Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Perfectly polished (Teddy.15) Great insight into a deep thought. We all judge others by ourselves when...
  September 18th, 2024 04:57
• Cyloned (Mutley Ravishes) A most fun idea and I\'ll bet that there would be a lot of money in it...
  September 18th, 2024 04:52
• All Hail to the Rest…. (Doggerel Dave) Cut me off eh? And after all these years. Its okay Dave as long as you...
  September 18th, 2024 04:49
• Give me a pencil (Sami mulaj) Very positive leaving a feeling of hope and gladness. Well done Sami
  September 18th, 2024 04:44
• Musical I.Q. (Kurt Philip Behm) Music the core of existence building block of the universe. Very nicely...
  September 18th, 2024 04:42
• Back To My Youth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Fond memories Gold and they brought back such in me as well.
  September 18th, 2024 04:33
• Nothing To Say? (Dan Williams) Beautifully composed Dan it flowed like honey. Loved the rhyme and meter.
  September 18th, 2024 04:30
• DICHOTOMY (Bobby O) The shadow of wisdom tied in the knot of words. I guess being tongue tied...
  September 18th, 2024 04:26
• Reflections From My Boyhood (Rrodriguez) I love the pairing of shiver with courage it is unexpected and usually...
  September 18th, 2024 04:16
• Saving Scenes (Orchidee) Yes indeed save me too from the snares and nets. A good write Orchi
  September 17th, 2024 13:54
• Dishcloth Wisdom (AuburnScribbler) Any time censorship is employed it overstepsthe bounds of not only freedom...
  September 17th, 2024 09:04
• Another One of The Lads (Tom Dylan) A portrait of a colorful man that life would be black and white without. I...
  September 17th, 2024 08:59
• Felt (Cassie58) Visions in our darkest hours are sometimes the most uplifting. The depths...
  September 17th, 2024 08:42
• Black Pearls (Neville) \"and asked, if I should like to watch her bleed black pearls, to hide...
  September 17th, 2024 04:39
• Our River Of Love. (Goldfinch60) Most romantic and those walks will keep you in tip top form ,
  September 17th, 2024 04:28
• Eight Thousand Sunrises (Dan Williams) Waiting for those golden years you haven\'t heard we are off the gold...
  September 17th, 2024 04:25
• Poet (Teddy.15) A most wonderful tribute to another great poet. Fun to read and a surprise...
  September 17th, 2024 04:17
• On war.. (NafisaSB) Powerful words Children show anger but not hatred that has to be taught.
  September 17th, 2024 03:08
• \'Eyes\' (NafisaSB) Beautifully said in most poetic form. Short and in this case less is more.
  September 17th, 2024 03:05
• memories (Jim56) Wonderful nothing rejuvinates like the laugh and smile of a small child
  September 16th, 2024 09:05
• Through The Glass (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Applicable to all in society. A most poignant write that I feel each day
  September 16th, 2024 09:04
• Broken (Tristan Robert Lange) Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the...
  September 16th, 2024 09:02
• One of those (2781) A fun read about a not very fun subject,
  September 16th, 2024 07:24
• If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan) My mind wanders and I read this poem two ways. The first is someone that...
  September 16th, 2024 07:13
• Faith In the Greater Design (Gray0328) Some would see this as applying to God I see it as applying to the force...
  September 16th, 2024 07:03
• Rise from the fire (Tony36) A call to action, motivating raising like the phoenix raising rom the...
  September 16th, 2024 07:00
• The Sweetest of Slumberbash (Teddy.15) So full of child imges that I was taken back to the days of my infant...
  September 16th, 2024 06:58
• Just Another Take On Life (Neville) You are right Neville there are several ways of looking at things and as I...
  September 16th, 2024 06:55
• A Winter Passing (Cassie58) Touching with appropriate delicate wording in beautiful rhym that falls...
  September 16th, 2024 06:48
• Comforting Certainties (Orchidee) A prayer of faith and love, lovely in itself. We all know you are good at...
  September 16th, 2024 06:43
• Smiling Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) The joy in this poem shines like a smile. And it is contagious I caught it...
  September 16th, 2024 06:36
• This God of A Thousand Mouths (ADarkerMind) Melvin I read this over several times and it is filled with metaphor...
  September 16th, 2024 06:30
• Already Spoken (Dan Williams) Misunderstanding the linchpin of many problems and sometimes it is by...
  September 16th, 2024 06:15
• Atlantic (Alan R) Dreams are what life is made of may all of yours be fulfiled.
  September 15th, 2024 12:57
• Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15) This brought images of my eldest daughter. She has done well in life but...
  September 15th, 2024 12:53
• How Slow These Cradles Rock (ADarkerMind) Melvin my inadequate mind grappled with this beautifully written poetic...
  September 15th, 2024 12:32
• My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58) I loved the hidden metaphor of \"abundant white cowslip\" denoting age as...
  September 15th, 2024 12:11
• Now we are three.... (Orchidee) My condolences Orchi but a tribute well written my friend.
  September 15th, 2024 06:06
• Sonnet For Steven. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful a most lovely tribute so nicely done.
  September 15th, 2024 06:02
• Matrimonial Misfire (Dan Williams) I could see the battle rage before me enemy entrenched on high ground Sun...
  September 15th, 2024 05:56
• A Thousand Lanterns (Tony36) A beautiful sight as a beautiful tribute. Nicely worded
  September 14th, 2024 18:00
• A world of Deception (Saleh Ben Saleh) Loved your rhym scheme in this poem. It was a delight to read.
  September 14th, 2024 11:26
• Hold On Tight (Teddy.15) Very nice Teddy yes we have paid the price to ride so one might as well...
  September 14th, 2024 03:39
• Death And Life (Orchidee) A great story and the metaphor is one of the best in all Christianity in...
  September 14th, 2024 03:38
• Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60) Things that sound rediculous today become fact tomorrow. A scarry thought...
  September 14th, 2024 03:20
• Cleverer (Dan Williams) This is a very deep well you have dug. You have approached this from a...
  September 14th, 2024 03:17
• I can SEE it (Adnan it is) Youth brings impatience. We think that a nail should be sunk with the...
  September 14th, 2024 03:09
• War (Alan R) The other side of the coin. Love has its down sides.
  September 13th, 2024 09:06
• A feeling to write (Maplespal) I too feel compelled to write things and it doesn\'t matter if they mean...
  September 13th, 2024 06:02
• autumn song (Jim56) A fun and lovely poem of nature.
  September 13th, 2024 06:00
• Are We Together? (Dev Parth) Very nicely worded a beautiful poem of love.
  September 13th, 2024 05:58
• Dedication Delights (Orchidee) Very nicely written Orchi. Beautiful words.
  September 13th, 2024 05:56
• Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan) You have so tastefully noted the issue of priorities where most people...
  September 13th, 2024 05:54
• () The first time I read this poem I found it sensuous as tied to the food...
  September 13th, 2024 05:48
• Patriotism (Doggerel Dave) Dave I think that patriotism should begin with oneself. \"To thine own...
  September 13th, 2024 05:38
• Almost Enough (Dan Williams) Beautifully written a statement of how things are seen as right or wrong...
  September 13th, 2024 05:34
• Karmasutra (Teddy.15) Highly sensual Teddy in a very tasteful way. Short but quite sensuous....
  September 13th, 2024 04:57
• Being Alive. (Goldfinch60) I was always taught that procrastination is to be avoided and I have put...
  September 13th, 2024 04:15
• A Force To Be Wreckoned With (Mutley Ravishes) Loki the trickster god. One of my favorites.
  September 12th, 2024 19:28
• Made it (2781) A positive outlook is pervasive in this poem. Nicely done
  September 12th, 2024 19:26
• When The Sun Goes Down (Tony36) A recounting of memories of good social times and happieness associated...
  September 12th, 2024 15:59
• I PRAY (Qurrathul Ain) A beautiful message crying for harmonic union and compatability. Lovely...
  September 12th, 2024 12:35
• That day (Sami mulaj) A great metaphor for the ending of all endevors
  September 12th, 2024 05:41
• We Came Together Once (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) A good question asked.This poem honors the day and shines with a call for...
  September 12th, 2024 05:39
• Ozzie Enters My Chest (Gray0328) Your words bring the feelings and transport one to the very spot. Nicely...
  September 12th, 2024 05:31
• Dreamers Quilt (Teddy.15) The sound of falling rain on the roof is the best and induces...
  September 12th, 2024 05:29
• Life Liberation (Orchidee) Nicely written Orchi.
  September 12th, 2024 05:27
• Island Of Dreams Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A beautiful place indeed my friend and I believe it is found in one\'s own...
  September 12th, 2024 05:25
• Crumbs  (Neville) A master class on how the mundane can be made seductive and sensual, Not...
  September 12th, 2024 05:21
• Imaginary Hero (Dan Williams) We allhave some of Walter Mitty in us. The awakening from these daydreams...
  September 12th, 2024 05:09
• When Everything Glows but Me (Teddy.15) To find anything in the dark is difficult. If you are lucky enough to...
  September 11th, 2024 18:59
• I hide my pain (lyrics) (Saleh Ben Saleh) A song of desperation and despair iswhat I hear in this poem that is...
  September 11th, 2024 07:49
• Late summer (Alan R) A great last line to this poem. \"when the fog stays undone.\"
  September 11th, 2024 07:46
• Me described by-way-of “in & out” (Maplespal) That\'s a lot of ins and outs. A most fun read
  September 11th, 2024 06:13
• For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough (Neville) Neville I had to think about this one for a while and couldn\'t quite...
  September 11th, 2024 06:09
• Screw Top. (Doggerel Dave) Not only have I been anticipating your next release but you hit upon a...
  September 11th, 2024 06:06
• Cycling Connections (Orchidee) Orchi another great hymn but somehow this one reads a bit different than...
  September 11th, 2024 06:02
• Sonnet From Calliope. (Goldfinch60) Are you sure she is not your daughter, Zeus being the father you know....
  September 11th, 2024 06:00
• The Why Begins to Show (Dan Williams) This poem is a quiet small pond that is deceptively deep. Several...
  September 11th, 2024 05:55
• Whether I Lost You or Not (Dev Parth) Very nicely expressed with great metaphor the feeling of loss and...
  September 11th, 2024 05:45
• Nature knows best and so do we (Poetic Dan) I loved the message in this poem and am a believer that nature does know...
  September 10th, 2024 13:24
• Semaphore of Life (Gray0328) So many nonverbal signs to follow in life. Nicely said
  September 10th, 2024 13:21
• Bluebottle (AuburnScribbler) A fun read that well could be a nursery rhyme and with a message too....
  September 10th, 2024 13:19
• On Bended Knee (Kurt Philip Behm) Another nicely woven poem of rhyme with finely chosen wording.
  September 10th, 2024 13:15
• ~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck (Thad Wilk) Another fun read Thad. Set in the right vernacular and setting it was a...
  September 10th, 2024 13:13
• Down on the Corner (Tony36) Love street music. A great poem about music and how it is not justabout...
  September 10th, 2024 12:56
• daddies boy (Jim56) A wonderful tribute to a loving father
  September 10th, 2024 12:54
• In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15) A most heartfelt commemoration of a trajic day. I too remember where I...
  September 10th, 2024 05:46
• Giant Hamsters! (Orchidee) A rose by any other name...... Orchi justdon\'t let KP catch them for...
  September 10th, 2024 05:41
• Croquet Enjoyment Tanka. (Goldfinch60) laughter with friends while doing something one enjoys is as close to...
  September 10th, 2024 05:36
• Reiterate the Beginning (Dan Williams) Reflections is a good word as this poem takes the reader through the...
  September 10th, 2024 05:32
• The lion (Neilton) Descriptive, vivid, powerful are words that come to mind. Such a metaphor...
  September 10th, 2024 05:27
• The Bird Scene: Take I (Bren Wrights) Nicely said Bren. Words well worked from a first person perspective. That...
  September 10th, 2024 05:21
• Love that Flows (River123) A poem as a profession of love. Nicely written.
  September 9th, 2024 18:33
• Potboy (AuburnScribbler) A great play on words and yes hope is the end of all. Nicely written
  September 9th, 2024 15:22
• King Solomon Winks (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Once again wisdom in verse. Very nicely worded.
  September 9th, 2024 15:18
• The Return of Roller Skates (Gray0328) Nostalgia for many in this poem. When I was a kid there were no colors ...
  September 9th, 2024 15:16
• Lets right (2781) By coincidence or not there were many film titles in this poem A most fun...
  September 9th, 2024 15:14
• In Nature\'s Lap (Mark The Phenomenon) Beauty is nature it is only a matter of noticing it, seeing it, and...
  September 9th, 2024 15:11
• They laugh (Tony36) Very Christian, Hindu, Budist, Taoist, very human. This happens to many I...
  September 9th, 2024 15:08