Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett
- Loving Leadings (Orchidee)
God made me to grow weaker as I grow older as a guarantee of humility....
August 22nd, 2023 09:39 - A parent\'s burden (Sorenbarrett)
If the chain is long enough you can still bowl with the ball and you...
August 22nd, 2023 09:37 - Penicillium Notatum (Bella Shepard)
Dear Bella I have an allergy to some unknown weed that blooms each year it...
August 20th, 2023 14:44 - Reply to A. E. Housman (Jarcher54)
I am so glad that you decided to share this one. It reads so well and...
August 20th, 2023 12:43 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
The metaphors here are amazing. So grounded on the surface but deep upon...
August 18th, 2023 00:00 - Can We Live Happily. (Goldfinch60)
Yes I have noticed that those who have less tend to give more. A great...
August 17th, 2023 23:33 - Blessed to Share (Bobby O)
Giving is what is most missed in today\'s world. A beautiful thought and...
August 17th, 2023 23:31 - Fear Silence Not (Neville)
Great lines Neville
\"For it is long
empty like discarded
worm casts\"...
August 17th, 2023 23:21 - “Heigh-ho, Heigh-ho it’s Off to Work We Go…” (Doggerel Dave)
I think I have worked there before. Whether physical safety or emotional...
August 17th, 2023 23:14 - Binding Pages (Teddy.15)
So short but true. There must be an opposition in all things. There can be...
August 17th, 2023 23:08 - Sétana (Bigguy)
This poem seems very Celtic in nature hound of Cullan pup of Dael.
Found...
August 17th, 2023 12:29 - Wholesome Wisdom (Orchidee)
I liked this one. \"I remember All creatures of our God and king from...
August 17th, 2023 09:44 - Short-Circuit (Teddy.15)
A great write about a subject that makes me a bit nervous. I\'m not sure...
August 16th, 2023 07:21 - JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O)
You\'ve mentioned most of the biggies. a nice tribute to a very enjoyable...
August 16th, 2023 07:16 - While Out Busy Partying (Neville)
You sure it wasn\'t her sister? I think I know her. An amusing enjoyable...
August 16th, 2023 07:10 - Need To Be Right. (Goldfinch60)
So few people can seer that there are more than one side to an issue....
August 16th, 2023 06:59 - On Tour. (Doggerel Dave)
I loved the poem but not sure if I would love a stay there. Sometimes the...
August 15th, 2023 07:41 - Trust And Abide (Orchidee)
\"Which cannot be removed, does stand
Abides e\'er in the land\"
A great...
August 15th, 2023 07:31 - Life (Bella Shepard)
I loved the format to this poem of great advice. To give is to receive,...
August 13th, 2023 18:33 - Goldilocks and the…. (Doggerel Dave)
With her being too hot is this the x rated version? lol
August 11th, 2023 22:49 - RINSE & REPEAT (Bobby O)
It takes a tough man to wear pink and an even tougher one to ride such a...
August 11th, 2023 15:02 - Service Settings (Orchidee)
The government has told me for many years that I must give and that...
August 11th, 2023 11:48 - Certainly Not! (Orchidee)
I could use a little levity and it\'s okay I\'m over 18 x 4. Thanks for...
August 10th, 2023 15:54 - Moonbeams (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Orchi
August 10th, 2023 15:50 - Grace Gloryings (Orchidee)
Grace is a great name for a lady but I\'m more set for a lady with the...
August 9th, 2023 05:22 - Worn Out Shoes (Teddy.15)
There is something about dancing that involves the whole body and soul,...
August 8th, 2023 16:18 - Bounteous Blessings (Orchidee)
It helps to recognize all that we have as opposed to look at what we...
August 6th, 2023 10:34 - Observing a Miracle (Teddy.15)
I once had a patient whose wife had died several years before. Yet every...
August 5th, 2023 17:49 - The Small Space (Jarcher54)
I liked this one and identify with parts of it
\"The walled garden
of my...
August 3rd, 2023 13:18 - Trust And Abide (Orchidee)
Lead us all toward peace and kindness. The wicked need a little more help....
August 3rd, 2023 07:16 - Aliens (Doggerel Dave)
Rabbits indeed, run at the first sign of trouble, multiply like mad, and...
August 3rd, 2023 07:12 - The Red MG (Bella Shepard)
Change is something unavoidable but so difficult and even more so as we...
August 2nd, 2023 16:26 - Practical Pursuals (Orchidee)
Yes I couldn\'t agree more let us be sister and brother. Great write Orchi
August 2nd, 2023 14:04 - Oh What A Beautiful Morning! (Bella Shepard)
A beautiful feeling indeed. The song of the south was one of my favorites...
July 31st, 2023 16:12 - What If....? (Goldfinch60)
A question I too have asked on many occasions. What if? We will never know...
July 31st, 2023 15:43 - QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O)
I have read Don Quixote and this poem does him justice. like clouds on the...
July 31st, 2023 15:35 - In memory of Sinead O’Connor (L. B. Mek)
A most appropriate song to accompany this poem a eulogy to a most...
July 28th, 2023 05:44 - Just Vertigo (Teddy.15)
Such expressive lines about the emotions inside that one feels when...
July 27th, 2023 06:45 - The New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
A proclamation, a resolve, a pledge well stated and such a good one too.
July 26th, 2023 05:19 - The Light Of Life (Orchidee)
I always liked the comparison of light to knowledge, truth, and...
July 25th, 2023 09:14 - Destination (Teddy.15)
An example of how a few words can say so much and so eloquently
July 25th, 2023 06:05 - Just Because She Is .. (Neville)
In these four lines you have encapsulated the frustration of a poet with...
July 25th, 2023 06:03 - Tony Bennett. (Goldfinch60)
I remember them all and they touched my life with their music. A wonderful...
July 24th, 2023 04:59 - Hooked On Rugby. (Goldfinch60)
Love to watch the game when I get a chance. Unfortunately on this side of...
July 24th, 2023 04:56 - Mary\'s Momentous Moment (Orchidee)
A very nice write Orchi. Mary and Jesus had a special relationship as can...
July 22nd, 2023 15:23 - Sunrise To Sunset. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful wish for others and a wonderful recognition for oneself. So...
July 22nd, 2023 10:53 - Lost on a mobius strip (Sorenbarrett)
L.B your comments stimulate more thought than the poem or writing it....
July 22nd, 2023 10:10 - Aspirational Ascent (Orchidee)
Another good write Orchi
July 20th, 2023 12:08 - Reigning Ruler (Orchidee)
A true hymn of praise and glory. The rhyme in this one seemed to go so...
July 20th, 2023 05:37 - Challenges In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Hopefully we learn from our errors. Some keep falling despite themselves....
July 20th, 2023 05:30 - Haircut. (Goldfinch60)
That pretty well sums up the differences between the male and female sex.
July 19th, 2023 05:37 - Remaining Rejoicing (Orchidee)
Well done Orchi
July 18th, 2023 15:03 - new bloom (Arqios)
The swells are but waves that crest and fall. in this world, like a mobius...
July 18th, 2023 07:49 - Welcome To The New Guard. (Goldfinch60)
The changing of the guard has been in place for some time as a ritual. We...
July 17th, 2023 06:40 - Poetess: that most profound, Lioness (L. B. Mek)
“In the kind of whisper that wouldn’t fog glass”
What an opening...
July 17th, 2023 06:20 - Beware Of A.I. (Bella Shepard)
So true Bella. I have been concerned about this before it became popular....
July 16th, 2023 15:43 - UNCERTAIN PLANNED (Bobby O)
Of one thing I\'m certain and that is there is nothing that I am certain...
July 15th, 2023 15:24 - Presence Promises (Orchidee)
A hymn of praise to the most high. It brings many Sunday memories.
July 13th, 2023 09:22 - I Remember (Bella Shepard)
For those of us fortunate enough to have had such a supportive, loving...
July 13th, 2023 09:15 - When it comes to love (Teddy.15)
Teddy I love your first line \"Darkness has become my very light\" I also...
July 11th, 2023 18:16 - I Believe. (Goldfinch60)
Many times it is better to believe than to know. I too believe that the...
July 11th, 2023 05:17 - Bonkers! (Orchidee)
I always liked the word bonkers. It has a particular feel to it,...
July 11th, 2023 05:12 - The dark grey clouds (Nature)
A prayer, a hope, a wish, an invitation and acknowledgement of our...
July 6th, 2023 10:20 - Adults?! (Saxon Crow)
A most beautiful understanding of what a child is no matter the age.
July 6th, 2023 10:13 - My Angel (Teddy.15)
Memories often cast such resplendente images providing a soft pillow where...
July 6th, 2023 10:12 - Strategic Untruths (Neville)
A nicely put truth Neville. Truth has always been hidden behind...
July 6th, 2023 10:09 - Laugh, Sorry, Dismiss. (Goldfinch60)
Very good advice Andy.
July 6th, 2023 10:07 - Financial Issues (Ok Waleed)
Sort but sweet. Painfully true. A trap many fall into.
July 6th, 2023 10:05 - manicured thoughts (Arqios)
Oh Cryptic this one has roots that go deep. Sounds do travel through the...
July 6th, 2023 10:00 - The Golden Hour (Ethan Mikel StAmour)
A most beautiful depiction of the night and the moon light. Resplendente...
July 6th, 2023 09:55 - pop goes resolve (Arqios)
Poetic words my friend. Vivid images ignighting emotions.
July 5th, 2023 10:14 - Respect For Elders. (Goldfinch60)
Me too Gold. My grand father used to read the obituaries every day, I...
July 5th, 2023 09:24 - \"The octopus\" ; 5 July, 2023 (Soman Ragavan)
Attracted by the title having kept several octopus for years I have...
July 5th, 2023 09:21 - I\'d Turn And Walk Away by Richard Martin (Richard Martin)
This poem started out reminding me of the song Boulder to Birminham by...
July 5th, 2023 09:08 - MET YOU IN A DREAM (Chin dimple)
Dreams are powerful and their images at times hard to erase. Yes indde...
July 5th, 2023 09:05 - Blue (_Mia_)
My favorite color but don\'t know why. The poem is a puzzle but so true...
July 5th, 2023 09:03 - Clouds (John Prophet)
A very intersting format that gives the image of a pillar. Loved the...
July 5th, 2023 09:01 - Dead Springs (Sakwa Franc)
This may be actual but metaphorically it is strong and speaks out to keep...
July 5th, 2023 08:57 - Dyed in the wool (Domilla)
This poem can be taken in several ways, as boyfriends, as God and the...
July 5th, 2023 08:55 - Prophetic Prayer Of Hannah (Orchidee)
This one reads with powerful words of tribute and praise. It speaks like...
July 5th, 2023 06:01 - My Lover Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
A beautiful tribute to one that you love.
July 4th, 2023 05:16 - Vacation Time (Bella Shepard)
Missed you Bella but hope you had a wonderful time. Loved the poem...
July 3rd, 2023 15:37 - Cynic\'s love (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks L.B. your words serve to inspire and brighten the day. So...
July 3rd, 2023 06:37 - SAM COOKE STILL NO. 1 (Bobby O)
Sam was always one of my favorites. There was something about his voice...
July 1st, 2023 20:20 - Keep some cash (2781)
Have been there and done that. It is too bad that cash like gold is going...
June 27th, 2023 06:15 - Pleasant Paths (Orchidee)
I found this a prayer of hope and an uplifting one too. Nice job Orchi
June 19th, 2023 06:32 - Missing Balls. (Goldfinch60)
A bit of humor is a good thing Andy
June 17th, 2023 05:59 - Over (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Gold I appr3eciate the comment
June 17th, 2023 05:55 - splice and sail (Arqios)
A great metaphor, old as Homer but seaworthy still. I always loved...
June 13th, 2023 05:53 - Deja vu dreams (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much L.B. your poetic words reflect as much wisdom as beauty. I...
June 9th, 2023 05:57 - Homeless (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks so much L.B. having lived in over 25 different locations through my...
June 9th, 2023 05:51 - Magical Life. (Goldfinch60)
God forbid that there come a time when there is nothing left to learn. How...
June 7th, 2023 05:34 - Deja vu dreams (Sorenbarrett)
Thanks Gold
June 7th, 2023 05:31 - of Inclusivity (L. B. Mek)
\'twould be a better world indeed should we all feel this way. Stuck in a...
June 5th, 2023 06:27 - Starbucks (Rhmn_7)
A great analogy and metaphor. true it is that people have grown to feel...
June 4th, 2023 12:46 - Perfection (ScottysArtHouse)
I liked the metaphor of peeling paint. Yes indeed just give it a try. Well...
June 3rd, 2023 06:32 - Timeless Abyss (Firefall)
A thought that many of us have had put into a few concise poetic words.
June 3rd, 2023 06:27 - When Art is Suppressed (Ghazal) (Rocky Lagou)
Censorship is sad. I have had several poems censored on other cites cue to...
June 2nd, 2023 16:52 - Gestalt (Sorenbarrett)
Mesmerized by the words of your review that are more poetic than the poem...
June 2nd, 2023 05:43 - Grace (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you L.B. I hope you are feeling better and I appreciate your review...
June 2nd, 2023 05:32
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