Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• > The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk) Unfortunately too true. A most fun read that rings true and having worked...
  September 9th, 2024 14:59
• We’re all Cannibals (Thesummergloss) The message in this poem hidden under the skin has to be opened to be...
  September 9th, 2024 06:57
• Drunk (Drone7) Very powerful image. This poem speaks with reproach to the sadness and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:53
• During Strawberry Season (Finley Oaktree) I love the imagery and the internal rhyme in this poem. It gives a...
  September 9th, 2024 06:52
• Beer Garden But No Peace! (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Self medicating again? A fun read, but with a good message. Nicely
  September 9th, 2024 06:49
• 99 Red balloons (Maplespal) A wonderful commemoration of the madness of war. Wars fought for misplaced...
  September 9th, 2024 06:48
• CARRY YOUR CROSS (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A plea for understanding he heard in this poem. Nicely written.
  September 9th, 2024 06:46
• I Have Loved You (Dev Parth) This poem was beautifully written with wonderful meter and rhyme. Its...
  September 9th, 2024 06:45
• Home (Teddy.15) Teddy I feel your longing for your home. There is a feeling of loss in...
  September 9th, 2024 06:42
• My little life (Neilton) There are strong feelings of love in this poem. Carries with it a...
  September 9th, 2024 06:37
• Dreams (Charles Kick) A scent of loneliness Fills this poem. It carries with it, sadness and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:35
• Worship Worthiness (Orchidee) A very peaceful poem. Orchi This is a good one to begin the week with....
  September 9th, 2024 06:33
• The haven of love (Saleh Ben Saleh) Very beautiful images in this poem. They stimulate past memories and...
  September 9th, 2024 06:30
• Failure of Fields (Dan Williams) A poem that begins dark with many shadows, but soon shows the break of day...
  September 9th, 2024 06:28
• im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse) I love the message in this poem. It is well written with good sound logic....
  September 9th, 2024 06:25
• ~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk) A poem of sadness, betrayal, and disillusion. Because one fails on one’s...
  September 9th, 2024 06:22
• Where The Wild Grass Grows (Tom Dylan) I like the contrast between the beauty of nature and the sound of humanity...
  September 9th, 2024 06:17
• Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Some memories never fade. A lovely tribute Gold.
  September 9th, 2024 04:56
• I Am Not A Poet (𓆩Mase𓆪) A most interesting view. I always heard that if it sounds like a duck and...
  September 8th, 2024 20:43
• A touch (Neilton)
  September 8th, 2024 08:47
• A touch (Neilton) We all seek the light. A beautiful poem.
  September 8th, 2024 08:47
• A touch (Neilton) Light the symbol for knowledge a guiding source. Nicely done.
  September 8th, 2024 06:34
• Your calming song (Maplespal) Loss and missing the departed remains the theme in this poem. Nicely...
  September 8th, 2024 06:29
• God? (Boot) Mother Mary full of grace..... Feminism has its role. Loved the...
  September 8th, 2024 06:28
• Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor) Well written this tribute to the poet, In a sense it is like writting...
  September 8th, 2024 06:24
• The Last Dark Day (ADarkerMind) Enigmatic, lines evoking images and painting patterns I`ve not...
  September 8th, 2024 06:21
• Rainbow (Teddy.15) Lovely Teddy just what I needed a smilely face and since I`m down under,...
  September 8th, 2024 06:17
• HANDSOME (Bobby O) A wonderful tributed to a man. Nicely written with internal rhyme.
  September 8th, 2024 06:13
• Psalm Praise (Orchidee) Ok Orchi I can now say I have done my Sunday service. Nicely written my...
  September 8th, 2024 06:10
• I tried and tried (Sheta) A raw expression of the pain of loss. Impactful and stated with power.
  September 8th, 2024 06:07
• The beauty of night (Saleh Ben Saleh) I have always loved the night and its splendor. When young I remember...
  September 8th, 2024 06:05
• Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A warm and endearing thought nicely put Andy.
  September 8th, 2024 05:58
• How To Grow Old (Dan Williams) When younger I thought of some day growing older. I blinked and now I am...
  September 8th, 2024 05:55
• The Pocket Watch (Tony36) A special story with special meaning about a special object. Nicely done,...
  September 7th, 2024 14:05
• Skin Game (Mutley Ravishes) A good message. Many people have difficulty with forgiveness. It is often...
  September 7th, 2024 07:43
• Fusions? (Orchidee) Orchi a good write And I too, have trouble with fusion poems. Sometimes...
  September 7th, 2024 07:41
• THE QUEEN (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) I love the wording in this poem. Womb escape is a great image.
  September 7th, 2024 07:35
• Coloured poem (Framed Mirror) A very short poem, but conveys a powerful message. Very nicely written.
  September 7th, 2024 07:34
• The returning point (Hooli) This poem carries a very uncommon view. It is very understandable and I...
  September 7th, 2024 07:32
• You Are Light (Mark The Phenomenon) There is the harmony and peace of nature in this poem. It carries...
  September 7th, 2024 07:30
• When Dreams Reflect Eternity (Salvia.S) The most beautiful poem. It speaks of nature in a metaphor for dreams...
  September 7th, 2024 07:28
• Imperfect Perspective (Cocamedo) Most interesting poem. Well written with great metaphor and rhyme.
  September 7th, 2024 07:27
• Jazzers List. (Goldfinch60) You set the tone with the musicthe names and of course memories ot such...
  September 7th, 2024 05:09
• Crescendo (Dan Williams) This poem is full of wonderful lines and is said in a musing manner as if...
  September 7th, 2024 05:05
• Ant Hill (Thomas W Case) Unique imagry here. The ant hill fit in well
  September 6th, 2024 19:11
• And So It Is (Cassie58) It often appears that life is quite fragile. Sometimes it seems more...
  September 6th, 2024 14:15
• Rainbows and Waterfalls (MendedFences27) Waterfalls waves rainbows all beautiful in nature. Art is in the eye of...
  September 6th, 2024 14:13
• Mystery Girl (Tony36) A mystery indeed. Maybe an attractive one. A fun write
  September 6th, 2024 09:50
• My poems are... (Tom Dylan) Ahh yes and so much more. Loved the poem.
  September 6th, 2024 09:47
• On Hump Day Where Pink Signifies What? (Cheeky Missy) A biblical format, indeed. This seems quite old-school in fact and rings...
  September 6th, 2024 04:48
• I have to wait (Maplespal) This was a fun read. It has a somewhat nihilistic or I don’t care...
  September 6th, 2024 04:44
• cancer killer (Jim56) Sad the seeds lightened a bit in your poem very nicely done a very fun
  September 6th, 2024 04:42
• cancer killer (Jim56)
  September 6th, 2024 04:42
• Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee) Keep it up Orchi I am rooting for you. Don’t let anyone squelch your...
  September 6th, 2024 04:39
• Amaranthine love (Neilton) A lovely write. A Professing of love and an idealistic view of it. Very...
  September 6th, 2024 04:35
• Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Love, no snow age Andy. A tender and lovely write. May that love last...
  September 6th, 2024 04:29
• Out of Choices (Dan Williams) As usual, there is a significant amount of philosophy and wisdom in this...
  September 6th, 2024 04:26
• A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15) Nothing like getting down to the bare bones I find it interesting that...
  September 6th, 2024 04:18
• Pizza (DLewis88) Is this really about pizza? Or is it a metaphor? Nicely said in very few...
  September 5th, 2024 13:55
• Have You? (Jace) I think many people have had this thought. It is nicely expressed in this...
  September 5th, 2024 13:54
• listening ears (Mixxedchixs) A very important message in this poem. Listening is more important than...
  September 5th, 2024 13:51
• ~ Clyde The Turkey ~ Limericks (Thad Wilk) Thad, I’ve told you before I like limerick and this is a good one. It...
  September 5th, 2024 13:49
• Hibiscus Tea (Mya) A very nice metaphor. Yes those memories can be good or bad and carry with...
  September 5th, 2024 13:47
• My post is traumatic (EvenwheniLie) Whatever you call it, Shellshock or post traumatic stress disorder it is...
  September 5th, 2024 13:45
• The Man in the Corner (The Indignant Poetess) A poem of an undesired guest. Whether a creeper or an admirer or even a...
  September 5th, 2024 13:42
• Garbage (2781) A great story and I love poems that are ballads. This could be called a...
  September 5th, 2024 13:41
• DEAD INSIGHT (Adnan it is) Lost if not dead. That is a powerful statement. I sent the emotion in this...
  September 5th, 2024 13:36
• Crack (Gray0328) A very interesting poem. Metaphorical in many ways. Mind provoking.
  September 5th, 2024 13:31
• Dream (John Prophet) Dreams, mysterious, and intriguing. The most interesting poem.
  September 5th, 2024 13:29
• Dream (John Prophet) There are times when we are different than there are times when we are the...
  September 5th, 2024 10:56
• The Christmas Card (MendedFences27) A crime story here of suspense and horror. Nicely written.
  September 5th, 2024 10:55
• Spellbinding Tale (Job Welime) Gratitude well expressed in a love letter
  September 5th, 2024 10:51
• K.R.O.N.A.H.E.L. (Krona~Hel) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) Powerful words, well said
  September 5th, 2024 10:48
• Point of View (Tony36) Prejudice again, darkens the eyesight of the viewer. Very nicely put into...
  September 5th, 2024 10:48
• Cross Hairs (Kurt Philip Behm) The prejudice of our point of view put into a few words that read so...
  September 5th, 2024 10:46
• The Tempest\'s Strike (Tristan Robert Lange) Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of...
  September 5th, 2024 08:19
• A Whale of a Time (senryu) (Teddy.15) Teddy I love this haiku. It has far deeper meaning than the ocean the...
  September 5th, 2024 06:46
• The Dance of Power and Weakness (Prasun Goswami) Ahh the quest for truth. We all search for it and find it it changes day...
  September 5th, 2024 06:44
• Hereby, A Confession (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) We are all actors on a stage as Shakespeare said. We should all question...
  September 5th, 2024 06:42
• ODOGWU WITH THE LITERARY PEN 🖋 (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) A great tribute. Nicely said.
  September 5th, 2024 06:40
• Fish (Out of water) (Weep little lion girl) Very nice tree. I love the analogy of a fish drowning. This was brought...
  September 5th, 2024 06:39
• Bitter Chains (Mark The Phenomenon) A beautiful message is sent in this poem. It is nicely worded and flows...
  September 5th, 2024 06:37
• The Bow is Drawn (Mutley Ravishes) Most beautifully said. We all ask why. A beautiful choice of wording and...
  September 5th, 2024 06:36
• What\'s Next? (Sunshine777) A wonderful message one should never look back. One should live in the...
  September 5th, 2024 06:34
• 10:09 pm (NightCoffee) Wonderful wording in this poem. It is well concocted with its own witchery...
  September 5th, 2024 06:32
• At Church (Rrodriguez) One should always go to where one finds peace. Whether this is a church or...
  September 5th, 2024 06:30
• it is not all just sad and gloomy (MR.apocalypse) Beautifully stated I love the line about how the rain makes the grass...
  September 5th, 2024 06:28
• Affirmative Lament (Steve Goldenfort) I love the first stanza to this poem. Much wisdom is contained in the poem...
  September 5th, 2024 06:24
• Locked Sensor (Introverted Sage) The center is the place to look. Answers lie within in the matter what you...
  September 5th, 2024 06:21
• Sneezing fit – tests nasal septum (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Well, I guess that pretty well says it. You have covered the subject quite...
  September 5th, 2024 06:19
• By Your Law\'s (Drone7) A good poem for parents, but also a metaphor that we as children of...
  September 5th, 2024 06:17
• 12:06 To 12:07 (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Hard to know what to believe. Books all change politics change the world...
  September 5th, 2024 06:15
• Dirty Boy Heaven (A Boy With Roses) So many drugs. Love is a drug as well and one can become addicted to it....
  September 5th, 2024 06:13
• How do I speak to you? (Maplespal) A very poignant question. What do we say to one who is gone? What words...
  September 5th, 2024 06:10
• love hurts (Jim56) Very nice Jim. Love can be a one-way street. It comes from inside and does...
  September 5th, 2024 06:08
• Growing In Grace (Orchidee) Another beautiful hymn, welcome composed and with a bright thought. Good...
  September 5th, 2024 06:06
• Against The Flow/ (Goldfinch60) Gold as always, your thoughts are positive. I too go against the flow and...
  September 5th, 2024 06:04
• Now it feels right (Vishakha) Nicely said. This is the most positive thought and needs to be...
  September 5th, 2024 06:00
• What is the word? (Maplespal) I search for the same word. It seems somehow buried deep inside, but my...
  September 5th, 2024 05:56
• The Mindshark (Dan Williams) I love this one Dan it is an anthropomorphic metaphor of life itself. Cute...
  September 5th, 2024 05:21