awam)
A poem of the horror of war which is built into the Human DNA built on...
August 6th, 2025 05:07 - Happy Birthday Meghan, Duchess of Sussex (Azeezah Awal)
A beautiful and glowing tribute to a woman on her birthday. All...
August 6th, 2025 05:00 - ASYLUM (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
God help any life form that extends a hand to the human species. Like a...
August 6th, 2025 04:56 - Don\'t Let Them Drain Your Energy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A fun read and a common theme from conspiracy theory to AI and...
August 6th, 2025 04:53 - Are they listening? (2781)
Poetry can have power as is raised in this work. It does depend on who...
August 6th, 2025 04:50 - Gasp for Air (Alison)
A poem that expresses feeling of overwhelming pressure wearing one down. A...
August 6th, 2025 04:48 - Have You Ever? (GBear90)
There is a good deal of frustration expressed in this poem there is a...
August 6th, 2025 04:46 - Friend (Krissy.V)
Loved the playfulness in the word itself. There is an end in friend and...
August 6th, 2025 04:42 - The Wall I Never Painted (Malcolm Gladwin)
Many well written lines in this poem that maintains good form, flow and...
August 6th, 2025 04:40 - Trust? (๐ป)
Trust an item of gradations, I believe there is no total trust, only trust...
August 6th, 2025 04:35 - Hiroshima โ eighty years since August 6th, 1945 (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Boggles the mind that technology has advanced to the point that a few can...
August 6th, 2025 04:32 - The Plight Of A Sage (ElizabethMoroz)
The juxtaposition in each line of related terms requires close analysis...
August 6th, 2025 04:30 - but how could i? (Wildecho14)
A heartfelt poem that in its rawness sends the message that one person can...
August 6th, 2025 04:23 - Barbed (Peto)
Very clever wording and a lovely meter with rhyme scheme that intrigues...
August 6th, 2025 04:20 - โspark of nowโ (Arqios)
Is this a reference to love at first sight? A write in the now.that is...
August 6th, 2025 04:15 - Naughty! (Orchidee)
A fun read but you gave it away by making 18+ Orchi. Actually there are...
August 6th, 2025 04:11 - The Keys In A Mansion. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful analogy Gold in our world of half steps twentyfour keys in the...
August 6th, 2025 04:05 - The Legend of Marco by Maxim Gorky (Ksey_Gan)
A most interesting read of a fantasy nature that has an uncertain ending...
August 5th, 2025 20:17
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