Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Fumbles (Teddy.15) This poem is a mixture of a fun read with sadness, tragedy, fantasy,...
  September 28th, 2024 04:44
• It\'s alright Little Darling (Teddy.15) Words that took me back to when my daughters were small and there is...
  September 28th, 2024 04:39
• Inches From Madness (Dan Williams) This is quite a ride of ups and downs around and around. I think I ended...
  September 27th, 2024 19:03
• Loving Light (Cassie58) A lovely message so well said. It is the little things that make a...
  September 27th, 2024 12:36
• Willow Dance (Jerry Reynolds) Risque but in good taste. I won\'t be can\'t help but ask, was it a pussy...
  September 27th, 2024 12:31
• This Day Last Year (Tom Dylan) Happy anniversery and many more to come.
  September 27th, 2024 03:55
• From The Hilltop Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I too stand in admiration of nature and this poem displays it in beautiful...
  September 27th, 2024 03:52
• Stars and Stripes (Teddy.15) Politics not my cup of tea. Never the less the poem was great and the...
  September 26th, 2024 16:43
• ~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk) A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but...
  September 26th, 2024 13:16
• Hello World (Tristan Robert Lange) A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a...
  September 26th, 2024 13:12
• A River Song (Cassie58) Enjoy things while they last nothing lasts forever. A beautiful wrte...
  September 26th, 2024 13:07
• Hustler’s Lament (Jerry Reynolds) Never was good enough to hussel but smart enough to know I was not good so...
  September 26th, 2024 13:02
• Music (Tony36) Music can do that. Things that nothing else can do bring emotions burried...
  September 26th, 2024 08:03
• Harvesting The Gold (Cassie58) Beautiful words fill this piece of glorious splendour. Gold is the word...
  September 26th, 2024 08:01
• Thinking Back on Polly (Neville) The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in...
  September 26th, 2024 07:54
• Our Time Of Jazz. (Goldfinch60) Time takes its toll and with it interests in types of music change. We...
  September 26th, 2024 07:52
• My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell (Teddy.15) Now drama this one is king. Such a statement of emotion from love to hell...
  September 26th, 2024 06:35
• Bianca (Dan Williams) Love how this is set up as in the middle of something unknown. A mystery...
  September 26th, 2024 04:24
• Who am I (Saleh Ben Saleh) There was not only a heavieness but a sense of resignation to this poem.
  September 25th, 2024 20:48
• ~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle- (Thad Wilk) Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother,...
  September 25th, 2024 20:45
• Vibrant Colors (Tony36) Colors are a wonderful addition to life. Nicely written Tony
  September 25th, 2024 20:42
• A Different Kettle of Fish (Neville) I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look...
  September 25th, 2024 20:40
• The Leaves Are Down (Cassie58) People pay little attention to what is happening around them be it the...
  September 25th, 2024 20:35
• Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Most interesting have not dug out any old poems for a long long time. May...
  September 25th, 2024 20:31
• More than I Bargained For (Thomas W Case) A very human poem with a surprise ending that adds some black humor....
  September 25th, 2024 18:09
• On through the tunnel (Orchidee) May you make it through all this with peace my friend. As for the...
  September 25th, 2024 11:05
• Icecream Alley (Jerry Reynolds) Spooky, and dark a tale for October. Nicely worded and constructed
  September 25th, 2024 08:45
• Tiger Heart (Teddy.15) Yes it does and those angles reflected show many colors indeed. Most...
  September 25th, 2024 08:39
• Unknown Future Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This brought to mind that old gospel song \"Shall we gather at the river\"...
  September 25th, 2024 05:25
• Time and Dirt (Thomas W Case) Highly descriptive I could taste it. Lovely Thomas
  September 24th, 2024 20:39
• My yellow, Franprix umbrella (Ladywithaquill) A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in...
  September 24th, 2024 20:37
• ~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication ) (Thad Wilk) Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of...
  September 24th, 2024 16:44
• Not gonna March (Tony36) Nationalism, patriotism, how about humanism. Understand the feeling
  September 24th, 2024 13:03
• ~> \'Pon A Closet Shelf, (Thad Wilk) Momentos of the past bring with them past feelings. Very nice Thad
  September 24th, 2024 13:00
• National Poetry Day (Tom Dylan) Better early than late. Great job Tom
  September 24th, 2024 12:58
• A More Obvious Art (ADarkerMind) I have a picture of sucking a thousand apples from the belly of a cave....
  September 24th, 2024 12:55
• He Quipped \"Do You EVER Go Home?\" with I Guess I\'m Drowning, Likeas Wont, and then What Can I Say? (Cheeky Missy) I remember Alice\'s restaraunt nice play off this sonnet. Well done
  September 24th, 2024 10:33
• Making A Night of It (Tom Dylan) I\'ve been to that restaurant waited for two hours for the food that never...
  September 24th, 2024 05:42
• It Is I Who Loves Thee More Than The Sun (Teddy.15) Beautiful rhyme and sentiment in this poem that reads so classically. very...
  September 24th, 2024 05:22
• AND THE WORLD WILL BE BETTER FOR THIS (Bobby O) I remember that TV program Bobby. The poem harks back to when honor,...
  September 24th, 2024 05:16
• A Neighbour Loved (Neville) Relationships over the years and how some things never change. Although...
  September 24th, 2024 05:09
• Last of the First Amendment (Dan Williams) Don\'t get me on a rant. Such words evoke strong emotions in anyone...
  September 24th, 2024 04:47
• Rain Bringing Life. (Goldfinch60) We must be in synch today Gold if you read my poem it is a bit eerie how...
  September 24th, 2024 04:40
• Books (Tony36) Love books and all that they hold. A wonderful write Tony
  September 23rd, 2024 07:51
• Lost Back in Africa .. and On Selling the VW (Neville) Both contain that same air of association one has with items that bring...
  September 23rd, 2024 07:50
• Autumn Equinox Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I very much loved the beauty of this Andy it is simply serene. A...
  September 23rd, 2024 04:46
• Well, No Wonder Then (Dan Williams) Well said Dan the human race is a paradox arrogantly putting ourselves...
  September 23rd, 2024 04:41
• Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ] (Thad Wilk) Here is a pledge of love and devotion set in poetic form. Nicely done Thad
  September 23rd, 2024 04:35
• Fallen Angel (Tony36) Fallen angels there seem to be many a sad thing. Nicely done Tony
  September 22nd, 2024 13:41
• Eyes Open (John Prophet) A voyage and a journey indeed. A fun ride.
  September 22nd, 2024 13:39
• ~> Heroin! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk) Heroin the demise of too many famous and infamous. Sad story my friend but...
  September 22nd, 2024 13:37
• Alien Observations (Mutley Ravishes) Great play on words here Mutley. A most fun read
  September 22nd, 2024 06:03
• Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves (Neville) PC wearing out? Mine went that way a couple of weeks ago. I took this a...
  September 22nd, 2024 06:02
• The Breath That Fills My Sails (Gray0328) I enjoyed the quatrains set in AAAA BBBB format with great word choice and...
  September 22nd, 2024 05:55
• A Gentleman\'s Lady (Teddy.15) I read your note and this poem makes sense in a litteral sense but I could...
  September 22nd, 2024 05:52
• Today (ADarkerMind) Here the message seems clear in the beginning but fades into the fog of...
  September 22nd, 2024 05:48
• The Fear Of Arrival (Mark The Phenomenon) Fear a powerful emotion. Yes it can be useful but is often paralyzing....
  September 22nd, 2024 05:41
• Love Must Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful in form and sentiment Andy. Nicely done
  September 22nd, 2024 04:08
• Same Old Way (Dan Williams) \"even for we dust motesto titans\" Great line Dan. Many deep...
  September 22nd, 2024 04:04
• Bicycles in Beijing (Cassie58) It is always interesting to see other cultures broadening the mind. A most...
  September 21st, 2024 19:41
• Where Pink Revamps Its Outlook, AND, I\'m Weary of Your Fantasies (Cheeky Missy) Each time I read your poetry I feel I am reading John Donne, Chaucer, or...
  September 21st, 2024 16:51
• \"Tennis With A Net\" (Kurt Philip Behm) I tend to agree there is something special about rhyme loved the poem
  September 21st, 2024 16:41
• The Door (Tony36) Is the secret door understanding and the secret room your mind? A most...
  September 21st, 2024 15:19
• base (Eugene S.) This poem had the roll of the sea with great rhythm and rhym too few...
  September 21st, 2024 05:32
• If You Were Me (Gray0328) More wisdom given in this poem replete with greatlines. Well done
  September 21st, 2024 05:30
• If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare (Neville) Almost got me Neville I think I have left visual field neglect. Almost...
  September 21st, 2024 05:27
• Believe in the Light (Orchidee) Good write Orchi one need not be Christian to have faith, hope, and love. ...
  September 21st, 2024 05:21
• Fading Echoes (Dev Parth) Very nicely worded this poem that carries with it a sense of darkness and...
  September 21st, 2024 05:14
• The Riven Soul (Gray0328) Not religious but that does not prevent the admiration of fine art. From...
  September 21st, 2024 05:11
• “Sommelier Full-Time Wanted” (Teddy.15) Sometimes honesty is not the best policy. I am not sure how I missed this...
  September 21st, 2024 05:00
• Old Codgers Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A touching and beautiful sentiment expressed in this poem of mature love....
  September 21st, 2024 04:50
• Hell Got Here First (Dan Williams) Loved it from the first stanza that opened with great poetic power and...
  September 21st, 2024 04:47
• SOLAR POWER (Bobby O) Sun worshiper Bobby? This was a fun read and as for me I love the sun...
  September 21st, 2024 04:40
• From Kingdom Come (ADarkerMind) In obscure lines I felt clarity, in confusion understanding. This poem...
  September 20th, 2024 18:25
• ~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic - (Thad Wilk) Very nicely done Thad with such good rhyme.
  September 20th, 2024 10:35
• Puppets on a string (Tony36) True it is whether taxes, military conscription, eminent domain or where...
  September 20th, 2024 08:46
• At Home On The Farm (ADarkerMind) And I have been accused of being cryptic. Like a modern art painting I...
  September 20th, 2024 05:50
• Notice (Orchidee) Best wishes during these difficult times. Be here when you return.
  September 20th, 2024 05:46
• A very Gracious Goodbye (Teddy.15) Teddy this sounds so Shakesperian and has a forboding forshadow to it that...
  September 20th, 2024 05:44
• The Art in Martial Arts (Tom Dylan) Lovely! Nicely set up this ending is the answer and question to several...
  September 20th, 2024 05:38
• They Lied About the Five Minute Warning (Neville) This reminds me of grammer school during the cold war when we had drills...
  September 20th, 2024 05:35
• Sonnet Tanka. (Goldfinch60) I am not sure where the words come from either Andy but the come and come...
  September 20th, 2024 05:28
• Love Vanishing (Dan Williams) The story leaves feelings of darkness, anger and estrangement. Very nicely...
  September 20th, 2024 05:19
• ~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse (Thad Wilk) I guess all people feel loss and heart break. Nicely done
  September 19th, 2024 13:51
• Priced Out (Kurt Philip Behm) Inflation not at expected levels they say but how do they figure it? The...
  September 19th, 2024 13:49
• Land beyond the rainbow (Tony36) Oh if it were such. A bright outlook. Fun read
  September 19th, 2024 13:45
• Pastures In The Sky (Cassie58) Nostalgic bitter sweet memories. Nicely written Cassie.
  September 19th, 2024 11:05
• Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game (Neville) I\'m sure glad you included that statement about the two being not related...
  September 19th, 2024 05:27
• Everyday Rarities (Tom Dylan) Remember those days. A poem of coziness that is nostalgic and somewhat...
  September 19th, 2024 05:22
• Meanwhile... (Orchidee) Are you trying to breakme out of the matrix I already took the red pill....
  September 19th, 2024 05:18
• A Pick Me Up (ADarkerMind) The imagery tells me it is a Salvador Dali and mustbe interpreted with...
  September 19th, 2024 05:09
• Soul-finder (Teddy.15) Teddy I have to periodically search for mine it tends to wander and like a...
  September 19th, 2024 05:01
• Love Into Light Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Maybe just maybe if we batter long enough against the stone walls of hate...
  September 19th, 2024 04:51
• Hard Winter (Dan Williams) This has all the makings of a song with its reoccuring refrain. The...
  September 19th, 2024 04:45
• The Final Retreat (Thomas W Case) A feeling that I can identify with Thomas. Whether taken literally or...
  September 19th, 2024 04:38
• Puerto Rico (Rrodriguez) A beautiful picture you pain and a love for the land that I can feel....
  September 19th, 2024 04:35
• DEMOCRAZY (Jude Chukwuemeka Muoneke) This applies to many countries and in some way to all. Nicely said
  September 18th, 2024 05:16
• Not Always Winter (Orchidee) Nicely said Orchi and I\'m sure that your faith will carry you through....
  September 18th, 2024 05:14
• 100 Not Out (Tom Dylan) Congratulations Tom be careful about the anthropomorphism,...
  September 18th, 2024 05:10
• Now Out in The Open (Neville) Hiding out in the open. Yes indeed I took this for more than just a...
  September 18th, 2024 05:05