Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• A message to you (Amepiesces) A great message tp us all, child or not. Time will work things out and...
  December 20th, 2022 09:17
• Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60) It is one thing that defines people, those that are positive, or negative,...
  December 17th, 2022 06:57
• War Veterans (Doggerel Dave) You make a good point. You would think that we would have reached a point...
  December 16th, 2022 17:55
• Light Limitless - Carol Series (5) (Orchidee) Another hymn that could fit in any church\'s hymnal. I am always reminded...
  December 16th, 2022 11:59
• Mud, Mud, Glorious Mud (Doggerel Dave) I remember her she put a damper on my spirits until we got a separation....
  December 16th, 2022 07:25
• Mr Right (Arqios) Right. To write is to not be left behind my teacher used to say. Now I\'ll...
  December 15th, 2022 21:49
• The Cost of Living (Bella Shepard) What worries me is the cost of dying. I can\'t afford to die, it costs...
  December 14th, 2022 20:49
• Serious Questions (Doggerel Dave) Senior moments are becoming a regular expectation for me. Loved the...
  December 14th, 2022 20:46
• Incarnation Impartation - Carol Series (4) (Orchidee) This time of the year is perfect for this write. Moses gave the law of an...
  December 14th, 2022 13:56
• Kant spel (Hzugman) No one knows how to spell anymore. they don\'t teach cursive writing...
  December 11th, 2022 21:56
• Living Light (Orchidee) A great message. A prayer that if we put ourselves in the place of God, we...
  December 10th, 2022 08:47
• When Size is Not Everything (Neville) The best gifts come in small packages (sometimes). A great play on words...
  December 10th, 2022 08:43
• Long Life Pleasure. (Goldfinch60) So true, but as they say; we are only as old as we think we are. Age is in...
  December 10th, 2022 08:41
• Creatures of Nature (Bella Shepard) I could\'t agree more. We, in our arrogance, tend to aggrandize ourselves,...
  December 10th, 2022 07:37
• there (Arqios) It came to me that all art is a bit nostalgic needing past experience to...
  December 10th, 2022 07:33
• Joy And Freedom. (Goldfinch60) Andy I have always loved music, it can reach deep into the soul and heart,...
  December 9th, 2022 06:55
• head gear all in poe (Arqios) A clever use of the word-- words. It makes sense to me but then I\'ve had...
  December 8th, 2022 19:06
• Freedom From The Doctrine Of Men - Series (8) (Orchidee) You can\'t tell a book by its cover, it\'s not what that is on the outside...
  December 8th, 2022 19:00
• The New Watch. (Goldfinch60) Habits are a hard thing to break even when one wants to. A great story...
  December 8th, 2022 18:55
• Rampant Vegetation. (Doggerel Dave) Dave I loved where this went. I too go to the bathroom when I have beans...
  December 8th, 2022 18:49
• Nowhere (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Dave for stopping by and commenting on this piece.
  December 8th, 2022 18:40
• Life (Bella Shepard) Bella what a great thought. I do try to laugh at the sadness in life, it...
  December 2nd, 2022 17:16
• The Chair. (Doggerel Dave) I\'ve always had problems with these put together yourself items, the...
  December 2nd, 2022 12:25
• thursday winds (Dusk arising) Dusk this brought back memories that have been buried for a long time.
  December 2nd, 2022 12:21
• Peace And Harmony. (Goldfinch60) Music touches the soul where nothing else can reach. A nice write that...
  December 1st, 2022 06:40
• Just Asking (Doggerel Dave) Have you been reading my stuff again? You can recognize them by a couple...
  November 30th, 2022 22:12
• with my rhymes i am greater (MR.apocalypse) I liked this poem. At first it reminded me of a poem I had written some...
  November 30th, 2022 22:04
• Doing his Best (Fay Slimm.) This brings so many memories. Watching hawks and eagles as a grand part of...
  November 28th, 2022 07:58
• Just Another Zen Thing (Neville) A great analogy and wonderful poem put very succinctly and words as smooth...
  November 28th, 2022 06:23
• so once (Dusk arising) We all question ourselves at times and it is how we respond to these...
  November 28th, 2022 06:21
• Forget Four Letter Words. (Doggerel Dave) This is a good and valid point. We or us are used without validation to...
  November 28th, 2022 06:09
• baggage claim delay (Arqios) Not ever having been to Ohio I have to let my mind carry me there, which...
  November 28th, 2022 05:43
• Walking To School. (Goldfinch60) I like you grew up in those times walking and later riding a bicycle to...
  November 26th, 2022 16:35
• so once (Dusk arising) Loose the chains, loose the beast, there is beauty in that beast. Do I...
  November 25th, 2022 15:09
• Freedom From Enticing Words - Series (4) (Orchidee) Good write John
  November 25th, 2022 13:06
• Beholding The Baptist (Orchidee) This brought back many memories from childhood of Bible stories. So well...
  November 25th, 2022 07:20
• Death By a Thousand…… (Doggerel Dave) Dave I have been there. I\'m not sure whether it is worse to be bitten or...
  November 25th, 2022 07:18
• I Am One With Creation (Bella Shepard) I couldn\'t agree more Bella and I too feel that winter has arrived in my...
  November 25th, 2022 07:15
• ice fishing anyone? (Arqios) Personally I prefer going south, whether to warmer weather or the other...
  November 25th, 2022 07:11
• Creating Music. (Goldfinch60) A nice setting well imaged and with the feeling of completion and present...
  November 25th, 2022 07:08
• germinant style birthed (Arqios) Crypticbard this one hit home. I have had several poems like that. A...
  November 23rd, 2022 09:07
• negotiable leave (Arqios) A great pick for music to accompany this image crammed piece. This speaks...
  November 21st, 2022 10:28
• Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Andy there is too little of this. Years ago, in Brazil, the news would...
  November 20th, 2022 06:08
• fastidious malignment (Arqios) Such use of verbiage. Who has been slandering you? I loved the feel of the...
  November 19th, 2022 07:09
• where might you be? (Arqios) A beautiful dream like image of memories and the presence. So well worded...
  November 17th, 2022 08:33
• My Good Life. (Goldfinch60) I feel the same way Gold and I feel and endorse your last line.
  November 16th, 2022 07:26
• What is To Be Done? (Doggerel Dave) Well rhymed, well timed. I approach politics like a crime scene with the...
  November 15th, 2022 22:01
• irreconcilably different? (Arqios) A good question that can be taken more than one way. I suppose that the...
  November 15th, 2022 10:37
• transitions (Arqios) I particularly liked the last stanza, pregnant with imagery. A timely...
  November 13th, 2022 09:03
• To Walk By Moonlight (Bella Shepard) Bella this revives many feelings of peace and serenity. Such moments must...
  November 12th, 2022 12:48
• Love (Doggerel Dave) So true Dave. Love is used as a façade to cover what really lies behind a...
  November 12th, 2022 07:21
• muffly muppet (Arqios) Somehow this little miss Tuffet sounds vaguely familiar. Are you sure...
  November 11th, 2022 07:29
• Not My Problem. (Goldfinch60) The older I get the more this is true. When young other\'s opinions...
  November 10th, 2022 11:07
• Fatalist? (Bella Shepard) This one goes far deeper than the light hearted initial impression. I...
  November 9th, 2022 16:56
• Presence Perceived (Orchidee) Very nice orchidee it reminds me a great deal of Psalms, one of the more...
  November 9th, 2022 16:45
• asteriskos (Arqios) This brings to mind the Kabala and the angel\'s alphabet that to those...
  November 9th, 2022 09:25
• POOL (Dusk arising) A wonderful reflection. It is in water that we seek wisdom, its form...
  November 9th, 2022 08:44
• Truth (Sorenbarrett) Thank you dusk so good to hear from you your comments are always so
  November 9th, 2022 08:36
• The Future (Bella Shepard) Another great haiku yes we are all trying to catch up with our future.
  November 7th, 2022 16:02
• Dwelling Delights (Orchidee) A hymn indeed. Be careful they will soon draft you to write these for the...
  November 7th, 2022 10:09
• rail branches (Arqios) This short snapshot of a poem dives deep into my heart and soul. I have...
  November 7th, 2022 10:03
• Centipede scare (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature...
  November 6th, 2022 14:27
• fill each unruled page (Arqios) Judging a book by its cover when there is no book seems to be the norm now...
  November 6th, 2022 09:12
• To Tyro Poets in Need of Advice: (Doggerel Dave) Poetry is like music to me, there is no one type that I prefer. A well...
  November 6th, 2022 09:00
• Praises Prepared (Orchidee) A true hymn of praise. I am glad to see you pointed out the the formal...
  November 6th, 2022 08:53
• Integrity Issue (Doggerel Dave) A well told story with wit and a happy ending. What more could you want in...
  November 5th, 2022 07:11
• Brain Full. (Goldfinch60) The process may not be selective but why does it seem that what falls off...
  November 5th, 2022 07:05
• minding your portals (Arqios) This piece has a hypnotic beat that like its message takes charge of the...
  November 5th, 2022 06:58
• seasonalities (Arqios) Many think of Christmas when talking of seasons, I no. I hear these words...
  November 4th, 2022 21:32
• Storms Of Clearance. (Goldfinch60) If it doesn\'t kill you it will make you stronger.
  November 4th, 2022 21:28
• Exhorting To Endurance (Orchidee) A hymn of praise indeed. This could easily be sung in church. Nicely...
  November 4th, 2022 21:26
• Collective Communion (Orchidee) A true poem of thanks giving. Very nicely written.
  November 3rd, 2022 06:20
• The C Word. (Goldfinch60) It\'s funny what is in a word that we can only use the first letter and...
  November 3rd, 2022 06:16
• Just Another Day…. (Doggerel Dave) I don\'t know what has led us to be so politically correct and loose our...
  November 2nd, 2022 19:10
• I Dreamt (Bella Shepard) This to me is an ideal haiku, although maybe not by oriental standard, it...
  November 2nd, 2022 13:26
• with you (Arqios) A wonderful longing feeling accompanies this poem. It seems somehow...
  November 2nd, 2022 09:41
• Not Enough (Doggerel Dave) Agreed, too many unthought suggestions by those that don\'t understand the...
  October 31st, 2022 13:58
• Turtle On A Brick (Bella Shepard) Bella I love the way you present this story and dilema. Not only were the...
  October 31st, 2022 13:55
• main architect (Arqios) This is what I once believed and still hold some tendency toward. I would...
  October 31st, 2022 13:50
• Teaching Respect. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful story. To me a handshake is a sign of respect. I knew a man...
  October 31st, 2022 13:46
• Raindrop (Sorenbarrett) Thank you, L.B. your comments are always so welcome. I deeply appreciate...
  October 31st, 2022 08:39
• Concern.... (Doggerel Dave) Years ago in Brazil they made an attempt to match each bad item on the...
  October 27th, 2022 07:31
• Ian (Rocky Lagou) I have weathered so many hurricanes I have lost count, of holding in...
  October 27th, 2022 07:02
• The Potion (Paul Bell) Although not form the UK I loved this one. I loved how it was a bit...
  October 27th, 2022 06:52
• Going On In Grace (Orchidee) A beautiful write that we should all look to fulfill
  October 27th, 2022 06:47
• Magic In Music. (Goldfinch60) Art, poems, and music all give meaning to life and translate life\'s...
  October 27th, 2022 06:45
• toward-winter verse (Arqios) All things need a time of rest or hibernation, so too with writing. It...
  October 27th, 2022 05:59
• there were shadows (Dusk arising) A snapshot frozen in time. This also evokes something far deeper, a...
  October 26th, 2022 16:39
• Two Loners at the Pond (Haiku/Senryū #6) (Rocky Lagou) I always have been intrigued by haikus and only wish I knew how to wright...
  October 26th, 2022 16:29
• Just Because (senryu-maybe) (Bella Shepard) I know little about the senryu form but regardless this is an appropriate...
  October 25th, 2022 18:58
• Phoenix (Bella Shepard) Bella I have seldom found so few words convey so much emotion and meaning....
  October 24th, 2022 16:07
• Into The Universe (Bella Shepard) Breathing helps center us, calm us and is a method used by different...
  October 23rd, 2022 16:09
• A Single Thought (Bella Shepard) Profound and deep, but don\'t pant too deep or it may never come up. So...
  October 21st, 2022 13:43
• Compass Rose (Rocky Lagou) All dreams need just a little water to spawn germination and a little more...
  October 17th, 2022 11:51
• Seize and See. (Fay Slimm.) Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present...
  October 17th, 2022 11:47
• Off On Vacation! (Bella Shepard) I hope that this trip inspires many more wonderful poems of yours. Look...
  October 17th, 2022 11:42
• licence to keel (Arqios) All kinds are needed, comedy and tragedy, but of Shakespeare\'s works, I...
  October 17th, 2022 11:33
• The Thing (Paul Bell) Very appropriate at this season in the U.S. for Halloween. It reminds me...
  October 17th, 2022 11:27
• With All My Fondest Regards (Neville) Not limited to ex-lovers, this could easily be sent to many so called...
  October 17th, 2022 11:24
• Nature Nurtured (Orchidee) A true poem of thanksgiving. Very appropriate for this season in the U.S....
  October 17th, 2022 11:21