Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Married (Spencer Wilhelm) A wish to be as someone else but not sure that that will ever happen. A...
  August 5th, 2025 20:13
• Just Enough Time (A.N.) This poem holds its cynicism well. A poem of feeling alone. Nicely written
  August 5th, 2025 20:07
• Conundrum (Kevin Hulme) A great poem about not such a great institution. A fun read
  August 5th, 2025 18:42
• i am declaring WAR on ANYTHING HAPPY (not clickbait) (Highlighter) A nightmare of a vision. Well written
  August 5th, 2025 17:57
• Blue Antelope (Pete the poet) A surreal poem cast in real setting and with a supernatural type of feel....
  August 5th, 2025 17:55
• The Fire Beneath My Skin (GeekSusie) Learning to control fire without getting burned is a bit of a trick....
  August 5th, 2025 17:50
• Lalalala (Arial) A call for accounting, a lineup, a revelee and none appear a haunting...
  August 5th, 2025 16:46
• Premature (Berniece) This one speaks loud in a whisper. It shins bright with its darkness. A...
  August 5th, 2025 16:16
• Sanctuary (Fränz Müller) This one is hard hitting. Short and so is life. It is cold and graphic,....
  August 5th, 2025 16:14
• Lost Fairy-Tales.. (David Prestigiacomo) Loneliness such a difficult weight to carry and the hope of someone being...
  August 5th, 2025 16:12
• Spring (Luke Bensing) A beautiful metaphor of life in its cycles. Nicely done
  August 5th, 2025 16:09
• Clubs, Hearts, Diamonds, & Spades (Xalvazora) Clever write so identifiable. What card would be best to play? Mind...
  August 5th, 2025 14:05
• World (Keeter C) A question that seems answered in our actions on this planet. War,...
  August 5th, 2025 14:01
• The moon without stars (Aishu) We all need something or someone and rejection can be hard to accept. A...
  August 5th, 2025 13:56
• Without You (Joseph M Marion) A poem of missing someone that is a part of life. A lovely write of need...
  August 5th, 2025 13:53
• Let it end (BlessedbyGod) This poem sound much like what might have been offered in the garden of...
  August 5th, 2025 13:20
• I Don\'t Sleep Anymore (Simple Tendencies) The passing of a life in this poem. Nicely detailed in just a few lines....
  August 5th, 2025 13:17
• Parts of Me (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of surprise. As I reached the end I felt drained. Nicely written
  August 5th, 2025 12:39
• struggles (NAZIA ZAHRA) Changes through life called growing up but merely evolving, maturing,...
  August 5th, 2025 12:37
• You told me to grow up, so I did! (Sree) Behind the assertion I hear defiance and a touch of anger. Well voiced and...
  August 5th, 2025 12:33
• Cuts (Krissy.V) Haunting yet valid in a mind that sees reality as running blood. Hard to...
  August 5th, 2025 10:06
• What Time Can\'t Buy (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) This poem has a haunted feeling as if disconnected in space by a...
  August 5th, 2025 10:03
• What was it? (Damaso) In its hidden metaphors and symbols hides a feeling in this poem. Well...
  August 5th, 2025 09:59
• The unkown letter. (Friendship) A poem of a loss felt set so well in poetic rhyme and meter. A travail of...
  August 5th, 2025 09:56
• Don\'t waste it (2781) Modernization, technology, progress they call it but with each step...
  August 5th, 2025 09:51
• The Six Sacred Food Groups (Matthew R. Callies) Here I have to add only fruits and maybe a few vegetables to complete the...
  August 5th, 2025 09:47
• Um, Yeah, I Learned from Mary Poppins (Cheeky Missy) A pot pourie of sugar and cats in a collage mural of words. nicely woven
  August 5th, 2025 09:42
• Magic spell of rain (Devender Kumar) A most wonderful haiku that flows and floats
  August 5th, 2025 09:39
• heal (Lunarchloedip) So nice to be accepted for who one is. It is healing. Usually gained when...
  August 5th, 2025 08:38
• From The Heart (Anthony Hanible) The right moment where timing is everything. A poem that may have diverse...
  August 5th, 2025 08:35
• My Love (RSM0812) A poem of love veiled in metaphor of the thickest weave, no lace here....
  August 5th, 2025 08:16
• Digital nightmare (Lorenz) Images of the past float and filter through this poem of nostalgia burning...
  August 5th, 2025 08:14
•  A DIRGE TO PAPA SUNDAY (Mercy Robert) There is a sense of anguish in this loss and a feeling of uncertainty....
  August 5th, 2025 08:09
• Zeitgeist Z (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A dark message and foreboding prediction rolls forth in this poem. Well...
  August 5th, 2025 08:05
• No More to Sea or Sail Am I (Tony Grannell) Always loved tails of the sea, my favorite book Moby Dick to which this...
  August 5th, 2025 07:59
• Living Water Poured Down (Rrodriguez) A most beautiful account in poetic form of that life giving and taking...
  August 5th, 2025 07:54
• Be yourself (Tony36) The voice of individualism cries from this poem. A nicely voiced call for...
  August 5th, 2025 07:51
• Every Time You Smile (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) A seasoning to the food, love enhances all the flavors of the world, its...
  August 5th, 2025 06:36
• special way (Jim56) Lovely Jim flowers one of nature\'s perfections thrill us with visual...
  August 5th, 2025 05:35
• Shine On (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A beautiful write of being better, working harder to help others and be...
  August 5th, 2025 05:33
• Movement, send (Maplespal) This seems to speak to fear, panic and nightmares and facing them as a way...
  August 5th, 2025 05:31
• A Prayer (Azeezah Khadeejah AbdulAwal) It seems that I have responded to this one earlier. It is a nice tribute...
  August 5th, 2025 05:28
• What Healing Doesn’t Look Like (Samuel) Cleverly metaphored in terms of fashion its message is easily understood....
  August 5th, 2025 05:27
• Broken Promises (Sassy Lou) Disappointment comes through in this poem of broken promises. Intentions...
  August 5th, 2025 05:24
• A Prayer (Azeezah Awal) Beautiful wishes to a previous leader with nicely written meaning...
  August 5th, 2025 05:20
• The Lost Scripture of Thought and Fire (Malcolm Gladwin) A writing that very nicely incorporates Babylonian, Greek and other...
  August 5th, 2025 05:18
• A PRAYER (Azeezah Khadeejah Awal) A series of hopeful thoughts and quotes that brighten the day and pay...
  August 5th, 2025 05:12
• LAST SHADOW (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) I loved the gentle weaving of metaphor into subtle foreshadowing in this...
  August 5th, 2025 05:07
• Confession (Dan Williams) Loaded with great metaphors and allegory this poem speaks of regrets and...
  August 5th, 2025 05:04
• To Helen (Parsa) Such a lovely flattering description of one loved. Well worded and upbeat...
  August 5th, 2025 04:59
• I Shall Not Be Moved (ForeverJesus7) This poem reminds me of the song by John Hurt (I shall not be moved) A...
  August 5th, 2025 04:55
• A Little More Kindness (John mckay) A most lovely message in this poem that reaches out to the reader and...
  August 5th, 2025 04:46
• 6th aug 1945 (Peto) In these tercets with a caping rhyme to form a quatrain you tell the story...
  August 5th, 2025 04:42
• unsending love (Arqios) A dark and sad poem but maybe not for if love can be unsent then never...
  August 5th, 2025 04:35
• Yamatorige - Feathers of A Copper Pheasant (Neville) So often the title is requisite in understanding the poem. Here with the...
  August 5th, 2025 04:27
• Bebop. (Goldfinch60) Andy an instructive poem on music history how nice. Well written and most...
  August 5th, 2025 04:17
• At a loss (BlessedbyGod) Seeing oneself as desperately cornered and that no one knows what you have...
  August 4th, 2025 19:18
• Communion At Water\'s Edge (Gaias Soothing Haven) Mystical and sensuous a wonderful sonnet. Lovely
  August 4th, 2025 17:33
• I feel it (Isa kemmy) Concerns written. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2025 16:49
• Why (Mik this is mik) Going back to old style where the two main combatants settle the dispute...
  August 4th, 2025 16:47
• Becalmed (Kenny O\'Donnell) Very well imaged and worded. This poem is a fave
  August 4th, 2025 16:07
• Saga About Great Poet and Movie Star by Andrey Voznesenski (Ksey_Gan) A poem of conflict and memories possibly regret. Nicely done
  August 4th, 2025 16:05
• Once You Hit A certain Age (Yousif Ibrahim Abubaker Abdalla) War and violence sadly addressed in this poem. Nicely written
  August 4th, 2025 15:22
• I don\'t see the depth (Vishakha) Very clever wording leads to an opening of thoughts. Well done
  August 4th, 2025 15:18
• The Late Loni Anderson (Randyjohnson71) One of those screen crushes as a teen. A lovely write
  August 4th, 2025 15:13
• Mother\'s Wrath (senryu) (Teddy.15) I have been to that play several times and have to say that I loved it...
  August 4th, 2025 15:09
• Grief Made a Mirror (Malo J) Feelings that look for acknowledgement and recognition in this poem that...
  August 4th, 2025 12:15
• Perfect atrocity (Amethyste) A buoyant and upbeat poem of joy and immortality. Very nice
  August 4th, 2025 12:12
• Sober Sun (A Town Shanty) (AuburnScribbler) Two sides to our nature as a species we choose which we wish to embrace....
  August 4th, 2025 12:10
• Sugar-Coated Thorns (Aishu) Feelings of betrayal, rejection and loss turned to anger and regret. A...
  August 4th, 2025 12:05
• Oh Distant Star (Baker) Beautiful! A wonderful poem of a wish nicely voiced in verse
  August 4th, 2025 12:02
• The Deepest American Belief (Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏) A poem that plays off associations and assumptions well done Demar
  August 4th, 2025 11:55
• Left Ear, Right Ear, Broken Heart (Matthew R. Callies) So much feeling in this poem. The lines and meter set the tone. A truly...
  August 4th, 2025 11:54
• Immutable Feast (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Using opposites to define what is the best so that the worst possible...
  August 4th, 2025 10:20
• Tree fruit confusion (Hzugman) A great metaphor for people nicely said
  August 4th, 2025 10:16
• Why I Cry; (ꜱʏʟᴠᴀ) A sad poem that calls out of the darkness of night. Very emotive
  August 4th, 2025 10:15
• The Angel of Oblivion (Ellen Marsell) A most interesting title that inspires a great deal of thought. Beyond the...
  August 4th, 2025 10:09
• FIGHTING MY MIND (Infinite) A poem with elements of recognition and aspirations. Nicely done.
  August 4th, 2025 10:03
• Me, Me, Me...and Girl Time???! (Cheeky Missy) Busy and tired a nap would be helpful. Don\'t forget the nourishment. Well...
  August 4th, 2025 09:12
• Dew-Tears (A.N.) A beautiful thought expressed in verse. Nicely worded a poem of gratitude...
  August 4th, 2025 08:20
• Natures Mirror (RSM0812) Magical words woven into rhyme paint a dramatic picture in black a fave
  August 4th, 2025 08:16
• True Love.. (David Prestigiacomo) Infatuation is evident in this piece there is a freshness to this love and...
  August 4th, 2025 08:14
• Waitress Godess (Tony36) Poem of grace in simple cloths, of beauty as a commoner, goddess in...
  August 4th, 2025 08:10
• Lucid vertigo (Lorenz) Here I hear doubts and ponderings over a future not certain leaving a...
  August 4th, 2025 06:49
• Storm (Jerry Reynolds) Beauty is best shown before tempest. A short but lovely and meaningful...
  August 4th, 2025 06:46
• This Morning (Lorna) An observation turned metaphor that applies to all of us in our busy day...
  August 4th, 2025 06:24
• memory search (Jim56) Memories such a beautiful place of retreat. A lovely poem Jim
  August 4th, 2025 06:21
• Are you okay? (Sneha Sebastian) A most comforting poem from one that seems to see beyond the words to...
  August 4th, 2025 06:20
• Whispering Thoughts (Maplespal) This poem speaks softly and in its quiet and reverence wisdom distills.
  August 4th, 2025 06:16
• He\'s my best friend,l don\'t deserve to have. (Friendship) A beautiful poem of gratitude so well set in verse and meter. It speaks in...
  August 4th, 2025 06:13
• The Choice ! (Jan bach) Whether real or not a metaphor for choices in life that we will never know...
  August 4th, 2025 05:52
• Numb (Peto) I love the meter and rhyme structure of this poem that sounds like a...
  August 4th, 2025 05:05
• A Heart Part 2 The Entanglement (Anthony Hanible) Each emotion has its other side and down side. A lovely write with an...
  August 4th, 2025 05:03
• The Last Farewell (Tony Grannell) This poem has the all the feel of a greek mythological tragedy. I see...
  August 4th, 2025 05:01
• Begam 🌹 (Starlight) Here the reader feels prisoner of a traveler asking questions of a greater...
  August 4th, 2025 04:53
• Jaws\'s Girlfriend In Moonraker Had No Braces? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Clever use of monorhyme in this short piece that offers insight through...
  August 4th, 2025 04:50
• Please Get Rid of Me (Samuel) A sad and tragic take to this poem on obsessive love. Nicely written and...
  August 4th, 2025 04:49
• Heart (Krissy.V) A most interesting mix of vision and feeling and how this brings up...
  August 4th, 2025 04:46
• Distance (Meagan Adelle) I love the last line ( we may not be talking but I still speak to you) a...
  August 4th, 2025 04:44
• Void (Alan R) Insightful and cleverly worded this poem makes rhyme work for it. Nicely...
  August 4th, 2025 04:41