Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Why cant i be free? (Lei)
This poem is filled with romantic images and script. Nicely done
August 20th, 2025 19:28 - Lost Youth (A Boy With Roses)
Recollections and longings fill this poem. A lovely write
August 20th, 2025 19:24 - Don\'t Stand so Close (Thomas W Case)
Now this one came out of nowhere. An unknown woman in this poem. Mystery...
August 20th, 2025 19:19 - Never forgotten (Maplespal)
A tender poem of missing that special someone that gave us birth and...
August 20th, 2025 15:39 - Rivalry on ice (Nicole Pritchard)
A great poem of rivalry forged in friendship. So glad that hocky bonds us...
August 20th, 2025 15:37 - Side by Side (Purgatory Phoenix)
Short but nicely written with good rhyme and meaning. Well done
August 20th, 2025 15:34 - Where love turns to sighs. (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
A poem of keeping all inside. Nicely written with rhyme. Well done
August 20th, 2025 15:33 - Abyss (Rosey)
A feeling of desperation and hopelessness. Nicely written
August 20th, 2025 15:31 - When Boredom is truly underrated (Teddy.15)
Shoot and all these years I thought it was a yawn. A fun read my friend....
August 20th, 2025 12:55 - You are free (Devender Kumar)
What a most interesting structure to this poem in its alterations. Very...
August 20th, 2025 12:53 - Kissing (Amethyste)
A poem of adoration. Very nicely written
August 20th, 2025 12:51 - Run Away With Me (Tkatie118)
Carpe diem, live for today, live in the moment. A wonderful poem
August 20th, 2025 12:50 - To be a Poet... (Sad girl)
A most beautiful definition that in itself is poetic
August 20th, 2025 12:47 - Little Green Caterpillars (Malcolm Gladwin)
Simply beautiful lovely images, Great metaphor a fave
August 20th, 2025 12:35 - Walking the plank (YannickM)
Very nicely written cleverly rhymed and emotionally powerful. A fave
August 20th, 2025 12:32 - When You Walked Away (Samuel)
Powerful words, broken promises, sad but strong. nicely written a fave
August 20th, 2025 12:30 - O Too The Tears (Anthony Hanible)
Floods can be disasters whether literal or emotional. Nicely penned
August 20th, 2025 10:51 - Mt. Zero-Sum (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Now this one made me think. The mountain had a cloud surrounding it and...
August 20th, 2025 10:49 - butterfly (Jim56)
Lovely in image, beautiful in color, splendid in memory a wonderful poem...
August 20th, 2025 10:47 - Silent As Seed Beneath Soil (Gray0328)
Beautifully poetic the words of this piece. Nicely done Gray
August 20th, 2025 10:45 - The Mirror Says Aye (Rebellion_in_sanity)
The only safe designation is one\'s name (if it is a popular one) mine...
August 20th, 2025 10:44 - Who Had A Better Label? (Cheeky Missy)
Yes I agree the phrase day after has an ominous feel to it, either...
August 20th, 2025 10:40 - Core (Tristan Robert Lange)
Reading this in the image as opposed to the poem beneath I am left with...
August 20th, 2025 10:38 - Summer (Jerry Reynolds)
Always refreshing to read you poems Jerry
August 20th, 2025 10:28 - we meet again, mid-sentence (Arqios)
Cryptic your poems are growing deeper or maybe my mind is getting older,...
August 20th, 2025 10:27 - To create something from scratch. (Friendship)
A well rhymed and nicely metered poem of a dream friendship. It flows in...
August 20th, 2025 10:21 - The Making of the Dawn (Tony Grannell)
Once again Tony you have penned a poem that is a joy to read. Hats off.
August 20th, 2025 10:10 - Lovers Rose (RSM0812)
A very nice sonnet in most classical form. Lovely words
August 20th, 2025 04:17 - DERELICTION OF DUTY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Ironic that the one that could not take life unjustly is judged to loose...
August 20th, 2025 04:14 - Test of life (Poetic Dan)
Our children carry pieces of us some one piece and others another. Nicely...
August 20th, 2025 04:10 - Born To Be A Rebel (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
A message that many of us would agree with. It seems that as population...
August 20th, 2025 04:08 - Biscuit Jar (Chris Duffy)
A lovely metaphor for giving to others and offering what one has as a...
August 20th, 2025 04:04 - Little Things (Catluvr18)
Tender and nostalgic it speaks of missing someone loved. As noted in the...
August 20th, 2025 04:01 - The fifth season (Sami Mulaj)
I really like the last two lines of this poem that ground it and give it...
August 20th, 2025 03:58 - Expression of an Impressionist (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Here in free floating association and word play this poem ambles through...
August 20th, 2025 03:56 - Sculpture (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱)
This poem presents uncommon parings in metaphor that require a bit of...
August 20th, 2025 03:53 - Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60)
A peaceful poem Gold with a happy ending. It is a shame that most do not...
August 20th, 2025 03:46 - Never say never (Keeter C)
Experience makes one leary. A poem of loss and accompanying mistrust
August 19th, 2025 19:14 - Begging for Release (Malo J)
Thoughts and memories of a difficult past that bled out of pain and desire...
August 19th, 2025 14:56 - Thoughts of seams (Maplespal)
A poem of lost love that is not understood. The love itself misunderstood...
August 19th, 2025 14:52 - Phoenix rising (Nicole Pritchard)
Fire and the phoenix, rebirth from the ashes. There is passion in this...
August 19th, 2025 14:50 - A letter (Amethyste)
A letter of missing someone and a hope for a response. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 13:07 - Of Eating, Growing Up, and Kissing Scenes (Cheeky Missy)
I am not so sure but I feel that kissing scenes are more a woman thing. As...
August 19th, 2025 10:56 - Incoming Freshmen (Gray0328)
Higher education, jobs, life itself all could fit here. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 10:53 - Only He Can (Kurt Philip Behm)
A poem of doing what we are able and looking up to those that can do more....
August 19th, 2025 10:52 - Therapists Lament (Randy Carter)
Love limericks and this one fits the bill. A most fun read about a sordid...
August 19th, 2025 10:50 - Foretold (Sassy Lou)
Valid questions in poetic style that come through with the feeling of...
August 19th, 2025 09:29 - [SYNTAX_ERR0R] (DeadRose)
Most creative and poignant in the age we live in. A wonderful and artistic...
August 19th, 2025 09:27 - Oh, a child’s mind. (Georgia Watson)
So well spoken and the last line ties it up so well. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 09:24 - Bet (Damaso)
Love your author\'s note that clarifies the poem. A mad hatter dash for a...
August 19th, 2025 09:23 - Cold As Hell (Tristan Robert Lange)
This poem is cold and dark it breaths the air of the tomb. It smells of...
August 19th, 2025 09:16 - RAINBOW. (Vamsi Sudha)
Charming and most lovely. I have chased rainbows to find their end and as...
August 19th, 2025 07:32 - Womb on Trial (Awam)
What a wonderful twist on the old saying that love is blind. Too true to...
August 19th, 2025 07:29 - Circus in my head (REBELLIOUS SOUL)
Ah but so true life is a circus with all its pleasures and its fleeting...
August 19th, 2025 07:22 - To Them Who... (Tony Grannell)
Timeless! Tribute to the unseen that hold the fabric of society and weave...
August 19th, 2025 07:16 - Morning (YannickM)
Loved the rhyme scheme of this poem. It speaks from darkness into light....
August 19th, 2025 05:29 - living on an island (Jim56)
Very nice Jim Although not alone I have lived there and it is very nice. A...
August 19th, 2025 05:11 - Where my Name Used to Live (Samuel)
Brave is the word that comes to mind as this seems a proclamation and...
August 19th, 2025 05:10 - Little Flower (RSM0812)
A great metaphor in this poem where love needs to be nurtured and cared...
August 19th, 2025 05:05 - Love (Dn)
A poem of expressing the inexpressible and with emotion. Nicely done
August 19th, 2025 05:03 - what he did to me (Carpe4diem)
On first reading this sounds like a poem of past abuse but it could be...
August 19th, 2025 04:58 - Wordless music talks (Poetic Dan)
A fun read that rings with truth. I heard the water sing in the pipes from...
August 19th, 2025 04:55 - ritual II (Yael Garcia)
Love word play and this poem is full of it all four lines.
August 19th, 2025 04:53 - MORE THAN A SOCIAL DRINKER (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson))
Have had friends like that. Sad to see someone loose control of drink,...
August 19th, 2025 04:52 - Relationship Problems (Anthony Hanible)
Distilled anguish of truth where all boils down to separation of what once...
August 19th, 2025 04:50 - Constantly Pushed To One Side (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Avoidance a safer tactic when one wishes to steer clear of conflict....
August 19th, 2025 04:48 - Don\'t Pretend Like You Don\'t Know (Pita)
Good advise as to how to maintain a relationship. An insightful piece
August 19th, 2025 04:45 - Last Breath (Sassy Lou)
A poem of sadness and darkness that speaks of the end in a harsh world....
August 19th, 2025 04:43 - There\'s still more (Hzugman)
Well said. This poem in a short quatrain delivers a rhymed truth. Our...
August 19th, 2025 04:40 - Defeated (Sharvi)
A great analogy that fits so well as a metaphor. Indeed dreams are like...
August 19th, 2025 04:35 - simple sample (Arqios)
Indeed there is something distancing in the technological, mechanical...
August 19th, 2025 04:33 - Marching on Bone Spurs (Neville)
Although the individual does not come to mind the message seeps through...
August 19th, 2025 04:27 - Soup (Teddy.15)
Real strength lays behind the facade of power. Quite is the granite bolder...
August 19th, 2025 04:21 - Towards The Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
Love the country Andy, always have and that is my choice of living. Very...
August 19th, 2025 04:16 - Little Bird (Sami Mulaj)
A sad poem with allegorical and nicely formed story
August 18th, 2025 20:20 - Artemis (Ja'Quan Shepard)
Artemis king of the hunt. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 20:17 - Hindsight (Keeter C)
Mind provoking and something to think about. nicely done
August 18th, 2025 18:17 - Not So Broken (Fränz Müller)
We all break things from time to time but that does not mean that we are...
August 18th, 2025 18:16 - National Bad Poetry Day (Spencer Wilhelm)
You can\'t believe anything you hear anymore internet, news, social media...
August 18th, 2025 18:13 - The lost world (Nicole Pritchard)
Many different types mentioned in this poem. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 18:11 - Remember good something by Andrey Dementyev (Ksey_Gan)
Memories are most important. Nicely penned.
August 18th, 2025 18:08 - Is Poetry Salvation (Tooway)
A poem of relationships and striving to make things work. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 18:05 - Family tied (Philomena)
What is family, can they rid themselves of you? An interesting concept of...
August 18th, 2025 18:01 - If meant to be (Wildecho14)
I always loved this theme of secrets kept that interupt what could have...
August 18th, 2025 15:40 - I’d let the world burn for you. (Georgia Watson)
A poem of love and dedication to the point of antihalation. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 15:38 - Dolly (Paul Bell)
The horrors of war seen through the eyes of a child so accustomed to death...
August 18th, 2025 15:36 - Love And Pain (Anthony Hanible)
Abuse in this poem that pits the abused as challenger against the champion...
August 18th, 2025 15:34 - Circus (Mik this is mik)
An interesting work in metaphors that speaks of good and evil in a...
August 18th, 2025 15:17 - The Existence Plan (Aa Harvey)
A lovely poem that metaphorically speaks of relationships and differences...
August 18th, 2025 15:15 - F.R.A.U.D. (DeadRose)
A poem of self criticism so common among those that have high standards. A...
August 18th, 2025 15:13 - Tears, Fears, Years & Eggshells (BoxMyHeart)
Literal or metaphorical there is distance here emotional distance. It may...
August 18th, 2025 15:10 - Gloomy (Amethyste)
A most interesting contrast of being alone in a city, bored with nothing...
August 18th, 2025 15:08 - Burning Letters (Priya Tomar)
I may be reaching too far here but to me this poem brings images of Indian...
August 18th, 2025 15:07 - Yellow (A.N.)
Defined by a color a lovely concept and quite poetic. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:58 - My Prime Number (Adventuressmalik)
A most interesting concept in that a prime number is only divisible by 1...
August 18th, 2025 14:57 - Affectations trailed with pet appellations, particularly endearments suffuses me with giddiness (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow)
Thoughts and images pepper this poem with a bit of spice. Nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:54 - Rebuilt by My will (Funmiwrites)
A lovely write and even lovelier message of charity and the art of giving...
August 18th, 2025 14:52 - Psalm for the Mosquito (Yael Garcia)
A great message of giving even from one\'s own need. No violence toward...
August 18th, 2025 14:49 - Right Next To Me (Pete the poet)
Fanciful is the mind of the poet where there are no constraints by reality...
August 18th, 2025 14:47 - Occam Says ... (Kurt Philip Behm)
There is no figuring wisdom for it comes with age and experience not logic...
August 18th, 2025 14:44
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