Comments on community poems by sorenbarrett

• Oh Dear! (Doggerel Dave) What do you do when you\'ve got two friends fighting?
  October 6th, 2024 05:44
• verse on a hill (Arqios) Beautifully done Cryptic. Line after line building toward a meaningful...
  October 6th, 2024 05:41
• Back In The Day. (Goldfinch60) Why did beer seem to taste better then? Reminising things always take on a...
  October 6th, 2024 05:29
• In the U.S.A. (Dan Williams) Glad to hear that no sheep were harmed but I do love lamb chops. To lie is...
  October 6th, 2024 05:23
• Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange) On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the...
  October 5th, 2024 21:38
• Searching (2781) Turn the other cheek and forgive is the commandment. Love thy neighbor ...
  October 5th, 2024 11:38
• Gitanes (Neville) Errotic yet as ephemeral as that smoke from the cigarette while the noir...
  October 5th, 2024 06:17
• lifes changes (Jim56) Dizzying in its spin accepting what comes is esier than fighting the...
  October 5th, 2024 06:12
• Wasted Moments (Kurt Philip Behm) Nicely said another piece of wisdom well said.
  October 5th, 2024 06:08
• Gaea’s Garden    (Neville) Ingeniously put Uranus being born of Gaea earth from earth so to speak...
  October 5th, 2024 06:00
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) A lovely write where gratitude is the cornerstone to happieness. Lovely...
  October 5th, 2024 05:46
• Night Watchman (Dan Williams) When young I worked both swing and graveyard shifts and relate to this...
  October 5th, 2024 05:42
• ~> I\'m Sailing Home, To You My Love - (Thad Wilk) A pledge of love offered in very smooth verse and good meter. A sonnet...
  October 5th, 2024 05:35
• The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case) Now Thomas you outdid yourself with this gem. I\'m going to start calling...
  October 4th, 2024 17:29
• Holding On; Being Held (Orchidee) A good message and very good write.
  October 4th, 2024 13:11
• Twain will meet.. (NafisaSB) Ambition and arrogance are a major human flaw that can lead to a...
  October 4th, 2024 05:14
• Walking By Our River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Very nice Andy rivers hold a special place of beauty and serenity. moving...
  October 4th, 2024 05:10
• No Trick to This (Dan Williams) Another twist to the Irish blessing \"May the road rise up to meet you....
  October 4th, 2024 05:06
• A Matter of Faith (Orchidee) Whether true or not this view is most helpful if taken. A positive outlook...
  October 3rd, 2024 04:45
• Keep Me from Sleep (Dan Williams) Several great lines in this poem but my favorite are the last two lines....
  October 3rd, 2024 04:42
• Echoing across (Maplespal) Obcessive preoccupation that comes with seperation or loss. Touching
  October 3rd, 2024 04:35
• dream slices (Arqios) Beautiful words to accompany stunning images my friend
  October 3rd, 2024 04:33
• This Is Truly a Little Pickle... (Cheeky Missy) A fun read I always liked the writings of Lewis Carrol
  October 3rd, 2024 04:31
• Grandfather\'s Clock. (Goldfinch60) Classic reminding me of the old child\'s song \"My grandfather\'s clock\"...
  October 3rd, 2024 04:27
• what came first? (ADarkerMind) Duality and the questioning of where one ends and the other begins. A fun...
  October 2nd, 2024 05:01
• Fallen Giants Land (Dan Williams) Most metaphoric Dan it took two reads but I think I got it.
  October 2nd, 2024 04:48
• The Reason Why Colours Make Out (Neville) Beautifully crafted both the imagery and the subtle rhyme within. It began...
  October 2nd, 2024 04:41
• Covid Visit (Doggerel Dave) Dave this is the first poem I\'ve seen as notice of illness and well done...
  October 2nd, 2024 04:36
• Music In Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Indeed it is true Andy music of all types to cheer, energize, give hope....
  October 2nd, 2024 04:34
• The Crickets Tune (Jerry Reynolds) Love the sound of crickets and all the night creatures. Nicely written...
  October 1st, 2024 16:16
• From Without, From Within (Orchidee) Good write Orchi
  October 1st, 2024 04:10
• Make Love Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Another beautiful sonnet Gold that warms the heart and brightens the day....
  October 1st, 2024 04:08
• A little Less Panache (ADarkerMind) I felt like I had seen the union of union of Hieronymus Bosch with...
  October 1st, 2024 04:05
• Peace (Tony36) This could be a poem of the 60\'s Good message
  September 30th, 2024 19:10
• bad day love (Jim56) Nicely said Jim.
  September 30th, 2024 05:57
• One With Everything (Tom Dylan) In this world all things are connected. Great thoughts
  September 30th, 2024 05:55
• Comes the Day...... (Orchidee) Good write Orchi
  September 30th, 2024 05:43
• Irksome Quandaries (Neville) That picture doesn\'t fit into my three dimentional mind, My guess is it...
  September 30th, 2024 05:37
• Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beauty in poetry Gold. Congratulations on hitting the hundred thousand...
  September 30th, 2024 05:27
• Width of Sorrow (Dan Williams) Clever tlhree dimensional thinking expressed in such good verse. Very well...
  September 30th, 2024 05:23
• ~> Cuckoo - Cuckoo ( haiku ) (Thad Wilk) Great haiku thinking metaphoricalchy watch out for those rubber dollies
  September 30th, 2024 05:19
• Yogurt Bery Parfait, Cheesecake, and You (Thomas W Case) Funny how we link one thought to another. These associations then evoke...
  September 30th, 2024 05:12
• Autumn it Is Not (Doggerel Dave) I\'m wiith you Dave same hemisphere. Love the alliteration and am glad to...
  September 30th, 2024 05:04
• Have Yerself a Cuppa, If You Will (Cheeky Missy) A good cup of java or tea would be nice. A fun read
  September 29th, 2024 19:49
• ~> I know Why They Are Here! - Sonnet - (Thad Wilk) A great tale in a sonnet. Nicely done
  September 29th, 2024 19:39
• Knowledge (Tony36) A good message to all and you keep learning even when you get to know that...
  September 29th, 2024 19:35
• rue the hay (Arqios) A poem that goes far deeper than plants. A great metaphor for many...
  September 29th, 2024 19:32
• mail carrier’s bill (Arqios) I think I have seen this. A great image painted here. Good to read your...
  September 29th, 2024 19:26
• The Horney Spider (Jerry Reynolds) Witches are like that. Would that make her a black widow?
  September 29th, 2024 16:59
• Remembering An Orange Room (Neville) Dark, sad and haunting casting a shadow over the landscape. Whether...
  September 29th, 2024 16:55
• Legend of Love (Teddy.15) A sad story of love unrequited a nursery story that is lived by many...
  September 29th, 2024 16:48
• Strangers in the Sun (Tristan Robert Lange) Contradictions no need to rhyme in rhyme a fun read that gives pause to...
  September 29th, 2024 07:03
• a robins song (Jim56) A picture of nature, a picture of spring in all their beauty and...
  September 29th, 2024 07:02
• Dragon Fracking (Mutley Ravishes) Most interesting never thought of fracking dragons but then never saw a...
  September 29th, 2024 07:00
• Level the fields, I always feared, & the other side (Maplespal) Three poems intertwined that proceed to resolve in the last. Nicely...
  September 29th, 2024 06:57
• Calling the Bluff (Neville) I hear just a bit of touchiness in this. I better measure my words well in...
  September 29th, 2024 06:53
• Sunrise (Teddy.15) Ahh Teddy a most wonderful Haiku with my god the sun in it. What a great...
  September 29th, 2024 06:49
• I Look Up Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Bless you Andy for these fine words. They did indeed bring a feeling of...
  September 29th, 2024 06:47
• Appears (John Prophet) It appears that all is normal until closer observation reveals that...
  September 29th, 2024 06:40
• Fierce Longing (Dan Williams) Dan you have linked together a series of gem like stanzas that all relate...
  September 29th, 2024 06:36
• Fire and Ice (Jerry Reynolds) Emotions are like that, sometimes hot sometimes cold. Protection from...
  September 28th, 2024 09:33
• My Redemption (Rebellion_in_sanity) A beautiful statement of acknowledging past errors and gratitude for...
  September 28th, 2024 06:38
• Latitudes (2781) Some hope for vengence I look for peace. Good write
  September 28th, 2024 06:34
• Autumnal Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Abeautiful picture painted. Natuer in all her splendor is stunning. Very...
  September 28th, 2024 05:09
• Modern Life (Doggerel Dave) This very problem friends of mine have had. If you don\'t own a smart...
  September 28th, 2024 05:07
• Berserker (Dan Williams) In depth into the mind of a berserker. Savage, determined, devoted, naked...
  September 28th, 2024 05:02
• Ahem.[Drum Roll, please]: Take Your Pick (Cheeky Missy) All were good but my favorite was \"Was This Too Short For My...
  September 28th, 2024 04:56
• ~> Gals; A True Friend\'s Like, (Thad Wilk) I can use a fun read at any time and this was one go get my day strarted....
  September 28th, 2024 04:48
• Fumbles (Teddy.15) This poem is a mixture of a fun read with sadness, tragedy, fantasy,...
  September 28th, 2024 04:44
• It\'s alright Little Darling (Teddy.15) Words that took me back to when my daughters were small and there is...
  September 28th, 2024 04:39
• Inches From Madness (Dan Williams) This is quite a ride of ups and downs around and around. I think I ended...
  September 27th, 2024 19:03
• Loving Light (Cassie58) A lovely message so well said. It is the little things that make a...
  September 27th, 2024 12:36
• Willow Dance (Jerry Reynolds) Risque but in good taste. I won\'t be can\'t help but ask, was it a pussy...
  September 27th, 2024 12:31
• This Day Last Year (Tom Dylan) Happy anniversery and many more to come.
  September 27th, 2024 03:55
• From The Hilltop Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I too stand in admiration of nature and this poem displays it in beautiful...
  September 27th, 2024 03:52
• Stars and Stripes (Teddy.15) Politics not my cup of tea. Never the less the poem was great and the...
  September 26th, 2024 16:43
• ~> Teamwork - Form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk) A rather complex write in rhyme scheme and structure. Very nicely done but...
  September 26th, 2024 13:16
• Hello World (Tristan Robert Lange) A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a...
  September 26th, 2024 13:12
• A River Song (Cassie58) Enjoy things while they last nothing lasts forever. A beautiful wrte...
  September 26th, 2024 13:07
• Hustler’s Lament (Jerry Reynolds) Never was good enough to hussel but smart enough to know I was not good so...
  September 26th, 2024 13:02
• Music (Tony36) Music can do that. Things that nothing else can do bring emotions burried...
  September 26th, 2024 08:03
• Harvesting The Gold (Cassie58) Beautiful words fill this piece of glorious splendour. Gold is the word...
  September 26th, 2024 08:01
• Thinking Back on Polly (Neville) The things that we don\'t know until too late and how they make changes in...
  September 26th, 2024 07:54
• Our Time Of Jazz. (Goldfinch60) Time takes its toll and with it interests in types of music change. We...
  September 26th, 2024 07:52
• My Path to Paradise Begins in Hell (Teddy.15) Now drama this one is king. Such a statement of emotion from love to hell...
  September 26th, 2024 06:35
• Bianca (Dan Williams) Love how this is set up as in the middle of something unknown. A mystery...
  September 26th, 2024 04:24
• Who am I (Saleh Ben Saleh) There was not only a heavieness but a sense of resignation to this poem.
  September 25th, 2024 20:48
• ~> My Kitty\'s Plotting To Kill Me! -form Kyrielle- (Thad Wilk) Reminds me of a cat my sister used to have. It haded my younger brother,...
  September 25th, 2024 20:45
• Vibrant Colors (Tony36) Colors are a wonderful addition to life. Nicely written Tony
  September 25th, 2024 20:42
• A Different Kettle of Fish (Neville) I wonder it our ancesters spoke of the times before fire? I often look...
  September 25th, 2024 20:40
• The Leaves Are Down (Cassie58) People pay little attention to what is happening around them be it the...
  September 25th, 2024 20:35
• Go Figure (Cheeky Missy) Most interesting have not dug out any old poems for a long long time. May...
  September 25th, 2024 20:31
• More than I Bargained For (Thomas W Case) A very human poem with a surprise ending that adds some black humor....
  September 25th, 2024 18:09
• On through the tunnel (Orchidee) May you make it through all this with peace my friend. As for the...
  September 25th, 2024 11:05
• Icecream Alley (Jerry Reynolds) Spooky, and dark a tale for October. Nicely worded and constructed
  September 25th, 2024 08:45
• Tiger Heart (Teddy.15) Yes it does and those angles reflected show many colors indeed. Most...
  September 25th, 2024 08:39
• Unknown Future Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This brought to mind that old gospel song \"Shall we gather at the river\"...
  September 25th, 2024 05:25
• Time and Dirt (Thomas W Case) Highly descriptive I could taste it. Lovely Thomas
  September 24th, 2024 20:39
• My yellow, Franprix umbrella (Ladywithaquill) A fine metaphor about someone loved but lost and wishing them well in...
  September 24th, 2024 20:37
• ~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication ) (Thad Wilk) Greed is not exclusively a human trait but it is the foundation of...
  September 24th, 2024 16:44