Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Abraham’s Dream: Our Future (Framed Mirror) Reassuring words nicely written from one of faith. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 05:49
• No One Knows (Kman Pumpkin King28) Hidden pain that one chooses not to air. Held inside as a destructive...
  August 19th, 2024 05:48
• GATHERING WONDER (Bobby O) Oh Bobby you have hit upon a neglected topic. Wonder is what lies beneath...
  August 19th, 2024 05:43
• Travelling Tales (Orchidee) A departure from the classical approach to the more popular. A nice and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:39
• On Wednesdays Wear Pink with Chagrin (Cheeky Missy) Wow! So classical and the meter that runs through this piece that deserves...
  August 19th, 2024 05:37
• friends (Sheta) A lovely tribute it is wonderful to have a friend that has your back. Some...
  August 19th, 2024 05:34
• A Man Made Prison (J.Edse) Feelings that many share this poem drips with s sense of purposelessness,...
  August 19th, 2024 05:28
• Infinity (Sunshine777) A statement of love and pledge of friendship. Lovely
  August 19th, 2024 05:25
• ink stains hurt brains (MR.apocalypse) A thought provoking write. Philosophical and close to the heart. Loved it.
  August 19th, 2024 05:24
• Heal The Broken (Annemarie) A plea for opening up so well rhymed and metered. Nicely done
  August 19th, 2024 05:19
• Trumpeting future mercurial villain of history (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Full of historical allegory this piece outlines a figure loved by some and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:18
• Three Things. (Goldfinch60) A person with those three things shines like the sun raining joy and...
  August 19th, 2024 05:08
• Yet Another What If (Dan Williams) Questions of a lost? past relationship. Maybe not lost in that so much...
  August 19th, 2024 05:05
• Falkirk Street (Mark The Phenomenon) Nostalgia and the past a bit of darkness in this poem. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2024 17:44
• strange world that waits and watches (Serialseductress) Time measured by a burnt cigarette a great line. The poem carries a heavy...
  August 18th, 2024 17:42
• Europe Makes Me Nostalgic (A Boy With Roses) Nicely worded and organized well timed with an ending that leaves the...
  August 18th, 2024 17:38
• Convenience (Sassy Lou) Standing up for yourself the first step in self esteem well expressed
  August 18th, 2024 16:05
• Are poets mad ? (Sami mulaj) Nicely worded and too close to true to admit. Loved it
  August 18th, 2024 15:58
• Flames (Beatrixx89) Satanically seductive and alluring nicely written
  August 18th, 2024 15:57
• Aubade (Rrodriguez) Amazingly done with beauty and great imagery
  August 18th, 2024 15:56
• contemplation of a broken heart (Anna_x_life) Angst, existential crisis, confusion and just plain being a teen. Nice
  August 18th, 2024 13:02
• Grant Me Death, O Tyrant (Prasun Goswami) Quite the speech in classical form. It seems something to shouted at the...
  August 18th, 2024 12:59
• The Folklores of Her Beauty (Petrichor of Love) Many beautiful lines in this poem as well as great allegories.
  August 18th, 2024 12:57
• Pass to Learn (MattColombo) A good message to send and sent in poetic form Very nice
  August 18th, 2024 12:55
• 10 Rupees (Gaurav Gurung) Innocence spawns false expectations and distorted values not only in money...
  August 18th, 2024 12:53
• countdown (Fire_fly) Clever and numerological to say the least. A most fun read
  August 18th, 2024 12:50
• Beyond Sleep (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) So much lurks in the shadows of this monument to Morpheus and possibly...
  August 18th, 2024 12:46
• The universal (Lorenz) A write that gives pause and requires more than one reading and even then...
  August 18th, 2024 12:40
• Snake vs man (Starlight) The title tells it all. And so the metaphor applies to all of us. Nice
  August 18th, 2024 12:38
• It all depends on your point of view (Hzugman) A fun read that gave me a smile and chuckle. Lovely
  August 18th, 2024 12:37
• A mighty ship, Titanic (Saleh Ben Saleh) Not sure if I should call this a tribute but at least a memory now buried...
  August 18th, 2024 12:36
• Again? (13LaurenD) Empowerment expressed in this nicely written poem.
  August 18th, 2024 12:32
• Early Morning Thoughts (Thoughtless) Fears, admonitions, hope all contained in this piece nicely written
  August 18th, 2024 12:30
• I miss you (SonamThago) Sad and melancholic it rings with a longing for the past. Lovely
  August 18th, 2024 12:28
• a short poem (Xqw) Short and sweet it runs in rhythm and rhyme
  August 18th, 2024 12:16
• Musical Chase (Tony36) Deeper notes than music fill this sheet and it may apply to life itself....
  August 18th, 2024 07:08
• Those Cyclists on the Road (AuburnScribbler) When younger I used to cycle a great deal and enjoyed it. As to this poem...
  August 18th, 2024 07:06
• Curse of the runaways (Domilla) Full of imagery and painted with metaphor this piece reads smoothly to the...
  August 18th, 2024 07:04
• The Role of Ethics (Gray0328) A most beautiful message stated eloquently and in good poetic verse
  August 18th, 2024 07:00
• Cushion, The Wait, & The Tea (Maplespal) I have know such people that continue to set the table for two after one...
  August 18th, 2024 06:59
• my wish (Jim56) A beautiful wish, hope, desire. Nicely said in rhyme.
  August 18th, 2024 06:56
• my poem (Justina) Each of us are our own poem in vivo. Nicely stated in this piece.
  August 18th, 2024 06:52
• K.Y.L.A.T.E.K. (Dr.:Kyla~Tek) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) The last word caught me by surprise sending a message. Nicely done
  August 18th, 2024 06:50
• CLOSE OF DAY (Michael Edwards) A painting in words beautiful and set with a dusty feeling of having been...
  August 18th, 2024 06:49
• The department of youth (2781) Prophesy of doom on a Sunday no less. Hope next week brings a brighter...
  August 18th, 2024 06:47
• The Great Debate (Cocamedo) A clever and fun read well written.
  August 18th, 2024 06:45
• PAINFUL TRANSITION I (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Sad and dark this tribute reflects concerns about such actions.
  August 18th, 2024 06:43
• i will dance.. (NafisaSB) A great message sent in such a brief passage and cleverly written as well.
  August 18th, 2024 06:41
• My Dearest Sisters (Dev Parth) A tribute to a sister and all that she means present and past nicely...
  August 18th, 2024 06:39
• I saw her (Bonnie) A poem of sadness and loss well written
  August 18th, 2024 06:38
• ode to death (Thomas3535) A most beautiful description in vivid images of death at her finest. Great...
  August 18th, 2024 06:35
• You, Me and My Dog .. and Blame It on Saint Marlo (Neville) A border terrorist, is that like a border collie? You always get me...
  August 18th, 2024 06:33
• Honesty In A World Full Of Lies (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) So true modern technology has a trade off convenience for disease, shorter...
  August 18th, 2024 06:28
• to suffer just to suffer (MR.apocalypse) Cleverly worded this is so true and speaks to the hypocrisy of those that...
  August 18th, 2024 06:25
• The Serpent’s Retainer (Mutley Ravishes) Wise, metaphoric, entertaining and what else could you want.
  August 18th, 2024 06:22
• Invisible (Juliette72) This is tragic and like a punch to the gut knocks the wind out of any...
  August 18th, 2024 06:21
• () Courage to say what is inside is the key to communication and...
  August 18th, 2024 06:17
• Life (Rhmn_7) A great message to this poem that carries through to the end. Nicely...
  August 18th, 2024 06:15
• An Ode to Sunday (Teddy.15) Sunday, not so much lazy day but rather choice day. A feeling of freedom...
  August 18th, 2024 06:11
• Time flies forward (Vsevolod Fomin) A beautiful song here. It takes me through the phases of the day to the...
  August 18th, 2024 05:31
• Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee) This sounds a lot like my old Sunday school songs of years gone by. I know...
  August 18th, 2024 05:21
• Understanding Songs. (Goldfinch60) True Gold that many do not enunciate and some with poor diction leave only...
  August 18th, 2024 05:18
• knight (Sheta) There is more meaning behind these words. Set in fantasy is seems to apply...
  August 18th, 2024 05:08
• Would Be Wordsmith (Dan Williams) Very nicely written the thoughts of a poet who is writing to convey a...
  August 18th, 2024 04:59
• Summer of 24 (Jasmine Swift) Romantic and happy is the mood. Nicely written.
  August 17th, 2024 19:35
• The Joy of Simply Being (Gray0328) A most interesting read bringing memories of playing with toy trains and...
  August 17th, 2024 18:08
• Rage reclaimed (Natalie Heisey) Very nicely written with excellent rhyme and meter
  August 17th, 2024 18:06
• I\'m Torn Betwixt What, Eh? (Cheeky Missy) Beautiful loved the included dialect and accent. Very nicely done.
  August 17th, 2024 17:26
• Do it yourself Reparations (EvenwheniLie) Nicely written. An emphasis on what we lack.
  August 17th, 2024 16:15
• Statuesque Statuette Statue (Beatrix M) Beautifully written with great word choice. Loved it
  August 17th, 2024 16:14
• Wanderers (Sami mulaj) I love how you have left the identity of these invaders vague and unknown....
  August 17th, 2024 16:12
• Every Glide (Mark The Phenomenon) Nicely written a tribute to this noble bird.
  August 17th, 2024 16:09
• Saudi Arabia (Thepoetman1234) Quite a well painted description of the place. Nice word choice
  August 17th, 2024 16:07
• Independence (Shanzah) Mixed feeling come through in this poem of past loss and nostalgia.
  August 17th, 2024 13:48
• Moon (John Prophet) The moon is vital to what we know as earth. Nicely written
  August 17th, 2024 13:47
• I leave buying food at the market to the spouse... (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) An interesting gathering of history in this piece of poetry
  August 17th, 2024 13:45
• CAMPUS COLOURS AT SJ✨ (ChrisLyn🕊) A most interesting use of colors to express the intent of the poem.
  August 17th, 2024 13:42
• Cosplay hiring (Arial) A most interesting view of things. Nicely done
  August 17th, 2024 13:39
• Absence (Blossompayal) The other side of love and one might say its shadow are the darkness left...
  August 17th, 2024 13:38
• Waist or Waste? (AuburnScribbler) So true a second is harder than first. A play on words and a question,...
  August 17th, 2024 13:35
• The soul that exists (Justina) Enigmatic words and phrases make this poem worth pondering. Nicely said.
  August 17th, 2024 12:54
• of love (Fire_fly) Loved your first line \"Mind of a poet heart of stone\" Very nice
  August 17th, 2024 12:52
• Goner (Zhangyuyouyu) Like anyone that receives not reward for what they have done the response...
  August 17th, 2024 12:49
• The Circle Game (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Three messages are they linked? Hypocrisy in a form or at least actions...
  August 17th, 2024 12:46
• Go Figure, Eight (MendedFences27) Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.
  August 17th, 2024 12:31
• I\'m Dehydrated (Anthony Hanible) A great metaphor and nicely done
  August 17th, 2024 09:28
• ~> Once Upon A Dream (Thad Wilk) A plea for love to be returned powerfully stated.
  August 17th, 2024 09:26
• Rain flickers outside the window (Vsevolod Fomin) Loved the line that sun changes places with the moon as it literally does...
  August 17th, 2024 09:15
• Mask (Thoughtless) Love Haikus and this one is a good one at least two possible meanings a...
  August 17th, 2024 09:11
• Nobody\'s Perfect (Part.2) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Somewhat cryptic and enigmatic making for a deep read. Nice
  August 17th, 2024 09:09
• Alone (Tony36) Sad but can be looked at as a new start. Looking back leads one to trip....
  August 17th, 2024 09:08
• Totem (Lorenz) A deep symbolic feel to this poem. Totems archetypes in a Jungian style....
  August 17th, 2024 09:06
• Puppy - Part 2 (Randyjohnson71) Man\'s best friend dogs are special and have amazing qualities. Loved it.
  August 17th, 2024 09:04
• The Beat & Saint-Tropez (Maplespal) Beautiful images and memories of beautiful places. Lovely
  August 17th, 2024 09:02
• BUILDING THE NATION (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) Nicely written and worded.
  August 17th, 2024 09:00
• wonderful nature (Jim56) Loved the colors and images of nature in this poem. Lovely
  August 17th, 2024 08:58
• The Last Goodbye (Teddy.15) And so it is after such moments we have to pick up and carry on. I...
  August 17th, 2024 08:57
• Blessing of Peace (Orchidee) Thanks for the blessing Orchi Loved this piece (peace)
  August 17th, 2024 07:21
• Making Green & Reflex (Neville) Well Neville creative, imaginative loved the blend of colors and the...
  August 17th, 2024 07:19
• Toast (Mutley Ravishes) Lovely metaphor set in such poetic lines. Very creative and well enjoyed...
  August 17th, 2024 07:16