Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• The poet in hell (Lorenz) Poets do not belong in the religious and traditional heaven and must be...
  August 18th, 2025 14:43
• What Would You Do For A Collar? (Cheeky Missy) I love dogs too and the aroma of your cooking must bring them running....
  August 18th, 2025 14:39
• Top Drawer (Teddy.15) A great image. I think I have its brother. How those drawers fill is...
  August 18th, 2025 14:01
• South of Me (Tristan Robert Lange) Living under hell what a most interesting concept. Basement please. A fun...
  August 18th, 2025 14:00
• We Have All Been There (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) Another poem of faith and belief to give strength to those that believe....
  August 18th, 2025 13:02
• Peace is in Pieces (Awam) Plays on words make the central line of this poem. It plays through it...
  August 18th, 2025 09:25
• Missing Persons Report (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A sense of darkness and decay mentioned here. Well done
  August 18th, 2025 09:22
• Dead-man\'s Chest (Rebellion_in_sanity) Cynicism a cutting knife that can leave wounds and scars. A most...
  August 18th, 2025 09:19
• Trapped. (Friendship) Such beautiful rhyme enfolds this poem where it is pointed out that there...
  August 18th, 2025 09:16
• Stargazing (YannickM) Welcome to MPS the poem leaves the writer voyaging on time. Nicely written...
  August 18th, 2025 09:12
• The Noise (Samuel) A physiological metaphor for the emotional. Closely related one to the...
  August 18th, 2025 06:42
• Woe (Lorna) A dark and cloudy poem of rainy days. Well worded it casts its shadow on...
  August 18th, 2025 06:40
• Goodbye Terence Stamp (Randyjohnson71) Another wonderful tribute to a passing actor. Well written in poetic form...
  August 18th, 2025 06:39
• Past messages (Maplespal) This brought to mind the Kabalistic view of the angel\'s alphabet where it...
  August 18th, 2025 06:37
• dreamer (Jim56) We all do our share of dreaming, some more than others. A lovely poem of...
  August 18th, 2025 04:50
• The Hawk\'s Arrival (Gray0328) Very nicely done this poem speaks of vision that goes beyond what most...
  August 18th, 2025 04:49
• Facing Empire (Tony Grannell) Irish history pours out of this dark vessel. A time when the stronger hand...
  August 18th, 2025 04:46
• Scribed to my brain (Poetic Dan) How we react to others dictates the type of person we are. Nicely written
  August 18th, 2025 04:29
• Unspoken Confession (Xalvazora) Values explored in this poem and boundaries where one begins and the other...
  August 18th, 2025 04:26
• Are You A Good Worker? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) The workplace has always been a difficult political playing field but...
  August 18th, 2025 04:23
• LITTLE DOGGIE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Fun but a barking dog is no fun. Written in poetic humor style it also...
  August 18th, 2025 04:20
• Analysis - Entering Furnace - Part 5--14 Aug 2025-last part (Soman Ragavan) It is most interesting to me how man has designed cerimonies that have...
  August 18th, 2025 04:18
• People change (RSM0812) A poem of faith and belief merged with life\'s struggles. Nicely written
  August 18th, 2025 04:16
• Birth of Mothergaia (Joseph M Marion) A spiritual poem that embodies the health of the planet and its life...
  August 18th, 2025 04:14
• I See You (Introverted Sage) A dark presence is felt in this poem and as it says it is in view and...
  August 18th, 2025 04:09
• Emotionally Unavailable (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem leaves the feeling of being part of a special group where...
  August 18th, 2025 04:07
• Stuck on you (Just_my_poetic_side) A poem of passing fancy or obsession? A common feeling that many have and...
  August 18th, 2025 04:04
• Magpie (Emery Walker) This poem has a period feel to it. It casts its own spell on the reader....
  August 18th, 2025 04:01
• Confusion (Dan Williams) Here physiology and everyday events are placed in allegory painted...
  August 18th, 2025 03:55
• The Neglected. (David Wakeling) The contrast of man\'s value of compassion and pity and nature\'s survival...
  August 18th, 2025 03:50
• clarity (Arqios) This one left me in a different land. I feel drifting somehow, vaguely...
  August 18th, 2025 03:43
• Pork Pies (Orchidee) Now what could be more entertaining that talking with a pork pie? as for...
  August 18th, 2025 03:35
• Pretty Skies a Haiku in Flight Mode (Neville) A beautiful picture that seems like I\'ve seen before in my life. Nicely...
  August 18th, 2025 03:30
• The Long Day. (Goldfinch60) Distance make the heart grow fonder. Nicely written Andy
  August 18th, 2025 03:28
• What Makes me Woman (Malo J) Anger, disgust, regret, pain, in your face all in this poem. A tough and...
  August 17th, 2025 19:29
• No wet cheeks (Golnarmoinamini.Standbypoet) A poem that leaves me feeling that there is a very uneven power base here....
  August 17th, 2025 19:24
• Here God Lies – In the Eyes of a Failure (Tooway) A great perception of creation no better that the creator. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 18:47
• Life (Keeter C) Hard work of any type works. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 18:45
• Shame On You (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) Deep lines in this poem nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 17:21
• The Beginning (_Doc_) Bits of truth mounted in a poem nicely done.
  August 17th, 2025 17:04
• my imaginary sancho panza quotes #28 (Jon Nakapalau) Well said and with great wisdom and truth
  August 17th, 2025 17:01
• To the Value of One (Kevin Hulme) A beautiful poem so well written a fave
  August 17th, 2025 17:00
• Cant save pain (Natalie Heisey) The format of this poem is like a song. I feel the madness. Lovely
  August 17th, 2025 16:55
• Reading in the paper about local government policies (Simple Tendencies) A most interesting approach looking at things from a negative point of...
  August 17th, 2025 15:56
• He Knows (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A poem of reliance and belief strongly stated. Faith and belief can go a...
  August 17th, 2025 15:47
• The Empty Nest (Kurt Philip Behm) The excitement of children their innocence and their inquisitiveness it...
  August 17th, 2025 14:09
• I\'m just starting - in Trump\'s own words (Raidoc) Are you sure that it\'s a parody sounds on point to me. A fun read
  August 17th, 2025 14:07
• Soothed (Amethyste) Sharing a principle part of loving someone. Good write
  August 17th, 2025 14:04
• Whispers of the heart (Nicole Pritchard) Everyone needs to be cherished and felt wanted. This poem reflects that...
  August 17th, 2025 13:23
• ...Gravy Lovers, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Love refried beans especially with some hot peppers for spice and as for...
  August 17th, 2025 13:22
• No exit allows egress... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) A lovely poem with rhyme and flow nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 13:20
• It is What it is! (Friendship) We are who we are and sometimes we ask if there were a god why would he...
  August 17th, 2025 13:19
• Evolve (Melanie Rodriguez) Each line a great message in and of itself. A poem of advice and...
  August 17th, 2025 13:14
• Not now, KP! (Orchidee) Tell Fido to look out for low punches. Another fun read to lighten the day
  August 17th, 2025 13:12
• Happy Satudays (Damaso) Exotic for me but at the same time it feels familiar. A most lovely write
  August 17th, 2025 13:05
• Winter\'s Sermon (Tony Grannell) I have come to expect only the best when reading your name on a poem. Tis...
  August 17th, 2025 11:35
• Purest sound (Starlight) Three words that cheer a parent\'s heart. Sweet music to the ear. Lovely
  August 17th, 2025 11:29
• Human condition (Lorenz) A poem with several references to literature and the feel of falling down...
  August 17th, 2025 10:18
• Puppy - Part 3 (Randyjohnson71) The bond between man and animal gos deep and both ways. Have had dogs and...
  August 17th, 2025 09:11
• I Called My Wild (Rebellion_in_sanity) The reason we live for explored in this poem. Memories, love, good that...
  August 17th, 2025 09:08
• Grace Without Possession (GeekSusie) A lovely and wise thought transmitted by this poem. Very nicely worded
  August 17th, 2025 09:04
• Where the mind is (Maplespal) Imagination a powerful and wonderful tool. Very nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 09:03
• Kitchens. (Ginny jayne) On the surface a homey and comfortable feel in metaphor it gives the same...
  August 17th, 2025 07:35
• Final Fall (Paul Bell) In short bites the poem is eaten and digested. Bit by bit differences are...
  August 17th, 2025 07:33
• Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is (Tristan Robert Lange) A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds (Emmerson) I hear...
  August 17th, 2025 07:28
• Ramblings of a mad man (2781) We all have our ramblings and all have our periods of madness a good read
  August 17th, 2025 06:27
• Hi Pad Hi Pen (Anthony Hanible) Pad and pen reminders of something to write, something felt, what is...
  August 17th, 2025 06:25
• Back On-Line (Samuel) A fire that still burns despite time. A lovely write
  August 17th, 2025 06:22
• Right On Through (Pete the poet) Oh these are troubled times. A poem that makes a statement about how...
  August 17th, 2025 05:00
• love is evrerywhere (Jim56) A beautiful poem about a powerful force Jim
  August 17th, 2025 04:58
• I See All Of Them (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A strong statement here with a powerful poem nicely said
  August 17th, 2025 04:57
• Flying Squirrel (Gray0328) The grace of a flying squirrel well described in this poem. Very nice Gray
  August 17th, 2025 04:55
• Natures life line (Poetic Dan) Unconditional love the healing balm and so rare to encounter. Usually only...
  August 17th, 2025 04:51
• ritual I (Yael Garcia) A quatrain with the same ending rhyme scheme but I am not sure how druids...
  August 17th, 2025 04:49
• Analysis - Entering Furnace - Part 4--14 Aug 2025 (Soman Ragavan) Here religious belief mixed with myth and the reality of death a nice...
  August 17th, 2025 04:46
• WHEN HOPE HAS LEFT (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem ends on a rather sad and hopeless note. It caries with it a...
  August 17th, 2025 04:44
• Finally Numb (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) There is such pain in this poem and a feeling of insignificance and...
  August 17th, 2025 04:42
• WE ARE THE SAME DREAM - ALEXIS KARPOUZOS (Alexis karpouzos) The whole poem is wonderful but is was the last stanza that captured my...
  August 17th, 2025 04:40
• Dreamless Sleep (RSM0812) The cadence of this poem brought to mind a chant over a caldron and...
  August 17th, 2025 04:38
• We Met in December (Priya Tomar) Here in this poem a running through the months that started in December...
  August 17th, 2025 04:35
• Doubt (Spencer Wilhelm) A clever write using fish and sharks as metaphor for problems that arise...
  August 17th, 2025 04:30
• Lust & Love (Sassy Lou) An interesting comparison and weighing of the two. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2025 04:27
• I Can\'t Sleep But I Think I\'m Okay With That This Time (Malo J) This poem may be taken in more than one way there is the inner small girl...
  August 17th, 2025 04:24
• Down (Fränz Müller) Grim and tragic this poem conveys a feeling of hopelessness and...
  August 17th, 2025 04:20
• Lonely (Ja'Quan Shepard) This poem has a rhythm to the lines that fit the rhyme. Nicely done.
  August 17th, 2025 04:18
• week in a wink (Arqios) This took me back to my childhood and rhymes of the days of the week. It...
  August 17th, 2025 04:17
• There is A Crease in Everything (Neville) Funny how a wrinkle can put a kink in everything from plans to actions. In...
  August 17th, 2025 04:14
• Use Time Wisely. (Goldfinch60) A great allegory Andy and what is worse there is no bank that we can...
  August 17th, 2025 04:05
• The Cost of Belonging (G.Cabús) Being oneself and proud of it is an important aspect of today\'s society....
  August 16th, 2025 20:37
• The Wealth of Youth (Thomas W Case) A fun story of a childhood memory that still extends into the present....
  August 16th, 2025 20:36
• come back to me (Lunarchloedip) A view and reflection of oneself. Nicely done
  August 16th, 2025 20:34
• Always on my mind (Nicole Pritchard) A testament of being drawn to another and a desire for its permanence....
  August 16th, 2025 19:49
• Bye, Honey! (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Clever and an interesting thought. Well done
  August 16th, 2025 19:44
• Enterprising Girl (Paul Bell) Clever rhyming in a most humorous poem. A fun read.
  August 16th, 2025 17:40
• Him (Lyricalremedy) A poem of seduction being entranced by another. Well written
  August 16th, 2025 17:38
• Departure (Sami Mulaj) A town an allegory or metaphor a town that only people leave from. Nicely...
  August 16th, 2025 17:15
• Home (Keeter C) All those things I am familiar with and love . It does feel like home.
  August 16th, 2025 16:00
• Wary glances are cast; (Amy Michelle Mosier) A reflective poem that asks the reader to reflect as well. Nicely done
  August 16th, 2025 15:15
• Love or lust (Krissy.V) A twist on most poems of love it asks the reader to question what is love...
  August 16th, 2025 15:13
• Who can put U.S., out (EvenwheniLie) A poem of outrage at the state of the nation and the divide that is...
  August 16th, 2025 14:04