Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Burgundy Red (Anthony Hanible) Colorful but dark is burgundy a wine that in its initial sweetness has...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:07
• Before It\'s Too Late (Teddy.15) When a child rules were so strong that they were never said. My parents...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:02
• public square, Grote Markt Bruxelles (Arqios) At first puzzled, I reach inside, a child in ignorance searches sounds,...
  August 23rd, 2025 06:53
• Eternal Flame (Ria_1005) A haunting poem of shadows. Nicely written
  August 23rd, 2025 04:44
• Expiration Date (Flexed and Forgotten) (Samuel) Cleverly constructed and written this poem goes a long ways to portray...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:41
• THE OLDEST FLAME (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) There is great cadance and meter to this poem that takes the reader on a...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:38
• Entangled Love (FallingAwake2) A cosmic genesis is revealed in this poem. Nicely written
  August 23rd, 2025 04:37
• The MIST .... (Vamsi Sudha) Very familiar with it. It comes and goes like an old friend. Good read
  August 23rd, 2025 04:35
• Smashed Ice Cream Bars and Microwaved Meals (Cheeky Missy) In an age where everyone has a microwave I do not and have to make do...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:33
• Every Wrong Turn (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Here are mixed feeling and feelings disguised. I feel a turmoil in this...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:30
• You\'ll be missed Pops! (_m_ostwanted) Loss takes with one hand and gives with another. Loss of a great strength...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:20
• Today I Saw a Rainbow (Amirose2015) Wistful, mystical, mythical, Wonderful.
  August 23rd, 2025 04:15
• Monsoon musings (Priya Tomar) Always wished I could read Greek the last two lines I could read were...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:13
• I\'m God\'s Soldier (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Dark portents fill this poem that proposes a fix by following the lead of...
  August 23rd, 2025 04:11
• Stepping Stones Tanka. (Goldfinch60) If used porperly mistakes become a road to success nicely said Andy
  August 23rd, 2025 04:09
• Allures in Illusions (Salvia.S) Very wise for one so young, this poem expresses wisdom in poetic beauty....
  August 23rd, 2025 04:07
• Regrets (Keeter C) Things we do we can seldom make up for completely. A poem of resilience...
  August 22nd, 2025 20:10
• The Hijacked Flag (Syd) For some flags do not mean what they used to mean but then neither do...
  August 22nd, 2025 19:28
• Quiet (Amethyste) A seeking of solitary peace in this poem. Nicely done
  August 22nd, 2025 16:32
• Orchid Is Our Home (ForeverJesus7) A sense of peace and security is sent in this poem
  August 22nd, 2025 15:49
• upcoming (Ja'Quan Shepard) A puzzle to unravel in this piece. Keep it up
  August 22nd, 2025 15:48
• Sometimes, Too Much (Thomas W Case) A beautiful set of images Thomas and a truth about life and death. Nicely...
  August 22nd, 2025 13:35
• For He Is Just A Man (Aziza S) A tough poem about an obligation dropped and a resentment kept. Nicely
  August 22nd, 2025 12:12
• The shadows of tyrant (Laurence Thompson) A wonderful poem about a terrible time. Very nicely done
  August 22nd, 2025 12:10
• The Burden of Being Karma (Gray0328) This poem is an interesting story that plays out to the end. Nicely done
  August 22nd, 2025 11:29
• Stray\'s Truth (Ray Moonee) My heart goes out to stray dogs but I am not able to care for them and so...
  August 22nd, 2025 10:46
• Student and teacher (2781) No matter how much we know we can always learn more and I have learned...
  August 22nd, 2025 10:44
• Gravity\'s Mime (Kurt Philip Behm) Love plays on words and this is a pile of inversions. Funny I was writing...
  August 22nd, 2025 10:22
• Dreamscape? (Orchidee) Another smile Orchi and that is worth the day. Thanks for the smile
  August 22nd, 2025 10:21
• Soon to be Home. (Friendship) A long journey to a destination long anticipated. I have learned through...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:35
• A Glass Body (Anthony Hanible) A great metaphor of people in general and some more than others. Nicely...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:25
• Hard Times (Kevin Michael Bloor) Although you may feel that others do now want to read of darkness I do...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:24
• Staying silent (Maplespal) Silence the verbal hiding that is option to prey under attack. Run fight...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:21
• I do not have a heart of stone (Narayan Gadagkar) Noble and respectful this poem gives a sense of reverence to the earth and...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:17
• In Between the Land of Dead and Living (Neckymonky) This poem occurs in the inbetween of life and death, earth and sky, being...
  August 22nd, 2025 08:15
• Whats for dinner (Jerry Reynolds) Another very nice haiku Jerry well done
  August 22nd, 2025 08:12
• The wolf an the snake (RSM0812) I love the roll of the rhyme in what seems to be a poem with almost Native...
  August 22nd, 2025 05:11
• Colours of shroud (Priya Tomar) I don not understand the the language but the process of watching...
  August 22nd, 2025 05:03
• Come At Me (Outrageous) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Bits and pieces that drop into place like a puzzle and form a picture. A...
  August 22nd, 2025 05:00
• What I Write Now (Samuel) Past pain is reflected in present words in this poem and growth is...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:59
• Escape (Jack Winsley) I love the way that the reader is left with a bit of doubt as to whether...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:57
• Unicorns Day (Poetic Dan) A most interesting and unusual write in tercets of rhyme. A cute story...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:54
• THE CLOCK IS TICKING... (Cerry) Time passes and seems to be accelerating its pace. The end nears and the...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:51
• YOU DEPARTED EAST (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Each line a drop of rain fallen pool to form a puddle. Nicely written a...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:45
• You are beside me (Sami Mulaj) Beautiful lines of analogy and so vivid and colorful they deserve a fave
  August 22nd, 2025 04:43
• moreton mirror (Arqios) Don\'t we all have this mirror image the reverse reflection of ourselves...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:42
• The Day I Found Me (Teddy.15) Deeper meaning lies in these few lines where knowing what you are is more...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:38
• Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60) Ah Andy the irony of life never ceases to amaze me. A fun read and one...
  August 22nd, 2025 04:36
• Dolphin’s charm (KnightOfCups) Lovely verse and rhyme in this poem of love. nicely done
  August 22nd, 2025 04:33
• Little bird (Kaz) Beautiful lines a sublime haiku deserving a fave
  August 22nd, 2025 04:24
• You, my dear (Kayla Jackson) A poem of confidence in another that is well expressed.
  August 21st, 2025 19:48
• Envy Dries Slower Than Skin (Gaias Soothing Haven) Lovely images and well worded quite quaintly. It is clever and sensual as...
  August 21st, 2025 19:44
• Without you (Amethyste) Very nice in a mathematical sense two negatives make a positive. Loved it
  August 21st, 2025 19:40
• Gray Clouds on a Sunday (Lorna) A fave for such inventife images that paint the picture
  August 21st, 2025 16:01
• Self Reflection (Malo J) A powerful write that sends its message in strong words and images
  August 21st, 2025 14:42
• Pay up (Maplespal) And so it is. We all have different gods and each is believed to be...
  August 21st, 2025 14:40
• She Like The Ocean (Novablue) A wonderful poem of our mother of origin, from her we were all born....
  August 21st, 2025 14:37
• A mother\'s scream (Nicole Pritchard) Very personal and raw it speaks of the darkness or origin. Very nicely...
  August 21st, 2025 14:34
• Right click ignore. (Aa Harvey) A modern day expression of passion in the techo age. Well done
  August 21st, 2025 13:16
• BROKEN (Saswati das) In this dichotomy of thought reside the abused. A sad write
  August 21st, 2025 13:14
• What is real? (Kering.karim) Real for you is not what is real for another. Real for you is what you...
  August 21st, 2025 13:13
• The Parade of Poison (Prasun Goswami) So many choose the winning side and hide in the shadows of greater men. A...
  August 21st, 2025 13:11
• Less than a Year (M.E.M.) Life is tough and jobs are few whild constraints on what type of job and...
  August 21st, 2025 13:09
• Untouchable, Unlovable (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Love is more than just a word although society treats it as such. A lovely...
  August 21st, 2025 13:05
• The Light That Binds (Gray0328) Most nicely stated in poetic form that love and light by what ever name we...
  August 21st, 2025 12:25
• Of Sitting and Staring (YannickM) I have had such moments and believe that most people do. Nicely done
  August 21st, 2025 12:23
• The child of the depths (Lorenz) Ah what we label childhood dreams when adults are the reality of...
  August 21st, 2025 12:22
• Malfeasance of my money (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Scams, rip offs, call it what you may electronic or door to door, face to...
  August 21st, 2025 12:18
• Just Being (Jack Winsley) Wistful thoughts fill this poem. Nicely written
  August 21st, 2025 12:03
• Taste Buds (Teddy.15) To each their own Teddy. Nicely stated. Not all fairytales end the way I...
  August 21st, 2025 10:57
• Tropic Of Capricorn (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Indeed so it seems that it is. A great use of word repetition in different...
  August 21st, 2025 09:30
• Pity, Really Such A Dreadful Pity (Cheeky Missy) I had a cat that had kittens and I never realized how hard it was to get...
  August 21st, 2025 09:28
• The Man Who Lowers His Gaze (Aurora1) A poem of fidelity and of loyalty to the point of vision, sound, touch,...
  August 21st, 2025 09:10
• Simple pleasures (Jerry Reynolds) I have smelled that before my friend and this poem brought back that...
  August 21st, 2025 09:07
• In The Stillness of His Love (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) We all need a healer and guide and I hear you reaching to a greater power...
  August 21st, 2025 09:06
• Alone (Tristan Robert Lange) I can take the first few lines literally for none of us remember our...
  August 21st, 2025 09:04
• Continuous (Purgatory Phoenix) The cycle of life and its many circles. Nicely done
  August 21st, 2025 06:32
• autumn beauty (Jim56) Very nice Jim a fine presentation of Fall and its beauty
  August 21st, 2025 06:31
• Laddy Boy (RSM0812) I hardly dare venture to speak on this beautiful poem. Wonderful wording...
  August 21st, 2025 05:29
• Eileen (Parsa) A fave for some really wonderful lines in this poem to etch a mountain on...
  August 21st, 2025 04:59
• This Planet / God Commands It (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Difference between a cynic and realist. Nicely worded
  August 21st, 2025 04:49
• 08.21.24 (Samuel) We all leave marks, some fade with time others not. A lovely poem
  August 21st, 2025 04:47
• Man are NOT Brave (EmotionsOnwhitepaper) People that count themselves brave to fight are often shy in...
  August 21st, 2025 04:45
• A Clock Face Stranger (Malcolm Gladwin) This poem is all about building atmosphere and comes out of a fog like a...
  August 21st, 2025 04:43
• Save me, save my tears (Funmiwrites) I hear distance in a relationship in this poem and a desire for...
  August 21st, 2025 04:40
• A shiny rock called inclusion (EvenwheniLie) This poem seems a criticism of change and development in society. Well...
  August 21st, 2025 04:38
• LITTLE PICTURES (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) This poem can be taken in a couple of ways. I took it first as a poets...
  August 21st, 2025 04:36
• Half (Alan R) This poem drips with anger and resentment. Nicely worded
  August 21st, 2025 04:32
• Let\'s Pray (Anthony Hanible) It is the omissions that make this poem out of a familiar child prayer....
  August 21st, 2025 04:31
• Airport Predators (Spencer Wilhelm) I took this two ways, someone afraid of being harmed and someone on the...
  August 21st, 2025 04:29
• Discernment (Spencer Wilhelm) A bemusing and fun read that the thought is enhanced by the rhyme. Lovely
  August 21st, 2025 04:26
• New World Slaughter (Mutley Ravishes) This brings the image of a boxer before a fight in front of the news media...
  August 21st, 2025 04:23
• The sea of dreams (Sami Mulaj) I like the metaphor that applies so well to many things in this poem, how...
  August 21st, 2025 04:22
• Help without taking credit (Hzugman) A wonderful attitude to assume and with time it will just become who you...
  August 21st, 2025 04:15
• The Grave Digger (Tony Grannell) Another most entertaining poem Tony. Have a good friend that was a grave...
  August 21st, 2025 04:12
• eye of the beholder (Arqios) I felt that I entered the Twilight Zone in this poem. A poem that opens...
  August 21st, 2025 04:08
• Memories Brought Back (Goldfinch60) It is a blessing when all of our memories are golden. Good one Andy
  August 21st, 2025 03:57
• Once Upon a Happy Ever After (Kevin Hulme) You have covered pretty well the fairy tales and nursery rhymes in this...
  August 20th, 2025 19:36
• forbidden pain (Dizzzaa) Abandonment and isolation accompanied by panic little hope. A sad poem
  August 20th, 2025 19:32
• Futility (Keeter C) A poem of imagined adventure mixed with a bit of fantasy. Serious...
  August 20th, 2025 19:30