Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Dear God (Iam1ItchyLizzard) Even Christ felt forsaken in the garden as he prayed. Well written
  August 25th, 2025 15:17
• Tempered by the Sea (Kaz) How some things so common can stand out and even the worthless can be...
  August 25th, 2025 15:16
• Life feels like a to-do list (Sophenia) How a person can be not only the main coarse but the seasoning Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 15:15
• Borrowed from eternity (RSM0812) Full of wordplay and metaphor it breaths. Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 15:12
• An eye (Kingdaniel) Revenge is not justice and when served cold it is not palatable. Well done
  August 25th, 2025 15:11
• Blue Clogs (Lorna) A most interesting title and colorful as well. Nicely metaphoric
  August 25th, 2025 15:08
• Slow it Down (Thomas W Case) Indeed we are all nuts in one way or another Thomas. Another good read
  August 25th, 2025 15:05
• Oh, I Dunno. (Cheeky Missy) I have had plans canceled before and it is a disappointment. This whole...
  August 25th, 2025 15:03
• The house of the unsaid (Lorenz) This tickles the brain in places that can not be itched or scratched only...
  August 25th, 2025 15:00
• Skeleton Key (Tristan Robert Lange) There is a lot of darkness here with feelings of self cannibalism. A...
  August 25th, 2025 14:57
• The Storms of Life (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A poem of a constant that is always there and unchanging. A pillar of...
  August 25th, 2025 14:44
• It\'s a bedtime thing (Maplespal) A poem with dharm and a sense of familiarity that gives it a home like...
  August 25th, 2025 05:54
• The Yin and Yang Show (Pete the poet) Indeed this presents the opposites in nature and the how they compliment...
  August 25th, 2025 05:50
• hope (Jim56) A most beautiful message Jim and nicely said
  August 25th, 2025 05:16
• The Quiet Coffin (Samuel) A most interesting poem that paints a picture. Nicely done
  August 25th, 2025 04:17
• a clockwork orangerie (Arqios) This poem feels surreal, industrial, mechanical, post classic,...
  August 25th, 2025 04:14
• no colors (Yael Garcia) Modernistic, fragmentational I would call it and a bit surreal. Nicely...
  August 25th, 2025 04:07
• Racism (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) I too feel that racism has lost all function and purpose. We are all...
  August 25th, 2025 04:05
• Disillusioned (NafisaSB) Buyer beware they always used to say. A clever poem of advice that anyone...
  August 25th, 2025 04:02
• MANS LAST DAY (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) A poem of prophetic proportions that speaks of man in the midst of this...
  August 25th, 2025 04:00
• in my bed, all alone (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) A poem of loneliness and pain and although poetry is not always a great...
  August 25th, 2025 03:58
• Hurting soul forgives (Devil_dear) A great message set in poetic form. Very nicely crafted.
  August 25th, 2025 03:54
• A Picture In My Mind (Iam1ItchyLizzard) This poem comes across as dream like and feelings of loss in a surreal...
  August 25th, 2025 03:52
• Pie (E.J. Waling) Wonder if it tastes like numbers or electrical current, whether it has the...
  August 25th, 2025 03:49
• My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60) A fun turn in this poem Gold where a thought to be person becomes music....
  August 25th, 2025 03:45
• Eye 2 Eye (Ja'Quan Shepard) A most interesting format and presentation in this poem. It challenges the...
  August 24th, 2025 20:47
• The Agony (Kayla Jackson) There is often a battle between the brain and the heart in love and there...
  August 24th, 2025 20:45
• The Crying Tree (Friendship) A poem that dedicates meaning to pleasant past memories and a sense of...
  August 24th, 2025 20:43
• some people never go crazy (Gray0328) Great lines in this poem that speak to me of how some people never take a...
  August 24th, 2025 16:07
• Portrait of Dora Lyse (Kevin Hulme) This is poetic humor loved it a fave
  August 24th, 2025 16:01
• Hope (Keeter C) There is a deepness to this poem that speaks. Nicely worded
  August 24th, 2025 16:00
• Envy Dries Slower Than Skin (Gaias Soothing Haven) Very nicely written with some very good lines.
  August 24th, 2025 15:56
• Stuck (Sunshine777) Life is the wait. Nicely written
  August 24th, 2025 15:53
• A life long friend (EvenwheniLie) A dedication to one I assume lost. Well done
  August 24th, 2025 13:37
• Beyond Breath (Ray Moonee) A lovely poetic dedication to an astronaut well written
  August 24th, 2025 13:35
• The Persephone verses (Zephyrschild) So well written this resume of the Greek Goddess and her metaphoric story....
  August 24th, 2025 13:33
• I Don’t (Lu) A beautiful depiction of how things don\'t need to be totally destroyed to...
  August 24th, 2025 13:30
• The Flower (Deepak Vohra) This is a wonderful poem that in its most poetic style broaches the impact...
  August 24th, 2025 13:29
• The Mirror that Trembled (TheInnerLens) Deep emotions penetrate this poem and are reflected in the glass of its...
  August 24th, 2025 13:26
• Womb on Trial (Awam) The world needs someone to blame and extends its roots looking for shame....
  August 24th, 2025 13:24
• Lord of Our World (Abdullah123) Speaking through a carved image to a god this poem gives a earthly view to...
  August 24th, 2025 13:20
• Believe Me: I Made a List (Cheeky Missy) Another set of sonnets set in the home environment with all that the...
  August 24th, 2025 13:17
• Sertraline Sunrise (Aurora1) Nicely set this poem speaks of memories of peace amongst chaos
  August 24th, 2025 13:13
• Just Three (Kurt Philip Behm) I have been there many time Kurt those early awakenings with a blessed...
  August 24th, 2025 12:29
• George Committed Suicide (Rebellion_in_sanity) Deeply philosophical this poem paints a dark picture. It is poignant and...
  August 24th, 2025 12:09
• Summer Fun (Jerry Reynolds) Beautiful! Loved it
  August 24th, 2025 07:56
• Green, Yellow And Red (Anthony Hanible) Traffic of any type, a great metaphor and nicely done.
  August 24th, 2025 07:26
• Outcasts\' Oculus (Tristan Robert Lange) The format again emulates the theme. A poetic metaphor as well. A...
  August 24th, 2025 06:45
• Why not share 4 poems (Maplespal) A wide diversity in these poems from missing someone lost to tripping over...
  August 24th, 2025 06:39
• The Flower in the Stone (RSM0812) A most interesting metaphor here. Well done
  August 24th, 2025 06:35
• purple penguin (Jim56) Fanciful indeed Jim unless he swam though a dye spill. A fun poem that is...
  August 24th, 2025 05:13
• The Eyes : A Vibrant Tale (Aman Kumar Holy) Love how you maintain the central theme throughout the poem. The flowing...
  August 24th, 2025 05:11
• Owning the Quiet (Samuel) Loved this poem and silence is not only okay but a friend and place of...
  August 24th, 2025 05:07
• \"the question\" (Arqios) You have captured in words the moment and excitement of the hunt. It is...
  August 24th, 2025 05:06
• For Aidan (Tia Desilva) Very personal it drips with emotion and is well written evoking emotion...
  August 24th, 2025 05:01
• A Hole Lot Of Light (Teddy.15) Love the word play in the title my friend in fact I like it a hole lot. I...
  August 24th, 2025 04:57
• Suppression (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A fun read with the built in symbolic masonic words nicely painted. Not a...
  August 24th, 2025 04:52
• Oh no! (Aa Harvey) Ah the plus\'s\' and minus of having someone. Love poems and songs are...
  August 24th, 2025 04:49
• Guardian angel (Starlight) A feeling of dependability and reliance fills this poem. Nicely written
  August 24th, 2025 04:45
• WINGED (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) It is the empty cold feel and incomplete thought that comes from this poem...
  August 24th, 2025 04:43
• Girlhood (𝓱𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱) Dark thoughts in this poem of feeling unwanted. A sad poem with a...
  August 24th, 2025 04:40
• The poet in Russia by Sergei  Esenin.     (Ksey_Gan) Most injuries physical of mental we expect to heal shortly but some remain...
  August 24th, 2025 04:38
• Piece by Piece (Maydanae) An interesting metaphor of the egg and bit by bit. Going home bit by bit...
  August 24th, 2025 04:35
• Lost (Catherine Houston) A poem of pain that confuses the mind and seems to impede action. Nicely...
  August 24th, 2025 04:32
• All Items Numbered 204 (Neville) Simple small natural treasures often overlooked and so well imaged in...
  August 24th, 2025 04:30
• I DON\'T REMEMBER! I don\'t remember (NinjaGirl) Memory can be cruel or kind it also can be accurate or distorted. I choose...
  August 24th, 2025 04:24
• A Walk To My Willow. (Goldfinch60) A most lovely walk indeed. Nothing like a walk in nature to give one...
  August 24th, 2025 04:18
• I Rather Prefer Klondike Original (Cheeky Missy) I tend to agree Chic I prefer Klondike original as well. A fun read
  August 23rd, 2025 19:26
• The Devil (Obada) The self incorporation of evil or at least its belief is a heavy burden....
  August 23rd, 2025 19:21
• The Devil (Obada) Strong words in this poem nicely written the questioning of oneself.
  August 23rd, 2025 16:11
• Let\'s go there again!! (Sree) A beautiful poem of past memories and the desire to return to a time in...
  August 23rd, 2025 16:09
• Land of poets (Sami Mulaj) Very nice and poetically worded. Loved it
  August 23rd, 2025 15:35
• She muses my way. (Aa Harvey) Strong desire is voiced in this poem passion not quenched. Most lovely
  August 23rd, 2025 15:28
• Where Love Dwells, Cruelty Cannot (Aurora1) Wow! A most inspirational quote it must have been for it has bloomed into...
  August 23rd, 2025 15:21
• Phantom Pain (Will Kevin) Beautiful realization of past errors and present consequences. The what...
  August 23rd, 2025 15:12
• Piling Mess (Novablue) Wondering, pondering, regret and postponing and procrastinating. Nicely...
  August 23rd, 2025 15:06
• Truth (Keeter C) Very nicely worded this thorny problem of balance. As for the dead they...
  August 23rd, 2025 15:04
• Fire away (Nicole Pritchard) A poetic challenge and sense of defiance well expressed. Nicely done
  August 23rd, 2025 14:56
• Summer (A piece of luggage) A truly beautiful poem of loving memories and so well imaged. A fave
  August 23rd, 2025 14:54
• Like the Moon (Xander_Kaine) Very nicely said a wonderful image
  August 23rd, 2025 14:53
• To Sergei (Kurt Philip Behm) Very nice Kurt yes in hunting that was a rule to hunt the hunter you must...
  August 23rd, 2025 14:52
• nature trail (Jim56) Peaceful and lovely Jim a good write
  August 23rd, 2025 11:26
• The Ledger\'d Maw (TheInnerLens) Good rhyme accompanies the message in this poem. It in some ways seems...
  August 23rd, 2025 11:24
• forcefully empty (MR.apocalypse) This one is a bit cryptic and got my mind rolling the mention of prayer...
  August 23rd, 2025 11:22
• The poet in Russia by Sergei  Esenin.     (Aleksey dragan) This gave me images of dreamlike psilocybin trips. A fun read
  August 23rd, 2025 11:19
• Enlightenment flowers (Lorenz) This poem takes several turns and ends abruptly in obscure enlightenment....
  August 23rd, 2025 11:15
• Thankful PT.1 (Sunflowersinrain) A poem of conversion, faith and gratitude as well as acknowledgement. Very...
  August 23rd, 2025 10:33
• Party in Rainy Night (Devender Kumar) Mystical almost mythical certainly fanciful it drifts peacefully. Most...
  August 23rd, 2025 10:29
• When I Look At You (Louiray) Very well imaged and conceived. A lovely description.
  August 23rd, 2025 09:40
• Dazzled (Damaso) A deep message in this poem and the wording is well done. Loved it
  August 23rd, 2025 09:31
• the damnedest destinations (Tristan Robert Lange) The wording is raw the format well planned and I imagine took a good deal...
  August 23rd, 2025 09:30
• Untitled (RSM0812) Beautiful and meaningful with great images. Lovely a fave
  August 23rd, 2025 09:26
• Porlock (Neville) Neville not to the name you name but to another I have been there. A...
  August 23rd, 2025 09:22
• Rearguard of the Pack (Gray0328) Deep message in this poem set in great images and emotion it sends its...
  August 23rd, 2025 09:17
• Always Room for Improvement (GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀) A beautiful message that is one of peace and love and an effort to do...
  August 23rd, 2025 09:12
• Rewriting the Tale (Ray Moonee) A beautiful message in this write it reflects a more modern view of choice...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:23
• Change (Jerry Reynolds) Love walking by moonlight at night. So peaceful and with a completely...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:20
• Jealous sun (Maplespal) Jealous sun reminds me of an old Louis Armstrong song (That lucky old...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:18
• Burgundy Red (Anthony Hanible) Colorful but dark is burgundy a wine that in its initial sweetness has...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:07
• Before It\'s Too Late (Teddy.15) When a child rules were so strong that they were never said. My parents...
  August 23rd, 2025 07:02