Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Clear Commitment (Orchidee) A very inspiring piece and the music was very nice as well.
  June 1st, 2023 06:14
• Tad Newtons Jazz Friends. (Goldfinch60) I too have always love many types of music and lately have expanded my...
  June 1st, 2023 06:12
• \"V-Injury\" (MrDunnePoetry) I am 72 years old and just have become a rap fan. converted by Ren. I...
  June 1st, 2023 05:43
• Along The Seashore. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful poem of reflection where the balance is in favor of the good....
  May 30th, 2023 05:51
• Poor kid (Sorenbarrett) Thanks dear friend. You are right whether misery or abject joy the...
  May 29th, 2023 07:05
• Men only cry when it rains (Rhmn_7) This is an old style view of men, but I loved the repetition of the line...
  May 28th, 2023 16:56
• Pentecost Promise (Orchidee) Good write Orchi. We all need a comforter.
  May 28th, 2023 11:07
• Subservience (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchie
  May 28th, 2023 11:03
• Memories (Bella Shepard) This is often sadder for those watching than those that go through it....
  May 27th, 2023 14:59
• Here Be Help (Orchidee) We all need to know that someone is on our side and that someone has our...
  May 27th, 2023 06:36
• Praise Panorama (Orchidee) A good way to start the day. A recognition of gratitude.
  May 25th, 2023 05:25
• Technology/Mental Health (Sorenbarrett) Depends if you like them CRISPR. Thanks Orchi for the review and technical...
  May 25th, 2023 05:22
• Troubled Times (2) (Orchidee) Words to give comfort in troubled times. I think your words give more...
  May 24th, 2023 05:48
• Shepherd And Sheep (Orchidee) Thankfulness is such a rare substance these days. It is nice to hear it....
  May 22nd, 2023 14:13
• Turritopsis dohrnii (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Orchi
  May 22nd, 2023 14:10
• Gratitude For Where We Are. (Goldfinch60) This has always been one of my favorite songs. I had never paired it with...
  May 21st, 2023 07:40
• Elegy to the memory of Anthony Bourdain (Parisab) Far too little prevention work in mental health. By the time most of the...
  May 20th, 2023 18:51
• Corporate Communion (Orchidee) Forgivness, family a wonderful message Orchi. A great way to start the
  May 20th, 2023 11:37
• Riches Cannot Redeem (Orchidee) Cloths do not the man make, nor riches give him character. No we take...
  May 19th, 2023 06:25
• Pleas In Plagues (Orchidee) Never could figure out plagues it seemed like beating someone to make them...
  May 17th, 2023 09:46
• The Night (Sorenbarrett) I still have room for morning, evening and afternoon since I have already...
  May 17th, 2023 09:40
• Daily Duties (Orchidee) It seems people grow lazier every day. No one wants to expend effort or...
  May 15th, 2023 10:22
• prehensile pledge (Arqios) I have always been entranced by the Arthurian legends. Lady Modaunt threw...
  May 15th, 2023 10:17
• Eclipse (Sorenbarrett) Thanks Cryptic just thought I would give myself a new challenge to an old...
  May 15th, 2023 09:50
• Mourning Doves (Sorenbarrett) Thank you so much dear friend. Your comments mean so much. They are most...
  May 15th, 2023 06:46
• Bye Bye By Abby Rose wise (Abby1234) Let poetry help you vent to others and yourself. You would be suprised at...
  May 14th, 2023 08:50
• Cockroach! (Rocky Lagou) In Florida we have palmeto bugs (huge roaches) the size of your thumb....
  May 14th, 2023 08:44
• cannery row (Arqios) The falseness of convienience. Addatives, canned, bottled, bagged, frozen...
  May 14th, 2023 08:37
• The Loss Of Family? (Goldfinch60) How appropriate on Mother\'s Day. So true Gold modern technology seems to...
  May 14th, 2023 08:31
• Communion Contemplation (Orchidee) A true sacrament. This could almost be a blessing for food as well. It...
  May 14th, 2023 08:11
• bygones gone by (Arqios) A poem that can be identified with. Thinking back I have been working on...
  May 11th, 2023 08:28
• EVERY BUNNY NEEDS SOME BUNNY (Bobby O) Bobby this one is a little late for Easter. It reminded me of episodes...
  May 11th, 2023 08:23
• Moses (Sophin) I feel that I have been there, the images evoked memories of tornadoes...
  May 8th, 2023 12:01
• Reflections (Sorenbarrett) Glad to see you saw the image in the title. I hope that this is no...
  May 8th, 2023 11:22
• Nigerian Dream: For Christopher Okigbo (Jarcher54) The evolution of social progress is so slow in comparison to technological...
  May 7th, 2023 06:57
• Treading The Path Of Life (Bella Shepard) So well said. Like fire itself, we can not afford to let them go out. They...
  May 7th, 2023 06:44
• PRAYER OF THANKS (Bobby O) It is refreshing to hear any thanks these days. Gratitude is highly...
  May 6th, 2023 19:00
• Graduation day (2781) Loved the honesty of the poem. It felt very real, having walked that road...
  May 6th, 2023 18:55
• All things (Sorenbarrett) Thank you so much L.B. I\'m a little more verbose than Mohamed Ali. I felt...
  May 5th, 2023 10:16
• Biggest Mistake. (Goldfinch60) So true friend. There are many opportunities I have missed in life because...
  May 2nd, 2023 07:00
• The Dog Next Door (plus bonus) (Doggerel Dave) Don\'t know if these critters are still around but it seems that we...
  May 1st, 2023 09:55
• The Hill Of Life. (Goldfinch60) A most positive and uplifting write. The view from the top of the hill is...
  May 1st, 2023 09:26
• PERHAPS (Bobby O) Alliteration has always been a favorite of mine. It plays a beautiful...
  April 30th, 2023 17:25
• True Teachings (Orchidee) This one struck a chord. A beautiful chord. Here you have sorted out the...
  April 29th, 2023 06:52
• A Wedding. (Doggerel Dave) Politics, politics, money, votes, power, control, call it what you will,...
  April 29th, 2023 06:44
• It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave) Dave I found this ingenious and novel to present a background for the poem...
  April 28th, 2023 08:49
• Blood (2781) A great story in poetic form. I found it entertaining and well written.
  April 27th, 2023 09:41
• Suburban Solidarity (Doggerel Dave) There are always neighbors like this. In Salt Lake City, where my sister...
  April 25th, 2023 07:53
• summer breeze (Arqios) And so is life my dear friend. So poetically said. We like the wind are...
  April 25th, 2023 07:19
• Today (2781) I have, in my latter years, acquired a deep appreciation for the heroics...
  April 25th, 2023 07:14
• Shinrin-yoku (forest bathing) (Bella Shepard) A most beautiful and magic image painted in words.
  April 24th, 2023 16:57
• The Heartbeat Of The Universe. (Goldfinch60) I see love as a far greater force than what any dictionary would describe...
  April 24th, 2023 06:22
• Written (Rhmn_7) A great play on words to send a strong message. After writing poetry for a...
  April 22nd, 2023 16:27
• Great Expectations (Doggerel Dave) Truth in advertising. Buyer beware is the moto. This one made me smile and...
  April 22nd, 2023 07:19
• I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful dream indeed. I too, like John Lennon can only \"Imagine\"...
  April 22nd, 2023 07:12
• Poets Die, Poems Don\'t (Rocky Lagou) I am grateful for your comments about the poem, they give it more context....
  April 21st, 2023 09:31
• lift (Arqios) Cryptic, another great Haiku that brought my memories to the song SOS...
  April 21st, 2023 08:10
• Sorry I Am Alive. (Goldfinch60) As is usually the case, the problem is being shifted to distract from what...
  April 20th, 2023 05:37
• Restoring Requests (Orchidee) Another nice write Orchidee. Although not religious I loved the lines:...
  April 19th, 2023 13:39
• A Taste of Tears (Bella Shepard) A touching write of sensitivity and care. A tribute to boundaries and...
  April 19th, 2023 12:11
• Finale (Doggerel Dave) I have also pondered on all these possibilities and am not religious but...
  April 19th, 2023 12:08
• hearticulate (Arqios) They say that walking early is a help to reading and writhing. In this...
  April 19th, 2023 08:30
• CORRECTION (Bobby O) A great message to be true to one\'s self. Nicely said.
  April 19th, 2023 07:21
• Acsetic (Sorenbarrett) Thank you for your welcome review and most kind comment
  April 19th, 2023 07:19
• Dear Garden of Eden (Rocky Lagou) Each line refers back to Eden or some aspect of it. Each leaves me with a...
  April 17th, 2023 19:38
• come and get it (Arqios) This one rings a bell. I used to bring cows in at night from the pasture...
  April 17th, 2023 08:49
• Knowledge And Wisdom. (Goldfinch60) True Andy, the words may be the right notes but the tempo makes all the...
  April 16th, 2023 06:28
• Mozart In The Morning (Bella Shepard) The god of music celebrated in this piece. how excelent to choose the...
  April 16th, 2023 06:25
• Luminous Light (Orchidee) Don\'t know is it is because he is near but never had any fear of night. A...
  April 16th, 2023 06:18
• Kernou (Arqios) Having been raised for the first two years of my life in a mining town...
  April 16th, 2023 06:09
• Sheila. (Goldfinch60) A great story and in a sense parable. Times change, how one small thing...
  April 14th, 2023 08:04
• Peanut Butter (Sophin) \"and the old ghosts of the souls that i used to know still haunt me it...
  April 13th, 2023 12:49
• seasonal diabetes (Arqios) This one left me thinking and that is dangerous. I often see things that...
  April 13th, 2023 12:39
• Scheme (2781) True it is control is the issue silver and gold are the tools.
  April 11th, 2023 09:37
• Nature - got to be a winner!? (Doggerel Dave) What a great metaphor Dave. It always seems that I\'m stepping in it....
  April 10th, 2023 12:29
• If I be remembered let it be: Kindness that names me (L. B. Mek) L.B. some time ago you wrote that you were thinking the same thought I...
  April 10th, 2023 08:33
• Easter Expressions (Orchidee) A fine write and very timely too. It tells the story well and I only wish...
  April 9th, 2023 14:45
• Poets Die, Poems Don\'t (Rocky Lagou) A poem easily identified with. The last stanza and particularly the last...
  April 9th, 2023 09:55
• Shepherd Sufferings (Orchidee) Peaceful and very reassuring, if only others would heed the words to not...
  April 5th, 2023 09:32
• The voice (2781) So true. \"Loose lips sink ships\" A word said can not be retracted so be...
  April 5th, 2023 09:27
• A Poem About Spring (MysteryGhost) A great pairing of elements and the metaphor of the children\'s last...
  April 5th, 2023 09:23
• full stop (Arqios) Been there, done that. That is to say in literal traffic and also...
  April 5th, 2023 09:18
• Birdsong (Bella Shepard) Nature reflected in the songs of birds helps erase my insanity. It might...
  April 3rd, 2023 18:05
• Call it How You Like….. (Doggerel Dave) Until the system of polotics changes this will always be true. Polititions...
  April 3rd, 2023 06:34
• The persistent will (Nature) Never give up. At the same time look to your expectations and be sure that...
  April 1st, 2023 11:59
• My System (Doggerel Dave) My oh my! Is it paranoia or am I not spending enough time reading? I...
  March 31st, 2023 06:28
• Lonely (Sorenbarrett) This applies to all no one has anyone outside of themself. Everyone else...
  March 30th, 2023 17:26
• Ooh Nina.... (Doggerel Dave) This provokes curiosity and curiosity killed the cat. But then...
  March 29th, 2023 14:44
• awkward footfalls (Arqios) Traditionally power comes from on high. Many tremble at hidden power...
  March 28th, 2023 18:39
• Dear Mrs. Christie (Bella Shepard) Dear Bella this fits for me as well although I substituted the tales of...
  March 28th, 2023 18:29
• Restoration In Returning (Orchidee) Forgiveness is so important. This piece could be easily mistaken for...
  March 21st, 2023 10:40
• Home (Sorenbarrett) Thanks orchidee, I appreciate the review and comment
  March 21st, 2023 10:37
• exist-inguished crises (Arqios) At first sight dismal, but no! I think not. Plundered and pecked to fall...
  March 21st, 2023 10:09
• skyward (Arqios) Loved this short piece. Hope you are not in this state. It\'s metaphor is...
  March 21st, 2023 10:02
• Notice of absence (Doggerel Dave) Walking the beaches of south Brazil I have seen penguins but usually just...
  March 20th, 2023 14:19
• American Poop System (Ok Waleed) An interesting choice of topic. Waste disposal has become a luxury issue...
  March 19th, 2023 11:01
• Dear Mama (L. B. Mek) Motherly love us men have a hard time understanding or appreciating. Too...
  March 17th, 2023 09:46
• Willing Witnesses (Orchidee) orchidee, your last line struck hard \"True gospel spread, no lies\" This...
  March 15th, 2023 06:28
• It\'s spiritual (2781) A greater power than we surely there must be.
  March 15th, 2023 06:20
• The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave) This was a great read. It read like a book, was short as an article,...
  March 15th, 2023 06:16